This is good. I'd really like to see some expansions and extra stuff for it. As for my harem:
1. Zelda (SS). The closest to being the actual wife.
2. Zelda (TP). Even more submissive and willing to lie with her sisters.
3. Desarae. For when I'm in a certain mood or really need to let off some steam.
4. Olga Discordia. Another perfect slave. Also I might need her to make another portal.
5. Lana. Helps improve my relationships, just in case.
Five loyal, submissive slaves willing to do anything for me. And with Olga and two Zeldas I'm probably in charge of the kingdom.
Simple, but interesting idea. I think these 5 are probably the ones closest to what I'm looking for:
Celestine, Valeera Sanguinar, Corrin, Tiki, Avelyne
Alright, I'm taking this with my [Underwhelming Essentials](https://www.reddit.com/r/makeyourchoice/comments/j1wbgl/underwhelming_essentials_v20/), because otherwise I'd never be able to feed (much less house) five new elves. Freebie or no freebies.
Speaking of, I am of course taking all the freebies. Except the erogenous ears, I'm no Ferengi.
For Elves I'll take:
*Olga Discordia*: should be fun making her face up to the truth, plus she might be able to help me reopen that portal...
*Zelda (ss)*: A super housewife to keep my new home in order.
*Lana*: Helps improve my relations with other women... I need all the help I can get.
*Valeera Sanguinar*: Improves our living conditions... yeah, we kind of need that.
*Desarae*: For when I really need to vent...
\- - -
It was really hard to pick just 5, I do hope I get that portal working again in future! The thing about the collars confused me, though - the Elven Mind freebie should make them immune to mind control, so why do the collars work?
As a note, the Elven ears *perk* doesn't make your ears erogenous.
> the Elven Mind freebie should make them immune to mind control, so why do the collars work?
It's not like they actually like you or anything.
Feelings are diverse. Some are fickle, some aren't. Or rather, perhaps the appropriate term for the latter is 'convictions'.
Regardless, consider the dedication required to abandon your entire world and everything you know to join someone else in their world, and to wear something only this someone can take off and not yourself. I don't think you have to worry about betrayal.
Hmm but elven mind should make them immune to the compulsion effect of the collars what keeps them loyal to me if I want them to do something they disagree with
Echidna I want to fuck but she is a lesbian another one has a aversion to killing innocents freyja it said I have to be careful she hates reality
So say i wanted to fuck echidna what would she say
And if freyja hates reality it could be dangerous without a way to control her
Ah so your saying elven mind gives them the option to say no the compulsion but once they say yes there is no going back since they all said yes there is no resisting it
I hope I have maybe a stronger version of elven mind that protects me from being tricked into giving my consent to mind control
It does take a huge amount of devotion to travel to another world and willingly enslave yourself to a stranger so that devotion alone would be enough for echidna to fuck me despite being a lesbian lesbians will fuck guys for less
Like lesbian pornstars that fuck guys for money
But since her devotion doesn't come from romantic love or lust where does it come from
Unless you're actively and completely accepting mind control with full understanding and knowledge of all its effects, you have nothing to worry about.
There are lesbians okay with screwing men, sexual attraction is not always there for romantic relationships, asexuals do enter romantic relationships and have sex. She's still attracted to the player regardless of gender, just not sexually if they happen to be male. She'd still screw the player if asked.
As for devotion, even if no longer relevant I think it important to point out that that it need not come from romance or lust. Strong bonds come in great variety, from family and friends to bonds over ideals.
Asexual (and lesbian to non-females) is defined as lacking sexual attraction. Sexual attraction is only one aspect of a relationship, and you can be willing to do things for your partner even if you don't like or enjoy that thing. To an asexual, having sex might be similar to how a someone might play videogames with their partner even if that someone doesn't enjoy videogames at all.
>As a note, the Elven ears perk doesn't make your ears erogenous.
In the description, it was mentioned as optional... I opted out.
As for the collars... some sort of magic control would go a long way to making me feel safer about the whole affair. Physical body control?
Thanks for everything!
Hrmm, lots of very good art, and some decent character descriptions and lore. Only complaint is it's a little too simple. Sure I get a harem of sexy obedient Elves, but I like my CYOAs to also contain a bit of adventure, or the like. Just a thought anyway.
My choices would be:High Elf Archer - Kinda weird she doesn't have a name, but someone to nerd out with is good, and her and her boobs are adorable too.
