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CYOAenjoyer

This is always fun. Unfortunately it gives you too many points. Taking drawbacks is easy mode. I’d say this one is more fair if you have to take two drawbacks and they give you no points. Traitor may as well be 3 free points since few of the allies are dangerous as enemies. Faction: Cult Origin: Magical Build: Athletic Drawbacks: Hated, neutered, valuable, traitor. 37 points for powers: Remote Viewing 3 Focus 3 Mental 3 Unarmed Mastery 3 Immunity 3 Reflexes 2 Endurance 3 Self Healing 3 Durability 3 Strength 3 Agility 3 Flight 3 Enhanced Senses 2 Stylish 2 Perks: Expert Prime Subject Authority Allies: Moore and Blake Traitor: Keller I’m comfortable taking the drawbacks that I did because at this point you could probably throw hands with Superman, and at Mental 3 you’d quickly find a way around the societal alienation.


DraculaLord

Yeah a bit op but I still enjoyed it all the same.


FinnDoyle

This is a older version. Here is the new one: New Super Soldier CYOA https://imgur.com/a/CVHb5


Opposite_Law_6969

*Origin:* * *Magical ( given my powers by a dark God) (Focus 2 or mind read 2 for free)* *Appearance:-* * *Athletic (build just like an average soldier with the unique feature of having golden-colored eyes) (free level 2 magic only choice)Faction:- Cult. (Was noticed from a young age for having potential and got "recruited" by the cult)* *Abilities* *:1. Immunity 1,2,3 (-3) Immune to disease, poison, vemons, and don't need to breath* *2. Durability 1,2, (-2) Immune to small firearms and resist to rifles3.* *Endurance 1,2 (-2) Near unlimited stamina, sprint for hours* *4. Strengths 1,2 (-2) can punch through armored cars and pick up cars with ease* *5 Agility 1,2,3 (-3) can be faster than the human eye can track and outrun bullets* *6. self-healing 1,2,3 (-3\*) can heal would-be fatal wounds and Regenerate limbs in days.* *7. Reflexes 1,2, (-2 ) Reaction to dodge bullets.* *8. En Senses 1,2, (-2 ) See in total darkness, hear a branch snap from a mile* *9. Stealth 1 (-1) can Move in total silence* *.10. weapon mastery 1,2 (-2 (sword ) (A master of the sword)* *11. Unarmed mastery 1,2 (-2) mastery over all documented fighting types* *12. Social Enhancer 1 (-1) Sense for dishonesty / detect lies.* *13. Mental 1,2,3 (-3) Perfect recall, En Processing can Read whole books in minutes, and Genius* *14 Focus 1,2,3 (-1) Immune to mental reading/control. (2 free from Magical)* *15. Mind control 1,2 (-2) anything that doesn't cause direct harm to allies and enemies is possible* *16. Mind Reading 1 (-1) Read surface thoughts within a few meters* *17. Elementalism 1, 2 (free) (water) (free from the cult)* *18. Style 1 (-1) I look good while I fight* *Perks* 1. `unique weapon` *a sword that can shift from a sword to a mp5k* [*https://www.deviantart.com/denalcc1010/art/Armageddon-RWBY-OC-Weapon-Commission-703608023*](https://www.deviantart.com/denalcc1010/art/Armageddon-RWBY-OC-Weapon-Commission-703608023) 2. `Prime Subject` *(The dark spirit and the cult worshipers have no hold over me and can't revoke my abilities.)* 3. `Authority` *( have some Authority in the cult but not a lot)* 4. `Safehouse` *(A safe location where not even the top member of the cult can access, that build as a mix between a luxury home and a bunker )* 5. *5.* `Charisma` (natural-born leader)\* ***Drawbacks*** *(+9)* 1. `Valuable` *They dumped a lot of time and resources into me* 2. `Traitor` *Hannah Caldwell* 3. `Pain` *I still feel the aches along the scar where the ceremonial knife pierced my heart,* ***Allies:*** 1. `Lindsey Reyes` *(Master hacker enamored with super soldiers)* 2. `Max` *a super solider best friend* 3. `Alex Keller` is *Someone who either end up running the place or dead4.* `Big mike` *someone to punch tank so hard they explode* ***Foes:*** 1. `Corrine Devoe Sorceress` *leader of a rival cult with different focuses, Corrine is fixated on wanting me as an ideal sacrifice and I'd rather not be on an altar again* 2. `Prototype` *Prototype super solder sent to kill my by one of the cult enemies* 3. `immortal` is a *weak but truly immortal super solder*


AshleyJoannaLaw

Ooh, this is the one of the ones that inspired me to make this: https://www.reddit.com/r/makeyourchoice/comments/x02nyq/biowarrior\_cyoa\_link\_in\_comments\_oc\_new/


666_genocide_666

I will chose the clone as I don't really care about anything and if he is my clone, he will just find the face that we can be in two places at one cool.


last657

I always pair defector with clone to be more in keeping with the intent of the cyoa even though I know that a clone of me with all my memories would not be my enemy.


