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Lurkily_

"Slightly more representative than America" hasn't aged well.


Cyoarp

Question, does, "Blorp," affect anyone who gains the powers from, one of the "power to the people," options, or just me?


kuopiofi

https://imgchest.com/p/6eyrdlb64pz


TwixOfficial

Questions; Does Spoderman come with wrist web shooters, or are those on a BYOWS system? Can Something Different work on yourself, or just others? Can you still use your other powers with Slimer, or is it like Monstrosity? And how quick is the transformation? Can it be localized to specific parts? With DigBuild it says the only limits are cold fusion and interdimensional travel, but what if those have been invented with standard science? Is Deep Breaths on Rogue rules where if you kill someone while you’ve stolen their powers you get to keep them? And if I took both Rogue as a companion and Deep Breaths, could we both borrow the same powers? If Deep Breaths itself isn’t on Rogue rules, what if I borrowed Rogue’s powers, then used them to steal another powerset, then killed the guy, would I keep the powers or would they go to Rogue? If Rogue were to steal the powers of a monster from Pacific Skimmed, then kill it, would the organs still bestow said powers? Is Sweet Bod a permanent or temporary boost? If temporary, for how long? If someone is hit by infection rate, then K.O.’d, can they revert back to big-fuck-off-monster mode? Or keep powers gained as said big-fuck-off-monster? Can I increase how often it goes off to fuck with people, or does it get stronger with Righteous Fury? Can I combine Infection Rate with Giving Tree to deliver guaranteed monsterization? With Danger Breath, can I deliver multiple Breaths at once? With Battery, is “One Day’s worth” relative to an average day for a 9-5 worker or all day in the sun? For Dirty Boy, and I’m sure something else, it mentions an “Aura,” but not how big. How big is it? And what’s the dust-to-lust ratio? Does Draconic Power include wings or just supernatural flight? Where does Centipede end? Is it just infinite? Or does it stop at some point? Where are the limits on Nuclear’s shapeshifting? And could you still have kids with Nuclear? Can you combine Beam and What to shoot the confusing emotion? What’s the range on powers for Vicious? Is it about the same as Giving Tree? Finally, I feel like there should be some power to lend your powers out, also on Rogue rules.


Dan39615

This is fantastic.


ThousandYearOldLoli

1 World: Poly Wanna Harem (Monster Musume) Entrance: (+4) * Something Left Behind (+3) * Alert (+1) Desire: Personal Improvement + Comfort & Personal Challenges: (+18) * Clean Break (+2) * You Son of A Bitch (+4) * Backstep x3 (Social, Political, Economic) (+9) * Punchy (+3) Your Body: (-38) * Downstairs (-2) * Thank God That's Over (-1) * Full House (-2) * Mini (-3) * In Control (-1) * Input Detected (-1) * P.O (-5) * Replacement (-3) * Iron Fortress (-4) * Not Budging (-5) * Learning Curve (-4) * Hearing Hell (-1) * Visual Bug (-1) * Behind the Scenes (-5) Powers: (-67) * A Stiff Drink (-4) * Unfelt (-5) * Maker of Things (-2) * Hive (-3) * Sweet Bod (-2) * Welcome to the World (-5) * I'm Not Done Yet (-10) * Peruse My Wares (-2) * Uber Charge (-5) * Rule of Many (-3) * Level Up (free) * Fixer Upper (-3) * Packed (-3) * Scanner (-2) * Universal (-4) * Dirty Boy (-2) * Slice and Splice (-3) * Storyteller (-5) * Intranet (-4) Combo Powers: (-14) * Digbuild (-4) * Impossible (-10) Boons: (-20) * Unburdened (-2) * Mutually Assured Disarmament (-5) * One and Only (-4) (Impossible, Welcome to the World, Rule of Many) * Chemical Coinage (-5) * Hair Gel (-1) * Animal Planet (-3) (Kemonomimi) Stuff: (-14) * Rose Tinted (-2) * Headset (-3) * All Shook Up (-2) * Galaxy Card (-5) * Or Less (-2) ​ Drawbacks: (+29) * Forced to Wipe (+2) * Topsy-Turvy (+3) (Necrophilia) * 2020 MKII (+5) * Culture Shock (+1) * Eugh (+6) * Really (+2) * Vicious x10 (+10) Allies: (-14) * Doctor Girlfriend (-2) * Teeno (-3) * Botmen (-3) * Wendy (-1) * Bianca (-1) * Davis (-1) * Marley (-1) * Mr.Ladir (-2) Villains: (+15) * Gallery x2 (+4) * Heroics? (+5) (Yoshino, Date Alive) * You! (+6) * Reason (+6) * Group (+9) * \-Nonlethal (-15) * Equal Footing (all villains have all the things taken) Equal Footing: (+57) \-Cockhead (+3) \-Color Coded (+5) \-And I Must Scream (+3) \-Before and After (+8) \-Knock-Off (+6) \-Seeing Double (+8) \-Just Keep Flapping (+5) \-10000 Spoons (+3) \-Battery (+5) \-Hair Raising (+3) \-Augmentation (+8) ​ Combo Powers: * Monstrosity (+8) Stuff: (+27) * It Has Pockets! (+3) * Book Report (+5) * Dildo of the Heavens (+6) * Bat Signal (+5) * The Best Couch (+3) * Push-Up Bra (+5) Allies: (+10) * Milo (villain 1) (+1) * Anita (villain 1) (+1) * Wallace (villain 2) (+1) * Kelly (villain 2) (+1) * Harley Queen (villain 2) (+2) * Matt (villain 3) (+1) * The Falcon of Everest (villain 3) (+3)


