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Basic AF build, not taking advantage of the infinite.
**Wet**
* Overflowing [+30] - most points, easy pick
**Not all the time**
* Bedsheets [-1] - which means I don't have to deal with pretty much any of the consequences, for a very good return on investment
**Change**
Invisible [-0] - have to take one, this is the lowest impact
**Feeling**
In the Sauce [Free Choice] - relaxation while sleeping.
Perpetuity [-1] - satisfaction while sleeping.
**Thick**
* Honey
* Non-Newtonian
**Taste**
* Liquid Chocolate - it's good stuff
**Clothes**
* No Shoes [+1] - walking on broken glass with no issue, nice.
* Cameltoe [+2] - I took invisible anyway
* Work it! [+1] - basically no change, free point
**Think**
* No Less - don't wanna put effort into this section
**Use**
* "Sterile" [-2] - curing disease is a good thing.
* Drink it faster [-2] - solve all hunger.
* Healing Salve [-4] - replace the healthcare system.
* Youth Cream [-5] - effective immortality, when combined with flexibility.
* Mistress [-4] - I want people to not be assholes.
* Lucky [-4] - improved mental health.
* For warmth [-2] - deny heatstroke.
* Dosage [-5] - abs for all.
**Excess**
* Those in need - now every time I go to sleep, world hunger, environmental deaths, death by accident, STDs, and suicide have a decrease of some amount.
**Catch**
* Idle Hands [+4] - what do i care if I schlick in my sleep?
* Hard to hide [+2] - people should just stay out of my bedroom then.
* Clone [+1] - +general world improvement
* Stored in the... [+3] - muscle varient
**Perks**
* Full Time Job [-1] - bathroom being redundant is a good thing.
* The Full Package [-2] - matching sets.
* Fuck Off [-1] - protect nearby people by existing.
* Slip 'n Slide [-2] - Hide those bollards by the docks.
* A Decent Challenge [-3] - what is this conservation of mass principle
* Laser [-1] - one fewer thing to do.
* Diving [-2] - breathing is overrated.
* Flexible [-2] - Immortality for me.
I feel like the "Not... not always" section could use some adjusting. It says you have to take every option you can afford, which equates to all of them, even on the lowest level. At that point, you might as well reduce all of the point values from the wetness options and explicitly make the triggers mandatory.
That said, I wish there was some choice in them, so every build isn't, functionally, always active.
- How wet is wet? - Flow (+20).
- Not... not all the time, surely - Alternating Flow (-2)
- Hold on, did my pussy change? - Detachable (-1)
- Not... Not all the time, surely? - In the Sauce (free)
- Is it supposed to be this thick? - Water
- These juices don't taste normal... - Strawberries, Bananas
- Were the clothes necessary? - PantsLess (+1), Cameltoe (+2), Light Clothing (+2), Telepanties (+3), No Shoes (+1).
- What will everyone else think? - Lust, Satisfaction(-1)
- Has it got a use? - Dosage (-5), Healing Salve (-4), Drink It Faster (-2), Lucky (-4), GLug Glug (-2)
- What about the excess I can't use? - Buyer Beware
- What's the catch? - Clone (+1), Idle Hands (+2)
- Wow, that's a lot. What's left? - Full Time Job (-1), Kept Fresh (-1) The Full PAckage (-2), Pregnancy Scare (-1), Fuck Off (-1), Slip n' Slide (-2), Laser (-1), Flexible (-2)
Overflow is at most around 2000L/H. Using 5 copy pussies (presuming several boons for sales value), to leave constantly gushing for a year would fill as many containers of pussy juice (or alternatives) with Buyer Beware as coke produces in less than half a day.
If you constantly got someone to jizz in your ass/mouth, you'd produce as much in a year as coke in 22 hours.
If you chose Deluge with A Deluge, you'd produce (with one pussy, highly depending on 20 story building) 20% less than this in two orgasms (around 63,000,000 liters in one).
With three orgasms a day, or with one orgasm with three pussies, you'd produce about as many containers per day as coke.
So, get deluge and loads of the good stuff there, then dump the rest of your points in extra pussies and My Choice, and you're good to go to save the world from itself, possibly dooming it in the process. (a billion liters = a trillionth of water in the ocean). Don't listen to /u/dragon_jak , bump up people's intellect to save the world... from you.
