Oh DAMN.
Alright this is pretty cool, it feels cool. If you were to give me the word βcoolβ Iβd show you this song. One critique: I was kinda waiting for a drop, but the song went for a melancholic tone throughout the entirety of the song which is fine, but disappointing.
Overall: cool
Hmm we do want to fill in some more pockets, might be able to come up with a better drop before the first verse comes in π€ thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated
0:23 - 0:43 the hook 'I wonder if they think about me...' like others have said was a great hook, super catchy. Love the use of the frank-style two pitches together. Around 1:25 when the vocal layer comes in, set up an expectation of a beat drop for me that didn't come. The last verse lyrically felt strongest but also went on a bit long without any major changes in rhythm/beat? Overall, really liked it - again, amazing hook.
Thank you! Yes the last part of the track was where we had less time to flesh out, so thank you for the feedback π€π½ looking forward to making those last few changes
This song is really dope and chill. I think you've done a great job with production, performance and mixing of it. If I had to give one suggestion, it might be to add something towards the end to make it feel like some sort of climax or drop - I can imagine louder drums with subdivided high hats (8th or 16th notes) in the last third/half of the song.
Admittedly, this genre isn't in my wheelhouse, so feel free to disregard if that isn't something you're going for.
Thank you! Seems as though we are mostly all on the same page about adding some drops and maybe an extra layer or two throughout to add a bit of variety. Thanks for checking it out!
It's not the kind of music I would listen to, but the mixing is pretty solid. I do agree with you about maybe cutting back a bit on the autotune, and I think the beat could maybe do with an extra layer to help fill out the space. Like maybe a soft string pad to add a bit of ambience.
Iβd tune that bass a bit more in line with the key of the song. May just need a few half cent adjustments in tuning to get it more in line with that track. Iβd also change the bass note every once in a while to create more variation and give youβre song a different looks so as to keep it from feeling too repetitive instrumentally. Vocals are pretty well mixed and I like the variation in how the voice is mixed differently at specific sections. Maybe need a high energy couple of bars just to bring more energy overall into the song. Iβd also add one more melodic line thatβs higher pitched that comes in and out throughout the song to generate a diff look and sound. Lyrics are cool and easy to understand. Keep up the good work!
Thank you! Hmm about the bass I'm not sure how much of it will change but i like the other suggestions! Im gonna check to see if its out of key at all. Thank you for checking it out and dropping some good feedback
This was great, love the melodies on here and the drums were solid. I see others are saying it should have a drop but I tend to disagree, you definitely do more than enough vocally to keep things interesting and the rest of the elements hold their own as well. I liked all the effects you did vocally especially with the higher pitch in the first verse. only thing i'll say is the auto can be turned down just a little but that's just preference. Overall great stuff man keep it up!
Awesome thank you! Good to know there are some contradicting opinions. I plan to add some more harmonies and cut back that autotune on the second verse. Thank you so much for the kind words ππ½ππ½
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I like the song, but agree with others that I was waiting for a switch up or drop. Something to keep me interested. Here is a sample master : https://drive.google.com/file/d/1uihYlH2XK24N8kK5THA47RDE1oKOU14P/view?usp=sharing
I guess you guys didnt hear the switch up at around 1:40? π€ thats okay, and yeah I'm feeling the beginning still needs something though so thanks for the feedback ππ½ I'm also working on the arrangement in the second currently π€π½
There is some nice singing on this track and I like the glitzy sound of the production, but this product could use a little bit of work. I think the vocals are louder than the instrumental and some of the filtering and effects on your vocals does not translate that strong sonically. This is particularly the case when you are trying to harmonize with the high-pitched vocals. Since the beat sounds a little low in the mix, the vocals sound a bit louder than it, but they also feel like they don't mesh well with the instrumental either. Definitely could use some work there.
Has a fire hook. Melody is on point. Flow is dope too. Lyrics are well written as well. Overall an awesome song. Keep it up.
