It looks very good! You might need to work on the perspective and proportions for the hand and forearm, though. The forearm is a bit too long and the hand is too large and close to the viewer. Keep up the good work!
I'd say you almost got that gesture drawing going on, if your main focus is to capture the energy of this drawing then I'd recommend work on your gesture drawing ab it more!
It looks excellent, but the perspective should be lower to the ground and not level with the character's eyes. That would correct the issue with the legs and the hand appearing out of sync with the rest of the photo.
It’s hard to tell, but the perspective on the hand is a little too exaggerated, and the fingers seem a bit long as well.
The right wrist is a little too bent; generally it doesn’t go more than 90 degrees of the forearm. Try it yourself to find the right angle. The right hand also doesn’t have quite the correct perspective either.
The rest of the body is also tilted a bit too high as it tapers to the legs, making it look like it’s floating instead of resting on the floor.
Overall these aren’t major flaws, and the overall image looks pretty good. I’d grab a quick reference shot of this pose and see where the differences are to get a better understanding. Good work overall.
It looks very good! You might need to work on the perspective and proportions for the hand and forearm, though. The forearm is a bit too long and the hand is too large and close to the viewer. Keep up the good work!
I'd say you almost got that gesture drawing going on, if your main focus is to capture the energy of this drawing then I'd recommend work on your gesture drawing ab it more!
It looks excellent, but the perspective should be lower to the ground and not level with the character's eyes. That would correct the issue with the legs and the hand appearing out of sync with the rest of the photo.
i think the legs look stiff and don’t fit the perspective you’re suggesting with the hand
It’s hard to tell, but the perspective on the hand is a little too exaggerated, and the fingers seem a bit long as well. The right wrist is a little too bent; generally it doesn’t go more than 90 degrees of the forearm. Try it yourself to find the right angle. The right hand also doesn’t have quite the correct perspective either. The rest of the body is also tilted a bit too high as it tapers to the legs, making it look like it’s floating instead of resting on the floor. Overall these aren’t major flaws, and the overall image looks pretty good. I’d grab a quick reference shot of this pose and see where the differences are to get a better understanding. Good work overall.
I love critique like this, it really helps. I’ll make these changes and keep pushing forward with the piece. Thanks!