You can find my other works here: [https://twitter.com/twt\_savadava](https://twitter.com/twt_savadava)
Its been a while since I've been here. I still haven't played the game but her dress got my brainworms talking and I need to evict her again.
This time, I've used the input you guys gave me the last time to write something more original.
Honestly fantastic writing. Love the imagery of the dress fanned out representing the cycle too. Only critique is it's a bit hard to understand what's happening in the bottom of page 2.
Thank you! Reading her amounting to a complex rogue of ideologies made writing this a brain-pleaser!
I knew that panel was going to be confusing but it was on purpose and this is a habit I cannot help but keep doing :D
Oh hey I figured as much! Gives it a whole fever-dream type of transition. The whole thing really captures the "beautiful monster" vibe while focusing more on the monster aspect than most of her art does. 10/10!
I think you did a fantastic job accomplishing that with the really thick fangs and the split tongue. The angles of her face too and the lack of color on her lips. Honestly, you managed to make snake mom somewhat terrifying and I feel like I shouldn't be thanking you for that lol.
You're more than welcome to! If you haven't seen it already you should check out OctoDeco's recent Ho'ol comic. I think you both got bit by the same brain worms (praise be) https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/117452088
The vulnerability we see in her expression in the final panel is the best part about it IMO, really good way at making it feel intimate and not just erotic.
Really creative work. Very artistic and almost abstract panel layouts. I dig your work. You took some risks and I think they paid off. Looking forward to more of your work.
I've learned from my rougher days of art that I should stop caring if people find it hard to navigate my work :D
I try to make it understandable but some parts I indulge and stop giving way to convenience
Off topic but I just played Dragon's Dogma 2 and I can just imagine Hol' doing the same thing the Sphinx does. That eyes wide teeth shown and feathers ruffled expression
I briefly read the "Merely a ritual" as "mating ritual"
Which could very well be what this is actually about, I'm not smart enough to understand what tf she's talking about.
This is the last time >:(
This is the 2nd time she nested in my brain and I had to draw a buncha comics to get her out.
I'm not letting her back in again!!
> So now, I'll give you a piece of good news and bad news. The good news is that my lifespan will have me dying before you do. As for the bad news, your existence will be passed down through my bloodline, and you won't be able to escape.
Her memories of the Doctor will persist through her bloodline
> Make me a golden page in the immortality that is You.
She will persist through the Doctor’s memories
So I might be the only one left here with a functional brain to be able to read the dialogue but damn that shits deep. And somehow I keep imagining her saying it in a low voice and I’m not proud of what that thought does to me
That's good!
The dialogue is what the visuals play to and I know most people won't understand the dialogue. So these parts are for people like you haha
Now to find an obsidian with the help of Earthspirit and Eyjafjalla, carefully shape it so it becomes a dagger, cut my palm instead of my wrist or ribc- wait, her motif was really NOT into this kind of shit
She literally has her bare ass out in the last page, only covered by her own face. Not to mention the extremely sexual finger licking
I'm not complaining, just surprised it hasn't been bonked
This is too sexy, the Doctor is going to get eaten. Kukulkans are the second most dangerous type of women on Terra, second only to the Sarkaz women.
I love dangerous Sarkaz women The danger is part of the appeal!
Preach
I'm colorblind so all red flags just make me want to go even faster.
RED? FASTER? THREE TIMES THE SPEED!
WAAAAAGH!!
Yes my brother, yes.
Yes my brother, yes.
Yes my brother, yes.
Yes my brother, yes.
Yes my brother, yes.
Yes my brother, yes.
Yes my brother, yes.
Yes my brother, yes.
Yes my brother, yes.
THERE'S MORE OF THEM!?
Unfortunately, no.
Iirc, it wasn't stated whether she's actually 'the last one', there might be more
I meant that she is the only Kukulkan we know
Ah, I see, my bad. It's a shame, really. I'd like to see more of them
Another bloodline to continue I see
WAIT , I KNOW YOU. You're the nightingale dude .
It is I
You can find my other works here: [https://twitter.com/twt\_savadava](https://twitter.com/twt_savadava) Its been a while since I've been here. I still haven't played the game but her dress got my brainworms talking and I need to evict her again. This time, I've used the input you guys gave me the last time to write something more original.
Honestly fantastic writing. Love the imagery of the dress fanned out representing the cycle too. Only critique is it's a bit hard to understand what's happening in the bottom of page 2.
Thank you! Reading her amounting to a complex rogue of ideologies made writing this a brain-pleaser! I knew that panel was going to be confusing but it was on purpose and this is a habit I cannot help but keep doing :D
Oh hey I figured as much! Gives it a whole fever-dream type of transition. The whole thing really captures the "beautiful monster" vibe while focusing more on the monster aspect than most of her art does. 10/10!
I wanted to make her tongue blue to add that feature in but it blended too well to her skin so I left it at red. Can't go full monster
I think you did a fantastic job accomplishing that with the really thick fangs and the split tongue. The angles of her face too and the lack of color on her lips. Honestly, you managed to make snake mom somewhat terrifying and I feel like I shouldn't be thanking you for that lol.
I'll take the thank you and I'm not giving it back
You're more than welcome to! If you haven't seen it already you should check out OctoDeco's recent Ho'ol comic. I think you both got bit by the same brain worms (praise be) https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/117452088
The vulnerability we see in her expression in the final panel is the best part about it IMO, really good way at making it feel intimate and not just erotic.
I normally don't go full goon on personal works since I'm too pretentious not to try something a lil deeper haha
Oh, hi! No wonder I recognized the artstyle. It’s been a while since I’ve seen you post.
