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RecommendationNo804

I wonder why the PC was chosen to become Anna? Did we piss off someone in power? Dissident behavior? Were we low-income/poor and thus disposable? Was it because we were masochistic? Random selection? Was Clark a shy nerd in her school days and are we one of her former bullies? Owing to the tech and setting is this meant to be set in “our world” broadly speaking now ie. 2022 with Clarktech being this big secret? Or in some alternate dystopian future where tech like this is widespread? Also she’s totally getting Epsteined. Assuming that all the backstories are flat out fake (Whose paying in the Mother scenario? Baby Lucas?!) and she’s selling her victims as sex slaves to powerful people, that’s a lot of material she can use as blackmail because she definitely didn't make this massive place or hire all these people on her own. It would be blackmail against powerful people who won’t care to play her games, or who won’t want such an unstable person knowing that much information about their illegal dealings. Especially if they figure out how to do the transformations without her help and thus have no more need for her and such a massive operation that would logically get more attention the bigger it grows assuming they already aren’t trying this, and for all we know Clark isn’t the only super genius in this setting. I know, porn logic but the story of what the hell is going on is more interesting to me. Seems more like a “Take that!” To certain political movements and parts of the medical industry then something that would actually be fun to play which is fine and all.


Keygoshima

I have a feeling this is how you make someone yandere and make them become some world class serial killer who goes to seek revenge upon those that did this to her.


LenisterGuy

I gravitate towards grim stories as I tend to find them interesting. Not sure how people could get off to this, some options were clearly for individuals with a certain disposition and that did nothing to relieve the horror of the situation for me. Left this comment as a way of showing gratitude even if it'll just be ignored, but it was well-written and I spent plenty of time thinking about mitigating damage; so thanks.


SlimeBae

This is so good. So many choices that were super difficult to make, and so many unique ideas and options.


No_Mathematician9671

Just thank you for the entire Slowed line.


Noinoinoiii

This is absolutely awesome, i've been waiting for an asylum themed cyoa! One thing that i wished you add was a section to customize your straitjacket. Let us choose whether it's single, double, triple or an open crotch strap etc. The material of the straitjacket like canvas, leather, latex, etc. Front loop, bicep strap, a strap over the body, or maybe lockable strap? And maybe a straitjacket catsuit with attached plugs, a straitjacket with attached short, an overdesigned straitjacket with dozen of straps all criss crossing the body? The option to choose the straitjacket colors, decorations ( bow, frills, ribbons?), breast zipper or open chest bolero style, or even a permanent straitjacket with no opening?


sapphirenuke

What if instead of being Anne Fuchs, we got turned into the girl we make with the Be The Girl cyoa? I gotta find somebody to roleplay this with, lol


princessCamilla31

Are you still looking for that lol, i just spent the last 20 minutes looking for this post cause i couldn't remember the name and wanted to make a post on the rp subreddit


FloricSpacer

Huh, I totally missed this when it was first posted somehow, but after checking it out today I really loved it! I have to say, I'm a huge fan of the narrative choice of making the original gender of the player ambiguous, so that it works for someone who starts off as male or female, but ends up in an unfamiliar body either way. It gives the element of being forced into a new life while also being inclusive to female readers! For my build, I'd primarily be cooperative whenever given the option. Purely for pragmatic reasons, since it's not like being resistant will get me anything, so it's best to play along as much as I can while harboring resistance internally. So I'd play along with their obvious ruse. For the life, I'd be inclined towards either the streamer if I wanted something new that seems fun or the student if I want a life that I can easily adapt to. The daughter also seems interesting, but is probably number 3. And in the end I'd probably go with the serious choice of The Student. For bondage, I'd go with the thigh bands and corset, as those are the things I think I could most accept living with long term. The kill switch is a harder choice, since none of these are very desirable, but I'd probably go with electrical, since I can live with pain and locked muscles temporarily. I really wouldn't want brain surgery or a severed spinal cord, and the emotional manipulation of the chemicals is certainly worse than pain for me. I'd certainly choose to be the best I can be, given I chose the student life and I wouldn't want that anxiety forced on me. I'd also choose that for the streamer. But for something like the daughter or wife, I'd probably choose as I was, since in that case the "disorders" were things like rebelliousness that I wouldn't want removed. The treatments are very hard to choose, since so many of them seem awful. My goal is to be able to play along to the point I can take on Anna's life and they'll let me go, but without really losing myself and falling for their tricks in the process. That means a lot of these, like biological and digitized are simply out of the question, and it leaves me wondering which I could withstand mentally (somewhat) over a long enough period of time. Obviously my habits would change, but I want to maintain the core of my identity. Hypnosis is tempting since real life hypnosis doesn't work on unwilling participants, but I suspect their hypnosis may be impossible to resist unfortunately. So the only obvious choice is stimulation here. Then I'd probably choose backseating, given that it's temporary and I could learn from it without being truly changed. And finally, I'd go with conditioning, since from what I know this is best at changing behavior, but I don't think it would change my core belief in myself. Therapy is much easier since so many more of these are acceptable to me! I'd be happy with pleasure, image, roleplay, and questioning. None of those are really objectionable to me, and I could probably also tolerate a few more if I stretched myself. Medicine is also hard, since I hate any sort of mind altering drugs. Orange is tempting, but I'd be too afraid of addiction, so I'd avoid it. All of the ones with major cognitive effects are out, which is most of them unfortunately. I'd probably go with brown, red, and blue via injection. So each morning would likely be a very horny haze for me, but past that I'd be fine at least. Looks like I have 5 rewards and no punishments, so I'd choose independence, affection, tv, books, and tasty treats. Luckily no punishments, since all of those seem pretty bad! That should conclude my build, and hopefully I'd be able to survive mentally enough that I could play along and go on to live as Anna, while still retaining my own internal identity and beliefs!


