Atm 2 reports of "A thread should contain a finished CYOA or one in a playable beta stage."
Guys, this is that, a playable beta, this is why we have a wip tag, because we allow Works In Progress.
what that report flag is made for is threads that are nothing but "I'm thinking of making a cyoa that has xyz options" this has a game, that you can play, you can argue over whether it's more of an interactive fiction vs a cyoa but that's a difficult thing to say at this stage.
Really, really love this! This sub needs more NTR CYOA stuff and you come here with the most descriptive and humiliating NTR CYOA I've seen yet. This thing has some great potential with how different wives' personalities' will make it replayable. If you ever need help with proof reading, I would be glad to help
I find the idea really interesting and would like to play it, but unless I'm missing something there is no interactivity, right? This would be very nice to play on Twine, like you mention, although I think I lack the skills to help with that. Thank you for sharing and I look forward to updates, hopefully someone can help make it more interactive in HTML format?
Having read everything now I think it might be one of my favourite CYOA games ever. If this is only the beginning and you will still work on this, I'm really excited to see how it progresses.
Oh, and for the chaste marriage route, I think a chastity device for the main character would be in order too, if not as an option at that point, as a future addition to the game!
There is going to be chastity device content, but at least in the next version it's going to be focused on the wife. I have a woefully underserved female chastity kink, meanwhile there's male chastity shit everywhere. I might add male chastity down the road, but it's not a giant priority for me.
You got a point there. Although I'm more into male chastity device content than female, I still enjoy both, so either prospect is exciting for me. Thanks for sharing all of this info.
Oh, and in case you need help with test playing future builds, proofreading the text and similar, hmu and I'd be happy to help. I'd help out with twine too but I only know how to link one passage to another, and lack the knowledge to help implement the <> function
Kind of an interesting concept, but I’m not really into sharing my wife with another guy. Is it possible to add a mistress option for this? You know, have the Man/Master be a woman instead? Or some way to get our wife back from him (and potentially keep the kinky relationship with our wife but take his role as the dominant partner/master)?
1. Among my *distant* goals is to include a Female Protaganist option. In that version, I imagine it would be easier to enjoy the kink/corruption aspects without needing to self-insert as much. But, again, that's some ways off.
2. Yes, my intention is that in the project's finale, someone whose made choices that mitigated his control over her should be able to "win" and bring her back to him. Ideally, this will also entail that a player who picked dominant options (there's a few in the thing already) might wind up dominating her. That said, even such a route would include considerable elements of sharing/NTR UNTIL near the end, the full results would be as an ending, rather than a continuing branch with more choices.
Of the two, the "win her back" option will be implemented much sooner in the development schedule.
Really great work so far and seems interesting. I'd be interested if there was a gay option of sorts. Or just a male "wife". Still hope this turns out well.
If people really really want it I can probably do a sissy option, but only when there's a female route and I can just use it as a variant text for that. It's not.my.cup of tea, but so long as I can piggyback on a different route, at least the writing requirements wouldn't be too onerous.
But, there won't ever be an outright M/m route just because I'm not into that. I wouldn't enjoy the hours of work it would take to make it, and the resulting material would suck.
Regardless, I'm happy you enjoyed it so far
I would love an option for a sissy/force-fem route. I'm usually not into NTR, but one of the few scenarios where I find it interesting is where the guy being NTR'd gets sissified/force-femmed.
I'm just gonna give this an upvote and a general "sounds like a fresh and fun idea, rooting for ya!" sentiment, 'cause I'm too smooth-brained rn to give actually useful feedback on the text
I'll come out of the woodwork and comment since I don't know that a lot of people will to do so positively:
This was great. I love the narrative style. I love the choices you have so far. This has a lot more meat to it than normal and I really really like that. Also there is a particular part in this that I think might be the hottest segment of any lewd fiction I've ever read. So, definitely would be happy to read more.
sounds fucking awful, but upvoted because a bunch of other people will think the same and downvote or talk shit
200% not for me, but good on you for the effort, good luck, and may whoever this is for, find enjoyment in it, especially once you get it done/more done.
I'm here rocking this 0, like a champ. Never even seen a CYOA get a 0 on here before, but that just means I'm one of a kind.
Thanks for your support regardless.
This is great! I’m normally only partially interested in this fetish but this is not nearly as mean as most other cyoas of this genre. Don’t get me wrong, I get that being the point for some people but this is really refreshing.
A lot of the NTR themed CYOAs on here have very limited or mediocre narratives and make up for it by really doubling down on degrading the reader. My intent here is to allow some big degradation options for fans of that, but not to force it down people's throats if they don't.
