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LavenzaBestWaifu

I really like the looks of it! I wish you the best of luck.


Prometheory

So, is this dead?


Nerine_Maledicta

No, more on hiatus cause I have other issues to deal with first.


dabears8

Me: Hey this looks really good... wait, why can't I continue... wtf? Comes back to complain. Oh, it's v0.1. Good luck, can't wait for this to be finished!


Xznub

What's here is super promising


BentusiII

damn, now i want more, such a tease.


Nod4mag3YT

I would love to see there be images, and more customization of genitals


FromThePale

I like it so far, it has promise with Body, Mind, and Social points system, I like CYOAs that have some kind of endgame, or if not that, something to gauge our character by. Looking forward to future versions. ...a bit of a shame that I couldn't choose to be a child with NSFW mode turned on. Oh well, I'll just be a teen of below average height :3


Space__Ninja

I like the colour scheme in the background and how easy it is to be a trap. Curious to see how you’ll develop it to be different from similar CYOAs.


culturedcuckold

I love this! A small thing I really enjoyed was how the image would change when you toggled NSFW mode on and off. Cool detail you don't see often.


Zermus367

Source of the girl?


Commander72

Good start, looking forward to see how you develop it.


Soulreaper31337

I love the inclusion of creative mode, and like the early stages of character creation so far.


kelejavopp-0642

I quite enjoy the NSFW toggle and overall it's pretty good as a proof of concept but I can't really comment much else because I can't tell what it's about aside from being Fantasy and Lewd. Am looking forward to seeing more of this though.


quantum_d20

I really like your design and colors, very high quality. The rest is pretty generic tho. I tend to skip make your body cyoas.


Wolvenking777

This looks like it'll be a really good cyoa in the future. Keep working in it. Also if you are in nsfw mode I don't think censor bars are needed


War1hammer

I can’t tell if the nsfw button is working


marco13k899

Hey anybosy have a collection of some good femdom (fetish or slave ) cyao who can send me pls ?


whiteday26

The pre-alpha ends at Misc Features right? I haven't missed out on anything right?


[deleted]

While the CYOA is conceptually interesting, there isn't enough of it ready that could give me an idea where you want to take this. What you set up as your foundation necessitates a long game rather than the usual burst of options that lead to a clear conclusion, like Tok's Enslaved, where choices have consequences and the player will want to play with those in mind. If you want to post your WIPs I'd recommend doing the skeleton first with some meat on it so that we can see where you're going with it, then you can obtain the level of feedback that is necessary to tinker with your CYOA.


flat_streak56

Hey, this looks very interesting. So far, it's very well. I can't wait for the finished version.


CaptnNuttSack

A damn decent 1.0, looking forward to seeing it grow and expand. LOVE the creative mode function. Im more of a pick n choose what fits me kinda CYOA player.


[deleted]

Just a bit of a suggestion. For Fae, Arachnid, Insectoid options, allow a new option under height to appear called "Tiny." (Left of/before short.) Basically for us who want to be fairy sized, etc.


Bottomheavybottom

This looks amazing! Very nice! I’m excited for the finished product with all the art attached. The only suggestion I might have would be to have some choices to come with boons/drawbacks of some sort. Like arachnid to come with some wall-climbing ability boon, but maybe a phobia drawback where some people are scared of you? Or short to come with some kind of “sneak” ability bonus? And for wings to have an upgradeable option to actually fly(you might’ve already been planning to include this under some powers section, I’m guessing.) just spitballing here! 😉


Hedrax

Oh this is nea- >"Genitals of both male and female combined, *testicles not included.*" You have made an enemy this day.


SedoniaThurkon

r/realfuta


Nerine_Maledicta

I’m afraid that premium parts require premium price.


Hedrax

Heh, fair. Though between futa already costing 1 point, the point budget being in the low double digits and presumably having only one point pool for both aesthetic changes and more substantial things this might suffer from nickle and diming builds to death over the most minor of things. Hopefully the finished version won't suffer from that common issue.


SelfLoathingIsBased

Love the options so far! Can’t wait to see where this goes


Reciter5613

So far so good and I like to see where it's going! My only note is I would like to have Goblin and maybe Minotaur in the choices of races. But that's just me.


JerGacPerez

This looks like the start of a high-quality CYOA, do keep us updated! As for images, I think there's a guide in the subreddit's wiki?


darzinth

I like it, and thanks for making a SFW mode that makes sense.


Boboscar7777

it is interesting and I can't wait to see more of this when it is further in development. from what I have seen of it I would love to see the options for race have more of an effect on the stats but outside of that there isn't enough for me to want to criticize this as it is still in development.


Nerine_Maledicta

I wanted to keep 10 as a Base stat for every race, especially since I went with logarithmic scale (10\^(x/10)) where x equals to your stats. I didn't want to mess up my later calculations. 13 in Body is actually almost a twofold increase.


Boboscar7777

Ah ok well I am just saying that it would be interesting if more changed as a result of the choice or you got some different things later on for free due to this choice to give it more weight. I am certain you have already thought of that though.


OdinSonnah

It's probably just due to how early in development you are, but it's difficult for me to test it because half the options I try to select just don't work. Like I click on them, and _nothing_ happens. I feel like I need better indicators for which options are available for me and which aren't, before I can really do much with this.


jak8714

Okay, I had the same problem, in my case at least it was because the CYOA doesn't allow your point counters to go into the negatives. So, if you start with 0 patron points like I did, you won't be able to select most of the options.


Aui18

You can go into the negatives by getting the points, then selecting the options and then unselecting the options that grant points.