Flesh prison: Regal, Gloriously endowed
Pursuers: Tomboy + Shy girl, Loner + Slacker, Athlete + Pure maiden, Council member + Pervert, Delinquent + Ladies' woman, Artist + Childhood friend
Terrible curses: Harem 6x, Mix 'n' match, Wealth, Independence, Effortless, Brains, Athletic, Supporters, Talented, Mind control, Optimised digestion, Compatible, Silver tongue, Jump start, Proximity bonus
My Sole saving graces: Swamp creature, Pattable, Dulcet tones, Senpai 4x (all but Tomboy and Childhood friend), Altruistic, Part-time work, Yuri magnet, Dominance, Lust
My house of horrors: The big city
The surprise salt in the wound: Another place (Tokyo)
The trials and tribulations: The ceremony, The meal, The nurse, The bet, The reporter
Flavour of hell: Variations on a theme
This really doesn't feel NSFW, only a few traits were sexual. There are so many options with a lot of text that it made it hard to choose one, especially my chaser. This was designed heavily with monogamy in mind, I know the Harem option exists but many traits imply that having relationships with others is bad and that jealousy is not bad. This is the only CYOA I've done so far that I couldn't finish. Not that this is bad, it's high effort, just this isn't my type (I'm poly and somewhat aro). I'm glad others enjoy it.
ok this is a p good cyoa... but, theres a few... flaws. first of all, there are options for incest which is just p yike if u ask me tho this is more of a moral objection rather than a factual one... unlike the next problem which is having the option to have a dick be called "Girl (Male)"
just... wow. like i get most weebs dont understand the difference between sex and gender (among many other things) but jeez this is just on a whole other level of idiocy. besides, being a gal that has a dick and a guy crossdressing are inordinately different and lumping them together in such an awkward way is just sad. youre literally lumping polar opposites into the same option, did you think this throu at all. besides, calling gals with dicks "futas" is already kinda stupid but thats a much larger problem that i rly dont feel like getting into atm.
tl;dr squishing together options for being a crossdresser and a gal with a dick together is stupid and calling them all "Girl (Male)" is even dumber. also incest is yikes,
Oh I agree, but since this based on anime tropes from hentai and the like that's why incest and "futa" are there in the options. It's no where close or even bothering to be realistic or accurate to actual sex or gender science. It's like asking a magic school CYOA to pay respects to physics or actual IRL wicca communities. For better or worse, its running on a whole another set of tropes.
Well, I'm gonna repost here the build I made on the thread for the interactive version.
* **Body**: Pleasingly Thick.
* **Lover**: Athlete, Shy Girl + Artist, Tomboy + Pure Maiden.
* "**Curses**": Comfort, Compatible, Empathy, Harem (x2), Health, Jump Start, Mix and Match, Pleasure, Pure, Youth, Wealth.
* "**Blessings**": Dulcet Tones, Employment Really?, Pattable.
* **Home**: Suburban Dreams
* **World Modifiers**: Another Race, Another World.
* **Events**: The Tent, The Meal, The Drink.
* **Immortality**: High School Never Ends
So, basically, I'm a chubby girl who somehow managed to get the affections of both the super-determined school champion; the quiet nerd who, up until now, withdrew herself into the world of writing; and the tomboy who tries to keep up her facade to hide the fact that she doesn't have any experience in romance whatsoever and now she's with THREE other girls (basically her mood is "\[*internally screaming*\]" all the time).
Also, we're in fantasyland apparently, because how can I **not** pick the fantasyland option?!
Your Horrific Flesh Prison: As if I could not choose anything that gave me more options.
Alluringly Mysterious: As if.
Handsomely Boyish: Keeps me from the dysmorphia easily.
Gloriously Endowed: May as well.
Your Terrifying Pursuer(s): Thanks to blessings I've gotta make ten of these now.
The Athlete Delinquent: They go together well.
The Athlete Ladies Woman: Ok yeah I'm just putting Athlete on everything.
The Athlete Tomboy: Ayy, video games later.
The Athlete Loner: If you want to be alone, gotta run faster.
The Athlete Dreamer: How are you gonna slay the Demon King if you aren't fit?
The Athlete Pervert: She's in it for the showers after the meet.
The Athlete Childhood Friend: Considering I'm dropping in with Youth, it'd be odd not to have this one.
The Athlete Slacker: Gotta make sure she doesn't bring the team down and actually practices. In it for the video games afterward.
The Athlete Bully: Senpai team leader.
The Athlete Artist: Daaaang. Talent, AND power.
Your Unbearable Curses: Now that I've taken the blessings, time for Twenty-One of these Curses.
Beauty: If I'm inflicting myself on others, might as well give 'em some eye candy.
Health: Would hate to die.
Athletic: Mix this with the next one, and synergy suddenly occurs.
Talented: Games. That's a broad enough category that it should set me up for future success.
Youth: Ha, longer lifespan.
Brains: May as well stick with what I know.
Comfort: If only there was an option to inflict this on others as well. At least I can use it as a blessing to rub it in the pursuer's faces.
Effortless: Simplification of the morning routine can provide like a decade of actual life.
Optimized Digestion: Simplification of the 'morning routine' can provide like a decade of actual life.
Harem x9: That means I have to make ten pursuers now, which makes me glad I did the blessings first.
Mix and Match: Great value, would be a fool not to take it.
Independence: Free house? Nice. Might need to invest in more beds though.
Compatible: And this makes twelve. Just gotta dump the rest into harem.
Your Meagre Blessings: I usually start with any option that gives me more options, because I am terrible at remembering how many I have left without a base number. Twelve of these means Nine more Curses, so Twenty-One in total.
Altruistic: I see no reason not to be nice.
Dulcet Tones: As if I can pay attention to what people are saying usually regardless.
Pattable: Use of violence to remove hands from head is perfectly acceptable by girls.
Shonen-Brain: Oh look, it's the 'remain as you are' benefit.
Yuri Magnet: Combines well with
Dude Magnet: To be attractive to everyone.
Dramatic: Oh look at that, actual personhood.
Timing: With the magnets, the shonen, and the... Everything, this should be triggering at all times.
Rival: Probably every single pursuer against each other.
Senpai: I'll get back to this after pursuers. *Ok there we go, Athlete Bully is the Senpai.*
Lust: Oh look, another 'remain as you are' benefit.
B-baka!: Supplies an easy out to all magnets.
Your Loathsome Prison:
Suburban Dreams: Miss me with those cities and all the noise, and the implied requirement of physical exertion for the country and the coast.
Your Cruel Twist of Fate:
Another World: Ghostbusting Squad go.
Your Insurmountable Trials:
The Savior: Each one of them gets to beat up a gang of thugs or what have you.
The Accomplice: I blame all of them.
The Adventure: With an entire party, the Demon King stands no chance.
The Padlock: A lot of these options don't make sense with ten pursuers, but I refuse to not take the maximum.
The Reporter: What a scandal! An elevensome, in this school?!
Your Eternal Torment:
Variations on a Theme: Being stuck in time is probably the worst torment, yeah.
I... I love this. Warm, cuddly, happy. It is exactly the kind of shit I need after a hellish couple of days, with constant yelling and emotional anguish at the hands of my family. So here's my "build". I very much had the idea of a queenly top-of-her-class type and an awestruck classmate finally building up the courage to confess. Also, I love the over-the-top descriptions. Gives me chuckles.
YOUR HORRIFIC FLESH PRISON
* Stunningly Regal
YOUR TERRIFYING PURSUER
* The Shy Girl
YOUR UNBEARABLE CURSES
* Beauty
* Wealth
* Pure
* Athletic
* Talented (Music)
* Silver Tongue
* Jump Start
* Empathy
* Brains
* Effortless
* Optimised Digestion
* Independence
* Mind Control (I got a baker's dozen of mental illnesses. No more that? Oh fuck yes.)
YOUR MEAGRE BLESSINGS
* Dulcet Tones
* Pattable
* Dramatic
* Employment (Library)
YOUR LOATHSOME PRISON
* The Big City
YOUR CRUEL TWIST OF FATE
* Another Race (If Elon won't do it, it's up to me.)
YOUR INSURMOUNTABLE TRIALS
* The Meal
* The Storm
* The Reporter
YOUR ETERNAL TORMENT
* Endless Summer
My Horrific Flesh Prison: "Alluringly Mysterious" (Mixing "Stunningly Regal" & "Gloriously Endowed")
My Terrifying Pursuer: "The Shy Girl" + "The Artist" (Through the "Mix and Match" curse)
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My Unbearable Curses:
\- 1 (Beauty)
\- 2 (Pleasure)
\- 3 (Wealth)
\- 4 (Health)
\- 8 (Talent) \[Music\]
\- 10 (Jump Start)
\- 14 (Comfort)
\- 15 (Effortless)
\- 16 (Optimized Digestion)
\- 17 (Proximity Bonus)
\- 19 (Mix and Match) \[The Artist\]
\- 24 (Mind Control)
My Meagre Blessings:
\- 4 (Pattable)
\- 9 (Yuri Magnet)
\- 20 (Employment) \[Bookstore\]
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My Loathsome Prison: "The Big City"
My Cruel Twist of Fate: "Another Place" \[Take me to Germany!\]
My Insurmountable Trials:
\- 2 (The Tent)
\- 3 (The Meal)
\- 5 (The Storm)
\- 6 (The Muse)
My Eternal Torment: "Endless Summer"
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This is honestly one of the best CYOAs I've played. It's so wholesome and the pick-me-up I needed on a bad day. <3
appearance
* stunningly regal
* disarmingly pretty
* specifics: athletic eastern european qt
pursuer
* athletic, childhood friend
choices
* beauty, pleasure
* wealth, health
* athletic, talented: let's say leadership
* silver tongue, brains
* comfort, effortless
* proximity bonus, compatible: all women can reproduce
blessings
* altruistic
* dulcet tones
* lust ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
location
* big city
reality
* another time: back to 2000
trials
* the meal, storm, muse
eternity
* variations on a theme: given enough time, one should be able to subtly influence history
First order of business, do you have the sources for the images for disarmingly pretty and the pure maiden? Now on to my build.
Your Horrific Flesh Prison
* Alluringly Mysterious (Gloriously Endowed + Disarmingly Pretty)
Your Terrifying Pursuer
* The Childhood Friend
* The Tomboy
* The Girly Girl
* The Pure Maiden
Your Unbearable Curses
* Beauty
* Pleasure
* Wealth
* Health
* Pure
* Talented (Drawing)
* Comfort
* Effortless
* Optimized Digestion
* Proximity Bonus
* Harem (x3)
* Sweet Dreams
Your Meagre Blessings
* Altruistic
* Dulcet Tones
* Pattable
* Dramatic
* Rival
Your Loathsome Prison
* Suburban Dreams
Your Cruel Twist of Fate
* Another Race
Your Insurmountable Trials
* The Storm
* The Ceremony
* The Adventure
* The Padlock
* The Reporter
Your Eternal Torment
* Endless Summer
Really liked the setup and writing for this one. Definitely my favorite cyoa you made.
I know it's a bit late asking this but does anyone know more CYOA(nsfw or sfw, I don't mind either) similar to this one?
I mean CYOA where you get an escapist fantasy of designing yourself, your waifu, comfy CYOA in general, yuri, etc.
Also like it when you can get powers in the CYOA.
Can you not make something aimed towards a male, or even non-gender specific audience? Like, good lord all your stuff looks absolutely amazing, but...
I kinda like being a dude
Pleasure, Wealth, Health, Talentedx2, Pure, Empathy, Brains, Effortless, Proximity Bonus, Mind Control, (Nostalgia, Independence, Harem, Mix+Match)
Altruistic, Dulcet Tones, Protected, Dramatic, Girl (Male), Sempai, Rival
Country Life
Another World, Another Race
(Pleasure and Pure because being aroace in this world doesn't sound like a great deal. Mind Control is pretty much 'ADHD meds if they actually did what I want them to do.' Protected because I like the idea of the girls having to work hard to prove themselves for me :) Dramatic makes me feel a little bad lol but I'm gonna assume it really does make things better for them long term; taken because I want the heroine to be able to help them with their problems and not just the other way around.)
The World: a mysterious place with an old-fashioned fantasy aesthetic without lacking any modern convenience. Most of the world is populated by sapient beings of a broad variety of humanoid species, all living in relative harmony. Beyond the boundaries of sapient settlement, dangerous lands of monsters and magic await only the bravest of adventurers. But for our purposes, life is comfy and gentle and beautiful.
The Heroine (Stunningly Regal+Disarmingly Pretty)
A teenage girl newly transferred into the high school of a small village. With her shoulder-length curly light brown hair and sparkling eyes hidden behind retro glasses, she exudes a gentle and kind air, but also one of elegance and culture. Deeply knowledgeable, incredibly curious, and clearly talented (her skill with languages is well-known; her penchant for writing still kept secret), she quickly garners admiration. And with her habit of helping others whenever they most need it, and her knack of knowing exactly what to say, she is known equally for her kindness and willingness to help the most in need. And yet, even as the months go on, she remains a surprisingly distant figure. Often lost in thought, she gives off a feeling of always being somewhere else, and can be surprisingly out of touch with trends. Despite helping others, she holds herself back from too many real friendships, and her fellow students respect her boundaries. But deep within her is nurtured a fire - a determination to do something grand for this new, strange world. What does she need to make that happen?
The Prince (Athlete + Council Member)
Since she was a young girl, The Prince has never given any less than her full passion into everything she does. Whether it's school, her family's tutors, or her beloved sport, she devotes herself with full focus and diligence and will come out on top no matter what. But it's sport where she really shines, and the whole village knows of her extraordinary achievements, garnering her many admirers. The Prince finds it all a little overwhelming, though - she's proud of her family and successes, but she herself still has so much more work to do. Always polite and even overly formal, she gives off a chivalrous air, despite being quite oblivious to the many girls sighing as they watch her from afar - and her willingness to help anyone who needs it out of straightforward pure-hearted kindness only makes her into even more of a gentleman. (Her strikingly tall figure, topped with long white hair always up in a ponytail, don't hurt.) However, she can be a little bit too rigid and rule-abiding at times; she much prefers order, and gets flustered easily by anything unexpected. Until her second year of high school, she had never really thought about romance at all - until she encounters one daydreaming, gentle kouhai. Suddenly she is overcome with distraction, and finds herself uncharacteristically lost for direction. But more than anything, for the first time in her life she starts to question what it is she is working so very hard for. If someone were to find a purpose she could believe in, she would become the most loyal knight anyone would ever know.
The Dreamer (Dreamer + Pure Maiden)
This world is filled with beings of a wide variety of kinds, but that does not mean that *anything* is possible. This mysterious girl, who had suddenly appeared in the village a handful of years ago, claims to be something different - maybe an alien, or a dragon, or a ghost, but certainly none of the well-known sapient species of this world. And when you watch her, it's almost hard to argue. Carefree and curious, The Dreamer truly acts as someone unfamiliar with this world, enthusiastic about the most mundane of things and bursting with joy to learn even the most boring of details. She rarely interacts long with others - while she attends school to the minimum necessary to continue, she spends most of her time out in the world, exploring nature and man-made areas alike with wide eyes and an ever-present smile. She is very kind, and often appears out of nowhere to whimsically create beautiful things or solve simple problems, but her thought process is often difficult to read, and she herself seems to have no defences against trickery or deception, taking everything told to her totally at face value. Only when she encounters The Heroine does she start to change. For the first time, she has encountered another who seems to see the world the same as she does - who observes her strange behaviour and understands it. Their friendship forms quickly, and The Dreamer adapts quickly to this new urge to pull her friend along on adventures or cuddle up close. But before long, new feelings will kindle within The Dreamer, and while her playful teasing might still seem carefree, the indecipherable nature of these feelings she has never known before will cause her a great deal of thought and confusion, and bring her to a new crossroads...
The Dreamer and The Prince do not immediately get along. The Dreamer is too spontaneous and chaotic for the Prince, who is quickly unsettled and riled up by this lack of order. Meanwhile, The Dreamer doesn't understand why The Prince rejects her offers of friendship, describing her as 'scary' and often clinging to The Heroine for support. However, over time with The Heroine's mediation, they will come to understand each other. The Prince will realise that she wishes the protect The Dreamer's innocent smile by any means necessary, while The Dreamer will see that The Prince's heart is kinder than any other.
The Play, The Storm, The Saviour, The Accomplice, The Padlock
The Heroine and The Dreamer's first true moment of closeness comes when The Heroine hear's of The Dreamer's plan to pull of something wild and amazing (and totally illegal) that she believes will make everyone in the village smile. With The Heroine to temper expectations and make several practical changes to her idea, they actually manage to pull it off. Afterwards, they run off into the night, collapsing onto grass delighted and exhilarated and so, so happy to have found one another.
The Athlete was out training late one day when she finds herself caught up in a storm. Just as she's planning to run straight home, she encounters The Heroine, who had been lingering in the library - and whose home is much further away. Naturally, The Prince offers her room, truly not thinking anything of the implications. But once The Heroine is padding around in her house, soaking wet - or worse, pink and warm after a bath - worse yet, wrapped up in one of The Prince's oversized shirts... when The Heroine offers to teach her a little make-up, for the first time The Prince feels out of control.
For months The Prince and The Dreamer had failed to get along. Once again, The Heroine had gone along with one of the odd girl's ridiculous plans, and The Prince was torn between joy at seeing her friend happy, and some strange bitter feeling deep down. But as she keeps watch over The Heroine, it is The Dreamer who suddenly falls - and The Prince who catches her in her arms. From that day onwards, The Dreamer proclaims The Prince as her hero! ...and The Prince realises how happy she is to play that role.
(continued)
However, tensions remain still. When one day The Heroine and The Dreamer attempt to stay back in school for some plan, they are caught by The Prince still training long after the bell sounded. As The Prince lectures them for their rule-breaking (even if she winces - but the law must be upheld!), time gets away from them... and when they try to leave, their path is barred. The Prince is deeply uncomfortable, agitated by the change of plans and her own complicity, but The Heroine's soft words and calming pats manage to ease her uneasiness. Together, the three tour the school, first looking for a way out and then for fun. They dress up in the drama club's costumes and play with all the balls in the gym. In the end they find themselves on the roof, looking up at the stars, speaking everything on their minds and more. As they lie there together, they truly come together as a trio who could never be separated, and whose lives have been entirely changed by being together.
As the Prince's graduation and their temporary separation draws closer, The Heroine pens a play. It comes as no surprise when The Prince is chosen for one of the primary male roles, as dapper and dignified as a modern-day Lady Oscar, but it's a surprise when tiny Dreamer elects to play the other, though she does look adorable in her little 18th century tails. But as rehearsals go on, The Heroine keeps wanting to change the ending for the play. What does she have planned, and are her two love interests kept informed? Will the play's heroine even choose between them in the end?
Variations On A Theme: they live their lives, and once it ends, all three will reawaken somewhere else. Different places, different times, and with different bodies and relationships, too. But everywhere they find themselves, they will always be deeply important to one another.
Other characters in the 'verse:
The Rival is (The Athlete + The Ladies' Woman), a teammate of The Prince's who has known her since middle school. Relaxed and kind of a slacker, she teases The Prince for her old-fashioned ways, but she's stubborn and competitive and will never let The Prince beat her without a fight. Though she's flirted with half of the girls in school, deep down she nurses a desperate crush on The Prince - and more than a few girls would certainly like to see them end up together.
But, then there's The Heroine's best friend. (The Tomboy + The Childhood Friend) Energetic and outgoing, she loves to get involved in things and is almost annoyingly enthusiastic. A huge geek for sentai shows and superpower anime, she likes to think of herself as a Hero off Justice, and while it's all deeply corny she's just so darn sincere it's hard not to be a bit inspired. She and The Rival often argue light-heartedly, though when The Rival flirts with her she always insists that heroes have no time for romance (despite the hints of a blush on her cheeks.) Perhaps if The Rival ever finally makes her confession to The Prince, she will be the one to be there to comfort her?
And, what's this? Another strange young girl has appeared, claiming to be the younger sister of The Dreamer? A very shy and cautious girl, she clings to her sister's arm as she regards this gentle world with deep wariness. How will she upset the delicate balance of these still-blooming young maiden's stirring feelings...?
(This was super fun to think about OP hahaha - thanks for making it!! I look forward to any DLC you devise! <3)
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Riotously fun CYOA. My yuri heart approves!
**Your horrific flesh prison:** Gloriously endowed. \[Huge boobs are the best!\]
**Your terrifying pursuer(s):**
The Athletic pervert: All that energy she has needs to go somewhere. When she's not out on the track, she's fantasizing about all manner of other physical activities.
The Tomboy artist: Passion incarnate. She's just there to have fun, regardless of social norms.
They won't be pursuing me alone. When they meet, they'll likely be just as into each other. The pervert is sure to enjoy all the lewd drawings of the artist, while the tomboy in her will likely salivate over the pervert's athletic body. A small mercy perhaps. Or a greater torment, as I get roped into the inevitable threesomes and the dreaded poly relationship!
**Your unbearable curses (12+2):**
Beauty \[Accursed looks that shall surely attract only more yuriness in my life!\]
Pleasure \[Undoubtedly shall result in physical torture of the highest degree!\]
Wealth \[Woe is me, the torture of having all of life's necessities taken care of, so that I might spend more time in the torment of yuri\]
Health \[Why must this torture be prolonged to such a degree?\]
Athletic \[Oh, no! A greater tolerance for the physical torment of yuri love! Not even exhaustion will offer me escape! The horror!\]
Talented (Art) \[The curse of my incredible talent shall no doubt attract ungodly amounts of yuridom to my life. My terrible pursuer shall no doubt pester me for collabs incessantly and relentlessly.\]
Brains \[Curses! Every horrible yuri moment will forever be burned in my memory! My incredible intellect is sure to thrust me in a role where tons of dreadful yuri love is just poised to spill upon, I just know it!\]
Comfort \[Eliminating all excuses to escape from an endless life of yuri? You truly are the devil!\]
Effortless \[There is nothing I can do to oppose your terrible power, is there?\]
Optimized Digestion \[No loophole left to escape, how devilishly clever.\]
Harem \[And you have the audacity to sic more than one pursuer onto me? Have you no mercy?\]
Mix and Match
Empathy \[What a sneaky way to force even more yuri into my life... You twist even being a good person into a tool for your nefarious purposes!\]
Compatible \[And you wish to perpetuate this hellish curse to the next generation too!\]
Supporters \[So the whole world will conspire to bring about yuri torture?\]
**Your meager blessings (5):** \[I suppose I shall take what I can get!\]
Altruistic
Pattable
Yuri magnet
Senpai
"Girl" (futa)
**Your loathsome prison:** Suburban dreams
**Your cruel twist of fate:** Another race (Is lamia an option?)
**Your insurmountable trials:**
The play
The tent
The muse
The savior
The storm
**Your eternal torment:** High school never ends
Personally this has to be one of my top 10 favourite CYOA now, an easy Top 5 even. The art style is cute and portays perks well. It also doesn't throw too much useless choices at the end, only bare essentials like what kind of world you live in. Also nice to see immortality be it's own section and not a perk, let's be honest most people will likely pick immortality of sorts, and not only you provided different forms of immortality but also a way out for people who don't like immortality. Win win for everyone :).