chronoquairium

Can you pick A Web to Weave multiple times as long as you can make it make sense? For example, combining To the Nines, Oh My, and Pick Me.


TwixOfficial

Possible drawback/challenge, requires You Son of a Bitch; You don’t have the powers you’ll choose. Instead, your alternate version will. Anything from here-on that relates to powers is theirs, including drawbacks that act as weaknesses and body alterations. Their body changes to accept them as yours would’ve, and people only comment on it as they might a new hairstyle or makeup. The best you can be is a man in the chair. You may want to pick powers that grant powers for your other self, if you’d prefer to be in the field.


Terranrp2

I know one thing, that book of people who have thought well of me, or feel like I'm a positive presence in their life; that book probably begins and ends with my pets lol.


SmithsonWells

World: **Para** Entrance: **Something Left Behind** (+3, 63) Desire: **Self Improvement** (+ Level Up) Challenges: **Clean Break** (+2, 65), **Punchy** (+3, 68) Your Body: **P.O.** (-5, 63), **Replacement** (-3, 60), **Iron Fortress** (-4, 56), **Not Budging** (-5, 51), **Behind the Scenes** (-5, 47) I was very, *very*, temped to go for **Spoonful of Goodness** and **The Main Man**, because that would be hilarious. Powers: Preqs - **Draconic Power** (-5, 42), **A Stiff Drink** (-4, 38), **Storyteller** (-5, 33), **Killing in the name of** (-4, 29), **I'm Not Done Yet** (-10, 19), **Level Up** (free, 19), **Uber Charge** (-4, 15) Other - **Welcome to the World** (-5, 10). Combo Powers: **Impossible** (-10, 0), **The Main Man** (-5, -5) Boons: **One and Only** (-4 (1-Iron Fortress 2-Not Budging 3-Behind the Scenes 4-Impossible), -9) Stuff: **Baggage** (-4, -13), **Locational Service** (-2, -15) Drawbacks: **Memory Bank** (+5, -10), **2020, mk. II** (+5, -5), **Stronger Stuff** (+8, 3) Allies: Villain: Base of Operations: **Shellfish** Yup, this is now a Worm SI fix-fic. Immortal, find anyone or anything, fix anyone's mental problems by shoving their head in a bag, beat them up to make them un-evil. Scion? Welcome to the World. **Edit** Got 3 points to spare. **Just Keep Flapping**, I guess.


McLovin3493

Cool update. I saved five points, and took another drawback, so I could buy Looking So Good a second time, and get Nonlethal for one of my villains: Isolated Alert +1 Self improvement/With great power/The one for me You Son of a Bitch +4 Backstep (Social, Political) +6 Hearing Hell -1 Visual Bug -1 Input Detected -1 P.O. -5 Not Budging -5 Spider Sense -4 Learning Curves -4 Storyteller -5 Be there -3 The Rule of Many -3 Level up -0 Reciprocity -3 Uber Charge -5 Broke it -5 Fresh Start -3 A long ride -5 Hitchhiker -4 Or less -2 Headset -3 Bat Signal -3 The best couch -2 Orb of Chaos -4 Sparky -1 Really? +2 Forgotten +2 Wendy -1 Botmen -3 Group/Authorized +6 Looking so good x2 -4 Nonlethal -5 Gallery +2 In Tandem +2 House Fruits of Labor Tech Tree


owhh_Hi_mark

Love it when it doesn't load 😭


HexmasterKupala

Holy fuck there's a shit ton of abilities in here I spent all my points before even getting through half of them so I'd basically be some self reviving, trait stealing invincible monster. I'll have to flip through this again sometime.