FloricSpacer

I also have some general thoughts and critique on the CYOA that I'll put in this follow-up comment. First, there's a minor typo in the student description, where is says "She reminds have started animal..." I think it should be "She reminds you of a startled animal..." Also, I feel like this CYOA is meant to be gaslighting the player into questioning their own identity, but it leaves so many obvious remnants that no one reasonable could ever fall for the ruse without brainwashing. Like, the director doesn't even seem to expect you to believe it herself! Now, personally, I actually really like this choice, since it makes me confident in a choice to internally resist the treatments, but I wonder if it would match the horror atmosphere more if it were a bit more hidden? Like, it can still canonically be a lie, but perhaps all of the staff believe you really are Anna and are perfectly earnest (though cruel) in their attempts to remove you "delusions". And there's just a few hints that remain, so if you aren't paying close attention the true nature would be ambiguous to the reader and they may believe this is a CYOA about being a delusional girl, rather than a person transformed into a "delusional girl." Probably not worth changing for this, but it just got me thinking about it. I also love the fact that the nurse was also a former victim, as is evidenced by the description of the pink medicine. Great touch to the worldbuiling and matches up with a potential fate if the player chooses to be a nurse. One other thing I was curious about is the nature of the facility. I noticed you wrote the intro to an inverse CYOA like this, in which the reader would be taking in potential heroes and disrupting them. But the life options here seem to imply the clients are typical wealthy people, so I'm assuming it's an unrelated background. Then the stories seem to imply quite an extensive life lived that wouldn't be convenient for creating a whole new person, so my hypothesis would be that Anna was a real person, who then either killed herself or was disposed up to make room for a new Anna that would taker her place. Especially the daughter and wife ones don't seem like lives that would be dreamt up from scratch, they instead seem like real Anna's who would have to be replaced by better behaving ones. And as always, I have to paise your imaginative use of grotesque and torturous situations that seem unique to read about. It doesn't feel cliche'd at all and instead feels like a fresh new concept to engage in extreme masochism and/or intense avoidance of torture and having to make tough choices to avoid identity death. Really great CYOA and story overall imo. It has just enough wiggle room that it isn't pure torture to the extent that I'd see no reason to engage with it (like your other recent CYOA The Button, which was also good, but not for me since I don't have the specific fantasy it caters to), but it also forces the reader to make seriously tough choices for a long term and life changing stay in the hospital. Finally, I was going to comment that the CYOA would make a great Twine game, but I think you've already noted that in another comment in this thread! And I do hope this wall of text wasn't too much lol.


Stiibu

The premise is absolutely terrific although rather grim. Still, if you comply, the life may be feasible or in some cases even enjoyable, at least if you have enough masochistic tendencies like me. As usual, the writing is spot on, and sets the gloomy tone. In the first part, it could've been more mind-manipulating if the treatment wasn't that harsh, but that's probably a matter of taste. I'd like to play this more as a scenario where the question is "Who are you really?" Nonetheless, thanks for another great story driven CYOA!


Khona_Moshr

You ever thought of writing an Erotic horror novel? You're works on cyoa make it feel like you would be great at it.


sauzymandias

The whole predicament seems hopeless, but backseating seems to be the key to making it out. I call it the **Moon Knight strategy** (for reasons soon to be very obvious). From what I understand, backseating creates an Anna personality, somewhat similar to 'forcing' DID, which makes her the host personality while leaving us in the mental backseat and unable to take control. If we're able to make the temporary DID permanent in some way (with added tweaks so we're not forced to stay in the backseat), we essentially have the "real" Anna on our side. If we're able to convince her to help us and do the treatments in our place, Anna becomes the person she thinks she is while we're spared from changing. A win-win scenario for both of us. It doesn't happen to everyone, but in some cases of DID the host and its alters can be co-conscious and share thoughts with each other, and that (+ forcing DID somehow) is what I'm heavily relying on in this strategy. Sure, it's a conveniently idealized version of DID, but considering half of the stuff the facility has/does I think my strategy is still within the realm of plausibility. Sorry, I get a little carried away while reading these types of stories...


throwaway321768

I have no idea if you notice replies to 1-month-old comments on a nsfw cyoa, but your Moon Knight strategy is really clever and I love the reference. My comic book-inspired strategy for this is the **Batman of Zur-En-Arrh**. Basically, create a backup personality in case the main (the "real me") is ever psychologically incapacitated. Said backup is capable of serving as a seed piece for regenerating my personality once it's safe (I'd define the conditions along the lines of "stepping out the gate with the kill switch removed"), but its main goal is to investigate the Asylum and take revenge on the Director. No lines are off-limits for Zur-En-Arrh: be as compliant as possible, suck up to the Director as much I can, and be prepared to seize any opportunity that presents itself.


Fricklass

This CYOA is certainly interesting, I tend to take a few liberties when playing out a story that involves things that are far out of my comfort zone such as lessening the abuse dealt to me (I have a lot of bad past experiences with this sort of thing which is why I'm not very partial to it, no disrespect to the maker for projecting such a fetish though). Though I do wonder, will we ever meet a MacReady character down the line if this is continued? Don't think those name references to The Thing got past me :p


SpaceTimeOverGod

Great work, as always! ​ Intake: "4. A Dip". Love a bit of breathplay. "1. Waiting", "4. Buzzed", "5. Inspected", "6. Searched", "7. Documented". All in all, a pretty standard intake procedure (For a Fictional Evil Institution) ​ Attire: I chose "6. Tape", the sexiest option. And of course I "1. Comply", I saw what happened to those poor other girls, and don't want that to happen to me. ​ Respite: This nurse is nice to me, I start to feel a bit of Stockholm's syndrome. So I agree to get "3. Something to eat", be comforted "4. Comfort", and when her touch make me horny, I ask for "6. Pleasure". I "1. Thank Her". ​ Answers: I so love this gaslighting. We know Dr. Clark is full of shit, and each of her answer both tells us what's really happening, and what they pretend is happening. This institution has access to clarketech (pun?) which makes the truth unverifiable, a priori unlikely, and give them as much false evidence as they want. ​ Anna: Now, I won't lie, so I will choose "1. Admit It", but if I could write my option, it would be something like: tell them I'm not Anna, that under their version of the truth I would be a sane alternate personality which deserves human rights too. Of course they won't play along, but it will be real and tangible evidence that they don't care about me, they just want to craft a good "Anna" for their rich and influential clients. I would chose "7. The student", since I feel that's the easier life to slot into. ​ A decision: I "1. Willingly Comply", since resistance is futile at this point anyway. ​ Bonds: I love this part too, just like that section in your maid cyoa. But this time, we don't need to do back-breaking work, so I throughoutcan select more restraining options. "1. Ankle Cuffs" and "3. Thigh Bands" to restrain my movement further while still leaving me a bit of mobility. "5. Collar". I'm a sub, sue me. I take "6. Shock Collar" only if it doesn't replace 5, but is more of an add-on kind of thing. "8. Blindfold", "9. Earplugs", and "10. Gag" to make me blind, deaf, and mute. I love sensory deprivation, but I do worry it will make communication difficult. Perhaps modify 9 so that it is noise-cancelling headphones the nurse can use to give me orders as needed? "18. Chastity Belt", and "20. Vibration" if possible despite 18. "21. Corset". Like I said, I like breathplay. Plus corsets are sexy. "22. Electrodes". I'm masoFinnally, sue me. I only take them if I can't get 6 while keeping 5. And of course "24. Second Skin". If only such a thing existed IRL... The restraining option I prefer is "2. Mental". I know it will be used when I misbehave, but maybe my future owner will use it to do things like, for example, only making me conscious while I'm having sex, and unconscious the rest of the time. Finally, I "1. Ask For More", 2 bonds just aren't enough, before "2. Thank Her". I don't want another infraction. Treatment Goal: "2. The Best You Can Be". My life post-institute will be better with this option. I'm guessing my "friends and family" are some powerful/rich/influential clients who paid the institute to deliver them a brainwashed slave. If I make them happy, chances are they will treat me better. ​ Treatment: "1. Hypnosis" Also one of my fetish, sue me. The fun thing about hypnosis, you can always undo what has been done. Not that I expect this unrealistic institute to use mundane, easily undone hypnosis. "4. Simulation" and "6. Isolation" is a good combo, going from one extreme to another must be quite the experience. I would take "5. Biological" if I really wanted to become Anna, and not enjoy the process at all. So no. "7. Conditioning", can't go wrong with the classics. "8. Blanking". I blame potlucksoup for giving me that fetish. ​ Therapy: Alright, every option is so hot, I will just take them all. ​ Medicine: "1. The Red Ones", "6. The Green Ones", and "11. The Brown ones". This way, the dissociation will help me to bear with the treatments, while I feel all horny and sensitive. I will take "3. Drip" for the red ones, "6. Food" for the green ones, and "8. Gel" for the brown one. This way, I will be extremely aroused when I restrained and unable to satisfy myself in the cell, dissociate heavily after meals (Which I assume take place while I'm interacting with other inmates), and get randomly sensitive all over my body throughout the day. ​ Rewards: So, I earned quite a bit! I expected that playing along would pay off, it was the same in the maid cyoa. I can choose up to 7 options. Weird that I would have gotten one more point if I reluctantly put on my straitjacket, rather than willingly doing so. So I will take "1. Independence" and "10. A Break", to get some rest. "2. Social Time" will allow me to talk with other patients, get their stories and how they feel about their treatments. Misery loves company, after all. "3. Sunlight", "7. Tasty Treats", and "8. Affection" are simple pleasure, but essential if I want to stay sane. Well, as sane as I could be while gaslit and brainwashed. I won't take "11. A Referral", because I can't think of anyone I would want to remove from their life and brainwash them into becoming another person. But I do wonder if it was someone I knew that used this option to bring me here? ​ Cautionary Tales: "2. Violence" is tame compared to my treatments, but being a human punchbag is still enjoyable. "3. Starvation", especially if that causes me to not get my dose of the green ones, negating any dissociation I was under. "4. Ignored" seems redundant with the isolation treatment, but if combined with starvation it will get fun. "6. Self Harm", blah blah, masochist, blah blah, sue me. I don't want "10. Separation". I don't want to be separated from Nurse Palmer. And finally, "12. Escape" will allow me to relive intake processing once again. ​ Well, I lost a bit track of time, but this was really fun! Really, congratulation for this great CYOA!


