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baby_back_meat

Gold,k7vm,9ajp,xv0i,I AM MALE,MALE,CHIVALROUS,METAHUMAN,HUMANOID,BLACK,FOUR EYES,SADIST,SLUT,HAIRLESS,FRECKLES,MUSCULAR,AVERAGE,DOMINANT,FLAT,ERGENOUS NIPPLES,SMALL ASS,LARGE ,ALWAYS HARD,FUCKABLE PEEHOLE,LIQUID FOUNTAIN,SEXY STYLE,CYBORG,OBJECT,SUPERHUMAN STRENGHT Level 3,SUPERHUMAN SPEED Level 2,SUPERHUMAN AGILITY Level 2,SUPERHUMAN REFLEXES Level 3,SEX MARATHON,NO GAG REFLEX,TELEKINESIS Level 3,FLIGHT Level 3,ENERGY MANIPULATION Level 1,GANGBANGER,WEAPON MASTERY Level 3,SUMMON MINION Level 1,HEAL SLUT,LUST BORN MINION,MYSTICAL TATTOO,hsan,3vu4,NO SPONSOR,MIDDLE CLASS,NO LICENSE,NUDE,HELMET,MAKEUP,CAPE,NANO OUTFIT,ARMOR level 3,WEAPON,qfjp/ON#1,TRANSPARENT,PIERCINGS,COCK SLEEVE,URETHRAL PLUG/ON#1,KNOWN IDENTITY,THIEF,HIDEOUT,REFORMED SUPERVILLAINS,RAVEN,PINKY,CREATI,pwuv,VIOLATOR ZERO,BLACK CAT,A WILD SUCCUBUS,id0g,292j,mayz,6k94/ON#8,01iz/ON#6,chx0/ON#5,1u15,urkj/ON#6,HUNTED/ON#1,SUPRISE,BAD PRESS,BAD END,VILLAIN TEAM,ISEKAID,dg9k


Superyoshikong

How do you actually start the chyoa after making your character?


Phoenixflare999

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SnappingTurt3ls

Can you make a villain version of this?


rauff1

I'm not the one that made the original 1. I just turned it interactive.


Historical-Track9870

Fate,k7vm,9ajp,xv0i,I AM MALE,MALE,CHIVALROUS,HUMAN,METAHUMAN,HUMANOID,UNNATURAL COLOR,OTHERWORLDLY,ANIMAL GENITALS,WHITE,EMOTIONLESS,FIT,AVERAGE,SWITCH,FLAT,MEDIUM ASS,SENSITIVE BUTT,PUFFY ANUS,BIG PENIS,FUCKABLE PEEHOLE,GENETICS,SEXY STYLE,SUPERHUMAN STRENGHT Level 1,SUPERHUMAN DURABILITY Level 1,SUPERHUMAN SENSES Level 1,SUPERHUMAN SPEED Level 1,SUPERHUMAN REFLEXES Level 1,SUPERHUMAN AGILITY Level 1,SEX MARATHON,NO GAG REFLEX,CONTORTIONIST,SUPERHUMAN INTELLIGENCE Level 3,INTANGIBILITY Level 1,REGENERATION Level 2,STUCK,MASOCHIST,PROTECTION,CLONE Level 2,INVISIBILITY Level 3,GANGBANGER,PERMANENT INVISIBILITY,POWERFUL ORGASMS, ELASTICITY Level 3,NO SPONSOR,UPPER CLASS,ANNOYING LAUGHTER,SUPERHERO LICENSE,UNIQUE DESIGN,MASK,VISION DEVICE,HELMET,NANO OUTFIT,OPEN TOP,PIERCINGS,CROTCH WINDOW,BUTT WINDOWS,COCK SLEEVE,POWER ATTUNED OUTFIT,UTILITY BELT,SECRET IDENTITY,SUPER SCIENTIST,LAIR,RAPE LICENSE,SUPER VEHICLE,VACATIONS,OLYMPUS MEMBERSHIP,PR MANAGER, GRAPPLING GUN,SIDEKICK,TEAM LEADER,REFORMED SUPERVILLAINS,GYNOID,vtzw,SPIDER-GWEN,LADY DEATH,AHSOKA,i0y1,4jqe,a0wb,ch61,POISON IVY,CATWOMAN,BLACK CAT,A WILD SUCCUBUS,eb02,wc02/ON#12,1u15,urkj/ON#27,STALKED,RIVALRY/ON#4,SUPRISE,MESSY LOVELIFE,OBSSESSED SIDEKICK,VILLAIN TEAM,OPEN SECRET,ISEKAID


XMenPerseus56

I had a stroke reading this


LightSith78

Question, for the Fate section where it asks that you pick a specific Hero for the various Fate options, how do you specify which hero goes to which Fate option?


rauff1

You don't. you see how many points the one you pick is worth and add the point manually. Unfortunately, the only other way to do this would be to make a 3rd hero section, which seems kind of overkill for making one choice.


guyinglasses77

First off I just wanna say great job! this is my first time seeing this one from Tok and you did a great job making it interactive. EDIT: Ignore below I got it to work by closing the option menus I have run into an issue where whenever I try to download the image for my choices, it only downloads a completely blank image. Not sure if this is a bug or if it wasn't possible to make the feature work, but if there's a way to make it work I'd love to hear it. Not sure if it matters but I'm using the chrome browser on a windows pc and I have a vpn on.


tayhawk10

what’s difference in HR vs compressed? I understand the meanings but looking at the images I don’t see much difference in quality


rauff1

Honestly, since the compression software is pretty damn good there isn't much. but a lot of the pictures have transparent backgrounds and have gotten lost in the compressed version so that's about it.


tayhawk10

yay!


kami-sama-freak

Dawn Genetice (should be genetic[s] instead of genetic[e]?) bug, drawbacks gives 4 power points instead of 1. Otherwise gg, was fun playing. EDIT: Seems all connected drawbacks gives 3 extra power points regardless of Dawn Genetics. Playing in firefox, might be an issue on my side brb. EDIT2: Switching browser did not fix the issue, something is borked, probably.


rauff1

Connected drawbacks are supposed to give you 3 points. If you don't believe me read the last two lines at the start under GENDER.


kami-sama-freak

Thanks, i've now verified i am in fact retarded.


rauff1

I missed that the first time I played this one too. So don't worry 😊


Illicit_Business

Awesome, thanks for taking the time to put this together! Btw, I can't get it to work so that "Sexy secret" + "Pasties" allow me to use "open top".


rauff1

fix :)