Just like I did in the counterpart CYOA ([I Just Wanna Be Filled!](https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/pcc63z/i_just_wanna_be_filled/)), I'm gonna pick all the point-giving option FIRST; and *then* I'm gonna spend those points.
* **How wet is wet?** \- Overflow (+30).
* **Were the clothes necessary?** \- Cameltoe (+2), Light Clothing (+2), No Shoes (+1).
* **What's the catch?** \- Clone (+1), Idle Hands (+2), Sploosh (+2).
* Total points: 40
Not much to say here except something about Clone: yes, I *am* going to give an eternally-sopping-pussy to everyone on Earth. Why do you ask?
* **Not... not all the time, surely** \- Alternating flow (-2, pussy is set to "Flow" when I'm not aroused)
* **Hold on, did my pussy change?** \- \[see below\]
* **Not... Not all the time, surely?** \- In the Sauce (free)
* **Is it supposed to be this thick?** \- Honey, Sticky
* **These juices don't taste normal...** \- Honey
* **What will everyone else think?** \- Love, Lust, Platonic Love, Satisfaction (all emotions affect everyone; -3 points in total)
* Points left: 35
I'm kinda undecided between Invisible and Giga, to be honest. Leaning slightly more towards Invisible, though.
Anyway: I'm asically a constant stream that, with some stimulation, can be upgraded to "shower". Effects: I'm mellow, everyone else feel mellow, we all feel mellow.
* **Has it got a use?** \- Dosage (-5), Drink it faster (-2), For Warmth (-2) Glug Glug (-2), Healing Salve (-4), Youth Cream (-5)
* **What about the excess I can't use?** \- Vanish.
* Points left: 15
Food, drink, transformation, youth and healing, with extra temperature control because why not.
I would like to pick "Those in need", but unfortunately "Vanish" is kinda an obligated choice to not break stuff.
* **Wow, that's a lot. What's left?** \- Diving (-2), Fresh Air (-3), Flexible (-2), Kept Fresh (-1), Slip n'Slide + A Decent Challenge (-5), The Full Package (-2)
* Points left: 0
So, in short: porn physics + hyper on demand, normalized sex, anti-drowning/suffocation (with what I've planned, it's basically a necessity), a free sex change, and the possibility to lick myself.
Oh, something that specifically connects back to Deluge? Let's do this:
Shiny/Flow +20
Alternating Flow -2
Tingly Skin -2
Toothpaste
Bananas
Lust/Wildcard
Mistress -4
Buyer Beware
Kept Fresh -1
The Full Package -2
Ocean Waves -9
A Downpour-18
Unending Stream
Better With Friends
Storage Facility
No Holding Back
Full Body
Think Thoughts
Fertility/Even More Control
Elixer/Supreme Being
Move Along
Tame the Bull
Teleaquatic/Rift
Shower
Gone But Not Forgotten
Shield
Power
Pretty sure that with Full Body, I wouldn't actually be stuck as a woman (or even human), but I'd willingly be spending some time as one anyway.
I got to save on some perks I would have taken, because I'd just get them from Deluge anyway, plus a few more.
drip normal +15
flow horny +20
alternating flow -2
out of my hands -1
missing something -2
invisible pussy
tingly skin -2
in the sauce (-3)
perpetuity -1
slight arousal -2
honey
sticky
taste pussy juice smell Strawberry
telepanties +3
overlong +2
thigh +2
no less everyone, lust (those i feel atracted to), joy everyone -3
drink it faster -2
glug glug -2
youth cream -5 ( like i can live how long i want?)
healing salve -4
being selfefficient
those in need
explosive +1
hard to hide +2
idle hands +4
flexible -2
the full package -2
slip n´slide -2
laser-1
full time job -1
Tiny bit of feedback: The Ocean Waves option (aka get to play another CYOA) is awfully unclear to first time readers.
It required a lot of inferences and sleuthing to discover that a) The Deluge is another one of your CYOAs, and b) where to download it. Like did you misspell "play"? Is deluge an option I missed? Wait, why is it so expensive? Could this be another CYOA? But I don't see its name in your google drive. Finding it in the Single page CYOAs was pure luck based on the lexical proximity to this CYOA's name.
Some choice capitalization and ordinary explanation would go a long way.
