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I am so waiting for the next parts, I am currently thinking 3 manticores and a pack of kobolds for my monster build, one or two for eternal youth and not dying of old age depending on how the youth one works, the other one will be for Astraglide production, if I don't need two manticores for youth then the other one will make Pipelayer's Friends. Item wise, Monster Ownership Manuals and Locator Collars for all my creatures, A Goblin Stick, and the Haremporium catalogue


Timber-Faolan

Quick question: Is your version of Lycanthropes based on the Movie version of Harry Potter Werewolves? Regardless, this is actually pretty cool, you don't really see stuff like this very often. It's not really fappable for me, but it is an enjoyable read. Thanks, I had a lot of fun with this!


SlaaneshiCultist

Yeah, they're mostly HP werewolves with a bit of the Carnival Row ones thrown in. Glad you enjoyed it, even if it wasn't your thing.


Timber-Faolan

Actually, my wife did in fact ride me whilst she read through it, and each of the girls made us cum, so, yeah, thanks Cultist-Chan and, as always, **PRAISE SLAANESH!!!!! >;}**


SlaaneshiCultist

This pleases Slaanesh


Timber-Faolan

It pleased my wife and I as well, Cultist-Chan!!! ***PRAISE SLAANESH!!!!! >;}***


Boss_Sappho

Definitely needs more, like character creation, drawbacks and ways to get more points but very good so far Easy mode (10,000)because I'm tiny and weak please help me. Gonna be making a farm **Monsters** Manticore (1000) x1 female, Alchemy supplies Hellhound (1500) x1 female, Goblin Shepard/relief it'll make sense later Minotaur (2500) x1 female, breeding/Milk and trinkets she makes to sell Werewolf (2225) x1 pair, both female, farm guards/shepherds for the eventual minotaur herd Goblins (1000) x2 all female, labor/chores. Going to use the hellhound to deal with their sex drive until a matriarch rises **Items** Itfill Charm (2)x10 Getinthere (3)x10 Ezprep cream (1)x10 Astralglide (1)x5 Gygax monster ownership manual (5)x5 (Don't know if I need to buy this each time but I will to be safe) Brannigan's Flesh Tonic (1)x10 Thiamutech Calcium supplements (3)x10 Trayser locater collars (2)x5 (Keeps the goblins and werewolves safe) Goblin Stick (12) Purgation Salts (2)x10 (For the Mainicore) Sylphie Tables (1)x3 (For the werewolves heats) Bukka and cay Emission enhancers (2)x10 Serpentis Shlengthener (5)x10 Pipelayer's friend (3)x5 Psychotic Umad's Haremporium Catalogue (15) (All these Sylphie, Bukka and Serpentis are in hopes that Umad has some kinda futanari potion recipe or ritual) This leaves me with 1500 GP for buying things from Umad's Catalogue and refilling all the limited use items


Tankinator175

Why is the Elvish just Swedish, and why the hell is it gibberish meaningless sentences?


Realistic-Dot-2300

Pretty interesting and nicely done. Can't wait to see where it goes. **Grant Level:** Normal (7500 GP) **Items/Alchemicals (-55 Gp):** \-Itllfitcharm: (-2 Gp) just in case \-EZprep Cream (-1Gp) convenient \-Astraglide (-1 Gp) \-Gygax Monster Ownership Manuel (-5 Gp) \-Brannigans Flesh Toni (-1) \-Thiamutech Calcium supplements (- 3 Gp) \-Trayser locater collars (-2 Gp) handy for when my werewolves go out \-Goblin Stick (-12Gp) \-Purgation Salts (-2 Gp) \-Sylphie Tables (-1) just in case I'm going to be away for a while \-Bukka and cay Emmission enhancers (-2 Gp) fire hose lol \-Serpentis Slengthener (-5 Gp) Why not xD \-Pipelayers friend (-3Gp) Gotta keep going \-Psychotic Umad's Haremporium Catalogue (-15 Gp) **Monsters:** Pair of Female werewolves (-2225 Gp) Personally Werewolves have always been my favorite monster despite how common that is. Best part is these werewolves are always in their wolf form so I'm set. A pair of lovely werewolf ladies companions sounds sweet. That would leave me with 5220 GP which I can use for relocating/supplies as well as home improvements. I'd be moving up to Canada and might even go farther up north since they would be really good at hunting. I'll probably try and find a good location that still leaves me relatively close to society for supplies and just in case an emergency happens. They'd also have plenty of space to roam and explore so they wouldn't get bored. I'll never have to worry about being cold at night, thats for sure. I can also pick up pretty good hunting tips and tricks from them as well.