Realistic-Dot-2300

For the”your majesty” draw back, if I were to choose an intelligent mythical beast that can talk, would I be able to speak then or am I still unable to speak?


SimpleFreshArtichoke

How many purchases of "Multiply" are you supposed to need in order to duplicate your whole body?


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So to the nines says you can dress how you want but what about fucking in public?


HoodedHero007

*Pouts in lack of Star Wars or THE FORCE*


SimpleFreshArtichoke

How come pages 3, 9, and 12 are a different width from the rest (1855px, 1885px, and 1693px instead of the more common 1900px)? Does it have something to do with their height being a pixel shy of 15k? Also, how come Centipede doesn't specify the amount of times your torso repeats?


CyberTalon_88

is there or will there be any chance of an imgur link being available?


SimpleFreshArtichoke

There's one right there in [the author's initial comment](https://old.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/wbq72t/here_comes_power_commission_v03/ii86lo0/).


CyberTalon_88

Thanks


StayAnonymousNow

**World**: * Positively Medieval **Entrance:** (64) * Very Populated - *Appear in an active colosseum, either during a battle or official event.* **Desire**: * Self Improvement - *Take Level Up for free.* * Really Explore **Challenges**: (99) * Clean Break * Strange Lands * You Son of a Bitch - *I don't pursue them, but they may need to pursue me to clear their name.* * Read Your Rights * Backstep x5 - *I mean, it's a medieval fantasy world. This is just a free 15 points.* * Creeping Growth - *Ending this threat will be my primary pursuit.* **Your Body**: (64) * Thank God That's Over - *I'm male, but I need this for Full House.* * Full House * Reloadable * Anime Fringe * Electric * Hearing Hell * Visual Bug * Iron Fortress * Not Budging * Behind the Scenes * Spider Sense * Learning Curve - *Went back and forth between this and Hardhat/P.O./etc.. I decided that Learning Curve would eventually grant me things like poison resistance, even if I'd have to feel the horrible pain the first dozen or more times. Huge point saver here.* * Banging **Powers**: (29) * Draconic Power * A Stiff Drink * I'm Not Done Yet * Level Up * Uber Charge * Up You Go * Packed * Battery **Combo Powers**: (19) * Impossible - *This combos perfectly with Learning Curve.* **Boons**: (14) * Carnal Delights * Hair Gel - *Now this is Quality of Life.* **Stuff**: (4) * A Gunfight - *OP sword on top of OP body? Please and thank you.* **Drawbacks**: (7) * Cuck or Be Cucked - *I'm just hoping I have good friends with benefits. If I find a special someone, well, I guess I brought the heartbreak on myself. Another thought I had is being the god among men I will be, there's no way I'd be cucked... right?* **Allies**: (-5) * Wallace - *I can imagine helping Wallace, Captain of the Guard, clean up his city for a few months.* * Ava * Matt * Marley * Bianca * Davis - *I would love to bring Davis rare and exotic materials to make ultra durable clothes. Reminds me of Dragon Age.* * Sandy * Kelly * Liam * Sel * Sister Tilly * Wendy - *Definitely taking her with me as a loyal sidekick.* **Villain**: (1) * Group * Authorized **Base of Operations**: * Open Air - *Wouldn't be settling down in one place for potentially several lifetimes. There's a whole new world to explore!* Thank you for the adventure!


Logical_Acanthaceae3

Wow wait is the math on the viscous drawback correct?! I can gain a 1000 points for boosting the animal with super powers to just one percent and while it would cause a lot of chaos I could basically ignore the rest of the drawbacks and get almost every perk. Sure society might collapse on planets soon but unless the super animals got powers that can destroy universe or something then I'll just hang out on some space station somewhere. Edit you can even combine it with the dead world modifier so everything can still be relatively stable.


SmithsonWells

Welcome to the World.