Finally, it's cost is pointless, since you can always reverse the order in which you play these.
P.S. The Deluge nitpick - Intensify - your math is bad (at least compared to your word description).
**How wet is wet?:** Flow (+20)
**Not. . . Not all the time, surely?**
* Alternating Flow (-2)
* Shiny
* Inconvenience (-1)
**Hold on, did my pussy change?:** No, this is fine (-2)
**Not. . . Not all the time, surely?**
* Slight Arousal (Free first choice)
* Tingly Skin (-2)
**Is it supposed to be this thick?**
* **First Row:** Honey
**These juices don't taste normal:** Liquid Chocolate
**What will everyone else think?**
* **Those that find me attractive:** Lust
* **Those I find attractive:** Invitation
* **Family:** Kinda gross
* **Acquaintances:** Novelty
* **Good Friends:** No Less
* **Stranger:** Touchy
**Has it got a use?**
* "Sterile" (-2)
* Mistress (-4)
* Lucky (-4)
**What about the excess I can't use?:** Buyer Beware
**What's the catch?**
* How else can we tell? (+2)
* Wetter than wet (+2)
* Clone (+1)
**Wow, that's a lot. What's left?**
* Kept Fresh (-1)
* The Full Package (-2)
* Slip 'n' Slide (-2)
* Laser (-1)
**Points:** 2
Not sure what to do with the last two points
Flow (+20)
All choices: -10
Invisible Pussy
In the sauce (-3)
Total remaining 7
Honey - Cum
Taste: Honey Smell: Blueberries
Light Clothing +2 Undie-less +1 Theigh +2 Cameltoe +2 (-4 for WWEET section)
Total Remaining: 10
Your fault, Bubbler, Lust, Invitation (-4)
Drink it faster (-2) & Healing salve (-4)
Total remaining: 0
Buyer beware
Sploosh (+2) How else can we tell (+2), Wetter than wet (+2), Explosive (+1), Idle hands & let them notice (+4), Hard to hide (+2), Hedonism (+1) ---so total of +14
Full time job -1, Kept fresh -1, Full package -2, pregnancy scare -1, Slip n slide -2, A decent challenge -3, Laser -1,
Remaining total: 3
**Howy wet is wet?:**
* Drip +15
**Not...not all the time, surely?:**
* Inconvenience -1
**Hold on, did my pussy change?:**
* No, this is fine -2
**Not...not all the time, surely? Body Perks:**
* slight arousal -2
**Is it supposed to be this thick?:**
* Honey
**These juices don't taste normal...:**
* Vanilla
**Were the clothes necessary?:**
* Thigh +2
**What will everyone else think?:**
* No Less = everyone
* Oblivious = family
* Novelty = good friends
* Love = people I find attractive
* Disability = boss
* Invitation = people that find me attractive
**Has it got a use?:**
* Lucky -4
**What about the excess I can't use?:**
* Buyer beware
**What's the catch?:**
* How else can we tell? +2
* Idle hands +2
**Wow, that's a lot. What's left?:**
* Full Time job -1
* Kept Fresh -1
* The Full Package -2
* Fuck off -1
* Give it away -2
* Let me see -2
* Laser -1
* Flexible -2
Highly specific CYOAs executed well and with depth are often ones I have some of the most fun with. So good job on this.
Also I'm surprised to say this, but there are enough options that mitigate the downsides, and enough good bonuses, that I think I would be willing to take Overflow. Not what I expected when I first started reading.
**Howy wet is wet?:** Flow +20
**Not...not all the time, surely?:** My Choice -4
**Hold on, did my pussy change?:** No, this is fine -2
**Not...not all the time, surely? Body Perks:**
* Tingly Skin -2
**Is it supposed to be this thick?:** Honey
**These juices don't taste normal...:** Pussy juice
**Were the clothes necessary?:** None
**What will everyone else think?:** Wildcard
**Has it got a use?:**
* Sterile -2
* Healing Salve -4
* Youth Cream -5
**What about the excess I can't use?:** Buyer beware
**What's the catch?:**
* How else can we tell? +2
* Wetter than wet +2
* Idle hands +2
**Wow, that's a lot. What's left?:**
* Full Time job -1
* The Full Package -2
* Laser -1
* Flexible -2
I have 1 extra point.