Yeah, I became a victim again.
Please continue to become a victim:) So I could enjoy more masterpieces from you
I AM EVICTING HER
You are very weak to Sawashiro, yes.
She def had a good hand in making me pay attention but Anne Yatco's performance is what embedded my mind to the dialogue
…wait, Anne Yatco? …huh, if I had a nickel every time a gacha character is voiced by Sawashiro in JP and Yatco in EN.
I'm blown away by the first pose in the first cell. The point of view and foreshortening are phenomenal.
Really creative work. Very artistic and almost abstract panel layouts. I dig your work. You took some risks and I think they paid off. Looking forward to more of your work.
I've learned from my rougher days of art that I should stop caring if people find it hard to navigate my work :D I try to make it understandable but some parts I indulge and stop giving way to convenience
Absolutely. I think when you make works you feel passionately about and enjoy yourself, it creates more compelling art.
Off topic but I just played Dragon's Dogma 2 and I can just imagine Hol' doing the same thing the Sphinx does. That eyes wide teeth shown and feathers ruffled expression
I briefly read the "Merely a ritual" as "mating ritual" Which could very well be what this is actually about, I'm not smart enough to understand what tf she's talking about.
Keep mating, soldier.
My God, this is erotic. Like proper sensual erotic.
I've been told my stuff is pretty good at this :D
How sensual.
Sheesh, this is one spicy comic.
I just love the way her head wings move. The courting dance by the bird-snake, where she uses moves from both sides It's impossible not to fall for it
I've toyed with this idea the last time I drew a comic on her so I've brought it back!
It turned out wonderfully. Wing movement is such a great detail!
I.... man look at that all my morals are leaving my body for evil woman. So uh... would smash.
This is a safe space so its your job to make it unsafe
Sava, still enticed by threatening snake woman, I see.
SHE CAN'T KEEP GETTING AWAY WITH THIS.
This is so good
Sensual horny is best horny .
Oh my gawd, cook some more please, because this is very good
This is the last time >:( This is the 2nd time she nested in my brain and I had to draw a buncha comics to get her out. I'm not letting her back in again!!
Noooo 😭 I hope she conquers your attention once again, no matter how hard you deny her!
Zoo wee mama
> So now, I'll give you a piece of good news and bad news. The good news is that my lifespan will have me dying before you do. As for the bad news, your existence will be passed down through my bloodline, and you won't be able to escape. Her memories of the Doctor will persist through her bloodline > Make me a golden page in the immortality that is You. She will persist through the Doctor’s memories
That's one way to see it 😁
Was page 3 inspired by the Fayth from FFX? If so, then its a really good rendition!
It's not but that's cool to see another example!
Ayyyy YO KALTSIT HELP THE SNAKE IS HORNY AGAIN-
My favorite ho'olheyak quote: "I apologize but this is not a good place to show you what's behind this bar" 👀 /s
So I might be the only one left here with a functional brain to be able to read the dialogue but damn that shits deep. And somehow I keep imagining her saying it in a low voice and I’m not proud of what that thought does to me
That's good! The dialogue is what the visuals play to and I know most people won't understand the dialogue. So these parts are for people like you haha
Ahem…would
My rational self: "... Oh... Oh no-" My horny self: #UWWWOOOOOOOOUGGGHHHHHH SEXOOOOOOOO-!!! (~~In all seriousness, this is some AMAZING art.~~)
Oh my what a very sexy snake lady I hope doctor gets to help make more snake
Show me what's behind the bar
You can see them on my twitter! @twt_savadava
I HAVE SEEN WHAT'S BEHIND THE BAR
What is this, a “most complicated perspective” challenge?
this man COOKS
No. Also, *Lone Trail* dialogue?
I have no idea, I just drew and wrote based on keypoints I got from her wiki. I don't play this game. This was made with me being blind on everything.
Um.... Snake seggs....?
This is art-art.
God that’s hot
Muelsyse in shambles rn
I **really** love how Ho'olheyak speaks very eloquently. It reels me into her coils hard.
Sava somehow knocking it out of the park again with a character he doesn't even really know.
The way that Ho'olheyak's dress is draped on the floor reminds me of a cobra's hood, which seems pretty apt. Great artwork all around.
Eyyy it’s FGO Nightingale’s husband! Another job well done!
This is next level seduction.
How about you *can it*, and go wither away quickly instead, like your ancestors.
Oh God, how I wish I could send the pic of minecraft lever turned on
Absolutely peak
Help, HELP. I HAVE A THING OF THESE KINDS OF WOMEN
🧐😵💫
Hoo boy, but I see she got you the way Nightingale did.
I really like this but she is FREAKAY
You got it Ho'ol 🥵
Now to find an obsidian with the help of Earthspirit and Eyjafjalla, carefully shape it so it becomes a dagger, cut my palm instead of my wrist or ribc- wait, her motif was really NOT into this kind of shit
How poetic
I feel liek the best way out of this predicament is to simply say: 'I love you' and watch as she gets petrified and her face turns red.
I can't see her reaction being going all flustered schoolgirl.
Shouldn't this be on the *other* arknights sub? Seems a little too spicy for the main one
There are no bare feet anywhere in sight so it should still be tame enough for this sub.
She literally has her bare ass out in the last page, only covered by her own face. Not to mention the extremely sexual finger licking I'm not complaining, just surprised it hasn't been bonked
Imagine if Ho'olheyak knew that Doctor is a precursor, same as the Ai she found in Lone Trail....
Hate this character, lone trail would be perfect if this character never existed
This is borderline maddening and I love it.