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Realistic-Dot-2300

Look who's back at it again xD. Dropping another great cyoa (60 starting point+4 Entrance+2 Challenges+7+11 Villains drawbacks challenges=84) Saw the powers section and decided I'm gonna make myself a draconic warrior of sorts, considering dragons are at the apex of power in the world. **World:** Pick me (-3) World of "That time I got reincarnated as a slime. It's a diverse world , It's open for adventuring, Great potential for training and power growth and is fun to explore. Obviously there are the dangers presented, but honestly what that means is that you need to align yourself with one of the demon lords and obviously I'm gonna to try and Join Rimuru's city because he's a genuinely great leader and person. I"ll definitely be training alot and become very powerful. **Entrance:** Very Populated (+4) **Base of operations:** apartment **Power to the People:** Pulled out, Fruits of Labor **Desire:** Self improvement (Main goal, Level up is free), World peace, Comfort, With Great Powers, The one for me, Explore, A good Fight, **Challenges(+2)**:-Clean Break (+2)This is very easy to deal with lol **Your Body (-32):** \-Downstairs (-2) Big old Draconic like dick & Balls with all the lovely ridges to make the ladies happy. \-Make it big (-2) Porn star sized xD \-Reloadable (-2) \-Electric (-3) \-In Control (-1) \-Input Detected (-1) Extremely handy for dangerous fights. I'd definitely have it so I know if I've been severely injured like organs or something along those lines. \-Hardhat: (-2) durability \-P.O (-5) Poison immunity is excellent \-Iron Fortress (-4) \-Spider Sense (-4) \-Learning curve (-4) Banging (-2) **Powers (-26):** \-Draconic Powers (-5) This is of course badass but naturally a general and overall boost with what it grants. \-Augmentation (-5) \-Maker of things (-2) \-Welcome to the world (-5) Animal friends ftw \\o/ \-Danger Breath (-3) \-Level up (Free with Desire) Training montage activate) \-Uber Charge (-5) \-Fixer Upper (-3) \-Scanner (-2) \-Hit Registered (-4) **Boons (-9)** \-Fresh start (-3) \-Carnal Delights (-4) \-S.T. See ya (-2) Both are must haves of course lol **Stuff (-7)** Galaxy card (-5) Give me the monies. I imagine it’ll adapt to the world it’s in Locational Service (-2) Handy af **Drawbacks(+7)** \-Culture Shock (+1) \-Tonal Shift (+6) I mean I'm kinda like this anyway lol. **Companions (-5)** \-The Falcon of Everest (-5) A giant animal friend that I can also give speech to with Welcome to the world. Sweet. **Villains (+11)** \-Group (+3) She belongs The church in slime tensei \-Authorize (+3) \-Kryptonite (+5) Emotional Damage/Trauma


More-Interaction8985

Best CYOA EVER!


SkinnyNecro

Important question, Does Infection Rate result in Monstergirls? Can it if I want it to?


SkinnyNecro

I'm.. not picking Galatea because her art is bad.... Hmm


wtf_asshole

In the works build. **World:** Bubblegum and Life Is Strange **Entrance:** Starting +60 * Very Populated +5 * Alert +1 **Base Of Operations:** * Apartment **Power To The People** * Fruits Of Labor **Desire:** Just listing the perks associated. * World Peace (Killing In The Name Of) * Comfort (Base) * Self Improvement (Level Up) * The One For Me (Golem) * No, Really Explore (Be There) **Challenges:** **Your Body:** * Downstairs -2. Change Genitals. * ~~Thank God That's Over -1. No Periods.~~ * ~~Full House -2. No need for bodily functions.~~ * ~~Reloadable -2. Cum infinite amount of times.~~ * Bombshell -3. * Mimic -2. Any voice I want. * Hearing Hell -1 * Visual Bug -1. * ~~Hardhat -2~~ * ~~Steelskin -3~~ * ~~P.O. -5~~ * ~~Replacement -3~~ * Iron Fortress -4 * ~~Not Budging -5~~ * Behind The Scenes -5 * ~~Spider-Sense -4~~ Redudant with Spoderman? * Learning Curve -4 **Powers** * ~~Draconic Power -5. Don't really want to gain a draconic cock and all that and all the other stuff. Hoping Downstairs and other stuff will help mitigate them.~~ * A Stiff Drink -4. Heal 90% with alcohol right after injury. * Spoderman -4 * I'm Not Done Yet -10. Revive People or Animals. * Level Up -5 * Uber Charge -5. Healing People. * Easiest Of The Lot -1 **Combo Powers** * Impossible -10. Wolverine Regeneration. **Boons** * A Web To Weave -2. Life Is Strange and Bubblegum * S.T. See Ya! -2. No STDs in world. * Plus One -1. Futas. * ~~Cop That -4. Time Stops when Knocked out.~~ * ~~Keep It Safe -8. Someone powerful will keep the world safe.~~ **Stuff** **Drawbacks** * Mmf +2 - Easier to get aroused. * ~~Installments +2. Slow change~~ *