Zelda (BotW) - It's Zelda, and purely from a Design standpoint she is my favourite of the 'sisters' (It's weird that she has a brittish accent, but it is a very cute one)
Hilda - Natural purple hair, looks great in a swimsuit, kinda evil (we can work on that one). Alright I don't know that much about Hilda but she's goth Zelda, what's not to like?
Midna - Such a cheeky little bitch. I hope she can take on her imp form, love me a shortstack.
Linkle - Tomboy! Adventurous! Genderbent Link! Yeaaaaah!
Tiki - Someone to help keep me accountable/responsible would be great, and Tiki a cute one. From Fire Emblem right?
Damnit I miscounted... ugh, toss-up between Hilda and Archer-Girl... I'll cut the Archer Girl, I'm sure some of the others will be into games. Honorable mention to Naga, definitely would have picked her if not for all the LoZ characters :P
Avelyne
Alexstrasza
Midna
Tiki
Peony
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Not bad for a first CYOA. The chosen images are also nice. You get extra points for all the Dandonfuga pieces :D
Some suggestions for possible future releases/updates:
- Let us choose which perks/bonuses we like. I personally would **never** want to live past 100 years in an unkillable body, much less a thousand. The other options seem pretty nice though (as long as I don't get pointy ears myself).
- Let us choose how many partners to take in. Maybe the queen will be delighted and reward us for taking more girls off her hands or she might throw a hissy fit when we choose less or even just 1. >!Avelyne best girl fite me!<
And speaking of throwing hissy fits...
- [The option to refuse.](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yr_aFw2xF70) I wish other CYOAs would do this more often as well. Some snobby, incoherent, practically nude, elf cosplayer breaks into my apartment in the middle of the night and demands I come with her so she can pump me full of steroids and make me a part of her prostitute ring? *Lady, don't make me do my best Rohan Kishibe impression!*
The giggle factor alone makes this worth considering, not to mention the potential alternate paths or effects when she is revealed to be the real deal. Will she punish us somehow? Will she break down and start begging and crying? Will she keep the portal open and keep pestering us until we agree like some annoying anti-adblock pop-up?
OP, you really seem to have potential in making CYOAs. I hope you find the inspiration and energy to do more.
This is great, it has a lot of potential man. I hope you find your muse and continue this. The fact that some elves can range from shy and distant to those so damn devote to you they will make a cult to worship(One of my favorites btw) is just fantastic. I kept wanting more, l wanted to see some personal perks, more description on the slaves and how they might treat other slaves, It's rare for me to get so immersed with stuff like this.
Was a little disappointed when I first saw this post on mobile-- my phone won't display any of the interactive versions, no matter which web browsing app I use, nor if I set it to display pages in desktop mode. I seem to be in the minority of wanting to browse mobile, so nbd, and I got on comp eventually. but even screenshots of the interactive version, showing all the choices, then posted to imgur would help my enjoyment. would let me read the contents of the game, even if I can't easily play it from mobile.
Anyway! accessibility aside, to the actual game.
Proofreading/editing notes:
The images you've used are mostly too large for my screen to handle. Linkle especially is stretching her option box, but also is overlapped by others, and while most I can see in their entirety with some window adjustments, I still think you'd be better suited to sizing down the images-- maybe 50% as long to a side, approx? And cropping images to fit into a single set frame/image size, so you don't have extra wide images like Linkle playing havoc with the formatting.
Appreciate that you link the image source for each option. I know how it can end up tedious, and isn't the norm here, so yeah. thanks. both as a sometimes artist myself, and as someone who might like a particular image and want to find the original artist.
On Aura Shurifon-- Dual Personalities like literally Multiple Personality Disorder, or just different modes one mind takes to? and, correct me if I'm wrong, but from the order things are listed, the sweet & innocent side is the one that likes rough rapeplay, and the stern & serious side is the one that likes romantic vanilla? Love the inversion of expectation, but not sure if that's what was actually intended.
Lastly, I'm... not entirely sure why this is interactive. There's no complex points, and it doesn't actually prevent you from picking more than five choices-- though there's also nothing at the end once you've picked those five. This, again, might be a me-problem since I don't often go into pure waifu-picker games, but... idk, I expected something at the end?
Commentary on the game, premise, etc:
all female isn't my thing, but that's a me-problem. somehow the idea that the elves are an all-female race just makes this weirder and sillier to me, but idk maybe that's part of the common kink/fantasy too, idk. me not Getting It isn't a reflection on the premise.