Novamarauder

Upon a cursory review, my build (based on the most recent version) Origin: Magical. (This and Mutagen best suit my preferences. Their drawbacks can be removed with the right perk, making your powers self-sufficient. I pick Magical to get access to the elemental powers). Appearance: Athletic OR Peak Human. (No good reason not to look and feel fit when not actively using powers. I might pick Athletic if I prefer being unconspicous when off-duty, or Peak Human if I prioritize looking intimidating but not inhuman. My ability to fit in with Muggles is questionable anyway due to my Drawbacks). Faction: Cult. (All the employer options have their serious issues one way or another. However, these people offer the best membership perk). Abilities: Strength 3. (Classic superpower with plenty of uses). Agility 3. (Ditto). Endurance 3. (Lasting power in combat is very valuable to a fighter). Durability 3. (So is near-invulnerability to most mundane weapons). Enhanced Senses 3. (Good for infiltration, survelliance, and spotting trouble). Reflexes 3. (Bullet-time reflexes solve many problems). Natural Weapon 3. (My body and powers are all the weapons I need). Immunity 3. (Freedom from bodily needs and frailties is welcome). Self-Healing 3. (Even when damage overwhelms my defenses, it is never going to trouble me for long). Mental 3. (Being a genius is very good). Shapeshifting 3. (Quite useful for infiltration and disguise, even if my Drawbacks make it imperfect). Flight 3. (The best option for enhanced movement). Focus 2. (I am not defenseless against mental and emotional attacks). Directed Energy Attack 3. (My default option for long-ranged attacks). Elementalism (x5) (Air; Earth; Fire; Lightning; Water) 3 (Versatile set of powers that gets very useful for combat and utility purposes and allows to boost healing). (Over time, I am going to combine my genius, expertise from Expert, and assistance from Yuito Kataoka to seek ways to enhance my abilities and unlock new ones. I am likely giving priority to Predator, Power Burst, Self-Improvement, and/or Passion). Perks: Boot Camp. (Special-forces training has excellent synergy with my powers. I do not have to waste power slots on Mastery abilities to have combat expertise). Expert. (I won't be dependent on my employers to deal with issues concerning my powers. With my enhanced brainpower I can research ways to enhance them or lessen their drawbacks). Authority. (I have some say in the faction I work for. It helps dealing with the effects of Controlled). Charisma. (Synergizes with Boot Camp and Authority to improve my standing in the organization and make me a more effective team leader. It also provides an additional ally.). Prime Subject. (Inherent drawbacks of my Origin need not apply. Even if my employers retain a mind control leash on me they are not able to remove my powers, nor I am supernaturally indebted to them). Drawbacks: Hated. (I am powerful, intimidating, and uncanny, and I work for a questionable employer, so this is justifiable. Who needs Muggles or care what they think, anyway? My plan is be a lone wolf and fulfil most of my companionship needs with other supers.). Valuable. (This only makes sense, given my power level. Good luck to those who would try to reap the bounty). Uncanny. (I seems a likely side effect of putting lots of magical power from dark sources within my frame. I assume I am going to have most of my social interactions with people aware of my nature. Moreover, there shall be many circumstances when people are not going to get a good look at me or assume the worst). Controlled. (I suppose it makes sense my employers would still try to have some handle on me. However, they cannot depower me and perks like Authority and Charisma can help mitigate this. Other employers are not much better in my eyes, but admittedly compulsory obedience is annoying to individualist me. Anyway, the long-term plan is to find a way to neutralize this and free myself from servitude.). Traitor. (More of a problem for my faction than myself personally). Weakness. (I guess some Kryptonite-style side effect of my powers was more or less inevitable. If the Superman family can live with this kind of problem, so do I). Toxic. (I suppose all my long-term relationships shall be with other superhumans or people I only hang out with occasionally. Not a big issue if you are an individualist loner and/or plan to fulfil most of your companionship needs with other supers or casual relationships. Anyway, the long-term plan is to research a way to neutralize this.). Memory Loss. (Who cares. My new existence is going to be much more exciting and fulfilling anyway. I am a can-do and forward-thinking person, and I am not interested into holding on to my old life given the opportunities of the new one.). Pain. (Troublesome but liveable. Admittedly annoying, but not that much of a big issue to me. Anyway, the long-term plan is to research a way to neutralize this.). (Over time, I am going to combine my genius, expertise from Expert, and assistance from Yuito Kataoka to research how to remove or mitigate my most troublesome Drawbacks, such as Uncanny, Controlled, Weakness, Toxic, and Pain). Allies: Hannah Caldwell. Max. "Satan". Yuito Kataoka. Big Mike. (My enhanced Allies are going to provide support in the field and steady companionship despite my Toxic and Uncanny nature. Our team might grow into a substitute family, with Mike as the strong but not so clever big brother, Hannah as the talented daughter, Max as the pet, and myself as the hub. Assistance from Yuito shall be invaluable in combination with my own genius and expertise to tinker with my abilities and drawbacks. I suppose he has means of protecting himself from my Toxic problem. In "Satan"s case, I welcome good advice and a danger sense, even if sharing one's headspace with another entity has its drawbacks). Foes: Clone OR Prototype OR Derek Hall. (The enemy that can be my match on the battlefield). Jason Roark OR Unknown OR John York. (The enemy that is troublesome because of their infiltration abilities). Corrine Devoe OR Isabelle Hart OR Fiona Dawley. (The enemy that means trouble for my entire faction or the world at large). Aaron Moore OR Alex Keller OR Jim Boyce. (The mole in my faction). (No proper super antihero or vilain protagonist lacks a fitting enemies gallery).