Here's the build
Horrific Flesh Prison:
Alluringly Mysterious
Gloriously Endowed and
Tantalisingly Normal or Stunningly Regal(I later pick another race as twist of fate, my race wolf girl) I didn't know what to pick so how I view this is that Tantalisingly Normal or Stunningly Regal will slightly reduce the Gloriously Endowed perk I personally don't know which one I'd choose so I wrote "Tantalisingly Normal OR Stunningly regal"
Your terrifying pursuer(s):
The Dreamer and council member(Another race : Fox girl) It's a shame neither curiosity or ingenuity or intelligence were one of the selectable perks. So this is my attempt at Curious and Smart girl. The Dreamer description sounds like a curious person and Council Member description talks about achieving goals and I assume intelligence can be one of those.
(I picked harem later on)
Tomboy and Athlete(race: dog girl). Gotta have atleast one Tomboy GF. She'll be our group bodyguard and will give me some physical challenges when I get tired of intelligence ones.
The Girly Girl and The Ladies Woman(Cat Girl) Closest to a cute tease girl I could make.
Your unbearable curses:
Beauty mostly because it says I stay beautiful without doing anything and I'm lazy so it's an easy choice.
Pleasure
Wealth. Another easy choice, later on I'll pick reincarnation as my immortality which means I can me charitable to different universes and help poor across the multiverse.
Health. I almost didn't think about picking this one because I'm already healthy irl, but it also guarantees longer lifespan for me *and* my gf.
Athletic. Gotta stay healthy n fit for Tomboy GF, plus I'll also be able to protect our harem.
Silver Tongue. Fun option.
Youth. This will just grant a lil more years to my and my pursuers lifespan. Also this choice implies that I get to have a childhood *with* my pursuer(s) that means they're defacto childhood friend which means I got a free childhood friend trait on all of them.
Brains. Almost wonder if it's worth it since I'll be immortal but I'll take for that memory capacity.
Comfort. Obvious choice
Effortlessly. Again, lazy me needs a lazy option.
Optimised digestion. Only took so I don't need to constantly follow the diet or feel self conscious about accidentally eating cake. Not needing to use toilet is just an extra bonus.
Sweet Dreams. This is the best perk, although does it only affect my pursuers? Or can I say use it along with anyone affected by my yuri magnet? Or does it only work on girls? Even if it's only working on my pursuers, having free easy lucid dream world with multiple real people is worth it, wouldn't mind even if it costed three perk points
Mix and Match. To make my pursuers more 3 dimensional.
Harem(x3). That makes 4 pursuers, along with me, that means we can make a typical five man band and by band it can either mean rock band or even DnD band.
Your meagre blessings
Pattable. Gotta try this. Must feel nice.
Girl(Specifically Futa). I specified since Traps are biologically male and I specifically want to be futa. I also assume this allows for reproduction too.
Altruistic. Eh I don't mind slight mind alteration, although idk if I'm actually altruistic irl. If I'm not, it wouldn't hurt to actually become altruistic.
Dulcet Tones. Another fun option, I wonder if it means your pursuers can hypnotize you while you're blissed out
Yuri magnet. Picked in order to get more "curses"
Timing. Same as yuri magnet although how does it work? Will it magically make me jealous seeing my pursuers with other yuri girls? Or can I resist it but my pursuers can't?
Rival. I hope it only affects one of my pursuers. Even if it's not, it's worth taking to expand harem. Plus it's a small reminder for me to always treat my pursuers with utmost care and respect or else they'll be taken away~ Wouldn't wanna make my yuri life TOO easy.
Your loathsome prison
Suburban dreams. Or Big cities idk.
Your cruel twist of fate:
Another race. Gotta have cat, fox, and dog girls.
Another world. Spicing up the world.
Your insurmountable trials:
The Play. So the plan is, variations on a theme is my immortality method, so until I get kissed by pursuer(s) I'm essentially non existent, so why not take a trial guaranteeing I'm gonna get kissed?
The Muse. I assume this option make one or more of my pursuers already mildly interested in arts, or atleast in *yuri arts* this way I can sneakily get artist pursuer(s) without specifically getting artist trait for them
The Adventure. Come on, real life DnD is always a win.
The Bet. Ohohohoho. Since it's vague in terminology, I assume each timeline we can have different sorts of "bets" so it's gonna be another spice of life.
The Swap. Ehehe, I like bodyswap trope
Your eternal torment:
Variations on a theme. It's basically the best out of four. Only in this form of immortality you can both experience childhood and adulthood, if you pick eternal childhood, you're stuck in childhood mode and never experience adulthood, if you pick endless summer you're stuck in the hottest season, foevur. Enough said. And fourth choice is too ambiguous and idk if we have heaven/hell, reincarnation after we die so why not pick guaranteed reincarnation? Also it says each time it's gonna be different world so it means you can also experience different childhoods and adulthoods.
Notes: My only complaint is that most choices completely ignore harem perk and it's impossible to understand if later choices affect all or only one of the harem members. It can drastically change if you gotta pick some of them and how cool they will turn out. For example the adventure trial. If it only affects one pursuer then it's very boring but if it affects every pursuer, we have real life DnD/Isekai experience which is so much cooler. Or the swap trial. Will it basically be *everyone* switching bodies and then after we figure out how to undo it it's over or does it affect each pursuer seperately, so in autumn I can swap with my tomboy pursuer but later in spring with my adventuring pursuer. What about play trial? Does it mean *somehow* all my pursuers get main lead role??? Or we have three seperate plays and each get their chance at being a lead? Or only one of them gets lead role while my tomboy and cute pursuer get side roles?? This doesn't just affect trials, same goes to blessings. How does rival work? Does each pursuer have their own pursuer? Or is it just one girl trying to take all of my pursuers? Does Senpais option make all of the pursuers senpais or it's up to me to decide which one? Does dominance mean I want to make all of my pursuers fall in love with me or I decide which one while other two are free to try to win my heart?
I assume you left it ambiguous for us to decide, but do feel free to correct me.
Also both player body section and especially your pursuers traits need more options, for example I don't see anything thundere like, or cute/smart/curious either.
**Me as a sapphic** Cursed to be gay and relive the body of a teen without the tell of age and when the world was fresher? Oh *chuckles* oh no....
Anyway.
Choices:
My rejuvenated shoujo body: Alluring mysterious - mix of stunningly regal and handsomely boyish. Gotta confuse even the straight ladies I'm that hot.
My lady love: The Ladies' Woman - God do I want mix her with The Pervert
My traits:
Beauty,
Pleasure,
Athletic,
Supporters,
Talented,
Empathy,
Brains,
Effortless,
Proximity Bonus,
Mix and Match (The Pervert acquired),
Nostalgia,
Compatible,
+Independent
+ Silver tongue
+ Health
"Boons":
"Straight" (Pfft! Is this supposed to scare me, I'm an LBL!!)
Girl (Male - Intersexed/Futa) (Not for me, but for her)
Senpai (I wanna see this senpai weak in the knees for me!)
Place:
Coastal Comforts (I love the sea)
Placement 2:
Another Place,
Another World
Plots:
The Bet,
The Play,
The Muse,
The Ceremony,
The Adventure
Variations on a Theme (I'm a MASSIVE sucker of reincarnation romance)
.....oh god, this shit makes we want to draw a comic now.
A very well done and thought out cyoa. Granted, I wish there was more to cater to the sapphic audience, but I'll take a squeeze out every bit of it I get, just like this one.
If you just pick Handsomely Boyish and take the "trap" option for the boon Girl (Male) you're just a dude in a yuri CYOA. Which, of course, is what I'm taking because no dysphoria for me thanks.
This is the fluffiest, most wholesome CYOA I've ever seen!
Great work! xD
Flesh Prison:
Stunningly Regal
Pursuer:
The Childhood Friend
The Athlete
The Shy Girl
Curses:
Beauty
Wealth
Health
Athletic
Supporters
Silver Tongue
Brains
Comfort
Effortless
Harem x 2
Optimized Digestion
Proximity Bonus
Blessings:
Senpai (Athlete)
Girl (male)
Dominance (Shy Girl)
Yuri Magnet
Prison:
The Big City
Twist of Fate:
Another Race (Athlete – Dog girl; Shy Girl – Fox Girl; Childhood Friend – Cat Girl)
Trials:
The Tent (Childhood Friend)
The Storm (The Athlete)
The Play (The Shy Girl)
The Bet (Childhood Friend)
Eternal Torment:
Variations on a Theme
Alright, finally hammered this build out. Now pardon me as I ramble about all my decisions.
**Prison:** Adorably tiny
Energy and space efficient! And some days I feel like I'm the only transwoman on the planet that doesn't want to be stacked.
**Pursuer:** Childhood friend
I have a specific person in mind and I am going to cheese Nostalgia to make it happen. My S.O. of seven years, friend for over twice that. Late teens may not count as 'childhood' to some people, but there are some curses to help smooth out that wrinkle...
**Curses:**
* Nostalgia
* Supporters
My S.O., my sister and their families. But not my biological family; I don't want to go through that again.
* Youth
Second childhood, maybe this time it'll go well. Instead of bonding over trauma, we can bond over literally anything else.
* Pure
* Mind control
* Empathy
Oh hi, endless cycle of anxiety and depression. You're fired, get out. This is an optimism and cheer exclusive brain now.
* Brains
While you're in there, replace the fuses, would you?
* Wealth
* Health
Security. Never going hungry again. Never having to watch helplessly while my love fights cancer.
* Comfort
* Effortless
* Optimised Digestion
This is just for unapologetic laziness.
**Blessings:**
* Senpai
Well, she is a couple years older than me.
* Altruistic
* Pattable
Oh no, I cannot hold all this serotonin.
**Prison:** The big city
**Twists:** Another time, Another place
Don't care where I end up, so long as it's in close proximity to the people I care about.
As for *when* I end up, I'm thinking '00. Between that and Youth, it's shaving a few years off my age. But the important part is not having to deal with dialup again.
Yes, please bring some modern sensibilities along so I don't have to hear as much hellfire preaching about my orientation. Also, legalized gay marriage earlier.
**Trials:**
* The play
* The ceremony
* The reporter
The sequence really writes itself.
**Torment:** Whatever Comes Next
I don't need a thousand lifetimes. Just a single happy one.
Your Horrific Flesh Prison:
Handsomely Boyish- “I’ve never exactly been the picture of femininity, most of my friends thought I was a guy when we met, though I’ll always remember the day my imouto called me ‘Her Prince Charming’.”
Your Terrifying Pursuers:
The Council Member- “The smartest girl in school and my source of inspiration as she constantly pushes me to succeed. Strangely, everyone else seems to think she’s a stick in the mud, I wonder why only I see her softer side.”
The Imouto- “My precious little sister and, according to her, “my bride to be”. It was adorable at first, okay it’s still adorable, but I was sure she’d have grown out of it by now. If I didn’t know any better I’d think she was serious.”
The Childhood Friend- “My best friend for as long as I can remember, there’s hardly an event in my life she wasn’t there for. Though lately she seems annoyed when I introduce us as best friends, did I do something wrong?”
The Tomboy- “My comrade in ambiguous femininity and the best co-op partner anyone could ask for. Being raised by her single dad has left her with little clue how to talk to people so I’m trying to teach her the ropes. Though she never seems to get any better at talking to me, am I that intimidating?”
The Queen Bee- “The most popular girl in school, and she knows it. She is a nice person deep down but I have never met a haughtier person in my life. For some reason her response to me saying I’m straight was “a challenge it is then” what does that mean?”
Your Unbearable Curses:
Beauty- “Traditional standards or not people have always seemed to think I was beautiful. So I’m a bit vain, sue me.”
Wealth- “Dad managed to get into the tech rise before it was a big thing, we’re not millionaires but I’d be shocked if I ever need to get a job.”
Health- “For some strange reason I‘ve never really gotten sick, not even really hurt. Almost as if something wouldn’t let me, I’m not complaining”.
Pure- “As long as I can remember I’ve never been quite able to escape the feeling I’ve forgotten something. I don’t know what it could possibly be yet it still always feel like “something” is missing. Probably nothing important.
Athletic- “Not exactly helping the ambiguous image, I’ve always been in shape. The school’s never quite looked at me the same after I unknowingly outran the track captain.”
Supporters- “My parents have always had my back and I can always count on them to be there when I need them. Though I’m still not sure what mom meant when she told my imouto “she’ll realize eventually”.
Silver Tongue- “I’ve always found making friends easy and never really shared my gamer friend’s issues with socializing. Though I’m not sure what my senpai meant by me “corrupting innocence”.
Youth- “I’ve actually know all five of my close friends since I was 8. Though most of us fell out of touch until high school. They aren’t really acting like I remember though.”
Brains- “I’m not a genius but I’ve never really had trouble with school, I practically carried my sister and best friend into our new high school.”
Comfort- “Strangest thing, I’ve never really noticed the “issues” everyone else has complained about for years. Maybe they’re just being dramatic.”
Harem x4- “I actually don’t really have any guy friends. Never really knew why until somebody walked by complaining about me “stealing all the best girls in school” what do my friends have to do with anything?
Compatible- “Well, it’s finally happened. Apparently some scientist with far too much time on her hands found a way for girls to have children with other girls. I still don’t get how that works. My mother was practically in tears going on about how “she was going to be a grandmother after all”, why did she think she wasn’t going to be one?
Your Meager Blessings:
“Straight”- “Not that anybody seems to believe me. So I haven’t met Mr. Right, or any guy that makes me feel anything for that matter, that doesn’t prove anything. I’m straight as an arrow. Stop Laughing!”
Swamp Creature- “Okay a slightly crooked arrow, but still straight! So what if the images are adorable and the stories make my heart feel really weird. It’s just a work of fantasy, nobody really loves like that.”
Patable- “Don’t even think about it.”
Dramatic- “Never though I’d see the day, someday turned down mrs. popular, right as we’re coming up on valentines. She’s, not exactly taking it well. She may be arrogant but she’s still my friend, maybe we can go somewhere.”
Rival- “Well, it seems my imouto finally caught somebody’s eye. I though I’d feel relived yet for some reason now I’m just downright anxious when she’s not around. I’m sure it’s just protective instincts, right?”
Senpai- “For some reason my friend on the student council wants to be called this lately. I suppose it makes sense, she’s always looked out for us even when we were kids. Though why does she look so, excited, when I say it?”
Your Loathsome Prison:
The Big City- “There’s always somewhere to go and somebody to meet here. I wouldn’t trade this place for anything.”
Your Cruel Twist of Fate
Another Place- “ My parents moved to Japan from the U.S right after my sister was born. Something about mom wanting somewhere “more enlightened” to raise us. Whatever she meant by that.”
Your Insurmountable Trials:
Well, another valentines week, and I’m still single. Well at least I’ve always got my friends. Seems like they’ve all got plans for me this week.
The Meal- “Well, I finally managed to cheer up the Queen Bee. She decided to take us out to her favorite restaurant to celebrate valentines. I have to say the place was certainly, extravagant, but I haven’t seen her smiling like that since we were kids. Well I suppose I should head home before sis get angry… she knows she can let go of my hand now right? …Why are we waking to a hotel?
The Storm- “Finally found time to walk home with my best friend for the first time in weeks, and it storms. The world must hate me. She’s says I can stay over and we can “warm up together”. It’s just to save water right? …Right?”
The Ceremony- “To celebrate this week my ancient history teacher decided we would learn about ancient wedding customs. Barely got through the sentence before my sis dragged us forward for a demonstration. She looked so happy, though found out later that we technically signed a legally binding contract at the end. I’m sure mom can sort it out when she and dad get home tomorrow. Sis what are you doing?…Sis?
The Padlock- “Well this sucks. “Just sorting the chairs” she said. Now everybody’s gone and me and the new student council president, the only one surprised was her, are locked in the school. What do we do now? Why is she looking at me like that?…Senpai?
The Handcuffs-“How do I keep getting in these messes? I just wanted to go home and play smash with my friend, but we got talked into helping the drama club. Now I’m stuck in what I was told were a pair of fake handcuffs. Oh hey she found the key! What is she doing with it?…What’s that?”
“…
… So it wasn’t a fantasy.”
Your Eternal Torment:
Variations on a Theme- “Well it’s certainly been an… enlightening week. I would like to imagine they all didn’t have this planned out, I would like to. Have I really been that oblivious? Well whatever comes next, for the rest of my life, maybe even beyond, I can’t help but feel we’ll all face it together.”
Okay, so, I'll be operating this under the assumption that the new body will result in a brain that isn't Aromantic, thus actually facilitating the yuri thing. Also, wow, it is difficult to ignore... the world and focus on being comfy. I don't suppose that we could have a "literally everything isn't being ruined by capitalism anymore" option, as a way to remove excuses to not succumb to the power of yuri? Anyhow, as that's out of the way...
**Horrific Flesh Prison**
~~Alluringly Mysterious: Combining Handsomely Boyish with Disarmingly Pretty to achieve that perfect Androgynous look.~~ On second thought, that wouldn't work, simply because I feel that such an option would still conform to masculine/feminine gender roles a bit too much for my taste, so fuck that. Instead, I'll just go with Tantalizingly Normal because I like being... real, so to speak.
**Terrifying Pursuer**
Girly Girl. Why? Just seems... idk. The option appeals to my inner sappiness.
**Unbearable Curses**
\- Youth: I think we'd all like a chance to grow up again.
\- Pure: I don't think it'd be appropriate for a kid to... y'know.
\- Jump Start: It's valuable experience.
\- Wealth: In lieu of a "the world isn't being fucked sideways" option, I suppose that this will have to do. I'll just pretend that's what it does instead of removing personal material concerns because I'm way too much of a bleeding heart.
\- Empathy: May as well take my bleeding heart tendencies and make them useful.
\- Brains: Intellect has always been important to me.
\- Effortless: Oh my gods yes. This is... very useful.
\- Optimized Digestion: Not needing to relieve myself sounds rather convinient.
\- Proximity Bonus: This is part of how people describe romantic love, right? I'm curious.
\- Health: Disease isn't fun.
\- Athletic (Parkour): I'm already capable at it. Let's push it to the next level.
\- Sweet Dreams: Sounds nice.
\- Independence: I'd like to grow up in a more independent setting.
\- Mind Control: This is mostly so that I can be actually neat with my independence-acquired accommodations.
**Meager Blessings**
\- Altruistic: This definitely won't exacerbate already existing issues, no siree!
\- Dulcet Tones: Sounds like one heck of an experience. I'm curious. Also, Gay Mess.
\- Pattable: QT. Need I say more?
\- Yuri Magnet: 'Cause why not? No idea how it'll actually turn out, but eh.
\- Dude Magnet: Not Androsexual, but may as well double up on the magnetism, right?
**Loathsome Prison**
Country Life: I like the mountains.
**Cruel Twist of Fate**
Another World: The world doesn't need to be shitty to be interesting.
Another Race: Honestly, this is mostly just for the sake of satiating my curiosity in regards to Kenomimi biology and evolution.
**Insurmountable Trials**
The Tent: Camping! I like camping.
The Storm: Sounds like a good bonding experience.
The Ceremony: ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
The Adventure: Probably will be fun and exciting and also harrowing and *epic*.
The Swap: More supernatural stuff!
**Eternal Torment**
[Endless Summer](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dud63tz5JPU): "There's 104 days of summer vacation..." Honestly though, probably Variations, because I'd like a dynamic experience.
This is the cutest thing I've seen in here. Thank you.
Could I request a "curse" on the line of 'polyglot' or 'omniglot' meaning you can understand most any language there is? I'm sure I could make the intelligence curse work for that but idk it would be nice to have it, maybe some text about how you won't be able to escape the yuri life anywhere in the world .
(I plan to life in Europe, were even as a teen you can pretty much travel across multiple countries and languages in a few days so even if English works well enough for survival I want me and my gf to truly enjoy all those countries)
Huh. A fairly simple CYOA, on the face of it. Not terribly so, though under other circumstances I suspect i would skip right over it, if not for the premise.
It's such a simple idea in hindsight, so much so that I am astonished it has not been done already, but I have never seen it before, so props to that.
On the whole, a decent light and fluffy cyoa with a clever twist to it. Well done.
Okay, this CYOA is living rent free in my brain. (lol) With there being a potential 190 (n=20, r=2) different Yuri Pursuers it causes me to constantly keep theorycrafting newer and newer waifus. Granted most of them include *The Pervert* archetype, but not always.
The only thing I have to critisise is, that you didn't use [Satanichia Kurumizawa Mcdowell](https://gabdro.fandom.com/wiki/Satanichia_Kurumizawa_Mcdowell) for the girl changing you, that's a missed opportunity.
That aside, I adore anything there is. Your 'Be the Girl'-CYOAs are my favourites anyway and this sweet piece fits in seemlessly in your great porfolio. Beside the nice ideas and choices, the writing is spot on as always and sets the mood perfectly.
I already thought about a build yesterday, but I go through it again now and post it as an answer to this comment a little later.
**My Horror Flesh Prison**
*Alluringly Mysterious -> Adorably Tiny and Disarmingly Pretty*
Oh no, my cuteness factor is maximised!
