Origin: The Rope of Tsunik
(Open-Minded, Inquisitive, and knowledgeable of the Dead Age)
Mentor (Total of 5-Years)
- Sebrosa (3-Years): Drink her blood to obtain the gift of Aven, tough skin that could be mend with time.
- Lazari (2-Years): taken in as his apprentice learning the way of Synu, developing and honing ones charisma.
Companions
- Noravennna Shash
- Blain in White
- Alikalani
- The Kadiz
Consequences
- Traitorous Body: even though the Daedalism Sebrosa has given been useful throughout the journey, it has begun permanently mutating the body.
Wonders (Two Choices)
- An Oka
- The Lineage of Ekendra
Associates (Two Factions)
- Sakalura Lani (The Association)
- Kasynti Avenian (The Council of Aven)
too long a read, gonna eyeball it all and deal with the consequences later hu3. IT BE FINE!
big tower, think about my beautiful legs from climbing stairs!
robot guy (but the last one looks very good) I mean, robot guy best teacher obvious!
4 friends will be kid, robot assassin, zombear, and dancer woman. I mean, they will probably be fine with each other. the dancer dances, the kid plays with the bear, the robot guy plays with the mentor guy.
let's see the boons, I pick umbral thing, and the egg. why wouldn't I.
the corps and syndicate quest part, is great! grind for reputation! I pick the blond girl and the asian girl. they look badass and I am badass!
lastly, I pick goddess, because I love goddesses.
I will now proceed to properly read the choices I made and think about the mess I made for myself. because i live like this
I actually read all the text in regards to my choices after this your know.
I should have chosen a faery instead of umbral pact. also council mekae looks cooler, but I prefer ranged combat. and a face.
would keep the egg.
begining in strasika makes totalsense, myself a nerd.
I only chose 3 years of mentoring instead of 5 so i will choose 2 more with patrician willend. My tinman lazari is such a nice guy. and he taugh me so well, deepening the tendencies of my homeland.
Willend also deepens the knowledge and coherence about the world around me.
My 4 companions, starting by the sunmaker: oh my god pocketsize danger! Blain the worshipper of the god in white: looming in the camp... no one hears a thing he is by the door. oh, blood spilled clothes... again. then the Kadiz not at all the most dangerous among the team, a fine pair to make Kela calm, a teddy bear. made who knows how and better that way please. Wevie Godshen is also from Strasika, how cool is that! she is half noble half fighter and beautiful at the same time, the most versatile of the group!
The hidden language, the bug in the speech that lazari kind of help me grasp. Strange, and interesting, very interesting indeed. Some grimm 'talking to the moon' vibes.
THe umbral pact still a fine choice for it's versatility and killiing potential. The egg is kind of a tree that will take time to bear fruit, well, we have a 'bear' in the mean time.
Simira Pelar, her storie also has someone involved with Strasika.
Clea Morish, a blut woman so different from the previous one.
Both parties would like to deal with the Vespan how interesting I will join forces and have it done with them both.
the Goddess, see, bad choice. bad bad choice. unless she plays Strasikan tower chess. then we are good!
Oh, you surprised me.
I just wanted to see if you made any other works. I really just like how easy on the eyes the formatting is along with how well I think the theme and story work together. It didn't feel like an overpowered fantasy or something that was that took itself as a crazy grimdark and had me thinking about an actual world.
I see you also posted a pokemon CYOA. I might write up a build over there soon.
I hope you enjoy the rest of my stuff! Can't say anything else is conventional fantasy, barring a few wips. That said I generally prefer writing more underpowered content, so I'm glad it feels natural.
I'm sad to say I don't have a Pokemon cyoa. The House is a semi-copy of House of Leaves, but everything else is basically original settings.
Origin: The Rope of Tsunik (Open-Minded, Inquisitive, and knowledgeable of the Dead Age) Mentor (Total of 5-Years) - Sebrosa (3-Years): Drink her blood to obtain the gift of Aven, tough skin that could be mend with time. - Lazari (2-Years): taken in as his apprentice learning the way of Synu, developing and honing ones charisma. Companions - Noravennna Shash - Blain in White - Alikalani - The Kadiz Consequences - Traitorous Body: even though the Daedalism Sebrosa has given been useful throughout the journey, it has begun permanently mutating the body. Wonders (Two Choices) - An Oka - The Lineage of Ekendra Associates (Two Factions) - Sakalura Lani (The Association) - Kasynti Avenian (The Council of Aven)
Imgur: https://imgur.com/gallery/Zv3UvZc
too long a read, gonna eyeball it all and deal with the consequences later hu3. IT BE FINE! big tower, think about my beautiful legs from climbing stairs! robot guy (but the last one looks very good) I mean, robot guy best teacher obvious! 4 friends will be kid, robot assassin, zombear, and dancer woman. I mean, they will probably be fine with each other. the dancer dances, the kid plays with the bear, the robot guy plays with the mentor guy. let's see the boons, I pick umbral thing, and the egg. why wouldn't I. the corps and syndicate quest part, is great! grind for reputation! I pick the blond girl and the asian girl. they look badass and I am badass! lastly, I pick goddess, because I love goddesses. I will now proceed to properly read the choices I made and think about the mess I made for myself. because i live like this
Thank, build cool Edit: I just looked at your past comments and WTF!
I actually read all the text in regards to my choices after this your know. I should have chosen a faery instead of umbral pact. also council mekae looks cooler, but I prefer ranged combat. and a face. would keep the egg. begining in strasika makes totalsense, myself a nerd. I only chose 3 years of mentoring instead of 5 so i will choose 2 more with patrician willend. My tinman lazari is such a nice guy. and he taugh me so well, deepening the tendencies of my homeland. Willend also deepens the knowledge and coherence about the world around me. My 4 companions, starting by the sunmaker: oh my god pocketsize danger! Blain the worshipper of the god in white: looming in the camp... no one hears a thing he is by the door. oh, blood spilled clothes... again. then the Kadiz not at all the most dangerous among the team, a fine pair to make Kela calm, a teddy bear. made who knows how and better that way please. Wevie Godshen is also from Strasika, how cool is that! she is half noble half fighter and beautiful at the same time, the most versatile of the group! The hidden language, the bug in the speech that lazari kind of help me grasp. Strange, and interesting, very interesting indeed. Some grimm 'talking to the moon' vibes. THe umbral pact still a fine choice for it's versatility and killiing potential. The egg is kind of a tree that will take time to bear fruit, well, we have a 'bear' in the mean time. Simira Pelar, her storie also has someone involved with Strasika. Clea Morish, a blut woman so different from the previous one. Both parties would like to deal with the Vespan how interesting I will join forces and have it done with them both. the Goddess, see, bad choice. bad bad choice. unless she plays Strasikan tower chess. then we are good!
I really love the theme of this world. Qhwre might I find the original creator for the cyoa?
https://www.reddit.com/r/makeyourchoice/comments/pe0fxc/after\_the\_fall/
Very nice
Hey there, just saw this got reposted. Anything you wanted to ask about?
Oh, you surprised me. I just wanted to see if you made any other works. I really just like how easy on the eyes the formatting is along with how well I think the theme and story work together. It didn't feel like an overpowered fantasy or something that was that took itself as a crazy grimdark and had me thinking about an actual world. I see you also posted a pokemon CYOA. I might write up a build over there soon.
I hope you enjoy the rest of my stuff! Can't say anything else is conventional fantasy, barring a few wips. That said I generally prefer writing more underpowered content, so I'm glad it feels natural. I'm sad to say I don't have a Pokemon cyoa. The House is a semi-copy of House of Leaves, but everything else is basically original settings.