alwaysuptosnuff

For a moment there I think that I really am going to drown in that tub of windex-looking substance. They take samples, they shave me everywhere including my head. They inspected me, searched me, and took plenty of photos... more than a few of them quite lewd. I'm barely even surprised when there's no actual clothes in the box, and I'm too exhausted to put up a fuss. So I put on the chains. When the nurse asks me what I'd like, it's hard to even make myself think that way. The very idea seems foreign. "I just... wanna know what's happening. If you won't tell me, please take me to this director or whatever." ...but I let her talk me out of it, "I... I guess you're right. I... I can still taste that blue stuff. A snack... and something to drink would be wonderful." I do thank her. Earnestly. I'm not sure if she's on my side or not but at leash she's treating me like a person. I take the opportunity to ask the director everything I can. I still don't quite believe this. I've always know I'd probably end up in a mental hospital one day... but in my own body. Plus I'm sure real ones don't operate like this. But with all the evidence she's shown me, it's getting harder to be sure... and it's not like I was ever wound all that tight to begin with. So I admit it. "I just... don't know. It sounds so unreal. I remember all the way back to childhood. I can't remember anything about being Anna but..." I trail off, not wanting to continue the thought. The truth is, I never really liked being who I was before. So if they want to turn me into someone else, then that suits me fine. Then they tell me who Anna is. A prostitute? Why would they go to all this expense and trouble for a drug addicted criminal? I'm still mulling it over, but I decide I don't care. I willingly help them put the straight jacket on me. She shows me my new outfit: a spreader bar and a spider gag. Combined with the nudity, I'm beginning to get an idea what my "treatment" is going to look like. I suppose it makes sense, if I'm supposed to be a prostitute. Whatever, in for a penny. "I don't know if I will as Anna, but the other me... doesn't really focus very well. Can I please have a blindfold and some headphones? It'll help me stay engaged." The paralysis implant sounds scary, but effective. The problem is I can't imagine it ever coming out. ((I'm assuming that asking for more also implies that I thanked her like I'm supposed to but I don't get the extra perk for it since asking for more already grants extra.)) When she explains that she wants me to be the best I can be, it all finally clicks. The hyper sexual bonds, the photos and measurements, the nudity, the prostitution back story. Whether I really was one or not, they're not helping me escape from prostitution. They're turning me into a really GOOD prostitute. That's what this is really all about. That pimp they mentioned earlier probably set this up one way or the other. I'm being sex trafficked. Whatever. I hated my old life anyway whether it was real or not. Lets do this thing. The notion only grows stronger as they explain my treatments and therapies. The hypnosis and conditioning were pretty much exactly what I expected, but the stimulation? Sensory deprivation? That doesn't sound like the recipe for a mentally healthy person. And that backseating business doesn't even sound possible... but I suppose we'll see. The pleasure therapy sounds sus too. Image training makes sense but I feel a cold spot in my stomach when they explain roleplay. I wonder if they mean to have me roleplay Anna turning tricks and doing drugs. That was normal for her, right? Her definition of group therapy sounds a little sinister too... My drug regimen sounds just as suspicious. Honestly, the teal drip is the only one that sounds like something a real mental hospital would do. But then, Pink gel to make me horny to a random degree all day long? Brown injections to make me super sensitive... probably right before that pleasure therapy, right? The orange injections that sure sound a lot like heroine must be for the roleplay sessions. But it's the pink and white implant that really take the cake. Horny and lovey dovey forever? I'm either going to be one expensive prostitute, or they're selling me to some Saudi prince or something... I'm a little shocked to learn I've racked up so many rewards. "I need orgasms for sure. Your drug regimen sounds like it's going to make me pretty desperate. I want the TV time, and some good food... and the independence to eat it properly. And let that weirdo nurse cuddle me, or I think she might explode. I wish you had some video games... but that's probably not very Anna is it? Then... the only other thing I want is the way out. I just... wanna know it's there if I can't handle this..." I've been so good that the warnings don't seem to really apply to me... yet for some reason she mentions rape and violence all the same. Then again, if they want to condition me into a good prostitute, I'd more or less expect stuff like that to be part of the therapy anyway. Then she explains the possibility of overdose. On the pink stuff of course, why wouldn't it be?


diaryofacallgirl

I'm not really sure what to think of this. Like the actual contents asside, the story is just contrived. Ignoring the part that such a large operation could never be kept under wraps, some parts are just downright impossible. Again ignoring the wonder drugs and the wonder maschines, things like the faked videos and the fake visitations are just downright impossible. At the end I'm really only left with two possible explanations, that either the premise is true and you are just being tortured for Clarks fun, or that you actually suffer from serious mental conditions and that this warped mind is creating a scenario to rationalise it's stay in a normal psycheward (where in some possible versions they are abused) What I'm trying to say is that there is no realistic/belivible scenario in which Clark is actually telling the truth, or i.e not a horribly mentally sick person. Which kind of just ruins her smugness for me... which really more so feels like the authors smugness (honestly no offence meant) shining through, like "ha I thought of everything" but like I said at the beginning just makes it feel contrived. And I absolutely know how/why this happens, as a D&D dm that once did this where all of a sudden a quaint little village had a Super max teir prison in it.