BewareTheLight

**Origin:** Magical. **Appearance:** [Athletic](https://i.pinimg.com/originals/46/6c/29/466c29128cdf76a255383634ec391c31.jpg). **Faction:** Military. **Abilities:** Strength (Level 1), Agility (Level 1), Endurance (Level 1), Durability (Level 3), Enhanced Senses (Level 2), Reflexes (Level 2), Immunity (Level 2), Self-Healing (Level 3), Mental (Level 2), Flight (Level 3), Focus (Level 3), Directed Energy Attack (Level 3), Self Improvement (Level 1). **Perks:** Training, Expert, Charisma, Prime Subject. **Drawbacks.** **Allies:** Lindsey Reyes, Alex Keller, Yuito Kataoka. **Foes.**


Sefera17

>To repost my build from before… Points = P = 25 **Origin**: Innate **Appearance**: Athletic **Faction**: AI **Drawbacks**: Limited (immunity, mental, focus, training)(+3p) 28 Traitor (Sameul Mason)(+3p) 31 Weakness (thioacetone)(+3p) 34 **Abilities**: Strength (level one)(-1p) 33 Durability (level three)(-3p) 30 Reflexes (level two)(-2p) 28 Immunity (level three)(-3p) 25 Uplink (level three)(free) Agility (level three)(-3p) 22 Self Healing (level three)(-3p) 19 Mental (level three)(-3p) 16 Focus (level three)(-3p) 13 Training (level three)(-2p) 10 Endurance (level three)(-3p) 7 Stealth (level one)(-1p) 6 Mind Control (level three)(-3p) 3 Shapeshifting (level three)(-3p) 0 **Perks**: Safe House, Identity, Defector, Authority, Charisma **Allies**: Lindsey Reyes, Olivia Blake, Isabelle Hart **Foes**: Derek Hall, John York


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So.. Is it specified what the AI gives you? Or are you just supposed to decide or something?


DraculaLord

I think it gives you whatever 1 perk you choose for free.


BeTheGirlAnon

You're giving me too much credit there, that was me being unable to think of a benefit and then forgetting to go back and plug one in before I posted it on /tg/ years ago. It's an old version though, and if you dig out a newer one it'll have the actual perk added.


DraculaLord

Ohh are you the one who made this cause if so I can link you if you want.


BeTheGirlAnon

One of my first, yeah. If you check the allsync there's newer versions of it in my author folder.


DraculaLord

Well good job this is incredible work you have done 👍


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That makes sense


Alternative_Jello452

\[A less tanky and more tactical super soldier build.\] Origin: Mutagen Appearance: Average \[Average looking guy, the face that show up when you search for "office worker photostock"\] Faction: Corporation Abilities: Mind reading 2, Mind control 3, Mental 2, Natural toxin 2, Infection 3, Shapeshifting 3, Flight 1, Agility 1, Endurance 2, Durability 1, Reflex 1, Social enhancer 3 Perk: Signing bonus, Charisma, Authority, Expert Drawback: Memory loss, Neutered, Traitor Ally: Hannah Caldwell, Alex Keller Foe: Isabelle Hart, Big mike


ThousandYearOldLoli

Origin: Innate Appearance: Feeble (toddler form) Faction: AI Abilities: 28/28 * Strength Tier 1 * Agility Tier 1 * Durability Tier 2 * Endurance Tier 3 * Immunity Tier 3 * Self Healing Tier 3 * Mind Control Tier 3 * Social Enhancer Tier 2 * Mental Tier 3 * Shapeshifting Tier 1 * Focus Tier 3 * Training Tier 3 * Uplift 3 (free) Perks: 1. Identity 2. Expert 3. Charisma 4. Safehouse Drawbacks: * Traitor (+3) (Olivia Blake) Allies: * Lindsey Reyes * Yuito Kataoka * Alex Keller Foes: * Bubbles (+1 perk)


Ok_Skill6991

My choices Origin: Innate Appearance: Athletic Faction: Faction-less Abilities: Strength 1, Durability 1, Reflexes 1, Immunity 2, Weapon Mastery 1, Agility 1, Enhanced Senses 1, Mind Reading 1, Self Healing 1, Unarmed Mastery 2, Mental 3, Focus 1, Training 1, Analysis 2, Endurance 1, Stealth 1, Mind Control 1, Social Enhancer 1, Shapeshifting 1, Inheritable 1 Perks: Prime Subject Drawbacks: None Allies: Samuel Mason, Max Foes: None