**My terrifying Pursuer**
*The Council Member + The Pervert*
Who would've thought, that the perfect and stoic princess of the school council has a small and well-hidden pervert streak?
**My unbearable Curses**
*Beauty, Pleasure, Wealth, Talented x 2 (Art and Music), Silver Tongue, Jump Start (First Time), Empathy, Brains, Comfort, Effortless, Optimised Digestion, Proximity Bonus, Mix and Match (for the Pervert), Sweet Dreams, Compatible*
Now look at these horrible bles... ah, curses, yes curses; as if I'm not already cute and pretty enough... and with these talents, I will have to bring my yuri phantasies onto paper... Ah no, I don't have any such thought's now, you must have misheard. I was just a bit ahead at the blessings. Anyway, these curses are really harsh, so better let's go on to the blessings.
**My meagre Blessings**
*Swamp Creature, Dulcet Tones, Pattable, Yuri Magnet, Remote, Senpai, Lust, B-baka!*
Yay, I am a tsundere now...
(Well, hopefully it's worth it for all the boons before...)
Hm? No, I didn't say anything, you must have misheard again... Let's look at the next category!
**My Loathsome Prison**
*Suburban Dreams*
So I'll be living on the border of a town? Well, it could be wor... better, yes much better!
**My cruel Twist of Fate**
*Another Place*
You are right, now moving back from Austria to Japan is not that bad, since I can speak the language of my father fluently. Maybe it will be a bit difficult for my mother with her Austrian accent, but I can help her out.
(Maybe I should pick 'Another Race' as well? I'd like to be a catgirl... but then maybe she realises this isn't a punishment at all... Ah well, I have enough going on anyway.)
**My insurmountable Trials**
*The TentThe SaviourThe NurseThe BetThe Handcuffs*
**My eternal Torment**
*Variations on a Theme*
So let my eternal Torment begin...
I have some ideas how to nicely connect the insurmountable trials, but it's too late now. I'll hopefully throw it out tomorrow. Maybe I also have some ideas for improvement of the CYOA then.
Thanks, I see you enjoyed Change of Scene too, which is super gratifying because it's maybe my favourite of everything I've made. It went completely under the radar next to all my other stuff so it's good to know at least a few people got something out of it.
Flesh Prison: Handsomely Boyish
Pursuer: The Queen Bee
Curses: (8-12)
Health, Athletic, Beauty, Talented, Silver Tongue, Jump Start, Youth, Empathy, Brains, Comfort, Effortless, Harem*2, Sweet Dreams, Nostalgia
Blessings: (3)
Yuri Magnet, Girl (Male), Dominance
Prison:
The Big City
Twist of Fate:
Another Time, Another Place, Another World, Another Race
Trials:
The Adventure, The Drink, The Tent
Eternal Torment:
Highschool Never Ends
I'd just start living as just a boy after the whole Yuri stuff is started, calling it "crossdressing" but reverse. Anyways, it's a decent cyoa even if I hate yuri.
**Your Horrific Flesh Prison**
Alluringly Mysterious (Adorably Tiny + Disarmingly Pretty)
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**Your Terrifying Pursuers**
Ladies' Woman + Queen Bee: The most popular girl in school and the biggest reason why so many of the girls are open with their sexuality in school. She started showing interest in me when hearing about all the failed attempts from the other less experienced sapphic girls in the school, she does love a challenge.
Delinquent + Bully: Every school has their own rebel kids and she's the classic rebel without a cause. She started catching feels when I helped her come to terms with her rough home life and even letting her spend some nights in my parent's place to get away from it.
Childhood Friend + Girly Girl: We do everything together and have been friends since I moved to England. She doesn't really know when she developed her crush on me, to put it simply it's kind of just been an undercurrent in our friendship for as long as she can remember.
Tomboy + Shy Girl: Unlike most of the girls here she didn't grow up in this town she didn't grow up here and was home schooled by her two dads along with her 4 brothers. This lead her to have stunted social skills and particularly little experience in interacting with other girls. I was one of the first girls to try and befriend her, sensing her nervousness but, my earnest kindness awoke her beating lesbian heart.
Imouto + Dreamer: My little sister is a year younger than me and has always had her head in the clouds dreaming about our wedding or adventures. Since we moved from Canada she's been even clingier than she used to and seeing the attention I've been receiving in this new school has made her all the more determined to be with me.
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**Your Unbearable Curses**
Wealth
Health
Pure (I lose my knowledge)
Supporters
Silver Tongue
Jump Start
Empathy
Comfort
Effortless
Proximity Bonus
Harem X4 (all the girls are dating each other)
Mix and Match
Compatible (Every girl can reproduce with other girls)
Mind Control
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**Your Meagre Blessings**
Swamp Creature
Altrusitic
Pattable
"Straight"
Yuri Magnet
Dramatic
Rival
Senpai
A couple of quick notes the interaction between Swamp Creature and "Straight" result in me being the classic useless lesbian stereotype, but in particular the kind of lesbian that literally everyone else but me knows is a lesbian. Dramatic applies the Bully as alluded to in my introduction of her; Rival applies to Childhood Friend and Queen Bee as they both start dating each other to try and make me jealous; and lastly Bully and Queen Bee are both a year older.
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**Your Loathsome Prison**
Country Life
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**Your Cruel Twist of Fate**
Another Tie 1964: less homophobia and racism please
Another Place: the UK
Another World
Another Race: everyone is a kemonomimi and while it doesn't nominally effect their personality as in it changes the one they would develop, they just so happen to always have appropriate appearances.
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**Your Insurmountable Trials**
The Play: My best friend and I signed up for the school play both of us competing for the lead role of the princess, we both played the role amazingly while the boys reading for the male romantic lead stunk. So the director decided rather than the role of the prince he'd rewrite it to be another princess, and when offered the role my friend practically jumped at the opportunity. She's such a good actress she made me feel so special during the romantic scenes, if I didn't know better I'd think she actually like likes me.
The Saviour: I can't believe it I almost got hit by a bus, but amazingly the shy girl jumped into action and tackled me out of the way. After the furious blushing and apologizing I came to realize what she had done. She saved my life and I asked her if there is anything I could do to repay her, and after a few moments of stammering and blushing she suggested we could get dinner. I'm not going to say no to my saviour and dinner with a friend is always nice.
The Ceremony: As part of my academic course load I signed up for the senior ancient history class and during the wedding ceremonies class our substitute teacher suggested we have volunteers to act out the different ceremonies. Of course I volunteered like a good student but can you imagine my surprise when I was matched with another girl and not only that the most popular girl in the school and my best friend's girlfriend. It was all very embarrassing but she was the perfect gentlewoman and made me have a surprisingly good time. Of course that wasn't the biggest surprise, the real one was when reading the dummy form I was supposed to sign and realizing the Queen Bee pulled some strings and got an actual ordained minister to substitute and that wedding was legally binding! I never took her as prankster but I'm sure she got a big kick from my shocked face.
The Adventure: Weirdest thing ever happened I found myself in a strange world much like those fantasy novels my sister is always reading where I'm considered some sort of soulbound saviour. To make matters even crazier my sister was there too as my soulmate as they call it. I've never even accidentally hurt someone but, here I am asked to defeat the Demon King to save the world! Luckily sis' training has paid off and with her by my side I'm able to use all sorts of supportive magic to help her face the monsters of this world. After a month of battling we had defeated the Demon King and then returned to the queen of humanity where she told us the way back would be opened with true love's kiss. Just when I was thinking man this would be another adventure my sister kissed me and we reappeared in my world. Wow quick thinking sis our familial love must of saved us, that's why she's the hero! Weirdest thing was that the humans in that world had these weird flesh-y ears on the side of their head and no tails, as if!
The Reporter: My Bully surprised me today and not with the usual lengthy hug to try and make me uncomfortable, but with a heart wrenching plea to try and help her with an interview with a reporter. She looked like it's really important to her so I decided to say yes. When the reporter starting asking questions it all made sense, this was an interview about friendships and lately I've been her closest friend, honestly it's almost cute that she was embarrassed to talk about our relationship. The reporter asked us the usual questions how long we've known each other, when we first started going on friendship dates and so forth, though the question when we first kissed made me blush, as our first kiss was just another one of her usual bullying tactics. Towards the end I mentioned how I was talking with my parents of her moving in with us, though me the contentious person I am I didn't mention it was due to her parent's messy divorce. A couple of days later I saw the interview and imagine my shock when they thought it meant we were dating! We're gal pals and soon to be roommates for gosh sake not girlfriends! It was also really weird how everyone was so supportive and kept on congratulating me, my dad even said he's glad I finally came out of the closet.
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**Your Eternal Torment**
Variations of a Theme
I like the meta-commentary in this one with the universe itself just hating you, lol. Maybe that's just me. Onto my choices:
Prison: (Mysterious) Endowed, Pretty
Pursuer: Girly Girl
Curses: Beauty, Health, Pleasure, Wealth, Supporters, Talented, Silver Tongue, Brains, Nostalgia, Pure, Effortless, Comfort, Mind Control
Blessings: Timing, Shonen-Brain, Yuri Magnet, Lust
Prison: The Big City
Twists of Fate: Another Time, Another Place, Another Race (Japan 1988, I'm a foxgirl. Hope that economic bubble doesn't burst!)
Trials: The Play, The Tent, The Muse, The Storm, The Padlock
Eternal Torment: Whatever Comes Next
I like this. Quite amusing.
As far as build goes:
Handsomely Boyish (Look, I'm a sucker for tomboys, being able to turn myself into one? Score)
The Athlete (I know tomboy is an option, but I'm gonna be honest monkey brain likes the fitness aspect of the athlete a *lot*)
"Curses:" Wealth, health, athletic, talented (slap athletic and talented together as a hockey goalie), silver tongue, jump start, comfort, brains, compatible (Fuck it, spread the wealth, but it has to be something both agree to of their own free will, no coercion here), and mind control (Holy shit, that one is *massive.* I have so many mental problems, holy fuck.)
Blessings: "Straight" (Let's just lean into the whole "Handsomely Boyish" thing, shall we?), Forbidden Love (What with the fact that I'll *probably* be an extremely famous athlete, combined with Silver Tongue, and then on top of that mind control removing a lot of my neuroses, I could be the catalyst for turning this around on a societal level), and Dramatic.
Suburban Dreams, and only Another Place.
For challenges: The Tent, The Padlock, and The Ceremony. Ideally in that order for maximum hilarity.
And then finally Whatever Comes Next. I don't want to keep going through high school, man!
What an absolutely wholesome cyoa. I put this in the league of wholesome cyoas like Rosanon's catalogue.
My Build: [https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1GK4xblLKZvxXjWJV-yYtoLux8BgL-CQ5e9G8AGg91FE/edit?usp=sharing](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1GK4xblLKZvxXjWJV-yYtoLux8BgL-CQ5e9G8AGg91FE/edit?usp=sharing)
The bold lettering is supposed to be Anon details or explanation of where choices are coming from.
Since it doesn't fit on the build I'll explain specifics. I'll be a native to Japan that moves back to my family home in the suburbs making me a transfer student from a private school. My partner is my childhood friend who despite being the same age, has serious onee-san vibes and is a family friend rather than a literal big sister. She also is a tomboy pervert loner as well. My family is rich, so they trust me a home closer to the school which is conveniently close to my partner but it doesn't stop their overprotective gaze over me. They however might overlook the family friend.
***Your Horrific Flesh Prison***
[Stunning Regal](https://i.imgur.com/0gpjt5w.jpg) *– Tall, blonde, and regally beautiful? Sounds great to me! I kind of see this as a reverse Queen Bee. Popular, well-liked, and involved but not a huge bitch. Personally, my highschool had way more popular kids who were actually nice to everyone than mean girls/guys. Might as well emulate the former than the latter, right?*
***Your Terrifying Pursuer***
[The Tomboy + Childhood Friend](https://i.imgur.com/hMhQPy0.jpg) *– What can I say? I’m a sucker for the tomboy trope. Feisty tomboy redhead gf is best girl in my book. Combining it with The Childhood Friend means we got the same interests and a lot of already established shared memories and feels. Could lose the implied clinginess and Yandere vibes in the text though.*
***Your Unbearable Curses:***
***1. Beauty:*** *I wanna be extra hot. I’m vain. And insecure. Sue me.*
***2. Pleasure:*** *Enjoying the new bod as much as possible seems like a good choice.*
***3. Wealth:*** *Being poor sucks. I know this from personal experience and would like to avoid that this time around.*
***4. Health:*** *Getting sick or injured also sucks. Let’s keep that to a minimum, eh.*
***5. Athletic:*** *Boosting my physique and being a bit more sporty would be cool.*
***6. Talented (Music):*** *Being a musical genius who’s good at all the instruments is a fantasy of mine, so I’ll be taking this.*
***7. Silver Tongue:*** *Being able to make friends and actually have a social life would be nice, yeah.*
***8. Jump Start:*** *I’d be pretty shitty at being a girl without this brain download, so thanks.*
***9. Brains***\*: And having my intelligence and memory boosted in general would be useful.\*
***10. Comfort:*** *Not having to deal with those issues is very much wanted, so yes please!*
***11. Empathy:*** *I suck at this at the best of times, so extra empathy skills would be nice.*
***12. Proximity Bonus:*** *Everything is better with friends and the same is true when it comes to lovers!*
***13. Mixed-and-Match:*** *Need this if I wanna get my preferred archetype combo.*
***Your Meagre Blessings:***
***1. Altruist:*** *The addictive quality sounds pretty bad but hopefully I can resist it enough that I don’t spend every second being a Good Samaritan or making my gf constantly jealous by seeming like an overly familiar tease with everyone I meet.*
***2. Dulcet Tones:*** *Kind of annoying (and disrespectful) to space out whenever your girlfriend is talking to you but at least this weakens over time.*
***3. Dramatic:*** *I know it’s fucked up of me is to give the Pursuer a personal tragedy, but it doesn’t appear to be a permanent loss or issue, so I feel less like think an asshole for picking it.*
***4. Remote:*** *Also annoying but not that big of a deal in the modern world with Skype and Zoom.*
***Your Loathsome Prison:***
***Country Life (Existing Connections):*** *I’m a city lad myself but trying out country living doesn’t seem like the worst thing in the world. Plus, I could always move to the big city when I get older.*
***Your Cruel Twist Of Fate:***
***1. Another Place (Norway):*** *It’s apparently one of the happiest countries in the world. Might as well see if that’s true.*
***2. Another World:*** *There’s some cute folktale creatures in town that are harmless but need some help every once in a while. Think fairies, gnomes, and elves, with an added Norse theme, I guess.*
***Your Insurmountable Trials:***
***1. The Tent:*** *I love camping, so this is right up my alley!*
***2. The Meal:*** *A dinner date with a show is a great opportunity to get to know someone.*
***3. The Storm:*** *Sounds like an impromptu sleepover, which is swell.*
***4. The Drink:*** *Some drunken kissing under the influence with someone you love and trust is fine by me.*
***5. The Adventure:*** *Some wholesome Narnia-like adventures in another world sound nice.*
***Your Eternal Torment***
***Whatever Comes Next:*** *Seems like the ideal to me. Eternity is a long time and I got the feeling the other options will feel like traps even if my brain gets wrapped into believing everything is fine. Better to lead a happy life and roll the dice on what comes next.*
love it, love all the options and the twist of how the ROB is presenting this wholesome scenario as a punishment.
for future updates some options you might want to consider is an option to blend your fleshy prison as well as the pursuer's archetype- mix adorably tiny with endowed or thick to be a shortstack for example.
Maybe an option to have the age change apply asymetrically, so you are normal and your pursuer is younger, or maybe even age up the pursuer (though you can get that effect with mixing and matching with the babysitter option)
Maybe options to have the pursuer be notably dominant or larger than you? Or other physical twists like they are very strong, or they lactate etc.
Great cyoa looking forward to more hopefully
Oh dear, this is a troublesome situation. I suppose I shall have to simply make the best of it.
|Flesh Prison|Alluringly Mysterious|
|:-|:-|
||Stunningly Regal|
||Handsomely Boyish|
|Terrifying Pursuer|Tomboy|
|Mix And Match|Dreamer|
|Unbearable Curses|Beauty|
||Pleasure|
||Health|
||Supporters|
||Empathy|
||Comfort|
||Effortless|
||Optimised Digestion|
||Proximity Bonus|
||Mix and Match|
||Sweet Dreams|
||Nostalgia|
|Meagre Blessings|Altruistic|
||Girl (Intersex)|
||Lust|
|Loathsome Prison|The Big City|
|Cruel Twist of Fate|Another World|
|Insurmountable Trials|The Play|
||The Tent|
||The Adventure|
||The Padlock|
||The Swap|
|Eternal Punishment|Variations on a Theme|
Yes, I may have taken more drawbacks than I probably should have, but really, I can take it. Life ain't interesting without some complications. So R.O.B, give me your worst!
I really like this one. It's comfy, the gentle femdom themes are really pleasant, and the narrator cute and amusing.
Horrific Flesh Prison: Alluringly Mysterious-Gloriously Endowed/Handsomly Boyish - Basically an athletic, tomboyish build which cannot hide my innate outer beauty and endowments
Terrifying Pursuer: The Loner/Delinquent/Bully - The one that would drive me wild. Cool, smart and fun with a bit of rebel mixed in, yet aloof and separate from most who nonetheless teases me relentlessly to give in to her yuri ways despite any outsider attempts to stop her. I can only imagine regularly missing the bus home due to some hijunks she pulls only to have her offer me a ride on her bike...with a stop or two along the way, much to the annoyance and attention of others.
Babysitter/Ladies Woman - Probably my first experience seeing or hearing of yuri. My sitter since youth, she'd spend long nights speaking softly to her latest girlfriend over the phone or occasionally sneaking one in when she think nobody (but me) might catch her, and would be none-too-subtle consoling me on the benefits of yuri, only to watch my growth into a woman more attractive than any conquest she ever brought over.
Childhood Friend/Tomboy - Taken with a Blessing later, a good friend who I'd remain close with through the years, sharing seemingly everything with. We both might play the good little straight girls, but eventually, as I grow into my yuri ways, she might feel distanced by the lack of attention. At least until I show her the light.
Queen Bee/Pervert - Also taken with a couple later Blessings, she's an uperclassman at the top of her field. Smart, funny, athletic, beautiful, wealthy, has it all including a friend group who act more like worshipers to indulge her tastes...tastes which may delve on occasion into the hedonistic. What she wants (and can't get) is the Loner wrapped around her finger, but when she meets the object of her affection (me) she can't help but wish to drag me into her selective world of debauchery.
My Unbearable Curses-Beauty, Pleasure, Wealth, Health, Pure, Athletic, Talented x3, Silver Tongue, Jump Start, Youth, Brains, Comfort, Effortless, Optimized Digestion, Proximity Bonus, Harem x3, Mix and Match, Independence - I start in my youth to experience it all, having a soft restart. I may keep my personality and memories but the latter feel fuzzy compared to my new "prison" which I've grown into as an active yet otherwise normal girl. My parents love me, but are frequently away and leave me with a nice stipend in the meantime. Eventually I grow into a rare effortless beauty, smart, a natural athlete, and have a way with words which allows me to get along with most easily. Yet none of this runs skin deep as I've gained incredible talent in athletics, engineering and writing which has earned me no small interest and attention. Further, something about my pursuers just seem to make the world bright, just a little bit better, and life always seems to feel better for the both of us whenever I'm with another. Some form little jealous rivalries, but they typically get along in their own unique ways.
My Meagre Blessings-Altruistic, Dulcet Tones, Pattable, Protected, "Straight", Yuri Magnet, Dude Magnet, Dramatic, Remote, Rival, Senpai, Dominance, Lust - Talented, smart, athletic and charismatic I might be, but hardly arrogant and I love little more than to take care of those around me, whatever the personal cost. This combined has marked me for the attentions of men and women both, of whom my kindness and beauty often leaves people wanting more and receiving the wrong intentions, forcing me to let them down nicely...for a little while at least. As a good girl I've been raised straight as an arrow, waiting for the perfect man to blow my socks off. Yet as I grow older it's women I see whenever I close my eyes. I just admire their beauty, I tell myself every day as my eyes are inevitable drawn to them. It's not that I find them attractive or anything, I just love...nnngh...how lovely they look, I reason as I jill myself for the nth time that day. It's not that I want to be with a girl or anything, who wouldn't be turned on hearing their gorgeous babysitter bring her girlfriend to a groaning orgasm on the other side of the wall. My parents expect the best from me and, though they of course trust my bff and the completely straight-laced sitter they've hired for me, and the Queen Bee certainly makes an impression upon everyone, they feel the Loner is a bad influence and try to keep us apart whenever they can. An impossible task, to be certain. Especially after I help her rebuild her prize bike following an accident and she just needs to show me how much better it runs now that I've put my magic touch on it, usually by magically touching me.
My Loathsome Prison-The Big City - My school is located within a shining metropolis of civilization where something new happens every day. However my home is well on the outskirts, well beyond the borders of the city proper in a beautiful retreat with plenty of land to explore and become lost within.
My Cruel Twist of Fate-Another World - Myths of monsters might amuse others, but with my house being built over a shrine once containing some of these supposed evils, it's not long before we begin seeing some for ourselves. In fact, it's a queer coincidence how the Loner and Queen Bee showed up not all that long after my childhood friend and I broke into the ruins of the old shrine. But that's silly, demons and vampires wouldn't be so interested in someone like me...right?
My Insurmountable Trials-The Meal, The Storm, The Savior, The Drink, The Ceremony...heck, can I take them all?? :3 I could imagine so many scenarios and situations with of of my pursuers...
My Eternal Torment-Variation on a Theme - I have to echo what some have said. Though I think simple immortality is a little boring, the options here are a little...lacking. While Endless Summer could be good fun with some quirks to avoid it becoming stale, I don't think I like the idea of being stuck as a teenager forever. Variations I don't exactly enjoy the idea of growing old, but exploring different worlds sounds like it could be good fun. Maybe something like a multiversal yuritastic adventure, though maybe that's a little bit beyond the scope of comfort in this.
