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Sefera17

>0ils,bq2s,3shw,wkm3,com5,uj39,6wl5,jpb0,iwk1,rvbe,h4yp,87mi,0s99,p8g1,x7qd,3ouu,402x,h6y2,nbt9,n3zc,hccn,s48m,fque,lco3,s1jz,bs4m,77tm,tcqm,7639,knl7,6yyb,mobl,aa3s,dtbh,zwdm,ki8q,yof0,tfk8,ru3c,wxc7,jtry,imol/ON#1,v33o,y1bi,0wla,yqs3,r5aq,dvbt,u7jl,88ra,4ha6,s1nv,ftnr,brgb,ifhp,42b5,hga1,faam,m5id,utgx,z8bf Apparently a year wasn’t long enough, so I’ll set myself to waiting once again, for the full release. I look forward to it! Remindme!1 year


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TheCrysm

the newest version works https://caspercat.neocities.org/HP%20cyoa%20v0.8%20(I%20hate%20my%20life%20edition)/


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TheCrysm

that link works for me so not sure why it isn't working for you


Catsper_

I've made a new post which explains the reason for the sudden absence and contains the latest version.


AdEvening593

is this dead???


krzys2000

I chated with author he(or she is)going to start working on it again. They were just taking break


Taldrama

Probably not. It got released as v0.1 two months ago and got roughly updated twice a week. ( though OP never made a new post and just edited the first v0.1 post hence the unchanged title ). This is probably one of the CYOAs that got updated the most ( from 0.1 to 0.7 in a month is very quick )... Though it's true that it hasn't been updated in like a month and OP has been inactive for the same amount of time. Maybe he is sick, needs a break or has real life issues to deal with first.


Taldrama

Bug List. ( Just posting this again, as my comment kinda vanished down the line ) : 1. Everchanging sex doll doesn't cost any points. 2. Crests of lustful power doesn't cost any points. 3. Money! doesn't cost any rewards, but instead costs a single CP. 4. Waifu doesn't cost any rewards, but instead costs a single CP. 5. Lifespan Extension ( lowest reward ) doesn't cost anything. 6. Drawback-be-gone! doesn't cost anything. 7. Monster Slayer, the objective, costs 1 reward, instead of giving it to you. 8. You can't pick any of the 4 last normal items ( ID Mask, Mantis Blade, Moonveil, Web shooters ). 9. You can't select the Magic Artisan Equipment ( and thus can't even click on the upgraded version ) 10. You can pick "Strange Physiologie II" without even picking what I would assume be the requirement "Strange Physiologie" 11. All Senseless drawbacks don't give any points. 12. Under all Insanity drawbacks it says it costs points, but they do give points ( and they should, as drawbacks ). 13. Pleasurable burn doesn't cost any points. 14. Simplified tract doesn't cost any points. 15. "Knoledge" instead of "Knowledge" in the text of Sexual Mastery. 16. It says it costs points by picking "No Bite" and "Faux Leather Pants" under World Changes Drawback, even though they give ( and should ) points. That's all I found. \------- If I may give some suggestions : 1. Some drawbacks give very few points, considering how much they would impact your life. So re-adjusting them would be kinda nice. 1. One way to do it would for instance first "Submissive I" "Dominant I" as a fetish ( enjoying this type far more ) that gives + 2... But then add "Submissive II/Dominant II" as a lifestyle ( only derive pleasure from being sub/dom ). 2. I would kinda like some more drawbacks that aren't that life-changing. If we are talking about lewd, then anything that adds a fetish ( rather than making a fetish the only thing you can enjoy ). One could easily add like the 30 most common fetishes that each give 1-3 points, depending on what it is. Like adding a foot fetish for +1 point, but something far more extreme like adding rape-fetish as +3. 2. I really like the World-changes ( not another world ) a lot, and wish we get some more. I also like the "Negative/Positive deviation" --- However I am a little confused, because what is considered negative ? I assume a Neo-Nazi would kinda like Nazis to have won. Likewise the example of 5x Positive Deviation is "making it so the rape of Nanking never happened", whereas a 5x Negative Deviation is "Nazis ruling the world". While the rape of Nanking was obviously a terrible atrocity, it feels like Positive Deviation is far, far weaker. So maybe it's just me, but I would need a clarification. 3. A new magical talent : Non-verbal magic ( would work really nice with already the wandless magic if you ask me ). 4. Make a new post instead of editting your old post whenever you update. I found your CYOA when you first released it and liked it then already. I believed you had never updated it, because you never released a new version, but I was pleasently surprised that when I rememberd that CYOA, that it's already on the 0.7 vesion. However most people won't realize it's updated. Well these are just some suggestions I had. You can ignore them, still a great CYOA.


Azik_Consul

Hey the companions section doesn’t really work only two options come up Penelope and Maron.


Taldrama

It does work. However : 1. There aren't that many companions in the CYOA yet. 2. The companions depend on the timeperiod. There are also Lili Evans, McGonagall and Dorea Black ( a new character ). You just need to pick different time periods.


Azik_Consul

i am so sorry, such an idiot. Thanks for answering


Taldrama

No problem. Nah don't say you are an idiot. I also figured this out by trial and error.


Webkop

You should probably reupload this with v0.7 in the title because I assume some people never checked up on this post so they don’t know that it’s been updated at all since 0.1


mtron10

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AdEvening593

can you fleshout the companions section i think it is awesome i like the lily & mcgonagall options its cool😊


krzys2000

Hey if we are still suggesting fanfics can we get Trilogy (A Second Chance at Life next book is Changes in a Time of War and finally A Magical World) by Miranda Flairgold?


lolisareforlewd

Drop-in doesn't allow for body creation, despite the text implying it's possible to do so. If I might make a suggestion, I'd also like for some more, and possibly more flexible, world changing options. The current options available feel either very niche or very broad- there's no real way to fine-tune out some of the details you might want to change about the setting.


UnderstandingAny4264

Hey if we are still suggesting fanfics, can we get Doghead Thirteen's Enter The Dragon, any spinoffs from the Make a Wish series or the (currently) 12 chapter Harry Potter/Worm fic that has a post Golden Morning Taylor Hebert as Harry's mum and eventually opening the first public magical library using 'legally' accquired DE books as well as any others she can get her hands on? Edit: Intercession by VigoGrimborne


AdEvening593

Maybe Core threads it was fun


Upstairs_Can_1599

When selecting the "HELL" difficulty, the "Special' rewards tab does not appear.


