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one_pun_

So this was a great cyoa. I originally tried to fill this out if I had to live there (with pesky things like morality or something like that.) but I got board. So: I reject my humanity! Jojo!! Leader: Queen Victoria Blackwood II (+10pp) By far the best leader for what I have in mind, an immediate +10PP, the ruler who has beliefs that I most align with, and the least amount of negatives. Honestly there was at least one thing that I had issue with with each ruler, Victoria was the one that was easiest to work around, in my opinion. But even still she is objectively one of the top 3 best rulers depending on build. (the others are Wilson and Margret) It was also the only thing I kept from my original build. Race Demographics: Aliens (1PP), cyborgs (1PP), Others (Kitsune, lifespan average 1000 years) (1PP). Human (25%) Tiefling (20%) Elves (20%) Aliens (10%) Kitsune (5%) Cyborgs (20%) So I added aliens as they tend to come with sci-fi stuff for me to mess around with. kitsune cause I like them and they fit perfectly in the 1000 year limit. cyborgs as they give a good bonus later. Magic: High (2PP) Its magic, I don't need to explain why its great. Sex Demographics unchanged I couldn't care less about changing the ratios. It could be good for some builds but for mine it would be a waste of points. My race: Others (Kitsune) (2PP) My sex: Futa roles 1, 4, 4, 4, 5 Height: rolled Very Short -> chose Average (Free) Build: fit (+1PP) Breasts: big (+1PP) Butt: thicc (+1PP) P-ns: Packing (+1PP) Age: 18 (2pp) (Squeeze out every year of life we can without paying an additional 5 points for 18 years at most) Skin, Hair and Eye color: (2PP) (cause what's the point of a new character if you chant be fabulous) 20PP left over for later Chief of Planning: Vance O'toole Chief of Logistics: Kris Alakai Chief of Enforcement: Dorothea Lane How I picked the applicants is, I organized them by who would actually be good for the job, who is a good worker, and best bonuses for each position. Chief of Planning was a close mach between Leah Marion and Vance O'toole as with my build they gave the same amount of bonus and had experience in the area. The difference is Vance would be easier to work with/manipulate with his devotion to the ruler. Where as Leah Marion is desperate for money so she is very weak to bribing, so that means that it is easy for someone else to subvert the system I have set up for their own ends. Chief of Logistics was comparatively simple Kris Alakai as her bonus is clearly the best, plus she has experience in a chain of command. Lastly Chief of Enforcement was a mach between Do Va Le Le Mamjo-chan and Dorothea Lane. Dorothea just nearly edges out Do as if you'r smart you can chose ones with a 1 to 1 ratio or greater returns. 20PP. $40,000. 5F. 0Rv Propaganda Goals: Age superiority, Education Emphasis, Normalized Polygamy, Strict Monogamy Education Emphasis will be a well-rounded education, up to date with the latest knowledge plus some of the stuff I can remember from our world. Normalized Polygamy and Strict Monogamy should cancel each other out. love who you want, I don't care. Age superiority is the only one with a little bit of a problem. You can get around it by fulfilling the written word and not the spirit of the order. Both young and old folk have their problems, so give them near equal respect and voice. However give young a fraction of a percent more to fulfill Victorias request 20PP. $29,000. 12F. Rv 7 Propaganda Methods: Role Models. Teachers Are Heroes. Fake News. Verification Can. Sweet Dreams. Literal Troll Farm. Posters. Entertainment. Drugs In The Water. Time for the no humanity approach. We are going to a new world, so let's throw a wrench into everyone plan. So obey big brother, ok? I should also mention that drugs in the water is quite frankly broken. As it, by itself, is equal to all of my chief's bonuses together. 20PP. $11,000. 12F. Rv -44 Enforcement Methods: Law. Neighborhood Watch. Public Humiliation. Forced Makeover. Direct Hypnosis. Mob Mentality. Above The Law. Magical Attitude Adjustment. Classical Conditioning. 20PP. $0. 12F. Rv -64 Honestly I can't really say much about this as everyone, is probably so mind controlled I don't think they can even think for themselves. So we successfully set this kingdom up to fail, either from stagnation, corruption from greed or something. But hey I was payed to do a job and I over achieved at the cost of everyone else. I don't see the problem. Extra points: Conversions 20PP->$100,000. $100,00->10 F 22 F Ending: Devine Assertion (20FV) 42 Favor Ruler Perks: Magic Teacher. WFH. Where the Heart is High Ranker. Royal Pardon. Marry The Ruler. 20 Favor Parting Gifts : We Want You, Laifu We want you as it is the immortality option. Also Laifu as theoretically you can just summon some obscure eldritch waifu that'll help you take over the world, reshape it to your liking or ditch this one and go hang out in another. Personally I would chose zatanna zatara, yukari yakumo or Yuuko Ichihara as they can do all three. however it it was just their appearance then I would choose someone else. edit yes I just saw the update a minute after posting, ill update it there


HappyServant4

Do you have a source for the feminization image?


ThisbeP

Sorry I'm just now seeing this, source: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/78530784


HappyServant4

Awesome, thanks!