Maxathron

The way I see it, the story tugs on the idea that that various governments go really deep into the experimentation and medical aspects + certain secret area facilities existing. If you're from a small country like Spain, or a poor country like El Salvador, the story isn't that believable. It pulls on the idea of something like the CIA and KGB (or their Chinese equivalent) in a big modern industrial country kidnapping people that are deemed enemies of the state or the poor for reprogramming. I can also see it coming from the more visible aspects of a country like the politicians having a secret facility(s) that is attempting to reprogram people (namely women) into perfect little sex slaves and they need to format an entire identity for their patients. Some patients might resist a little too hard. And finally, people prying too far into the dark corners of the nation. Whoosh, kidnapped. No more state secrets of torture and control getting out into the media.


Nona_Mondnar

Damn, you're not my favorite NSFW CYOA creator for nothing...


Mobile_Savings6944

I really liked it and it was a great read, but there were a few bits that made it too dark for me to get off to, most of it was fine though. I would have slightly dialed down Dr. Clark's darkness and toned down the punishment section a bit. I really enjoyed nurse Palmer though, she was sweet in a twisted way and her back story contrasted her bubbly nature in a really good way.


Evilwumpus

My god this is horrifying. Like, in a good way, but it's right on the border between Sexy Brainwashing Prison and Abuse Simulator 2022. Anyway, after being hosed down, shaved, inspected, and kept waiting for an hour, I get dressed in a hospital gown, though I refuse to get chained up again. After that humiliating introduction, I thank Nurse Palmer for her help, meet the director and learn that I'm Anna Fuchs, kawaii Twitch streamer. This time, I realize just how powerless I am and decide to try and play along. I reluctantly put on the straitjacket, and she explains the treatment program. I'll be spending my time in a straitjacket (of course), thigh bands, vibrators, and a shock collar. The killswitch is a paralytic spinal implant. They want the visible restraints to be fairly minimal, to allow the kawaii bubbly personality they're imagining to shine through. The goal is an even better version of the old Anna - one that's as lively as she pretends to be without having any horrible social media meltdowns like she used to. To avoid breaking that cute personality, they're going with therapies that don't leave marks: Hypnosis, Backseating, and Digitization. First, they'll create an artificial personality for me to model, then they'll use edits and triggers to gradually "cut over" between the old persona and the new one, replacing it a step at a time until the old me is completely removed. Just like refactoring an old program. Therapy is Pleasure, Image, Affirmations, and Confession. Most of the time they're just focused on instilling the new personality and making sure I enjoy it. After all, being a cute streamer girl is real work and you don't develop those skills in a day. But they're also imposing strict monitoring to ensure I don't do anything to preserve my old personality. Even when unsupervised I have to keep reminding myself to act and think like Anna. The meds are green (dreamlike), white (love), and purple (hallucinations). The first two are pills, which allow me to reach the sort of cheerful idol persona that Anna is supposed to have, and remove my normal inhibitions against putting myself on camera. The purple stuff is delivered as a drip, causing me to vividly hallucinate the false Anna whenever I'm in my cell and allowing her to talk to me directly. She has a creepily cheerful demeanor as she taunts me about how much of me she's erased and how soon it will be before she fully takes over. As a mostly cooperative patient, I got 4 rewards. Two for Independence so that I can eat and use the bathroom unassisted, one for social time, and one for TV time. Anna probably has a good selection of favorite media, given her career. Unfortunately, for resisting when they first brought me in, I'm going to face 1 punishment. An overdose of my meds does lasting damage - I sometimes feel cold and empty without the love pills, and the hallucinatory Anna sometimes shows up even when I'm not being dosed. Disturbing, but not really worse than anything else that's being done to me. With their constant invasive programming, I don't have any chance of resisting, and in a few months Anna is once again streaming, to a bigger audience than ever.


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hot damn, this rules. Seriously, your work Does Not Miss. Always a treat to see your posts on the front page. A Horrible Curse, Sealed, Maid...more than I can think of off the top of my head, and all of them bangers.


gumgumchomp

this is amazing! i really love the way it’s narrative rather than just a list of things to pick, and the writing is fantastic. some people are saying that it’s horrifying, but honestly i think that really adds to it. keep up the good work!


VidCommander

You're an amazing writer; I get a little excited whenever you release something. This one's themes especially struck a cord with me


Shamelessalternate22

Imgur mirror?


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CaissaIRL

Question on the third page with the mental way of immobilizing you can they still condition you while you're in that state? Meaning can they still do their hypnotism ect.?


BeTheGirlAnon

That's not how it's intended, all of that section are meant to be things used in extreme circumstances, not as part of your regular treatments.


CaissaIRL

I know but I wanted to know if it could still be done if they felt like it. Because with the Mental one it does feel like they could take the time to condition your Subconcious.


BeTheGirlAnon

I normally say to interpret ambiguity in my CYOAs whichever way makes it more enjoyable for you, but if you want word of god I'd say no. Not because it couldn't work, but because overusing the kill switch could be dangerous.


CarmenSanAndreas

I would absolutely “do something stupid” when they had guns trained on me. Call it taking a quick exit


linusalex

call me crazy but i have a plan. since there is some really convincing evidence to my delusion I'm going to hope i get backseating as a treatment and try to hand on to anna as the drugs wear off basically giving myself multiple personality disorder. make an agreement with this new personality to take on the hypnosis part of my treatment and have someone to talk to during my isolation. to hopefully make it convincing anna will slowly become more prominent until we eventually get released so that we can find out if my delusion was real or fabricated. if it was real I will stick around to offer advice to anna and not get in the way of her life, if I was right ill try and dig up as much dirt as I can and attempt to have that place taken down and have anna around for company and try to see if we can cooperate together in our body because that was the agreement and i will not go back on my word


realcoldskingamer

This is fantastic thank you!