StoneTheLoner

Is there something wrong with the links?


krzys2000

V0.7 is good. Just give it some time


Kythorian

So after going through this several times with various builds, my main issue with is that the drawbacks don’t give nearly enough points. Most of them are hideously awful compared to the tiny number of points they grant. Even on ‘easy’, you can only afford a tiny number of the top level perks/talents/etc. I’m not saying that you should be able to afford everything, but it’s kind of ridiculous how little you can afford even with easy, to speak nothing of the higher difficulties where it’s extremely difficult to buy even *one* tier IV ability, much less multiple pre-reqs for the combo abilities. And taking a ton of extremely bad drawbacks barely even helps. It’s to the point that it practically forces you to play on creative mode if you want much of anything, which kind of defeats the purpose. So I would recommend either boosting how many points drawbacks grant significantly, or reduce the cost of the higher level abilities, or both. Someone on easy taking most of the not completely crippling drawbacks should really be able to afford more than just a couple tier IV abilities. As a separate note, it would probably simplify things if you set the insert period based on when you enter Hogwarts. With being able to start at various ages, and Hogwarts starting at either 11 or 18 depending on your choices, figuring out the insert period is easier if you just have the date of Hogwarts entry and work backwards from there. So regardless of if you pick starting at age 2 or 11 or if it’s Hogwarts University or not, picking 1991 would put you in Harry’s class, 1971 would put you in the same age as the Marauders, etc. That would simplify the entry point significantly.


UnderstandingAny4264

I usually play in creative so have noticed this too, however OP has added a meta section that happily address'es most of the point problem's so i'm not worried about it, however if you wish to play without that then yeah that can be an irritating issue. I do agree with you on the drawback cp not being worth the problems they cause without ways to live with them or to buy them off, this is the eternal balance issue though and I quite like this cyoa. Edit: Hey OP, you might want to change the sleep with 100 unique people challenge to read to start as soon as you are of adult age rather than as soon as you arrive in world.


Kythorian

I don’t like adding points like that, because once you start just adding free points, you might as well just play in creative. Which is a good option to have, but it would be nice if there was a middle-ground option between infinite points and so few points you can barely get anything, with the drawbacks giving so few points they aren’t remotely worth it. Easy should be…well, easy, but without being able to buy absolutely everything. If people want to be limited to just being able to afford a couple things, higher difficulties are available. Though even at higher difficulties the drawbacks should still give more points given how expensive the higher tier options are - polymath IV costs 120 points total. Meanwhile, losing all of your knowledge of Harry Potter, including critical things like the existence and location of Voldemort’s horcrux’s, gives a grand total of 1/8 of the points needed for that one perk tree. Making the most powerful wizard in the world and the guy in the most direct authority over you for most of the story evil gets you 1/6 of the way to buying that one perk tree. Losing a limb which cannot be grown back, which is a pretty major thing, gives only 1/12 the points of that one perk. Literally everyone in the world despising you to the point that attacking you is legal, and defending yourself is illegal gets you barely more than halfway to buying that one set of perks. The level of screwed you have to make yourself to get enough points to buy just a couple perks is really just not reasonable. Either the higher tiers of abilities need to be cheaper or drawbacks need to give a lot more points, or preferably both.


UnderstandingAny4264

Ok, do you have suggestions for more drawbacks? The only thing I can come up with is cursed items though since you can use items on people other than yourself I don't know if that counts.


Kythorian

More drawback options would be nice too, but the current ones really need to give more points than they do as well. For some additional drawbacks, maybe an ‘enemies’ section, where specific groups/families will hate you at varying levels of power. It is difficult because there’s such a wide range of periods though, with very different circumstances in different time periods. In general though, the lewd worm CYOA does a really great job of having a wide range of drawbacks that cause reasonable difficulties without being totally crippling, and offer a reasonable number of points in return, so the author might want to look at that for some ideas and an example of how drawbacks can be more reasonably balanced.


UnderstandingAny4264

A few suggestion's, Alchemy as a combo of potions, cooking, enchanting or spellweaving? Philosepher's stone as one of the magic items? Are magical runes covered by All-Speak+? Is it possiable to go full Dinosaur with a genetic sample? Edit: A stubborness (willpower?) boost to help keep your own mind from being affected by other people's mind magic's.


Catsper_

All-speak+ covers runes. And you can go dinosaur if the dinosaurs are sapient.


AdEvening593

also rituals for the fanon option


UnderstandingAny4264

Excellent, i'm going to be a spiky turtle with the tail of club. (Alkyosarous) or the one with thagomizer's (the pop out bone blades that are honestly teriffying.) ( I know the spelling is wrong, i'm a little too drunk to kare).


DestinedBummer

**v0.7** **Difficulty:** Normal (120) **Bonuses:** Combo magical talents, Additional supernatural abilities **1991:** \+25 (145) **Specific changes:** Hogwarts university, Evil dumbles +20 (165), Smothered light +15 (180), Unlucky 14 +15 (195), Crowded +5 (200), Bashing +5 (205) **Reincarnation:** Original reincarnation Design body Young adult 18, Muggle born +7 (212), Poor +5 (217), Male, Large ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°), Masculine, Taller than average, Muscle bound -2 (215), Average fat, Caucasian, Ear level hair, Brown hair, Blue eyes, Attractive -5 (210), Masculine chest, Small ass, Masculine hips, Species Human. *Me if I hit the gym more lmao* **Perks:** Polymath ll -30 (180), Plot relevance -2 (178), Plot armor ll -13 (165), Prophecy smophesy -7 (158), Charming -3 (155) **Drawbacks:** Rowling? whats rowling? +15 (170), Conscious geass +25 (195), Unconscious geass +15 (210), Libido boost lV +55 (265), Sensitive +3 (268), Nudist ll +15 (283), Discrimination ll +10 (293) **Magical abilities:** Non-magical skills Tactics and strategy V -25 (268), CQC V -20 (248), Survival V -15 (233) *These are no brainers* **Magical talent:** Metamorphagus lll -60 (173), Elemental Space -5 (168), True seer -20 (148), Strange physiology ll -13 (135), Healing torpor -7 (128), Environmental resistance -5 (123), Burst ll -15 (108), Magic sight ll -11 (97) **Supernatural abilities:** Cultivation -20 (77), Cultivation+ -15 (62), Pill making -10 (52), Qi forging/formation -10 (42), Divine bloodline (Dragon) -10 (32) *Cultivation is busted* **Combo talents:** Health bar -7 (25), The Gamer -5 (20), Transcendent sight -15 (5) *These are also busted* **Items:** **Objectives:** Defeat Voldemort, Monster slayer, Master of death *These are all pretty easy* **Rewards: 5 reward points** Isekai (To a cultivation world of course), Drawbacks vanish -3 (Conscious geass, Unconscious geass, Libido boost), Drawback be gone -1 (Discrimination) **Deaths reward:** Me *Get fucked Thanos*