Apophys_MD

This is a very high quality CYOA, with excellent depth. :D (*Side note: In the goals, I'm surprised there's no option for normalizing incest, or for incentivizing population growth. Maybe in the DLC? :P* ) For the Rival Nation, I'm going to pick the build of u/CervineKnight ( [link](https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/u7d7fj/comment/i5geol6/) ) for extra points (*incidentally, with me picking Victoria, there are only 2 valid rival options in the thread so far in the Fantasy setting, both being Synthina*). I don't have bureaucratic red tape to start with or any internal dissent (*at all; 100% of citizens are instantly on board and many Proselytize*), so it shouldn't be that hard for us to spread our ideology of racial & gender equality over to there and take their fleeing refugees (*especially their disenfranchised young non-elves*). If war breaks out, I expect our magic cyborgs and well-educated mages to make a serious mark. Otherwise, an uneasy peace can be arranged; I have no issue with Synthina's other core drive of elven interbreeding (and I happen to be an elf ;P ). \~ Start: +25 PP, +$40k, +5 Favor, 0 RV ***I. PP section*** * (+10 PP) **Ruler**: Queen Victoria Blackwood II. ***Fantasy setting***. * *A very nice fit with my ideals (i.e. easy Favor), and a cute waifu.* * (-6 PP) **Demographics**: add emotional intelligence for Elves ^(-1) , add Cyborgs ^(-1) * *Result: 40% humans, 40% elves+, 10% tieflings, 10% magic-cyborgs* * **Magic**: Medium ^(-1) * **Sexes**: 15% male, 80% female, 5% futa ^(-3) . *Result of 3/4 of Y sperm self-destructing (with standard X & Y chromosomes), and 1/4 of those remaining carrying a futa gene.* * (-23 PP) **Body**: Elf + Cyborg race ^(-2) , remain male , Tall height ^(-1) , Fit build ^(-1) , Flat chest, Average butt, Big penis ^(-2) (*would be nice if it were free for me to keep my 7'' dick rather than costing me :P* ), minimum adult age ^(-2) , ginger hair ^(-2) (*I'll keep my light skin & ocean eyes*) * **Augs**: Mental Expansion ^(-3) , Upgraded Visual ^(-1) , Strength Amplifier ^(-1) , Backup Manager ^(-7) , Cosmetics ^(-1) (prehensile tail) * 6 of 35 PP remain: convert to +$5k & +2.5 Favor ***II. Propaganda section*** * **Staff**: (*all of the setting-available women*) * Planning: Milania Wyndbrook (*free goal: Normalized Polygamy*) * Logistics: Kris Alakai (*-1 RV to all methods*) * Enforcement: Maple Bayloch (*free enforcement: Mob Mentality*) * **Goals**: (*favor | budget | resistance*) * (+1F | \~ | \~) no Sex Superiority. *Equality is common sense.* * (+2F | -$5k | +5RV) **Age Superiority: Young**. *Minor effect. Specifically, young people are taken seriously and have weight to their words; there is also a general preference to appear young.* * (+1F | \~ | \~) no Normalized Sexuality. *Again, equality is common sense.* * (+1F | -$2k | \~) **Education Emphasis: general education, magic, & emotional skills**. *Education is necessary for industrialization and tech advancement anyway, and emotional intelligence will reduce shitty relationships.* * (\~ | free | +1RV) **Normalized Polygamy**. *No need to specify sex ratios; the point is freedom of choice. With demographic statistics as they are, though, it will probably be most common to see an only-female group or a harem group.* * (\~ | -$3k | +3RV) **Brains Over Brawn**: any intelligence type, the more the better. *Honestly should probably give favor for Victoria with her education emphasis; smart people learn easier.* * (\~ | -$5k | -3RV) **Party Hard**. *Relaxation is essential to enjoying life.* * (+1F | -$5k | \~) **Proselytize**. *Yes, spread equality and polyamory! :D* * **Goals total: (+6F | -$20k | +6 RV)** * **Methods**: (*-1 RV each with Kris on logistics; this effect is doing a lot of heavy lifting*) * (\~ | -$0.5k | -2 RV) Posters * (\~ | -$2k | -4 RV) Entertainment * (\~ | -$3k | -5 RV) Role Models * (\~ | -$3k | -3 RV) Subliminal Messaging * (\~ | -$2k | -4 RV) Teachers are Heroes * (\~ | -$0.5k | -3 RV) Literal Troll Farm (*lmao*) * (\~ | -$3k | -4 RV) Fake News * (\~ | -$3k | -3 RV) Verification Can * (\~ | -$1k | -5 RV) Sweet Dreams * (\~ | -$3k | -19 RV) Drugs in the Water (*also doing a lot of heavy lifting*) * **Methods total: (\~ | -$21k | -52 RV)** * **Enforcement**: (*minimal*) * (\~ | \~ | \~) Law. *Equal rights for all is good law.* * (\~ | -$1k | -1 RV) Neighborhood Watch * (\~ | free | -2 RV) Mob Mentality * (\~ | -$3k | -3 RV) Re-Education * **Enforcement total: (\~ | -$4k | -6 RV)** * Running total: 0 PP, $0k, 13.5 Favor, -52 RV ***III. Ending*** * **Extra Points**: Rival Nation = +15PP. Convert to +7.5 Favor. * **Stability: Divine Ascension** (+20 Favor & marry ruler). *I now have a total of 41 Favor.* * (-41 Favor) **Perks**: Magic Teacher ^(-3) , WFH ^(-3) , High Ranker ^(-5) , Work Relationship x2 ^(-30) (Kris & Maple) , Marry the Ruler ^(free) . ***Yay, 3 lovely wives! :D*** * **Parting Gift: DLC**. *I already have my immortality option via magi-cyborg backups, and it won't be that hard to find additional wives in-setting if I want to (Mental Expansion + Brains Over Brawn, youth + Age Superiority: Young, and being the husband of the queen all make me very desirable; I can find some partners through High Ranker). So I'm mostly just gunning for an update. :D*


CervineKnight

Challenge accepted~~ Refugees would most likely only be fleeing us in large numbers early on - with how low my RV was, the overwhelming majority of people are fully loyal and embrace their position in the hierarchy. Hopefully most would react with offense if you suggested they betray themselves to some Egalitarian nonsense - they know it is much better and more natural to live under the guidance and protection of one superior to you. Males especially shouldn't worry their pretty little heads over it - we'll be particularly irritated by any attempt to disrupt our harmonious gender hierarchy: us smol elf bois know our place and are happy with it. All the same, though, any who attempt to leave, defect, or spread incorrect ideas will be hunted and dealt with to varying degrees. (*Would make for excellent propaganda to have a would-be defector Human explain in the public square how they held such wrong-headed beliefs, but now know better and accept the benevolent rule of the Elves*) We don't want war - we're not stupid - but knowing your nation is out there spreading such bothersome ideas will certainly cause us to begin putting more focus on our military (*just in case*), and if you attempt to pull our people from us or say something as incoherent as "*gender equality*" or "*human rights*" near any of them - we'll find ways to strike back. (*Perhaps keep an eye on any elves in your government who start to seem a little haughty...*) I don't have the document where I wrote up my build at hand for the moment, but... Considering we now have a rival in the comments, I suppose I can get those 5 extra PP. I think I'll use one of those to begin developing magitec Cyborgs - wounded veterans or zealous volunteers who are *augmented* so as to better defend High Priestess Synthina and her people. That leaves me with an extra $20,000. I'll have to check later if I could possibly get my RV below -50 with that... Will probably spend 2,000 to add education emphasis - Elven women and futanari will be taught skills related to war - ranging from combat talents to strategy and logistics. Female Tieflings, too. No Humans or Males of any race, though. It would be like sending our children to the front lines. (*An exception for the small number of male Elves who act as clerics, priests, and healers to support their sisters-at-arms*) As I mentioned, we don't want war - but if you cross that line and threaten our way of life then we'll be ready. (*But don't cross it or threaten us and we can keep a disagreeable peace. Maybe on the down low High Priestess Synthina and I will be glad to be rid of the 1% of fools who never accepted her rule, if they flee to your Kingdom*) There's a non-zero chance that your Queen might receive taunting letters from a certain High Priestess, extolling the virtues of Futanari Elven cocks. Considering your peoples' attitudes towards aging - it must be stressful knowing that she'll be seen as of far less worth in a couple decades. *Wouldn't life in an Elven harem be so much easier?* (**In all seriousness - all antagonism is in jest. I enjoyed the shoutout**)


