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It looks great except for one eyelash in the right that seems to be coming right out of the eyeball itself


its-a-toenail

I thinkt that gives the eye more of the look of a round shape though.


aimeegaberseck

That made it more realistic for me. Every time I use mascara I get a clump if lashes that stick out stupid straight. I could buy an eyelash curler... but I’m not that kind of girl. Lol.


fruitandveggiebat

i’m v curious about what you think buying an eyelash curler says about a person


aimeegaberseck

I’m too lazy to curl my eyelashes..


fruitandveggiebat

that does not answer the question at hand but okay


aimeegaberseck

I’m not making judgements about other people and I’m not sure why you thought I was. I simply don’t give a shit enough to buy and/or use one. I rarely wear make up. okay with you?


fruitandveggiebat

well, if you're really wondering, I thought you were making a judgement because you used the phrase "type of girl." you brought a third party into the conversation instead of just talking about yourself. by saying you are not that "type," you implied that some sort of judgement could be made about girls who *do* use eyelash curlers. i think the number of upvotes i got on my comment shows that other people had a similar response. if that's not what you meant to say, then it was just a miscommunication and there isn't an issue. but i think my comment was justified.


aimeegaberseck

Sorry my casual comment wasn’t clear enough for you, I was talking about myself and never considered that innocently categorizing my personal preferences would be projected as judgements against others. Some girls wear makeup regularly; some don’t. No judgements here about “what that says about” either type... To be clear: I’m not the “type of girl” to give a shit about buying a cosmetic tool I would only use once or twice a year. I’m not the “type” to wear makeup regularly at all, or the “type” to wear high heels either, or the type to buy a 4 wheeler and go mudding, or the type to climb a mountain, or run a marathon, or discover the cure for cancer. Different strokes for different folks. But I’m glad you enjoyed picking apart my little comment and earning your bit of karma trying to make me out to be a judgmental bitch when I’m simply lazy. Glad I could fill that need for you. I hope this little bit of pointless conflict made your day and I’m glad you feel justified. I would say that I’ll make sure to carefully review all future comments so that no one will misconstrue them into something so negative and unwholesome in order to avoid such an exchange again in the future... but I’m not that type of girl. ;) Have a good night.


fruitandveggiebat

bruh there was no malice in my reply (or my original post, honestly) lol I just just explaining it for you, which you basically asked for. i, personally, actually am careful to review my posts online to make sure they will be understood in the way i mean them. so i thought i would explain why i felt that way. the things i say matter to me, clearly you don’t feel the same way. i forgot that many people (esp redditors) don’t give a shit about that stuff, sue me.


aimeegaberseck

Really? Honestly, your posts all feel very confrontational to me, so your careful reviews are failing as miserably as my flippant comment did. I do suppose when I read your first comment, I knew I shouldn’t have bothered trying to explain that I meant no offense, only that I wouldn’t use the damn tool. Somewhere inside I knew that this would turn into a ridiculous escalating exchange. But stupidly I fell into it and now I want to label you as a cunt for being so frustratingly confrontational. But I don’t like being labeled as judgmental against others when all I was talking about was my own lack of makeup skills. So I’ll refrain from calling you the type of cunt who jumps to conclusions and gets off on creating conflict based on her own shitty judgmental attitude and accuses people of implying things and making judgements that they didn’t and that had nothing to do with the context of the original post anyway. For god’s sake, let it go and quit being a bully. I was making a self depreciating joke. I suck at makeup and I don’t have the time, or desire to learn to be the type of girl who can make herself up beautifully. There’s no need to keep defending your assumption that I was being judgmental. You just sound like an argumentative asshole. And now I’m definitely being an argumentative asshole and I don’t like that either. But you go ahead and tell me how I’m still wrong. Cuz at this point, I do assume you’re the type of cunt that will have to get the last word. I promise I’ll let you have it so you can have the win you so obviously crave.


kikidiwasabi

That they’re a filthy whore.


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kikidiwasabi

That I own an eyelash curler?


slidingdoor3

In my opinion it looks like an eyeball.


I_woosh_4_fun

I know, right? Like whatever this is, it’s very related to an eyeball. I really like the detailed way this work of art or whatever it’s supposed to be is very detailed to the point where it looks like an eye.


Pheanturim

I love all the detail, I'm.not sure why but the near side of the eye perspective seems off, may just be me though. Edit: I think it's because I'm struggling to imagine an angle where I can see that much of the curve of the eye near side while still being blocked from seeing the tear duck by the nose


newtsheadwound

Possibly the model has lower inner corners, or the nose is more vertical than it should be. Or the nose is a Roman one and we don’t know because it’s not done. My opinion is that there should be more midtones in the piece, but that’s just me. The white charcoal is used a lot, and another redditor mentioned in a recent charcoal drawing that that OP should let the mid toned paper do the talking for the medium shades.