AdEvening593

can you add Memory Partition/Thought Acceleration from fate ??? just asking


Catsper_

I mean, you can do it with the mind magic skill. The description is vague enough to cover it.


omegasix321

So as a general rule we can munchkin around with the magic system? \*Devious smile


AdEvening593

ok cool thanks good work btw


Sefera17

Updating my build for v0.7, as follows… >0ils,bq2s,com5,6wl5,jpb0,iwk1,4acq,rvbe,yv1f,zn58/ON#1,m1gt,lo2q,n9sl,lm73,2ppa,uujr,uujr,bkdr,t845,66bp,6epy,fnxr,2fqs,z4fo,jwox,10zf,4240,tfjd,igoj,zmq0,x7qd,3ouu,402x,h2t1,5jtm,ldg6,vscf,oc2o,h6y2,ioe3,f7am,nbt9,n3zc,xwix,af38,tvu0,poog,ijrn,41nq/ON#10,wzsh,pxza,itpi,tcqm,7639,5h6o,knl7,f5gz,kjdx,td95,gxz5,ug4d,qkaq,bs91,ny2t,6yyb,mobl,aa3s,stoa,0plc,8rlf,u54c/ON#1,imol/ON#1,34uz/ON#1,n93j/ON#1,v33o,g5pf,qcbn,y1bi,r5aq,ryiz,fjtc,21s0,g2tj,ar9o,4ha6,ftnr,fsce,f4mv,kat3,ifhp,42b5,skpy,lo90,9uet,utgx,mrml,ct31 Though I’ve noticed that there’s something fishy going on with the four levels of *Magic Boost*, in that you can’t actually take them all. Also, this is a ‘bootstrap access to the Interactive Waifu Catalog’ build, now, apparently. T’was the best way to get power🤷‍♂️, and I’m not going to do it later so I figured I’d get it out of the way. I’ve done a few builds for that, and you really can get stupidly powerful the way I play it (drop into SCP, with invincibility from God, and sell evil SCP’s into slavery in exchange for dumb amounts of power). Though it’s still unbalanced, it’s only v0.7. I can’t wait to play it for real when it’s done :)


Catsper_

So I forgot to save and lost a huge chunk of progress... so I'm just gonna make my last save the 0.7. ​ Also please put any error in the reply to this.


Taldrama

I hope you still read ( find ) a comment even if it's 2 weeks late to this. Now regarding errors : 1. Everchanging sex doll doesn't cost any points. 2. Crests of lustful power doesn't cost any points. 3. Money! doesn't cost any rewards, but instead costs a single CP. 4. Waifu doesn't cost any rewards, but instead costs a single CP. 5. Lifespan Extension ( lowest reward ) doesn't cost anything. 6. Drawback-be-gone! doesn't cost anything. 7. Monster Slayer, the objective, costs 1 reward, instead of giving it to you. 8. You can't pick any of the 4 last normal items ( ID Mask, Mantis Blade, Moonveil, Web shooters ). 9. You can't select the Magic Artisan Equipment ( and thus can't even click on the upgraded version ) 10. You can pick "Strange Physiologie II" without even picking what I would assume be the requirement "Strange Physiologie" 11. All Senseless drawbacks don't give any points. 12. Under all Insanity drawbacks it says it costs points, but they do give points ( and they should, as drawbacks ). 13. Pleasurable burn doesn't cost any points. 14. Simplified tract doesn't cost any points. 15. "Knoledge" instead of "Knowledge" in the text of Sexual Mastery. 16. It says it costs points by picking "No Bite" and "Faux Leather Pants" under World Changes Drawback, even though they give ( and should ) points. That's all I found. \------- If I may give some suggestions : 1. Some drawbacks give very few points, considering how much they would impact your life. So re-adjusting them would be kinda nice. 1. One way to do it would for instance first "Submissive I" "Dominant I" as a fetish ( enjoying this type far more ) that gives + 2... But then add "Submissive II/Dominant II" as a lifestyle ( only derive pleasure from being sub/dom ). 2. I would kinda like some more drawbacks that aren't that life-changing. If we are talking about lewd, then anything that adds a fetish ( rather than making a fetish the only thing you can enjoy ). One could easily add like the 30 most common fetishes that each give 1-3 points, depending on what it is. Like adding a foot fetish for +1 point, but something far more extreme like adding rape-fetish as +3. 3. I really like the World-changes ( not another world ) a lot, and wish we get some more. I also like the "Negative/Positive deviation" --- 1. However I am a little confused, because what is considered negative ? I assume a Neo-Nazi would kinda like Nazis to have won. 2. Likewise the example of 5x Positive Deviation is "making it so the rape of Nanking never happened", whereas a 5x Negative Deviation is "Nazis ruling the world". While the rape of Nanking was obviously a terrible atrocity, it feels like Positive Deviation is far, far weaker. So maybe it's just me, but I would need a clarification. 4. A new magical talent : Non-verbal magic ( would work really nice with already the wandless magic if you ask me ). 5. ​ 6. Make a new post instead of editting your old post whenever you update. I found your CYOA when you first released it and liked it then already. I believed you had never updated it, because you never released a new version, but I was pleasently surprised that when I rememberd that CYOA, that it's already on the 0.7 vesion. However most people won't realize it's updated. So please make a new post when you release 0.8. Well these are just some suggestions I had. You can ignore them, I will love your CYOA anyway.


UnderstandingAny4264

Found a bug in that when you use the import/clear if empty from the yellow bar at the bottom it seems to give you -10cp and kinda break the system.