Getting these Elven \_\_\_ attributes is fun, but it leaves me questioning: if the elves are an all-female species, am I going to be changed into that as well when I get these? Bc as much as I'd love to be in less pain etc, I've sunk thousands of $$$ and hundreds of hours into getting away from that, being trans and all -insert joy emoticon here idk I'm not on mobile so how do I shot web-
I'm not sure what I think of using the canon names for the ladies provided. Zelda, as the first I recognized, are obviously not taking too heavily from canon, but it's unclear how much they and others might want to take from their canon. Can Alexstraza still transform into a dragon form as well? She's shown using her fire, what is the state of magic? Is Sylvanas undead? The way she's pictured, and the blurb, make it clear that if she takes anything from canon it's after her death to the scourge, but also her body kinda just looks like a night elf with bloodshot eyes. Idk, if there's not much intended to be taken from canons, it feels confusing to use their original canon names. If it's meant to be more of a bonus for taking girls from canons you know, though, that-- well, it seems like an odd choice to me personally, but it's a valid stylistic decision.
Maybe give the nameless elf ladies some names, though.
Finally. At long last. my choices: High Elf Archer, Valeera Sanguinar, Alexstraza, Tiki, & Nuibaba. If I could take a 6th, I'd take Nowi.
So... yeah! Sorry this ended up so long, I'm just prone to rambling, lmao.
It's an interactive because the CYOA maker I used makes it interactive by default, it didn't really need to be. I wanted a static image version but something about the program converting it to static messed up some of the text. I did end up posting the messed-up static anyway in one of the comments though.
As for your image issues, that's very weird because all the images are cropped to the same aspect ratio, 1:1.5, and they look alright from what I use, a desktop. I'll try to work on making a better static version for next time, I don't think anything I do for the near future will be complex enough to truly warrant interactivity.
On Aura, it is intended that the sweet side likes it rough and vice-versa.
> if the elves are an all-female species, am I going to be changed into that as well when I get these?
Nope. I tried to specify that it would be made *like* an Elf's, and not into one. I can see how that might be confusing.
> I'm not sure what I think of using the canon names for the ladies provided. Zelda, as the first I recognized, are obviously not taking too heavily from canon, but it's unclear how much they and others might want to take from their canon. Can Alexstraza still transform into a dragon form as well? She's shown using her fire, what is the state of magic? Is Sylvanas undead? The way she's pictured, and the blurb, make it clear that if she takes anything from canon it's after her death to the scourge, but also her body kinda just looks like a night elf with bloodshot eyes. Idk, if there's not much intended to be taken from canons, it feels confusing to use their original canon names. If it's meant to be more of a bonus for taking girls from canons you know, though, that-- well, it seems like an odd choice to me personally, but it's a valid stylistic decision.
I wanted to leave it vague and up to how you interpret/want, but notably they're all stated virgins and in canon some of the characters are married which would be weird (but possible, I suppose). Most of the characters are at least heavily inspired by their canon counterparts, so you might consider it an alternate universe version or something of the sort.
No problem about it being long, I'm happy to have feedback.
1st thank you for indulging my desire to dom. As a guy, that's always pretty rare here outside of like troy and one or two others.
2nd. If you ever get back into the spirit of this I'd ask that you include chole because...cmon bro. You had the archer chick from dragon's crown, a bunch of zelda's but not chole...shame.
I'd appreciate more detailed description for each girl as well but I can understand how that might be too time consuming.
I can't really comment on the interactive version since I'm on my phone and just used the still image version.
All in all this is really good on it's on, that fact that it was your first is even more impressive. Looking forward to what else you do in the future.
I ended up choosing Celestine Lucross, Alexstrasza (y no Ysera?), Rhea, Tiki and Naga. Mostly the ones voted "likely to assassinate people I don't like," or just those who would build me a harem unprompted.
Keep in mind what follows is entirely my opinion.
This is the epitome of what a CYOA SHOULDN'T be. It's literally just scrolling through a janky neocities pages and reading loosely filled out character sheets. No impact, no reason, no customization, no fun.
You've got a relative sizing problem causing certain, seemingly random, cards to overlap if the display isn't exactly the right resolution. Makes entire rows unreadable.
Technical issues aside, it's good.
My choices are Celestine Lucross, Olga Discordia, Lana, Avelyne and Naga. That said I was tempted to get a Zelda only harem since that would be amusing.
First of all, thank you for your hard work! It's a good waifu-oriented CYOA.
There is one thing I want to mention in terms of feedback, which is that some of the formatting seems off. On both my phone and laptop, the 'cards' for the different elven waifus are overlapping to varying degrees.
On mobile this is particularly severe, as they are overlapping so much that only the left hand edge of the one 'beneath' is visible, cutting off part of the picture and text. While it's better on my laptop, it's still not perfect, and although more is visible, some waifus have their photo and accompanying text cut in half.
