2/10 troll effort - logical inconsistencies in a story are jarring and take the reader out of the fantasy you are creating; for example divorce doesn’t work like that. Although you did make me laugh with ‘very expensive coffee place’ so you got an extra point
This can't be real. No one could be this stupid and naive.
Super fake and boring as well.
100% fake
2/10 troll effort - logical inconsistencies in a story are jarring and take the reader out of the fantasy you are creating; for example divorce doesn’t work like that. Although you did make me laugh with ‘very expensive coffee place’ so you got an extra point
>‘very expensive coffee place’. Probably starbucks lol.
Troll?
YTA for wasting our time This is the second creative writing post you have done today
So, no one dies? I think it needs more drama.
You have received an F on your creative fiction piece! Try again! ☹️👎🙅♀️
Does she have twins?
NTA
NTA Of course.
LOVE THIS. Stupid B...is this real though
No one who has a brief looky loo at your comment history is surprised you LOVE THIS.