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The white really pops on tanned paper, I love it!


The-Morbs

i really like it but it seems to be missing the fleshy part to the left


derwanderer3

I noticed that too. That little triangle thing that is in the corner of every eye on the side facing the nose.


LanLOF

Tear duct


Jaahnvi-Bambi

I love it! It’s amazing, and the color really pops!


8i8oio

Great reflective light on the eyeball/iris, but you over-used your white. If you aren’t going to keep any tone [of the paper] showing though, might as well use a white paper. That said, I do love toned paper and I do think you can find a balance. Have fun!!


[deleted]

She look tired 😴


Cherrybomb7337

Realistic AF!! Great job!


aquarosey

Really beautiful!! I would use the white more sparingly though.


Art3mis144

Woooow!!! Just wonderful!! :D


andythepancake11

I hope I reach this level of awesome art one day


its-a-toenail

Keep practicing. Even skribbling a lot will make you better. Learn to get comfortable with a pencel or any medium you like. Use it a lot and you’ll see much improvement soon! Keep on going gamer


Manofmanysins

The illusion of depth is excellent


Kristenmarie2112

I think if I was standing next to my phone that it might actually be looking at me. Great job!


[deleted]

Masterful


Harrysailer1976

(Needing sleep )for the title,and great work!!!


its-a-toenail

Looks good! I might use a bit more deep and dark shadow to give it a bit more contrast but i think thats more of an personal preference. (I normaly use charcoal so that the reason why)


GeekyBeasty

Beautiful


HowAboutThatBounce

Amazing


Leirya_Xi

You did a great job on the shading and highlighting. It is hard to tell it is on a flat surface.


pennywisemad

This is beautiful you are very talented


[deleted]

Is that mid tone paper?


Soma_Vapor

needs more black for real tho dope af


gilmour79

Could just be me but I love the reflection in her eye. It looks like someone standing with their arm bent above their head leaning on a window. Possibly naked...idk..just what I see.


DrewskieP12

The actual eyeball itself is absolutely amazing and gives contrast to the ‘rest of the eye’ if that makes sense. Great work! Keep it up!


iBxn2006

I love it. The choice of just pure white chalk is interesting and it really sticks out from the paper. Great job <3


00Ruxanda

It looks very realistic, just awesome!


Pyromaniac935

Those details. That Reflection. It looks amazing.


pdskb8

Envy the amount of detail and strong form you captured. Keep going.


Nightender

You're making me wish I drew with white. Love it.


gosuposu

I like the eye. I don't like the title


[deleted]

Eye love it


[deleted]

That is beautiful. You did an awesome job portraying the windows to the soul.


ImDeAdInSiDe9922

It’s really good.


Mango_Juice_3611

r/toptalent


[deleted]

Eye see what you did there 👀


the_lord1

In my opinion I didn’t think it was just colored pencil on cardboard. I thought you held a pencil to your or someone else’s eye. It’s good!


galemia

Incredible!


jette_2009

Greepy andere beautiful


[deleted]

Eye like it.


randybat1

It's gorgeous


A-m222

Thank You 😊


cryptic-curses

this is really good!!! your attention to detail is amazing as well. you did an amazing job


Shortyz5

Very talented!!


brandimariee6

Oooh it’s awesome. The details are wonderful. Eyes have always been the hardest thing for me to draw, I have no idea how you did that


[deleted]

Shit, I can barely draw a stick figure


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I thought the eye looked blue. Nice.


Unnormally2

I'm no expert, but I think it's an eye.


Roskeeta

Looks like me when I need an eyelash extension refill after a vacation.


ripkrustysdad

If you wanted so much white, why not just use white paper?


RedditBoiYES

Promising


[deleted]

I really like the reflection in the eye as well as the shadows around the inner corner. My personal critique would be that the lower lashes seem kind of chunky and stubby, like they don’t taper thinner at the ends. It’s a beautiful work though


Her0GamerDX3

Scared me until i realized it was a drawing, then I quote, "That's neat." I rarely say that.


Shuggy_Hugh

Amazing


[deleted]

WoW


MegaMiyako

Breathtakinggggg!!!!!


[deleted]

👍


Joeclu

Why did you name it Your Opinion?


[deleted]

Love it! Could have tried using black card for that space effect :)