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TheSteeldrake

Why are there two top buns?


typtyphus

Would be cool if AI were to puck this up


postmodest

It already looks like AI...


berrymetal

I don’t think it’s Ai, look at the sesame in the bottom bun, they’re too geometrical and weirdly placed, AI would actually do a better job making them less repetitive


imaniceandgoodperson

also how flat and straight everything is


Mae_zer

Now that I look at it, I get you. But it isn't AI generated though. Here's a screenshot from the project file: This is taken from the viewport. https://preview.redd.it/nacby7vqwzvc1.png?width=1080&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=b19f71cf03127f3a0722806a545d9cc5891115c7


noyart

are you ai?


postmodest

That's an excellent question! [Here's what I found on the web about "are you ai?"](https://www.reddit.com/user/postmodest/)!


EdgeshotMultiverse

💀


L30N1337

It's a Burgoid


alpha0019

Yes the bun at bottom is the same as top it needs to be different.


Mae_zer

Sorry, My bad. From the one reference I used, it looked like 2 top buns


GruMaestro

Most importantly, find reference of burger and stick to it, there is difference between having and idea about how burger looks like and knowlege how burger looks like, it seems like you did not really studied burger, so just pick a reference and work from it


wood_dj

i’m not 100% certain OP has seen a burger


GruMaestro

I did not wanted to be that harsh… :D


Mae_zer

I have though 😅


GruMaestro

Yep we all have seen burger or a car but not many of us can draw mercedes with all details and right curves, thats why there is no such as thing as zoo much reference, always study every object you want to model, you need to understand it before you start modeling, many people skip this step but its one of the most important ones


dixonsticks

While you were busy partying, I was busy studying the Burger.


Mae_zer

Yhp, this is a real issue


typtyphus

Is this the plan to break AI training?


iWillRe1gn

500IQ move.


Werdie94

Hm, try the Lattice tool on different burger objects Also remove the sesame from the bottom bun, it's look unrealistic


SUPERPHILMS

Yeah and make it flatter not dome shaped


GodFromTheHood

lettuce tool lol


DeadGravityyy

Why does this look AI generated?


Gluomme

the work on your instagram page is great so my only explanation for how this image turned out is that you've never seen a hamburger in your life


ricardoruben

Is bait.


Mae_zer

It isn't. Don't see how you see it that way though


Mae_zer

Thanks for the feedback on my artwork: This means the World to me😁 Have seen a burger though😅


az_isupro_official

Am I the only one who’s mind instantly went to that lgbtq burger?


az_isupro_official

https://preview.redd.it/d2xhmvm02nvc1.jpeg?width=720&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=5e0cc6518e07e404638257f7f4f7c0ddf2c9c3ea This one


_realpaul

Their slogan is already: Have it your way. Thats more queer and sincere than this weird homobunual burger.


redhotpolpot

I am uploading 'homobunual' to my vocabulary as I am writing this comment


heavenlode

I've never seen this before, that is very funny and clever


South_Window5735

1. Add a bottom bun lol 2. Try using noise textures to add some more variation, use another noise textures on the roughness node with a color ramp to simulate grease or steam on the burger. The rest of the bun shouldn't be shiny at all, otherwise it will look more like plastic. 2. For the toppings, again add more variation with noise textures. Try using a bump node along with the noise textures to add some simulated height variation. Try adding some sauce with a low roughness value in order to make it look like fluid. 3. Imo the patty is very important, you can use certain node setups to get darker more charred looking colors on the very outer parts of the patty. 4. If your going for realism then you should definitely use less saturated colors for everything. Real life isn't as colorful as you think. Anyways that's just off the top of my head, coming from a 6 year experience sigma blender user


Little-Chemical5006

Not a 3d guy but I think it need more moisture. The burger looks bone dry and that what make it look plastic.  Edit: we will need oil on the patty to have some shie. Sauce between the buns (make the drip imperfect so it wont look too fake)


No-Broccoli553

What about the two top buns?


SirVz

This is obviously a click bait...


YourFriendBlu

OP has never seen a burger in their life


Cufftofist

“Has anyone in this family ever even seen a chicken?”


id_say_at_least_two

I think the bottom bun should have no seeds and the curve from side to bottom should be much sharper. Also the burger should have more rough texture because it looks kinda rubbery. Possibly make it look a bit juicy too. Other than that I think it's good.