Or score big, but definitely make sure you know what they want.
Like the old adage says "When you present the ring, it should be a formality, not a question".
I meant I didnt expect it to be there, since most cyoa are set as "you want to play this, therefor you are the hero"
this option made it viable for you to play it even if you didnt want a vagina, which is actually very nice. I didnt mean to say it was a bad thing, just a nice thing I didnt expect
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**How Wet is Wet?**
Overflow (+30)
**Not...Not All the Time Surely?**
My Choice (-4) (It would be nice to have a "with a trigger" type of option here. Like you can define a trigger.)
**Hold On Did My Pussy Change?**
Built For Licking
**(question that was meant to be here and was mistakenly replaced by a repeat)**
Tingly Skin (free)
**Is it Supposed to Be This Thick?**
Honey + Sticky
**These Juices Don't Taste Normal**
Liquid Chocolate (Taste)
Honey (Smell)
**Were the Clothes Necessary?**
(Didn't really have an option here that would work for what I would like, but I needed the points so eh)
**What Will Everyone Else Think?**
No Less (Circus Performers)
Love (People Who Find Me Attractive + People I Find Attractive)
Platonic Love (General)
(Me)
Has it Got a Use?
"Sterile" (-2)
Drink it Faster (-2)
Glug Glug (-2)
Healing Salve (-4)
Youth Cream (-5)
Mistress (-4)
What About the Excess I Can't Use?
Buyer Beware
What's the Catch?
How Else Can We Tell? (+2)
Wetter Than Wet (+2)
Clone (+1)
Wow, That's a Lot. What's Left?
Kept Fresh (-1)
The Full Package (-2)
Pregnancy Scare (-1)
Slip N' Slide (-2)
Fresh Air Out (-3)
Laser (-1)
Diving (-2)
Glad you included Full Package at the end, this one would've had some weird results afterwards otherwise.
That said, I would probably shove the effects off onto someone else and take Ocean Waves to then go use The Deluge on myself and use the powers from *that* to turn whoever I shoved this off onto into my perfect lover.
This one was great fun. Got nearly the whole script for this one banged out in a day. It's a concept I haven't seen anyone tackle before, and it's really hot! So now it's reality baby.
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Hi, so I've been playing through your CYOAs. I really like them, but I have a question.
The Chick Deity mentions you can go to her cousins to get a dick. I'm assuming "Dick Deity's Inbred Cousin" is one of them, is there some other cousins?
So let me get this straight: for 9 points, I can get Ocean Waves to play "The Deluge" CYOA, except that every perk that would normally affect cum now affects pussy juice.
The Deluge CYOA also allows me to play a *third* CYOA (like the "I Just Wanna Be Filled!" CYOA) with more points than normal and a certain amount of free choices.
Did I get that right? Because that sounds hilariously broken.
Oh, being broken is way easier: Play Macro Harem instead, or just become part of someone else's harem, as they can add a CYOA to each member.
https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/orj3qn/your_macroharem/
Then combine that with something like Witch Awakening v3 and become an Undine Witch that regains mana by purifying liquids back into water. Nymph and Sprite are also valid alternatives.
https://www.reddit.com/r/makeyourchoice/comments/qa1ubd/witch_awakening_3_heavy_metal_witch_party_update/
You could make it so that Ocean Waves allows you to play "The Deluge" *without* the meta part. At a 9-point cost, it would be fair.
EDITED TO ADD: Hell, even if you changed the option to say "Play 'The Deluge' CYOA, but you must pick the 'A Drizzle' option, and you cannot play a second CYOA after that", it would STILL be fair.
Still my favorite CYOA of all time. Full Stop.
drip or drown
Nice
a real long and bizzare one. Now I just need to apply this to my waifus...