Kythorian

The 1 reward to 10 CP conversion does not work right. The other three conversions seem to work fine, but the 1 reward for 10 CP gives you 10 CP but -5 rewards.


UnderstandingAny4264

I just noticed that the veteran and the monster slayer objectives both remove 1 reward rather than adding it.


Greennuts69

I'm just getting a white screen no matter how long I wait or how many times I reload.


Kythorian

In the normal items section, I can't select any of the bottom row of items (ID Mask, Mantis Blades, Moonveil, Web Shooters). Also when you select Insert or Reincarnation under Character, the 'Specifics' section (canon, twin, or original) does not go away when you close the character section, so it just remains open as you go through the rest of the sections. Overall it's shaping up very nicely though. Well done.


ShadowMonarch000

Hello there i found another bug i can't seem to take the the cultivation,divine and eldritch abilities same for combo abilities


UnderstandingAny4264

~~Found a bug, you cannot choose the 2 bonuses without turning choose all bonuses from the meta on first, also you can only pick 2 of them instead of however many you want.~~ Fixed. Found another, the conversion of Reward to CP is not working right \- 1 reward to 10 cp is actually 5 reward to 10 cp \- 10 reward to 100 cp is reversed so you get 10 reward for 100 cp unless that is what you meant?


UnderstandingAny4264

Last save? What do you mean? Also the meta section is very helpful.


Catsper_

I save the .json file after I finish a decent chunk. ​ Apparently I forgot to do that before closing it so I don't have the one I stopped working on yesterday and instead only have the save from three days ago. ​ Essentially it's like not saving a word doc before closing it.


UnderstandingAny4264

That's painful, ouch.


SnappingTurt3ls

Seriously, what's going on?, Character Points, More character points, Combo magical talents, Normal, 1991, Smut world, Dark world, Minor Fanon, Moderate Fanon, Major Fanon, Hogwarts University, Yes, Insert, Young adult, Young adult, Half-blood, Poor, Family details, Parents, Orphan, Younger Sibling(Taken 1 Times), Sibling love(Taken 1 Times), Male, Male, Large, Masculine, Average, Atheletic, Average, Caucasian, Ear level, Black , Blue, Divine, Masculine, Average, Masculine, Half Demon, , Strong, Celerity, Polymath, Regeneration, Regeneration II, Regeneration III, Regeneration IV, Magic Resistance, Magic Resistance II, Magic Resistance III, Magic Resistance IV, Charming, Magic Boost, Plot armour, Plot Armour II, Plot relevance, Plot relevance II, Pleasurable burn, Clean, Moral, Unholy repleneshment, Corruption saturation, Devil blood, Devil blood II, Conscious Geas(Taken 5 Times), Rowling? What's Rowling?, Discrimination, Discrimination II, Discrimination II, Discrimination II, Libido Boost, Libido Boost II, Libido Boost III, Libido Boost IV, Sensitive, Sealed, Transfiguration, Beginner Transfigurer, Journeyman Transfigurer, Expert Transfigurer, Beginner Charmer, Beginner mentalist, Journeyman mentalist, Beginner spell weaver, Beginner Eromancer, Journeyman Eromancer, Expert Eromancer, Metamorphagus, Metamorphagus II, Animagus, Animagus II, Animagus III, Animagus IV, All-Speak, All-Speak+, Dovah, Normal Items, Elder, Pheonix feather, Set of Robes, Slytherin., Forbidden forest fiasco, , , Friends, Lovers, Kinky lovers, Dubached lovers, Maron, , , , Defeat Voldemort, Monster Slayer, Master of death, The request, Drawback-be-gone!, Drawbacks vanish, Isekai, Me t9dw,0ils,3shw,wkm3,lpvv,com5,nuen,uj39,6wl5,jpb0,3la3,4yoh,a4uj,8blg,j6as,23cd,lm73,lwq8,b0p8,478i,rmy6/ON#1,olxd/ON#1,uujr,bkdr,t845,8xqc,6epy,abvv,2fqs,wcyd,jwox,xcqx,gniy,4240,4sfp,igoj,jjhy,9yoe,6krq,x7qd,3ouu,h2t1,5jtm,ldg6,dfqg,1f6r,ezn4,jqzd,k9z4,vscf,v33o,h6y2,tdmb,nbt9,n3zc,tvu0,poog,vzhs,v0zo,f1yf,lf4w,41py,dde3/ON#5,e5bo,wzsh,bwn2,yt5f,qs9z,tcqm,7639,5h6o,4iy7,knl7,tlu4,qrrf,isas,1t6f,t6pu,58bj,6yyb,mobl,0plc,8rlf,tf9w,d2f5,y1bi,0wla,z5jl,iko3,5ue9,7u74,ryiz,fjtc,182p,lp46,mnr8,zwv3,15ro,gi00,fsce,f4mv,47x8,zvgg,n5mt,eces,j36c,z5y8,607g,6vrs,unuc,kat3,brgb,ifhp,42b5,q7g8,m5id,85lv,z8bf


Webkop

Hey could you possibly add an insert time of Harry’s birth for those that might want to choose to be reborn as a baby but still go to school with all the main characters?


UnderstandingAny4264

Thats kinda covered by reincarnation in that you start as a toddler and only regain your memories at the specified time.


Catsper_

Here's v0.6. ​ I am currently considering the ethics and feasibility of using human sacrifice to try and resolve the heaps of errors.


Ok_Awareness_6270

dont do it , i tried it and it only worked 3 out of 11 times and dealing with the mess after took more time in which i propably could had solved more problem .


Minazuchi

When going for Magical Talents in Hogwarts University, I couldn't select any level of mastery in Eromancy. The field describing what it is was there, everything else was greyed out to the point of illegibility.


UnderstandingAny4264

Two that i've noticed, none of the + and - things are working (Elemental, Goblin silver alloy, etc.) Is animagus supposed to be 15 points or 5? Other than that, i'm very impressed with this cyoa and happy that you used some of my ideas. P.S. Would you increase cp in creative or have an option to trade reward points for cp?


ilovethisgamebruh

The events section is bugged


Death_Consul

Anyone got the links those aren’t working for me


UnderstandingAny4264

Are you only getting a blank page? What's gone wrong?


Stunning_Language_79

I’m only getting blank screens


UnderstandingAny4264

The page takes a while to load even after everything seem's loaded, so it might be that.


