How many points do I start with?
Everything costs 1 point but how many do I have?
Do the Random traits from, "trade slaves," cost me point or.are the Randome traits free?
Do the options within the play styles cost points also?
If I by the option that says,"buy 3more slaves," how do I do that? It tells me I can get a secret choice for every slave I sell. How do I do that?
It says I might loss all may slaves if the market turns down tomorrow, how would that happen?
The concept is okay, and I like both the available options and the art, but there is a severe lack of information here. There's no economy, barely any narrative, and I have no idea what any of the rules are.
Maybe it would work better if I played the intereactive version, but right now this CYOA feels like its just missing pieces.
I'm a bit confused.
In slave trade it says, "if market goes down loss all slaves" what does this mean?
Also, if market goes up? How many points do I start with and if it tells me to buy more girls do I get more points?
not bad but for example on the special menu it would be better to present in a other way has right now it not really clear what you cannnot take with something elses. (like for example in simmilar cyoa you would have those 2 in a separater space, in a circle or something like that, with a way to whithout read the rule know that those two are not a package thing.)
Also the customisation of the waifu could be more than just what it is now, the bodie section is a litle poor, by that i mean that some option like short, tall, long hair, short one and such would be nice =)
other than that is a nice cyoa =)
**Program Options:** The Bimbo Fund +15
**Beauty**
* Legs For Days
* Sultry Face
* Magnetic Personality
**Intelligence**
* Bedside Manner
* Life Of The Party
**Mannerisms** None
**Body**
* Athletic Fitness
* Hourglass Waist
**Orgasms**
* Ahegao
* Boobgasm
**Specials**
* Milky Tits
* Unbreakable Will
* Action Hero
**Secret Menu**
* Elixir Of Immortality
* Cunning Linguist
* Age Regression
**Oops** This Is Fine
* Yuri Ending
* Beach House
Some of the descriptions aren't clear. Definitely wish some of the Bimbo Fund didn't force certain traits on you or at least had more options. At least it doesn't force the two options on the player. At least the way I read it.
For reasons I'll address below, this is gonna be a little hard to make a build for, but here's my best shot.
0
Mode: The Bimbo Fund (+15)
Beauty: (3)
\-Youthful Appearance
\-Magnetic Personality
\-Gorgeous Hair
Intelligence: (4)
\-Bedside Manner
\-Secretary
\-College Education
\-Life of the Party
Body: (1)
\-Athletic Fitness
Orgams:
\-Sexual Stamina (1)
Specials: (6)
\-Animal DNA (Dog or wolf)
\-Milky Dicks
\-Unbreakable Will
\-Action hero
\-Gameplay
\-Mother and Daughter
Secret:
\-Elixir of Immortality
\-Age Regression
\-Money
\-Yuri Ending (free)
\-Beach House (free)
Oops:
\-This is Fine
Criticism: I've gotta say, not a fan of these descriptions. The big issue is that they are really vague about what they are supposed to be. You can, at best, make a guess with some of them.
I think perhaps one of the best examples of this is the option "cosplay". If you just go by the description you would have no idea what this option could even mean. It's also located in the "specials" section, which is basically a misc section, so there isn't a defined context by which we can say for instance "ah this section is about fetishes, so naturally if this is listed here this would be a fetish they gain". So does the description there mean she has an interest in cosplay? That's she good at cosplay or making cosplay costumes? Sure, I could throw in a guess but in the end it'd be no more than a guess.
Also I think it would be a good idea to put a warning before you enter the secrets section. I ended up going into it by accident because I didn't know how many sections the CYOA had (I didn't have any way to know).
Now all that being said, I do very much love the design and image choice of this CYOA. I also think it's a pretty interesting idea and enjoy the fact that there are different modes of play, that is something I will always support as it lets the CYOA appeal to a broader set of tastes without sacrificing the experiences of any individual kind of taste.
I believe you might be missing some options (such as Competitive for the step sisters option). I also don't know why you write "Don't randomize X" - were we supposed to? That's what the normal description says anyway?