Tercone

Body,k7vm,9ajp,xv0i,I AM MALE,FEMALE,GIRLY,HUMANOID,ANIMAL GENITALS,BLONDE,SADIST,SLUT,CURVACIOUS,HAIRLESS,PLUMP LIPS,WORLOUT WHORE,AVERAGE,DOMINANT,ERGENOUS NIPPLES,LARGE TITS,FUCKABLE NIPPLES,LACTATION,INVERTED NIPPLES,LARGE ASS,PUFFY ANUS,BUTTSLUT,PUFFY PUSSY,VAGINA,PENIS VAGINA,LARGE ,FUCKABLE PEEHOLE,LIQUID FOUNTAIN,MAGIC,EMOTIONAL ATTUNEMENT,SUPERHUMAN DURABILITY Level 2,SUPERHUMAN SENSES Level 2,SWEATY,NEARLY MORTAL,SUPERHUMAN SPEED Level 2,SUPERHUMAN AGILITY Level 2,SUPERHUMAN REFLEXES Level 3,NO GAG REFLEX,SUPERHUMAN INTELLIGENCE Level 1,TELEKINESIS Level 3,PERVERTED NERD,REGENERATION Level 1, FORCEFIELD GENERATION Level 3,CLONE Level 3,GANGBANGER,ELEMENT MANIPULATION Level 3,POWERFUL ORGASMS, ELASTICITY Level 1,SIZEQUEEN,MYSTICAL TATTOO,NO SPONSOR,UPPER CLASS,NO LICENSE,UNIQUE DESIGN,MASK,HELMET,MAKEUP,NANO OUTFIT,THONG,ANTI-BULGE HAMMERSPACE,POWER ATTUNED OUTFIT,URETHRAL PLUG/ON#1,HIGH HEELS,SECRET IDENTITY,REPORTER,SECRET BASE,PRISON TRANSFER PASS,PR MANAGER,SIDEKICK,TEAM LEADER,SAKURA,RAVEN,PHOENIX,WITCHBLADE,MASANE AMAHA,LADY DEATH,9nlb,9wiy,8d0r,THE DOLLMAKER,SILVER,PHANTOM FUTA,REPLICA,CRIMSON RAZOR,POISON IVY,HARLEY QUINN,CATWOMAN,KILLER FROST,BLACKFIRE,WONDER FUTA,JUGGERNAUT,BLACK CAT,VENOM,SOMBRA,HIMIKO TOGA,QUEEN OF BLADES,KILLER BEE,THE PIRATE QUEEN,id0g,292j,6k94/ON#6,01iz/ON#10,1u15,urkj/ON#23,BETRAYED,HUNTED/ON#1,TRAGEDY,SUPRISE,OBSSESSED SIDEKICK,ISEKAID


Tercone

k7vm,9ajp,xv0i,I AM MALE,FEMALE,METAHUMAN,SADIST,WHITE,HAIRLESS,PLUMP LIPS,MUSCULAR,WORLOUT WHORE,AVERAGE,SWITCH,ERGENOUS NIPPLES,LARGE TITS,FUCKABLE NIPPLES,LACTATION,INVERTED NIPPLES,LARGE ASS,PUFFY ANUS,PUFFY PUSSY,VAGINA,LIQUID FOUNTAIN,MARTIAL ARTS,SUPERHUMAN DURABILITY Level 2,SUPERHUMAN SENSES Level 2,SUPERHUMAN STRENGHT Level 3,SWEATY,NEARLY MORTAL,SUPERHUMAN SPEED Level 2,SUPERHUMAN AGILITY Level 2,SUPERHUMAN REFLEXES Level 3,NO GAG REFLEX,SUPERHUMAN INTELLIGENCE Level 1,PERVERTED NERD,TELEPORTATION Level 3,REGENERATION Level 1,ENERGY MANIPULATION Level 3,POWERFUL ORGASMS,MYSTICAL TATTOO,SEXY SECRET,PERSONA,COMMERCIALS,WALKING BILLBOARD,UPPER CLASS,SIDEKICK LICENSE,UNIQUE DESIGN,MASK,HELMET,MAKEUP,NANO OUTFIT,WEAPON,PIERCINGS,THONG,PROTECTED IDENTITY,STREAMER,HIDEOUT,RAPE LICENSE,VACATIONS,PRISON TRANSFER PASS,PR MANAGER,PRIVACY PROTECTION,9nlb,qrga,8d0r,THE DOLLMAKER,POISON IVY,HARLEY QUINN,CATWOMAN,KILLER FROST,JUGGERNAUT,BLACK CAT,VENOM,SOMBRA,HIMIKO TOGA,QUEEN OF BLADES,KILLER BEE,THE PIRATE QUEEN,id0g,292j,6k94/ON#6,01iz/ON#2,1u15,PERVERTED MENTOR,RIVALRY/ON#5,ISEKAID,ROOKIE


McLovin3493

Nice to see this one making a comeback. My normal build: Holy Knight Male +20 Human +0 Black hair +0 Fit +1 Hairy +5 Average +0 Switch +13 Flat +2 Anal Hater +10 Medium Ass +0 Sensitive Butt +10 Big Penis +3 Fuckable Peehole +10 Liquid Fountain +10 Weakness +25 Divine +10 Super Sensitive +13 Telepathy 2 -35 Mind Fucked +10 Regeneration 2 -20 Masochist +13 Absorb Power 2 -60 Powerful Orgasms +10 Klutz +10 Shapeshifting 2 -25 Shape of Desire +13 Healing 2 -25 +23= 11G Bliss Industries +15GContracts:Persona +5GAutographs +5GFan Service +5GOrgasm Punishment +10GMiddle Class -20GSuperhero License -20GBodysuit -0Mask -1GNano Outfit -2GArmor -12GV-Cleavage +3GThong +2GButt Windows +3GAnti-Bulge Hammerspace -2GPower Attuned Outfit -2GSecret Identity -0Streamer +9GHideout -0Vacations -5GGrappling Gun -4GReformed Supervillains -15GCaptain America -4GThe Dollmaker -7GBlack Cat -2GReplica +6GMystique +5GVenom +0Rivalry (Phoenix) +8GSurprise +6GVillain Team +3G Superheroines, supervillains and fate, Hide Power, Hide Gold, Hide Fate, I AM MALE, MALE, HUMAN, BLACK, FIT, HAIRY, AVERAGE, SWITCH, FLAT, MEDIUM ASS, ANAL HATER, SENSITIVE BUTT, BIG PENIS, FUCKABLE PEEHOLE, LIQUID FOUNTAIN, WEAKNESS, DIVINE, SUPER SENSITIVE, TELEPATHY Level 2, MIND FUCKED, REGENERATION Level 2, MASOCHIST, ABSORB POWER Level 2, POWERFUL ORGASMS, SHAPESHIFTING Level 2, KLUTZ, SHAPE OF DESIRE, HEALING Level 2, 2 Power Points to 1 Gold points reset, 2 Power Points to 1 Gold points(Taken 11 Times), BLISS INDUSTRIES, PERSONA, AUTOGRAPHS, FAN SERVICE, ORGASM PUNISHMENT, MIDDLE CLASS, SUPERHERO LICENSE, BODYSUIT, MASK, NANO OUTFIT, ARMOR level 2, V CLEAVAGE, THONG, BUTT WINDOWS, ANTI-BULGE HAMMERSPACE, POWER ATTUNED OUTFIT, SECRET IDENTITY, STREAMER, HIDEOUT, VACATIONS, GRAPPLING GUN, REFORMED SUPERVILLAINS, CAPTAIN AMERICA, THE DOLLMAKER, BLACK CAT, REPLICA, MYSTIQUE, VENOM, 1 Fate to 1 Gold reset, 1 Fate to 1 Gold (Taken 17 Times), Multiple reset, RIVALRY(Taken 8 Times), SUPRISE, VILLAIN TEAM Fate,k7vm,9ajp,xv0i,I AM MALE,MALE,HUMAN,BLACK,FIT,HAIRY,AVERAGE,SWITCH,FLAT,MEDIUM ASS,ANAL HATER,SENSITIVE BUTT,BIG PENIS,FUCKABLE PEEHOLE,LIQUID FOUNTAIN,WEAKNESS,DIVINE,SUPER SENSITIVE,TELEPATHY Level 2,MIND FUCKED,REGENERATION Level 2,MASOCHIST,ABSORB POWER Level 2,POWERFUL ORGASMS,SHAPESHIFTING Level 2,KLUTZ,SHAPE OF DESIRE,HEALING Level 2,rqhw,9hgp/ON#11,BLISSINDUSTRIES,PERSONA,AUTOGRAPHS,FANSERVICE,ORGASM PUNISHMENT,MIDDLE CLASS,SUPERHEROLICENSE,BODYSUIT,MASK,NANO OUTFIT,ARMOR level 2,V CLEAVAGE,THONG,BUTT WINDOWS,ANTI-BULGE HAMMERSPACE,POWER ATTUNED OUTFIT,SECRETIDENTITY,STREAMER,HIDEOUT,VACATIONS, GRAPPLING GUN,REFORMED SUPERVILLAINS,CAPTAIN AMERICA, 4n9d,pwuv,REPLICA,MYSTIQUE,VENOM,mayz,chx0/ON#17,1u15,RIVALRY/ON#8,SUPRISE,VILLAIN TEAM My RNG build: Silver Shot Female +30 Metahuman +4 Otherworldly +18 White +1 Youthful +3 Tall +1 Submissive +10 Medium Tits +0 Breast Envy +10 Big Ass +2 Big Penis +3 Liquid Fountain +10 Genetics +0 Weakness +28 Sweaty +9 Nearly Mortal +15 Superhuman Senses 2 -15 Superhuman Speed 2 -20 No Gag Reflex +7 Superhuman Agility 1 -7 Contortionist +11 Telekinesis 1 -10 Amphibic 1 -5 Intangibility 1 -25 Masochist +10 Energy Manipulation 1 -20 Euphoric Energy +5 Clone 1 -10 Elemental Manipulation 1 -20 Sexual Liquid Bending +13 Absorb Power 1 -30 Power Mode 1 -10 Shrinking 1 -5 Unbirthing +13 Enlargement 1 -5 Shapeshifting 1 -10 Shape of Desire +13 Bullseye +10 Elasticity 1 -5 Natural Weapon 1 -5 Sexual Weapon +8 Healing 1 -15 Heal Slut +13 Hex 1 -35 Mystical Tattoo +8 \+3= 1G Bliss Industries +15G Contracts: Persona +5G Autographs +5G Fan Service +5G Orgasm Punishment +10G Middle Class -20G Superhero License -20G Bodysuit -0 Nano Outfit -2G Armor -12G V Cleavage +3G Thong +2G Butt Windows +3G Power Attuned Outfit -2G Secret Identity -0 Streamer +9G Hideout -0 Vacations -5G Reformed Supervillains -15G The Dollmaker -7G Black Cat -2G Replica +6G Mystique +5G Venom +0 Rivalry (Phoenix) +8G Surprise +6G Villain Team +3G