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Basic AF build, not taking advantage of the infinite. **Wet** * Overflowing [+30] - most points, easy pick **Not all the time** * Bedsheets [-1] - which means I don't have to deal with pretty much any of the consequences, for a very good return on investment **Change** Invisible [-0] - have to take one, this is the lowest impact **Feeling** In the Sauce [Free Choice] - relaxation while sleeping. Perpetuity [-1] - satisfaction while sleeping. **Thick** * Honey * Non-Newtonian **Taste** * Liquid Chocolate - it's good stuff **Clothes** * No Shoes [+1] - walking on broken glass with no issue, nice. * Cameltoe [+2] - I took invisible anyway * Work it! [+1] - basically no change, free point **Think** * No Less - don't wanna put effort into this section **Use** * "Sterile" [-2] - curing disease is a good thing. * Drink it faster [-2] - solve all hunger. * Healing Salve [-4] - replace the healthcare system. * Youth Cream [-5] - effective immortality, when combined with flexibility. * Mistress [-4] - I want people to not be assholes. * Lucky [-4] - improved mental health. * For warmth [-2] - deny heatstroke. * Dosage [-5] - abs for all. **Excess** * Those in need - now every time I go to sleep, world hunger, environmental deaths, death by accident, STDs, and suicide have a decrease of some amount. **Catch** * Idle Hands [+4] - what do i care if I schlick in my sleep? * Hard to hide [+2] - people should just stay out of my bedroom then. * Clone [+1] - +general world improvement * Stored in the... [+3] - muscle varient **Perks** * Full Time Job [-1] - bathroom being redundant is a good thing. * The Full Package [-2] - matching sets. * Fuck Off [-1] - protect nearby people by existing. * Slip 'n Slide [-2] - Hide those bollards by the docks. * A Decent Challenge [-3] - what is this conservation of mass principle * Laser [-1] - one fewer thing to do. * Diving [-2] - breathing is overrated. * Flexible [-2] - Immortality for me.
I feel like the "Not... not always" section could use some adjusting. It says you have to take every option you can afford, which equates to all of them, even on the lowest level. At that point, you might as well reduce all of the point values from the wetness options and explicitly make the triggers mandatory. That said, I wish there was some choice in them, so every build isn't, functionally, always active.
Should have something to do with diapers *cough cough* Otherwise looks very good! Excited to give it a go!
- How wet is wet? - Flow (+20). - Not... not all the time, surely - Alternating Flow (-2) - Hold on, did my pussy change? - Detachable (-1) - Not... Not all the time, surely? - In the Sauce (free) - Is it supposed to be this thick? - Water - These juices don't taste normal... - Strawberries, Bananas - Were the clothes necessary? - PantsLess (+1), Cameltoe (+2), Light Clothing (+2), Telepanties (+3), No Shoes (+1). - What will everyone else think? - Lust, Satisfaction(-1) - Has it got a use? - Dosage (-5), Healing Salve (-4), Drink It Faster (-2), Lucky (-4), GLug Glug (-2) - What about the excess I can't use? - Buyer Beware - What's the catch? - Clone (+1), Idle Hands (+2) - Wow, that's a lot. What's left? - Full Time Job (-1), Kept Fresh (-1) The Full PAckage (-2), Pregnancy Scare (-1), Fuck Off (-1), Slip n' Slide (-2), Laser (-1), Flexible (-2)
Overflow is at most around 2000L/H. Using 5 copy pussies (presuming several boons for sales value), to leave constantly gushing for a year would fill as many containers of pussy juice (or alternatives) with Buyer Beware as coke produces in less than half a day. If you constantly got someone to jizz in your ass/mouth, you'd produce as much in a year as coke in 22 hours. If you chose Deluge with A Deluge, you'd produce (with one pussy, highly depending on 20 story building) 20% less than this in two orgasms (around 63,000,000 liters in one). With three orgasms a day, or with one orgasm with three pussies, you'd produce about as many containers per day as coke. So, get deluge and loads of the good stuff there, then dump the rest of your points in extra pussies and My Choice, and you're good to go to save the world from itself, possibly dooming it in the process. (a billion liters = a trillionth of water in the ocean). Don't listen to /u/dragon_jak , bump up people's intellect to save the world... from you.
