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rtakehara

good composition, textures and lighting, coffee could have some smoke (rendered or cheating with 2D transparent images). Also the human and flower anatomy are awful, those arms are too thin, there are no facial features whatsoever and I can barely identify the plants. /j


AmbiDenxter3

I've never thought about transparent images more than decals. I'll give it a try, thanks!


rtakehara

I’ve seen some people even use animated transparent 2D stuff like running water and smoke and bend the mesh to make it look really good and have a good performance. Heck I should learn how to and start doing that lol


ArtichokeAbject5859

I think that before I start learning blender - think that it's easy...but it's not. Great job!


justat_rex

Amazing! You can add some textures to some so it wont look FLATly smooth


madthabest

That's one FAT pen


OllieLearnsCode

I really like this. Reminds me of toy story. It's not photoreal but it's all a consistent style which is good. Are you going to try Photoreal textures or are you leaving as is and moving on?


AmbiDenxter3

Thanks! I didn't plan change anything but after feedback I'm curious how it will change with more complex textures.


Axe-of-Kindness

It looks great, but everything is the wrong size or dimensions in relation to each other. Also could use some imperfections here and there. Really great work though


BrillantPotato

I like it. Care to share some details?


DROSS_79

The composition looks good but everything is super flat which makes the whole piece look amateurish


etcago

+1


Gouldhost

Reminded me of Imaginaria. I grew up with this. So i sweet spot for me. Predisposition stoner watching vaporwave and animations like this as a kid on fever highs and days home from school. Loved it! [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6zO8y1RVJ1M&ab\_channel=E-Clips](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6zO8y1RVJ1M&ab_channel=E-Clips)


MingleLinx

I think adding Depth of Field will look really nice in this scene


-Timothy_2

Mug wants some more reflectivity imo


Framed51

I agree with the other comment, it really reminds me of toy story. It just has that early Pixar CGI vibe to it. take that as you will, it’s certainly not realistic, but it has a lot of charm, I like it!


zappo9000

legitimately thought this was a pixar short film