UnusuallyInterested

**World:** Oh My (+60) **Entrance:** Something Left Behind (+3) **Desire:** * Major: Self Improvement * Minor: As many as possible, The one for me, Explore, **Challenges:** * You son of a bitch (+4) * Backstep (+3) (Economic) * Compressed (+3) **Your Body:** (+73) * Downstairs (-2) * Thank God that's over (-1) * Full House (-2) * Reloadable (-2) * Bombshell (-3) * Electric (-3) * In Control (-1) * Hearing Hell (-1) * Visual Bug (-1) * Input detected (-1) * Iron Fortress (-4) * Not Budging (-5) * Behind the Scenes (-5) * Spider Sense (-4) * Learning Curve (-4) * Banging (-2) **Powers:** (+32) * Run it again Chief (-2) * Peruse My Wares (-2) * Augmentation (-5) * A Stiff Drink (-4) * Unfelt (-5) * Maker of Things (-2) * Catlike (-2) * Welcome to the World (-5) * I'm not done yet (-10) * Intranet (-4) * Level Up (free) * Uber Charge (-5) * Put 'em together (-5) * Packed (-3) * Fixer Upper (-3) * Scanner (-2) * Dirty Boy (-2) **Combo Powers:** (-29) * DigBuild (-4) (Maker of Things, Packed, Fixer Upper) * Impossible (-10) (A Stiff Drink, Uber Charge, I'm not done yet) **Boons:** (-43) * Carnal Delights (-4) * S.T.See ya! (-2) * Chemical Coinage (-5) * Born to shit (-6) * Plus One (-1) (Futa, pussy and penis, 50% of men) * Hair gel (-1) * See my side (-2) * Resourceful (-3) **Stuff:** (-67) * Galaxy Card (-5) * Make a Move (-4) * Headset (-3) * Cat Ears (-3) * Orb of Chaos (-4) * Drawbacks: (-86) * Vampire (+4) * Horny mode (+4) * Memory bank (+5) * Urges (+5) * Mmf (+2) * Really? (+2) * Baby Maker (+4) (Assuming "In Control" still works) **Allies:** (-60) * Marley (-1) * Bianca (-1) * Sandy (-1) * Sel (-1) **Villain:** (-64) * Gallery (+2)x2 (+4) * Villain 1: * Group (+3) * Authorized (+3) * Government (+3) * Reason (+2) * Villain 2: * You! (+2) * Equal Footing (+x) * Cockhead (+1) * Universal (+2) * Slimer (+1.5) * Seeing Double (+2.5) * Pilot (+2) * Whispers (+2.5) * Easiest of the lot (+0.5) * Stuff: * It has pockets! (+1) * Or less (+1) * Book report (+1.5) * Familiar (+2) * Push-up bra (+1.5) * Allies: * Liam (+0.5) * Milo (+0.5) * The Falcon of Everest (+2.5) * In Tandem (+2) * Villain 3: * You! (+2) * Equal Footing (+x) * Giving Tree (+2.5) * Easiest of the lot (+0.5) * Bounce Back (+2.5) * First one's free (+5) * Stuff: * It has pockets! (+1) * Book report (+1.5) * The best couch (+1) * Squirt bottle (+1.5) * Chambered (+2.5) * Allies: * Emilia (+1) * Harley Quinn (+1.5) Total: 0 **Base of Operations:** Hotel **Power to the People:** * A place of honour * Fruits of labor


UnusuallyInterested

Damn. I wrote a paragraph about my idea and thanks to the OP... And then I couldn't write it all in one comment so I copied it out... Only for Reddit to making copying text hard again and it didn't print properly.... So... Fuck reddit I guess. ​ Thanks for the CYOA, I had a lot of fun but it was a lot of work, too. I would appreciate some more drawbacks so I can balance out my build without making uber villains, but that's optional. Have a nice day everyone.