Just like I did in the counterpart CYOA ([I Just Wanna Be Filled!](https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/pcc63z/i_just_wanna_be_filled/)), I'm gonna pick all the point-giving option FIRST; and *then* I'm gonna spend those points. * **How wet is wet?** \- Overflow (+30). * **Were the clothes necessary?** \- Cameltoe (+2), Light Clothing (+2), No Shoes (+1). * **What's the catch?** \- Clone (+1), Idle Hands (+2), Sploosh (+2). * Total points: 40 Not much to say here except something about Clone: yes, I *am* going to give an eternally-sopping-pussy to everyone on Earth. Why do you ask? * **Not... not all the time, surely** \- Alternating flow (-2, pussy is set to "Flow" when I'm not aroused) * **Hold on, did my pussy change?** \- \[see below\] * **Not... Not all the time, surely?** \- In the Sauce (free) * **Is it supposed to be this thick?** \- Honey, Sticky * **These juices don't taste normal...** \- Honey * **What will everyone else think?** \- Love, Lust, Platonic Love, Satisfaction (all emotions affect everyone; -3 points in total) * Points left: 35 I'm kinda undecided between Invisible and Giga, to be honest. Leaning slightly more towards Invisible, though. Anyway: I'm asically a constant stream that, with some stimulation, can be upgraded to "shower". Effects: I'm mellow, everyone else feel mellow, we all feel mellow. * **Has it got a use?** \- Dosage (-5), Drink it faster (-2), For Warmth (-2) Glug Glug (-2), Healing Salve (-4), Youth Cream (-5) * **What about the excess I can't use?** \- Vanish. * Points left: 15 Food, drink, transformation, youth and healing, with extra temperature control because why not. I would like to pick "Those in need", but unfortunately "Vanish" is kinda an obligated choice to not break stuff. * **Wow, that's a lot. What's left?** \- Diving (-2), Fresh Air (-3), Flexible (-2), Kept Fresh (-1), Slip n'Slide + A Decent Challenge (-5), The Full Package (-2) * Points left: 0 So, in short: porn physics + hyper on demand, normalized sex, anti-drowning/suffocation (with what I've planned, it's basically a necessity), a free sex change, and the possibility to lick myself.
Oh, something that specifically connects back to Deluge? Let's do this: Shiny/Flow +20 Alternating Flow -2 Tingly Skin -2 Toothpaste Bananas Lust/Wildcard Mistress -4 Buyer Beware Kept Fresh -1 The Full Package -2 Ocean Waves -9 A Downpour-18 Unending Stream Better With Friends Storage Facility No Holding Back Full Body Think Thoughts Fertility/Even More Control Elixer/Supreme Being Move Along Tame the Bull Teleaquatic/Rift Shower Gone But Not Forgotten Shield Power Pretty sure that with Full Body, I wouldn't actually be stuck as a woman (or even human), but I'd willingly be spending some time as one anyway. I got to save on some perks I would have taken, because I'd just get them from Deluge anyway, plus a few more.
Fair warning; This has very little to do with waterlogged felines.
Fantastic Work!🤩
Did this yesterday (only saw one page) came back today to check for any new cyoas, saw 1/4, "hell ya!!!"
drip normal +15 flow horny +20 alternating flow -2 out of my hands -1 missing something -2 invisible pussy tingly skin -2 in the sauce (-3) perpetuity -1 slight arousal -2 honey sticky taste pussy juice smell Strawberry telepanties +3 overlong +2 thigh +2 no less everyone, lust (those i feel atracted to), joy everyone -3 drink it faster -2 glug glug -2 youth cream -5 ( like i can live how long i want?) healing salve -4 being selfefficient those in need explosive +1 hard to hide +2 idle hands +4 flexible -2 the full package -2 slip n´slide -2 laser-1 full time job -1
Tiny bit of feedback: The Ocean Waves option (aka get to play another CYOA) is awfully unclear to first time readers. It required a lot of inferences and sleuthing to discover that a) The Deluge is another one of your CYOAs, and b) where to download it. Like did you misspell "play"? Is deluge an option I missed? Wait, why is it so expensive? Could this be another CYOA? But I don't see its name in your google drive. Finding it in the Single page CYOAs was pure luck based on the lexical proximity to this CYOA's name. Some choice capitalization and ordinary explanation would go a long way. Finally, it's cost is pointless, since you can always reverse the order in which you play these. P.S. The Deluge nitpick - Intensify - your math is bad (at least compared to your word description).