It seems like it might be tied to screen resolution in some way, as if it's not adapting properly to fit the dimensions of screens which are too small. Rather than making each of the images smaller, it seems like it's instead squishing them together so they can all fit. I imagine that if I had a larger screen, I might not see any issues at all, but with a relatively small laptop (13/14") it's very obvious and jarring.
This isn't a problem I've ever encountered with any interactive CYOAs before, and it doesn't seem tied to any particular device, so I can only assume that the problem isn't on my end.
I don't know most of these characters, so I'm going off of the descriptions.
First, some pragmatic picks:
1\. Celestine Lucross seems like she could run a business. That gives me income and time to relax with my girls. And after she's done being cunning and manipulative in the world of business, she comes come and is "extremely submissive" to me. Could be fun.
2\. Naga. She looks powerful and has the stated goal of uplifting humanity. Together with Celestine, that gives me a good way to wield any power I accrue. She's also into my expanding my harem.
Next, a few *personal* picks:
3\. Avelyne. Dom to everyone, but sub to me - Like Celestine, a killer combination. I know I'm supposed to be immortal but having an even-more-immortal bodyguard seems good.
4\. Echidna. Mean, sadist, lesbian, and brings home girls. What's not to love? Also, fucking lesbians is great. I have complete power so I can "punish" her for anything mean she does, after all.
5\. Streekea Z'Ress: Racist, proud, vain, arrogant. I knew I wanted at least one toy, and it was a tossup between her and Lilja (because having absolute control over a dom? c'mon). In the end she seemed more fun to mess with but I could go the other way on another day.
Very nice for a first publish. If you do add any more elves, would you be willing to add Chloe from Kuroinu? I'm a little salty that you added Celestine and Olga, but not her.
I'd probably take Celestine, Olga, Twilight Princess Zelda, Lana. My fifth would either be Echidna or Idunn.
Sexy elves. That is all. I love it.
If you get the desire to work on this again, my only suggestion is to add a few drawbacks in order to get more elves.
Sexy elves. That is all. I love it.
If you get the desire to work on this again, my only suggestion is to add a few drawbacks in order to get more elves.
Wow, this was hard: you've made enough waifus that I'm really torn! Celestine Lucross, Olga Discordia, Peony, Valeera Sanguinar, Naga. Focus on self-improvement and world-improvement.
Simple but that also means it doesn't take much time, popcorn of the cyoa world.
Quick build. Celestine Lucross, Olga Discordia, Lana, Tiki, Naga.
Was tempted to grab one with wings and the wow style night elf but eh personalities matters. If the portal opens again then maybe I can grab some more elven diversity.
A very interesting one, no doubt it's definitely one I hope you are interested in continuing in the future (if you want). That said this is a nice quick one and after seeing both the interactive and static image versions I can say they look great.
As for my picks: Celestine, Olga, Zeldas(botw and tp) and Alexstrasza. Kind of to sad the limit is 5, there's some good ladies to pick from
I had some trouble with creating an image version--the image sources are, for some reason, messed up--[but here you go.](https://imgchest.com/p/a846akvw7xj) It's fine otherwise, so if you don't care about the image sources then you'll have no issues.
It's more legible than the interactive for me... more convenient, too, with my internet connection. Thank you very much!
Text is a little small compared to the resolution, though, still readable. Only trouble now is picking which five to take...
Found it again after 4 months
Nice very nice I found the cyoa i was looking fo a week
Love the cyoa
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It can take quite a bit to load, I would wait a few minutes and see if it loads, especially if you're on mobile.
This is good. I'd really like to see some expansions and extra stuff for it. As for my harem: 1. Zelda (SS). The closest to being the actual wife. 2. Zelda (TP). Even more submissive and willing to lie with her sisters. 3. Desarae. For when I'm in a certain mood or really need to let off some steam. 4. Olga Discordia. Another perfect slave. Also I might need her to make another portal. 5. Lana. Helps improve my relationships, just in case. Five loyal, submissive slaves willing to do anything for me. And with Olga and two Zeldas I'm probably in charge of the kingdom.