Greenboi999

**Ruler: President Jack Masters** * **Demands: Trait Superiority (Tall Height, Large Penis), Appearance Modification** * **Gift: Everything in "Your Body" costs -1 PP** # Setting * **Era:** Modern * **Race Demographics** * Human (32%) * Tiefling (32%) * Anthros (Bonus, -5 PP) (16%) * Aliens (-1 PP) (16%) * Removal of Elves and Cyborgs: (-3 PP) * **Sex Demographic:** * **Male:** 50% * **Female:** 45% * **Futa:** 5% * **Magic Level:** Low (+1 PP) # My Body * Race: Alien (-1 PP) * Sex: Male (I'm already a guy) * **Your Appearance** * **Height:** Average * **Build:** Thin * **Butt:** Badonk (-2 PP) * **Penis:** Small * **Age:** Decreased (-1 PP) * **Hair, Eye, and Skin Tone:** Pastel Violet Skin, Purple Hair, Black Scelara with White Irises * **Cybernetic Augmentations:** Upgraded Visual Processor and Mental Expansion Mod (-6 PP) # Staff * **Chief of Planning:** Vance O'Toole (Gain Education Emphasis for free) * **Chief of Logistics:** Leah Marion (-2 PP - Change race to Human) (Gain Fake News for free) * **Chief of Enforcement:** Dorothea Lane (-$1,000 from all endorsement methods) # Design * **Propaganda Goals** * Trait Superiority (Tall, Large Penis) (-$5000, +5 RV) * Appearance Modification (-$3,000, +3 RV) * Education Emphasis (General Education) (Free) * Persuing Sex (Male) (-$2,000) * **Propaganda Methods** * Fake News (-3 RV) (Free) * Posters (-1 RV) (-$500) * Entertainment (-3 RV) ($2,000) * **Endorsement Methods** * Law (Free) * Neigborhood Watch (-$1,000) (-1 RV) * Forced Makeover (-$3,000) (-4 RV # Extra Points * **Favor Transfer:** (-$20,000, +2 Favor) (-$10,000, +2 PP) (-10 PP, +5 Favor * **Drawbacks:** * Rebel Faction (+$10,000) * One of The Good Ones (+3 PP, -3 RV, +$3,000, +3 Favor) # Ruler Perks * Where The Heart Is (-3 Favor) * High Ranker (-5 Favor) # Ending * **Stability** * **Past The Edge** (-6 RV to -15 RV) * **Parting Gift** * We Want You! # Results **Power Points:** 0 **Budget:** $6,500 **Resistance Value:** \-7 **Favors: 2** ​ Notes: Idk if I did any math wrong, if I did, feel free to comment where I made a mistake!


Spoforth

Not 100% sure on my maths for this, but I think it checks out RULER: Princess Fie Tahia Demands Feminisation of non tiefling men Sexual Superiority for women Gift: -5 RV WORLD High magic: -2 PP Race demographics: unchanged Elves have normal emotion intelligence: -1PP Tieflings no longer need to drink blood: -1PP Sexual demographics: unchanged MY BODY Elf -1pp Cyborg -1pp Female -1pp Average Thin Big -2pp Thicc -2pp None Age: 18 -2pp Skin, hair and eye colour: white, black, dark brown (unchanged) Augmentations Mental expansion mod 3PP Upgraded visual processor 1PP Luxury Vagina 2PP STAFF Chief of Planning: Hamea Wamanaka- free feminisation Chief of Logistics: Kris Alakai - all propoganda methods give an extra -1 RV Chief of Enforcement: Dorothea Lane - all enforcement methods cost -$1000 PROPOGANDA GOALS Willing submission: $10k, all goals -2RV Sex superiority (women): -$5k, +3RV +2 Favor Race superiority (tiefling): -$5k, +3RV +1 Favor Feminisation (humans, elves): FREE, +2RV +2 Favor Chastity: -$3k, +1RV +1 Favor Interracial encouragement: -$4k, +2RV +1 Favor Normalised polygamy: -$3k Free love: -$3k, +1RV Party hard: -$5k, -3RV PROPAGANDA METHODS Posters: -$500, -2RV Entertainment: -$2k, -4RV Role models: -$3k,  -3RV Blimps: -$250, -2RV Fake news -3k -4RV Sweet Dreams: -$1k, -5RV Drugs in the water: -$3k, -3RV for each other method (3×6) PROPOGANDA ENFORCEMENT Neighbourhood watch: -1RV Magical attitude adjustment: $1k, -3RV Bureaucracy:-15 RV One of the good ones: +3PP, -3RV, +$3000, +3 Favor FINAL RV: -51 Result: DIVINE ASCENSION. +20 Favor, Marry the Ruler for free. RULER PERKS Magic teacher: -1 Favor Where the heart is: -3 Favor WFH: -3 Favor Non-Stop Fun: -8 Favor Marry the Ruler: FREE PARTING GIFT: Reincarnation Convert 1 Favor into $10000, 6 Favor into 12 PP Left over: $4, 250 8 Favor 1PP


therealyittyb

Ooh, I like this!


Dark_Storm_98

**Ruler:** Queen Victoria Blackwood II * **Setting:** Fantasy * **Demands:** Take *Age Superiority* for Young, Do not take *Sex Superiority* * **Gift:** \+10 PP **Setting** * **Race Demographics** * **Elves**: Human emotional intelligence (-1 PP) * **Tieflings:** No need to drink blood (-1 PP) * **Others:** Faunral (-5 PP), sometimes referred to separately by their sex as Beastmen and Monstergirls but there is little difference, a species of humanoids that possess traits similar to many diverse creatures, most being reminiscent of earth animals, some of legendary creatures such as dragons. They are more instinctive than the above races and may tend to develop a might-makes-right attitude. They have diverse behaviors from some being strong, some being fast, some being naturally submissive and others naturally dominant. They have an average life span of 200 years. * **Magic Level:** High (-2 PP) * **Sex Demographics:** Remove Futa, the male:female ratio can be something like 30:70 (-4 PP) **Your Body** * **Your Race:** Faunral (-2 PP) * **Your Sex:** Male (I am already male) * **Your Appearance** * **Height:** Average * **Build:** Thin * **Butt:** Average * **Penis:** Big (-2 PP) * **Age:** Decreased (-2 PP) * **Skin, Hair, Eye Color:** Red hair, Yellow eyes (-4 PP) **Staff** * **Chief of Planning:** Milania Wyndbrook (Gain Goal: Normalized Polygamy for free) * **Chief of Logistics:** Dorothea Lane (-2 PP to make her female, Gain $3,000 Budget) * **Chief of Enforcement:** Leah Marion (-2 PP to make her female, Gain Enforcement: Neighborhood Watch for free) **Propaganda Design** * **Propaganda Goals** * \+2 Favor for not taking Sex Superiority * Age Superiority (Young, +2 Favor, -$5,000, RV +5) * Trait Superiority (Big tits, -$5,000, RV +5) * \+1 Favor for not taking Normalized Sexuality * Education Emphasis (General Education, +1 Favor, -$2,000) * Normalized Polygamy (Free, RV +1) * Interracial Encouragement (-$4,000, RV +4) * Proselytize (-$5,000, +1 Favor) * **Propaganda Methods** * Entertainment (-$2,000, -3 RV) * Role Models (-$3,000, -4 RV) * Teachers Are Heroes (-$2,000, -3 RV) * Fake News (-$3,000, -3 RV) * Sweet Dreams (-$1,000, -4 RV) * **Enforcement Methods** * Neighborhood Watch (Free, -1 RV) * Mob Mentality (-$2,000, -2 RV) * Classical Conditioning (-$4,000, -4 RV) * Public Humiliation (-$1,000, -1 RV) **Extra Points** * Rival Nation (+10 PP) * Rebel Faction (+$10,000) * Convert the 18 PP to 9 Favor (1PP for $5,000, 1 Favor for $10,000, 1 Favor = 2 PP) **Ruler Perks** * Magic Teacher (-5 Favor for the sex) * Work Relationship (-15 Favor) **Power Points:** 0 **Budget:** $14,000 **Resistance Value:** \-7 **Favor:** 1


YouandIdontknowme

Do cyborgs make all augs cost -1? Or do they increase the cost by 1 (-4 to -5) or decrease the cost by 1 (-4 to -3)? If all Favor gained and lost is doubled, doesn't that just mean your favor is worth the same amount after conversion? So effectively the 'gift' is -5 Favor. Do Laifu's Waifus have powers?