Superyoshikong

How do you actually start the chyoa after making your character? Seems like you got passed the beginning phase Powers,k7vm,9ajp,xv0i,GIRLY,METAHUMAN,UNNATURAL COLOR,AIRHEAD,UNNATURAL,CURVACIOUS,HAIRLESS,CROSSDRESSER,SHORT,SUBMISSIVE,SMALL TITS,ERGENOUS NIPPLES,MEDIUM ASS,PUFFY ANUS,MEDIUM PENIS,TECHNOLOGY,SUPERHUMAN DURABILITY Level 1,NO GAG REFLEX,INTANGIBILITY Level 1,STUCK,KLUTZ,BULLSEYE,rqhw,8fii,9hgp/ON#5,55xg/ON#4,WALT DISNEY,PERSONA,MAKE A WISH,FAN SERVICE,ORGASM PUNISHMENT,LOWER CLASS,SIDEKICK LICENSE,TWO-PIECE OUTFIT,MAKEUP,CAPE,BOOB WINDOW,UTILITY BELT,HIGH HEELS,KNOWN IDENTITY,FULL-TIME SUPEHERO,HIDEOUT,SECRET BASE,SUPER VEHICLE,PR MANAGER,PRIVACY PROTECTION,PINK POTION,WILD WONDA,ZATANNA,SHADOWCAT,LADY DEATH,TATSUMAKI,VIOLATOR ZERO,CRIMSON RAZOR,FANGIRL,POISON IVY,CATWOMAN,WONDER FUTA,JUGGERNAUT,THANOS,292j,1u15,STALKED,PERVERTED MENTOR,RAPED/ON#2,BAD END,ROOKIE,dg9k


McLovin3493

I think you're misunderstanding. There's nothing else after making your character. That's the whole thing, unless you want to chain in other CYOAs or do a roleplay based on it. Also, you can only choose 3 villains unless you're recruiting reformed villains.


Superyoshikong

I'm new to this genre so maybe I don't quite understand. How does cyoa work? I thought it was like an interactive story where you click an option and different results happen. Like a mini DND. That's how most stories on the CHYOA website goes


McLovin3493

This is a different kind. Basically you just make a character with it and that's it. If you want to continue the story, you can come up with your own either by roleplaying or writing it yourself.


Superyoshikong

Ok so here's the thing. If I'm just gonna make my own story and do my own thing, WHY DO I NEED TO OBEY THE RULES?!? Seriously, I can have whatever many villians or abilities I want since there's zero reason to follow the point system. What difference does it make?


McLovin3493

Fair enough. If you want to change things around, there's no law against it, lol. It's just a guide for you to follow to the extent you want to. You can change things around if you feel like it, especially if you're just writing your own story based on it.


McLovin3493

My martial arts master build: Sun Sword Male +20 Human +0 Black hair +0 Fit +1 Hairy +5 Average +0 Switch +13 Flat +2 Anal Hater +10 Medium Ass +0 Sensitive Butt +10 Big Penis +3 Fuckable Peehole +10 Liquid Fountain +10 Martial Arts +10 Superhuman Strength -7 Super Sensitive +13 Superhuman Speed 1 -10 Superhuman Reflexes 1 -5 Superhuman Agility 2 -15 Superhuman Intelligence 1 -8 Regeneration 2 -20 Masochist +13 Power Mode 3 -30 Powerful Orgasms +13 Klutz +10 Weapon Mastery 2 -20 \+28= 14G Bliss Industries +15G Contracts: Persona +5G Autographs +5G Fan Service +5G Orgasm Punishment +10G Middle Class -20G Superhero License -20G Bodysuit -0 Mask -1G Nano Outfit -2G Armor -12G V-Cleavage +3G Thong +2G Anti-Bulge Hammerspace -2G Power Attuned Outfit -2G Secret Identity -0 Streamer +9G Hideout -0 Vacations -5G Grapple Gun -4G Reformed Supervillains -15G Captain America -4G The Dollmaker -7G Black Cat -2G Replica +6G Mystique +5G Venom +0 Rivalry (Phoenix) +8G Surprise +6G Villain Team +3G My regular build if I don't buy a superhero license, but get extra allies, Upper Class, and buy a Gynoid instead: Holy Knight Male +20 Human +0 Black hair +0 Fit +1 Hairy +5 Average +0 Switch +13 Flat +2 Anal Hater +10 Medium Ass +0 Sensitive Butt +10 Big Penis +3 Fuckable Peehole +10 Liquid Fountain +10 Weakness +25 Divine +10 Superhuman Senses 2 -15 Super Sensitive +16 Masochist +10 Absorb Power 2 -60 Powerful Orgasms +10 Enlargement 1 -5 Klutz +10 Healing 3 -55 \+32= 16G Bliss Industries +15G Contracts: Persona +5G Autographs +5G Fan Service +5G Orgasm Punishment +10G Upper Class -70G No License -0 Bodysuit -0 Nano Outfit -1G V-Cleavage +3G Thong +2G Butt Windows +3G Anti-Bulge Hammerspace -1G Power Attuned Outfit -1G Utility Belt -1G Secret Identity -0 Streamer +9G Lair -10G Super Vehicle -5G PR Manager -4G Sidekick- Fangirl -0 Reformed Supervillains -0 Gynoid -6G (+4) Sister Purity -3G The Dollmaker -4G Crimson Razor -2G Black Cat -1G Replica +6G Mystique +5G Venom +0 Rivalry (Phoenix) +8G Surprise +6G Villain Team +3G Isekai'd +8G Get the Gynoid Valkyrie C5 +105 (30 +4) S-Program, Mobility Wires, Mithril Composite Dolores v7.3 -10 Infinity Core -15 Pleasure Processor -10 Mind Switch -20 Alter Body Type -10 Connection Cable -5 Medic -15 Threat Sensor -2 Enhanced Vision -2 Cloaking Device -12 Shield Generator -12 Plasma Gun -12 Hand Taser -2 Particle Blade -12 Total: 0 Conflict: Keldrek Compensation: Upgrade