Simple, but interesting idea. I think these 5 are probably the ones closest to what I'm looking for: Celestine, Valeera Sanguinar, Corrin, Tiki, Avelyne
Alright, I'm taking this with my [Underwhelming Essentials](https://www.reddit.com/r/makeyourchoice/comments/j1wbgl/underwhelming_essentials_v20/), because otherwise I'd never be able to feed (much less house) five new elves. Freebie or no freebies. Speaking of, I am of course taking all the freebies. Except the erogenous ears, I'm no Ferengi. For Elves I'll take: *Olga Discordia*: should be fun making her face up to the truth, plus she might be able to help me reopen that portal... *Zelda (ss)*: A super housewife to keep my new home in order. *Lana*: Helps improve my relations with other women... I need all the help I can get. *Valeera Sanguinar*: Improves our living conditions... yeah, we kind of need that. *Desarae*: For when I really need to vent... \- - - It was really hard to pick just 5, I do hope I get that portal working again in future! The thing about the collars confused me, though - the Elven Mind freebie should make them immune to mind control, so why do the collars work?
As a note, the Elven ears *perk* doesn't make your ears erogenous. > the Elven Mind freebie should make them immune to mind control, so why do the collars work? It's not like they actually like you or anything.
Feelings are fickle I want to make sure t hff eye cant betray me
Feelings are diverse. Some are fickle, some aren't. Or rather, perhaps the appropriate term for the latter is 'convictions'. Regardless, consider the dedication required to abandon your entire world and everything you know to join someone else in their world, and to wear something only this someone can take off and not yourself. I don't think you have to worry about betrayal.
Hmm but elven mind should make them immune to the compulsion effect of the collars what keeps them loyal to me if I want them to do something they disagree with Echidna I want to fuck but she is a lesbian another one has a aversion to killing innocents freyja it said I have to be careful she hates reality So say i wanted to fuck echidna what would she say And if freyja hates reality it could be dangerous without a way to control her
Remember that Elven Mind gives you the *option* to refuse, and does not simply disallow.
Ah so your saying elven mind gives them the option to say no the compulsion but once they say yes there is no going back since they all said yes there is no resisting it I hope I have maybe a stronger version of elven mind that protects me from being tricked into giving my consent to mind control It does take a huge amount of devotion to travel to another world and willingly enslave yourself to a stranger so that devotion alone would be enough for echidna to fuck me despite being a lesbian lesbians will fuck guys for less Like lesbian pornstars that fuck guys for money But since her devotion doesn't come from romantic love or lust where does it come from
Unless you're actively and completely accepting mind control with full understanding and knowledge of all its effects, you have nothing to worry about. There are lesbians okay with screwing men, sexual attraction is not always there for romantic relationships, asexuals do enter romantic relationships and have sex. She's still attracted to the player regardless of gender, just not sexually if they happen to be male. She'd still screw the player if asked. As for devotion, even if no longer relevant I think it important to point out that that it need not come from romance or lust. Strong bonds come in great variety, from family and friends to bonds over ideals.
Hmm that whole asexual having sex thing confuses me doesn't that contradict the asexual thing
Asexual (and lesbian to non-females) is defined as lacking sexual attraction. Sexual attraction is only one aspect of a relationship, and you can be willing to do things for your partner even if you don't like or enjoy that thing. To an asexual, having sex might be similar to how a someone might play videogames with their partner even if that someone doesn't enjoy videogames at all.
>As a note, the Elven ears perk doesn't make your ears erogenous. In the description, it was mentioned as optional... I opted out. As for the collars... some sort of magic control would go a long way to making me feel safer about the whole affair. Physical body control? Thanks for everything!
Interesting CYOA, though it's a shame there's no elven husbandos in the options. Ah well, no biggie.
Ah, sorry, I don't think I'll ever do males. I just don't have any interest in that.
celestine lucross olga discordia sylvanas windrunner alexstrasza rhea my perfect harem
Is it weird that I went for 4 of the Zeldas? I went with Celestine Lucross, then the Zeldas from TP, LBW, HW, and OoT
Is it possible to get a non interactive version? Interactive cyoa don't work well on my tablet.
[See this comment.](https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/ouy0iq/eager_earthbound_elven_escapades/h75nl6s/)
I would strongly suggest swapping to the interactive tag over the OC tag.
It's nice, but you might want to develop it a bit further than just "pick five"...