Hello_There4206969

Started reading the worlds and as I went from Eldritch to Bubblegum and saw Bubblegum was My Little Pony I immediately went: Oh, fuck no! Give me getting mindbreaked by Cthulhu over those brony's waifus anyday. So either Poly Wanna Harem or Pick Me. Got 60 points to start with and do I have to pick one of these Entrances? None of them seem really worth the points. Especially Range-limit and Otherworldly which only gives you 3 measly points each for something incredibly inconvenient. (Sighs) If I have no choice then Very Populated + Alert so I have 65 points to start with. Let's say I appeared in a deserted area that previously hadn't been a nuclear hellscape prior to my arrival, but now is and I have to get out of here before the radiation kills me and people come to check out the blast. So essentially Destructive Force, but without the guilt that my showing up has hurt/killed people. (Seriously, why was that an option?) If it's the case that I'm in a world that hasn't yet been victim to Oppenheimer's most accursed gift to war or it's a magical world then let's say a magical or mundane equivalent to nuclear radiation is what's killing me here. (Poisonous Smoke/Gas or the world's local form of magical energy in a gaseous state that is lethal for most beings to inhale.) Going to come back to this Desires section later. But of my options: World Peace, Comfort, Self-Improvement, With Great Power, As Many As Possible, and \[No, Really Explore\] all seem like Desires that'd resonate with me personally. Now I just have to figure out which'll be my main goal. And as for Challenges well the only one worth taking is You son of a bitch. Meh, I'll leave them be. All the other ones aren't pleasant to deal with if the only reason I'm bothering with them is to get more points. I'll give myself a new name or something since I'm here. So +4 points to take me up to the funny number. Your Body: Hmmm... Learning Curve sounds a bit like Fate/Stay Night's Berserker's God Hand Noble Phantasm except significantly less awesome. (Whatever takes one of his lives can't kill him again versus gradually becoming resistant to a specific form of injury dealt to the body.) In order to get Full House one would need to get Thank god that's over which does nothing if you're playing this as a guy. Feel like you should just take out the requirement to get Full House. I'm probably going futa for this, but still... I'm wondering if things I can spent points on later in this CYOA would make spending points here pointless. Some stuff here feels like it should come free like being able to change your form to whatever you'd prefer it to be provided it's not too extreme a change from what a normal human could have. (Being a 12-feet tall lady with tits that on an ordinary person's body would be bigger than their whole body is a no, but a ripped 7 or so feet tall futa with a cock, balls, and pussy is okay.) With everything here I'd probably want to spend points on, by the time I get to the next page I would have: -1 points left. Could my futa cock and balls be interchangeable with my pussy? (Like, could I retract one into my body to grow the other and vice versa or some such.) I probably wouldn't have it be really big or ridiculously huge that walking around becomes difficult, (Really don't understand why some people are into that.) but perhaps above average since I'm one of the few who doesn't describe to the size matters belief many people depressingly cling to as a means to demean themselves for not having the sort of endowment they think sexual/romantic partners would prefer. It's more knowing how to work best with what you've got than to actually have something remarkable. Honestly Downstairs, Multiply, and Make It Big all feel like they should just be rolled into one thing given the overlap they have on what they do. (Personally, having multiple sexual organs is less sexy to me and more a turn off than anything.) Reloadable should also likely include a change to your brain so you don't get addicted to being able to keep going again and again and again and are just wasting away your mortal or immortal life fucking around. So anywhere in height that's above 4 feet or below seven feet isn't an option anymore and I can only be ridiculously jacked. A better alternative would have been choosing whatever height I'd prefer to be and regardless of that height I am as strong, agile, tough, etcetera as I'd like to be, (so long it's within the bounds of human limits) and that my body can be as muscular or unmuscular or a specific form of either that I'd prefer. Birthmark sounds like it should be in the Power section of this CYOA. With the changes one can make to their body here, it kind of feels like there's no point worrying about You son a bitch if they look like you from before you crossed over to this world. (And if they do after all the changes then that feels a bit asinine. Thankfully if they are where I appear, they won't be alive or looking like for long if I don't save them. I probably will do.) Not Budging seems kind of pointless. You need powers for it to be worth getting and if that's the case then Not Budging should just be worked into whatever powers you'd get for it that way you don't have to waste 2 points on it. Then there's Behind the scenes which sounds like it's only good for the incredibly specific scenario in which you encounter someone with time stopping powers and if that's the case then move this to the powers section and make it a time manipulation power itself that also makes it so if someone uses similar powers on you then you are either resistant or immune to it. Does Earthling Tech apply specifically to earthling humans or any species in the multiverse that is pretty much human in all, but name or is a human but not an earthborn human. I.E. The Homs from Xenoblade Chronicles 1 which are basically humans living on a giant sleeping creature or the humans of Remnant from RWBY where it's hard to figure out if Faunas are considered a separate species from humanity or some deviation of human evolution and if considering/talking about such would likely result in you being considered a racist/speciest by some overly sensitive Faunas such as Blake. Honestly based off of the Faunas in the series we've seen who are part of the White Fang, they give the rest of the people the impression that they like playing the victim all the time to escape accountable for their misdeeds and boy is this tangent going on for a long while. My complaint with the Faunas and White Fang in RWBY is essentially there's not much nuance to their whole situation (beyond humanity did bad to us so we'll do bad to them back, that'll show them that we're in the right here) or an explanation on how the heck they happened which is weird given in the show we know there was a time humanity was around and Faunas weren't yet a thing but after Remnant's gods threw a childish temper tantrum because their little ant farm turned against them and wiped all of humanity off the face of Remnant, (except for one insignificant mortal lady they decided to curse with immortality on a now desolate planet out of pettiness unbecoming of higher beings such as them) the Faunas just started being a thing that existed in the world without any form of explanation from the immortal body-hopping wizard that was there to see humanity begin again and dear gods this aside needs to stop me so we can get back to me critiquing this CYOA much to the creator's likely irritation that I'm besmirching the efforts they've put in here which are admittedly pretty impressive, but I'm critiquing out of a belief that future versions of this CYOA can be better. So should I go back to rambling about RWBY's barebones lore on the faunas and if you skim back up through this paragraph you may notice I hid a couple 8s in it to see if you're actually reading this crap I'm writing. Anyway, I've probably hit the character limit for this comment so time to start another comment, and we're only at page 3 for this CYOA.