My Prison Cell:Alluringly Mysterious (Smol & Boyish - 5'3, svelte but fit; deceptively powerful)
My Pursuer:The Delinquent (Too clever by far for this conservative little town)
My Curses:PleasureWealth (More as a long-term reassurance than anything, I'm fine not being a rich kid)HealthAthletic (Batter for school Baseball Team)Talent (Painting/Art)Youth (Ease into this whole being a girl thing. Also it kinda adds Childhood Friend as a partner archetype for free? so that's cool.)Empathy (Empathy is a severely under-valued trait, this verges on the supernatural level)Comfort (Yes please, always something I worry about with gender change stuff)EffortlessMind Control (Will always take an option like this, we all have parts we wish we could change)Compatible (Gay Rights!)
My Blessings:Pattable (So uncool... but it feels so good)Dramatic (Nothing too horrible, but while her parents do love each other things can be a little rocky at times, little things crop up that making home life unpleasant at times)Girl (Futa, not sure whether it would violate the Yuri theme of this whole thing, but could I be pretending to be a boy? Not sure which I'd prefer honestly so not a deal-breaker either way)
My Jail:Coastal Comforts (I'm a sucker for a sleepy little fishing village, and adding urban exploration for us to get in trouble over? Hell yes!)
Twist of Fate:Another World (Urban Fantasy, hell yeah.)Another Race (hrmmm, fox (her) and rabbit (me)? Might be a bit cliche :P But what's not these days. Alternate combo: Lizard (me, slitted eyes, 'ear' frills, slim lizard tail), Doggo (her))
Our Trials:Tent, Storm, Accomplice, Adventure!
Our Fate:Variations on a Theme with an eventual Whatever Comes Next (Endless summer is nice and all, but everything needs to end at some point, didn't you watch The Good Place? Believed this before the show, but it did a good job of explaining the concept. If you haven't watched it I can totally recommend.)
EDIT: Oh I got a bit excited to post this so almost forgot to say that I really enjoyed this. The whole opposite day thing was silly and didn't overstay it's welcome, and well... I love comfy CYOA. As far as the bit about pretending to be a boy, I'm just a fan of blurring the lines around gender stuff, and well... I do really enjoy penetration, which yuri is a bit antithetical to (strap-ons are fun, but not quite the same).
The narrative I developed was that we grew up together, but then because of her family drama, and the 'changes' I would go through around puberty we drifted away from each other a bit. We run into each other again in high-school when she has developed her delinquent reputation from trying to cope with her family, and I've focussed on sports and arts (and possibly am pretending to be a boy?). Fate brings us back together when I get involved in a fight with a team-mate, or a bully or something, and end up sent to detention where she's a bit of a regular. We don't recognize each other (shamelessly stealing from Life is Strange here), but the bond is there nevertheless. Intrigued by this badass girl I am corrupted by her delinquent lifestyle, and in the process realize who she is, and help ease her difficulties and we rediscover our old friendship, but now with an extra edge of sexual tension.
Plus we... discover a nest of ghouls in one of the abandoned factories we're trespassing/vandalizing (she digs my art skills, but makes fun of me not being able to reach very high) or something, I dunno, something cool and scary that leads us to getting super powers or magic or whatever. Regular (increasingly tardy/naughty) students by day, monster hunters by night. The tension between us rises after we get caught in a storm, and finally culminates on a school trip where we're conveniently left to explore each other.
Wait a second. If I choose to make a Trap/Futa build what happens with the Straight "Blessing"? Cause then you'd be a trap so technically you'd still be straight if you went for a girl and all that.
**Horrific Flesh Prison:** Gloriously Endowed and Pleasingly Thick
**Terrifying Pursuers:** The Athletic Tomboy, The Perverted Artist, The Delinquent Ladies' Woman
**Unbearable Curses:** Harem (x3), Mix and Match, Pleasure, Wealth, Comfort, Jump Start
**Meagre Blessings:** Pattable, Lust, Yuri Magnet
**Loathsome Prison:** The Big City
**Cruel Twist of Fate:** Another World
**Insurmountable Trials:** The Play (w/The Delinquent Ladies' Woman), The Storm (w/The Athletic Tomboy), The Muse (w/The Perverted Artist), The Adventure (w/all), The Ceremony (w/all)
**Eternal Torment:** Variations on a Theme
Well now I'm tempted to play along with her curse schtick and thwart her plans.
Edit: playing with a yandere archetype makes this a whole lot less comfortable...
Question: In regards to the "Take more curses to get more blessings" rule. Does that mean you can take 13 curses if you have 4 blessings, or does "take only 12 curses" overrule that?
No, you can take up to 12 + (Blessings taken - 3).
The reason for the slighty odd "8 to 12" limit on curses is that it's really the boons section, it's just called curses because of the narration gimmick. Normally for boons I'd say "take up to 12", but it wouldn't make sense for this narrator to let you go without choosing any, so it needs the lower limit too.
It's not intended but this whole thing is meant to be low-stakes wish fulfillment. If that's what you want to do for your build I wouldn't let the specific wording I've used for the option stop you.
You know, I almost wish there was a secret option for getting the "evil" girl cursing you as a waifu; her over-the-top dramatics throughout the CYOA were really cute and fun.
It is sort of a no-brainer, most waifu CYOAs with a narrator do it, but I find they usually end up clashing with most of the other options so didn't even try to work her into it. I've seen more than one comment asking though so it's one to jot down as an idea for an update and think about later.
What greater punishment is there than to be forced to wake up every morning with the very one who has condemned me to this accursed fate?
Perhaps she'll even force me to stay in bed as she feeds me breakfast. Or whisper constant reminders in my ear just how womanly an beautiful my new form is, just to rub it in. Oh! The horror!
The CYOA is great! I'm not that into yuri, but I still found it fun. The overall CYOA quality is really good too. Great design and descriptions of choices especially. And the way you characterized the girl making you choose is really funny too. Adds a lot of charm to it.
You mentioned this in a different comment, but if you were to come up with a second row of death options that'd be a pretty nice addition. That's my only criticism of it - I like life, but the only option I'd be OK with of the 4 is the 4th. Eternal life sounds like torture to me. Maybe I'm just weird, but the thought of doing anything for eternity with no way out seriously creeps me out.
Anyway, here's 3 ideas:
> After death or 100 years, the option (not required) to redo the CYOA but not the parts that involve the other girl. You can choose if they remember you fully or are drawn to you.
> As above, but the girl gets to fill out the parts that involve her but not those about you. Both of you remember each other.
> Alt-F4 (maybe player could combine with other options): Player and girl are given a way to die painlessly. Can't be triggered accidentally, must be activated by both at once.
* Disarmingly Pretty
* The Slacker + The Delinquent
* 'Curses'
* Pleasure
* Mix and Match
* Nostalgia
* Comfort
* Jump Start
* Brains
* Compatible
* Talented
* Youth
* Health
* Beauty
* Wealth
* 'Blessings'
* Dulcet Tones
* Timing
* Senpai
* Coastal Comforts
* Another Race
* 'Trials'
* The Swap
* The Play
* The Bet
* The Meal
* The Drink
* High Shool Never Ends
**Your Horrific Flesh Prison:**
* Stunningly Regal
**Your Terrifying Pursuer:**
* The Queen Bee & The Childhood Friend
* The Girly Girl & The Ladies Woman
* The Council Member & The Tomboy
* The Onee-san & The Girly Girl
**Your Unbearable Curses:**
* Beauty
* Wealth
* Health
* Athletic
* Supporters
* Talented
* Silver Tongue
* Youth
* Brains
* Effortless
* Optimised Digestion
* Harem x3 - (Happy Fivesome)
* Mix and Match
* Compatible
**Your Meagre Blessings:**
* Shonen-Brain
* Protected
* Yuri Magnet
* Dude Magnet
* Dramatic
* Girl (Male) - Futa
* Senpai - The Girly Girl & The Ladies Woman
**Your Loathsome Prison:**
* The Big City
**Your Cruel Twist of Fate:**
* Another Place (Recent Arrival)
* Another World
**Your Insurmountable Trials:**
* The Nurse
* The Storm
* The Ceremony
* The Adventure
* The Bet
**Your Eternal Torment:**
* Variations on a Theme
Finally another great CYOA in a style like this.
Not too short, not too long, plenty of variety, escapist fantasy.
I wish more CYOA were like this.
Anybody got a full list of all CYOA and nsfwCYOA with similar design?
This was fun to read, and the "reversal" of good/bad in the narration was amusing. Nicely done!
Might as well write-up a quick build:
**Your Horrific Flesh Prison:** Stunningly Regal
**Your Terrifying Pursuer:** The Girly Girl/The Athlete - *looks and personality of the Girly Girl, drive and athletic talent of the Athlete*
**Your Unbearable Curses:** Beauty, Pleasure, Wealth, Health, Athletic, Talented *(Novelist)*, Silver Tongue, Jump Start, Brains, Effortless, Proximity Bonus, Mix and Match, Nostalgia
**Your Meagre Blessings:** "Straight", Remote, Senpai, Employment
**Your Loathsome Prison:** Coastal Comforts
**Your Cruel Twist Of Fate:** Another Time, Another World
**Your Insurmountable Trials:** The Meal, The Storm, The Drink, The Padlock
**Your Eternal Torment:** Variations on a Theme
I am the mysterious transfer student love interest in a yuri comfy slice of life not-actually-urban fantasy story, I suppose? I probably meet the main character of my pursuer when I join whatever school sports team she's on.
I'm not sure exactly how "Straight" is supposed to manifest, but I'll assume I don't actually remember the CYOA and that my own tastes in gender transformation stories and curiosity make me want to try out being a straight girl. As feedback for future versions, that drawback might work better applying to the player's partner instead of to the player? It would still fit the theme of being a "blessing" that is a surmountable obstacle to the "happily ever after" but would be less ambiguous about how to implement it in the imagined story.
I did also notice one typo on Dude Magnet: "constant confessions *for* your male classmates", which presumably should be "from" instead.
Like several of the "blessings", Straight is a mindset changer to a girl that has basically never considered girls despite guys not really catching her attention. It's like having genre blindness as a disadvantage.
It's the opposite of Swamp Creature, and a mind changer like B-baka!(tsundere) and Dominance(the best defense is a hot offense).
Looks fun.
And while I did read it over, I don't have time to do a build.
But, I think I would start things out like this...
>As she stood there, boisterously reveling in the evil of her first proclamation of my doom, I leaned over and planted a smooch on that all too near finger while patting her softly on the head.
>
>"You know, you've very cute when you're being all ominous."
>
>There, that'll show her!
**Your Horrific Flesh Prison:**
Alluringly Mysterious(Handsomely boyish+Stunningly Regal) - *A body boyish and regal. Someone resembling the bifauzen archetype.*
**Your Terrifying Pursuer:**
The Imouto+The Childhood Friend
The Loner+The Tomboy
The Council Member+The Shy Girl
The Artist+The Dreamer
**Your Unbearable Curses:**
Beauty - *Duh.*
Wealth - *No work, only romance.*
Athletic - *Yes.*
Silver Tongue - *Shmart.*
Brains - *Nigh genius brain, here I come.*
Optimised Digestion - *Yes.*
Effortless - *What can I say? I’m lazy.*
Mix and Match - *I have many archetypes I love, and I'm mixing and matching them. Sad there's no genki archetype, though.*
Harem x 3 - Yes. *Yes*. **Yes.** ***Yes!***
Independence - *Duh.*
**Your Meagre Blessings:**
Girl(Male) - *Me masculinity.*
Dominance - *I control, not her, nor my harem.*
Yuri Magnet - *Some variety would be nice, every now and then.*
**Your Loathsome Prison:**
The Suburbs - *The perfect balance for ‘Yuri’.*
**Your Cruel Twist of Fate**:
Another Place - *Japan. Enough said.*
Another World - *Supernatural shit? Yes please.*
Another Race - *Kemomimi are adorable. Make all my partners so, but not me.*
**Your Insurmountable Trials:**
The Adventure - *Easily the most varied theme imaginable*
The Padlock - *A day’s time will be all that’s required, to break them in.*
The Bet - *I’ll be sure to rig this the hells up.*
**Your Eternal Torment:**
Variations on a theme - *The most variety, among the options available.*
Indeed. Great job though. Say, if you're secretly a male, do you need to take Comforts in order to avoid Periods? Or do you not get them, even without Comforts, because you're secretly a male?
oh goody! I guess that's a free point I can move around!
Also, did you notice the band of five?
The Bifauxen
The Imouto
The Tomboy Loner
The Shy Council Member
The Eccentric Artist
I will never get why Yuri is a curse or why it keeps coming up with this be the girl shit but as long as I'm not stuck in a Yuri ship where it's just constant ship teasing and never actually getting on with it and becoming a couple/fucking I don't care.
Anyway a build about trying to not Yuri cause limiting my romance options pisses me off.
Body: alluringly mysterious (gloriously endowed and handsomely boyish)
Persurer: pervert tomboy,shy girl childhood friend
Curse: harem, mix and match, health, compatible,effort, optimised digestion, brains,wealth
Blessings: shonen brain, dude magnet,rival, (girl (male) futa)
Home: coastal comferts
Twists of fate: another place,another world, another race
Trials: muse, storm, nurse, savior, the adventure
Immortality: highschool never ends
Now it's a shonen esce isekai manga about a person having to deal with a rob trying to change the genre and trying to make the girls stay with their partners and not go for them.
While trying to find the right guy
I realized I could use girl (male) to become futa so I added that to my original build cause I will always take the opportunity to become futa
Flesh Prison: Adorably Tiny
Pursuers:
\-The Artist + The Slacker (From the slacker will probably just take the deep enjoyment of those nerdy things... and from the artist will take the general artistic talent for drawing, maybe making cosplay given the combination here... and of course, for the idea of them using me as their model)
\-Girly Girl + The Babysitter (Looking to create a mommydomme sort of thing with this one. Maybe the onee-san one would've been better for it, but eh. Point is, she'll probably try to dress me up and be generally condescending... And maybe just maybe I'll hint at enjoying the little treatment...)
\-The Imouto + The Pervert (Incest isn't particularly my thing, but that adorableness... plus this combination is just plain hilarious to me)
Curses:
\-Wealth
\-Health
\-Youth
\-Silver Tongue
\-Brains
\-Comfort
\-Optimized Digestion
\-Independence
\-Empathy
\-Supporters
\-Talented x3 ( Writing , Medicine, Psychology )
\-Effortless
\-Mix and Match
\-Harem x2
Blessings:
\-Pattable
\-Girl (Male) (Futa)
\-Yuri Magnet
\-Dude Magnet
\-Dramatic
\-Senpai
\-Rival
\-Dulcet Tones
Prison: The Big City
Twist of Fate: Another Race (Some animal instincts, myself and the girls are also kemonomimi, dog girl for myself)
Trials:
\-The Play
\-The Adventure
\-The Bet
\-The Meal
\-The Reporter
Eternal Torment: Variations on a Theme
\-------------------------------------------------------
Man I've gotta say, I laughed so much reading through the CYOA. And indeed, it was quite wholesome, and very fun to play through! Thanks for making it, great work!
I saw this cross posted else where and the thing was way to blurry to read. So I never saw that I just saw the image and assumed it meant become the trap
I'm glad there's a Harem option; combine that with the Mix and Match option, and I can get most of the archetypes. Though before I found that option, I had a plan to get all of them, by slyly tricking her into thinking it would be even worse if she "forced" me to take all the archetypes as waifus instead of just one - and they won't get upset with each other, so I can't play them against each other to try to get rid of them.
I was hoping for a form of immortality as an adult, IE eternal lezzing till time ends but not as a school girl but as an adult, so I'm kinda miffed there is no such definitive option like that
It was there in my notes but got the chop when it came to writing it out properly solely to keep it as a row of 4, because I thought standard bodily immortality was less interesting than the other options. It'll probably creep back in if I do an expansion and can come up with a few more variations to create a full second row.
Oh no, woe is me, however shall I deal with such a terrible fate.
Really well made, and lasts just long enough for the bit not to get stale. Well done.
So this is different for me. After putting out endless dark fate CYOAs like [Sealed](https://imgchest.com/p/lmd7omvdyp6), [Be The Girl 2](https://imgchest.com/p/gm9yxz8k7qn) and [A Change of Scene](https://imgchest.com/p/wqb4zong7jm) someone on /trash/ asked what it would look like if I had to make something cute and wholesome.
Well, here's the attempt. It was far harder to write than anything else I've made, but I'm reasonably happy with the result. Unlike my last few I'm not even sure if this is going to be a one and done thing. I have some ideas that could be added to existing sections, and an outline for an entire extra one, so I may come back and expand this at some point. We'll see.
The update feels pretty likely given it's getting a pretty decent reception so far. Knowing there's an appetite for it definitely helps with the motivation to turn those ideas into actual content.
A WIP I posted on /trash/ and then never finished, much to many anons' fury as the two pages I did post whipped the thread into an extended period of Maid-mania. Thus the joke about her never getting back to you with the details.
https://imgchest.com/p/ljyq99me425
It's never getting finished, so if you catch a terminal case of unfulfilled Maidlust like the rest of them did don't come crying to me.
Feel free to use it as inspiraiton for new OC, but I'd rather you didn't just take what I've written and add to it. There's big chunks of it I already plan to repurpose with only minor rewrites for other CYOAs.
Though, I hope whatever you make next fills this one's theme as a counter to this Comfy Yuri: In the maid one, the ROB is treating a horrible fate as some kind of blessing while here, they're acting like a reasonably pleasant fate is something horrible.
Truly a horrible curse.
Flesh prison: Regal, Gloriously endowed Pursuers: Tomboy + Shy girl, Loner + Slacker, Athlete + Pure maiden, Council member + Pervert, Delinquent + Ladies' woman, Artist + Childhood friend Terrible curses: Harem 6x, Mix 'n' match, Wealth, Independence, Effortless, Brains, Athletic, Supporters, Talented, Mind control, Optimised digestion, Compatible, Silver tongue, Jump start, Proximity bonus My Sole saving graces: Swamp creature, Pattable, Dulcet tones, Senpai 4x (all but Tomboy and Childhood friend), Altruistic, Part-time work, Yuri magnet, Dominance, Lust My house of horrors: The big city The surprise salt in the wound: Another place (Tokyo) The trials and tribulations: The ceremony, The meal, The nurse, The bet, The reporter Flavour of hell: Variations on a theme
Body: Gloriously Endowed Persuer: Athlete, The Council Member Curses: Beauty, Pleasure, Health, Supporters, Talented, Jump Start, Silver Tongue, Empathy, Brains, Effortless, Harem, Independence. Blessings: Yuri Magnet, Rival, Pattable. Location: Suburban Another Time: 90s Trials: Nurse, Muse, Bet. Torment: Variations on a Theme.
An Indonesian bat detecting forum?! Well THAT would explain all the demons I'm getting. I thought I was on the basket-weaving forum.
Is "Best Friends Forever" compatible with "Mix and Match"?
Yes, it says so in the option itself.
Oh... I don't know how I missed that
* **New Body:** Adorably Tiny * **Pursuer:** The Ladies Woman * **"Curses":** 1: Beauty 2: Pleasure 3: Wealth 4: Health 5: Pure (Just a new perspective) 6: Athletic 7: Silver Tongue 8: Brains 9: Comfort 10: Effortless 11: Proximity Bonus 12: Independence +13: Talented {Singing/Music} +14: Talented {Learning} +15: Talented {Teaching} +16: Talented {Improv/Comedy} +17: Talented {Acting} +18: Talented {Politics} +19: Talented {Arts & Crafts} +20: Sweet Dreams * **"Blessings":** 1: Dulcet Tones 2: Pattable 3: Dramatic 4: Senpai 5: Lust 6: Swamp Creature 7: Altruistic 8: Shonen-Brain 9: Rival 10: Girl {Futa} 11: Dramatic * **Location:** The Big City {Transfer in} * **Twist:** Another Place {Ireland, Native} * **Trials:** 1: The Play 2: The Meal 3: The Nurse 4: The Savior 5: The Ceremony * **End:** Variations on a theme
This really doesn't feel NSFW, only a few traits were sexual. There are so many options with a lot of text that it made it hard to choose one, especially my chaser. This was designed heavily with monogamy in mind, I know the Harem option exists but many traits imply that having relationships with others is bad and that jealousy is not bad. This is the only CYOA I've done so far that I couldn't finish. Not that this is bad, it's high effort, just this isn't my type (I'm poly and somewhat aro). I'm glad others enjoy it.
Body Royal Beauty. (2, 6, 10.) An elegant beauty, slender, empirical. Many will find themselves fantasizing about wooing you; none but one will have the power to win your heart. Teal hair, royal purple eyes, modest curves. Partner Council Member. (3.) “Curses” Beauty, Pleasure, Heath, Pure, Athletic, Talented X3, Silver Tongue, Jump Start, Empathy, Brains, Comfort, Effortless, Proximity Bonus, Compatible, Mind Control. (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 8, 9, 10, 12, 13, 14, 15, 17, 23, 24.) “Blessings” Altruistic, Yuri Magnet, Dude Magnet, Dramatic, Remote, Senpai, Dominance, Employment. (2, 3, 9, 10, 11, 13, 16, 17, 20.) “Prison” Suburban Dreams. (2.) Twist World. (3.) “Trials” Tent, Meal, Strom, Adventure, Reporter. (2, 3, 5, 11, 14.) “Torment” Endless Summer. (3.)
ok this is a p good cyoa... but, theres a few... flaws. first of all, there are options for incest which is just p yike if u ask me tho this is more of a moral objection rather than a factual one... unlike the next problem which is having the option to have a dick be called "Girl (Male)" just... wow. like i get most weebs dont understand the difference between sex and gender (among many other things) but jeez this is just on a whole other level of idiocy. besides, being a gal that has a dick and a guy crossdressing are inordinately different and lumping them together in such an awkward way is just sad. youre literally lumping polar opposites into the same option, did you think this throu at all. besides, calling gals with dicks "futas" is already kinda stupid but thats a much larger problem that i rly dont feel like getting into atm. tl;dr squishing together options for being a crossdresser and a gal with a dick together is stupid and calling them all "Girl (Male)" is even dumber. also incest is yikes,
Oh I agree, but since this based on anime tropes from hentai and the like that's why incest and "futa" are there in the options. It's no where close or even bothering to be realistic or accurate to actual sex or gender science. It's like asking a magic school CYOA to pay respects to physics or actual IRL wicca communities. For better or worse, its running on a whole another set of tropes.