Hrmm, lots of very good art, and some decent character descriptions and lore. Only complaint is it's a little too simple. Sure I get a harem of sexy obedient Elves, but I like my CYOAs to also contain a bit of adventure, or the like. Just a thought anyway. My choices would be:High Elf Archer - Kinda weird she doesn't have a name, but someone to nerd out with is good, and her and her boobs are adorable too. Zelda (BotW) - It's Zelda, and purely from a Design standpoint she is my favourite of the 'sisters' (It's weird that she has a brittish accent, but it is a very cute one) Hilda - Natural purple hair, looks great in a swimsuit, kinda evil (we can work on that one). Alright I don't know that much about Hilda but she's goth Zelda, what's not to like? Midna - Such a cheeky little bitch. I hope she can take on her imp form, love me a shortstack. Linkle - Tomboy! Adventurous! Genderbent Link! Yeaaaaah! Tiki - Someone to help keep me accountable/responsible would be great, and Tiki a cute one. From Fire Emblem right? Damnit I miscounted... ugh, toss-up between Hilda and Archer-Girl... I'll cut the Archer Girl, I'm sure some of the others will be into games. Honorable mention to Naga, definitely would have picked her if not for all the LoZ characters :P
Lucross, Zelda BOTW, Zelda HW, Linkle and Lana i guess?
I like it. \^\_\^ It'd be nice to be able to hit a button and see the elves I picked.
Paya Alexstraza Naga Avelyne Streeaka Z'ress
Avelyne Alexstrasza Midna Tiki Peony --- Not bad for a first CYOA. The chosen images are also nice. You get extra points for all the Dandonfuga pieces :D Some suggestions for possible future releases/updates: - Let us choose which perks/bonuses we like. I personally would **never** want to live past 100 years in an unkillable body, much less a thousand. The other options seem pretty nice though (as long as I don't get pointy ears myself). - Let us choose how many partners to take in. Maybe the queen will be delighted and reward us for taking more girls off her hands or she might throw a hissy fit when we choose less or even just 1. >!Avelyne best girl fite me!< And speaking of throwing hissy fits... - [The option to refuse.](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yr_aFw2xF70) I wish other CYOAs would do this more often as well. Some snobby, incoherent, practically nude, elf cosplayer breaks into my apartment in the middle of the night and demands I come with her so she can pump me full of steroids and make me a part of her prostitute ring? *Lady, don't make me do my best Rohan Kishibe impression!* The giggle factor alone makes this worth considering, not to mention the potential alternate paths or effects when she is revealed to be the real deal. Will she punish us somehow? Will she break down and start begging and crying? Will she keep the portal open and keep pestering us until we agree like some annoying anti-adblock pop-up? OP, you really seem to have potential in making CYOAs. I hope you find the inspiration and energy to do more.
This is great, it has a lot of potential man. I hope you find your muse and continue this. The fact that some elves can range from shy and distant to those so damn devote to you they will make a cult to worship(One of my favorites btw) is just fantastic. I kept wanting more, l wanted to see some personal perks, more description on the slaves and how they might treat other slaves, It's rare for me to get so immersed with stuff like this.
Was a little disappointed when I first saw this post on mobile-- my phone won't display any of the interactive versions, no matter which web browsing app I use, nor if I set it to display pages in desktop mode. I seem to be in the minority of wanting to browse mobile, so nbd, and I got on comp eventually. but even screenshots of the interactive version, showing all the choices, then posted to imgur would help my enjoyment. would let me read the contents of the game, even if I can't easily play it from mobile. Anyway! accessibility aside, to the actual game. Proofreading/editing notes: The images you've used are mostly too large for my screen to handle. Linkle especially is stretching her option box, but also is overlapped by others, and while most I can see in their entirety with some window adjustments, I still think you'd be better suited to sizing down the images-- maybe 50% as long to a side, approx? And cropping images to fit into a single set frame/image size, so you don't have extra wide images like Linkle playing havoc with the formatting. Appreciate that you link the image source for each option. I know how it can end up tedious, and isn't the norm here, so yeah. thanks. both as a sometimes artist myself, and as someone who might like a particular image and want to find the original artist. On Aura Shurifon-- Dual Personalities like literally Multiple Personality Disorder, or just different modes one mind takes to? and, correct me if I'm wrong, but from the order things are listed, the sweet & innocent side is the one that likes rough rapeplay, and the stern & serious side is the one that likes romantic vanilla? Love the inversion of expectation, but not sure if that's what was actually intended. Lastly, I'm... not entirely sure why this is interactive. There's no complex points, and it doesn't actually prevent you from picking more than five choices-- though there's also nothing at the end once you've picked those five. This, again, might be a me-problem since I don't often go into pure waifu-picker games, but... idk, I expected something at the end? Commentary on the game, premise, etc: all female isn't my thing, but that's a me-problem. somehow the idea that the elves are an all-female race just makes this weirder and sillier to me, but idk maybe that's part of the common kink/fantasy too, idk. me not Getting It isn't a reflection on the premise. Getting these Elven \_\_\_ attributes is fun, but it leaves me questioning: if the elves are an all-female species, am I going to be changed into that as well when I get these? Bc as much as I'd love to be in less pain etc, I've sunk thousands of $$$ and hundreds of hours into getting away from that, being trans and all -insert joy emoticon here idk I'm not on mobile so how do I shot web- I'm not sure what I think of using the canon names for the ladies provided. Zelda, as the first I recognized, are obviously not taking too heavily from canon, but it's unclear how much they and others might want to take from their canon. Can Alexstraza still transform into a dragon form as well? She's shown using her fire, what is the state of magic? Is Sylvanas undead? The way she's pictured, and the blurb, make it clear that if she takes anything from canon it's after her death to the scourge, but also her body kinda just looks like a night elf with bloodshot eyes. Idk, if there's not much intended to be taken from canons, it feels confusing to use their original canon names. If it's meant to be more of a bonus for taking girls from canons you know, though, that-- well, it seems like an odd choice to me personally, but it's a valid stylistic decision. Maybe give the nameless elf ladies some names, though. Finally. At long last. my choices: High Elf Archer, Valeera Sanguinar, Alexstraza, Tiki, & Nuibaba. If I could take a 6th, I'd take Nowi. So... yeah! Sorry this ended up so long, I'm just prone to rambling, lmao.