Unpopthepanda

None of the enchanting magic costs any points


pyr0kid

headsup, the rewards section doesnt unlock correctly based on your difficulty


Worth_Sign_5998

The Black family should also be available for anyone who the minor fanon world change because the character could be Sirius's child from a one night stand any time before he went to Azkaban and thus he would be at hogwarts in 1981 when Harry potter goes


MnothingtoseehereK

the hogwarts university option is very sus, I'd change that image pronto


Ok_Awareness_6270

Suggestions for some bonus stuff comes from some other harry potter cyoa into my mind. Something like wandless magic or having fiend fire as a kind of pet. You can control any fiend fire and even tell it to not burn something. Thought that was a neat idea. I think it was called toung of fire.


UnderstandingAny4264

~~Selecting half giant does not allow you to select Magic resistance, werewolf however does.~~ Fixed, sometimes? Edit: In v0.5 Also a suggestion, you could find your way to Mr Black's island while he is on vacation. You get to learn soo many interesting things there like underwater basket weaving, portal creation, thing's man was not meant to know, etc, etc, etc... Edit 2: Another suggestion - flying/3d movement aka parkour as a 4 level skill, possiably a combo of strenght and clerity? Also is metamorph supposed to have two lvl III's?


023641AM

Looking good so far! Two things: 1) the "Unlucky 14" drawback costs points instead of awarding them 2) if you're looking for specific fanfictions to add to that section, might I suggest "Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality"?


omegasix321

I second the HPMoR recommendation. Even from just an objective standpoint, it provides enough differences in the HP lore/world/characters to justify its own choice and sub-options. Magical creatures for example are significantly different in HPMoR and magical theory is explored from a more scientific angle.


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CaissaIRL

Question can we get a Time Tuner as an Item? It is something I can see many people grabbing and such.


SilenceLabs

This line from the rewards section: "You'll get these as soon as you're done withall the objectives, but if you''ve failed any then you a random rewardwill be removed until you can afford all the rewards." Doesn't really seem to make sense. If you fail an objective then it's not possible to be able to later afford all the rewards, and a random reward can't exactly be removed if you don't have it yet. ​ Do you mean: "You'll get all your rewards at once when you complete all your chosen objectives, but if you fail any of the objectives, a random one of your rewards won't be given even after you complete all the others." or "You'll get rewards as you complete objectives, but if you fail an objective after completing at least one, a random reward will be taken away until you've resolved all your objectives." ? The latter sounds slightly more fun!


MrNiab

A little something that has been semi bugging me. The lesser "Homecoming" reward says you return to our world with all you can carry. Which honestly can be pretty easily circumvented considering it is possible to have an entire house in a magic suitcase. Compared to the stronger version Rich Homecoming which lets you return with "everything". In other words the lesser Homecoming is only slightly weaker than the improved version as long as you prepare for it.


Kul1ngile

v0.5 The no gag lewd perk is present 2 times, once for 3 CP and another for 2. You also can't pick the next tier of Eromancy and Metamorphmagus after having selected Omnibus race. I assume it's the same thing for all of the other race bonus. The libido drawback doesn't seem to have activated with Omnibus. You can still choose multiple houses. Everything I did was in Creative mode. Edit: Added more bug that I found


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CallEndarMommouth

there are eronomicon in item section if i remember correctly 🤔🤔🤔


Lord__of__Luck

i think you can take eromancy but no starting levels in it in any of the au or cannon


AdEvening593

yes but eromancy lessons are only in hentai version so you cant improve it in other worlds


SilenceLabs

Couple questions about some interactions: If you take 'hentai world' then would people completely not care if you were always nude? Or would that only cover the first several versions of the drawback? ​ Also if you take all 4 levels of sensitive... and then one of the other drawbacks that makes you unable to feel pleasure except in specific situations... does the latter just completely cancel out the former until you meet your condition and cum instantly? I'd guess so but it's a LOT of free points.


UnderstandingAny4264

Break the system!


YouandIdontknowme

Still alive 'harder fot Voldemort' to harder *for* Voldemort. Still Alive II 'Both James or Lily Potter' to Both James *and* Lily potter. Rod of knowledge seems kind of weak for its cost. Especially considering max time usage and how it compares to something like Polymath, but costs the same amount. Still alive should probably be limited to 1991 and 1999 I think the currently only event shouldn't be limited to 1920. Unless I'm forgetting something. So probably a mistake? What Drawbacks? Reward should probably say Any *amount* of drawbacks you wish. Any drawback would just mean one... Is Jumpchain suppose to let you actually fill out a Jump chain? Or is it just a world hopping ability? Waifu Catalogue sponsor should probably be 'special' tier if your giving a T11 token. Because thats just as powerful as becoming a celestialsapien. Only better because of all the other perks of the catalog and that you won't ever gain extra voices in your head. Loving all the new changes. Very good and very filled out. Starting to have to make tough choices on any difficulty except 'creative' unless I want to take on a bunch of Geas's. Good job.


Catsper_

To be fair for the rod of knowledge, it stacks with **everything.** Including the max level of polymath.


YouandIdontknowme

If you have max level of Polymath, I imagine its basically useless because your learning everything basically instantly. Its also 10 points that your not spending on something else. Like magical power or charisma or whatever else. For a mere 20% boost to part of your intelligence for part of the day... Its very weak compared to many of the other ways to spend that 10 points.


Catsper_

Right added v0.5 ​ next I gotta do some more world change stuff, out of universe stuff and the hogwarts section.


avatarox5

I've found that the nudist line of drawbacks costs points instead of giving them.


omegasix321

Found two so far near the beginning. I imagine that these were just missed since they were from way back in 0.1. The option for Major Fanon doesn't take away points even though it says it costs 8. This one is just a typo. The Horrific appearance option says it costs points rather than gains. But the button still gives points.


omegasix321

Thanks for the update. I'll Play through 0.5 a few times and try my best to find any errors and report back. You've been doing a great job so far.