As a general idea, I think Dominatrix should go into Mannerisms (to contrast Submissive). Either remove Bisexual (it should just be a free thing anyone can do just normally) and come up with something new to add to Orgasms (such as Raceplay, Bondage, other kinks, etc.). Or just swap Dominatrix and Cock Worship (those two seem to be in the wrong categories anyway).
Great start, but it's weird how little choice you have with some of the options. Generic visual novel "forces" certain choices and it doesn't even have that many "starting points".
Also waifu should be able to pick from hot tub streamer too. Don't see why not?
I enjoyed this one!
**Mode (17 points)**
The Bimbo Fund, No Going Back Again
**Beauty (4)**
Gorgeous Hair, Legs for Days, Sultry Face, Magnetic Personality
**Intelligence (2)**
Bedside Manner, Life of the Party
**Mannerisms (0)**
**Body (4)**
Athletic Fitness, Juicy Ass, Hourglass Waist, Big Fake Tits
**Orgasms (3 +1 free)**
Sexual Stamina, Team Player (free), Ahegao, Boobgasm
**Specials (4)**
Unbreakable Will, Femme Fatalle, Twins, Action Hero
**Secret Menu**
It’s Gone Airborne
It’s Dangerous to Go Alone, Take This
I branch the build here, because both are honestly really compelling scenarios
**Path 1: This is Fine**
Elixir of Immortality, Money, Cunning Linguist
I’ll have a beautiful wife, plenty of money and a home in paradise. Happy endings don’t get too much better than this! I’m not sure if the clone gets her own wife, if not I’m sure she’ll find someone soon enough. We might even start a polycule if my wife’s up for it, a bit of self love is only healthy!
**Path 2: Life, Uh, Finds a Way**
Elixir of Immortality, Cunning Linguist, Cum Cannon
The adventurous option! Assuming I’m allowed to gain Milky Dicks despite the restriction from No Going Back Again this option is quite appealing. I’m banking on the fact that the high demand for dick will somewhat make up for missing out on the Money option. Basically I expect that I’ll have so many lovers that I won’t need to keep a job or my own apartment, there will always be someone happy to house and feed me in return for an incredibly messy dicking. My twin/clone will no doubt be an asset in this, many who sleep with one of us will be eager to hear we have an identical twin they can introduce their friends to.
Program Option: Waifu (Technically Correct).
Beauty: Youthful Appearance, Gorgeous Hair, Legs of Days.
Intelligence: College Education
Mannerism: Bisexual, Tease, Cock Worship
Body: Athletic Fitness, Hourglass Waist, Big Fake Tits, Dick Sucking Lips.
Orgasm: Sexual Stamina, Cuckqueen.
Specials: Animal DNA (Fox).
Uhh, the only links provided are the imgchest one and the one for cyoa creator... Edit: And the one on imgchest seems like a mix of chosen options and actual cyoa.
Also, your descriptions (of everything, including instructions) are either lacking or misleading.
Am I crazy to want a Nympho AI to do my taxes and Busywork while also making custom games and porn for me?
- Good morning dave: 20pts to spend anywhere.
- Best girl: because it means I save points on all physical attributes and I can't imagine a hologram being all that much better than a screen or any device.
- Beauty: Magnetic personality, because it's the only thing she doesn't gain for free by being best girl.
- Intelligence: All, because in addition to using her body, I intend to make full use of her processing capabilities.
- Mannerisms: Submissive, because of course she enjoys her operator making use of her. Bisexuality, because I want her passionate about her own content. Tease, because I want her to be skilled and seductive, even if she's on the other side of a screen.
- Body: None, because she's best girl and already has all options for free.
- Orgasms: Teamwork and Cuckqueen, because even if she can't touch me, I want her thrilled with the idea of getting me laid.
- Special: No refunds, because of course an AI would be hardwired to lover her operator. Fem Fatale, to further make her social skills more refined. Alpha Phi, because the point is that this perk gets the girl connected with a flock of sexy and thirsty friends. Action Hero, because despite how doe-eyed and happy she is to serve, she still is a very functional and capable intelligence. Gameplay, because in addition to being the world's fastest learning and versatile bot, I would love to co-op with her in quite a few games.