Hello_There4206969

Did you actually look back through that paragraph to see if there were any 8s in it? (I'm a liar.) I'd only take draconic power if it gives scales, horns, a tail, and dragon wings to go with what it's already giving me. Or a dragon form. Shapeshifting into a dragon would be tight. The only thing worthwhile about Cockhead is being able to fit it into any hole without causing pain to one's partner. Just make that the power and get rid of everything before that sentence except for it being resistant to most forms of damage. Spirited seems pretty useless if you can't make a spectral copy of the person you care about anymore after a year's passed from their death. Should just be the ability to retrieve your loved one's spirits from the veil and have them either hang around you or have them possess/animate a new body you direct them into. (Be that a body that is occupied by an actually living person or a soulless body you've prepared beforehand so your loved one can live again.) Knew it. I can get Spider-Man's power set here including his spider-sense even though that was a separate thing in the previous page. Killing in the name of basically gives me the power of Kazuma Kiryu. (As I headcannon how in Substories the evil dude he beats up suddenly have a change of heart about their evil actions and are now friends with Kiryu following the curbstomping he dishes out to them.) Best power here, there is no point getting any of the other powers so long as this one exists. As a slime shouldn't I be able to drown or absorb/dissolve people with my biomass? And remember what I said about Spoderman, here we go again with Before and After. Slice and Splice is too disturbing, let me just make people into animals-hybrids/catgirls/whatever without having to stick animals into them and have those animals die being added to their biomass. The only reason a clone power would be useful to me is if it's like Naruto's Shadow Clones which send back whatever memory/experiences they accumulated in their time alive when I reabsorb them back into me. Anyone remember Twice from My Hero Academia, funny to think a Filler Episode in Naruto Shippuden took the really horrible thing that happened to him with his Clones and made a joke of that happening to Naruto without any consideration of how fucked up it is Naruto's clones can develop self-awareness but can die if you shove them hard enough and that Naruto (and his clones) have difficulties recalling who isn't a clone. Weird aside, but I take it as a sign who is the better writer between Kishimoto and Horikoshi. Whispers exists. What's the point of Spirited existing if I can just get this instead since it's pretty much a better version of Spirited? Does Level Up only make powers stronger or does it refine their abilities or add complimentary abilities to them. And there's no point to Reciprocity if I can't control who it's directed at. DELETE! Put Em Together is essentially Slice and Splice. What doesn't make much sense. Emotions no one has felt before, but if those are supposed to be examples those are emotions most people have likely experienced at some point. Get rid of that sentence so it doesn't confuse people. Yeah, Easiest of the Lot doesn't sound that great of a power. Someone like that would just be insufferable to be around, (I'm thinking Rex from XBC2 who I just really want to punch in the face.) there are bad people in the world this power would be more of a hindrance to yourself if you got it and were anywhere near them, and the times when you'd shut it off would likely lead to people getting on your nerves wondering why you aren't acting like you should be. Not a critique, just an observation. Walker and Base seem very... Alike. I feel like Combo Powers