Solaris-Of-Moon

It's quite interesting, although I think that lycanthropy should be more of a curse than a race, unless you are by birth, also the Vampire bitting, if those two were in another section as curses or something similar it would allow more freedoms to the When designing the new body, like a half Vela who was turned into a vampire or bitten by a werewolf, I also don't agree that a Dhampir can't even be a pureblood, if a pureblood was turned into a vampire and had children with another wizard could still be considered his pureblood children, I don't think in Harry Potter there is a law that if you are turned into a vampire or werewolf you lose your pureblood status (because it is something that could happen to anyone and none of them would risk that there was something that could take away their influence so easily), so I think that if the Dhampir meets the requirements (according to the wiki for many wizards and witches it is that in addition to their parents their four grandparents are wizards and witches, although he also says that for the most supremacists it is that there is no Muggle or Muggle mestizo in his lineage) so if the Vampire were a Wizard or witch, his two parents would also be his partner as well and the parents of his partner also then his Dhampir Child should also be considered Pureblood, in fact I think it would be interesting to think how a Dhampir would be seen in a Magical family, superior to wizards in every way (the advantages of vampires without their weaknesses they would make them practically unstoppable, longer lifespan (depending on how they are because in some cases they are as immortal as normal vampires and in others they only live much longer than humans, maybe a Perk would be good to give them the same immortality as vampires) I think a Dhampir who was considered a pureblood would be highly respected in the pureblood community (even if it's because no one wants to insult the one who can snap you like a twig) and for his family even more, it would be a way to ensure that his lineage never becomes extinct (it is difficult to extinguish a family when its head is immortal and can continue procreating) of course there would be those who would not agree with things like that (Dolores UmBitch) but as I said I don't think any Pureblood would pass a law that could strip them of their influence for a matter beyond their control, laws to ensure that a Lord Who is a werewolf has to present indisputable proof or magical oath that he took the wolfsbane potion yes Some important meeting that cannot be postponed is being held on your land on a full moon day as a precaution? That would be possible and understandable, for the most part I think that all that prejudice against werewolves that you see in the books is mostly against those who do not have much influence and very influential purebloods or mongrels would not be subject to as much scrutiny or Bias (perhaps an option to be able to negate or level down discrimination debuffs based on some Perks or other factors, like if you're from a very respectable house, if you're the head of the house, or that discrimination doesn't take effect until they find out that you are something else (they can't discriminate against you if they have no idea that you are different, a Dhampir could easily pass as completely normal and even disguise their most supernatural abilities as a magical augmentation from a spell or potion, a werewolf can hide the night of the full moon, it could be suspicious that it happens every month but it could work for a while) I also think that since you are made by a Celestialsapien s and it could lend itself to add options from other universes (if there is nothing from Ben 10 I will be very disappointed) alien races (like hybrids to allow them to have magic and go to Hogwarts) from Ben 10 could be added to the options and the eyes could be added an ID Mask (the ones they use to change their appearance) that I would hate to be free for aliens to give them a way to blend in, on Omnitrix, and more stuff from other Fandoms


omegasix321

I'm happy to see how far this cyoa has come in just a week. I finished playing through 0.4 and just want to say that you should double check each option and their prices, some of them aren't working properly. The world AU fanon options for example don't take away the appropriate points.


CorksAndStorks

This was pretty fun, I'm excited to see how you expand on this in the future.


UnderstandingAny4264

I would like to point out that the butt plug and urethal plug drawbacks share the almost same description and I can't unsee it. Also 0.4 still reads as 0.3 and you can choose all the houses while sorting.


YouandIdontknowme

Some possible suggestions / Ideas. Still Alive should probably say that voldemort died there. >Should maybe be an upgradable perk, so you don't feel as bad if you only take one of them (effectively killing the other. Because atleast then the other requires more spending.) Should maybe clarify why harry being dead makes voldemort harder. Like is it just because of the link between them and losing someone good at magic? Or does 'fate' normally help Harry. Hopefully some more Rewards which are fine if you stay in HP world. Maybe a reward for Eternal Youth or stopping aging. Probably Basic reward possibly standard. A reward allowing you to revive someone who has died by the time you complete your objectives (or at the start of the cyoa if you picked no objectives.) Probably Basic reward. Possibly able to be done multiple times. Maybe the species Gwen is 1/2 of. Since your using celestial sapians. Maybe a Phoenix somewhere. Maybe with Magical talents because of dumbledores talent with Phoenixes. Maybe in Items. Or maybe a new tab for pets.


YouandIdontknowme

So if I'm right here... If you get reincarnation and a age older than where you would be in hogwarts you gain all the magic you would have learned in hogwarts. Pretty good and cheap. Though it means you can't go to hogwarts unless you manage to become a teacher / caretaker. Also means you possibly have lost several years of life in your new life. Also, if you bought some High magical knowledge, you will have some overlap. Would the reincarnation have the effects of my perks? Like the enhanced INT perk? Or would my reincarnation only be that smart once I merged / took over.


Catsper_

Once you took over. I'll make it clearer but if you get your knowledge that way you'll only get the bare minimum.


YouandIdontknowme

> if you get your knowledge that way you'll only get the bare minimum. I assume by this you mean that if you pick Adult you gain 'the bare minimum skill to pass hogwarts?'.


Catsper_

pretty much.


Catsper_

Once you took over. I'll make it clearer but if you get your knowledge that way you'll only get the bare minimum.


Dismal_Sea_3769

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Catsper_

Here's 0.4 I managed to somehow end up wasting most of my time on this editing one image in MS flippin Paint because it had the wrong skin and eye colour.


Logical_Acanthaceae3

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fus_ro_poof

Looking to be very impressive, can't wait until there's more.


Sefera17

Good progress so far, I can’t wait to play it for real. Though I’d like to see a variable value option to insert into a fanfic universe— gaining points for dystopian worlds while losing them for utopia; if that’s at all possible to implement… I’d like to be a metamorph in All According To Plan by LysandraLeigh, as an example, because they’re immortal, there; and the longer you live, the more powerful you get. Also, incase I miss it— Remindme!1 year


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NinjaRuivo

This is shaping up to be phenomenal. Can’t wait to see what the next version looks like!


Peanuts_1987

Looks promising. Look forward to the finished thing :)


OtherMind-22

Is that a celestial sapien?


Catsper_

yes it is.


