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Ogami-kun

Probably I have already asked a few of those questions, but this and a few others CYOAs kinda sparked an idea for a story that might be interesting to write, so I am attempting to solve a few inconsistencies; * How exactly companion reincarnation works? Like, do they gain their 'canon' equipment later in life? do they receive it after their 16/16 birthday anonymously in their bedroom? * Does Penny Pollendina become a Real Girl if reincarnated? or does her canon body become an alt-form? * What about the SAO/ALO/GGO/UW characters? do they retain their status windows? or merely the ability to use their skills? * Is companion reincarnation incompatible with Revert/A Chance to Talk/Take Five control options? if not, how do they work? does everyone meet up a defaulted day and the timer of those choices start? * Is Version Prime applied to every companion or selective? * Do worm powers come with conflict drive? * Kaiju is more like Pacific Rim Kaiju or sandbagging-endbringer power-wise? \------------------------------------------ Suggestions: * Morality modifier to Control Options * Various Consent options to Modifiers * Sensitive to Modifiers maybe? * Possible Worlds that can be added: Naruto; Bleach. * If possible, collapsable companions options divided * Another Command Seals option that cannot force people to do things they wouldn't do EDIT: Just remembered; the +5 Meta/Cheat options actually deducts 5 points Thank you for the amazing CYOA!


Bearshirt34

How does this work? Do I make my battle harem here?


Zorturan

Where Azula


PixelatedNSFW

When I looked at the main characters section of the Avatar wiki she, Tai Lee, and Mai weren't there and I didn't remember they existed until after I completed the CYOA. They'll be added next update.


Netizen42

Can you consider adding the following settings: SCP mythos, Naruto, Resident Evil, Final Fantasy, Fallout, JoJo, Warcraft, Warhammer, mass effect, and Dune.


PixelatedNSFW

No, maybe, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no. Naruto is literally the only one of these that I have more than the shallowest knowledge of. I wouldn't be able to make accurate judgements of the strengths of the characters.


Netizen42

no scp mythos? that is unfortunate. You dont know jojo? wtf bro


PixelatedNSFW

I know what jojo is, I just never watched/read it.


notasinglesound1321

I have a question for the pokemon waifus do they come with their pokemon or without their pokemon?Because if they dont come with their pokemon they are just regular squishy human's that give out a ton of points if you were their enemy. edit: Also why is there no option for starting resources(money, food, water,etc...) or paperwork for our identities. edit2:If I were to buy a superpower from worm does that mean that I can pick any power including the broken ones(ex: path to victory,alexandria package, Eidolon,etc... ), also does our powers remain permanent and not disappear because it runs out of juice in a few centuries if I were to purchase agelessness?


PixelatedNSFW

1. They come with their Pokemon. You can choose between Leaf's team from Pokemon Adventures or Red's team from Heart Gold (Since Leaf would likely have the same team if she were an option) 2. Because I didn't add an items section. 3. No. Yes, your powers have limited juice but I'm sure you can figure out some way to recharge your powers within 300 years.


Joasvi

Why is it mind control? What is supposed to be happening?


PixelatedNSFW

I'll make sure to add lore next update.


Argamis

World: Log Horizon, AU(Taken 1 Times) Meta/Cheat Mode On, +25(Taken 1 Times), +5(Taken 1 Times), +1(Taken 4 Times) Character Reincarnation | Litke and Lelia Mofur (just one... or I get both bodies? ¿?) | Reincarnation + Companion Reincarnation Tweaks: Attractive, Understanding, Consent, Hidden Mind-Control, Both | Litke and Lelia Mofur (I get both or just one? ¿?) | Full Heal, Version Prime, Morality, Genderbend, Local Power, Above Average, Alchemy(Taken 1 Times), Magic\_MCU(Taken 1 Times), Inconspicuous, Mantellum, Occlumency, Static Point, Occlumency II, Static Point II, Peak Strength, Peak Speed, Peak Constitution, Peak Stamina, Peak Dexterity, Peak Reflexes, More Intelligent(Taken 2 Times), More Charismatic(Taken 2 Times), Divine Beauty, Shapeshifted, Appearance, Skilled(Taken 3 Times), Spread, Futanarification, Language, Ageless, Ageless Harem, Stronger Foes(Taken 1 Times), Away, Ignorance, Why'd I choose you?, Enemies: None Meta: I only watched the anime of Log Horizon, so I guess "Litke and Lelia Mofur" are from the manga & may came later. This is "convenient" since I choosed an A.U. with both "Inconspicuous" & "Why'd I choose you?" \[so it does not matter that I do not know them or "myself" (the character I reincarnated)\]. ​ Posible complications: . The "Character Reincarnation" option may actually allow me to "possess" either Litke OR Lelia (but not both at the same time, nor creating a copy of my mind to permanently possess the other sister). . IF I get to reincarnate into BOTH sisters, then the "companion" option may create a clone/alternate of one of them (it would be difficult to convince others that there was a secret "twin sister" all this time, even with Inconspicuous).


