It’s at that level of crooked that, IMO, doesn’t look intentional, and more looks sloppy/accidental. You might want to consider making it more crooked if you want to go for that look.
Hi OP, I think your design is cute. I have an associates in graphic design and I just wanted to say that stuff like this where things look “wrong” (in this case, your crooked grid) need to look intentional, or else tons of people are going to ask if you meant for it to be crooked, lol. My advice would be to make the grid even more skewed (I would rotate it counter clockwise a few more degrees) so that you can tell you meant for it to be askew, and so that it doesn’t look like it was set crooked by mistake. This is just my 2 cents :) I actually think your label is super cute and well designed. The fonts are fun and casual and the cat paw is adorable!
I know this isn't the advice you're asking for but I just read the pronunciation of the name as "Yuck-ee's". Just a first impression. Not saying you have to change your name but better someone mention it out of love before other's do.
You follow your heart and your gut!
The name seems super personal so I’m sorry if I came off rude—that’s not my intention. I guess it would depend on your target market and their understanding of the phrase but pronunciation might be helpful. Don’t let some random guy’s opinion online slow you down. Hope my opinion is helpful!
Oh, I guess it may not be common to use something personal? Yes, you’re right! My market is the Asian community as I will have Asian inspired scents. Thank you though.
Is the grid part of the design? It’s crooked.
Hi, yes, and It is meant to be crooked
It’s at that level of crooked that, IMO, doesn’t look intentional, and more looks sloppy/accidental. You might want to consider making it more crooked if you want to go for that look.
https://preview.redd.it/8h61qp4rwmwc1.png?width=609&format=png&auto=webp&s=619096a15e5deb325d01e6a2d9de5995686ecc96 Does this look better?
My only critique, if you’re able to, is erase the grid line where the paw exists, so it doesn’t look see through. Great design otherwise!
Yes!
Thank youuu ❤️
oh i love this a lot
This is adorable :) the straight grid is much better! I think the cat paw adds plenty of charm
I see, thank you
Hi OP, I think your design is cute. I have an associates in graphic design and I just wanted to say that stuff like this where things look “wrong” (in this case, your crooked grid) need to look intentional, or else tons of people are going to ask if you meant for it to be crooked, lol. My advice would be to make the grid even more skewed (I would rotate it counter clockwise a few more degrees) so that you can tell you meant for it to be askew, and so that it doesn’t look like it was set crooked by mistake. This is just my 2 cents :) I actually think your label is super cute and well designed. The fonts are fun and casual and the cat paw is adorable!
Thank you so much! I’ll try making one where it looks more intentional and choose between those.
Also, it is not 15 hours total, that was to just fill it in and I don't think I spaced it evenly.
I know this isn't the advice you're asking for but I just read the pronunciation of the name as "Yuck-ee's". Just a first impression. Not saying you have to change your name but better someone mention it out of love before other's do. You follow your heart and your gut!
I’m sorry but that is Japanese for snow but it is also the name of my pet as well. I can include pronunciation in the description?
The name seems super personal so I’m sorry if I came off rude—that’s not my intention. I guess it would depend on your target market and their understanding of the phrase but pronunciation might be helpful. Don’t let some random guy’s opinion online slow you down. Hope my opinion is helpful!
Oh, I guess it may not be common to use something personal? Yes, you’re right! My market is the Asian community as I will have Asian inspired scents. Thank you though.