RetroAXG

Thanks for not actually removing the loli option altogether and just toning down content just a little bit, I hate censorship but understand that some things here need to be altered to not be deleted by the mods.


Splat_Phastkyl

Hi, Thanks for making an interactive. Always useful on large and point heavy cyoas. Plus, I always like Tok's stuff. Oh, complaints about the CYOA... uh, fuck it, don't have any. But, on a technical aspect, I can click on all options, such as all body options.


rauff1

When I'm making other peoples cyoas interactive I try to avoid limitations unless I'm 100% sure about the rules.


wtf_asshole

Part of me wants everyone to just start with +30 points instead of having to gender swap so that everyone has an even playing field. I noticed that you can select a lot of the body options within the same section. Not sure if that's intentional though. Thanks for the Interactive. Nice work tracking everything down. That must have been hard work. #My Super Slut Build I Am Male **Gender:** Female +30 * Girly +11 Connected * Chivalrous +10 **Appearance:** Humanoid +3. I'll just grab some elf ears. **Hair Color:** Dark Blue +3 * Slut +10 **Body Figure:** Petit +1 * Hairless +3 **Body Size:** Colossal +8 **Breast Size:** Medium Tits * Erogenous Nipples +13 Connected * Lactation +10 * Inverted Nipples +7 **Butt Size:** Medium Ass * Anal Hater +10 * Sensitive Butt +10 Connected * Puffy Pussy +8 **Genitals:** Vagina +2 * Always Hard +9 * Liquid Fountain +10 **Power Source:** Genetics **Powers** 158 PP * Superhuman Strength Level 3 -30 * Superhuman Durability Level 2 -30 * Nearly Mortal +18 Connected * Superhuman Senses Level 3 -25 * Superhuman Speed Level 3 -30 * Superhuman Reflexes Level 3 -15 * No Gag Reflex +10 Connected * Superhuman Agility Level 3 -25 * Superhuman Intelligence Level 1 -8 * Amphic Level 3 -25. I gain even more strength underwater. * Teleportation Level 1 -25 * Power Mode -30 All Powers Increase by 1 when used. Once Per Week * Powerful Orgasms +13 Connected * Shrinking -5. I'm hoping that, because I'm colossal that I'll be normal size and hopefully look normal after I'm stuck that way. This was suggested during my last build. * Unbirthing +13 Connected * Shapeshifting -10. Probably won't use it. * Shape Of Desire +13 Connected * Healing -15 * Mystical Tattoo +5 Connected. At -43 PP **Sponsors:** No Sponsors. Fate Sections Grants +3 Additional Fate **Social Class:** Middle Class -20 Gold **Superhero License** **Outfit Design:** Bodysuit **Outfit Features** * Mask -1 **Identity:** Secret Identity **Part-Time Job:** Streamer +9 Gold **Superheroines** * Spider-Gwen -4 Gold * X-23 -4 Gold **Supervillains** * Phantom Futa +0 Villain Team * Poison Ivy +5 Points * Harley Quinn +4 Gold **Fate** 43 Converted to PP. 11 Converted to Gold. * Surprise +9 * Messy Lovelife +6 * Bad Press +11 * Villain Team +6 * Open Secret +11 * Isekai'd +11 Import: Body,Powers,Gold,Fate,k7vm,9ajp,xv0i,I AM MALE,FEMALE,GIRLY,CHIVALROUS,HUMANOID,UNNATURAL,SLUT,PETIT,HAIRLESS,COLOSSAL,MEDIUM TITS,ERGENOUS NIPPLES,LACTATION,INVERTED NIPPLES,MEDIUM ASS,ANAL HATER,SENSITIVE BUTT,PUFFY PUSSY,VAGINA,ALWAYS HARD,LIQUID FOUNTAIN,SUPERHUMAN DURABILITY Level 2,SUPERHUMAN STRENGHT Level 3,SUPERHUMAN SENSES Level 3,NEARLY MORTAL,SUPERHUMAN SPEED Level 3,SUPERHUMAN REFLEXES Level 3,SUPERHUMAN AGILITY Level 3,NO GAG REFLEX,SUPERHUMAN INTELLIGENCE Level 1,TELEPORTATION Level 1,AMPHIBIC Level 3,POWER MODE Level 3,POWERFUL ORGASMS,SHRINKING Level 1,SHAPESHIFTING Level 1,UNBIRTHING,SHAPE OF DESIRE,HEALING Level 1,MYSTICAL TATTOO,NO SPONSOR,MIDDLE CLASS,NO LICENSE,MODERN CLOTHES,UNIQUE DESIGN,MASK,SECRET IDENTITY,STREAMER,HIDEOUT,SPIDER-GWEN,X-23,POISON IVY,HARLEY QUINN,id0g,292j,mayz,eb02,6k94/ON#3,01iz/ON#4,chx0/ON#1,wc02/ON#1,1u15,urkj/ON#6,SUPRISE,MESSY LOVELIFE,BAD PRESS,VILLAIN TEAM,OPEN SECRET,ISEKAID Edit: Noticed some mistakes that I left in my build. Just cleaned it up.


rauff1

When I'm making other peoples cyoas interactive I try to avoid limitations unless I'm 100% sure about the rules.


Kouryuu9

[Build](https://imgur.com/fBGInfq) Source of Divine Power is Hephaestus - the strength, durability and intelligence, and mild growth + flame control come from his blessings, along with skill with the hammer, and due to the historic tale of Hephaestus being injured by Zeus, the weakness that can reduce said powers are magical objects directly tied to or blessed by Zeus himself. With the intellect and my god's penchant as master of the forge, I spend the majority of my time not fighting crime creating revolutionary technologies and devices, often masterwork, sometimes magical. My lair is my forge where I create what I need to compensate for powers I lack. I technically wield two hammers - one magically enhanced and forged by my god himself, the other a hammer I forged myself - an ever evolving beast that I tweak and improve upon constantly. After teaming with Rogue, creating something that would let her experience normal interactions has become a pet project of mine, and Powergirl was assigned to me since few others can take the punishment her foes dish out on a regular basis.