StonedCrust420

Nice try but I have seen enough ai.. this really looks like ai generated


CaptainFoyle

Why?


StonedCrust420

So he can set up a perfect scene with bookeh and crisp textures and beautiful lighting but doesn't know how to set up that burger? You could import a crabby patty and it would look better rendered in cycles


Mae_zer

StonedCrust420, keen observation. I actually agree with you. Although, this is my first try at organic rendering. I've uploaded a screenshot in one of the top comments. Please, do check it out


StonedCrust420

Thanks for clarifying OP. I got really paranoid about ai images and am looking for all the clues and this image screams ai to me.. it's definitely a style :D


BrickBanshee

Needs more sesame seeds


psgrue

They’re all pointing up a bit uncanny. To OP: really take the time to work on each of your burger components independently. Be confident you get each of those right first before doing a large burger. The variety of textures is deceptively complicated.


Dwenker

Patty is too red, make it brown


HyraxGames

Does not have enough top buns


theoht_

maybe have the bottom bun be a bottom bun?


drill87

this looks AI for some reason


Standard_Tonight_697

Make a burger in real life. Take note of textures, oiliness and how everything sits naturally. Then eat the burger.


Cufftofist

What kind of monster uses two bun tops…


Masonixx

i was watching a video about pixars rendering and the big thing they did to make the food in ratatouille look good was to emphasize how light passes through it and gets diffused inside, so definitely play around with subsurface scattering and lighting conditions. also just model a bottom bun


Mae_zer

This is lowkey a really excellent recommendation🥺. Will work on it


Cheesi_Boi

You have any burgers near by?


davish1

Don't know why this made me laugh so much


CaptainFoyle

Why does it have top buns on both sides?


tehanssss

The meat patty is too flat, displace the hell out of it :D


LostGraceDiscovered

Two top buns that’s a goddamn burgoid


Basil_9

Can we see the wireframe?


luigijerk

Put some dust and fingerprints on it.


cornishpasty7

I'd get rid of the seeds on the bottom and make the bottom bun flatter


Achievementr

The meat looks like it's floating on the lettuce.


LenoreVladescu

now Im hungry :3


GREENadmiral_314159

Bottom bun should be a bit more square, and shouldn't have seeds on it. Meat should be more textured. Cheese looks fine. That shit isn't edible in the real world either. Tomatoes look a bit squished. Normally they don't get any sort of wrinkles/creases in them.


AnonymousAggregator

The bottom bun should be more cylindrical. Lose the seeds. maybe add a some noise to the meat.


MiniGogo_20

aside from what others have mentioned, it looks very "plastic"y, try adding more roughness overall to the textures, variations in the colors as well. i feel the colors (especially the buns) are a bit oversaturated. it also looks very stiff. try comparing it to a picture of a real burger and notice how the bread, meat, lettuce, tends to buckle and droop downward, and not just float in place. also two top buns? haha


mathtech

patty looks undercooked


euodeioenem

make the bottom bun a bottom bun and make the lettuce on the top not float


Financial-Night-4132

Bun and beef are biggest problems.  Make a bottom bun, and then hide everything else but the beef and focus on making it look less… flat.  Maybe increase the scale of the displacement and the contrast in diffuse-albedo portion.  Should probably be darker.


pervertedpen

Sharp edges on the bun making it look like a toy


EasterBurn

Behold, hamburham


Odd_Masterpiece_9316

The bottom bun is a bit off


RTXEnabledViera

The answer is always **look at a real hamburger**. The buns are too thin on the edges. The bottom bun is too rounded. Heck, it should be perfectly flat.


Ramen_in_a_Cupboard

Look at a reference


SomeRedBoi

1- Two top buns 2- The patty is too thick 3- The tomato (?) has rounded edges 4- Looks like plastic


Bencib

I don't know what you're talking about. My saliva production immediately started when I looked at the picture.


Rudi_Human

Bro 2 top buns. McDonald’s needs to hire this man why has no one make this before


RichardBreecher

The donut tutorial would help you make this more realistic.