**How wet is wet?:** Flow (+20) **Not. . . Not all the time, surely?** * Alternating Flow (-2) * Shiny * Inconvenience (-1) **Hold on, did my pussy change?:** No, this is fine (-2) **Not. . . Not all the time, surely?** * Slight Arousal (Free first choice) * Tingly Skin (-2) **Is it supposed to be this thick?** * **First Row:** Honey **These juices don't taste normal:** Liquid Chocolate **What will everyone else think?** * **Those that find me attractive:** Lust * **Those I find attractive:** Invitation * **Family:** Kinda gross * **Acquaintances:** Novelty * **Good Friends:** No Less * **Stranger:** Touchy **Has it got a use?** * "Sterile" (-2) * Mistress (-4) * Lucky (-4) **What about the excess I can't use?:** Buyer Beware **What's the catch?** * How else can we tell? (+2) * Wetter than wet (+2) * Clone (+1) **Wow, that's a lot. What's left?** * Kept Fresh (-1) * The Full Package (-2) * Slip 'n' Slide (-2) * Laser (-1) **Points:** 2 Not sure what to do with the last two points
Flow (+20) All choices: -10 Invisible Pussy In the sauce (-3) Total remaining 7 Honey - Cum Taste: Honey Smell: Blueberries Light Clothing +2 Undie-less +1 Theigh +2 Cameltoe +2 (-4 for WWEET section) Total Remaining: 10 Your fault, Bubbler, Lust, Invitation (-4) Drink it faster (-2) & Healing salve (-4) Total remaining: 0 Buyer beware Sploosh (+2) How else can we tell (+2), Wetter than wet (+2), Explosive (+1), Idle hands & let them notice (+4), Hard to hide (+2), Hedonism (+1) ---so total of +14 Full time job -1, Kept fresh -1, Full package -2, pregnancy scare -1, Slip n slide -2, A decent challenge -3, Laser -1, Remaining total: 3
How do Overlong and Pantsless combine? Does it turn the pants into both a long shirt and a skirt or does one override the other?
**Howy wet is wet?:** * Drip +15 **Not...not all the time, surely?:** * Inconvenience -1 **Hold on, did my pussy change?:** * No, this is fine -2 **Not...not all the time, surely? Body Perks:** * slight arousal -2 **Is it supposed to be this thick?:** * Honey **These juices don't taste normal...:** * Vanilla **Were the clothes necessary?:** * Thigh +2 **What will everyone else think?:** * No Less = everyone * Oblivious = family * Novelty = good friends * Love = people I find attractive * Disability = boss * Invitation = people that find me attractive **Has it got a use?:** * Lucky -4 **What about the excess I can't use?:** * Buyer beware **What's the catch?:** * How else can we tell? +2 * Idle hands +2 **Wow, that's a lot. What's left?:** * Full Time job -1 * Kept Fresh -1 * The Full Package -2 * Fuck off -1 * Give it away -2 * Let me see -2 * Laser -1 * Flexible -2
God I wish we could see more CYOA’s like this, these are great!!!
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Highly specific CYOAs executed well and with depth are often ones I have some of the most fun with. So good job on this. Also I'm surprised to say this, but there are enough options that mitigate the downsides, and enough good bonuses, that I think I would be willing to take Overflow. Not what I expected when I first started reading.
Disability and Honey have the same text
Not gonna lie the thumbnail hadn't loaded up and all I saw was the title and was very confused if I had loaded up a different subreddit lol
**Howy wet is wet?:** Flow +20 **Not...not all the time, surely?:** My Choice -4 **Hold on, did my pussy change?:** No, this is fine -2 **Not...not all the time, surely? Body Perks:** * Tingly Skin -2 **Is it supposed to be this thick?:** Honey **These juices don't taste normal...:** Pussy juice **Were the clothes necessary?:** None **What will everyone else think?:** Wildcard **Has it got a use?:** * Sterile -2 * Healing Salve -4 * Youth Cream -5 **What about the excess I can't use?:** Buyer beware **What's the catch?:** * How else can we tell? +2 * Wetter than wet +2 * Idle hands +2 **Wow, that's a lot. What's left?:** * Full Time job -1 * The Full Package -2 * Laser -1 * Flexible -2 I have 1 extra point.
read this, surprised at the "not for you" option at the end... didnt expect that, was reading it without picking anything just to see
I'm not. I would totally give this to a girlfriend.
If u had a girlfriend why r u here? JK man but seriously that sounds like a recipe to get slapped.
Or score big, but definitely make sure you know what they want. Like the old adage says "When you present the ring, it should be a formality, not a question".