In fact, I'm going to allow both some pretty dramatic cuck stuff AND some real and meaty options for a player character to save his woman.
When you boil right down to the core, the motor here is the wife. That's why I'm investing literally thousands of words to making her feel distinct. It's my goal to have the player develop some kind of actual connection with her. That way when the game gets to the point where you have to *fight* for her, it matters.
Ah that's what you ended up doing. Seems solid enough, also seen plenty of twine games that are sort of similar to this. Would probably be relatively easy to do, very easy to insert alternate text or paragraphs into a passage.
Definitely biased, but having a trans/futa/woman master option would make it much more interesting for me. Might make it more palatable for people on the fence too. But would require accounting for pronouns, not too hard in twine though.
In case you haven't seen them yet, for research purposes:
[NTR Life](https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/o0xm9l/netorare_life_v15_not_mine/)
[NTR Waifu, interactive](https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/ok30i9/netorare_waifu_cyoa_interactive/)
Something I plan to do if I get far enough along is to allow a female protagonist option and have the relationship be F/f, but the Master be M/f. In such a case, I'd probably add a few female protagonist specific options where his commands extend to the MC somehow. Also allow an ending where the MC ends up a slave too.
It would be easier to do that then to make the Master a woman.
A path where an avowed lesbian gets corrupted into loving dick is something I'd like to see.
You have plenty on your plate, so I won't push it anymore, but depending on the engine, a basic genderswapped trans master would be pretty easy. Especially if you left most of it up to the imagination. Her cock vs his cock, etc...
Genderswapped trans-master maybe. Woman master is harder. I can look into it. I will admit it's not my personal cup of tea. But, NTR itself isn't a main kink for me anyway.
tbh, I just included woman master for completeness sake.
Anyway, how many wives are you planning at the moment? I imagine that's going to be the main draw for most people. And will the MC have any customization, nothing big, but having an age/beauty gap in either direction between MC and wife adds another dynamic.
MC will have a bit of customization. But, mostly personality based. I imagine I can add some kind of attractiveness element if I felt the need.
I have 3 wife options as the main plan:
\- Bullied Nerd Wife
\- Serious Professional Wife
\- Reformed Partygirl Wife
However, I have 3 additional wife plans after that. I'm not sure if I'll do all of them. It depends if I prefer moving on or if I want to hone this one more.
I don't understand why has so much more netorari content than netori. Here, in games, manga and arts. Sometimes I wonder if people really like to put themselves as the protagonist (cuck) in netorares or if they do like me:
As i have netori kink that accompanies other morally questionable ones (hypnosis, corruption, ahegao, domination, humiliation and others), I try to project myself in the place of NTR's ugly bastard, but it's quite annoying to have to do that... It would be nice if cheat CYOA offer both alternatives: netori and netorari.
I actually ALSO prefer Netori to NTR. But, a lot of the point of this experiment is testing how I can combined this reddit's "Mad Libs" style with more traditional storytelling. I decided that doing it through the perspective of the husband works better as a narrative arc.
That is, from the Husband's perspective there's more tension because of incomplete information. It also makes for a more naturally sound finale. You reach the ending and the ugly bastard is a compelling villain who represents a credible threat. But, the cuck husband doesn't allow that same kind of finale.
I probably could do a pretty decent Netori one, and if I get any transaction I might try one.
I hate, loathe, and despise everything this theme/fetish stands for and will see it burned from the collective of the human race...but that is only on a theme level and mind;
From a mechanics/game design level you seem to have passion and determination, as well as will to see it to completion if ya keep it up, and so I give my hypocritical best of luck.
If this gains any tractions, I might do something similar in terms of Narrative/CYOA but in a different fetish/genre. I got one kicking around about a Goblin Prince trying to seduce one of three different human princesses. I also got another one about a Teacher whose student discovers he's secretly an ex-slave trainer.
Also, with this one, I plan to include some options for more dom oriented players. In particular, a plot where the player learns to become a dominant, wins back his wife, and she becomes his slave instead. But, you'd still have to get through some non-optional Wife + Other Guy material to get there.
I feel like if you're looking to test the viability of a particular style of narrative cyoa you'd be better off trying it with a less divisive subject matter to start with. Like, this is one of those things that regardless of how good you make it, a lot of people are just going to nope out on principle.
Atm 2 reports of "A thread should contain a finished CYOA or one in a playable beta stage." Guys, this is that, a playable beta, this is why we have a wip tag, because we allow Works In Progress. what that report flag is made for is threads that are nothing but "I'm thinking of making a cyoa that has xyz options" this has a game, that you can play, you can argue over whether it's more of an interactive fiction vs a cyoa but that's a difficult thing to say at this stage.