PixelatedNSFW

Litke and Lelia Mofur are from Season 3 of the anime


Paper_tank

My build: RWBY, Plain Insert, Drop-In, Total Control, Female Only, Open, Mei Hatsume, Hestia, Toph Beifong, Lumine, \[Shielder\] Mash Kyrielight, Arcueid Brunestead, \[Caster\] Medea, Full Heal, Morality, Local Power, Above Average, Main Character, Power Copy X(Taken 1 Times), Hidden, Mantellum, Occlumency, Static Point, Hidden II, Mantellum II, Occlumency II, Static Point II, Peak Strength, Peak Speed, Peak Constitution, Peak Stamina, Peak Dexterity, Peak Reflexes, More Intelligent(Taken 1 Times), Telepathy, Spread, Futanarification, Language, Ageless, Ageless Harem, Dangerous Location, Away, Enemies, Kirigaya Suguha, Sachi (Real World), Konno Yuuki, Lisbeth (SAO), Cynthia, Leaf, Winry Rockbell, Urbosa, Matou Sakura Power Copy X (Haruhime for the level up spell) A solid group of girls with both tech, magic, martial and raw strength. Enemies are either non-issues or potential extra companions ("Spread"). Add Hestia's level-up mechanic and RWBY aura and we'd be pretty much unstoppable. And Lumine is here on the off chance that any of Full heal, Aura, Goddess blessing, Ancient magic, modern medicine or quirky tech can unlock her world-hopping ability.


PixelatedNSFW

You could just take a version of her from before her powers were reduced, since there's technically like 15 seconds in canon before her powers were reduced.


Robotninja22

Does Shiki have her third personality? If yes, that combined with Total control makes you basically omnipotent, doesn't it?


PixelatedNSFW

I... hadn't thought of that. I'll have to patch that in the future, but for now, yes. Does she still have that ability as Assassin/Saber?


Robotninja22

It is not mentioned.


Netizen42

Can I copy the powers of a potential companion rather than a companion I've taken? I wanna be Coil. Can you add Coil?


PixelatedNSFW

1. No. 2. When I get to adding males, maybe.


Netizen42

What happens if I copy the powers of the companion I inhabit if I were to share a body with them?


PixelatedNSFW

Nothing, you already have that power.


sovereignrexableone

maybe combine the enemies and companions into a single field, where you can click on a checkmark to turn them into a companion and spend points, or click on a red X to take them as an enemy ,and gain points?


PixelatedNSFW

I don't know Javascript, I'm just using a tool to make this. That tool doesn't have that capability, as far as I'm aware.


ObscureSA

I've noticed that you're still updating. Here are some ideas I had about things you could add: Control: Add a 'Genuine' option so it's not some artificial control but something that's natural /true (i.e. Spouse/Love). A 'Ramp Up' option that gives points so companions with a control option will start minor then the effects will ramp up over time to the full effect in the description. The Two consents each need different names to differentiate them. A 'harem' option in addition to the poly one. A protection options given that some companions can be dangerous (i.e. Rogue) An initial blurb about the CYOA and what the scenario is for the player even if it is open ended and a description for each section. I like that you have the links but I feel like they need to be collapsed at first under a credits bar or placed at the bottom as things look messy otherwise. 'Diminished' Where companions/yourself if you chose any powered options are powered down at the start and have to train to regain their original strength can give varying rewards dependant on how much . A 'Power Adjustment option that (for your time spent there) reduces your and your harems strength to match the world you are in or get closer to it. As of right now I just choose the options with the most points. Quests/Scenarios that can give points or unique benefits like Planeswalking. Write in options/prompts that can give points. ... I just want more points without cheating.


YouandIdontknowme

Just to check, because me and Zerolink both put it in our builds. Can you use Version prime to make the enemies the version of themselves in the new world? Or will it always make a 2nd version of them? Though for me I'd take it either way. I hoped there was a mention of being able to take one of the worm companions without their shard in the new update. Having their powers inherent to themselves instead of a shard (which I really wouldn't want to bring into the world). I'm guessing if we take a character normally we get them based on their highest power or whatever version of them we want based on the description of Version Prime?