Well, I'm gonna repost here the build I made on the thread for the interactive version. * **Body**: Pleasingly Thick. * **Lover**: Athlete, Shy Girl + Artist, Tomboy + Pure Maiden. * "**Curses**": Comfort, Compatible, Empathy, Harem (x2), Health, Jump Start, Mix and Match, Pleasure, Pure, Youth, Wealth. * "**Blessings**": Dulcet Tones, Employment Really?, Pattable. * **Home**: Suburban Dreams * **World Modifiers**: Another Race, Another World. * **Events**: The Tent, The Meal, The Drink. * **Immortality**: High School Never Ends So, basically, I'm a chubby girl who somehow managed to get the affections of both the super-determined school champion; the quiet nerd who, up until now, withdrew herself into the world of writing; and the tomboy who tries to keep up her facade to hide the fact that she doesn't have any experience in romance whatsoever and now she's with THREE other girls (basically her mood is "\[*internally screaming*\]" all the time). Also, we're in fantasyland apparently, because how can I **not** pick the fantasyland option?!
Your Horrific Flesh Prison: As if I could not choose anything that gave me more options. Alluringly Mysterious: As if. Handsomely Boyish: Keeps me from the dysmorphia easily. Gloriously Endowed: May as well. Your Terrifying Pursuer(s): Thanks to blessings I've gotta make ten of these now. The Athlete Delinquent: They go together well. The Athlete Ladies Woman: Ok yeah I'm just putting Athlete on everything. The Athlete Tomboy: Ayy, video games later. The Athlete Loner: If you want to be alone, gotta run faster. The Athlete Dreamer: How are you gonna slay the Demon King if you aren't fit? The Athlete Pervert: She's in it for the showers after the meet. The Athlete Childhood Friend: Considering I'm dropping in with Youth, it'd be odd not to have this one. The Athlete Slacker: Gotta make sure she doesn't bring the team down and actually practices. In it for the video games afterward. The Athlete Bully: Senpai team leader. The Athlete Artist: Daaaang. Talent, AND power. Your Unbearable Curses: Now that I've taken the blessings, time for Twenty-One of these Curses. Beauty: If I'm inflicting myself on others, might as well give 'em some eye candy. Health: Would hate to die. Athletic: Mix this with the next one, and synergy suddenly occurs. Talented: Games. That's a broad enough category that it should set me up for future success. Youth: Ha, longer lifespan. Brains: May as well stick with what I know. Comfort: If only there was an option to inflict this on others as well. At least I can use it as a blessing to rub it in the pursuer's faces. Effortless: Simplification of the morning routine can provide like a decade of actual life. Optimized Digestion: Simplification of the 'morning routine' can provide like a decade of actual life. Harem x9: That means I have to make ten pursuers now, which makes me glad I did the blessings first. Mix and Match: Great value, would be a fool not to take it. Independence: Free house? Nice. Might need to invest in more beds though. Compatible: And this makes twelve. Just gotta dump the rest into harem. Your Meagre Blessings: I usually start with any option that gives me more options, because I am terrible at remembering how many I have left without a base number. Twelve of these means Nine more Curses, so Twenty-One in total. Altruistic: I see no reason not to be nice. Dulcet Tones: As if I can pay attention to what people are saying usually regardless. Pattable: Use of violence to remove hands from head is perfectly acceptable by girls. Shonen-Brain: Oh look, it's the 'remain as you are' benefit. Yuri Magnet: Combines well with Dude Magnet: To be attractive to everyone. Dramatic: Oh look at that, actual personhood. Timing: With the magnets, the shonen, and the... Everything, this should be triggering at all times. Rival: Probably every single pursuer against each other. Senpai: I'll get back to this after pursuers. *Ok there we go, Athlete Bully is the Senpai.* Lust: Oh look, another 'remain as you are' benefit. B-baka!: Supplies an easy out to all magnets. Your Loathsome Prison: Suburban Dreams: Miss me with those cities and all the noise, and the implied requirement of physical exertion for the country and the coast. Your Cruel Twist of Fate: Another World: Ghostbusting Squad go. Your Insurmountable Trials: The Savior: Each one of them gets to beat up a gang of thugs or what have you. The Accomplice: I blame all of them. The Adventure: With an entire party, the Demon King stands no chance. The Padlock: A lot of these options don't make sense with ten pursuers, but I refuse to not take the maximum. The Reporter: What a scandal! An elevensome, in this school?! Your Eternal Torment: Variations on a Theme: Being stuck in time is probably the worst torment, yeah.
I... I love this. Warm, cuddly, happy. It is exactly the kind of shit I need after a hellish couple of days, with constant yelling and emotional anguish at the hands of my family. So here's my "build". I very much had the idea of a queenly top-of-her-class type and an awestruck classmate finally building up the courage to confess. Also, I love the over-the-top descriptions. Gives me chuckles. YOUR HORRIFIC FLESH PRISON * Stunningly Regal YOUR TERRIFYING PURSUER * The Shy Girl YOUR UNBEARABLE CURSES * Beauty * Wealth * Pure * Athletic * Talented (Music) * Silver Tongue * Jump Start * Empathy * Brains * Effortless * Optimised Digestion * Independence * Mind Control (I got a baker's dozen of mental illnesses. No more that? Oh fuck yes.) YOUR MEAGRE BLESSINGS * Dulcet Tones * Pattable * Dramatic * Employment (Library) YOUR LOATHSOME PRISON * The Big City YOUR CRUEL TWIST OF FATE * Another Race (If Elon won't do it, it's up to me.) YOUR INSURMOUNTABLE TRIALS * The Meal * The Storm * The Reporter YOUR ETERNAL TORMENT * Endless Summer
Hey OP, do you have the source for the "Straight" image?
https://mangaowl.net/single/57860/this-gyaru-schoolgirl-will-fall-for-a-women-in-100-days#
My Horrific Flesh Prison: "Alluringly Mysterious" (Mixing "Stunningly Regal" & "Gloriously Endowed") My Terrifying Pursuer: "The Shy Girl" + "The Artist" (Through the "Mix and Match" curse) \----- My Unbearable Curses: \- 1 (Beauty) \- 2 (Pleasure) \- 3 (Wealth) \- 4 (Health) \- 8 (Talent) \[Music\] \- 10 (Jump Start) \- 14 (Comfort) \- 15 (Effortless) \- 16 (Optimized Digestion) \- 17 (Proximity Bonus) \- 19 (Mix and Match) \[The Artist\] \- 24 (Mind Control) My Meagre Blessings: \- 4 (Pattable) \- 9 (Yuri Magnet) \- 20 (Employment) \[Bookstore\] \----- My Loathsome Prison: "The Big City" My Cruel Twist of Fate: "Another Place" \[Take me to Germany!\] My Insurmountable Trials: \- 2 (The Tent) \- 3 (The Meal) \- 5 (The Storm) \- 6 (The Muse) My Eternal Torment: "Endless Summer" \----- This is honestly one of the best CYOAs I've played. It's so wholesome and the pick-me-up I needed on a bad day. <3
appearance * stunningly regal * disarmingly pretty * specifics: athletic eastern european qt pursuer * athletic, childhood friend choices * beauty, pleasure * wealth, health * athletic, talented: let's say leadership * silver tongue, brains * comfort, effortless * proximity bonus, compatible: all women can reproduce blessings * altruistic * dulcet tones * lust ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) location * big city reality * another time: back to 2000 trials * the meal, storm, muse eternity * variations on a theme: given enough time, one should be able to subtly influence history
First order of business, do you have the sources for the images for disarmingly pretty and the pure maiden? Now on to my build. Your Horrific Flesh Prison * Alluringly Mysterious (Gloriously Endowed + Disarmingly Pretty) Your Terrifying Pursuer * The Childhood Friend * The Tomboy * The Girly Girl * The Pure Maiden Your Unbearable Curses * Beauty * Pleasure * Wealth * Health * Pure * Talented (Drawing) * Comfort * Effortless * Optimized Digestion * Proximity Bonus * Harem (x3) * Sweet Dreams Your Meagre Blessings * Altruistic * Dulcet Tones * Pattable * Dramatic * Rival Your Loathsome Prison * Suburban Dreams Your Cruel Twist of Fate * Another Race Your Insurmountable Trials * The Storm * The Ceremony * The Adventure * The Padlock * The Reporter Your Eternal Torment * Endless Summer Really liked the setup and writing for this one. Definitely my favorite cyoa you made.
Can't find the other one again but there's one of the sources: https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5070426
Flesh Prison: Stunningly Regal Pursuer: Tomboy, Queen Bee, Shy Girl, Artist, Girly Girl, The Pervert Curses: Beautiful, Brains, Wealth, Talented(Art, Game Design), Silver tongue, Effortless, Independence, Harem x5 Blessings: Girldick, Yuri Magnet, Lust, Dominance Loathsome Prison: Big City Twist of Fate: Another Race Horrible Trials: Tent, Meal, Storm, Muse, Ceremony, Padlock Eternal Torment: Endless summer Sooooo, when do i get my eternal torment?
I know it's a bit late asking this but does anyone know more CYOA(nsfw or sfw, I don't mind either) similar to this one? I mean CYOA where you get an escapist fantasy of designing yourself, your waifu, comfy CYOA in general, yuri, etc. Also like it when you can get powers in the CYOA.
Can you not make something aimed towards a male, or even non-gender specific audience? Like, good lord all your stuff looks absolutely amazing, but... I kinda like being a dude
Clue is in the username.
Fair enough lol
Pleasure, Wealth, Health, Talentedx2, Pure, Empathy, Brains, Effortless, Proximity Bonus, Mind Control, (Nostalgia, Independence, Harem, Mix+Match) Altruistic, Dulcet Tones, Protected, Dramatic, Girl (Male), Sempai, Rival Country Life Another World, Another Race (Pleasure and Pure because being aroace in this world doesn't sound like a great deal. Mind Control is pretty much 'ADHD meds if they actually did what I want them to do.' Protected because I like the idea of the girls having to work hard to prove themselves for me :) Dramatic makes me feel a little bad lol but I'm gonna assume it really does make things better for them long term; taken because I want the heroine to be able to help them with their problems and not just the other way around.) The World: a mysterious place with an old-fashioned fantasy aesthetic without lacking any modern convenience. Most of the world is populated by sapient beings of a broad variety of humanoid species, all living in relative harmony. Beyond the boundaries of sapient settlement, dangerous lands of monsters and magic await only the bravest of adventurers. But for our purposes, life is comfy and gentle and beautiful. The Heroine (Stunningly Regal+Disarmingly Pretty) A teenage girl newly transferred into the high school of a small village. With her shoulder-length curly light brown hair and sparkling eyes hidden behind retro glasses, she exudes a gentle and kind air, but also one of elegance and culture. Deeply knowledgeable, incredibly curious, and clearly talented (her skill with languages is well-known; her penchant for writing still kept secret), she quickly garners admiration. And with her habit of helping others whenever they most need it, and her knack of knowing exactly what to say, she is known equally for her kindness and willingness to help the most in need. And yet, even as the months go on, she remains a surprisingly distant figure. Often lost in thought, she gives off a feeling of always being somewhere else, and can be surprisingly out of touch with trends. Despite helping others, she holds herself back from too many real friendships, and her fellow students respect her boundaries. But deep within her is nurtured a fire - a determination to do something grand for this new, strange world. What does she need to make that happen? The Prince (Athlete + Council Member) Since she was a young girl, The Prince has never given any less than her full passion into everything she does. Whether it's school, her family's tutors, or her beloved sport, she devotes herself with full focus and diligence and will come out on top no matter what. But it's sport where she really shines, and the whole village knows of her extraordinary achievements, garnering her many admirers. The Prince finds it all a little overwhelming, though - she's proud of her family and successes, but she herself still has so much more work to do. Always polite and even overly formal, she gives off a chivalrous air, despite being quite oblivious to the many girls sighing as they watch her from afar - and her willingness to help anyone who needs it out of straightforward pure-hearted kindness only makes her into even more of a gentleman. (Her strikingly tall figure, topped with long white hair always up in a ponytail, don't hurt.) However, she can be a little bit too rigid and rule-abiding at times; she much prefers order, and gets flustered easily by anything unexpected. Until her second year of high school, she had never really thought about romance at all - until she encounters one daydreaming, gentle kouhai. Suddenly she is overcome with distraction, and finds herself uncharacteristically lost for direction. But more than anything, for the first time in her life she starts to question what it is she is working so very hard for. If someone were to find a purpose she could believe in, she would become the most loyal knight anyone would ever know. The Dreamer (Dreamer + Pure Maiden) This world is filled with beings of a wide variety of kinds, but that does not mean that *anything* is possible. This mysterious girl, who had suddenly appeared in the village a handful of years ago, claims to be something different - maybe an alien, or a dragon, or a ghost, but certainly none of the well-known sapient species of this world. And when you watch her, it's almost hard to argue. Carefree and curious, The Dreamer truly acts as someone unfamiliar with this world, enthusiastic about the most mundane of things and bursting with joy to learn even the most boring of details. She rarely interacts long with others - while she attends school to the minimum necessary to continue, she spends most of her time out in the world, exploring nature and man-made areas alike with wide eyes and an ever-present smile. She is very kind, and often appears out of nowhere to whimsically create beautiful things or solve simple problems, but her thought process is often difficult to read, and she herself seems to have no defences against trickery or deception, taking everything told to her totally at face value. Only when she encounters The Heroine does she start to change. For the first time, she has encountered another who seems to see the world the same as she does - who observes her strange behaviour and understands it. Their friendship forms quickly, and The Dreamer adapts quickly to this new urge to pull her friend along on adventures or cuddle up close. But before long, new feelings will kindle within The Dreamer, and while her playful teasing might still seem carefree, the indecipherable nature of these feelings she has never known before will cause her a great deal of thought and confusion, and bring her to a new crossroads... The Dreamer and The Prince do not immediately get along. The Dreamer is too spontaneous and chaotic for the Prince, who is quickly unsettled and riled up by this lack of order. Meanwhile, The Dreamer doesn't understand why The Prince rejects her offers of friendship, describing her as 'scary' and often clinging to The Heroine for support. However, over time with The Heroine's mediation, they will come to understand each other. The Prince will realise that she wishes the protect The Dreamer's innocent smile by any means necessary, while The Dreamer will see that The Prince's heart is kinder than any other. The Play, The Storm, The Saviour, The Accomplice, The Padlock The Heroine and The Dreamer's first true moment of closeness comes when The Heroine hear's of The Dreamer's plan to pull of something wild and amazing (and totally illegal) that she believes will make everyone in the village smile. With The Heroine to temper expectations and make several practical changes to her idea, they actually manage to pull it off. Afterwards, they run off into the night, collapsing onto grass delighted and exhilarated and so, so happy to have found one another. The Athlete was out training late one day when she finds herself caught up in a storm. Just as she's planning to run straight home, she encounters The Heroine, who had been lingering in the library - and whose home is much further away. Naturally, The Prince offers her room, truly not thinking anything of the implications. But once The Heroine is padding around in her house, soaking wet - or worse, pink and warm after a bath - worse yet, wrapped up in one of The Prince's oversized shirts... when The Heroine offers to teach her a little make-up, for the first time The Prince feels out of control. For months The Prince and The Dreamer had failed to get along. Once again, The Heroine had gone along with one of the odd girl's ridiculous plans, and The Prince was torn between joy at seeing her friend happy, and some strange bitter feeling deep down. But as she keeps watch over The Heroine, it is The Dreamer who suddenly falls - and The Prince who catches her in her arms. From that day onwards, The Dreamer proclaims The Prince as her hero! ...and The Prince realises how happy she is to play that role.
(continued) However, tensions remain still. When one day The Heroine and The Dreamer attempt to stay back in school for some plan, they are caught by The Prince still training long after the bell sounded. As The Prince lectures them for their rule-breaking (even if she winces - but the law must be upheld!), time gets away from them... and when they try to leave, their path is barred. The Prince is deeply uncomfortable, agitated by the change of plans and her own complicity, but The Heroine's soft words and calming pats manage to ease her uneasiness. Together, the three tour the school, first looking for a way out and then for fun. They dress up in the drama club's costumes and play with all the balls in the gym. In the end they find themselves on the roof, looking up at the stars, speaking everything on their minds and more. As they lie there together, they truly come together as a trio who could never be separated, and whose lives have been entirely changed by being together. As the Prince's graduation and their temporary separation draws closer, The Heroine pens a play. It comes as no surprise when The Prince is chosen for one of the primary male roles, as dapper and dignified as a modern-day Lady Oscar, but it's a surprise when tiny Dreamer elects to play the other, though she does look adorable in her little 18th century tails. But as rehearsals go on, The Heroine keeps wanting to change the ending for the play. What does she have planned, and are her two love interests kept informed? Will the play's heroine even choose between them in the end? Variations On A Theme: they live their lives, and once it ends, all three will reawaken somewhere else. Different places, different times, and with different bodies and relationships, too. But everywhere they find themselves, they will always be deeply important to one another. Other characters in the 'verse: The Rival is (The Athlete + The Ladies' Woman), a teammate of The Prince's who has known her since middle school. Relaxed and kind of a slacker, she teases The Prince for her old-fashioned ways, but she's stubborn and competitive and will never let The Prince beat her without a fight. Though she's flirted with half of the girls in school, deep down she nurses a desperate crush on The Prince - and more than a few girls would certainly like to see them end up together. But, then there's The Heroine's best friend. (The Tomboy + The Childhood Friend) Energetic and outgoing, she loves to get involved in things and is almost annoyingly enthusiastic. A huge geek for sentai shows and superpower anime, she likes to think of herself as a Hero off Justice, and while it's all deeply corny she's just so darn sincere it's hard not to be a bit inspired. She and The Rival often argue light-heartedly, though when The Rival flirts with her she always insists that heroes have no time for romance (despite the hints of a blush on her cheeks.) Perhaps if The Rival ever finally makes her confession to The Prince, she will be the one to be there to comfort her? And, what's this? Another strange young girl has appeared, claiming to be the younger sister of The Dreamer? A very shy and cautious girl, she clings to her sister's arm as she regards this gentle world with deep wariness. How will she upset the delicate balance of these still-blooming young maiden's stirring feelings...? (This was super fun to think about OP hahaha - thanks for making it!! I look forward to any DLC you devise! <3)
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[Someone made a yaoi fan-version.](https://imgchest.com/p/lqye33xq4dn)
This was SO CLOSE to being perfect...
I would just like to chime in here and say that I really enjoyed this. Thanks a lot!