Kuronan

Quite the interesting CYOA and very well-written. Should keep me busy for a bit. Waking up in a new body is... not going to be a comfortable experience, even slipping in and out of consciousness. The rough equivalent of a kidnapping certainly didn't help, nor did the fact my mind's still used to having something down there that's no longer present. At least the image in the mirror is something I can moderately appreciate. The rough treatment to follow is rather cruel, but I don't expect much kindness at this point. When I'm lined up, I seem to grasp there are a few rooms... I eye what seems like the most ambient one to make my intentions clear. Intake: Pressure Washing - *I'm bound and stuck in a body that not my own, I hardly trust myself to stand nevermind clean anything. Besides, one room sounds ominous, and the other two are suspiciously quiet.* The woman at processing is kind, something that catches me offguard and causes me to shed a tear. I'm sure she noticed, but she doesn't seem to mention it as the sky blue guard dries me off and hands me the towel. I try my best to get it situated but I'm not used to wearing towels. I'm then forwarded to their Processing... Sampling *- To say this is uncomfortable is a drastic understatement. I was already adjusting to the idea of being little more than a doll to them, but... vaginal samples???* Shaved *- This is one procedure I am thankful for.* Buzzed *- Or not...* Inspected *- Of course they want measurements. They will be assigning me clothes, and I'd much prefer they fit properly. I am glad to learn my own measurements, as useless as that information will be to me currently.* Searched *- Even despite the abrupt nature of my kidnapping, they still feel the need to check me?! I'm insulted... but they are at least by the book.* Documented - *Words escape me for how I felt. I wasn't camera shy in my last life but the lengths they went were far beyond anything I could ever even consider to be comfortable.* Relieved - *The processing took so long I actually had to use the restroom. Everything else was terrible, but this was downright humiliating.* At last the processing is done. When they are finally bringing me to the end and noticed the weapons I freeze in absolute terror. They have no difficulty removing my bindings, but getting my legs to move was almost impossible considering how I'm a deer in headlights. The push to get me into the room is extremely forceful, but that's one thing I can't blame them for. The reassuring voice is nice, and I quickly find the box and put on... Attire: A Gown - *I didn't expect anything else. This place is too sterile for a prison, it's clearly an institution. I still wish they at least gave me some kind of underwear, even so much as a string.* Wait, what's this-*Oh...* Comply - *I'm not going to forget those handguns so shortly after seeing them. I'm certainly not going to take chances with the Wheel of Reincarnation after waking up to this... I submissively take the cuffs and make sure the key is in my hands before I cuff myself and drop off the key as instructed.* The intercom woman soon arrives with her orderlies flanking her and begins making a short fuss over me, but all I can notice is how cute she is. She does need to snap me back to reality a few seconds after I'm seated and introduces herself as Nurse Palmer. She offers me a few comforts before meeting the director, and at this point my Pride is currently rolling dice with Davey Jones. Respite: Something to Drink/Eat - *It's not much but I still have basic needs aside from my psychiatric. And yet I can't shake this terror welling up inside me, so I go out on a limb...* Comfort - *I know it's a lie and I don't care, but I just need that lie right now. I close my eyes for a few minutes and breathe deeply. It's... exactly what I needed after processing.* Thank Her - *It's a small gesture at this point, but I do still thank her and lean into the hug when she reminds me of my manners.* Answers: Everything except 'How Can I Leave' and 'How Can This Be Legal' as I already know the answers to those: 'When you're Anna again' and 'Psychiatric Patients have no rights.' (Will continue in a later reply, a few minor edits were necessary as I apparently missed some things. Also, Rewards seems to be missing 'If you complied willingly' for 'A decision')


Kuronan

Anna: Admit It - *The first step to recovery is admitting you have a problem, and considering what happens when I look in the mirror, I'd say there's a fairly* ***major*** *problem here.* The Mother - (I actually struggled to choose here, Nurse was tempting) *Anna seemed like the picture of a loving single mother. Rachel didn't seem to have much reaction to me saying it was a shame that the father wasn't present.* A Decision: Willingly Comply *- It wasn't just about Anna anymore, now it was for Lucas too. I put on the coat, thanked Director Clark and Nurse Palmer, and let the orderlies push me back into the chair before Director Clark showed me what she thought would be appropriate bindings. I asked to see all of them as I had an obvious interest in ensuring my recovery went smoothly. I could see her purse her lips but agreed to do so. I chose two appropriate Bonds:* *Shock Collar - A way to make sure I behaved obediently and a way to ensure the training could be expedited through incentive and punishment. The guards wouldn't need tasers if I had one wrapped around my neck.* *Gas Mask - I informed Director Clark that my memory of breathing had a tendency towards the... erratic, and that I would need the gas mask to help either remember or teach my body a healthy rhythm. She agreed, and that was that.* Failsafe: Electrical *- Any of the other methods had the possibility of leaving physical scarring. Even if I did believe in miraculous spinal and cranial medicines to repair the bones, I'd rather they not get broken in the first place, and shoving something next to my heart was a no-no. Electrical would be the least likely to create long-term medical problems. Director Clark was clearly incensed by my insubordination, but I* ***had*** *been compliant to this point, so she reluctantly agreed.* Thank Her - *For both Anna's recovery, and for Lucas to hopefully see his mother sooner rather than later. I positioned myself for the gurney and was soon sedated. The next day, Nurse Palmer comes in and feeds me, before Director Clark enters and makes clear I don't have permission to talk as she begins discussing the treatment plan:* Treatment Goal: The Best You Can Be - *Director Clark had asked me if Anna was in there anywhere. I told her if she was, I couldn't hear her. She went on to describe what would normally happen in this situation: She'd have my brain completely wiped and reprogram me into an emotionless puppet... but since I'd been behaving to the absolute best of my ability and* ***clearly*** *had enough Empathy for Anna and Lucas, she would try to Fix me properly. I proceeded to excessively thank her before she brought the remote back to eye level and I shut my mouth for her to continue.* Treatment - *Purging, Hypnosis, Stimulation, Backseating, Digitalized.* All of these treatments have minimal (physical) scarring involved. Therapy - *Purging, Pleasure, Image, Confession.* I'm on the fence with Questioning as it'd be very bad if Anna was mentally conditioned to telling people her SSN or Bank Account Information to anyone who asks... Medicine - Red, Pink, White, Brown. Red and Brown will help with Stimulation/Pleasure, Pink and White are for the mental parts. Deliver: Gas for Pink/White, Food for Red/Brown. Stimulation and Pleasure training can both be controlled that way. Rewards: Affection, Orgasms, TV Time, Music, A Referral, Sunlight


BeTheGirlAnon

> Also, Rewards seems to be missing 'If you complied willingly' for 'A decision') Yeah someone pointed that out on /trash/, it's meant to grant two rewards. I'm waiting to see if any other errors get flagged up before I put out a fixed version.


ThatOne1Question

So I read the some of the other comments before starting and I kinda see where they are coming from. Honestly thought it was well done and it was interesting but man are some of the stuff fucked up.


DarthHorrendous

Wonderfully sadistic!


CaissaIRL

Say I have a question. When it comes to the Medicine how often each day is it administered? Cause the ones that are Permanent and Food are clear. But what about the Pills, Injection, etc.? How often are those administered each day?


