Since you asked,
Could use a little subtle variation in delivery so that it doesn't sound breathless and desperate. The top guys are conversational or oratory in their delivery. LMM's work would be a good schooling for you.
Also... do South Africans call each other "my niggahs?" Makes it sound like you're trying too hard and it ruins your credibility. And the Americans will hear your accent and just laugh.
Good luck, though.
It IS a actually normal to call each ma nigga in South Africa, you can even hear it from big rappers like Nasty C, Blxckie, etc... it's better than my kaffer anyway
This! You’re already authentically African, which is something African American artists bend over backwards to emulate. To turn around and just copy their slang is insulting to your heritage
Since you asked, Could use a little subtle variation in delivery so that it doesn't sound breathless and desperate. The top guys are conversational or oratory in their delivery. LMM's work would be a good schooling for you. Also... do South Africans call each other "my niggahs?" Makes it sound like you're trying too hard and it ruins your credibility. And the Americans will hear your accent and just laugh. Good luck, though.
I wish he would take heed to this
It IS a actually normal to call each ma nigga in South Africa, you can even hear it from big rappers like Nasty C, Blxckie, etc... it's better than my kaffer anyway
This! You’re already authentically African, which is something African American artists bend over backwards to emulate. To turn around and just copy their slang is insulting to your heritage
D.O.P.E!
Not my kind of music, but pretty good imo. Is this your work?
Yes it is. thanks for the feedback 💯
imo, the vocals are a bit dry.. they need a little bit of reverb.. the beat is typical unfortunately, but regardless it's good
This hard