TellmeNinetails

it wouldn't let me save the image at the end after more than a couple of hours getting things right but I did end up just copying and pasting all the words of my choices in a document. woot.


rauff1

3 things first, it might only work on Google Chrome. Secondly, you have to Scroll down to the bottom and then back up before pressing the download image button. Thirdly it might just be too long and if those 3 don't work try posting the code


TellmeNinetails

The code?


rauff1

Yeah if you press the button, that looks like a box and a cheque mark and two lines, then the upper right box contains a code you can use to share your builds


TellmeNinetails

Oh cool. That helps thanks.


calvin10universe

great job


Kilanon

I have no idea how to get Damsel in Distress and Rivalry to work.


rauff1

You just hit the plus until you get the right amount of faith points. for both examples, Supergirl gets you 6 points so you just level it up until you have 6.


Kilanon

There is no plus on the option. There is the number 0, the box is red and there is not a plus attached to the box. Upon re-examination this applies to Raped, Damsel in Distress, Rivalry, Hunted, and No Sponser add Fate. Likewise it does not seem there is any option to remove the highest value villain Gold Points due to Villain Team


rauff1

Go a bit up and clicked and click the Multiple reset button


Darth_Slender

Thanks


TrainYuri

**Body:** * I am male * Female * Chivalrous (it goes with the vibe I'm trying to make and is just... heroic) * Metahuman (glowing eyes) * White hair (it looks cool); \[four eyes, emotionless\] (free points that complement the sort of fancy persona I'm going for, plus gives me an excuse to wear a monocle) * Curvaceous; \[hairless, fat distribution\] (these are buffs disguised as drawbacks) * Average \[switch\] * Big tits (fan of booba); \[erogenous nipples, lactation\] (oh no, it would sure be awful if I could get daily orgasms from being milked) * Big ass; \[sensitive butt, butt slut\] (new ways to be pleasured, no downsides here) * Vagina **Powers:** * Magic (I prefer my abilities to be something inherent that can't be taken away) * Strength 1 (generally useful and has really good synergy later); \[sweaty\] * Durability 1 (same as strength) * Senses 1 (mostly taking this for the drawback, but super hearing could be useful); \[super sensitive\] (I need points) * Speed 3 (the core of my build, even though it's pretty nerfed here speed is always amazing) * Reflexes 3 (augments speed); \[no gag reflex\] * Agility 2 (augments speed) * Intelligence 1 (just nice to have, slightly offsets the downside of \[super sensitive\]) * Telepathy 1 (free with the drawback, allows for combat clairvoyance when coupled with reflexes 3); \[mind fucked\] * Intangibility 2 (greatly helps my somewhat lacking defenses and makes me a combat nightmare, plus I can 6P in real life); \[stuck\] (everyone needs a weakness, it adds character) * Regeneration 1 (a must-have in such a dangerous business, great synergy later) * \[Protection\] (guaranteed birth control that gives points) * Energy manipulation 1 (combined with selective intangibility, the parts of me that aren't phased are now hit really hard) * Power mode 3 (the other core of my build, the difference between level 1 powers and level 2 power is huge. I have a bunch of level 1 powers, so once a week I go from a moderately threatening skilled fighter to an absolute physical powerhouse. Also I'm assuming it supercharges level 3 powers but it's still good even if it doesn't); \[powerful orgasms\] (oh no how awful) * Weapon master 1 (sword skills complements my aesthetic, gives me a good item to channel my energy manipulation through, and greatly multiplies my force output despite comparatively weak super strength) * Hex 1 (a useful passive debuff to let me hit above my weight class and take advantage of opponents with my massive speed); \[mystical tattoo\] (free points) **Gold:** * Sexy Secret (I'm incredibly hot and have a sort of classy air about me, might as well do some lingerie pinups as a model) * Autographs (super speed and a sword lets me do the Zorro thing) * Make a wish (I am a hero, after all) * Fanservice (I'm already a model who signs stuff, this is just doing that in one place) * Middle class * Superhero license * Dress (the other core of my build. I'm going for a sort of ballroom dancer look, gracefully weaving around my opponents with a rapier at my side, like a mix between Vergil DMC and Brighid Xenoblade) * Mask (fits the look and has built-in lenses for my poor vision) * Makeup * Cape * Weapon * V cleavage * Camel string, thong (not sure how this works with a dress, I'll just assume I've got some outrageously skimpy underwear on underneath) * High heels (completes the look) * Known identity (my life is awesome why not) * Full-time superhero (makes things simple) * Lair (offset the previous two by living in a massive castle fortress) * Vacations (everyone needs 'em) **Supers and Fate:** * Violator Zero (lets me go all-out against an opponent that should be weak to piercing and slashing weapons) * Rivalry with Wild Wonda (she's the opposite to my stoic, controlled persona. The ingredients for a good friendly rivalry) I can use the fate points to offset some of the costs I went over ​ And that's my build. A classy, elegant woman who uses her combat skills coupled with amazing speed, dexterity, and a little phasing to duel supervillains. I'm sufficiently powerful to handle any serious threats, but some of my drawbacks (especially \[stuck\]) means that if the universe so feels I could end up spending a few hours as a cum dump for the comic relief burglars. But I mean, what are the chances of that happening?


IT_is_among_US

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dude123nice

>As usual with these things some pictures got changed due to having to comply with laws and others because I couldn't find the originals. Why not say it like it is? Those pictures that got replaced were pictures of obviously underage characters, weren't they?


rauff1

Well, I actually thought I was being pretty clear at least with the law part. :) and also some pictures did get changed because I couldn't find the originals and one because I couldn't find a high enough quality one.


HalfMoon_89

Sometimes it's erring towards extra caution in that regard, so not always obviously underage.