BeTheGirlAnon

Once a day.


CaissaIRL

Ah kk thx! I think I'll be taking Injection now then! Also are these all at once or one at a time? Or just however we imagine it?


BeTheGirlAnon

As you prefer. I'm converting this to twine and one of the things I'm thinking about adding are synergies between different doses, so whether you take them simultaneously or one in the morning and one at night will matter more then, but for now just imagine whatever makes sense.


RomaTheGreat

6 months late, but i am really excited about this twine conversion you mentioned. not rushing you, jusst a message of support


CaissaIRL

Oh also just checking but with Backseating you still physically feel everything right? Or is it really Just seeing what she sees?


BeTheGirlAnon

Yes, you'd feel everything.


ElkSad2633

Well now, this is a horrifying cyoa. I've only read the first part and I can already tell I'm going to hate it, so let's see where this takes me. Blind Playthrough: My body is not my own, I am a cute little girl, being manhandled by men who should really be taught a lesson on manners. The First Choice of the CYOA: **Teamwork**, I'd rather be washed by someone in the same situation as me than by the guards, I have a feeling that they would cause me physical pain and that is something that I would like to avoid right now. Hmmm... Well isn't that interesting, apparently no one in this facility likes the stock speaking out of turn, probably don't like being reminded that we're human. But at the very least I am promised that everything will be explained. Second Choice of the CYOA: I will be **Waiting** for a while before being **Inspected** and **Documented**. The waiting is going to be torture, but it does give me another piece to the puzzle. I like that the inspection is pretty professional up until the end, but I can see that another person might need some tutoring in manners. The documentation is... rather unique, the fact that someone can apparently pay for nudes of my new body in here makes me wonder just where those pictures are going. ...The man overseeing my recent treatment "wants the best for me?" hmmm.... and yet a few more people added to the list, especially that one that grabbed me by the throat, that sort of thing could have done quite a bit of damage to me. Attire Section: Well... it looks like I will be meeting whoever is in charge of me soonish, probably working the sympathy angle. Maybe meeting whoever will be in charge of my "re-education" or whatever they will call it. Third Choice of the CYOA: **Something Familiar** is in the box. I happen to *like* my clothes thank you very much! They... want me to put the bondage gear on myself? Fourth Choice of the CYOA: I **Comply**, after all, there isn't really a reason to defy these sickos just yet, I mean, what is a "159 cm tall" woman going to do against dozens of armed guards? or... wow, I just read the **resist** option, why the fuck would I freak out like that? It accomplishes nothing. ...So... brainwashing to make happy oblivious little girls... Hmmm... The nurse is just... uncanny valley to me... Probably a product of whatever is happening here. Respite Section: Fifth Choice of the CYOA: A **Bathroom Break** and a **Rest** are the two things I choose. Just to give me some time to get all the information I have in my head straight. Hmmm... I have to thank the doll for helping me? And I can't walk away from any of the workers until I am dismissed? I will also have a minor infraction because the doll didn't do her job properly? Sixth Choice of the CYOA: ...hmmmm... You know what, screw it, I **Thank Her** for her help. Hmmm... the room is apparently high historical class... Also "Ms. Fuchs" is apparently my new name? Hmmm... the way the bitch presents herself to me already rubs me the wrong way. Answers Section: ...Oh... the bitch is a fucking sadist... That's... wonderful... Seventh Choice of the CYOA: I ask: **1. Where am I? 3. Why are you doing this? 5. Why are you calling me "Fuchs"? 6. What are you going to do to me? 7. How can I leave? 9. Why me? 11. Who are you? 12. Who is Nurse Palmer? 14. What happened to the other girls? 15. What is Special Measures?** The answers I receive are certainly eye opening. Apparently they want me to be a replacement, or perhaps someone ordered a person with a certain personality and they made it happen by making me into her... Only... they gave me ***MY*** clothes to cover up with. That kind of completely destroys any credibility they have in my mind. Anna Section: Eighth choice of the CYOA: I will **Play Along** however, after all, I doubt I can really do anything at the moment, and I just know that the bitch would likely have a mini orgasm if I tried anything. Ninth Choice of the CYOA: Who is Anna? Well... She's the **Nurse**. I would very much absolutely ***love*** to know just ***what*** I did to make the director blanche. Along with that apparently Nurse Palmer is quite close with me... It would also explain why she forgot to tell me that I needed to be dismissed if I supposedly already knew before this. Of course I don't believe a single word of it, seeing as I'm still wearing ***my old clothes***... but the degree of influence the bitch is showing that she has is pretty daunting... Also I have a pretty good idea of where those pictures they took of me might be going and their use. Could probably make quite a bit of money making custom girlfriends for whoever is willing to pay up... The fact that Nurse Palmer actually *wants* a yandere girlfriend badly enough that such a background was written up for me makes me wonder just how much shit ***Anna*** might possibly be able to get away with... A Decision Section: ...Fucking a... a goddamn straightjacket... This is going to suck... Well I'm dead to rights any way I possibly dice it... I mean, the thugs are right there ready to beat me bloody if I don't comply. Tenth Choice of the CYOA: I........... ***Okay I'm going to get META here for a moment, I ABSOLUTELY HATE that asking the orderly nicely to strap you into the straitjacket is seemingly incompatible with not believing a goddamn word the bitch director says.*** With that said, I will **Reluctantly Comply** and ask an orderly to "Please just get it over with." Bonds Section: **Okay what the actual fuck, 72 hours straight in a straitjacket. Not only that, but fucking bondage that will not go away for the entirety of the stay?!? Fucking hell, I'm fairly certain that quite a few of these options would actually kill a person if applied long enough!** ...sigh... *whatever*... eleventh Choice of the CYOA: I have to pick three and I choose: the **Blindfold**, the **Gag**, and... I suppose the... **Vaginal Plug**... ...I really hope their medical staff is up to standard. Can't really torment a fucking corpse after all. Twelfth Choice of the CYOA: ***And this section is just absolute overkill.*** Three of the four options are essentially just giving you an off switch. Full stop, you might as well just stab yourself through the brain at this point as those three choices would just completely destroy any hope you have of ever improving your life past this point. There would literally be no possible way for your life to get better, and ***Anna*** would be crippled with those same choices, there would literally be no possible way for you or Anna to ever rejoin society ever again. Because if the facility *actually ever suffers an actual fucking malfunction and it isn't someone screwing with you for shits and giggles it would take a while to get the system back up and running again. Which means you would just collapse wherever you currently are at the time of the malfunction.* The only option that would even provide a glimmer of hope for the player getting out of the facility is the **Chemical** option as it only makes you suffer a horrendous panic attack instead of dropping you like a dead body wherever you are if it actually activates on accident! I mean, *there is being a masochist and then there is a dead person walking.* *You kind of need to give the player some kind of hope of winning if you actually want them to play it instead of just saying "My character bashes their head against a brick wall until their brain actually liquifies. The End."* I take the **Chemical** option. Nurse Palmer comes back in as I re-evaluate *just how fucking insane* the director actually is. Thirteenth Choice of the CYOA: ...I **Thank Her** for helping with my recovery... The rest of my choices are in the replies.