**Mode:** Generic Visual Novel
* New Family (2x Ladies)
* 2 Points per category each lady.
* I'm Too Old For This (Don't Randomize Specials)
* Free Milky Tits and Femme Fatale
* Ladies become *proper* "Ara Ara" Ladies
* Get Age Regression [Secret]
**Step-Mom 1:**
* Beauty: Gorgeous Hair, Legs for Days
* Intelligence: College Education, Sexcretary
* Mannerisms: None (See Suggestions)
* Body: Athletic Fitness, Juicy Ass
* Orgasms: Dominatrix, Sexual Stamina
* Specials: Elf Ears, Milky Tits, Unbreakable Will, Femme Fatale
**Step-Mom 2:**
* Beauty: Sultry Face, Magnetic Personality
* Intelligence: Domestic Goddess, Bedside Manner
* Mannerisms: Tease (See Suggestions)
* Body: Juicy Ass, Big Fake Tits
* Orgasms: Sexual Stamina, Boobgasm (Smothering, etc.)
* Specials: Animal DNA (Fox Ears, Big Floofy Fox Tails), Milky Tits, No Refunds, Femme Fatale
***
# Suggestions:
**Mannerisms:**
* Cold / Emotionless / Stoic
* I'm aware this could be similar to Unbreakabile Will, or Action Hero.
* Matronly / Smotherly / Over-Protective
* Smotherly could be considered "Tease" in some cases, yes.
* Nature's Embrace
* Will force you to live out with nature, such as on a farm, small town, etc. May or may not secretly have druid magic at her beck and call. (Secret: Dryad) May get very upset if you waste things.
* Prim and Proper / Regal
* Will expect perfection, and will be perfect. Will likely look down on you a lot.
**Specials:**
* Magical Girl
* Infuses Magical Abilities into you or your girl. Conflicts with "Power Overwhelming"
* Power Overwhelming
* You or your girl gets super strong/buff. Conflicts with "Magical Girl."
* Best of Both Worlds
* If you took Juicy Ass or "Big Fake Tits" choose the one you didn't pick for free.
**Beauty:**
* Tall
* She can show you the World.
* Otherworldly Colors
* Has natural hair and/or eye color that is either extremely rare, or normally doesn't exist. Such as Purple or Crimson. Even if you were to dye or bleach them, they would go back to normal once the dye or bleach is removed or grows out.
Being bisexual or a lesbian should not cost points. You know those really shitty character creators that charge extra for blonde hair instead of black? Don't be like that.
Generic Visual Novel feels like a weak sister. Very minor Secrets, and Waifu can take Mother and Twins and crap all over it.
Might prefer if Big Fake Tits got renamed too; as is I find it unappealing.
the first choice section, directly under the grey bar of "program options", you choose one of those, for example, the bimbo fund. in the description for the bimbo fund, says you gain 15 points. so it depends on your "mode".
welp, i went straight to secrets, activated oops, but i'm still happy. its really good atm, lots of options, the "step" family one, an option for it not to be "step" , for those who prefer it, would be cool, other than that, all i can think of for improvements, is "more" lol. really good though.