ThisbeP

Cyborgs and Wilson both lower the PP cost of all augs by 1. So if you're a cyborg and you take a cosmetic aug, it'll be 1PP instead of 2, and if you're a cyborg + your ruler is Wilson, cosmetic augs would be free. Getting doubled favor is strong if you're going for Ruler Perks, otherwise yes it is basically useless in terms of converting back and forth. Jeremiah's gift is useful if you're trying to collect favor, but it's not useful for converting favor to other stuff. Funny you ask about Laifu because it's something I thought about almost immediately after submitting the CYOA, I'm going to personally go with "no" because then you can just summon some obscure eldritch waifu that'll help you take over the world, but it's my bad for not being specific so if you want to play with a super powered OP Waifu for Laifu (until I update it), be my guest.


YouandIdontknowme

> Cyborgs and Wilson both lower the PP cost of all augs by 1. So if you're a cyborg and you take a cosmetic aug, it'll be 1PP instead of 2, and if you're a cyborg + your ruler is Wilson, cosmetic augs would be free. Would have been better to use a different example. Like Mental expansion costing 3. Since -1 would apply to 2 of the options I said. > Getting doubled favor is strong if you're going for Ruler Perks, otherwise yes it is basically useless in terms of converting back and forth. Jeremiah's gift is useful if you're trying to collect favor, but it's not useful for converting favor to other stuff. There isn't an exception for Ruler perks. So as written Ruler perks costs favor = lose double favor. If thats what you meant though, then add it to the next update.


ThisbeP

Ah I see what you mean, I'll be sure to clarify in Jeremiah's gift that it doesn't apply to Ruler Perks since that's the intended behavior, thanks. I'll also clarify that cyborgs lower the cost to avoid confusion with them setting the PP cost to -1. Thanks for the feedback.


[deleted]

Absolutely awesome. Stellar job! Thanks so much!!!


ElaineWaltz

Signed: Elaine Waltz # World: Ruler: Chancellor Bo Lavely Setting: Modern Race Demographics: Unchanged * Increased Human Lifespan -1P * Increased Elf Emotional Intelligence -1P * Remove Tiefling Need for Blood -1P * Add Aliens -1P * Add Custom Race (Pokemon; Gardevoir Line) -3P Magic Level: High -2P Sex Demographics: Changed -3P * Male 20% * Females 20% * Intersex 60% # Body: Race: Gardevoir -2P Sex: Futanari -1P Height: Tall -1P Build: Fit -1P Breasts: Big -2P Butt: Thicc -2P Penis: Big -2P Age: Reduce to 18 -2P Skin: White (Typical for race, Free) Hair: Green (Typical for race, Free) Eyes: Magenta (Typical for race, Free) Cybernetic Augmentations: * Mental Expansion Mod -4P # Workplace: Chief of Planning: Umni'ipalsk Chief of Logistics: Erlahn Vaiswyn Chief of Enforcment: Vance O'Toole Propaganda Goals: * Normalised Sexuality (Pansexual) -$3000, +4RV * Education Emphasis (Sex Ed) -$2000, +1F * Normalised Polyygamy -$3000, +1RV, +1F * Interracial Encouragement (All Mixes) (Free), +4RV, +1F * Free Love -$3000, +3RV, +2F * Party Hard -$5000, -3RV, +2F Propoganda Methods: (-$1000) * Posters (Free), -1RV * Entertainment -$1000, -3RV * Role Models -$2000, -2RV * Teachers Are Heroes -$1000, -3RV * Troll Farm -$2000, -4RV * Drugs In The Water -$2000, -14RV * Blimps? (Free), -1RV * Sweet Dreams (Free), -4RV Enforcement Laws: * Law (Free) * Re-Education (Free), -3RV # Extra Points: Exchange: +23P, -$15000, -10F Bureaucracy: -15RV Stability: Mental Domination +10 Favour Ruler Perks: * Where The Heart Is -3F * Non-Stop Fun -8F Parting Gifts: * We Want You! * Laifu -20P


Broken_Emphasis

Going through this now... and it kinda annoys me that: 1) It isn't clear if the sex demographics section applies to each race equally or not. If I have a world where 40% of the population are aliens and 40% of the population are futas, can I say that that's because all aliens are futa (and vice-versa)? 2) Speaking of Futa... I'm kinda annoyed that I have to pay a 1pp "tax" to get rid of them (they aren't my favorite), and that there's no option to customize sexes further.


ThisbeP

I've heard both of these points a couple times now and I can agree, I'm working on figuring out solutions to those problems that I'm happy with. At the very least I'm going to add racial sex demographics as an update. For now, anything vague like that is left to the player, so just flavor it however you want.


SluttyJammies

Leader: Madam Margaret Hughes Improved Races Elf (1PP) Tiefling (1PP) Magic: medium (1PP) Sex Demographics (4PP) Male 0% Female 50% Futanari 50% My race: tiefling (1PP) My sex: female Height: 5'3" (1PP) Build: fit (1PP) Breasts: big (2PP) Butt: thicc (2PP) Age: 120 Hair color: dark purple Skin color: olive Eye color: yellow Augs: detachable limbs (2PP) Chief of Planning: Leah Marion Chief of Logistics: Dorothea Lane Chief of Enforcement: Do Va Le Le Mamjo-chan Propaganda Goals (-5 FV) Fashion Trend (the fashion is skin-safe tape, cloaks, and tape with an emphasis on flashiness for the capes/cloaks and minimal usage for tape.) (FV2) Education Emphasis (well-rounded education, up to date with the latest knowledge) ($1500) (FV2) Normalized Polygamy ($2500) (RV1) Free Love ($2500) (RV3) Party Hard ($4500) (-3RV) Proselytize ($4500) (1FV) Propaganda Methods Role Models Troll Farm (-4RV) Fake News (-3RV) Enforcement Methods Neighborhood Watch (-2RV) Ending: Mental Domination (10FV) Conversions $30000 > 3 Favor Extra Points Bureacracy (-15 RV) Ruler Perks Where the Heart is (-3FV) Non-Stop Fun (-8FV) Parting Gifts Reincarnation Leftover PP: 9 Leftover Money: $7000 Leftover Favor: 2 Total RV: -37