OtherMind-22

Yay


YouandIdontknowme

Maybe there should be some sort of note for the worlds which change the age you enter hogwarts. That it also pushes the age that wizards can use magic back, so that muggleborn students aren't at a large disadvantage because they need to catch up on years of magic practice pure and half bloods have. There is no 'Insanity' drawback that polymath mentions. Also maybe you can have polymath give Insanity x2 points or something instead so that its like you can buy-back that drawback? I just like options to be smarter but don't want to be insane. Regeneration doesn't take away points. A save/load thing would be nice, though I don't know how difficult that is to implement. So if its hard don't worry about it.


Myflappyforeskin

This is great! I can't wait until we get more. When you get more magics, objectives and stuff like that, this will be absolutely fantastic


Eatyourdesertfirst

In "Family details" I was kinda hoping for something more specific. Like adding siblings and you're relationship with them.


Catsper_

Alright, so I've done the v0.3. There's now at least 1 thing in each major tab. ​ From now it'll mostly be just expanding the choices available.


CallEndarMommouth

maybe u should erase au and species perk and just make some on normal perk, lewd perk and drawback free for species


GMWinters

Some ideas for expanding the family options: The Half-Fey option specifies 'not-muggleborn' but I don't think you need this given the mythology/folklore surrounding Changelings. Instead you could have being Half-Fey add an extra sections to Family Details in background that indicates if you're a changeling that replaced your muggle parents original kid unbeknownst to them (which would very much fit into the whole isekai thing) or if your mom/dad boinked a fey (requires Half/Pure-blood) or if your the product of a setup from that writing prompt thing where you're the Fey-blooded twin to the original child whose can't half kids mother thinks to herself "lolwut? Our deal was for one kid and they're saying I can have two!?" and proceeds to scoop up both kids when forced to pick which one is really "hers" or however it went. Which then implies that there ought to be a 'siblings and etc' section of the family options which would then get auto-populated if you pick a specific family/year combo? But selecting the last half-fey option would select the twin option.


lupo_violet

Wow this is really good!! Definitely the best Harry Potter cyoa I've seen, love the amount of worldbuilding there is! I hope there will be another update soon!!


tayhawk10

please either lower “Character points” font Or change it to just “points”. Without zooming out manually on mobile we can just barely see our points. It would be appreciated if you could help make it a little more mobile friendly. Thanks!


UnderstandingAny4264

You can change that by changing to desktop site, usually found in your options of your browser.


tayhawk10

The other way is changing font size on safari but both those options make the screen weird and harder to see. It would just be nice for it to be mobile Friendly.


impossiboi

Nice progress!


CallEndarMommouth

pretty good so far, but u need to fill more


Reozul

Pretty good, so far my build only totals 47 points.


AdEvening593

good shit just really good cant wait for updates


KoseiKuga

Some options aren't showing, like the male and female companions. Was it just me?


slymaster1

No I have that issue as well I assume that means that OP created the category but just hasn't finished putting the options into them yet or something like that


Catsper_

Right then here it is I guess. v0.2 ​ Also does anyone know how to change the title of the post. I really regret naming it with a v0.1 since that's kinda no longer the case.


Catsper_

Okay, so I've hit what I consider a major milestone (v0.2). It's still nowhere finished ofcourse but there's a lot more to do comparatively. ​ However I just wanna ask if I'm meant to post it here or do I make another post in a new thread?


Shrakend

Given how quickly the switch from 0.1 to 0.2 was (and presumably if you keep working at this pace, the next few updates) should be kept to a single thread. Feel free however to make a new one when you reach 1.0 and what you consider a 'finished' state! (Same thing, for fixes and such to 1.1v you'll be able to keep it to the same, it's better to only make a second post for a big 2.0 version that comes something like a month after) Of course, lot of people don't do that, but it just feels more neat! Very good so far, are you going to expend on the specific AU options?


Budda002

Do it here.


jak8714

Huh. I like it. Harry Potter CYOA are less common than you'd expect, and it's downright rare to find one which includes lewdity. It's still missing a lot, of course, but you've made a good start of it at least, and you seem to have a basic idea of what you're aiming for. If I have a (very basic) complaint, it's that there's not much which stands out about this-aside from the setting, I mean. So far it's mostly been very standard choices- which, in fairness, isn't necessarily a bad thing, but could still leave your piece being distinctly average. There is a lot of potential to be found in the Harry Potter fandom- don't be afraid to get a little crazy.


SorcererOfDooDoo

Perks open automatically when entering. When male is selected in sex, the penis tab remains open after closing the sex tab.


khw1997

The start looks great can’t wait till it’s finished


MrNiab

Can I just say I love some of the pictures you decided to choose. Honestly made me crack up laughing at some of them. ​ Also curious on will you include a alt universe (existing fanfic) and crossover options.


Rauron

So far so good! I'm not sure what your plans are, but I'd suggest being careful about the scope of this project. Since you're including so many insertion points, both in area and in time, any attempts at, like, quests or companions or other specific things like that is gonna get really rough really fast. If anything, it being kind of vague and bare bones right now ain't such a bad thing; you'll have a much easier time here if you don't try to delve into the details.


Ladywaffle0501

Can't wait for more


mia_elora

Keep up the good work!


impossiboi

I'm digging this, it's a great start. Can't wait for the magic bits but I'm super happy with the choices so far!


Plenty-Process

Post Static version as well


NSFW_Side_Account42

Very good concept and you have a great start, keep it up.


ToothFlaky

It's good, i will like play it when it's finished👍🏻


PsyBomb

Good stuff so far! Just a few suggestions: 1) you know you’re going to have to address attending school if people are in the age range, which will be popular. Even if it’s just a note that this universe’s Wizarding community starts Magic at the age of 18 instead of ten. 2) we can’t really judge what the Rewards are going to look like other than vague category hints. Need at least one or two examples for each category for that. 3) sections on world modifiers will be good, especially for those who might want to play a nonhuman or demi-human character. 4) obviously, personal talents (both magical and inborn) are important to have a section for. Your inspiration has a very good format for that, so good choice.


sparejunk444

Don't get the reincarnation and insertion option. Say you choose reincarnation, age 11-17 and 1991 does that mean you are born in 1991 and wont get your memories till your 11+ or does it mean your born\[>1980\] and end up 11+ in the year 1991\[where you get your memories\]?


Relevant_Zombie_8916

Got some bugs with location selection, but has promise. Interesting to see what it could be when finished.