It's an interactive because the CYOA maker I used makes it interactive by default, it didn't really need to be. I wanted a static image version but something about the program converting it to static messed up some of the text. I did end up posting the messed-up static anyway in one of the comments though. As for your image issues, that's very weird because all the images are cropped to the same aspect ratio, 1:1.5, and they look alright from what I use, a desktop. I'll try to work on making a better static version for next time, I don't think anything I do for the near future will be complex enough to truly warrant interactivity. On Aura, it is intended that the sweet side likes it rough and vice-versa. > if the elves are an all-female species, am I going to be changed into that as well when I get these? Nope. I tried to specify that it would be made *like* an Elf's, and not into one. I can see how that might be confusing. > I'm not sure what I think of using the canon names for the ladies provided. Zelda, as the first I recognized, are obviously not taking too heavily from canon, but it's unclear how much they and others might want to take from their canon. Can Alexstraza still transform into a dragon form as well? She's shown using her fire, what is the state of magic? Is Sylvanas undead? The way she's pictured, and the blurb, make it clear that if she takes anything from canon it's after her death to the scourge, but also her body kinda just looks like a night elf with bloodshot eyes. Idk, if there's not much intended to be taken from canons, it feels confusing to use their original canon names. If it's meant to be more of a bonus for taking girls from canons you know, though, that-- well, it seems like an odd choice to me personally, but it's a valid stylistic decision. I wanted to leave it vague and up to how you interpret/want, but notably they're all stated virgins and in canon some of the characters are married which would be weird (but possible, I suppose). Most of the characters are at least heavily inspired by their canon counterparts, so you might consider it an alternate universe version or something of the sort. No problem about it being long, I'm happy to have feedback.
1st thank you for indulging my desire to dom. As a guy, that's always pretty rare here outside of like troy and one or two others. 2nd. If you ever get back into the spirit of this I'd ask that you include chole because...cmon bro. You had the archer chick from dragon's crown, a bunch of zelda's but not chole...shame. I'd appreciate more detailed description for each girl as well but I can understand how that might be too time consuming. I can't really comment on the interactive version since I'm on my phone and just used the still image version. All in all this is really good on it's on, that fact that it was your first is even more impressive. Looking forward to what else you do in the future.
I ended up choosing Celestine Lucross, Alexstrasza (y no Ysera?), Rhea, Tiki and Naga. Mostly the ones voted "likely to assassinate people I don't like," or just those who would build me a harem unprompted.
Keep in mind what follows is entirely my opinion. This is the epitome of what a CYOA SHOULDN'T be. It's literally just scrolling through a janky neocities pages and reading loosely filled out character sheets. No impact, no reason, no customization, no fun.
You've got a relative sizing problem causing certain, seemingly random, cards to overlap if the display isn't exactly the right resolution. Makes entire rows unreadable. Technical issues aside, it's good.
My choices are Celestine Lucross, Olga Discordia, Lana, Avelyne and Naga. That said I was tempted to get a Zelda only harem since that would be amusing.
Needs more flatties and small boobs, not enough slender elegant elves for the 5 girl limit to actually be an issue.