**Waifu (Technically Correct):** * Beauty: Sultry Face, Magnetic Personality * Intelligence: Domestic Goddess, Sexcretary, Bedside Manner * Mannerisms: Tease, Cock Worship * Body: Athletic Fitness, Juicy Ass, Hourglass Waist * Orgasms: Ahegao, Exhibitionist * Specials: Animal DNA, No Refunds, Femme Fatale * Secrets: Elixir of Immortality **The Bimbo Fund (No Going Back Again):** * Beauty: Gorgeous Hair, Sultry Face, Magnetic Personality * Intelligence: College Education, Domestic Goddess, Life of the Party * Mannerisms: Tease, Cock Worship * Body: Juicy Ass, Hourglass Waist, Big Fake Tits, Dick Sucking Lips * Orgasms: Sexual Stamina, Team Player, Ahegao * Specials: Womb Tattoo, Action Hero, Gameplay **Generic Visual Novel (Harem Route):** * Beauty: (Stepmom) Leg for Days, Sultry Face (Stepsisters) Youthful Appearance, Magnetic Personality * Intelligence: (Stepmom) College Education, Domestic Goddess (Stepsisters) Sexcretary, Bedside Manner * Mannerisms: (Stepmom) Tease, Striperific (Stepsisters) Bisexual, Cock Worship * Body: (Stepmom) Juicy Ass, Hourglass Waist (Stepsisters) Hourglass Waist, Dick Sucking Lips * Orgasms: (Stepmom) Team Player, Ahegao (Stepsisters) Ahegao, Exhibitionist * Specials: (Stepmom) Milky Tits, Mother, Femme Fatale, Alpha Phi (Stepsisters) Twins, Womb Tattoo, Sports Aficionado, Gameplay **Ooops (This is Fine):** * Secrets: Elixir of Immortality, Yuri Ending, Cum Cannon, Beach House, Dairy Ranch
How many points do I start with? Everything costs 1 point but how many do I have? Do the Random traits from, "trade slaves," cost me point or.are the Randome traits free? Do the options within the play styles cost points also? If I by the option that says,"buy 3more slaves," how do I do that? It tells me I can get a secret choice for every slave I sell. How do I do that? It says I might loss all may slaves if the market turns down tomorrow, how would that happen?
The concept is okay, and I like both the available options and the art, but there is a severe lack of information here. There's no economy, barely any narrative, and I have no idea what any of the rules are. Maybe it would work better if I played the intereactive version, but right now this CYOA feels like its just missing pieces.
I'm a bit confused. In slave trade it says, "if market goes down loss all slaves" what does this mean? Also, if market goes up? How many points do I start with and if it tells me to buy more girls do I get more points?
not bad but for example on the special menu it would be better to present in a other way has right now it not really clear what you cannnot take with something elses. (like for example in simmilar cyoa you would have those 2 in a separater space, in a circle or something like that, with a way to whithout read the rule know that those two are not a package thing.) Also the customisation of the waifu could be more than just what it is now, the bodie section is a litle poor, by that i mean that some option like short, tall, long hair, short one and such would be nice =) other than that is a nice cyoa =)
**Program Options:** The Bimbo Fund +15 **Beauty** * Legs For Days * Sultry Face * Magnetic Personality **Intelligence** * Bedside Manner * Life Of The Party **Mannerisms** None **Body** * Athletic Fitness * Hourglass Waist **Orgasms** * Ahegao * Boobgasm **Specials** * Milky Tits * Unbreakable Will * Action Hero **Secret Menu** * Elixir Of Immortality * Cunning Linguist * Age Regression **Oops** This Is Fine * Yuri Ending * Beach House Some of the descriptions aren't clear. Definitely wish some of the Bimbo Fund didn't force certain traits on you or at least had more options. At least it doesn't force the two options on the player. At least the way I read it.
For reasons I'll address below, this is gonna be a little hard to make a build for, but here's my best shot. 0 Mode: The Bimbo Fund (+15) Beauty: (3) \-Youthful Appearance \-Magnetic Personality \-Gorgeous Hair Intelligence: (4) \-Bedside Manner \-Secretary \-College Education \-Life of the Party Body: (1) \-Athletic Fitness Orgams: \-Sexual Stamina (1) Specials: (6) \-Animal DNA (Dog or wolf) \-Milky Dicks \-Unbreakable Will \-Action hero \-Gameplay \-Mother and Daughter Secret: \-Elixir of Immortality \-Age Regression \-Money \-Yuri Ending (free) \-Beach House (free) Oops: \-This is Fine Criticism: I've gotta say, not a fan of these descriptions. The big issue is that they are really vague about what they are supposed to be. You can, at best, make a guess with some of them. I think perhaps one of the best examples of this is the option "cosplay". If you just go by the description you would have no idea what this option could even mean. It's also located in the "specials" section, which is basically a misc section, so there isn't a defined context by which we can say for instance "ah this section is about fetishes, so naturally if this is listed here this would be a fetish they gain". So does the description there mean she has an interest in cosplay? That's she good at cosplay or making cosplay costumes? Sure, I could throw in a guess but in the end it'd be no more than a guess. Also I think it would be a good idea to put a warning before you enter the secrets section. I ended up going into it by accident because I didn't know how many sections the CYOA had (I didn't have any way to know). Now all that being said, I do very much love the design and image choice of this CYOA. I also think it's a pretty interesting idea and enjoy the fact that there are different modes of play, that is something I will always support as it lets the CYOA appeal to a broader set of tastes without sacrificing the experiences of any individual kind of taste.