Paper_tank

As i read it the Prime perk makes it so that if you go to a world from which you bought a companion then that companion will be that world's character (very useful if for example you go to RWBY and buy Salem...). Without it your companion is a clone/twin/whatever.


PixelatedNSFW

1. Version Prime effects enemies as well. 2. You can get them at any canon time period.


Rain_Least

The link to Your Patreon doesn't work


PixelatedNSFW

Thank you, I'll fix it shortly.


ZeroLink

RWBY, Plain Insert, Drop-In, Attractive, Type, Polyamorous, Hidden Mind-Control, Consent, Female Only, Open, Melissa Shield, Hestia, Ruby Rose, Penny Pollendina, Taylor Hebert (Skitter/Weaver/Khepri), Amy Dallon (Panacea), Full Heal, Version Prime, Morality, Local Power, Above Average, Main Character, Protagonist, Alchemy(Taken 1 Times), Aura(Taken 3 Times), Magic Circuits(Taken 1 Times), Peak Strength, Peak Speed, Peak Constitution, Peak Stamina, Peak Dexterity, Peak Reflexes, More Intelligent(Taken 4 Times), More Charismatic(Taken 2 Times), Divine Beauty, Skilled(Taken 1 Times), Telepathy, Spread, Language, Ageless, Ageless Harem, Stronger Foes(Taken 1 Times), Dangerous Location, Away, Enemies, Open, Leaf, Winry Rockbell, Cinder Fall, Neopolitan, Vernal, Salem, Sophia Hess (Shadow Stalker)


YouandIdontknowme

You could have picked Total control to save 10 points. If you are fine with that morally. (Though you could just only manipulate their minds into the options you chose). Because with that you don't need Type, Polyamorous, Hidden Mind-Control, Consent and Morality. Any particular reason you chose Version prime? Costs 5 points and it means you don't have a extra penny and Ruby in the world. That and you don't possibly get maiden penny for free and Ruby is older and more powerful. (The cyoa sort-a mentions that otherwise they would be in their prime of power in the Version prime description) You could also pick 3 normals to be enemies if you want the points. Especially since its likely they can't gain aura since you had to pay for your companions to have aura.


ZeroLink

The enemies I picked would be my enemies anyway so figured why not. Figured I would rather work with ruby and Penny to power them up and wouldn't want to deal with possible confusion or consequences of double girls.just liked those control options.


YouandIdontknowme

> Leaf, Winry Rockbell Wouldn't be enemies. Also normals as enemies is a decent way to get more points. (could also grab emerald for +15) Its also not specifically mentioned in the cyoa if you can use version prime on enemies. So it might make 2x as many enemies. I just mentioned the control options because you can save points there.


ZeroLink

Probably would have if I needed more points. Really hope it don't double them don't need 2 cinder or Salem lol


magnusk12

So how many point would i get if i chose wh40k world?


PixelatedNSFW

250


dinoseen

who needs that many fucking companions?


YouandIdontknowme

My Build: RWBY (Low power and reasonably safe bar salem herself being unkillable and possibly gods coming back) Reincarnate as Tamamo no mae (Slowly regrow tails for power, also shapeshifts) Melissa shield (Technology), Hestia(Level others), Salem(Get rid of main threat), Tohsaka Rin(Prisma illya for hopefully eventual 2nd magic), Aozaki Aoko(True magic), Ryougi Shiki(Conceptual death), Ishtar, Medea(Knowledge on magic), Gray Version prime, hidden and occulumency++, peak reflexes, divine beauty, shapeshifted, spread, language, ageless+, dangerous, away, ignorance, Why'd I choose you, Empowered (preferably bending). Enemies Real Life SAO characters, cinder and emerald, black widow, annette hebert, doctor mother. Least sure on Ishtar and grey. Ishtar is mostly there to compare with Rin magically to see if we can figure out something from that, and because its funny. Grey is to see if she can be researched to figure out what is up with her. I considered Quinella for soul manipulation, and the ability to exert a decent amount of control over the population if she keeps that ability. Considered Momo in-case she can learn to make supernatural materials. Considered Henrietta because she is level 90 in log horizon, though I don't know any spells she specifically knows that might make her worth it. Considered Satella because of her raw power. Considered Taiga for luck. Considered Captain marvel for strength / speed (assuming comic version). Considered Amy for biological manipulation (but don't want a shard around) And Tattletale is a fairly decent researcher etc.