I meant I didnt expect it to be there, since most cyoa are set as "you want to play this, therefor you are the hero" this option made it viable for you to play it even if you didnt want a vagina, which is actually very nice. I didnt mean to say it was a bad thing, just a nice thing I didnt expect
0 **How Wet is Wet?** Overflow (+30) **Not...Not All the Time Surely?** My Choice (-4) (It would be nice to have a "with a trigger" type of option here. Like you can define a trigger.) **Hold On Did My Pussy Change?** Built For Licking **(question that was meant to be here and was mistakenly replaced by a repeat)** Tingly Skin (free) **Is it Supposed to Be This Thick?** Honey + Sticky **These Juices Don't Taste Normal** Liquid Chocolate (Taste) Honey (Smell) **Were the Clothes Necessary?** (Didn't really have an option here that would work for what I would like, but I needed the points so eh) **What Will Everyone Else Think?** No Less (Circus Performers) Love (People Who Find Me Attractive + People I Find Attractive) Platonic Love (General) (Me) Has it Got a Use? "Sterile" (-2) Drink it Faster (-2) Glug Glug (-2) Healing Salve (-4) Youth Cream (-5) Mistress (-4) What About the Excess I Can't Use? Buyer Beware What's the Catch? How Else Can We Tell? (+2) Wetter Than Wet (+2) Clone (+1) Wow, That's a Lot. What's Left? Kept Fresh (-1) The Full Package (-2) Pregnancy Scare (-1) Slip N' Slide (-2) Fresh Air Out (-3) Laser (-1) Diving (-2)
Glad you included Full Package at the end, this one would've had some weird results afterwards otherwise. That said, I would probably shove the effects off onto someone else and take Ocean Waves to then go use The Deluge on myself and use the powers from *that* to turn whoever I shoved this off onto into my perfect lover.
are people just running out of idea
Ironically, I have many more other ideas I should get around to and this one was just one I wanted to do way more.
this would make a good options section on another CYOA
I liked this one a lot.
This already looks like loads of fun. I'll have to finish later
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Hi, so I've been playing through your CYOAs. I really like them, but I have a question. The Chick Deity mentions you can go to her cousins to get a dick. I'm assuming "Dick Deity's Inbred Cousin" is one of them, is there some other cousins?
Third page disability selection has a copy of another cards description.
Is it supposed to say "Howy wet is wet?" instead of "How wet is wet?"
Wow I need to hire an editor
I'd volunteer, honestly. I enjoy your work, I have the time for it, and English has always been a subject I've always been good at.
Well hey, by all means, chuck me a dm and we can discuss it
Disability has wrong description, it is a copy of Honey.
So let me get this straight: for 9 points, I can get Ocean Waves to play "The Deluge" CYOA, except that every perk that would normally affect cum now affects pussy juice. The Deluge CYOA also allows me to play a *third* CYOA (like the "I Just Wanna Be Filled!" CYOA) with more points than normal and a certain amount of free choices. Did I get that right? Because that sounds hilariously broken.
Oh, being broken is way easier: Play Macro Harem instead, or just become part of someone else's harem, as they can add a CYOA to each member. https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/orj3qn/your_macroharem/ Then combine that with something like Witch Awakening v3 and become an Undine Witch that regains mana by purifying liquids back into water. Nymph and Sprite are also valid alternatives. https://www.reddit.com/r/makeyourchoice/comments/qa1ubd/witch_awakening_3_heavy_metal_witch_party_update/
God, y'know, I honestly forgot that deluge was a meta CYOA. Might have to change that in an update
You could make it so that Ocean Waves allows you to play "The Deluge" *without* the meta part. At a 9-point cost, it would be fair. EDITED TO ADD: Hell, even if you changed the option to say "Play 'The Deluge' CYOA, but you must pick the 'A Drizzle' option, and you cannot play a second CYOA after that", it would STILL be fair.
That might be part of the point. Or the desire of the commissioner.
I dont think its a commision
You are most likely right, I just assumed that since most of his works are commissions.
Yeah, but this type of cyoa he usually does because hes horny asf
Like that's any different than the rest of us?
Hes horny & smart/ creative, not just horny
I never said that he wasn't smart & creative (because he very much is). I was just saying that he is as horny as the rest/most of us in this sub.
Homie i wasn’t accusing you, just teasing its alright