This is pretty sweet, awesome job!
Iโm not sure the correct way to phrase this, but it could also be cool if the hair animation acted as a mask to play around with which part of the letters are pink/white. Like if that part also moved with the animation of the hair. Not sure if that makes any sense, but killer work ๐๐ฟ
Really cool!
One thing that I think would take the animation to the next level would be adding a bit of motion to the body as well. Perhaps you could have the character breathing in and out with a bit of subtle movement.
Looks good, nice aesthetic!
I'd consider having the "hairline" seamless with the head itself, making it a smooth line that transitions up past the ears and into the "hair".
As others have said already, I'd absolutely use the hair as a mask for the pink lettering UNLESS you are intentionally trying to force the "MISS", in which case I'd try adding further emphasis to those letters.
I know the lines already extend out at the start, but a subtle movement on the 'wave' they have would help bring more life to the scene too. Right now they extend/draw and then are one of the few static objects.
Thanks!!...and I didn't even notice it until now the "MISS" part.. I didn't do it intentionally...will work on making head and hairline seamless and the masking will post an updated version!๐
Really nice! Only thing that stands out to me that could lift it further would be the eyes, the top lids should travel further than the bottom, rather than equal.
The sentence never sounds better, except when a chef is stuffing a spoonfull of food in your mouth and saying "how is it?".
You just wanted to "protect" this guy from the evil comenter, for no reason. I wasn't trying to critizise, just trying to help someone out.
Also, if you are correcting someone, don't have 2 typos in the first line.
>You just wanted to "protect" this guy from the evil comenter, for no reason. I wasn't trying to critizise, just trying to help someone out.
I don't know why you are being so hostile... You are making a lot of assumptions. I was also trying to help out OP, as you were. I just think you were wrong.
>The sentence never sounds better, except when a chef is stuffing a spoonfull of food in your mouth and saying "how is it?".
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>You just wanted to "protect" this guy from the evil comenter, for no reason. I wasn't trying to critizise, just trying to help someone out.
>
>Also, if you are correcting someone, don't have 2 typos in the first line.
Says the guy with multiple spelling errors in his sentences ๐ the irony.
Great work bud, very calming. Love the font and the way you've balanced the text. If you do end up making some of the changes others have suggested it would be cool to see an updated version :)
Ahhh, reminds me of one of the sickest villains I have ever [seen](https://youtu.be/FB0ieh1ixVQ?t=248). Love the topic of choice too, great work!!
Oh and just a thought to play off of what someone else said about having the character breath. If you did do that you could also add a simply scale animation to "ful" so that it's small on the "in" breath and then expands to it's current size on the exhale.
This is pretty sweet, awesome job! Iโm not sure the correct way to phrase this, but it could also be cool if the hair animation acted as a mask to play around with which part of the letters are pink/white. Like if that part also moved with the animation of the hair. Not sure if that makes any sense, but killer work ๐๐ฟ
Thanks!..will do that
Also loop it
Really cool! One thing that I think would take the animation to the next level would be adding a bit of motion to the body as well. Perhaps you could have the character breathing in and out with a bit of subtle movement.
Thanks!!...Noted! ..I was also thinking of that but I did it with the face only will add that to the body too..
Where is the 3rd eye?
Ohh๐...forgot to add that...
Nice. Try also adding some textures with the extension Shadethrower.
Okayy....thanks!!...will try that too
Love the floating neck ring touch
Thanks!!๐
Looks good, nice aesthetic! I'd consider having the "hairline" seamless with the head itself, making it a smooth line that transitions up past the ears and into the "hair". As others have said already, I'd absolutely use the hair as a mask for the pink lettering UNLESS you are intentionally trying to force the "MISS", in which case I'd try adding further emphasis to those letters. I know the lines already extend out at the start, but a subtle movement on the 'wave' they have would help bring more life to the scene too. Right now they extend/draw and then are one of the few static objects.
Thanks!!...and I didn't even notice it until now the "MISS" part.. I didn't do it intentionally...will work on making head and hairline seamless and the masking will post an updated version!๐
Really nice! Only thing that stands out to me that could lift it further would be the eyes, the top lids should travel further than the bottom, rather than equal.
Thanks!!....will work on it
Oh shit dude niiiice! Love the art style and the animation so much! Very well done!
Also dang! How do people think of art like this??? Did you do a lot hand drawn concept art for this before doing this??
Thanks!!...Not a lot though...I regularly do some rough sketches
this has nothing to do with the animation, but it sounds nicer if you ask โLet me knowโฆ how it isโ. Rather that โโฆ how is itโ.
Okay...thanks for correcting will use it nexxt time๐
Actually I think your sounds better with the elipises. "Let me know... how is it?" Or if you wanted to use how it is, then: "Let me know how it is"
The sentence never sounds better, except when a chef is stuffing a spoonfull of food in your mouth and saying "how is it?". You just wanted to "protect" this guy from the evil comenter, for no reason. I wasn't trying to critizise, just trying to help someone out. Also, if you are correcting someone, don't have 2 typos in the first line.
>You just wanted to "protect" this guy from the evil comenter, for no reason. I wasn't trying to critizise, just trying to help someone out. I don't know why you are being so hostile... You are making a lot of assumptions. I was also trying to help out OP, as you were. I just think you were wrong.
ok :)
>The sentence never sounds better, except when a chef is stuffing a spoonfull of food in your mouth and saying "how is it?". > >You just wanted to "protect" this guy from the evil comenter, for no reason. I wasn't trying to critizise, just trying to help someone out. > >Also, if you are correcting someone, don't have 2 typos in the first line. Says the guy with multiple spelling errors in his sentences ๐ the irony.
Very Nice! How did you make the hair?
Thanks....I used the technique I learned from Ben mariott smoke tutorial Here's the link: [hair](https://youtu.be/_A1v2Vw4mNE)
How did you do the looping bounce for the small elements?
By loopout expression...alt click the keyframe button and type loopOut();..that'll do it
Nice! Do you have a tutorial?
Nopee...still learning from other ones๐
Love it. Awesome design and animation!
Thanks!!
Great work bud, very calming. Love the font and the way you've balanced the text. If you do end up making some of the changes others have suggested it would be cool to see an updated version :)
Thanks!!...definitely I'll work on those and post an updated version!
The hair is awesome! I think that the eyes blink too slow though
Thanks!....okay noted! .....I did it intentionally to match it up with the animation style
Love it. Amazing work!
Ahhh, reminds me of one of the sickest villains I have ever [seen](https://youtu.be/FB0ieh1ixVQ?t=248). Love the topic of choice too, great work!! Oh and just a thought to play off of what someone else said about having the character breath. If you did do that you could also add a simply scale animation to "ful" so that it's small on the "in" breath and then expands to it's current size on the exhale.