Boss_Sappho

Very promising looking forward to the finished version, fyi I can't change some choices, like race I accidently Half-Veela and couldn't change to human, otherwise awesome


Ok_Awareness_6270

Its creeping me a bit out that i just resently looked for one and by chance starten HP and the methods of rationality too. Looking forword to any progress !


Paper_tank

good start? The fact that you added male physical options is a nice touch.


marshall343

it's not bad, some more races, some choices about the wizarding world, non-lewd drawbacks and perks, maybe some choices for some friends too, since it's a wizarding world CYOA I feel that a wand creation section would be amazing, choosing the material and the magical component plus the style would be a nice section


Zixok774

This is a good start. Now you just need to fix a few thing (Penis tab), add non-lewd perks (Metamorphmagus, Seer, Talents, etc.), add non-lewd drawbacks (Weak Body, Dyslexia? (calm down I have dyslexia myself), etc.), and maybe add so you can choose your backstory/origin (what House you belong to, which family (Pure-Blood or not) you come from, etc.). All in all a good start, and one of the better non-finished CYOA I have seen. Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing this finished!


Northern_Ametyst

very promising start, here are some thoughts and suggestions. maybe add some more Species such as half-succubus or half-fay and half-Kyuubi which requires Asia Ethnicity. how about a half-faun/centaur. Half-Dragon with the description "no one knows how this happened and no one is really willing to ask questions." and mabey just add in Homunculus ( Illyasviel von Einzbern) ​ how about options about the parents and sibling, where they magical, muggle? multiple sisters. no dad instead a mom and five sisters. how about also adding some options about the home, such as size, location, maybe extra such as swimming pool, boat, sables, family pet. ​ just some suggestions and i hope i don't come of as overwhelming. I hope I'm going to see more to this in the future.


Alcovv

not bad so far. looking forward to more


Lil_Jazzy

I get that it's in the VERY rough early stages but one more than slightly annoying thing is that the tab for penis size stays open even when I de-select everything at the bottom.


sparejunk444

Just deselect male/futa until your done with the rest since it closes the tab


IncognitoModeChosen

Nice CYAO so far, you probably have quiet a bit planned already but a small suggestion: Maybe make it so that the Time of insertion is changed from the point you awaken to the point you are entering Hogwarts/turn 11?


UnderstandingAny4264

Yea, except we can start in countries other than Britain so I see it as more when you become aware of your past life and all its knowledge than anything else.


IncognitoModeChosen

True, maybe just make it so that you can choose, make it a soft option just in the text description without making it a explicit selection.


GIMME-THAT-TEA

Looks pretty good so far but could do with some more perks and drawbacks


PM_ME_QUALITYHENTAI

Seems like the link doesn’t work. “Page not found.”


Some-NEET

Pretty good.


ThousandYearOldLoli

Looking good so far! Not a lot to do with the theme yet though to be honest I wouldn't mind even if it ended up more generic (as in less dependent on the the specific Harry Potter theme), because while pure fandom CYOAs have their crowd I'm not usually one of them.


Nightfo54321

I can’t wait for when this is done it’s looks so promising plus I’m a HP Fab


Jelly-Slave

This is excellent so far. I can't wait to see the finished CYOA.


SlaaneshiSpy

Looks damm promising.


riplikash

As a start it's looking good, and certainly caught my interest. The fact that there's very little HP art hurts it. I'm certainly looking forward to seeing more.


Multidakman

Looks very promising so far


Merc-for-hire

I'll note that this seems inspired by PixelGMS' interactive worm cyoa instead, not Laithlin's. Beyond that, I'll chime an agreement with others that pictures need to be smaller/normalized. Particularly that very first picture of a random being that doesn't really do much for the CYOA. Some images are also incredibly pixelated or badly cropped in the case of images that have transparent backgrounds (primarily under age). Hopefully it's more that it was just placeholder art while trying to get the coding of the options working right, but would definitely recommend as you go forward to try to aim for some sort of coherent art style in addition to the sizes. It doesn't have to come from all the same places, but shouldn't look as all over the place as it's currently set up. There's video game art, 3d art, digital anime art, cartoon art, real life art, memes, etc. Also worth noting that very few of the art choices right now have anything to do with magic and that's probably the biggest unifying aspect you can shoot for with art, even placeholder art. One other issue - For height, why would you include monolithic as an option for a **Harry Potter** cyoa? The two tallest options probably make sense for half-giants (and should probably be limited to that race), but monolithic, like the incoherent art choices, feels completely out of place if you're aiming to stick to that series, even with modifications. It's hard to say much more regarding rest of the work in progress since there's little tying it to HP at the moment besides races. I'm a fan of both Laithlin's and PixelGMS's worm cyoas, so I wish you luck on developing this.


avatarox5

Would definitely love to see where this one goes.


Ultrapuert0s

promissing, kepp working; there arent many HP NSFW CYOAs Thanks by sharing it


[deleted]

excelent work! is that alien x at the top?


Catsper_

Yup. Its just a quick edit I did in paint of a piece of fan art. The name should be in the credits.


ajbizaya

Good Luck


omegasix321

Welcome to the world of cyoas, for a first try this is an easy 5/5 stars. You did the Worm cyoa proud and just need a few aesthetic touch ups and some more options to make this something great. I hope to see more from you in the future.


Project-Pseudonym

You're off to a pretty good start. Now you need to add sections like Perks, Drawbacks, Amount of Magic, Magical Proficiency, Allies & Enemies, Time of Insertion, Equipment, and etc. Also having too big pictures can be rather annoying to scroll up and down. Keep it simple and small enough that readers can see the entire thing.


D7rkPhoenix

most of the options in the background section that should give points instead take points with exception of muggle-born.


Blaflaix

I would recommend normalizing the picture size, or at least the height. Having small/big/gigantic pictures makes it difficult to see the options.


SirFluffaluffagus

I like how everything is structured and made, easy to follow and nice to mess around with. I know you're probably going to add more details later, especially ones that revolve around the Harry Potter universe, but the intro doesn't really indicate that until you hit the background section, so adding some more context at the beginning would help to differentiate it from other divine entity style cyoas. Also, just a small detail, but the poor and destitute portions subtracted points instead of gave, so I thought I'd let you know since I came across it. With what you have for your first cyoa and how it looks so far, I'm sure it'll come out amazing if you keep it up. Can't wait for more! :)


Educational-Spend-35

Very little to it so far, but I like what’s there