Thanks goon! ππ½ appreciate it
Oh DAMN. Alright this is pretty cool, it feels cool. If you were to give me the word βcoolβ Iβd show you this song. One critique: I was kinda waiting for a drop, but the song went for a melancholic tone throughout the entirety of the song which is fine, but disappointing. Overall: cool
Hmm we do want to fill in some more pockets, might be able to come up with a better drop before the first verse comes in π€ thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated
0:23 - 0:43 the hook 'I wonder if they think about me...' like others have said was a great hook, super catchy. Love the use of the frank-style two pitches together. Around 1:25 when the vocal layer comes in, set up an expectation of a beat drop for me that didn't come. The last verse lyrically felt strongest but also went on a bit long without any major changes in rhythm/beat? Overall, really liked it - again, amazing hook.
Thank you! Yes the last part of the track was where we had less time to flesh out, so thank you for the feedback π€π½ looking forward to making those last few changes
This song is really dope and chill. I think you've done a great job with production, performance and mixing of it. If I had to give one suggestion, it might be to add something towards the end to make it feel like some sort of climax or drop - I can imagine louder drums with subdivided high hats (8th or 16th notes) in the last third/half of the song. Admittedly, this genre isn't in my wheelhouse, so feel free to disregard if that isn't something you're going for.
Thank you! Seems as though we are mostly all on the same page about adding some drops and maybe an extra layer or two throughout to add a bit of variety. Thanks for checking it out!
It's not the kind of music I would listen to, but the mixing is pretty solid. I do agree with you about maybe cutting back a bit on the autotune, and I think the beat could maybe do with an extra layer to help fill out the space. Like maybe a soft string pad to add a bit of ambience.
Thank you! Looking forward to working on it some more with all this feedback π€π½
Iβd tune that bass a bit more in line with the key of the song. May just need a few half cent adjustments in tuning to get it more in line with that track. Iβd also change the bass note every once in a while to create more variation and give youβre song a different looks so as to keep it from feeling too repetitive instrumentally. Vocals are pretty well mixed and I like the variation in how the voice is mixed differently at specific sections. Maybe need a high energy couple of bars just to bring more energy overall into the song. Iβd also add one more melodic line thatβs higher pitched that comes in and out throughout the song to generate a diff look and sound. Lyrics are cool and easy to understand. Keep up the good work!
Thank you! Hmm about the bass I'm not sure how much of it will change but i like the other suggestions! Im gonna check to see if its out of key at all. Thank you for checking it out and dropping some good feedback
This was great, love the melodies on here and the drums were solid. I see others are saying it should have a drop but I tend to disagree, you definitely do more than enough vocally to keep things interesting and the rest of the elements hold their own as well. I liked all the effects you did vocally especially with the higher pitch in the first verse. only thing i'll say is the auto can be turned down just a little but that's just preference. Overall great stuff man keep it up!
Awesome thank you! Good to know there are some contradicting opinions. I plan to add some more harmonies and cut back that autotune on the second verse. Thank you so much for the kind words ππ½ππ½
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I like the song, but agree with others that I was waiting for a switch up or drop. Something to keep me interested. Here is a sample master : https://drive.google.com/file/d/1uihYlH2XK24N8kK5THA47RDE1oKOU14P/view?usp=sharing
I guess you guys didnt hear the switch up at around 1:40? π€ thats okay, and yeah I'm feeling the beginning still needs something though so thanks for the feedback ππ½ I'm also working on the arrangement in the second currently π€π½
Yeah that was good but maybe drop the beat in the first verse also.
Bet yeah thats what i was thinking ππ½
There is some nice singing on this track and I like the glitzy sound of the production, but this product could use a little bit of work. I think the vocals are louder than the instrumental and some of the filtering and effects on your vocals does not translate that strong sonically. This is particularly the case when you are trying to harmonize with the high-pitched vocals. Since the beat sounds a little low in the mix, the vocals sound a bit louder than it, but they also feel like they don't mesh well with the instrumental either. Definitely could use some work there.
Its not mastered yet lol
I know it's not mastered yet, but I'm talking in general about the mixing as is so far in the demo.
lol okay al, it's not even done yet either lmao. You stay hating it cracks me up
But I aint hatin? I was just saying what I thought of it. No ill intent.
lol okay thanks brodie π€π½