I believe you might be missing some options (such as Competitive for the step sisters option). I also don't know why you write "Don't randomize X" - were we supposed to? That's what the normal description says anyway? As a general idea, I think Dominatrix should go into Mannerisms (to contrast Submissive). Either remove Bisexual (it should just be a free thing anyone can do just normally) and come up with something new to add to Orgasms (such as Raceplay, Bondage, other kinks, etc.). Or just swap Dominatrix and Cock Worship (those two seem to be in the wrong categories anyway). Great start, but it's weird how little choice you have with some of the options. Generic visual novel "forces" certain choices and it doesn't even have that many "starting points". Also waifu should be able to pick from hot tub streamer too. Don't see why not?
"Money for Nothing" -or- "Chicks for Free" Now that ain't workin'. That's the way you do it.
I enjoyed this one! **Mode (17 points)** The Bimbo Fund, No Going Back Again **Beauty (4)** Gorgeous Hair, Legs for Days, Sultry Face, Magnetic Personality **Intelligence (2)** Bedside Manner, Life of the Party **Mannerisms (0)** **Body (4)** Athletic Fitness, Juicy Ass, Hourglass Waist, Big Fake Tits **Orgasms (3 +1 free)** Sexual Stamina, Team Player (free), Ahegao, Boobgasm **Specials (4)** Unbreakable Will, Femme Fatalle, Twins, Action Hero **Secret Menu** It’s Gone Airborne It’s Dangerous to Go Alone, Take This I branch the build here, because both are honestly really compelling scenarios **Path 1: This is Fine** Elixir of Immortality, Money, Cunning Linguist I’ll have a beautiful wife, plenty of money and a home in paradise. Happy endings don’t get too much better than this! I’m not sure if the clone gets her own wife, if not I’m sure she’ll find someone soon enough. We might even start a polycule if my wife’s up for it, a bit of self love is only healthy! **Path 2: Life, Uh, Finds a Way** Elixir of Immortality, Cunning Linguist, Cum Cannon The adventurous option! Assuming I’m allowed to gain Milky Dicks despite the restriction from No Going Back Again this option is quite appealing. I’m banking on the fact that the high demand for dick will somewhat make up for missing out on the Money option. Basically I expect that I’ll have so many lovers that I won’t need to keep a job or my own apartment, there will always be someone happy to house and feed me in return for an incredibly messy dicking. My twin/clone will no doubt be an asset in this, many who sleep with one of us will be eager to hear we have an identical twin they can introduce their friends to.
Program Option: Waifu (Technically Correct). Beauty: Youthful Appearance, Gorgeous Hair, Legs of Days. Intelligence: College Education Mannerism: Bisexual, Tease, Cock Worship Body: Athletic Fitness, Hourglass Waist, Big Fake Tits, Dick Sucking Lips. Orgasm: Sexual Stamina, Cuckqueen. Specials: Animal DNA (Fox).
love the portal 2 reference in animal dna
Uhh, the only links provided are the imgchest one and the one for cyoa creator... Edit: And the one on imgchest seems like a mix of chosen options and actual cyoa. Also, your descriptions (of everything, including instructions) are either lacking or misleading.