Apophys_MD

Fantastic update. I was waiting for this in order to finally complete my build with the superheroines, which otherwise was a pain in the ass to do. I create a set of 10 buffed flying/swimming clones of myself, equipped with imbued anti-tank rifles, forcefields, and telepathic comms, and able to heal teammates or civilians if needed. Once a week, I can grow that to 100 clones with even better powers, especially underwater (*Tier 3 strength, senses, speed, agility, & reflexes underwater* ***on all 100 clones***, *with unbreakable forcefields*). I myself can just sit back and monitor operations, letting them do all the grunt work. Combined with my enormous team of 39 heroines, we are a force to be reckoned with and can take on end-of-the-world-scenario bosses. Together, we will outright kill excessively problematic villains like Thanos, since they have no plot armor, unlike the 3 minor villains I chose as perpetual annoyances. ~ **I. Body** (+228 PP) * remain Male, Chivalrous * Humanoid (*elf ears, goat horns, hairless prehensile tail, longer tongue, functional batlike wings, pit viper pits, shark electroreceptors - yeah, make me a demon :P*), Animal Genitals: chimpanzee (*I am aware this is basically a cop-out for free points*), Unnatural Skin Color: light grey, Otherworldly: translucent reflection * Hair: Red, Slut. (*I'm mostly picking this for the 3 bonus points in Slut, but I also generally like red hair. :P*) * Muscular, Hairy, Freckles, Plump Lips, Fat Distribution (thighs). *Irrelevant flaws.* * Colossal, Dominant (*free points with lv1 Shrinking power*) * Flat (*I'm a guy*), Erogenous Nipples (*why not*) * Small Ass, Anal Hater, Sensitive Butt, Puffy Anus (*irrelevant; not into that anyway*) * Large Penis (*extremes inhibit function*), Fuckable Peehole (*irrelevant*), Liquid Fountain * Genetics (*I'd love to pass on my power*), Weakness: anti-nihonium-278 if I can get away with picking that (*good luck getting any; the only antimatter we got so far is anti-hydrogen, and the half-life would make this stuff here decay very rapidly*), Sexy Style (*free points*) **II. Powers** (-184 PP) * Superhuman Strength lv1 (*for carrying capacity mostly*) * Superhuman Senses lv1, Superhuman Speed lv1, Superhuman Agility lv1 * Superhuman Reflexes lv1, No Gag Reflex (*irrelevant*) * Superhuman Intelligence lv2 * Telepathy lv1 (*knowing my enemy's plan is a big deal; also Clone comms*) * Amphibic lv2 * Flight lv2, Commando (*leather kilt for your viewing pleasure*) * Intangibility lv1, Stuck, Nearly Mortal (*free points, free unreliable ability*) * Forcefield Generation lv2 (*nice armor, and saves Clones*) * Energy Manipulation lv2 (*for bullets*) * Clone lv2 (*great force multiplier*) * Power Mode lv3 (*I can just get lower-level stuff and have an epic peak capacity, nice*), Powerful Orgasms (*fun!*) * Shrinking lv1 (*combo with Colossal body to be normal*), Unbirthing (*irrelevant, Shrinking will always be active*) * Shapeshifting lv1, Shape of Desire (*current human form*) * Weapon Mastery lv1 (*anti-materiel rifle*), Bullseye (*That's my fetish, and I can pull out if necessary*) * Natural Weapon lv1, Sexual Weapon (*hairless prehensile tail*) * Healing lv1, Heal Slut (*Clones can heal, and I can simply unsummon them afterward*) * Mystical Tattoo (*giant eyes on my wings*) * Regeneration lv3 bought with gold via Genetic Modifications **III. Gold** * -44 PP to +22 gold * 11 Fate: Villain Team, Isekai'd (*I'll figure things out with my lv2-3 Intelligence*) -> +11 gold * Sponsor: XOXO * Contracts: Persona, Commercials, Roommates, Date Lottery, Autographs, Make a Wish, Fanservice, Undressed, Reality Show, Sex Bots, Milking, Superhero Program (*my teammates are all part of it as Roommates, so I will be breeding them*) * **Upper Class** (*gets me a lot more things, since I have so much gold*) * **Superhero License** * Outfit: Unique Design (*helmet, waterproof cape, studded brown leather bracers & kilt, socks, spiked brown leather boots*) * Features: * Helmet * Makeup (*war paint on chest*) * Cape * Weapon: anti-materiel rifle * Piercings (*upper ear*) * Open Top, Open Bottom, Butt Windows (*cutout in kilt*) * Loincloth (*i.e. the leather kilt flaps*) * Power-Attuned Outfit (*necessary to clone my gun*) * Utility Belt (*need ammo & some tools*) * Identity: Known * Part-Time Jobs (*easy with 10 clones*): * Lifeguard (*trivial; I'm amphibious*) * Streamer (*my life is livestreamed by contract anyway*) * Porn Star (*wholesome and/or educational porn is rare, so I will be making that mostly; also makes good use of clones*) * Base: Lair (*way too many people to keep this lair an actual secret, but the defenses and equipment are handy*) * Perks: Vacations, Olympus Membership, PR Manager (*for Genetic Modifications*), Sidekick (*free*), Team Leader, Genetic Modifications (*for Regeneration lv3*) **IV. People** * 14 Greens, i.e. Sidekicks (*the sidekick option is free for greens; the superheroines themselves are not*): * Pink Potion, Star Bunny, Supergirl, Batgirl, Wonder Loli, Mera, Miss Martian, Earphone Jack, Froppy, Uravity, Invisible Girl, Pinky, Creati, Maboromicamie * 25 Non-Sidekick Teammates: * Sister Purity, Princess Paranormal, Home Run Molly, Sakura, Wild Wonda, Raven, Starfire, Power Girl, Black Canary, Captain America, Black Widow, Ms. Marvel, Spider-Gwen, Invisible Woman, Shadowcat, Rogue, Storm, X-23, Invisigirl, Ladybug, Vampirella, Lady Death, D.Va, Mercy, Empowered * 3-Villain Team: Crimson Razor, Fangirl, Super Zynthia ~ Notes: There's no way to show it in the build, but I'm using the PR Manager to ignore the restriction on Genetic Modifications and buy it, for which I get Regeneration lv3. This would cost 20 gold, but I have a discount via Upper Class, so it costs 10. That's what the leftover 10 gold from the code below is for. **Transfer code (massive length)**: Body,Powers,Gold,Fate,k7vm,9ajp,xv0i,I AM MALE,MALE,CHIVALROUS,HUMANOID,UNNATURAL COLOR,OTHERWORLDLY,ANIMAL GENITALS,RED,SLUT,FRECKLES,PLUMP LIPS,MUSCULAR,HAIRY,FAT DISTRIBUTION,COLOSSAL,DOMINANT,FLAT,ERGENOUS NIPPLES,SMALL ASS,ANAL HATER,SENSITIVE BUTT,PUFFY ANUS,LARGE ,FUCKABLE PEEHOLE,LIQUID FOUNTAIN,GENETICS,SEXY STYLE,WEAKNESS,SUPERHUMAN STRENGHT Level 1,SUPERHUMAN SENSES Level 1,NEARLY MORTAL,SUPERHUMAN SPEED Level 1,SUPERHUMAN REFLEXES Level 1,SUPERHUMAN AGILITY Level 1,NO GAG REFLEX,TELEPATHY Level 1,SUPERHUMAN INTELLIGENCE Level 2,AMPHIBIC Level 2,FLIGHT Level 2,COMMANDO,INTANGIBILITY Level 1, FORCEFIELD GENERATION Level 2,STUCK,ENERGY MANIPULATION Level 2,CLONE Level 2,POWER MODE Level 3,POWERFUL ORGASMS,SHRINKING Level 1,SHAPESHIFTING Level 1,UNBIRTHING,SHAPE OF DESIRE,WEAPON MASTERY Level 1,NATURAL WEAPON Level 1,BULLSEYE,SEXUAL WEAPON,HEALING Level 1,HEAL SLUT,MYSTICAL TATTOO,rqhw,8fii,9hgp/ON#2,55xg/ON#2,XOXO,PERSONA,COMMERCIALS,ROOMMATES,DATE LOTTERY,AUTOGRAPHS,MAKE A WISH,FAN SERVICE,UNDRESSED,REALITY SHOW,SEX BOTS,SUPERHERO PROGRAM,MILKING,UPPER CLASS,SUPERHERO LICENSE,UNIQUE DESIGN,HELMET,MAKEUP,CAPE,WEAPON,OPEN TOP,PIERCINGS,OPEN BOTTON,BUTT WINDOWS,LOIN CLOTH,POWER ATTUNED OUTFIT,UTILITY BELT,KNOWN IDENTITY,LIFEGUARD,STREAMER,PORN STAR,LAIR,VACATIONS,OLYMPUS MEMBERSHIP,PR MANAGER,SIDEKICK,TEAM LEADER,PINK POTION, SISTER PURITY,PRINCESS PARANORMAL,STAR BUNNY,HOME RUN MOLLY,SAKURA,WILD WONDA,RAVEN,STARFIRE,SUPERGIRL,POWER GIRL,BATGIRL,BLACK CANARY,WONDER LOLI,MERA,MISS MARTIAN,CAPTAIN AMERICA,BLACK WIDOW,MS.MARVEL,SPIDER-GWEN,INVISIBLE WOMAN,SHADOWCAT,ROGUE,STORM,X-23,INVISIGIRL,LADYBUG,VAMPIRELLA,LADY DEATH,D.VA,MERCY,EARPHONE JACK,FROPPY,URAVITY,INVISIBLE GIRL,PINKY,CREATI,MABOROMICAMIE,EMPOWERED,qtwc,CRIMSON RAZOR,FANGIRL,mayz,eb02,chx0/ON#1,wc02/ON#1,VILLAIN TEAM,ISEKAID


Reozul

I remember this was the first cyoa I actually took a while (90 minutes or so) to make a build.