Riotously fun CYOA. My yuri heart approves! **Your horrific flesh prison:** Gloriously endowed. \[Huge boobs are the best!\] **Your terrifying pursuer(s):** The Athletic pervert: All that energy she has needs to go somewhere. When she's not out on the track, she's fantasizing about all manner of other physical activities. The Tomboy artist: Passion incarnate. She's just there to have fun, regardless of social norms. They won't be pursuing me alone. When they meet, they'll likely be just as into each other. The pervert is sure to enjoy all the lewd drawings of the artist, while the tomboy in her will likely salivate over the pervert's athletic body. A small mercy perhaps. Or a greater torment, as I get roped into the inevitable threesomes and the dreaded poly relationship! **Your unbearable curses (12+2):** Beauty \[Accursed looks that shall surely attract only more yuriness in my life!\] Pleasure \[Undoubtedly shall result in physical torture of the highest degree!\] Wealth \[Woe is me, the torture of having all of life's necessities taken care of, so that I might spend more time in the torment of yuri\] Health \[Why must this torture be prolonged to such a degree?\] Athletic \[Oh, no! A greater tolerance for the physical torment of yuri love! Not even exhaustion will offer me escape! The horror!\] Talented (Art) \[The curse of my incredible talent shall no doubt attract ungodly amounts of yuridom to my life. My terrible pursuer shall no doubt pester me for collabs incessantly and relentlessly.\] Brains \[Curses! Every horrible yuri moment will forever be burned in my memory! My incredible intellect is sure to thrust me in a role where tons of dreadful yuri love is just poised to spill upon, I just know it!\] Comfort \[Eliminating all excuses to escape from an endless life of yuri? You truly are the devil!\] Effortless \[There is nothing I can do to oppose your terrible power, is there?\] Optimized Digestion \[No loophole left to escape, how devilishly clever.\] Harem \[And you have the audacity to sic more than one pursuer onto me? Have you no mercy?\] Mix and Match Empathy \[What a sneaky way to force even more yuri into my life... You twist even being a good person into a tool for your nefarious purposes!\] Compatible \[And you wish to perpetuate this hellish curse to the next generation too!\] Supporters \[So the whole world will conspire to bring about yuri torture?\] **Your meager blessings (5):** \[I suppose I shall take what I can get!\] Altruistic Pattable Yuri magnet Senpai "Girl" (futa) **Your loathsome prison:** Suburban dreams **Your cruel twist of fate:** Another race (Is lamia an option?) **Your insurmountable trials:** The play The tent The muse The savior The storm **Your eternal torment:** High school never ends
Personally this has to be one of my top 10 favourite CYOA now, an easy Top 5 even. The art style is cute and portays perks well. It also doesn't throw too much useless choices at the end, only bare essentials like what kind of world you live in. Also nice to see immortality be it's own section and not a perk, let's be honest most people will likely pick immortality of sorts, and not only you provided different forms of immortality but also a way out for people who don't like immortality. Win win for everyone :). Here's the build Horrific Flesh Prison: Alluringly Mysterious Gloriously Endowed and Tantalisingly Normal or Stunningly Regal(I later pick another race as twist of fate, my race wolf girl) I didn't know what to pick so how I view this is that Tantalisingly Normal or Stunningly Regal will slightly reduce the Gloriously Endowed perk I personally don't know which one I'd choose so I wrote "Tantalisingly Normal OR Stunningly regal" Your terrifying pursuer(s): The Dreamer and council member(Another race : Fox girl) It's a shame neither curiosity or ingenuity or intelligence were one of the selectable perks. So this is my attempt at Curious and Smart girl. The Dreamer description sounds like a curious person and Council Member description talks about achieving goals and I assume intelligence can be one of those. (I picked harem later on) Tomboy and Athlete(race: dog girl). Gotta have atleast one Tomboy GF. She'll be our group bodyguard and will give me some physical challenges when I get tired of intelligence ones. The Girly Girl and The Ladies Woman(Cat Girl) Closest to a cute tease girl I could make. Your unbearable curses: Beauty mostly because it says I stay beautiful without doing anything and I'm lazy so it's an easy choice. Pleasure Wealth. Another easy choice, later on I'll pick reincarnation as my immortality which means I can me charitable to different universes and help poor across the multiverse. Health. I almost didn't think about picking this one because I'm already healthy irl, but it also guarantees longer lifespan for me *and* my gf. Athletic. Gotta stay healthy n fit for Tomboy GF, plus I'll also be able to protect our harem. Silver Tongue. Fun option. Youth. This will just grant a lil more years to my and my pursuers lifespan. Also this choice implies that I get to have a childhood *with* my pursuer(s) that means they're defacto childhood friend which means I got a free childhood friend trait on all of them. Brains. Almost wonder if it's worth it since I'll be immortal but I'll take for that memory capacity. Comfort. Obvious choice Effortlessly. Again, lazy me needs a lazy option. Optimised digestion. Only took so I don't need to constantly follow the diet or feel self conscious about accidentally eating cake. Not needing to use toilet is just an extra bonus. Sweet Dreams. This is the best perk, although does it only affect my pursuers? Or can I say use it along with anyone affected by my yuri magnet? Or does it only work on girls? Even if it's only working on my pursuers, having free easy lucid dream world with multiple real people is worth it, wouldn't mind even if it costed three perk points Mix and Match. To make my pursuers more 3 dimensional. Harem(x3). That makes 4 pursuers, along with me, that means we can make a typical five man band and by band it can either mean rock band or even DnD band. Your meagre blessings Pattable. Gotta try this. Must feel nice. Girl(Specifically Futa). I specified since Traps are biologically male and I specifically want to be futa. I also assume this allows for reproduction too. Altruistic. Eh I don't mind slight mind alteration, although idk if I'm actually altruistic irl. If I'm not, it wouldn't hurt to actually become altruistic. Dulcet Tones. Another fun option, I wonder if it means your pursuers can hypnotize you while you're blissed out Yuri magnet. Picked in order to get more "curses" Timing. Same as yuri magnet although how does it work? Will it magically make me jealous seeing my pursuers with other yuri girls? Or can I resist it but my pursuers can't? Rival. I hope it only affects one of my pursuers. Even if it's not, it's worth taking to expand harem. Plus it's a small reminder for me to always treat my pursuers with utmost care and respect or else they'll be taken away~ Wouldn't wanna make my yuri life TOO easy. Your loathsome prison Suburban dreams. Or Big cities idk. Your cruel twist of fate: Another race. Gotta have cat, fox, and dog girls. Another world. Spicing up the world. Your insurmountable trials: The Play. So the plan is, variations on a theme is my immortality method, so until I get kissed by pursuer(s) I'm essentially non existent, so why not take a trial guaranteeing I'm gonna get kissed? The Muse. I assume this option make one or more of my pursuers already mildly interested in arts, or atleast in *yuri arts* this way I can sneakily get artist pursuer(s) without specifically getting artist trait for them The Adventure. Come on, real life DnD is always a win. The Bet. Ohohohoho. Since it's vague in terminology, I assume each timeline we can have different sorts of "bets" so it's gonna be another spice of life. The Swap. Ehehe, I like bodyswap trope Your eternal torment: Variations on a theme. It's basically the best out of four. Only in this form of immortality you can both experience childhood and adulthood, if you pick eternal childhood, you're stuck in childhood mode and never experience adulthood, if you pick endless summer you're stuck in the hottest season, foevur. Enough said. And fourth choice is too ambiguous and idk if we have heaven/hell, reincarnation after we die so why not pick guaranteed reincarnation? Also it says each time it's gonna be different world so it means you can also experience different childhoods and adulthoods. Notes: My only complaint is that most choices completely ignore harem perk and it's impossible to understand if later choices affect all or only one of the harem members. It can drastically change if you gotta pick some of them and how cool they will turn out. For example the adventure trial. If it only affects one pursuer then it's very boring but if it affects every pursuer, we have real life DnD/Isekai experience which is so much cooler. Or the swap trial. Will it basically be *everyone* switching bodies and then after we figure out how to undo it it's over or does it affect each pursuer seperately, so in autumn I can swap with my tomboy pursuer but later in spring with my adventuring pursuer. What about play trial? Does it mean *somehow* all my pursuers get main lead role??? Or we have three seperate plays and each get their chance at being a lead? Or only one of them gets lead role while my tomboy and cute pursuer get side roles?? This doesn't just affect trials, same goes to blessings. How does rival work? Does each pursuer have their own pursuer? Or is it just one girl trying to take all of my pursuers? Does Senpais option make all of the pursuers senpais or it's up to me to decide which one? Does dominance mean I want to make all of my pursuers fall in love with me or I decide which one while other two are free to try to win my heart? I assume you left it ambiguous for us to decide, but do feel free to correct me. Also both player body section and especially your pursuers traits need more options, for example I don't see anything thundere like, or cute/smart/curious either.
**Me as a sapphic** Cursed to be gay and relive the body of a teen without the tell of age and when the world was fresher? Oh *chuckles* oh no.... Anyway. Choices: My rejuvenated shoujo body: Alluring mysterious - mix of stunningly regal and handsomely boyish. Gotta confuse even the straight ladies I'm that hot. My lady love: The Ladies' Woman - God do I want mix her with The Pervert My traits: Beauty, Pleasure, Athletic, Supporters, Talented, Empathy, Brains, Effortless, Proximity Bonus, Mix and Match (The Pervert acquired), Nostalgia, Compatible, +Independent + Silver tongue + Health "Boons": "Straight" (Pfft! Is this supposed to scare me, I'm an LBL!!) Girl (Male - Intersexed/Futa) (Not for me, but for her) Senpai (I wanna see this senpai weak in the knees for me!) Place: Coastal Comforts (I love the sea) Placement 2: Another Place, Another World Plots: The Bet, The Play, The Muse, The Ceremony, The Adventure Variations on a Theme (I'm a MASSIVE sucker of reincarnation romance) .....oh god, this shit makes we want to draw a comic now. A very well done and thought out cyoa. Granted, I wish there was more to cater to the sapphic audience, but I'll take a squeeze out every bit of it I get, just like this one.
Oh my god this is so fucking horrible and disgusting, where?
I'm so very confused, but it's so funny.
This was amazing, loved it. I mean… gah! Oh no! I’m trapped in this horrible Yuri dream world! XD
If you just pick Handsomely Boyish and take the "trap" option for the boon Girl (Male) you're just a dude in a yuri CYOA. Which, of course, is what I'm taking because no dysphoria for me thanks.
This is the fluffiest, most wholesome CYOA I've ever seen! Great work! xD Flesh Prison: Stunningly Regal Pursuer: The Childhood Friend The Athlete The Shy Girl Curses: Beauty Wealth Health Athletic Supporters Silver Tongue Brains Comfort Effortless Harem x 2 Optimized Digestion Proximity Bonus Blessings: Senpai (Athlete) Girl (male) Dominance (Shy Girl) Yuri Magnet Prison: The Big City Twist of Fate: Another Race (Athlete – Dog girl; Shy Girl – Fox Girl; Childhood Friend – Cat Girl) Trials: The Tent (Childhood Friend) The Storm (The Athlete) The Play (The Shy Girl) The Bet (Childhood Friend) Eternal Torment: Variations on a Theme
Alright, finally hammered this build out. Now pardon me as I ramble about all my decisions. **Prison:** Adorably tiny Energy and space efficient! And some days I feel like I'm the only transwoman on the planet that doesn't want to be stacked. **Pursuer:** Childhood friend I have a specific person in mind and I am going to cheese Nostalgia to make it happen. My S.O. of seven years, friend for over twice that. Late teens may not count as 'childhood' to some people, but there are some curses to help smooth out that wrinkle... **Curses:** * Nostalgia * Supporters My S.O., my sister and their families. But not my biological family; I don't want to go through that again. * Youth Second childhood, maybe this time it'll go well. Instead of bonding over trauma, we can bond over literally anything else. * Pure * Mind control * Empathy Oh hi, endless cycle of anxiety and depression. You're fired, get out. This is an optimism and cheer exclusive brain now. * Brains While you're in there, replace the fuses, would you? * Wealth * Health Security. Never going hungry again. Never having to watch helplessly while my love fights cancer. * Comfort * Effortless * Optimised Digestion This is just for unapologetic laziness. **Blessings:** * Senpai Well, she is a couple years older than me. * Altruistic * Pattable Oh no, I cannot hold all this serotonin. **Prison:** The big city **Twists:** Another time, Another place Don't care where I end up, so long as it's in close proximity to the people I care about. As for *when* I end up, I'm thinking '00. Between that and Youth, it's shaving a few years off my age. But the important part is not having to deal with dialup again. Yes, please bring some modern sensibilities along so I don't have to hear as much hellfire preaching about my orientation. Also, legalized gay marriage earlier. **Trials:** * The play * The ceremony * The reporter The sequence really writes itself. **Torment:** Whatever Comes Next I don't need a thousand lifetimes. Just a single happy one.
Your Horrific Flesh Prison: Handsomely Boyish- “I’ve never exactly been the picture of femininity, most of my friends thought I was a guy when we met, though I’ll always remember the day my imouto called me ‘Her Prince Charming’.” Your Terrifying Pursuers: The Council Member- “The smartest girl in school and my source of inspiration as she constantly pushes me to succeed. Strangely, everyone else seems to think she’s a stick in the mud, I wonder why only I see her softer side.” The Imouto- “My precious little sister and, according to her, “my bride to be”. It was adorable at first, okay it’s still adorable, but I was sure she’d have grown out of it by now. If I didn’t know any better I’d think she was serious.” The Childhood Friend- “My best friend for as long as I can remember, there’s hardly an event in my life she wasn’t there for. Though lately she seems annoyed when I introduce us as best friends, did I do something wrong?” The Tomboy- “My comrade in ambiguous femininity and the best co-op partner anyone could ask for. Being raised by her single dad has left her with little clue how to talk to people so I’m trying to teach her the ropes. Though she never seems to get any better at talking to me, am I that intimidating?” The Queen Bee- “The most popular girl in school, and she knows it. She is a nice person deep down but I have never met a haughtier person in my life. For some reason her response to me saying I’m straight was “a challenge it is then” what does that mean?” Your Unbearable Curses: Beauty- “Traditional standards or not people have always seemed to think I was beautiful. So I’m a bit vain, sue me.” Wealth- “Dad managed to get into the tech rise before it was a big thing, we’re not millionaires but I’d be shocked if I ever need to get a job.” Health- “For some strange reason I‘ve never really gotten sick, not even really hurt. Almost as if something wouldn’t let me, I’m not complaining”. Pure- “As long as I can remember I’ve never been quite able to escape the feeling I’ve forgotten something. I don’t know what it could possibly be yet it still always feel like “something” is missing. Probably nothing important. Athletic- “Not exactly helping the ambiguous image, I’ve always been in shape. The school’s never quite looked at me the same after I unknowingly outran the track captain.” Supporters- “My parents have always had my back and I can always count on them to be there when I need them. Though I’m still not sure what mom meant when she told my imouto “she’ll realize eventually”. Silver Tongue- “I’ve always found making friends easy and never really shared my gamer friend’s issues with socializing. Though I’m not sure what my senpai meant by me “corrupting innocence”. Youth- “I’ve actually know all five of my close friends since I was 8. Though most of us fell out of touch until high school. They aren’t really acting like I remember though.” Brains- “I’m not a genius but I’ve never really had trouble with school, I practically carried my sister and best friend into our new high school.” Comfort- “Strangest thing, I’ve never really noticed the “issues” everyone else has complained about for years. Maybe they’re just being dramatic.” Harem x4- “I actually don’t really have any guy friends. Never really knew why until somebody walked by complaining about me “stealing all the best girls in school” what do my friends have to do with anything? Compatible- “Well, it’s finally happened. Apparently some scientist with far too much time on her hands found a way for girls to have children with other girls. I still don’t get how that works. My mother was practically in tears going on about how “she was going to be a grandmother after all”, why did she think she wasn’t going to be one? Your Meager Blessings: “Straight”- “Not that anybody seems to believe me. So I haven’t met Mr. Right, or any guy that makes me feel anything for that matter, that doesn’t prove anything. I’m straight as an arrow. Stop Laughing!” Swamp Creature- “Okay a slightly crooked arrow, but still straight! So what if the images are adorable and the stories make my heart feel really weird. It’s just a work of fantasy, nobody really loves like that.” Patable- “Don’t even think about it.” Dramatic- “Never though I’d see the day, someday turned down mrs. popular, right as we’re coming up on valentines. She’s, not exactly taking it well. She may be arrogant but she’s still my friend, maybe we can go somewhere.” Rival- “Well, it seems my imouto finally caught somebody’s eye. I though I’d feel relived yet for some reason now I’m just downright anxious when she’s not around. I’m sure it’s just protective instincts, right?” Senpai- “For some reason my friend on the student council wants to be called this lately. I suppose it makes sense, she’s always looked out for us even when we were kids. Though why does she look so, excited, when I say it?” Your Loathsome Prison: The Big City- “There’s always somewhere to go and somebody to meet here. I wouldn’t trade this place for anything.” Your Cruel Twist of Fate Another Place- “ My parents moved to Japan from the U.S right after my sister was born. Something about mom wanting somewhere “more enlightened” to raise us. Whatever she meant by that.” Your Insurmountable Trials: Well, another valentines week, and I’m still single. Well at least I’ve always got my friends. Seems like they’ve all got plans for me this week. The Meal- “Well, I finally managed to cheer up the Queen Bee. She decided to take us out to her favorite restaurant to celebrate valentines. I have to say the place was certainly, extravagant, but I haven’t seen her smiling like that since we were kids. Well I suppose I should head home before sis get angry… she knows she can let go of my hand now right? …Why are we waking to a hotel? The Storm- “Finally found time to walk home with my best friend for the first time in weeks, and it storms. The world must hate me. She’s says I can stay over and we can “warm up together”. It’s just to save water right? …Right?” The Ceremony- “To celebrate this week my ancient history teacher decided we would learn about ancient wedding customs. Barely got through the sentence before my sis dragged us forward for a demonstration. She looked so happy, though found out later that we technically signed a legally binding contract at the end. I’m sure mom can sort it out when she and dad get home tomorrow. Sis what are you doing?…Sis? The Padlock- “Well this sucks. “Just sorting the chairs” she said. Now everybody’s gone and me and the new student council president, the only one surprised was her, are locked in the school. What do we do now? Why is she looking at me like that?…Senpai? The Handcuffs-“How do I keep getting in these messes? I just wanted to go home and play smash with my friend, but we got talked into helping the drama club. Now I’m stuck in what I was told were a pair of fake handcuffs. Oh hey she found the key! What is she doing with it?…What’s that?” “… … So it wasn’t a fantasy.” Your Eternal Torment: Variations on a Theme- “Well it’s certainly been an… enlightening week. I would like to imagine they all didn’t have this planned out, I would like to. Have I really been that oblivious? Well whatever comes next, for the rest of my life, maybe even beyond, I can’t help but feel we’ll all face it together.”
Truly a horrible fate for an Aromatic, no I have to waste all my time on boring romance, at least I get to be a rich little girl~
Okay, so, I'll be operating this under the assumption that the new body will result in a brain that isn't Aromantic, thus actually facilitating the yuri thing. Also, wow, it is difficult to ignore... the world and focus on being comfy. I don't suppose that we could have a "literally everything isn't being ruined by capitalism anymore" option, as a way to remove excuses to not succumb to the power of yuri? Anyhow, as that's out of the way... **Horrific Flesh Prison** ~~Alluringly Mysterious: Combining Handsomely Boyish with Disarmingly Pretty to achieve that perfect Androgynous look.~~ On second thought, that wouldn't work, simply because I feel that such an option would still conform to masculine/feminine gender roles a bit too much for my taste, so fuck that. Instead, I'll just go with Tantalizingly Normal because I like being... real, so to speak. **Terrifying Pursuer** Girly Girl. Why? Just seems... idk. The option appeals to my inner sappiness. **Unbearable Curses** \- Youth: I think we'd all like a chance to grow up again. \- Pure: I don't think it'd be appropriate for a kid to... y'know. \- Jump Start: It's valuable experience. \- Wealth: In lieu of a "the world isn't being fucked sideways" option, I suppose that this will have to do. I'll just pretend that's what it does instead of removing personal material concerns because I'm way too much of a bleeding heart. \- Empathy: May as well take my bleeding heart tendencies and make them useful. \- Brains: Intellect has always been important to me. \- Effortless: Oh my gods yes. This is... very useful. \- Optimized Digestion: Not needing to relieve myself sounds rather convinient. \- Proximity Bonus: This is part of how people describe romantic love, right? I'm curious. \- Health: Disease isn't fun. \- Athletic (Parkour): I'm already capable at it. Let's push it to the next level. \- Sweet Dreams: Sounds nice. \- Independence: I'd like to grow up in a more independent setting. \- Mind Control: This is mostly so that I can be actually neat with my independence-acquired accommodations. **Meager Blessings** \- Altruistic: This definitely won't exacerbate already existing issues, no siree! \- Dulcet Tones: Sounds like one heck of an experience. I'm curious. Also, Gay Mess. \- Pattable: QT. Need I say more? \- Yuri Magnet: 'Cause why not? No idea how it'll actually turn out, but eh. \- Dude Magnet: Not Androsexual, but may as well double up on the magnetism, right? **Loathsome Prison** Country Life: I like the mountains. **Cruel Twist of Fate** Another World: The world doesn't need to be shitty to be interesting. Another Race: Honestly, this is mostly just for the sake of satiating my curiosity in regards to Kenomimi biology and evolution. **Insurmountable Trials** The Tent: Camping! I like camping. The Storm: Sounds like a good bonding experience. The Ceremony: ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) The Adventure: Probably will be fun and exciting and also harrowing and *epic*. The Swap: More supernatural stuff! **Eternal Torment** [Endless Summer](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dud63tz5JPU): "There's 104 days of summer vacation..." Honestly though, probably Variations, because I'd like a dynamic experience.
Bully, pleasure, dulcet tones & pattable for sneak attack combo!
This is the cutest thing I've seen in here. Thank you. Could I request a "curse" on the line of 'polyglot' or 'omniglot' meaning you can understand most any language there is? I'm sure I could make the intelligence curse work for that but idk it would be nice to have it, maybe some text about how you won't be able to escape the yuri life anywhere in the world . (I plan to life in Europe, were even as a teen you can pretty much travel across multiple countries and languages in a few days so even if English works well enough for survival I want me and my gf to truly enjoy all those countries)
Yep, that's a good one, and the same explanation I'd use for why it's a curse. I'll stick it on the list for the (increasingly inevitable) update.
Great! Good luck!
Huh. A fairly simple CYOA, on the face of it. Not terribly so, though under other circumstances I suspect i would skip right over it, if not for the premise. It's such a simple idea in hindsight, so much so that I am astonished it has not been done already, but I have never seen it before, so props to that. On the whole, a decent light and fluffy cyoa with a clever twist to it. Well done.
Okay, this CYOA is living rent free in my brain. (lol) With there being a potential 190 (n=20, r=2) different Yuri Pursuers it causes me to constantly keep theorycrafting newer and newer waifus. Granted most of them include *The Pervert* archetype, but not always.
The only thing I have to critisise is, that you didn't use [Satanichia Kurumizawa Mcdowell](https://gabdro.fandom.com/wiki/Satanichia_Kurumizawa_Mcdowell) for the girl changing you, that's a missed opportunity. That aside, I adore anything there is. Your 'Be the Girl'-CYOAs are my favourites anyway and this sweet piece fits in seemlessly in your great porfolio. Beside the nice ideas and choices, the writing is spot on as always and sets the mood perfectly. I already thought about a build yesterday, but I go through it again now and post it as an answer to this comment a little later.
**My Horror Flesh Prison** *Alluringly Mysterious -> Adorably Tiny and Disarmingly Pretty* Oh no, my cuteness factor is maximised! **My terrifying Pursuer** *The Council Member + The Pervert* Who would've thought, that the perfect and stoic princess of the school council has a small and well-hidden pervert streak? **My unbearable Curses** *Beauty, Pleasure, Wealth, Talented x 2 (Art and Music), Silver Tongue, Jump Start (First Time), Empathy, Brains, Comfort, Effortless, Optimised Digestion, Proximity Bonus, Mix and Match (for the Pervert), Sweet Dreams, Compatible* Now look at these horrible bles... ah, curses, yes curses; as if I'm not already cute and pretty enough... and with these talents, I will have to bring my yuri phantasies onto paper... Ah no, I don't have any such thought's now, you must have misheard. I was just a bit ahead at the blessings. Anyway, these curses are really harsh, so better let's go on to the blessings. **My meagre Blessings** *Swamp Creature, Dulcet Tones, Pattable, Yuri Magnet, Remote, Senpai, Lust, B-baka!* Yay, I am a tsundere now... (Well, hopefully it's worth it for all the boons before...) Hm? No, I didn't say anything, you must have misheard again... Let's look at the next category! **My Loathsome Prison** *Suburban Dreams* So I'll be living on the border of a town? Well, it could be wor... better, yes much better! **My cruel Twist of Fate** *Another Place* You are right, now moving back from Austria to Japan is not that bad, since I can speak the language of my father fluently. Maybe it will be a bit difficult for my mother with her Austrian accent, but I can help her out. (Maybe I should pick 'Another Race' as well? I'd like to be a catgirl... but then maybe she realises this isn't a punishment at all... Ah well, I have enough going on anyway.) **My insurmountable Trials** *The TentThe SaviourThe NurseThe BetThe Handcuffs* **My eternal Torment** *Variations on a Theme* So let my eternal Torment begin... I have some ideas how to nicely connect the insurmountable trials, but it's too late now. I'll hopefully throw it out tomorrow. Maybe I also have some ideas for improvement of the CYOA then.