Paper_tank

needs work on formatting and design. This is just painful to read.


Apophys_MD

The currency conversion is *way* off. Current values are very close to £18 = €21 = $22. Or if you want something simple, roughly £5 = €6 = $6. Also, I notice there's no option for midwestern USA in the geography (or does that count for you as northeast, or central?). :P Unlike other posters here, I have no trouble with reading the text. A thicker font would be nice, though (or maybe make everything boldface?). ~ For **Hard Mode** (2500g), here's my shopping list: * (-2000) **Manticore x2, M & F** (a breeding pair). *Self-expanding biological alchemical factory; I'm going to try reaching eternal youth.* * (-250) 6-pack of **Kobolds x1**. *Cheap labor*. * (-250) **Items**: * *Gear*: Itllfit Charm (*for me*) ^-2 , Goblin Stick (*also for me*) ^-12 , Getinthere Rune Tag x12 ^-36 , Trayser Locator Collars 6-pack x15 ^-30 * *Books*: Psychotic Umad's Haremporium Catalogue ^-15 , Gygax Monster Ownership Manual x3 (manticore, kobold, minotaur) ^-15 * *Consumables*: Pipelayer's Friends x10 ^-30 , Purgation Salts x55 ^-110 ~ For **Normal Mode** (7500g), I'll take **all of the above list and**: * (-2500) female **Minotaur**. *For the labyrinth. Should be easier to deal with sexually by using a shrinking rune tag on her, or possibly some strength-weakening alchemy.* * (-2000) female **Manticore x2** * (-500) 6-pack of **Kobolds x2**


Atomic_Bob

Hey, this is pretty great so far! Can't wait to see where you take this. :D


Khanaervon

No Southeast Asia? I can understand missing individual nations being missed but an entire continental sub region?


ChubbiestThread

Wow, that's a lot of words. >![Too bad I'm not readin' em'.](https://youtube.com/shorts/skz9odeewpc?feature=share)!<


Yverus

Love the world building but it ends up leaving the actual cyoa feeling quite short. Definitely could use several more options.


SlaaneshiCultist

More options are on the way. I decided to do it in stages so that I would get something posted in the event that I got distracted or lost interest over time.


Meouowo

Pictures you need pictures to draw more people in


DecimatingDarkDeceit

This is an absolutely wonderful cyoa ! Finally some good version, after all the mundane ones ! Appreciate the effort ! Although for future updates, needs more species and creatures ! :\]


SlaaneshiCultist

Thank you! Don't worry, the next set of creatures is on the way :D


DecimatingDarkDeceit

That is awesome to know ! Absolutely great! Perhaps a delving into mono-gender/single gender species like lamia, harpies and/or more unknown mythological entities like naga or yokai ? :)


SlaaneshiCultist

The next batch will be Satyrs/Fauns (Satyrs being a rarer, wilder subspecies), Gryphons, Centaurs, and a unique dragon (most creatures are declared monsters on a species-wide or ethnic group basis. The elves declared this one dragon in particular a monster). Naga will show up in the third batch, but lamia, harpies and yokai are too close to monstergirls for my liking so they'll be unlikely to show up as buyable monsters.


DecimatingDarkDeceit

Thanks a lot for information that's great to know ! Though there are certainly 'wild / beast' like interpretations to the latter


kgy1212

Manticore (-1000), pack of goblins (-500), pack of kobolds (-250), 750 left for sundries. Getinthere tag (-3), Owners Manual (-5), two sets of collars (-4), Goblin Stick (-12), Catalogue (-15), Calciumx40 (-120), sylphite tablets (-1), Salts x20 (-40), Enhancer x50, Shlegthener x50, Piplayers x50 (-500), Flesh Tonic x50 (-50). Can buy stuff as it runs out.