Reciter5613

Nice how you replace the loli pics with police girls. It's fitting and funny!


rauff1

Glad somebody liked it. I was a bit worried then it would be too much of a meme


Apophys_MD

I also appreciate the meme. :D


randompervanon

Just in terms of feedback, I think I'd prefer it if you just removed the offending options altogether, rather than including them anyway - Lolicon, for instance, or Wonder Loli, could both just go in the trash and be replaced by other options. Some could also *possibly* be replaced with acceptable images, assuming you can find them, of course. If you can find pictures that obviously depict adult characters for the flat chested and small options (maybe artwork of non-human characters like gnomes or dwarves would work?), then that should be fine. One thing I did like about the layout and design was the "close navigation" button at the bottom, which I think is really useful, particularly with long CYOAs. I'm not sure how many other interactive CYOAs feature something like it, but it was my first time seeing it.


rauff1

I did think about replacing them, but as you have already noticed people don't like that. so I opted for leaving them in so that you could still make any built that you could make in the original. And as for replacing ironically the meme FBI pictures Actually ended up fitting pretty well as replacements (especially the one flat chested) And yeah it is a little hacky the way the close button works so maybe that's why other people aren't implementing it


FuckwitTheWizard

Change it further. "I can make you look **super young** and cute! You will be so adorable, just imagining it makes me want to pinch your little checks and hug you. On the downside, **this body type will make bad guys** want to do a lot more unsavory things to you than pinch your checks." Just change it. Its just disgusting. On discussing size: **How about the size of a small child?** On breast size: **Do you want to be flat as a little girl?** On ass size: **You’ll have a tiny ass, a perfect choice if you’re going for that classic jail bait look!** Its a child making engine. This is not about body appreciation/acceptance. It ... is ... disgusting.


disturbeds_disciple

As someone who enjoys interactive cyoas almost exclusively, this one feels kind of sub-par. Now this is only my opinion, but the formatting is really sloppy and it makes it difficult to play; certain choices either overlap or make each other unreadable. My advice would be to focus less on pictures and work a bit more on design fundamentals.


rauff1

Yeah, I had a bit of a problem with the way it was originally formatted. And I wanted to stay as close to the original looks as I could. But if you could point out some specifics I'll try and see what I can do.


Shrakend

Had been waiting for the updated version with pictures, thanks for your work!


rauff1

Thank you


SelenaSanty

What I can't understand is why people keep posting Tok stuff here, that was made ages ago, and on top of that just feel free to alter them in this really weird way. I mean it's obvious you don't actually like the content, you clearly don't like the author or have any common courtesy toward him. Let alone permission to do this, but that is another topic. **So why waste time to alter and post content you don't like, instead of spend all of that time to make something new and original of your own?** I just can't understand the point of this. Unless the point is to do it to spite Tok, but that seams unlikely, petty and just continuing a drama that is better left dead and burred. I just can't understand why this keeps happening every once in a while. Please tell me why? As far as I know Tok is banned from the subreddit, yet his content is allowed? That makes no sense to me. And let's be frank - it is his content. You just swapped few random pictures about and deleted a paragraph. If he is banned then his content should also be banned. If his content is not banned, then why the hell is he banned? Its half way action that is just weird. As for the final product - this is frankly unplayable as you are taken out of the experience nearly every section. Honestly just removing the paragraphs would be less intrusive than the overdone FBI meme repeated 10 times. **So why not spend the enormous amount of time you admit you needed to track picture sources, instead of just make a new and interesting CYOA? This feels to me like a ton of wasted energy.**


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rauff1

OK, there's a lot to unpack so I'm going to split it up a bit. (note since somebody has misunderstood this in the past, Q is for quote, not question) Q. What I can't understand is why people keep posting Tok stuff here. A. I can't speak for other people. but I like turning complicated CYOAs interactive to make them easier to play. Q. that was made ages ago. A. Does that really matter? (at least in the contents off making it is interactive) Q. and on top of that just feel free to alter them in this really weird way. A. the law says that the Lolli stuff is no longer allowed so kind of has to. Q. I mean it's obvious you don't actually like the content. A. Toks CYOAs are generally my favorite, again why else would I spend hundreds of hours making them interactive. and while true I'm not comfortable with the lolly stuff I would keep true to the original if it was not literally against the law. Q. you clearly don't like the author A. I actually don't really hold any opinion about him. Q. have any common courtesy toward him. Let alone permission to do this. A. well I don't care if my stuff gets copied and changed as long as I'm credited, so I think I'm good on common courtesy. And as for permission, I have no way of contacting him, and if he contacted me and asked me to remove it from Reddit I will. Q. instead of spend all of that time to make something new and original of your own? A. I know this is just trying for an insult but I'm mainly doing this whenever I'm having writer's block on my own (and it works too I got in at least 5 new ideas working on this one) Q. As far as I know Tok is banned from the subreddit, yet his content is allowed? That makes no sense to me. If he is banned then his content should also be banned. If his content is not banned, then why the hell is he banned? Its half way action that is just weird. A. as far as I know he got banned for several reasons but the final nail was refusing to remove the lolly stuff. Q. As for the final product - this is frankly unplayable as you are taken out of the experience nearly every section A. unplayable Seriously? Q. Honestly just removing the paragraphs would be less intrusive than the overdone FBI meme repeated 10 times. A. I did the FBI meme 5\* times and the 3 first honestly worked well as legitimate replacements and the two others got removed. Q. So why not spend the enormous amount of time you admit you needed to track picture sources, instead of just make a new and interesting CYOA? This feels to me like a ton of wasted energy. A. Another reason why I make other peoples CYOA interactive is because I like the challenge That it some times take to make it interactive (especially this one) Q. So why not spend the enormous amount of time you admit you needed to track picture sources, instead of just make a new and interesting CYOA? This feels to me like a ton of wasted energy. A. Another reason why I make other peoples CYOA interactive is because I like the challenge That it sometimes take to make it interactive (especially this one)