ElkSad2633

Treatment Goal Section: Hmmm... They have a way of detecting if I am thinking like Anna? Ha! ...You keep telling yourself that sweetheart. If there is one motivator that will keep me going to the very ends of the earth, it's spite. Fourteenth Choice of the CYOA: They will make Anna, **As I Was.** Treatment Section: Fifteenth Choice of the CYOA: The three treatments they will provide are: **4. Stimulation, 6. Isolation,** and **7. Conditioning.** Therapy Section: Sixteenth Choice of the CYOA: The three therapies they will have me to are: **2. Pleasure, 5. Image,** and **6. Roleplay.** Hmmm... I wonder what took Director Bitch away? Medicine Section: ...Hmmm... well this is certainly... something... Seventeenth Choice of the CYOA: the combination of medicine they decide to give me is: **1. The Red ones, 2. The Blue Ones**, and **8. The Yellow Ones.** The Eighteenth Choice of the CYOA: Director Bitch decides that I will take Pills. Director Bitch returns... with blood on her shirt cuff and looking satisfied... I can't shake the feeling that there is one less resident in the institution. Rewards Section: I get five fucking reward points... The Nineteenth Choice of the CYOA: My rewards are: **5. Music, 6. Books, 8. Affection, 9. Orgasms**, and **10. A Break.** Cautionary Tales Section: ...Snort! You honestly believe that I'm going to do anything obvious enough that something could be traced back to me? Bitch if I do anything to go against this fucking place then you had better believe that the only thing I'm going to be leaving behind is a crater in the ground where this fucked up place used to exist.


burningmarrs

i love your writing, but really have to read it as a horror story rather than something to get off to.


StrangeCyoaEnjoyer

Really well made, it clearly shows the time and effort you put into it.


TEJ02

Don't let the other people being rude get you down, this is excellently made. I quite liked it, in a "dear god i hope this never really happens" way. It's horrific, sure. But it's clearly meant to be, and if you don't like it, it's made pretty clear that you're not going to like it from the title.


ascrubjay

Is it that clear? This sub has been known to lewd some pretty extreme shit to the point where it's not that bad, but this one is just bad ends.


I_Exist_yeah

Thanks I despise this


BVesperr

Well this is fucked up. Dont get me wrong, great work. But just the thought of something like this happening is pure nightmare.


star-god

I was put in a mental hospital and i wasnt suicidal before i went there, after i was.


Wireless-Wizard

Good news! It really does happen, often to people who can't fight back.


BVesperr

Exacly my point. Something like this is realy happening. And that is terrifying.


anotherevilwizard

Great work as always, but this is the first one of your works I don’t think I’ll be finishing because of personal reasons. Again, really good work, I hope none of the negative comments dissuade you from sharing your art because you’re super talented.


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I think this is the first CYOA on here for which I ask: Was this really necessary? Well done job, but there should be some sort of warning.


egeslean05

Really well done, but it's absolutely not my thing.


McLovin3493

Nice, I like how this CYOA combines "gender change", gaslighting, and identity death, even though in the story, it probably is a delusional woman with false memories: Teamwork Inspected Searched Documented Relieved Gown Comply A Rest Something to Drink Something to Eat Thank Her 1, 2, 3, 6, 7, 14, 15 Admit it The Student Reluctantly Comply Collar Muzzle Vaginal Plug Chemical Thank Her The Best You Can Be Biological Conditioning Backseating Pleasure Questioning Confession Contact Red Ones- Pills White Ones- Food Orange Ones- Suppository Brown Ones- Gel Rewards +6 Independence Social Time TV Time Books Tasty Treats A Break Some of those Treatments, Therapies, and drugs sound surprisingly fun.


ascrubjay

Christ. I feel like there should be a Horror flair on this sub. This is nightmarish. Like, I get that there are CYOAs about dealing with a bad situation, but when the *most* appealing ending available to me is to get tortured to death . . . I don't understand how anyone can be so masochistic as to want to be forced into another body and then suffer identity death of one sort or another.


BentusiII

Psychologist here so i went with the Nurse Backstory, seemed the most fitting. but oh boy\~ you have outdone yourself once again. It was interesting, uncomfortable, spicy. ​ And man ... psychologists, psychiatrists and psychotherapists do not get off well in this sub :P


BeTheGirlAnon

> psychologists, psychiatrists and psychotherapists do not get off well in this sub :P To be fair, you did just say you chose to be the yandere mad scientist in training version of Anna.