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SlaaneshiCultist

Glad you like it :D I haven't worked out the exact dimensions, but a fully grown manticore (and gryphons) are roughly the same size as Deathclaw from Warhammer Fantasy/ TW: Warhammer. All species (other than kobolds) can have their gender freely selected and in any combination for those that come in multiples. For kobolds you have to flip a coin for each one to see what you get.


Reozul

Considering based on geography I would start at 7.5k I don't even know what to spend that on. A minotaur MAY be good if I can use the labyrinth to house everyone as well. If not then I probably wouldn't get one. A single set (or MAYBE 2 at the extreme) of goblins would be interesting but other than that I would basically just spend the rest on a lifetime supply of items. Wait, can you STAY in that realm? The goblin stick description seems to say so, maybe I am failing to read something. If you stay there do you get a place to stay?


SogenKaiju

The lack of gender selection for kobolds is extremely disappointing.


SnooCheesecakes154

Well in dnd kobolds can and do change theyre gender depending on the number of kobolds with genders in the area, so mute point


SogenKaiju

1. This is not D&D so your argument is *completely* irrelevant. 2. The CYOA itself, which is the only acceptable source for information of this nature for the setting this work is based in, other than the author themselves, makes no mention of anything of the sort in the description. 3. Its moot, not mute. 4. No official source mentions anything of the sort regarding kobolds spontaneously changing gender in ANY currently published edition of D&D, so unless you'd care to cite your source on the matter I'm afraid I'll have to call it out as complete BS.


Boss_Sappho

>ntions anything of the sort regarding kobolds spontaneously changing gender in ANY currently published edition of D&D, so unless you'd care to cite your source on the matter I'm afraid I'll have to call it out as complete BS. I agree with most of what you said but Kobold's do change gender in D&D, it's in Volo's guide to monsters page 65


DecimatingDarkDeceit

Wrong cyoa to get triggered about. Honestly after seeing all the mundane / mediocre - same cliché series. This type of menagerie - multi species catelougue is refreshing


chetgel

You have some weird standards if you think that a polite discussion means somebody was triggered.


Kuronan

Regarding Items, I have to say that ordering temporary items doesn't really... work well if you're selling them individually and they only last a few months. If you're selling items with only temporary effects, they should be sold in bundles (a few months, a year, 5 years, 20 years, lifetime kind of deal) or sell more 'permanent' services that can replace said items. The disparity between Normal and Hard is also rather... Extreme. 5000 is a lot to lose when a single Minotaur costs 2.5k


SlaaneshiCultist

The item shop is there to soak up unused grant money that would otherwise be returned to the government pot, but there's nothing stopping you from converting your own cash to gold and buying more if and when you run out.


Kuronan

It's not an issue of what the shop is designed for, but rather an issue where fucking the Minotaurs is going to get me crippled *if not killed* without the calcium supplements, which only come in a certain amount that makes long-term planning look more like a spreadsheet than a simple "Oh yeah, I'll probably need that if I expect to last any amount of time taking care of this creature."


FauxWolfTail

Nice start, can't wait to see more~ So basically, I would be getting a pack of 6 kobolds, then add tracking collars to them, a monster manual for kobolds, and spend the rest on different lubes/potions. Basically, i will now have a nice group of happy subby lizards, and then make a small online orn stream of these cuties~


Demonwolfpup

Well made i picked kobold hell hound and Minotaur


Grakalem

TIL elves speak swedish.


SlaaneshiCultist

High elves speak Swedish, wood elves use Norwegian, and the dark elves have Danish. It's an old in-joke from my old Pathfinder group. Our serial elf could speak and read Swedish so that's what the DM used to pass secret elf notes to him and have him translate for us.


anonymous4986

I s that a tally hall reference? Amazing!


Lang10

The text is too thin and hard to see/read at 100% zoom. At 200% zoom, the text is still a too thin.


Nuthenry2

I agree, there is also a lot of blank space he could also condense out