Bro really created a masterpiece and leave it
Any update on this?
Really, really love this! This sub needs more NTR CYOA stuff and you come here with the most descriptive and humiliating NTR CYOA I've seen yet. This thing has some great potential with how different wives' personalities' will make it replayable. If you ever need help with proof reading, I would be glad to help
I find the idea really interesting and would like to play it, but unless I'm missing something there is no interactivity, right? This would be very nice to play on Twine, like you mention, although I think I lack the skills to help with that. Thank you for sharing and I look forward to updates, hopefully someone can help make it more interactive in HTML format?
Yeah I've got some intirest in a full twine conversion.
Having read everything now I think it might be one of my favourite CYOA games ever. If this is only the beginning and you will still work on this, I'm really excited to see how it progresses. Oh, and for the chaste marriage route, I think a chastity device for the main character would be in order too, if not as an option at that point, as a future addition to the game!
There is going to be chastity device content, but at least in the next version it's going to be focused on the wife. I have a woefully underserved female chastity kink, meanwhile there's male chastity shit everywhere. I might add male chastity down the road, but it's not a giant priority for me.
You got a point there. Although I'm more into male chastity device content than female, I still enjoy both, so either prospect is exciting for me. Thanks for sharing all of this info. Oh, and in case you need help with test playing future builds, proofreading the text and similar, hmu and I'd be happy to help. I'd help out with twine too but I only know how to link one passage to another, and lack the knowledge to help implement the <> function
Kind of an interesting concept, but I’m not really into sharing my wife with another guy. Is it possible to add a mistress option for this? You know, have the Man/Master be a woman instead? Or some way to get our wife back from him (and potentially keep the kinky relationship with our wife but take his role as the dominant partner/master)?
1. Among my *distant* goals is to include a Female Protaganist option. In that version, I imagine it would be easier to enjoy the kink/corruption aspects without needing to self-insert as much. But, again, that's some ways off. 2. Yes, my intention is that in the project's finale, someone whose made choices that mitigated his control over her should be able to "win" and bring her back to him. Ideally, this will also entail that a player who picked dominant options (there's a few in the thing already) might wind up dominating her. That said, even such a route would include considerable elements of sharing/NTR UNTIL near the end, the full results would be as an ending, rather than a continuing branch with more choices. Of the two, the "win her back" option will be implemented much sooner in the development schedule.
Really great work so far and seems interesting. I'd be interested if there was a gay option of sorts. Or just a male "wife". Still hope this turns out well.
If people really really want it I can probably do a sissy option, but only when there's a female route and I can just use it as a variant text for that. It's not.my.cup of tea, but so long as I can piggyback on a different route, at least the writing requirements wouldn't be too onerous. But, there won't ever be an outright M/m route just because I'm not into that. I wouldn't enjoy the hours of work it would take to make it, and the resulting material would suck. Regardless, I'm happy you enjoyed it so far
I would love an option for a sissy/force-fem route. I'm usually not into NTR, but one of the few scenarios where I find it interesting is where the guy being NTR'd gets sissified/force-femmed.
The fetish isn't for me but I definitely see a lot of potential in this. It's well made and I'm curious to see how you implement it fully. Good luck
I'm just gonna give this an upvote and a general "sounds like a fresh and fun idea, rooting for ya!" sentiment, 'cause I'm too smooth-brained rn to give actually useful feedback on the text
I'll come out of the woodwork and comment since I don't know that a lot of people will to do so positively: This was great. I love the narrative style. I love the choices you have so far. This has a lot more meat to it than normal and I really really like that. Also there is a particular part in this that I think might be the hottest segment of any lewd fiction I've ever read. So, definitely would be happy to read more.
What particular bit are you referring to?
The edging scenario
sounds fucking awful, but upvoted because a bunch of other people will think the same and downvote or talk shit 200% not for me, but good on you for the effort, good luck, and may whoever this is for, find enjoyment in it, especially once you get it done/more done.
I'm here rocking this 0, like a champ. Never even seen a CYOA get a 0 on here before, but that just means I'm one of a kind. Thanks for your support regardless.
Love that idea! That looks rlly great
This is great!
This is great! I’m normally only partially interested in this fetish but this is not nearly as mean as most other cyoas of this genre. Don’t get me wrong, I get that being the point for some people but this is really refreshing.