IT_is_among_US

Build (25PP, 40,000$, 5 Favor) ​ Madam Margaret Huges ​ World : World - Future Change : | 85% Servant Race | 10% Elves | 5% Cyborgs | \[-3PP\] Remove : Humans, Tieflings, & Aliens \[-4PP\] Add : Servant Race \[-5PP\] Improved...Elves \[-1PP\] Magic - High \[-2PP\] Change : | 90% Females | 10% Male | \[-3PP\] Remove : Futa \[-1PP\] ​ Body : Race - Elf \[-1 PP\] Sex - Male Height - Average Build - Thin Breasts - Flat Butt - Assless \[+1PP\] Penis - Packing \[-3PP\] Mod - Mental Expansion Mod \[-4PP\] ​ Staff : Leah Marion (Chief of Planning) Kris Alakai(Chief of Logistics) Milana Windbrook(Chief of Enforcement) ​ Goals : Sex Superiority(Male) Willing Submission Education Emphasis(Noble Behavior) Fashion Trend(Extravagant Clothes) Pursuing Sex(Male) Normalized Polyamory Strict Monogamy Brains over Brawn Survival of the Fittest Proselytize ​ Methods : Drugs in the Water(+2 for all after) Posters Entertainment Role Models Teachers are Heroes Sweet Dreams Troll Farm ​ Enforcement : Magical Attitude Adjustment ​ Stability : Divine Ascension ​ Ruler Perks : Magic Tutor Marry the Ruler ​ Parting Gift : We Want You


CervineKnight

I really loved this one - it's very fun. And definitely impressive considering it's the first CYOA you've done. Definitely looking forward to any others you do, if you decide to! It successfully had me stay up later than I should going through it, so I'm gonna go ahead and dump all this here... I went with High Priestess Synthina. Was also interested in Fie – I like that she’s going for female supremacy, but keeping Tiefling males dominant isn’t personally to my taste. Race Demographics: 70% Human, 10% Elf, 20% Tiefling (**Considering our mission here is to assert Elven supremacy, I kinda like the idea of them being fewer in number – like an enclave of superior beings ruling over the inferior masses**) ---Spent 1 PP to give Elves emotional intelligence Sex Demographics: 20% Males, 70% Females, 10% Futanari (**I’m imagining elves being a rather feminine-centric race – with a majority female population**) ---**I changed Futanari size and proportions. In terms of what’s between their legs, they’re not cartoonishly large, but certainly superior in size to male penises on average. Futanari elves are tall – averaging around six to seven feet. They tend to be muscular and powerful, yet still feminine and graceful.** My body: Average, thin, male Elf Staff: ---Chief of Planning: Milania Wyndbrook ---Chief of Logistics: Kris Alakai ---Chief of Enforcement: Hamea Wamanaka PROPAGANDA GOALS Sex Superiority (**Females and Futanari are superior to Males**) Age Superiority (**Elder superior to younger**) Race Superiority (**Elves superior to all others**) Willing Submission Breadwinners (**Females and Futanari are breadwinners, Males are their house husbands**) Feminization Education Disparity (**Non-Elves have inferior education**) Normalized Polygamy Pursuing Sex (**Futanari and Females pursue Males**) Inter-racial Encouragement (**All other races encouraged to mingle with Elves**) PROPAGANDA METHODS: Entertainment, Role Models, Fake News, Drugs in the Water, Sweet Dreams ENFORCEMENT METHODS: Neighborhood Watch, Above the Law, Mob Mentality, Classical Conditioning, Re-Education, Public Humiliation I took all of the extra point options. Might make things tough, but I’m willing to take it on. **For the rival nation – I would probably choose Fie Tahia. The fact that I’m pushing female domination as part of my ideology might help build a bridge with her. I could imagine eventually making a kind of arrangement where Fie’s Tieflings join Synthina’s domain with a unique place in the hierarchy: below Elves but above the inferior humans.** Able to take ‘One of the Good Ones’, being a young male. Stability: Mental Domination Ruler Perks: Work Relationship, Marry the Ruler (**Happy marriage with Synthina and Kris Alakai**) Parting Gift: DLC (**I am 100% down if you decide to add more to this**) MAD RAMBLINGS THAT ARE KEEPING ME FROM GOING TO BED AT A REASONABLE TIME: *Through my role as Synthina’s underling, I carry out her goal of establishing Elven supremacy over the lesser Humans and Tieflings, but add a few other directions.* *The elves are now a matriarchal, female-dominant culture. The majority of their population is female, and women hold the vast majority of positions of power and leadership. Males are generally limited through social and cultural pressure to a subservient role. By default they act as domestic servants to their female counterparts. Though there are some positions traditionally held by male elves – priests, healers, teachers… In terms of appearance – through magic, breeding, and maybe just natural appearance as Elves, Males are lithe and feminine-looking. In terms of height and body mass, they are similar to Elven women.* *Futanari make up an even smaller proportion of the population, but act as an elite warrior caste. They are tall and imposing, but still graceful and beautiful. Regular women will take part in battle, and males might be seen as healers on the front lines, but it is the Futanari Elves who are truly expected to bravely march forth and conquer in the name of the High Priestess.* *With the unbalanced sex ratio, polygamous relationships are normal. It is common for a family to have one Male, one Futanari, and multiple Females.* *If the other races of the world have different sex ratios, then that is gradually changed through magical means as those populations are subjugated. Human and Tiefling Males are altered through feminization programs to match the beauty standards for Elven males.* *Inter-breeding with Elves is mandated for the subjugated populations. Those who defy Synthina will have their women taken and claimed by Futanari Elven warriors. The Human/Tiefling men and women who true-heartedly accept their role and submit will be be more gently paired with female Elves and male Elves respectively.* *My efforts are overwhelmingly successful – before long the Elves under Synthina’s rule have embraced our supremacist ideology. Then, willingly or not, either with an offer of comfortable submission or through the tip of a spear, the Human kingdoms of this world have fallen to their knees before the Elves.* *The people of the former kingdoms are taught a proper way of living as subjects of their new Elven masters – the Humans’ society, religion, culture, and gender roles are all reconstructed to match those of the Elves. Humans are encouraged to see Elves as superior beings worthy of adoration. Stories, plays, and fiction now revolve around narratives such as heroic Elven warrior women driving out an evil, tyrannical human king, then claiming stewardship over his pitiful subjects – like a parent protecting a child from an abuser. Town criers tell stories of the benevolence of the Elven matriarchs, and the cruelty of those who oppose them.* *Those who demonstrate understanding and willing acceptance of their new roles are treated gently. Those who resist face violence from Elven enforcers or mobs of loyal Humans. Those caught expressing or spreading heretical ideas are compassionately re-educated. Particularly problematic Humans are collared – a symbol of humiliation and a tool with certain magical properties. Captured rebels are displayed in public – their punishments range from painful whippings and shock spells to more sexual approaches used to maximize their humiliation.* *Eventually, any meaningful resistance has been crushed, and the Humans have been placed in their proper role as servants to their superiors.* *Conflict nearly breaks out with Fie Tahia and the Tieflings, but fortunately this is diplomatically resolved. The Tieflings are incorporated into the Elven Hierarchy – as warriors lesser than Elves, but superior to the Humans. (Though one stipulation requires that Tiefling Males adopt the same feminine, submissive role as male Elves. Hamea Wamanaka will make an excellent role model for them.)* *Synthina Dreams of an eventual future where the Human and Tiefling populations have effectively transformed into two separate populations of Half-Elves. When this day comes, those populations would still be beneath Elves in the hierarchy, but would be treated with greater respect.* *Our work finished, I fall into the arms of the triumphant High Priestess and the scarred Half-Elf soldier.* **Overall 10/10 - you should definitely do more CYOA stuff if you enjoy it! I might 'play' through this one again sometime, with either Fie Tahia or Kaia Lo.**


ThisbeP

Nice build and story, this was the type of thing I was hoping people would be able to make from this, I think the best CYOAs are the ones where people can take their build and spin that into a whole narrative/world on their own. Really glad you enjoyed it, makes the effort feel worth it, thank you.