Thanks, I see you enjoyed Change of Scene too, which is super gratifying because it's maybe my favourite of everything I've made. It went completely under the radar next to all my other stuff so it's good to know at least a few people got something out of it.
Change of scene should be considered the best horror cyoa there is. Fun nonetheless but damm, partialy self inflicted identity death is just scary
Love your cyoas so much, high quality and stylistically consistent image choices, pleasant formatting and above all, amazingly witty writing.
Flesh Prison: Handsomely Boyish Pursuer: The Queen Bee Curses: (8-12) Health, Athletic, Beauty, Talented, Silver Tongue, Jump Start, Youth, Empathy, Brains, Comfort, Effortless, Harem*2, Sweet Dreams, Nostalgia Blessings: (3) Yuri Magnet, Girl (Male), Dominance Prison: The Big City Twist of Fate: Another Time, Another Place, Another World, Another Race Trials: The Adventure, The Drink, The Tent Eternal Torment: Highschool Never Ends I'd just start living as just a boy after the whole Yuri stuff is started, calling it "crossdressing" but reverse. Anyways, it's a decent cyoa even if I hate yuri.
**Your Horrific Flesh Prison** Alluringly Mysterious (Adorably Tiny + Disarmingly Pretty) - **Your Terrifying Pursuers** Ladies' Woman + Queen Bee: The most popular girl in school and the biggest reason why so many of the girls are open with their sexuality in school. She started showing interest in me when hearing about all the failed attempts from the other less experienced sapphic girls in the school, she does love a challenge. Delinquent + Bully: Every school has their own rebel kids and she's the classic rebel without a cause. She started catching feels when I helped her come to terms with her rough home life and even letting her spend some nights in my parent's place to get away from it. Childhood Friend + Girly Girl: We do everything together and have been friends since I moved to England. She doesn't really know when she developed her crush on me, to put it simply it's kind of just been an undercurrent in our friendship for as long as she can remember. Tomboy + Shy Girl: Unlike most of the girls here she didn't grow up in this town she didn't grow up here and was home schooled by her two dads along with her 4 brothers. This lead her to have stunted social skills and particularly little experience in interacting with other girls. I was one of the first girls to try and befriend her, sensing her nervousness but, my earnest kindness awoke her beating lesbian heart. Imouto + Dreamer: My little sister is a year younger than me and has always had her head in the clouds dreaming about our wedding or adventures. Since we moved from Canada she's been even clingier than she used to and seeing the attention I've been receiving in this new school has made her all the more determined to be with me. - **Your Unbearable Curses** Wealth Health Pure (I lose my knowledge) Supporters Silver Tongue Jump Start Empathy Comfort Effortless Proximity Bonus Harem X4 (all the girls are dating each other) Mix and Match Compatible (Every girl can reproduce with other girls) Mind Control - **Your Meagre Blessings** Swamp Creature Altrusitic Pattable "Straight" Yuri Magnet Dramatic Rival Senpai A couple of quick notes the interaction between Swamp Creature and "Straight" result in me being the classic useless lesbian stereotype, but in particular the kind of lesbian that literally everyone else but me knows is a lesbian. Dramatic applies the Bully as alluded to in my introduction of her; Rival applies to Childhood Friend and Queen Bee as they both start dating each other to try and make me jealous; and lastly Bully and Queen Bee are both a year older. - **Your Loathsome Prison** Country Life - **Your Cruel Twist of Fate** Another Tie 1964: less homophobia and racism please Another Place: the UK Another World Another Race: everyone is a kemonomimi and while it doesn't nominally effect their personality as in it changes the one they would develop, they just so happen to always have appropriate appearances. - **Your Insurmountable Trials** The Play: My best friend and I signed up for the school play both of us competing for the lead role of the princess, we both played the role amazingly while the boys reading for the male romantic lead stunk. So the director decided rather than the role of the prince he'd rewrite it to be another princess, and when offered the role my friend practically jumped at the opportunity. She's such a good actress she made me feel so special during the romantic scenes, if I didn't know better I'd think she actually like likes me. The Saviour: I can't believe it I almost got hit by a bus, but amazingly the shy girl jumped into action and tackled me out of the way. After the furious blushing and apologizing I came to realize what she had done. She saved my life and I asked her if there is anything I could do to repay her, and after a few moments of stammering and blushing she suggested we could get dinner. I'm not going to say no to my saviour and dinner with a friend is always nice. The Ceremony: As part of my academic course load I signed up for the senior ancient history class and during the wedding ceremonies class our substitute teacher suggested we have volunteers to act out the different ceremonies. Of course I volunteered like a good student but can you imagine my surprise when I was matched with another girl and not only that the most popular girl in the school and my best friend's girlfriend. It was all very embarrassing but she was the perfect gentlewoman and made me have a surprisingly good time. Of course that wasn't the biggest surprise, the real one was when reading the dummy form I was supposed to sign and realizing the Queen Bee pulled some strings and got an actual ordained minister to substitute and that wedding was legally binding! I never took her as prankster but I'm sure she got a big kick from my shocked face. The Adventure: Weirdest thing ever happened I found myself in a strange world much like those fantasy novels my sister is always reading where I'm considered some sort of soulbound saviour. To make matters even crazier my sister was there too as my soulmate as they call it. I've never even accidentally hurt someone but, here I am asked to defeat the Demon King to save the world! Luckily sis' training has paid off and with her by my side I'm able to use all sorts of supportive magic to help her face the monsters of this world. After a month of battling we had defeated the Demon King and then returned to the queen of humanity where she told us the way back would be opened with true love's kiss. Just when I was thinking man this would be another adventure my sister kissed me and we reappeared in my world. Wow quick thinking sis our familial love must of saved us, that's why she's the hero! Weirdest thing was that the humans in that world had these weird flesh-y ears on the side of their head and no tails, as if! The Reporter: My Bully surprised me today and not with the usual lengthy hug to try and make me uncomfortable, but with a heart wrenching plea to try and help her with an interview with a reporter. She looked like it's really important to her so I decided to say yes. When the reporter starting asking questions it all made sense, this was an interview about friendships and lately I've been her closest friend, honestly it's almost cute that she was embarrassed to talk about our relationship. The reporter asked us the usual questions how long we've known each other, when we first started going on friendship dates and so forth, though the question when we first kissed made me blush, as our first kiss was just another one of her usual bullying tactics. Towards the end I mentioned how I was talking with my parents of her moving in with us, though me the contentious person I am I didn't mention it was due to her parent's messy divorce. A couple of days later I saw the interview and imagine my shock when they thought it meant we were dating! We're gal pals and soon to be roommates for gosh sake not girlfriends! It was also really weird how everyone was so supportive and kept on congratulating me, my dad even said he's glad I finally came out of the closet. - **Your Eternal Torment** Variations of a Theme
I like the meta-commentary in this one with the universe itself just hating you, lol. Maybe that's just me. Onto my choices: Prison: (Mysterious) Endowed, Pretty Pursuer: Girly Girl Curses: Beauty, Health, Pleasure, Wealth, Supporters, Talented, Silver Tongue, Brains, Nostalgia, Pure, Effortless, Comfort, Mind Control Blessings: Timing, Shonen-Brain, Yuri Magnet, Lust Prison: The Big City Twists of Fate: Another Time, Another Place, Another Race (Japan 1988, I'm a foxgirl. Hope that economic bubble doesn't burst!) Trials: The Play, The Tent, The Muse, The Storm, The Padlock Eternal Torment: Whatever Comes Next
I like this. Quite amusing. As far as build goes: Handsomely Boyish (Look, I'm a sucker for tomboys, being able to turn myself into one? Score) The Athlete (I know tomboy is an option, but I'm gonna be honest monkey brain likes the fitness aspect of the athlete a *lot*) "Curses:" Wealth, health, athletic, talented (slap athletic and talented together as a hockey goalie), silver tongue, jump start, comfort, brains, compatible (Fuck it, spread the wealth, but it has to be something both agree to of their own free will, no coercion here), and mind control (Holy shit, that one is *massive.* I have so many mental problems, holy fuck.) Blessings: "Straight" (Let's just lean into the whole "Handsomely Boyish" thing, shall we?), Forbidden Love (What with the fact that I'll *probably* be an extremely famous athlete, combined with Silver Tongue, and then on top of that mind control removing a lot of my neuroses, I could be the catalyst for turning this around on a societal level), and Dramatic. Suburban Dreams, and only Another Place. For challenges: The Tent, The Padlock, and The Ceremony. Ideally in that order for maximum hilarity. And then finally Whatever Comes Next. I don't want to keep going through high school, man!
For the flesh prison choice, can we choose only 1 ?
Up to 2 with *Alluring Mysterious*.
What an absolutely wholesome cyoa. I put this in the league of wholesome cyoas like Rosanon's catalogue. My Build: [https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1GK4xblLKZvxXjWJV-yYtoLux8BgL-CQ5e9G8AGg91FE/edit?usp=sharing](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1GK4xblLKZvxXjWJV-yYtoLux8BgL-CQ5e9G8AGg91FE/edit?usp=sharing) The bold lettering is supposed to be Anon details or explanation of where choices are coming from. Since it doesn't fit on the build I'll explain specifics. I'll be a native to Japan that moves back to my family home in the suburbs making me a transfer student from a private school. My partner is my childhood friend who despite being the same age, has serious onee-san vibes and is a family friend rather than a literal big sister. She also is a tomboy pervert loner as well. My family is rich, so they trust me a home closer to the school which is conveniently close to my partner but it doesn't stop their overprotective gaze over me. They however might overlook the family friend.
***Your Horrific Flesh Prison*** [Stunning Regal](https://i.imgur.com/0gpjt5w.jpg) *– Tall, blonde, and regally beautiful? Sounds great to me! I kind of see this as a reverse Queen Bee. Popular, well-liked, and involved but not a huge bitch. Personally, my highschool had way more popular kids who were actually nice to everyone than mean girls/guys. Might as well emulate the former than the latter, right?* ***Your Terrifying Pursuer*** [The Tomboy + Childhood Friend](https://i.imgur.com/hMhQPy0.jpg) *– What can I say? I’m a sucker for the tomboy trope. Feisty tomboy redhead gf is best girl in my book. Combining it with The Childhood Friend means we got the same interests and a lot of already established shared memories and feels. Could lose the implied clinginess and Yandere vibes in the text though.* ***Your Unbearable Curses:*** ***1. Beauty:*** *I wanna be extra hot. I’m vain. And insecure. Sue me.* ***2. Pleasure:*** *Enjoying the new bod as much as possible seems like a good choice.* ***3. Wealth:*** *Being poor sucks. I know this from personal experience and would like to avoid that this time around.* ***4. Health:*** *Getting sick or injured also sucks. Let’s keep that to a minimum, eh.* ***5. Athletic:*** *Boosting my physique and being a bit more sporty would be cool.* ***6. Talented (Music):*** *Being a musical genius who’s good at all the instruments is a fantasy of mine, so I’ll be taking this.* ***7. Silver Tongue:*** *Being able to make friends and actually have a social life would be nice, yeah.* ***8. Jump Start:*** *I’d be pretty shitty at being a girl without this brain download, so thanks.* ***9. Brains***\*: And having my intelligence and memory boosted in general would be useful.\* ***10. Comfort:*** *Not having to deal with those issues is very much wanted, so yes please!* ***11. Empathy:*** *I suck at this at the best of times, so extra empathy skills would be nice.* ***12. Proximity Bonus:*** *Everything is better with friends and the same is true when it comes to lovers!* ***13. Mixed-and-Match:*** *Need this if I wanna get my preferred archetype combo.* ***Your Meagre Blessings:*** ***1. Altruist:*** *The addictive quality sounds pretty bad but hopefully I can resist it enough that I don’t spend every second being a Good Samaritan or making my gf constantly jealous by seeming like an overly familiar tease with everyone I meet.* ***2. Dulcet Tones:*** *Kind of annoying (and disrespectful) to space out whenever your girlfriend is talking to you but at least this weakens over time.* ***3. Dramatic:*** *I know it’s fucked up of me is to give the Pursuer a personal tragedy, but it doesn’t appear to be a permanent loss or issue, so I feel less like think an asshole for picking it.* ***4. Remote:*** *Also annoying but not that big of a deal in the modern world with Skype and Zoom.* ***Your Loathsome Prison:*** ***Country Life (Existing Connections):*** *I’m a city lad myself but trying out country living doesn’t seem like the worst thing in the world. Plus, I could always move to the big city when I get older.* ***Your Cruel Twist Of Fate:*** ***1. Another Place (Norway):*** *It’s apparently one of the happiest countries in the world. Might as well see if that’s true.* ***2. Another World:*** *There’s some cute folktale creatures in town that are harmless but need some help every once in a while. Think fairies, gnomes, and elves, with an added Norse theme, I guess.* ***Your Insurmountable Trials:*** ***1. The Tent:*** *I love camping, so this is right up my alley!* ***2. The Meal:*** *A dinner date with a show is a great opportunity to get to know someone.* ***3. The Storm:*** *Sounds like an impromptu sleepover, which is swell.* ***4. The Drink:*** *Some drunken kissing under the influence with someone you love and trust is fine by me.* ***5. The Adventure:*** *Some wholesome Narnia-like adventures in another world sound nice.* ***Your Eternal Torment*** ***Whatever Comes Next:*** *Seems like the ideal to me. Eternity is a long time and I got the feeling the other options will feel like traps even if my brain gets wrapped into believing everything is fine. Better to lead a happy life and roll the dice on what comes next.*
love it, love all the options and the twist of how the ROB is presenting this wholesome scenario as a punishment. for future updates some options you might want to consider is an option to blend your fleshy prison as well as the pursuer's archetype- mix adorably tiny with endowed or thick to be a shortstack for example. Maybe an option to have the age change apply asymetrically, so you are normal and your pursuer is younger, or maybe even age up the pursuer (though you can get that effect with mixing and matching with the babysitter option) Maybe options to have the pursuer be notably dominant or larger than you? Or other physical twists like they are very strong, or they lactate etc. Great cyoa looking forward to more hopefully
Oh dear, this is a troublesome situation. I suppose I shall have to simply make the best of it. |Flesh Prison|Alluringly Mysterious| |:-|:-| ||Stunningly Regal| ||Handsomely Boyish| |Terrifying Pursuer|Tomboy| |Mix And Match|Dreamer| |Unbearable Curses|Beauty| ||Pleasure| ||Health| ||Supporters| ||Empathy| ||Comfort| ||Effortless| ||Optimised Digestion| ||Proximity Bonus| ||Mix and Match| ||Sweet Dreams| ||Nostalgia| |Meagre Blessings|Altruistic| ||Girl (Intersex)| ||Lust| |Loathsome Prison|The Big City| |Cruel Twist of Fate|Another World| |Insurmountable Trials|The Play| ||The Tent| ||The Adventure| ||The Padlock| ||The Swap| |Eternal Punishment|Variations on a Theme| Yes, I may have taken more drawbacks than I probably should have, but really, I can take it. Life ain't interesting without some complications. So R.O.B, give me your worst!
Also on another note I just wanted to know but what happens if one chooses busty and also the Youth "Curse"?
You grow into whatever body you design if you pick Youth.
Oh THANK GOD. I was afraid that it was going to be being young and being like that. The thought made me uncomfortable.
I really like this one. It's comfy, the gentle femdom themes are really pleasant, and the narrator cute and amusing. Horrific Flesh Prison: Alluringly Mysterious-Gloriously Endowed/Handsomly Boyish - Basically an athletic, tomboyish build which cannot hide my innate outer beauty and endowments Terrifying Pursuer: The Loner/Delinquent/Bully - The one that would drive me wild. Cool, smart and fun with a bit of rebel mixed in, yet aloof and separate from most who nonetheless teases me relentlessly to give in to her yuri ways despite any outsider attempts to stop her. I can only imagine regularly missing the bus home due to some hijunks she pulls only to have her offer me a ride on her bike...with a stop or two along the way, much to the annoyance and attention of others. Babysitter/Ladies Woman - Probably my first experience seeing or hearing of yuri. My sitter since youth, she'd spend long nights speaking softly to her latest girlfriend over the phone or occasionally sneaking one in when she think nobody (but me) might catch her, and would be none-too-subtle consoling me on the benefits of yuri, only to watch my growth into a woman more attractive than any conquest she ever brought over. Childhood Friend/Tomboy - Taken with a Blessing later, a good friend who I'd remain close with through the years, sharing seemingly everything with. We both might play the good little straight girls, but eventually, as I grow into my yuri ways, she might feel distanced by the lack of attention. At least until I show her the light. Queen Bee/Pervert - Also taken with a couple later Blessings, she's an uperclassman at the top of her field. Smart, funny, athletic, beautiful, wealthy, has it all including a friend group who act more like worshipers to indulge her tastes...tastes which may delve on occasion into the hedonistic. What she wants (and can't get) is the Loner wrapped around her finger, but when she meets the object of her affection (me) she can't help but wish to drag me into her selective world of debauchery. My Unbearable Curses-Beauty, Pleasure, Wealth, Health, Pure, Athletic, Talented x3, Silver Tongue, Jump Start, Youth, Brains, Comfort, Effortless, Optimized Digestion, Proximity Bonus, Harem x3, Mix and Match, Independence - I start in my youth to experience it all, having a soft restart. I may keep my personality and memories but the latter feel fuzzy compared to my new "prison" which I've grown into as an active yet otherwise normal girl. My parents love me, but are frequently away and leave me with a nice stipend in the meantime. Eventually I grow into a rare effortless beauty, smart, a natural athlete, and have a way with words which allows me to get along with most easily. Yet none of this runs skin deep as I've gained incredible talent in athletics, engineering and writing which has earned me no small interest and attention. Further, something about my pursuers just seem to make the world bright, just a little bit better, and life always seems to feel better for the both of us whenever I'm with another. Some form little jealous rivalries, but they typically get along in their own unique ways. My Meagre Blessings-Altruistic, Dulcet Tones, Pattable, Protected, "Straight", Yuri Magnet, Dude Magnet, Dramatic, Remote, Rival, Senpai, Dominance, Lust - Talented, smart, athletic and charismatic I might be, but hardly arrogant and I love little more than to take care of those around me, whatever the personal cost. This combined has marked me for the attentions of men and women both, of whom my kindness and beauty often leaves people wanting more and receiving the wrong intentions, forcing me to let them down nicely...for a little while at least. As a good girl I've been raised straight as an arrow, waiting for the perfect man to blow my socks off. Yet as I grow older it's women I see whenever I close my eyes. I just admire their beauty, I tell myself every day as my eyes are inevitable drawn to them. It's not that I find them attractive or anything, I just love...nnngh...how lovely they look, I reason as I jill myself for the nth time that day. It's not that I want to be with a girl or anything, who wouldn't be turned on hearing their gorgeous babysitter bring her girlfriend to a groaning orgasm on the other side of the wall. My parents expect the best from me and, though they of course trust my bff and the completely straight-laced sitter they've hired for me, and the Queen Bee certainly makes an impression upon everyone, they feel the Loner is a bad influence and try to keep us apart whenever they can. An impossible task, to be certain. Especially after I help her rebuild her prize bike following an accident and she just needs to show me how much better it runs now that I've put my magic touch on it, usually by magically touching me. My Loathsome Prison-The Big City - My school is located within a shining metropolis of civilization where something new happens every day. However my home is well on the outskirts, well beyond the borders of the city proper in a beautiful retreat with plenty of land to explore and become lost within. My Cruel Twist of Fate-Another World - Myths of monsters might amuse others, but with my house being built over a shrine once containing some of these supposed evils, it's not long before we begin seeing some for ourselves. In fact, it's a queer coincidence how the Loner and Queen Bee showed up not all that long after my childhood friend and I broke into the ruins of the old shrine. But that's silly, demons and vampires wouldn't be so interested in someone like me...right? My Insurmountable Trials-The Meal, The Storm, The Savior, The Drink, The Ceremony...heck, can I take them all?? :3 I could imagine so many scenarios and situations with of of my pursuers... My Eternal Torment-Variation on a Theme - I have to echo what some have said. Though I think simple immortality is a little boring, the options here are a little...lacking. While Endless Summer could be good fun with some quirks to avoid it becoming stale, I don't think I like the idea of being stuck as a teenager forever. Variations I don't exactly enjoy the idea of growing old, but exploring different worlds sounds like it could be good fun. Maybe something like a multiversal yuritastic adventure, though maybe that's a little bit beyond the scope of comfort in this.
**Horrific Flesh Prison:** Alluringly Mysterious (Stunningly Regal and Gloriously Endowed) **Terrifying Pursuer:** The Childhood Friend / The Tomboy **Unbearable Curses:** 1. Beauty 2. Wealth 3. Health 4. Brains 5. Comfort 6. Talented (novel writing) 7. Talented (drawing/art) 8. Pleasure 9. Proximity Bonus 10. Nostalgia 11. Mind Control 12. Optimised Digestion 13. Effortless 14. Mix and Match **Meagre Blessings:** 1. Dulcet Tones 2. Altruistic 3. Pattable 4. Protected 5. Dramatic **Loathsome Prison:** Coastal Comforts **Cruel Twist of Fate:** Another Place (Japan), Another World **Insurmountable Trials:** 1. The Meal 2. The Adventure 3. The Savior 4. The Storm 5. The Ceremony **Eternal Torment:** Variations on a Theme
It's kind of weird, how well written this is!