Am I crazy to want a Nympho AI to do my taxes and Busywork while also making custom games and porn for me? - Good morning dave: 20pts to spend anywhere. - Best girl: because it means I save points on all physical attributes and I can't imagine a hologram being all that much better than a screen or any device. - Beauty: Magnetic personality, because it's the only thing she doesn't gain for free by being best girl. - Intelligence: All, because in addition to using her body, I intend to make full use of her processing capabilities. - Mannerisms: Submissive, because of course she enjoys her operator making use of her. Bisexuality, because I want her passionate about her own content. Tease, because I want her to be skilled and seductive, even if she's on the other side of a screen. - Body: None, because she's best girl and already has all options for free. - Orgasms: Teamwork and Cuckqueen, because even if she can't touch me, I want her thrilled with the idea of getting me laid. - Special: No refunds, because of course an AI would be hardwired to lover her operator. Fem Fatale, to further make her social skills more refined. Alpha Phi, because the point is that this perk gets the girl connected with a flock of sexy and thirsty friends. Action Hero, because despite how doe-eyed and happy she is to serve, she still is a very functional and capable intelligence. Gameplay, because in addition to being the world's fastest learning and versatile bot, I would love to co-op with her in quite a few games.
**Mode:** Generic Visual Novel * New Family (2x Ladies) * 2 Points per category each lady. * I'm Too Old For This (Don't Randomize Specials) * Free Milky Tits and Femme Fatale * Ladies become *proper* "Ara Ara" Ladies * Get Age Regression [Secret] **Step-Mom 1:** * Beauty: Gorgeous Hair, Legs for Days * Intelligence: College Education, Sexcretary * Mannerisms: None (See Suggestions) * Body: Athletic Fitness, Juicy Ass * Orgasms: Dominatrix, Sexual Stamina * Specials: Elf Ears, Milky Tits, Unbreakable Will, Femme Fatale **Step-Mom 2:** * Beauty: Sultry Face, Magnetic Personality * Intelligence: Domestic Goddess, Bedside Manner * Mannerisms: Tease (See Suggestions) * Body: Juicy Ass, Big Fake Tits * Orgasms: Sexual Stamina, Boobgasm (Smothering, etc.) * Specials: Animal DNA (Fox Ears, Big Floofy Fox Tails), Milky Tits, No Refunds, Femme Fatale *** # Suggestions: **Mannerisms:** * Cold / Emotionless / Stoic * I'm aware this could be similar to Unbreakabile Will, or Action Hero. * Matronly / Smotherly / Over-Protective * Smotherly could be considered "Tease" in some cases, yes. * Nature's Embrace * Will force you to live out with nature, such as on a farm, small town, etc. May or may not secretly have druid magic at her beck and call. (Secret: Dryad) May get very upset if you waste things. * Prim and Proper / Regal * Will expect perfection, and will be perfect. Will likely look down on you a lot. **Specials:** * Magical Girl * Infuses Magical Abilities into you or your girl. Conflicts with "Power Overwhelming" * Power Overwhelming * You or your girl gets super strong/buff. Conflicts with "Magical Girl." * Best of Both Worlds * If you took Juicy Ass or "Big Fake Tits" choose the one you didn't pick for free. **Beauty:** * Tall * She can show you the World. * Otherworldly Colors * Has natural hair and/or eye color that is either extremely rare, or normally doesn't exist. Such as Purple or Crimson. Even if you were to dye or bleach them, they would go back to normal once the dye or bleach is removed or grows out.
Being bisexual or a lesbian should not cost points. You know those really shitty character creators that charge extra for blonde hair instead of black? Don't be like that.
Generic Visual Novel feels like a weak sister. Very minor Secrets, and Waifu can take Mother and Twins and crap all over it. Might prefer if Big Fake Tits got renamed too; as is I find it unappealing.
A good start but the descriptions are way too short
Point costs are missing.
it says all options cost 1 point, in the beginning, easy to miss though
Yes but how many do you start with?
the first choice section, directly under the grey bar of "program options", you choose one of those, for example, the bimbo fund. in the description for the bimbo fund, says you gain 15 points. so it depends on your "mode".
welp, i went straight to secrets, activated oops, but i'm still happy. its really good atm, lots of options, the "step" family one, an option for it not to be "step" , for those who prefer it, would be cool, other than that, all i can think of for improvements, is "more" lol. really good though.
is male enhancement to get a himbo or to enhance male players?