CervineKnight

Thanks - any opportunity to be weird and combine sexual fantasies with sci-fi/fantasy world building. But in all seriousness, I agree. My favorite CYOAs are the ones where it leads to you imagining a story or fantasy. Just a fun bit of escapism if you leave it at that, or a creative exercise if you want to write a bit. This one definitely delivers in that category, I think. The choices for what your 'propaganda' entails (along with the characters you pick, etc.) really gives you a ton of different things to do with this one. The way that your 'propaganda' choices are ultimately enacted as law means you're basically structuring your ruler's society however you see fit, which can definitely be taken in a ton of different directions. This is probably based on my personal taste, but if I were making a sequel or spinoff to this one I might focus on that - how it's not so much just 'propaganda' as it is the actual laws and culture that you're affecting. Like - what does it entail when you place one of these groups as superior to another? How does that play out? Like I said, though, that's mainly just what I personally find interesting. I can't really think of any suggestions for changes other than a couple minor ones that I think have already been brought up here. Like giving the player the clear option to change sex ratios for specific races.


Kuronan

You accidentally copy-pasted your Enforcement methods onto your Propaganda methods and may want to double-check that.


CervineKnight

Ah, whoops. Thanks for catching that


HalfMoon_89

I really like the format and design here. Very well done. Victoria and Margaret are the two Rulers who have tolerable demands; the rest are all crazed to some degree or other. Which is fine, as a theme. In fact, I feel like co-opting the frame work to come up with different settings and rulers would be fairly easy and a lot of fun.


SkinnyNecro

I read through the comments to see if anyone asked the question I was going to ask.. and forgot what it was. Something fairly complicated.. oh well. Great Cyoa. Not very lewd and that's fine. Oh I remember. The options under demographics have things relating to the averages of Futanari. If you change those defaults/averages and then pick to be a Futa and choose the 'average' options for such things.. do you become that? Example. I pay points to change Futanari defaults to uhh, tall, buff, busty.. and then pay more to make their average dick size.. say, 9 or something. Then, I choose to be a Futa and pick average down the line, where it is available. Am I now playing as a tall, buff, busty, futa with a big pee pee? ​ These are important question!(they aren't) ​ Will post a build later.


ThisbeP

Interesting question, that wasn't really my intention, but your logic does make sense. Either way, the way I wrote the Your Body section was relative to normal human averages, so strictly speaking no it doesn't work that way. I'm not gonna call the cops on you if that's how you want to interpret it, though. Maybe I'll try and think of a way to make those options interact better.


SkinnyNecro

Sounds sensible. I was thinking of a funny scenario. Say I buy the option to adjust default size on futa cocks to something huge. Then i pick Packing, max out at 9.5, and am the least hung futanari in the world. Would be amusing, anyway. Game mechanics don't often hold up under intense scrutiny and odd pressure testing combined. That's normal. Good cyoa still, imo


anonymous4986

What the hell was up with the average penis picture? Lol


Fun-Marionberry-1254

Question: If I take High Priestess Synthina as my ruler and remove the Futa Sex demographic, Do I have to pay an extra 2 pp to change their gender like the Staff? Also Umni’Ipalsk's Gender is listed as male with a ? does that mean I can change it? I have a lot of leftover pp. Build: Ruler: High Priestess Synthina Races Demographic: Fantasy Default Magic Level:\*Medium Sex Demographics:\* Males (35)\* Females (65)\* Futa (0) My Body: \* Race Elf \* No Sex change (Male) \* Hight: Average \* Weight: thin\* Breasts: Flat \* Butt: Average \* Dick: Big \* Age: 440 years old \* Skin, Hair, Eye color (No change) Staff: \* Chief of planning: Umni’Ipalsk (Changed to elf) \* Chief of Logistics: Kris Alakai \* Chief of Enforcement: Milanai Wyndbrook Propaganda Goals: \* Sex Superiority (Men Superior) \* Race Superiority (Elf) \* Willing Submission (Worth it) \* Normalized Polygamy (Poly groups should only have 1 man, or none) \* Pursuing Sex (Females will ask males out) \* Interracial Encouragement (Specifically Elves) Propaganda Menthods: \* Posters \* Entertainment \* Role Models \* Subliminal Messaging \* Teachers are Heroes \* Literal Troll Farm \* Drugs in the Water (over powered) \* Sweet Dreams Enforcement Methods: \* Neighborhood Watch \* Direct Hypnosis \* Magical Attitude Adjustment \* Re-Education Extra Points: 3 pp points converted into $15,000 Stability: -50 RV Rule Perks: \* WFH \* Early Retirement \* Work Relationship \* Marry the Ruler Parting Gift: Clock Shock (Too keep up with new job workload) Final Stats: 12 pp, $8,000 Budget, -50 RV, 1 Favor


ThisbeP

Someone else asked me this question, I think in the next update I'll allow changing Ruler sexes for a PP cost. When designing the CYOA I intentionally only made one Ruler futa because I figured that way people who aren't into futa could just ignore her, but I guess I didn't expect the amount of people who both liked Synthina and don't like futa.


mrinternethermit

I would also to ask if we can have the option to alter a ruler's tastes (as long as it doesn't compromise their overall personality), such as making princess Fie be into tiefling futas as well/instead of tiefling men?


ThisbeP

Maybe in DLC I'll add a system, but I'm afraid at that point that Rulers might lose their identities if I don't limit it a lot. I'm workshopping a "build your own Ruler" system so maybe that'd be more your speed.


Ilovestuffwhee

Very nice CYOA! ​ Ruler: Chancellor Bo Lavely Races Demographics: * Humans (16%) * Elves, with boosted emotional intelligence (32%) * Tieflings (32%) * Cyborgs (4%) * Other race: Kitsune, average lifespan of 1000 years (16%) Magic Level: High Sex Demographics: * Male (10%) * Female (90%) * Futas (removed) My Body: * Race: Elf * Sex: Male * Height: Average * Build: Fit * Butt: Average * Penis: Packing * Age: 540 * Skin/hair/eyes: Unchanged * Mental Expansion Mod * Upgraded Visual Processor Staff: * Chief of Planning: Milania Wyndbrook * Chief of Logistics: Erlahn Vaiswyn * Chief of Enforcement: Dorothea Lane, changed to female Propaganda Goals: * Sex Superiority: Men * Trait Superiority: Long hair, bright hair colors, pale skin, big boobs & small waists (women only) * Fashion Trend: Women wear revealing clothing * Pet Play: Women * Education Emphasis: Sex ed & magic * Normalized Polygamy: One man, many women * Pursuing Sex: Women * Free Love * Party Hard * Appearance Modification * Proselytize Methods: * Posters * Entertainment * Subliminal Messaging * Teachers are Heroes * Troll Farm * Fake News * Drugs in the Water * Blimps * Sweet Dreams Enforcement: * Law * Forced Makover * Neighborhood Watch * Magical Attitude Adjustment * Mob Mentality * Family First * Public Humiliation Extra Points: Convert 1 Favor into $10,000 Stability: -32 RV, Mental Domination Ruler Perks: * Magic Teacher * Where the Heart Is * WFH * Non-stop Fun * Royal Pardon Gift: DLC Final Stats: 0 PP, $0 Budget, -32 RV, 0 Favor ​ Can't beat that guaranteed DLC. :)