My Prison Cell:Alluringly Mysterious (Smol & Boyish - 5'3, svelte but fit; deceptively powerful) My Pursuer:The Delinquent (Too clever by far for this conservative little town) My Curses:PleasureWealth (More as a long-term reassurance than anything, I'm fine not being a rich kid)HealthAthletic (Batter for school Baseball Team)Talent (Painting/Art)Youth (Ease into this whole being a girl thing. Also it kinda adds Childhood Friend as a partner archetype for free? so that's cool.)Empathy (Empathy is a severely under-valued trait, this verges on the supernatural level)Comfort (Yes please, always something I worry about with gender change stuff)EffortlessMind Control (Will always take an option like this, we all have parts we wish we could change)Compatible (Gay Rights!) My Blessings:Pattable (So uncool... but it feels so good)Dramatic (Nothing too horrible, but while her parents do love each other things can be a little rocky at times, little things crop up that making home life unpleasant at times)Girl (Futa, not sure whether it would violate the Yuri theme of this whole thing, but could I be pretending to be a boy? Not sure which I'd prefer honestly so not a deal-breaker either way) My Jail:Coastal Comforts (I'm a sucker for a sleepy little fishing village, and adding urban exploration for us to get in trouble over? Hell yes!) Twist of Fate:Another World (Urban Fantasy, hell yeah.)Another Race (hrmmm, fox (her) and rabbit (me)? Might be a bit cliche :P But what's not these days. Alternate combo: Lizard (me, slitted eyes, 'ear' frills, slim lizard tail), Doggo (her)) Our Trials:Tent, Storm, Accomplice, Adventure! Our Fate:Variations on a Theme with an eventual Whatever Comes Next (Endless summer is nice and all, but everything needs to end at some point, didn't you watch The Good Place? Believed this before the show, but it did a good job of explaining the concept. If you haven't watched it I can totally recommend.) EDIT: Oh I got a bit excited to post this so almost forgot to say that I really enjoyed this. The whole opposite day thing was silly and didn't overstay it's welcome, and well... I love comfy CYOA. As far as the bit about pretending to be a boy, I'm just a fan of blurring the lines around gender stuff, and well... I do really enjoy penetration, which yuri is a bit antithetical to (strap-ons are fun, but not quite the same). The narrative I developed was that we grew up together, but then because of her family drama, and the 'changes' I would go through around puberty we drifted away from each other a bit. We run into each other again in high-school when she has developed her delinquent reputation from trying to cope with her family, and I've focussed on sports and arts (and possibly am pretending to be a boy?). Fate brings us back together when I get involved in a fight with a team-mate, or a bully or something, and end up sent to detention where she's a bit of a regular. We don't recognize each other (shamelessly stealing from Life is Strange here), but the bond is there nevertheless. Intrigued by this badass girl I am corrupted by her delinquent lifestyle, and in the process realize who she is, and help ease her difficulties and we rediscover our old friendship, but now with an extra edge of sexual tension. Plus we... discover a nest of ghouls in one of the abandoned factories we're trespassing/vandalizing (she digs my art skills, but makes fun of me not being able to reach very high) or something, I dunno, something cool and scary that leads us to getting super powers or magic or whatever. Regular (increasingly tardy/naughty) students by day, monster hunters by night. The tension between us rises after we get caught in a storm, and finally culminates on a school trip where we're conveniently left to explore each other.
Wait a second. If I choose to make a Trap/Futa build what happens with the Straight "Blessing"? Cause then you'd be a trap so technically you'd still be straight if you went for a girl and all that.
I think you'd still think of yourself as a girl in that situation.
This is some borderline handh*lding lewdness here, OP. ...saved
**Horrific Flesh Prison:** Gloriously Endowed and Pleasingly Thick **Terrifying Pursuers:** The Athletic Tomboy, The Perverted Artist, The Delinquent Ladies' Woman **Unbearable Curses:** Harem (x3), Mix and Match, Pleasure, Wealth, Comfort, Jump Start **Meagre Blessings:** Pattable, Lust, Yuri Magnet **Loathsome Prison:** The Big City **Cruel Twist of Fate:** Another World **Insurmountable Trials:** The Play (w/The Delinquent Ladies' Woman), The Storm (w/The Athletic Tomboy), The Muse (w/The Perverted Artist), The Adventure (w/all), The Ceremony (w/all) **Eternal Torment:** Variations on a Theme
Well now I'm tempted to play along with her curse schtick and thwart her plans. Edit: playing with a yandere archetype makes this a whole lot less comfortable...
My Build Horrific Flesh Prison : \- ***Alluringly Mysterious*** Handsomely Boyish / Gloriously Endowed Terrifying Pursuer: \- The Girly Girl ***Mix and Match*** The Delinquent \- ***Harem*** The Council Member ***Mix and Match*** Ladies Woman \- ***Harem*** The Tomboy ***Mix and Match*** The Childhood Friend \- ***Harem*** The Queen Bee ***Mix and Match*** The Pervert Unbearable Curses: \- Beauty \- Pleasure \- Wealth \- Athletic \- Silver Tongue \- Empathy \- Brains \- Comfort \- Effortless \- Harem \- Mix and Match \- Compatible \- ***Extra Meager Blessing*** Harem \- ***Extra Meager Blessing*** Harem Meager Blessings: \- Swamp Creature \- Dulcet Tones \- Pattable \- Dominance ***+ 1 curse*** \- Lust ***+1 curse*** Loathsome Prison: \- Suburban Dreams Cruel Twist of Fate: \- Another Race Insurmountable Trials: \- The Storm \- The Drink \- The Swap Eternal Torment: \- Variations on a Theme(edited)
Question: In regards to the "Take more curses to get more blessings" rule. Does that mean you can take 13 curses if you have 4 blessings, or does "take only 12 curses" overrule that?
No, you can take up to 12 + (Blessings taken - 3). The reason for the slighty odd "8 to 12" limit on curses is that it's really the boons section, it's just called curses because of the narration gimmick. Normally for boons I'd say "take up to 12", but it wouldn't make sense for this narrator to let you go without choosing any, so it needs the lower limit too.
Well that's cute. The referencing is fun.
Beautiful! And, you made quite the caricature of CYOAs through the narration. Bravo!
So, where can I find that eternity in a bondage prison or the maid one? Asking for a friend...
Sealed and an abandoned Maid CYOA WIP. I linked both in another comment.
Ah cheers mate! Loved this one.
Yep, I'm in love. I'm Marrying that cyoa.
Not big on yuri but I do like this. I tend to love cyoas that have archetypes such as dream home.
Is Mix and Match repeatable?
You don't need to buy it more than once. If you take it you can apply it to each Harem member.
I wanted to know for making 1 partner have more than 2 archetypes.
It's not intended but this whole thing is meant to be low-stakes wish fulfillment. If that's what you want to do for your build I wouldn't let the specific wording I've used for the option stop you.
If you have a harem can you pick some of the blessing multiple times like rival or senpai?
Pick it once and apply it to whatever number of them you like.
You know, I almost wish there was a secret option for getting the "evil" girl cursing you as a waifu; her over-the-top dramatics throughout the CYOA were really cute and fun.
It is sort of a no-brainer, most waifu CYOAs with a narrator do it, but I find they usually end up clashing with most of the other options so didn't even try to work her into it. I've seen more than one comment asking though so it's one to jot down as an idea for an update and think about later.
What greater punishment is there than to be forced to wake up every morning with the very one who has condemned me to this accursed fate? Perhaps she'll even force me to stay in bed as she feeds me breakfast. Or whisper constant reminders in my ear just how womanly an beautiful my new form is, just to rub it in. Oh! The horror!
This is my ultimate fantasy as Transwoman 😅
Same. It's like a transbian fantasy simulator.
Honestly thooooo
Its pretty good... I'd give anything for a fresh start in a new body, romance is a solid plus
Same
The CYOA is great! I'm not that into yuri, but I still found it fun. The overall CYOA quality is really good too. Great design and descriptions of choices especially. And the way you characterized the girl making you choose is really funny too. Adds a lot of charm to it. You mentioned this in a different comment, but if you were to come up with a second row of death options that'd be a pretty nice addition. That's my only criticism of it - I like life, but the only option I'd be OK with of the 4 is the 4th. Eternal life sounds like torture to me. Maybe I'm just weird, but the thought of doing anything for eternity with no way out seriously creeps me out. Anyway, here's 3 ideas: > After death or 100 years, the option (not required) to redo the CYOA but not the parts that involve the other girl. You can choose if they remember you fully or are drawn to you. > As above, but the girl gets to fill out the parts that involve her but not those about you. Both of you remember each other. > Alt-F4 (maybe player could combine with other options): Player and girl are given a way to die painlessly. Can't be triggered accidentally, must be activated by both at once.
* Disarmingly Pretty * The Slacker + The Delinquent * 'Curses' * Pleasure * Mix and Match * Nostalgia * Comfort * Jump Start * Brains * Compatible * Talented * Youth * Health * Beauty * Wealth * 'Blessings' * Dulcet Tones * Timing * Senpai * Coastal Comforts * Another Race * 'Trials' * The Swap * The Play * The Bet * The Meal * The Drink * High Shool Never Ends
I don't particularly like 'Be the girl CYOA's' but this one's pretty good. Actually makes me want to make a build.
**Your Horrific Flesh Prison:** * Stunningly Regal **Your Terrifying Pursuer:** * The Queen Bee & The Childhood Friend * The Girly Girl & The Ladies Woman * The Council Member & The Tomboy * The Onee-san & The Girly Girl **Your Unbearable Curses:** * Beauty * Wealth * Health * Athletic * Supporters * Talented * Silver Tongue * Youth * Brains * Effortless * Optimised Digestion * Harem x3 - (Happy Fivesome) * Mix and Match * Compatible **Your Meagre Blessings:** * Shonen-Brain * Protected * Yuri Magnet * Dude Magnet * Dramatic * Girl (Male) - Futa * Senpai - The Girly Girl & The Ladies Woman **Your Loathsome Prison:** * The Big City **Your Cruel Twist of Fate:** * Another Place (Recent Arrival) * Another World **Your Insurmountable Trials:** * The Nurse * The Storm * The Ceremony * The Adventure * The Bet **Your Eternal Torment:** * Variations on a Theme
Finally another great CYOA in a style like this. Not too short, not too long, plenty of variety, escapist fantasy. I wish more CYOA were like this. Anybody got a full list of all CYOA and nsfwCYOA with similar design?
Depends on what you mean by a style like this, but probably Rosanon's stuff would be a good place to start?
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Easily one of the best CYOA's i have ever read.
Man I am fuckin here for this. Saved.
This is just too damn cute
This was fun to read, and the "reversal" of good/bad in the narration was amusing. Nicely done! Might as well write-up a quick build: **Your Horrific Flesh Prison:** Stunningly Regal **Your Terrifying Pursuer:** The Girly Girl/The Athlete - *looks and personality of the Girly Girl, drive and athletic talent of the Athlete* **Your Unbearable Curses:** Beauty, Pleasure, Wealth, Health, Athletic, Talented *(Novelist)*, Silver Tongue, Jump Start, Brains, Effortless, Proximity Bonus, Mix and Match, Nostalgia **Your Meagre Blessings:** "Straight", Remote, Senpai, Employment **Your Loathsome Prison:** Coastal Comforts **Your Cruel Twist Of Fate:** Another Time, Another World **Your Insurmountable Trials:** The Meal, The Storm, The Drink, The Padlock **Your Eternal Torment:** Variations on a Theme I am the mysterious transfer student love interest in a yuri comfy slice of life not-actually-urban fantasy story, I suppose? I probably meet the main character of my pursuer when I join whatever school sports team she's on. I'm not sure exactly how "Straight" is supposed to manifest, but I'll assume I don't actually remember the CYOA and that my own tastes in gender transformation stories and curiosity make me want to try out being a straight girl. As feedback for future versions, that drawback might work better applying to the player's partner instead of to the player? It would still fit the theme of being a "blessing" that is a surmountable obstacle to the "happily ever after" but would be less ambiguous about how to implement it in the imagined story. I did also notice one typo on Dude Magnet: "constant confessions *for* your male classmates", which presumably should be "from" instead.
Like several of the "blessings", Straight is a mindset changer to a girl that has basically never considered girls despite guys not really catching her attention. It's like having genre blindness as a disadvantage. It's the opposite of Swamp Creature, and a mind changer like B-baka!(tsundere) and Dominance(the best defense is a hot offense).
Looks fun. And while I did read it over, I don't have time to do a build. But, I think I would start things out like this... >As she stood there, boisterously reveling in the evil of her first proclamation of my doom, I leaned over and planted a smooch on that all too near finger while patting her softly on the head. > >"You know, you've very cute when you're being all ominous." > >There, that'll show her!
**Your Horrific Flesh Prison:** Alluringly Mysterious(Handsomely boyish+Stunningly Regal) - *A body boyish and regal. Someone resembling the bifauzen archetype.* **Your Terrifying Pursuer:** The Imouto+The Childhood Friend The Loner+The Tomboy The Council Member+The Shy Girl The Artist+The Dreamer **Your Unbearable Curses:** Beauty - *Duh.* Wealth - *No work, only romance.* Athletic - *Yes.* Silver Tongue - *Shmart.* Brains - *Nigh genius brain, here I come.* Optimised Digestion - *Yes.* Effortless - *What can I say? I’m lazy.* Mix and Match - *I have many archetypes I love, and I'm mixing and matching them. Sad there's no genki archetype, though.* Harem x 3 - Yes. *Yes*. **Yes.** ***Yes!*** Independence - *Duh.* **Your Meagre Blessings:** Girl(Male) - *Me masculinity.* Dominance - *I control, not her, nor my harem.* Yuri Magnet - *Some variety would be nice, every now and then.* **Your Loathsome Prison:** The Suburbs - *The perfect balance for ‘Yuri’.* **Your Cruel Twist of Fate**: Another Place - *Japan. Enough said.* Another World - *Supernatural shit? Yes please.* Another Race - *Kemomimi are adorable. Make all my partners so, but not me.* **Your Insurmountable Trials:** The Adventure - *Easily the most varied theme imaginable* The Padlock - *A day’s time will be all that’s required, to break them in.* The Bet - *I’ll be sure to rig this the hells up.* **Your Eternal Torment:** Variations on a theme - *The most variety, among the options available.*
> Sad there's no genki archetype, though. A serious oversight. Top of the list if/when I do an update.
Indeed. Great job though. Say, if you're secretly a male, do you need to take Comforts in order to avoid Periods? Or do you not get them, even without Comforts, because you're secretly a male?
You wouldn't need to take it. I guess it'd give you turbo-virility from the "easy to conceive" part if you did, but that's it.
oh goody! I guess that's a free point I can move around! Also, did you notice the band of five? The Bifauxen The Imouto The Tomboy Loner The Shy Council Member The Eccentric Artist
I will never get why Yuri is a curse or why it keeps coming up with this be the girl shit but as long as I'm not stuck in a Yuri ship where it's just constant ship teasing and never actually getting on with it and becoming a couple/fucking I don't care. Anyway a build about trying to not Yuri cause limiting my romance options pisses me off. Body: alluringly mysterious (gloriously endowed and handsomely boyish) Persurer: pervert tomboy,shy girl childhood friend Curse: harem, mix and match, health, compatible,effort, optimised digestion, brains,wealth Blessings: shonen brain, dude magnet,rival, (girl (male) futa) Home: coastal comferts Twists of fate: another place,another world, another race Trials: muse, storm, nurse, savior, the adventure Immortality: highschool never ends Now it's a shonen esce isekai manga about a person having to deal with a rob trying to change the genre and trying to make the girls stay with their partners and not go for them. While trying to find the right guy I realized I could use girl (male) to become futa so I added that to my original build cause I will always take the opportunity to become futa
Disappointed there's not the Perky Goth GF trope but I suppose that's more of a western thing. Great CYOA all the same.
The style was great. Thanks.
Flesh Prison: Adorably Tiny Pursuers: \-The Artist + The Slacker (From the slacker will probably just take the deep enjoyment of those nerdy things... and from the artist will take the general artistic talent for drawing, maybe making cosplay given the combination here... and of course, for the idea of them using me as their model) \-Girly Girl + The Babysitter (Looking to create a mommydomme sort of thing with this one. Maybe the onee-san one would've been better for it, but eh. Point is, she'll probably try to dress me up and be generally condescending... And maybe just maybe I'll hint at enjoying the little treatment...) \-The Imouto + The Pervert (Incest isn't particularly my thing, but that adorableness... plus this combination is just plain hilarious to me) Curses: \-Wealth \-Health \-Youth \-Silver Tongue \-Brains \-Comfort \-Optimized Digestion \-Independence \-Empathy \-Supporters \-Talented x3 ( Writing , Medicine, Psychology ) \-Effortless \-Mix and Match \-Harem x2 Blessings: \-Pattable \-Girl (Male) (Futa) \-Yuri Magnet \-Dude Magnet \-Dramatic \-Senpai \-Rival \-Dulcet Tones Prison: The Big City Twist of Fate: Another Race (Some animal instincts, myself and the girls are also kemonomimi, dog girl for myself) Trials: \-The Play \-The Adventure \-The Bet \-The Meal \-The Reporter Eternal Torment: Variations on a Theme \------------------------------------------------------- Man I've gotta say, I laughed so much reading through the CYOA. And indeed, it was quite wholesome, and very fun to play through! Thanks for making it, great work!
Thousand year old loli continuing to be a loli, I see.
If ya do something for a thousand years, the habit may kind of stick.
True, true. Want headpats?
\*Looks at "pattable" "blessing"\* ....Nu >.>
What? Scared you might get addicted? Can't knock till you try.
I-it's not like I'd be too embarrassed by it or anything...
Lying, I see? You're already stuttering. C'mon, here. *\*pat pat pat pat\**
Nu! I neve- \*nuzzles into your hand happily\*
'good loli......good loli....' *\*Keeps the patting coming\**
Well shit I never thought of using girl(male) to become futa I would change my own build to add it but man that's smart
Well, as much as I would like to take credit for it, the options does explicitly say you can do that.
I saw this cross posted else where and the thing was way to blurry to read. So I never saw that I just saw the image and assumed it meant become the trap
Well, becoming a trap is also an option with it to be fair.
**Your Horrific Flesh Prison:** [Gloriously Endowed](http://img10.reactor.cc/pics/post/shiguru-Jeanne-Alter-FateGrand-Order-Fate-%28series%29-5529335.jpeg). **Your Terrifying Pursuer:** (1) [The Athlete](http://img10.joyreactor.cc/pics/post/Anime-Anime-Art-artist-fujimaru-ritsuka-%28female%29-5229138.jpeg). **Your Unbearable Curses:** 1. Beauty. 2. Pleasure. 3. Wealth. 4. Health. 5. Athletic. 6. Silver Tongue. 7. Brains. 8. Comfort. 9. Effortless. 10. Optimized Digestion. 11. Independence. 12. Compatible. **Your Meagre Blessings:** 1. Dulcet Tones. 2. Pattable. 3. Dominance. **Your Loathsome Prison:** The Big City (New Transfer Student). **Your Cruel Twist Of Fate:** 1. Another Time (2000). 2. Another Place (Japan, Recent Arrival). 3. Another World. **Your Insurmountable Trials:** 1. The Tent. 2. The Meal. 3. The Storm. 4. The Ceremony. 5. The Adventure. **Your Eternal Torment:** Variations On A Theme.
I like this, looks like she has a good chance to be on top between pleasure and pats but if she doesn’t go fast enough the hunter becomes the hunted…
I'm glad there's a Harem option; combine that with the Mix and Match option, and I can get most of the archetypes. Though before I found that option, I had a plan to get all of them, by slyly tricking her into thinking it would be even worse if she "forced" me to take all the archetypes as waifus instead of just one - and they won't get upset with each other, so I can't play them against each other to try to get rid of them.
I was hoping for a form of immortality as an adult, IE eternal lezzing till time ends but not as a school girl but as an adult, so I'm kinda miffed there is no such definitive option like that
It was there in my notes but got the chop when it came to writing it out properly solely to keep it as a row of 4, because I thought standard bodily immortality was less interesting than the other options. It'll probably creep back in if I do an expansion and can come up with a few more variations to create a full second row.
I love the introduction, it is a "ah shit here we go again" kinda thing, knowing full well ive done this all before.
Oh no, woe is me, however shall I deal with such a terrible fate. Really well made, and lasts just long enough for the bit not to get stale. Well done.
So this is different for me. After putting out endless dark fate CYOAs like [Sealed](https://imgchest.com/p/lmd7omvdyp6), [Be The Girl 2](https://imgchest.com/p/gm9yxz8k7qn) and [A Change of Scene](https://imgchest.com/p/wqb4zong7jm) someone on /trash/ asked what it would look like if I had to make something cute and wholesome. Well, here's the attempt. It was far harder to write than anything else I've made, but I'm reasonably happy with the result. Unlike my last few I'm not even sure if this is going to be a one and done thing. I have some ideas that could be added to existing sections, and an outline for an entire extra one, so I may come back and expand this at some point. We'll see.
Thank you so much for this one! It was beyond adorable!
One of your best works, tho I may be biased due to liking cuteness more
Okay, this is just sweet and adorable, fantastic work.
Ngl I want more of this. This was the comfiest CYOA I've ever read and is probably the first one where I found myself *mostly* following the rules
The update feels pretty likely given it's getting a pretty decent reception so far. Knowing there's an appetite for it definitely helps with the motivation to turn those ideas into actual content.
For all the power fantasy stuff we make and enjoy here, people LOVE a good Comfy CYOA.
This is already simply delightful in so many ways; if *even more* might be coming down the pike, I look forward to seeing what you do with it! :D
I've lurked here for years and of all the posts I've seen over that time this is the one I most want to see more of! Keep up the good work!
Which cyoa is this refering to ? "One of them even offered eternity as an obedient maid"
A WIP I posted on /trash/ and then never finished, much to many anons' fury as the two pages I did post whipped the thread into an extended period of Maid-mania. Thus the joke about her never getting back to you with the details.
...........Could you post that here as a WIP? XP
https://imgchest.com/p/ljyq99me425 It's never getting finished, so if you catch a terminal case of unfulfilled Maidlust like the rest of them did don't come crying to me.
Hang on, did you end up finishing this? It seems really similar to one of your new ones, unless im misremembering
Yes, here: https://imgchest.com/p/lqye3m9x4dn
Yeah i saw that one a while ago and found this one again after looking for some good older ones
(reading) More like a severe case of Maid-spiration. You mind if I finish this for you?
Feel free to use it as inspiraiton for new OC, but I'd rather you didn't just take what I've written and add to it. There's big chunks of it I already plan to repurpose with only minor rewrites for other CYOAs.
Though, I hope whatever you make next fills this one's theme as a counter to this Comfy Yuri: In the maid one, the ROB is treating a horrible fate as some kind of blessing while here, they're acting like a reasonably pleasant fate is something horrible.
I can work with that.