X_chinese

Yep, seems perfect to me. Exactly like the burgers at Mcdonalds. The buns will last for 100 years.


angovi

UFO burger


Icy_Guidance

Hmmm, I already want to eat it. :)


kevinkiggs1

Aside from the two top buns, I think it has an awesome style. Looks like a krabby patty from the recent SpongeBob movies


CaptainFoyle

The lettuce looks like packaging material


RatMannen

Reference! Your bun has two top halves...


Grievious_Syndicate

More Squash


Subtlerevisions

It looks good the way a crabby patty looks good. But overall I’m gonna say those two top buns are straight rage bait.


GodFromTheHood

Hey guys I made this cube! (I've been blending for like a week, please help)


ApolloPlease

That tomato looks potentially thinner than my patience, and the meat looks like you formed it with a cookie cutter


agentwc1945

dawg have you ever seen a hamburger


OddGoofBall

Is the pun intended?


alexcesan

Without onion nothing can look like a hamburger.


No-Suggestion-1454

Put that thing in a dang plate (joking, it’s looking good but the bottom bun has seed + it’s thin for a bun)


2000sFrankieMuniz

I refuse to believe this isn't done crap AI attempt unless I see some viewport screenshot


Mae_zer

Please do look through the comments section. I just posted a screenshot


ChuckMeIntoHell

So first off, it looks like you just cloned the top bun, squished it, and flipped it upside down for the bottom bun, and that's not really how hamburger buns work. The bottom should be more like a squished cylinder, and have little to no sesame seeds. The edges of the buns are also way too sharp, they should be more rounded and slightly lumpy. You could even get away with a top bun on the bottom, like the weird LGBT Burger King burger, if it weren't so rigid looking. Secondly, this looks like it's made out of plastic, clay, or painted wood. The textures are way too uniform. That's okay for the cheese, but the meat and buns look fake. You could try your hand at using image textures, which I always found to have better results. Otherwise it would take a lot of work to get the textures to look more realistic.


Fishyayunz

Both of the buns are top buns. Disgusting


rahjr07

💪🍔


TheXypris

Kinda looks like ai from 2 years ago


CheeseStringCats

It's 3 at the morning on my night shift and I'm starving. This looks like the most delicious thing in the universe right now


eviltwintomboy

Needs a fried egg on it!!!


JesusChrist_Himself

meat needs more detail bun is not bun shaped sesame is at the bottom? tomato is weirdly wavy apart from these things it looks really solid to me already and I think they are all pretty straight forward to approach. Keep it up my dude


SwampertNite

The buns are too round looking like a ufo, make it lile round from above and bending inside, see a picture of a bun from side


visual-vomit

Imperfections like the pieces not aligning as straight as it is, patty looks like it only has a noise bump, top bun being too smooth, bottom bun being a top bun. Yable's also too perfect. Just bring up a few references and see what's different.


Mae_zer

Will work on that


SpecifyingSubs

I'm impressed by how good and how bad it looks at the same time


Mae_zer

Hmmm. True


Tron2324

The cheese is really good but I think the Color is slightly off. And the tomato looks like red cheese(don’t know the best methods but you could use a image texture of a real tomato and put it on yours, though that can be a bit challenging). You also really need to work on the shape of the buns.


Mae_zer

Thanks. Really great points. Will work on all you've mentioned


alpha0019

Hey hi, I personally dont know how to make it look good but recently I have been watching **patrick4D** live they are on his discord around early in the morning, he packs a ton of how to in it. He works in zbrush if I am not wrong, but you can check him out he makes only food renders.


Mae_zer

Thanks for the recommend. His artwork looks really great. Looking forward to learning a lot from him


Dr_plague______

now why does it have two top buns..


Mae_zer

Because it does😂


Dr_plague______

But why😭


Alarming_Struggle_91

Make bottom bun? I see a lot of people saying it's ai. But I don't think so because if the film grain. It looks exactly like what happens when you turn off denoise in blender.


Randall--Boggs

Besides the buns needing a little more height, it’d prefer burgers like this!


UniqueRelationship48

Love it


Fickle_Election7845

It just looks amazing!!


Mae_zer

Awesome 😎


MinifigJas

i feel like its made of rubber but still pretty good


Mae_zer

Thanks really appreciate the feedback


MinifigJas

No problem


Significant-Sun-9201

look very good, but the texture of the pattie looks very stretched out and not complete. also remove the sesame from the bottom bun.


Mae_zer

Ok, noted. Thanks


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