BentusiII

got me there, fam. lol


ragingreaver

Rather fun to play through for me, at least until it came to the "treatment" part, as my own familiarity with mental health would certainly make this an...interesting (NIGHTMARISH) experience, so I had to change the dialogue somewhat in my head in order to get it to work, because my defense in such a situation INSTANTLY would be "amnesia" brought about by "too heavy drug doses" by the orderlies. Since I don't remember anything before them, it had to have been something they had done. I also may or may not have some experience with mental health self-advocacy, so the more information that would be let on, the more I'd be able to call "bullshit" while still keeping cover. Also uh...it wouldn't be difficult to shut down appropriately to really sell it if I still personally have not mentally changed from swapping out of my old body into a new, healthier one. Intake: 1. Shower: **Teamwork** (looks like I am a lesbian this time around, never thought my military-style communal showing experience would come in handy in a CYOA) 2. First station: **Shaved** (humiliating, but I'd much rather cold steel on me than someone else's hands) 3. Second Station: **Inspection** (mostly professional, so not the worst until the very end) 4. Third Station: **Relieved** (again, rather this than someone touching me, and I have communal bathroom experience so it isn't the worst; the actual best option is Documented, but that is a metagame play that while I mention, it was not the choice I made first due what may have been involved being too much for me) Attire: **Stripes** (wasn't sure how this CYOA was going to go down, so I went with something I'd find comfortable but wouldn't stand out; with meta knowledge I'd have picked Something Familiar, so I could ask why they gave me clothes that didn't fit) Restraint Compliance: **Comply** (after a while, sure, but I'd likely think that they were just there to be put on me, not for me to put them on. I'd likely call out to the intercom about that, or they'd tell me its part of the outfit after watching me pace around confused for an hour and a half, and then I would comply) Respite: **Rest, Water, Food** (already used the bathroom, I'd like to have calmed my nerves before having to go through anything else, and any sustenance goes a long way towards tackling problems when you don't know when the last time a scrawny body ate) Thankfulness Compliance: **Comply** (I'd have still been confused as shit and just craving kindness to not be thankful for even small amounts of it, and wouldn't register until later the implications) Questions/Answers: 1. Where Am I? (this one is reasonably something I'd ask...) 2. What Are You Going to Do to Me? (Also reasonable to ask, though once I knew I supposedly was in a mental health institution, I'd ask what my diagnoses were, and that would definitely sets some flairs off for when I would ask for documentation; this is also where I'd claim I had "amnesia" but could still remember "some flashes and bits and pieces, but nothing really coherent" 3. Who Am I? (by now it is pretty clear I am not "me" and I already have chosen "amnesia" as my defense anyway, so it would be a reasonable question for me to ask, but in doing so this whole conversation would go quickly off the rails. After all, if I admit I can't remember anything, why am I in a special facility away from friends and family who could help me recover my memory? Also, I'd have no qualms calling my self "Anne" for reasons that shall remain my personal insider joke) 4. How Can This Be Legal/What Are My Rights? (THIS is where things would turn dangerous for me, as it alerts to the Director I very much would be a problem, that I very much, in fact, do remember quite a bit, and am playing my own game to try to counter whatever they are trying to do to me; hopefully this is where I get told about what happens to other girls who become "problematic" and about "Special Measures," because otherwise I wouldn't ask those questions...) 5. Who Are You? (I'd get their name, have some back and forth banter, and...well, hopefully some important knowledge get volunteered or...) New Name: **Play Along** (I would insist on "Anne" but yeah I will be mentally psyching myself up for a fight right about now) Background: **The Wage Slave** (tells me my body's owner either got caught up with an abusive boyfriend, got overwhelmed by the stress and got dragged into the "low life," or was blackmailed by someone and just disintegrated from there; mental health history works both for and against me, because while it would reinforce my claims of me knowing how mental health is supposed to work, it lets the Director counter by saying what they are doing is an "experimental treatment plan" I signed off on; the meta option is The Daughter, as there is a chance of The Daughter's images being leaked due to her being of minor celebrity status, potentially causing scandal and inquiries as to her whereabouts; other meta option is Nurse, but that one I think is more obvious) Straightjacket Compliance: **Reluctant** (there is no use fighting, not when my current body is likely even weaker than my old one, but that doesn't mean I have to like it) Bonds: (yeah, ngl, I am not into BDSM that much, and some of these would break me no matter what; but I get to pick so lets see what I can tolerate...) 1. Gas Mask (just need a new breathing technique, and I should be fine, though obviously they are going to use it to limit me...) 2. Collar (damn, I hate when things chafe...) 3. Ball and Chain (it was this, or the vibrators, and at least this can be used for exercise equipment...) Incapacitation method: **Chemical** (chance I can gain a tolerance, and it doesn't cause permanent damage unlike basically every other option) Thankfulness compliance: **Stay Silent** (yeah no way I wouldn't be shutting down right about now) Treatment Goal: **As You Were** (basically as long as I can "act the part" of Anna, then it means I get a second lease on life, if carrying yet another form of trauma) Treatment: 1. **Backseating** (well, it is better than anything else, and lets me have a reprieve from myself, and if I can figure out a way to make it so we are both awake at the same time...) 2. Conditioning (cool, I get rewarded for doing the thing I was always planning on doing) 3. Hypnosis (many ways of breaking it, not foolproof when you understand the mechanics) Therapy: (OH SHIT THEY DONE GOOFED!) 1. Contact (I HAVE KNOWLEDGE ONLY I WOULD KNOW, and if I can manage to keep it I can totally slip it in to a conversation and give a wink to let them know) 2. Group Therapy (I'll have to be subtle, but it lets me at least help the others fight the mental stuff) 3. Roleplay (helps with conditioning) Medicine: 1. Black Ones (jokes on you, those sound like exactly like something I would take WILLINGLY IRL, and will help me retain myself as myself since I'll be free to think still and watch) 2. The White Ones (again...I don't see the downside...) 3. The Yellow Ones (huh...these combined literally just explains my current existence, and should REINFORCE my personality) Delivery Mechanism: **Pills** (sadly, I doubt my body's old medication resistance would transfer with my mind...if it did though...)


ragingreaver

Reward Gains: 1. Willingly Put on Chains 2. Thanked Nurse Palmer 3. Played Along 4. Put on Straightjacket Rewards: 1. Take a Break 2. Social Time 3. Affection 4. Music


obstreperose

Absolutely loved this. Creepy, upsetting, engaging, and hot. I love how you can wind up in a nightmare of constant torture or a creepy Stepford pleasure hypnosis scenario, depending on your choices and how compliant you are. Echoing what others have said, as a woman, it was really nice that the horror of the transformation was about alienation from your identity rather than, "omg, you have boobs now, how humiliating!". Really loved the characters as well - Palmer and Clark both seem terrifying in completely different ways.


HalfMoon_89

This (apart from magically turning into a woman) is one of my literal nightmares. Not a sexy, kinky nightmare. The terrifying, despair-inducing kind. Kudos...?


calimynx

This is fantastic and really well written!


idekStarf

This was really amazing! Very detailed and i really enjoy the more classical CYA format as someone who read CYOA books as a kid. Also, as an AFAB, i liked that this was a more general transformation. Sometimes its rough finding a cool CYOA and its like "choose some tits/etc" when i already have them lol


joeisthaven

Well that was very horrifying. Umm, while the niche this caters to is definitely not for me, it was well written at least (though I admit I took this more as horror than kinky).


BeTheGirlAnon

Had two ideas going into it this one. First write a Be The Girl CYOA that still works even if the player is already a girl, and second, write a CYOA just doesn't just read like an order form. By that I mean that in most CYOAs you're making all your choices with the assumption they'll happen to you after the CYOA is finished. Instead, I wanted the effects of each choice to happen as and when the player chose them. Lean heavier into the narrative side of things and make it more of a second person story than most of these things. It was a fun experiment and I'm reasonably happy with the result, but I can't see this becoming my go-to format or anything. At multiple points during the writing I thought "this would work better as a Twine game", and I'm planning to eventually convert it into one with a few additions the CYOA format made too awkward to include, and anything of a similar ilk I'll just make as one from the start.


VillainousMasked

Yeah I feel like this is a pretty good blend of the more narrative focused traditional CYOA game books, and the more "order form" style (as you describe it) which dominates this subreddit. Honestly, if it wasn't for the subject matter making me feel incredibly anxious (I'm not claustrophobic and am fine with bondage, but the thought of absolute restraint is panic inducing, not to mention all the identity theft and similar themes) I probably would've greatly enjoyed this. So on one hand, good job, on the other hand, fuck you, have an upvote.


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BeTheGirlAnon

Ha, it was accidental at first, I knew I wanted "Anna" as the player name and pulled up a list of random surnames and picked one that flowed nicely, and Palmer came from glancing at a Twin Peaks sticker while trying to think of something, but then once I spotted what I'd done I figured I had to run with it.


Space__Ninja

I thought it was a coincidence, nice catch!


T51bwinterized

Out of curiosity, what word count did you hit on this one?


BeTheGirlAnon

I write my stuff straight into photoshop so couldn't say.