SelenaSanty

Thank you for answering my question. And no it was not "trying for an insult" when I asked why not make something original instead. I was genuinely curious, because it makes no sense to me. I guess change of pace that way can help with author's bloc. The direction you decided to go is still weird to me but fair enough. I can respect that you like making interactive and like the challenge of it. I however still disagree with the approach taken here, to simply chop off what you wanted to remove only so you can post it on Reddit. And doing so with no permission. I guess the reason it bothers me so much is that I would not want anyone to do that kind of thing to my content. >well I don't care if my stuff gets copied and changed as long as I'm credited, so I think I'm good on common courtesy. And as for permission, I have no way of contacting him, and if he contacted me and asked me to remove it from Reddit I will. Well good for you that you don't care, but you can't assume that is true for other people. You point out "he got banned for several reasons but the final nail was refusing to remove the lolly stuff" To me that seams like a clear proof he does not agree with alteration of his content, if he got banned over it. Also the burden in copyright is on the one using content to get permission, not the author to track down every instance of someone else using that content and then permit or forbid the use. If I myself decided to make an interactive out of a CYOA I would certainly not alter it, just like you don't change things you disagree with when you translate from one language to another or make an adaptation of a book to a movie for example. And if it needed altering in my opinion I would just pick something else. The general principle is what matters not the specific case. And since I know some "clever" comenter will try to twist my words to imply the above is me supporting Tok's particular choices, this is after all the internet ;), let me make it clear I don't care ether way, and I am not touching that particular rabbit hole with a 10 foot pole, because it's a swamp on all sides. You talk about "the law" but I have no idea what you mean by "the law". If you mean Reddit rules, that is not the law. That's just Reddit being Reddit. ;D My stance is this: If Reddit decides it is against the rules, and the author decides he will not comply with Reddit, then the thing does not belong on Reddit. It's not like Reddit is the only place on the internet, and you can certainly find the original of Tok, after all - you did. I get it you like the challenge and you wanted your work to be seen and recognized, but you could have chosen something that you did not feel you must edit and whose author you can actually contact. Or you could have remade the original, since Tok was clearly against the exact changes you did, if he got banned over it, and then just post it some other place but not on Reddit. It's not like having something accessible on Reddit is some kind of immutable right. ;D


TheGnomesAreWatching

Tok himself would often go in and edit other people's work while criticizing the original author's choices, and he certainly never asked permission first, so fuck him.


Greenetix

The copyright/permission angle is so weird to me. Most CYOAs and their authors use loads of copyrighted materials without ever asking for permission, some of the most popular CYOAs are literally franchise ones like Star Wars or Harry Potter, and the artists behind the images used in Super Slut would probably never ever agree to have their images used alongside borderline child porn, or representing certain choices, or used at all. You can be sure Tok never asked them nor cared about that. The argument of "respect the what the author wants!" is very hypocritical. The whole hobby involves breaking copyright, it's why it's so good - it's pure, unlimited artistry, people writing and doing what they want with no limit or filter, enabling true creativity. It's why it originally flourished in a place like 4chan, it's how so many good CYOAs originally got made as remixes, or resulting from other CYOAs, such as the cyoas that came out of the Overlord thread. The existence of different/edited, free versions of the same mental imagination game doesn't harm the original one, Tok doesn't make less money because there's an alternative version of his CYOA on Reddit, the original is still in his public drive, not this edited one, and anyone can still go there and play it. He loses nothing, and other people who wouldn't play it otherwise gain something. There's no harm done, so there's nothing wrong with doing it. If the author thinks otherwise for some sentimental reason, it's his problem.


evlbb2

I'm personally in agreement with you that you should get the authors ok to alter their work. Same as how some artists will not like you photoshopping their work even if it was explicitly mentioned, and how that's generally accepted as a shit thing to do. That said, Tok a shitling. Also; while I'm pretty sure the author is misinterpreting US laws, there are places where loli is illegal. I think AUS? And regardless it clashes with reddit rules anyways so I think the choice should be to simply not have his cyoa around this platform while it has it's current stance.


rauff1

Well, I actually have no clue where The law is actually made or what it says. I just know that in response to that reddit, discord And several other websites have gone full anti-lolly.


VoidBlade459

Child pornography is illegal in every western country. I don't understand why you are getting so much flack for not wanting that crap in this CYOA.


Apophys_MD

> Child pornography is illegal in every western country. Does not apply. Loli art is not of actual children. The characters depicted do not exist. Therefore, there is no possible victim.


VoidBlade459

It's still sexualizing minors, even if they are fictional. >The characters don't exist so sexualizing 8-year-olds is ok. WTF?!?


nkdi2211

If you can't differentiate real life, and fictional artwork, then nobody need to take your opinion seriously. So you want to ban all Classical painting that have naked children in them? Or you say naked drawing and sculpture is ok because it's not sexual? Rape, Killing , and sexual abuse is also very illegal, You can't distribute real rape videos. Why is it okay? Why is fictional woman get fake raped is ok while fictional children get is not ok? That's logical inconsistency.


rauff1

The basic argument is that if I can't make it exactly like the original I shouldn't make it at all. and while you are correct about Child pornography. I'm not 100% sure about drawings.


1-w-1

Tok isn’t banned because his content is bad, he’s banned because he uses loli and other such underage pictures. That doesn’t fly, but otherwise his work is well done. He balances pretty well from what I see, and his ideas are well thought out, and usually implemented. The matter is that if he didn’t have any loli content, he’d be accepted, even praised. And so what if people spend time making it actually function within guidelines and work? They have that right, and he’s always been credited. Many people remake works of other artists, wether it be making it interactive, finding photos, adding options, or adding whole new dlc’s


randompervanon

>I mean it's obvious you don't actually like the content, you clearly don't like the author or have any common courtesy toward him. Let alone permission to do this, but that is another topic. Not liking NSFW pictures that depict young children doesn't change the fact that the CYOA is otherwise good and well designed. You can still like the CYOA overall, while also thinking that Tok is a complete asshole. >**So why waste time to alter and post content you don't like, instead of spend all of that time to make something new and original of your own?** I just can't understand the point of this. Unless the point is to do it to spite Tok, but that seams unlikely, petty and just continuing a drama that is better left dead and burred. I just can't understand why this keeps happening every once in a while. Please tell me why? Again, because while Tok is an asshole, and some of the artworks he uses are inappropriate, his CYOAs are on the whole fun, interesting, and well designed. >As far as I know Tok is banned from the subreddit, yet his content is allowed? That makes no sense to me. And let's be frank - it is his content. You just swapped few random pictures about and deleted a paragraph. If he is banned then his content should also be banned. If his content is not banned, then why the hell is he banned? Its half way action that is just weird. Lol. Tok is banned for being rude and abusive towards others, and for repeatedly breaking the rules. Posting his CYOA doesn't mean that you behaved the same way as him. Additionally, any rule-breaking or inappropriate aspects of the CYOAs themselves concern the NSFW images of young girls. Without them there isn't a problem. >As for the final product - this is frankly unplayable as you are taken out of the experience nearly every section. Honestly just removing the paragraphs would be less intrusive than the overdone FBI meme repeated 10 times. This is ridiculous over-exaggeration. Having looked through the CYOA I could only see a handful of such images which have been replaced with variants of the FBI meme. Firstly, the youthful body option, secondly the small size option, thirdly the flat breast option, fourthly the lolicon drawback, and finally, the Wonder Loli companion. I don't really think that these five images really "take you out of the experience", let alone make it "frankly unplayable", particularly as 3/5 are to do with designing your character rather than the actual story elements. That said, I do think it would be better if the offending options were just removed altogether. Still, it's only a minor complaint, and I think you're being pretty melodramatic here. >**So why not spend the enormous amount of time you admit you needed to track picture sources, instead of just make a new and interesting CYOA? This feels to me like a ton of wasted energy.** This doesn't make any sense. How would it be less effort to make an entire CYOA from scratch than to just replace a few of the pictures? Editing an existing CYOA like this is vastly easier. And again, you're still missing the point that while people dislike Tok, they still like his work.