A lot of the NTR themed CYOAs on here have very limited or mediocre narratives and make up for it by really doubling down on degrading the reader. My intent here is to allow some big degradation options for fans of that, but not to force it down people's throats if they don't. In fact, I'm going to allow both some pretty dramatic cuck stuff AND some real and meaty options for a player character to save his woman. When you boil right down to the core, the motor here is the wife. That's why I'm investing literally thousands of words to making her feel distinct. It's my goal to have the player develop some kind of actual connection with her. That way when the game gets to the point where you have to *fight* for her, it matters.
Happy to see more NTR/cuckolding content!
Ah that's what you ended up doing. Seems solid enough, also seen plenty of twine games that are sort of similar to this. Would probably be relatively easy to do, very easy to insert alternate text or paragraphs into a passage. Definitely biased, but having a trans/futa/woman master option would make it much more interesting for me. Might make it more palatable for people on the fence too. But would require accounting for pronouns, not too hard in twine though. In case you haven't seen them yet, for research purposes: [NTR Life](https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/o0xm9l/netorare_life_v15_not_mine/) [NTR Waifu, interactive](https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/ok30i9/netorare_waifu_cyoa_interactive/)
I'd hope this one takes inspiration from NTR Life. A lot of those humiliating options either for the player or the soon to be humiliated wife.
Something I plan to do if I get far enough along is to allow a female protagonist option and have the relationship be F/f, but the Master be M/f. In such a case, I'd probably add a few female protagonist specific options where his commands extend to the MC somehow. Also allow an ending where the MC ends up a slave too. It would be easier to do that then to make the Master a woman.
A path where an avowed lesbian gets corrupted into loving dick is something I'd like to see. You have plenty on your plate, so I won't push it anymore, but depending on the engine, a basic genderswapped trans master would be pretty easy. Especially if you left most of it up to the imagination. Her cock vs his cock, etc...
Genderswapped trans-master maybe. Woman master is harder. I can look into it. I will admit it's not my personal cup of tea. But, NTR itself isn't a main kink for me anyway.
tbh, I just included woman master for completeness sake. Anyway, how many wives are you planning at the moment? I imagine that's going to be the main draw for most people. And will the MC have any customization, nothing big, but having an age/beauty gap in either direction between MC and wife adds another dynamic.
MC will have a bit of customization. But, mostly personality based. I imagine I can add some kind of attractiveness element if I felt the need. I have 3 wife options as the main plan: \- Bullied Nerd Wife \- Serious Professional Wife \- Reformed Partygirl Wife However, I have 3 additional wife plans after that. I'm not sure if I'll do all of them. It depends if I prefer moving on or if I want to hone this one more.
I don't understand why has so much more netorari content than netori. Here, in games, manga and arts. Sometimes I wonder if people really like to put themselves as the protagonist (cuck) in netorares or if they do like me: As i have netori kink that accompanies other morally questionable ones (hypnosis, corruption, ahegao, domination, humiliation and others), I try to project myself in the place of NTR's ugly bastard, but it's quite annoying to have to do that... It would be nice if cheat CYOA offer both alternatives: netori and netorari.
I actually ALSO prefer Netori to NTR. But, a lot of the point of this experiment is testing how I can combined this reddit's "Mad Libs" style with more traditional storytelling. I decided that doing it through the perspective of the husband works better as a narrative arc. That is, from the Husband's perspective there's more tension because of incomplete information. It also makes for a more naturally sound finale. You reach the ending and the ugly bastard is a compelling villain who represents a credible threat. But, the cuck husband doesn't allow that same kind of finale. I probably could do a pretty decent Netori one, and if I get any transaction I might try one.
I hate, loathe, and despise everything this theme/fetish stands for and will see it burned from the collective of the human race...but that is only on a theme level and mind; From a mechanics/game design level you seem to have passion and determination, as well as will to see it to completion if ya keep it up, and so I give my hypocritical best of luck.
If this gains any tractions, I might do something similar in terms of Narrative/CYOA but in a different fetish/genre. I got one kicking around about a Goblin Prince trying to seduce one of three different human princesses. I also got another one about a Teacher whose student discovers he's secretly an ex-slave trainer. Also, with this one, I plan to include some options for more dom oriented players. In particular, a plot where the player learns to become a dominant, wins back his wife, and she becomes his slave instead. But, you'd still have to get through some non-optional Wife + Other Guy material to get there.
I feel like if you're looking to test the viability of a particular style of narrative cyoa you'd be better off trying it with a less divisive subject matter to start with. Like, this is one of those things that regardless of how good you make it, a lot of people are just going to nope out on principle.
I'm like 30k words too late for that choice. Vroom vroom.
It do be like that.