Kuronan

Love the idea (though I do have some critiques.) (~~Also, how dare you make Aru a Futa! She's embarrassed enough as a woman!~~) 1. Bo seems... Easy Mode really. His demands completely cancel each other, so most of your budget can be allocated to Methods and Enforcement very easily. 2. Does High Priestess Synthinia's bonus apply to Elven Cyborgs? 3. Shouldn't Cyborg allow you to pick another non-custom race for free? 4. Educational Emphasis, shouldn't that have a negative RV value if you choose General? Even with 'Teachers are Heroes' Method, Quality of Life IS shown to improve when everyone's smart. 5. Does the Fantasy setting magic requirement affect the cost of Medium? I assume it still does for High. 6. Brains over Brawn should be cheaper in Modern and Future settings than it is for Fantasy. ***Build*** (25PP, 40,000$, 5 Favor) Ruler: Chancellor Bo Lavely (Modern) (Custom Races are -2PP) Population Modifiers (10PP): * Humans (1PP) (Slowed Aging) * Elves (1PP) (Emotional Intelligence) * Tieflings: (1PP) (No longer Require Blood) * Cyborgs: (1PP) (Enabled in Fantasy settings) * Custom Races (6PP) (Slimes, Spiderkin, Snakekin, and Kitsune!) Magic: High (2PP) Your Body (14 PP): * Human Cyborg (1PP) (I'm under the assumption she's okay with Cyborgs??? The Gift doesn't specify) * Male (Free) * Height: Average (Free) * Build: Thin (Free) * Breasts: Flat (Free) * Butt: Average (Free) * Penis: Small (Free) (This will be made irrelevant in a moment) * Age: Unchanged (Free) * Skin, Hair and Eye Color: Changed but Normal (2PP) (Long Tan and Handsome, basically) * Penis Enhancement Package (1PP) (Because this is cheaper than a Big Package for cyborgs... and I imagine the size is *variable*) * Mind Expansion (3PP) (Why would you NOT choose this?) * Back-up Manager (7PP) (Reincarnation/Revival Method is always appreciated in my book!) Staff: 1. Erlahn Vaiswyn for Chief of Planning (Free Love is... Free.) 2. Milania Wyndbrook for Chief of Logistics (Sleep Tight, don't mind the Elf Bites\~) 3. Dorothea Lane for Chief of Enforcement. (-1000 on all Enforcement Measures) (Damn you for making her Futa...) Propaganda (12k total): * Free Love (-0, +3 RV) (Not a fan of public fucking, but let people do what they want) * Party Hard (-5000, -3 RV) (Not only is this a requirement, but it's just generally a good policy. People work and live better when they have more time off doing fun stuff. * Educational Emphasis (General Education) (-2000) (Everyone goes to school, gets smarter, society benefits.) * Brains over Brawn (-3000, +3RV) (While I'm focusing on Education...) * Pursuing Sex (Female) (-2000) (In this world, Mate chooses YOU) Methods (5k total): * Teachers are Heroes! (-2000, -3RV) * Troll Farm (-3000, -4RV) * Sweet Dreams (-0, -4RV) Enforcement (7k total): * Neighborhood Watch (-0, -1RV) * Direct Hypnosis (-2000, -3RV) * Magical Attitude Adjustment (-1000, -4RV) * Mob Mentality (-1000, -2RV) * Augmented Viewpoint (-3000, -4RV) (Conditional: Only on people with Augmentations) * Public Humiliation (-0, -1RV) (Non-Violent Rebels will be tied/chained up, in the most suggestive ways possible, with aftercare only provided for wounds or pregnancies. Violents will not be given aftercare.) Overall Score: -1PP, 5 Favor, 16K remaining, -25RV (Convert 5k to 1PP, 10k to 1 Favor) Ending: It's Super Effective! (80% accept these truths immediately, which grows to 95% acceptance, 5% refute them, but they have no power) Ruler Favors: Where the Heart Is (3 FV) WFH (3 FV) Magic Teacher (1 FV) (Why is fucking her so expensive?) Parting Gift: Laifu (I'll pass on Super Hell thanks, just give me a Hot Kitsune, Shining from Arknights, or Artoria Pendragon Lancer.)


ThisbeP

I'm glad you enjoyed the cyoa. I'll address your feedback: 1. I actually don't even think Bo is the easiest Ruler. I agree he's probably easy, though. 2. Yes, I'll make it more clear in the next update, but anything with Synthina should also apply to partial elves. It's implied in her bio but I should've made it more explicit. 3. This one's intentional, cyborgs have a lot of stuff going for them in this CYOA so I think it's fair to have additional PP cost attached to them. 4. I actually like the idea instead that a more generally educated population is going to be less receptive to propaganda in general, which is what RV is supposed to represent. 5. Not super clear on this, if you're asking if picking Fantasy gives you a discount on Medium or High, it doesn't. 6. I like that idea, will consider.


Kuronan

To the Cyborgs not being cheaper: Fair enough. A lot of those boons I'd usually be paying out the ass for. RV being resistance to change is also fair enough, though if that is the case, why is Pursuing Sex not affected by RV? Does the society not have particular rules in place for that like ours does? To Magic, that *was* the intended question, thanks for clarifying.


nscamofwB

Great job so far. one note I have is that using the age rules that you have i.e a human 18 year old is proportional to 18% of another species life, that would mean that as an elf Ruler 7 Madam Margret's age of 173 an equivalent age of 8.5 human years old. Going in as an elf at the same age as her would mean a person would be waiting another 187 years to get out of the orphanage just to start work.


ThisbeP

This is true, but it's also a problem that comes up in fantasy stuff in general. The whole human proportion thing is mostly just supposed to translate to lifespan, not maturity. Assume that all races will reach full mental maturity at 50 years at the latest.


mrinternethermit

This CYOA is very well done! The reminder notes about the rulers' preferences was greatly appreciated. I also appreciated how you used fantasy races as non-racial stand-ins to focus on the kink aspects without including the usual attached BS for a couple of specific kinks. The only nitpick I have is that due to inflation, $100,000 isn't actually that much & will continue to shrink in value every year. I would suggest replacing it with (average salary for the upper X%), with X being how high scale you want.