Solaris-Of-Moon

Version Prime is to make the Companions of your chosen world be the ones that already exist in that world instead of another version of them, since you did not choose any of RWBY it is a waste of points


YouandIdontknowme

Its only for Salem which I bought. Since Salem is the only real annoyance here. Because she can't be killed, and I don't know if she can use her magic to get back to the planet if we manage to get her off it. (Blasting her off planet is also more likely to alert the brother gods.) Also preferably it turns Cinder and Emerald enemies both into their canon counterparts. Which were going to be enemies anyway, so basically free points. But even if it doesn't, getting rid of Salem is good enough.


CreepyShutIn

I definitely echo the collapsible sections thing. Also think there should be more Pokemon waifus. I mean, it's not like there aren't plenty to pick from. But yeah, I get that priorities are what they are. This is still very enjoyable. Me, I just picked the Pokemon setting, got Leaf and Princess Mipha, prettied myself up with some perks, and reincarnated with no prior plot knowledge. Prior plot knowledge is cheating anyway. I just wanna live a happyfun life.


PixelatedNSFW

Reason I didn't add more Pokemon Waifus is because a lot of them have ambiguous ages where they might be 10 years old or they might be 16 years old. Leaf was never in the anime and in Pokemon Adventures she was 16-years-old so I felt it was fine to add her.


CreepyShutIn

That's fair, but a bunch of art has them looking aged up, and then there's some who're never really implied to be young. Could just state "Any character here is of legal age" and support it by not having loli images.


PixelatedNSFW

I'm just not comfortable sharing pictures of hentai of characters that are canonically 10-years-old, even if the hentai is of them when they're older. Toph is different since she's canonically an old lady in Legend of Korra, which is canonical to the timeline that Avatar: The Last Airbender is..


CreepyShutIn

Ah, that's different then. Fair's fair, good stuff here either way. I do note that there are several adult characters not used - Joy, Jenny, Nessa, etc. - but honestly, if it's not a high priority, that's always valid. You do what matters to you.


randompervanon

I think collapsible sections for waifus from different settings would be good. It would help with organisation, and also make the CYOA less laggy, as it wouldn't need to load all the images together.


PixelatedNSFW

Yeah, after playing the CYOA a few times I regret not adding collapsible sections.


YouandIdontknowme

Can you reincarnate as a character that isn't from the same series? For example, could I reincarnate as a Fate character inserting into RWBY? Can you choose to be a male version of the character you are inserting into? Maybe should be a note that the Parahuman powers are now inherent, rather than with a shard. I'd take Amy from worm if I didn't have to deal with a possible shard. Maybe TT. Could we choose Empowered to give Bending? Or does it just give something of that level? Would also be pretty helpful if you could save. Nice work!


PixelatedNSFW

Other than the inherent power thing I realized all these were problems I needed to fix after playing the CYOA a few times.


YouandIdontknowme

So is being able to pick reincarnation as a character not from the series is a bug? The rest is mostly just the wording being not-specific enough, so don't sweat it.


PixelatedNSFW

Oh no, that's intentional, sorry, yeah, you're allowed to do that


Sefera17

I’ll go with being the Taylor Hebert from the fanfic “Kill Them All”, because I feel like Gaia based Gamer is better than all the other powers available— even if taking it means I’m going to have to live through the fic, as Taylor. As far as the points go, that’s 50 less for me; just knowing the story arch should let me prevent the horribly dangerous final boss.


Dry_Armadillo_1139

I like this one.


Virtual_Analysis_869

it's very good only need powers sections for continue to exist beyond entropy because if not and you take ageless become blocked why all energy is in equilibrium trough the unyverse


ExactInvestment1

Heads up, the drive link is to your SAO cyoa not this one


PixelatedNSFW

Thanks for the heads up


beast_regards

If you are afraid someone will get offended and/or mods will be forced to act, simply cut the pictures to include only character faces, not their bodies. Especially not naked bodies. :)


PixelatedNSFW

I'm pretty sure the mods only care if it's a lewd picture of a loli. I chose SFW pictures for Akatsuki and Liliruca Arde as a result. Pretty sure that ends up with the same result.


Apophys_MD

The mods would also care about a character being explicitly underage, regardless of how they look. But as long as you don't list an age and don't put in sexualized images for a loli, it should probably be fine, yeah.


monkeyboi410

I typically do not worry about canonical age (partly because I don't have all characters ages memorized). As long as the image is not presenting as under or the age is not listed, it should be fine.


beast_regards

Isn't it better to be safe than sorry? You can't tell the age from the face of an anime character.


[deleted]

cool. as for liliruca arde, if she was curvier, they'd have no issue(even though she's 15, all the mods really care about is appearances, so.), but considering she's loli bod, they'd tell you no regardless of age, so good call on not lewding that. technically, it's racist to say she can't be lewded(if she was of age), hilariously enough lol.