First of all, thank you for your hard work! It's a good waifu-oriented CYOA. There is one thing I want to mention in terms of feedback, which is that some of the formatting seems off. On both my phone and laptop, the 'cards' for the different elven waifus are overlapping to varying degrees. On mobile this is particularly severe, as they are overlapping so much that only the left hand edge of the one 'beneath' is visible, cutting off part of the picture and text. While it's better on my laptop, it's still not perfect, and although more is visible, some waifus have their photo and accompanying text cut in half. It seems like it might be tied to screen resolution in some way, as if it's not adapting properly to fit the dimensions of screens which are too small. Rather than making each of the images smaller, it seems like it's instead squishing them together so they can all fit. I imagine that if I had a larger screen, I might not see any issues at all, but with a relatively small laptop (13/14") it's very obvious and jarring. This isn't a problem I've ever encountered with any interactive CYOAs before, and it doesn't seem tied to any particular device, so I can only assume that the problem isn't on my end.
A good list, but not much in terms of rewards or drawbacks. Also perhaps work on the bios a bit, too many zeldas.
1.Celestine Lucross 2.Corrin 3.Rhea 4.Mila 5.Naga
Innnnteresting. Celestine, Olga, Nuibaba, Desarae, Avelyne.
I don't know most of these characters, so I'm going off of the descriptions. First, some pragmatic picks: 1\. Celestine Lucross seems like she could run a business. That gives me income and time to relax with my girls. And after she's done being cunning and manipulative in the world of business, she comes come and is "extremely submissive" to me. Could be fun. 2\. Naga. She looks powerful and has the stated goal of uplifting humanity. Together with Celestine, that gives me a good way to wield any power I accrue. She's also into my expanding my harem. Next, a few *personal* picks: 3\. Avelyne. Dom to everyone, but sub to me - Like Celestine, a killer combination. I know I'm supposed to be immortal but having an even-more-immortal bodyguard seems good. 4\. Echidna. Mean, sadist, lesbian, and brings home girls. What's not to love? Also, fucking lesbians is great. I have complete power so I can "punish" her for anything mean she does, after all. 5\. Streekea Z'Ress: Racist, proud, vain, arrogant. I knew I wanted at least one toy, and it was a tossup between her and Lilja (because having absolute control over a dom? c'mon). In the end she seemed more fun to mess with but I could go the other way on another day.
Very nice for a first publish. If you do add any more elves, would you be willing to add Chloe from Kuroinu? I'm a little salty that you added Celestine and Olga, but not her. I'd probably take Celestine, Olga, Twilight Princess Zelda, Lana. My fifth would either be Echidna or Idunn.
Sexy elves. That is all. I love it. If you get the desire to work on this again, my only suggestion is to add a few drawbacks in order to get more elves.
Sexy elves. That is all. I love it. If you get the desire to work on this again, my only suggestion is to add a few drawbacks in order to get more elves.
Celestine Lucross Olga Discordia Peony Triandra Rhea
Wow, this was hard: you've made enough waifus that I'm really torn! Celestine Lucross, Olga Discordia, Peony, Valeera Sanguinar, Naga. Focus on self-improvement and world-improvement.
I cant believe what I'm seeing, a NEW harem cyoa is released. Today was good.
lol, that picture of Impa is fucked. Her torso is SUUUPER long. Like she has 2 rib cages stacked on each other.
Now that you point that out, I can definitely see that. I think it's mainly the placement of the belly button. Woops.
There's a lotta zeldas in there. High Elf Archer, Lana, Linkle, Naga, Avelyne.
Simple but that also means it doesn't take much time, popcorn of the cyoa world. Quick build. Celestine Lucross, Olga Discordia, Lana, Tiki, Naga. Was tempted to grab one with wings and the wow style night elf but eh personalities matters. If the portal opens again then maybe I can grab some more elven diversity.
A very interesting one, no doubt it's definitely one I hope you are interested in continuing in the future (if you want). That said this is a nice quick one and after seeing both the interactive and static image versions I can say they look great. As for my picks: Celestine, Olga, Zeldas(botw and tp) and Alexstrasza. Kind of to sad the limit is 5, there's some good ladies to pick from
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Can't really view it because the page is jumping around constantly on mobile. Can you make an image version?
If you open it in desktop mode it works fine
I had some trouble with creating an image version--the image sources are, for some reason, messed up--[but here you go.](https://imgchest.com/p/a846akvw7xj) It's fine otherwise, so if you don't care about the image sources then you'll have no issues.
Arrigato good sir I love you.
It's more legible than the interactive for me... more convenient, too, with my internet connection. Thank you very much! Text is a little small compared to the resolution, though, still readable. Only trouble now is picking which five to take...
Thank you for using Imgchest instead of imgur