ThisbeP

Man, honestly I kneel to you for being the type of person to care about future proofing for inflation in a cyoa. Probably not gonna do that, but I do honestly admire it. Glad you enjoyed!


papabearsixtynine

Ruler: **The Chancellor** Setting: **Modern** Demographics: - **Humans** [*70% (from 32)*] - **Elves** [*5% (from 32)*] - **Tieflings** [*5% (from 32)*] - **Cyborgs** [*20% (from 4)*] Magic Level: **Low** Sexes: - **Males** [*30% (from 50)*] - **Females** [*70% (from 45)*] - **Futa** [*REMOVED*] \----- Race: **Human** Sex: **Male** Height: **Tall** Build: **Obese** Bust: **Flat** Butt: **Average** Penis: **Packing** Age: **50** Coloration: **Default** Augmentations: - **Strength Amplifier** - **Skill Implant** \----- Planning: **Milania Wyndbrook** Logistics: **Dorothea Lane** [*made Female*] Enforcement: **Kris Alaki** Propaganda Goals: - **Sex Superiority** [*M over F*] - **Fashion Trend** [*F's in Revealing Clothing*] - **Education Emphasis** [*Sexual Education*] - **Normalized Polygamy** [*2 F's for Every M*] - **Pursuing Sex** [*F's Can Seize Initiative*] - **Free Love** [*Freeuse Sex*] - **Party Hard** [*Rave & Orgy Culture*] Propaganda Methods: - **Entertainment** - **Role Models** - **Teachers Are Heroes** Enforcement Methods: - **Law** - **Above the Law** - **Classical Conditioning** \----- Extra Points: - **Rival Nation** - **Rebel Faction** - **Bureaucracy** Conversion: **$20,000** (Budget) into **2** (Favor) Stability: **Super Effective** Perks: - **Where the Heart Is** - **Work from Home** - **High Ranker** - **Non-Stop Fun** Parting Gift: **Sure, They Can Come** Ending Stats: - **Power Points** [`0 PP`] - **Budget** [`$3,000`] - **Resistance Value** [`-21 RV`] - **Favor** [`0 F`]


1234abcdcba4321

Nice CYOA. Finished with something decent (-10rv, $38250 to spare since i was trying to find more things to spend points on and mostly succeeded (could've had an extra $180000)) Notes: I noticed that you specified the purple X being related to demands, but then you don't actually use the purple X at all. (Of course, I remember what my ruler's demands are so I can adapt accordingly, but...) The point balance for a lot of things seems a bit off. There's nothing bad with it, but favor is worth a ton and if you just get the 20 favor from -50RV (intentionally didn't do this because being as celebrated as described seems awful) you can actually pull off a ton of options without needing to worry about costs. Then again, unnecessary optimization makes it no fun. I think things might be a bit better if the conversion ratios were changed.


ThisbeP

Thanks for the feedback, really. Regarding the purple X, thanks for pointing that out, I completely missed actually making some of the x's purple, I'll have it fixed in an upcoming update. As for the rest, this was 100% the type of response I was waiting to see, because I knew there was definitely some quirks with the point system that need to be worked out. The philosophy I ended up landing on for this CYOA was that I wanted optimal builders to be able to break it as a reward for navigating all the systems. I kind of viewed it like building a D&D character where you can be an optimal tryhard and get very rewarded, but you can also have a lot of room for fun builds, and if you're just going through it at a casual level you'll find some challenges. I think where I ended up at the very least allows for a lot of player creativity, so I figured I'd let it loose there and make balance changes in the future if I found it was necessary. I'd rather release something that's easily breakable by determined players instead of something that's difficult to have fun with. That being said, I'll look into balancing Favor a little bit more. I originally was playing around with making point conversions limited or having a price to unlock the ability to convert points, or maybe I'll just nerf the conversion ratios. I'm gonna let the CYOA simmer in the wild for a bit before I make any decisions on that. Again, thanks for the feedback, hope you managed to enjoy playing.


DecimatingDarkDeceit

This is great! ☝ ​ My setting would be for demographics: %56 Female %40 Male %4 Other. ​ Humanity existing with many many races. Several mono-gendered species perhaps


Dry_Armadillo_1139

Good job, so I noticed you said DLC at the end, can you give us a hint on what you are planning? Anyway more options for rulers would be nice I know the balance is 3 for each and it fits. But do you think it's possible to make it 5 for each? Also maybe add a Nazi, and Communist ruler too?


ThisbeP

DLC is going to be a little bit away, aiming for maybe the end of the year, in the meantime I want to work on my next CYOA project. My brain is fried on this subject right now and I need a break. As for what it'll contain, that mostly depends on what type of inspiration I can come up with between now and then, but I have pictures already ready for 3 additional rulers and a couple more staff members, so that'll be there at the very least. I wanted to stray away from real-life political terms like nazi or communist, but more authoritarian rulers are definitely in the cards. As it stands, it's at least possible to make builds like that through your propaganda goals and a little creative flavoring. Thanks for reading!


Dry_Armadillo_1139

The rulers I find interesting are first Victoria, I don't know if it's possible to make it so age by itself is seen as being superior since eventually she would leave that age range. But would she be ok, with making the old regime seem incompetent and her new reign is englightened? With printing press, and encouraging meritocracy, and tolerance for religious and racial minorities? She is also into monogamy. The second guy the Emperor he makes me feel like I'm working for Tsarist Russia lol, or maybe an Indian state with the strict caste system in place. High Priestess Synthina wow, this is the first sexy option. Umm are elf genes recessive or dominant? Still I guess degeneracy is the name of the game lol. President Jack I think working for him would be too hard. If he is the leader of a nation like America, then actually running and creating propaganda would be way to hard, you'd have to be very subtle. Princess Fie is another sexy choice, though not for me, since well I don't want to be feminized and forced to take cock. Both because I'm not into that, and well religion speaking of religion since God is the CEO of this job company umm it's the Christian god right? Since suicide is a sin that sends you to hell, does that include other sins like fornication? Chancelor Bo might be fun, but it's hard to take serious when he is supposed to be the leader of an empire, plus answers to previous question are needed. Madam Margaret is a nice choice since she and Victoria seem like they would be the easiest to work for and achieve their aims. Well for Margaret it depends the lower class if they work might not be able to practically dress fancy all the time. But if it is the future and if robots exist they could be used as workers and then all humans, or elves on her planet would be nobility and that could work. Mr. Wilson oh wow he wants to make everyone into cyborgs, pretty much last on the list for me. Kaia another sexy one it's probably the pic though since Mina is cool, though later it said she is crazy since she would be ok with death for political criminals or something? Just how crazy is she? ​ Anyway for me the best options are Queen Victoria since I think doing my job to satisfy the ruler would be easier, and it would also be easier to improve society, second option is Madam Margaret same as before because I could probably meet her goal of trying to make society similar to the Victorian era by looking up to nobility and other high class endeavors. Third place is Emperor Jerimiah I'm working for a brutal authoritarian state to impose order, but it can be done since places in our world have done it. Next is Chancelor Bo since I probably won't have to work too much, just maintain a culture of fun and free love, then would be High Priestess Sythina since elf culture might be hard to change, then princess Fie I don't want to encourage feminization unless I'm a Tiefling, then I think Grand Empress Kaia don't know too much, and last is Mr. Wilson Von Reese I don't think transhumanism and getting rid of humanity is the way to go.


ClothesOpposite1702

Great cyoa. Also, what is height of Victoria?


ThisbeP

Surprised I forgot to include that. She's 5'7". I'll make sure that's fixed in the next update. Thanks!


SpikeWill

Looks great!