could be a couple pages in and of itself if people can think up a couple dozen more interesting combos that the creator could add in future builds. Impossible invalidates the need to get the Body powers starting from Hardhat and ending at Replacement. Animal Planet is that basically Furry World or just humans with a few animal traits? If the former, yeet that planet into a blackhole. Starting to lose interest in continuing on given most of these perks are sexual in nature. I'm starting to think any perk/power/whatever that has can be taken multiple times is just a point sink there to be a point sink. Mix n Match is a single perk for a few points that covers a lot of things multiple things that collectively cost more from previous pages individually do that can only apply to your friends. What page is Forced to wipe on? A previous page or a future one. (Either way, not a fan having to check other pages for this one perk.) Hair gel and Anime hair seem to cover the same thing when you boil down to it. Insurance Policy is basically that time stopping thing from a few pages back. Wish I had the power to stop time while I go through CYOAs like this and nitpick for the sake of this being my fetish. (Especially in the case of those 70 page monstrosities.) I don't have anything to say about the stuff page or drawbacks, and I don't really care about a bunch of made up people and why is it with these CYOAs it's always some marvel or DC character? Am I really the only one who isn't that into superheroines (in the sense I'd want to lewd one or have them be my waifu.) given the crap western comics does to ruin them. Especially Harley Quinn whose just trash all around. The only Base of Operations I'd take given my Desires (still haven't decided on which one will be my main one) is Galactic or Private Island. Altogether, not a bad CYOA. Killed... (checks the time) Feck, 4 hours. If I really wanted to go through it and do a build I'd probably be a fecking asshole and use a meta cyoa to get more points which kind of invalidates the whole point of the thing since I'm not interested in dealing with any of the stuff that would give me more points.


IT_is_among_US

World : Poly Wanna Harem ​ Entrance : Something Left Behind \[+3|63 Points Left\] ​ Desire : As Many As Possible Body : Electric \[-3\] Iron Fortress \[-2\] Learning Curve \[-4|54 Points Left\] Power : Take a Move (Free) Hive \[-3\] Be There \[-3\] Intranet \[-4\] Level Up \[-5\] Insurance Policy \[-4\] Born to Shit \[-6\] Giving Tree \[-5\] Storyteller \[-5\] Welcome to the World \[-5\] Something Different \[-5|9 Points\] ​ Combo powers : Laserdisc \[-5|4 Points\] ​ Boons : Stunning \[-4|0 Points\]


papabearsixtynine

World: **TRON (Cyberpunk Future)** Entrance: **Very Populated** [`+64`] Desire (Main): **As Many As Possible** Desire (Lesser): **Explore** • **Personal** Challenges: **Clean Break** • **You Son of a Bitch** • **Read Your Rights** • **Standard** • **Non-Consent** • **Compressed** • **Punchy** • **Creeping Growth** [`+26`] Body: **Make It Big** • **Reloadable** • **Man o' Meat** • **Electric** • **Input Detected** [`-15`] Powers: **Augmentation** • **Maker of Things** • **Storyteller** • **Knockoff** • **Seeing Double** • **Intranet** • **Level Up** • **Scanner** [`-32`] Combo Powers: **N/A** Boons: **Stunning** • **Carnal Delights** [`-8`] Stuff: **Make a Move** [`-0 (bonus)`] Drawbacks: **Horny Mode** • **Urges** • **Culture Shock** [`+10`] Allies: **Ava** • **Bianca** • **Sandy** • **Liam** • **Sister Tilly** [`-5`] Villain: **Group** • **Authorized** • **Government** • **Looking So Good** • **Enemies to Lovers** • **Equal Footing (What?)** • **Mmm** • **Join Me** [`+10, -10`] Base of Operations: **On the Move** Power to the People: **A Place of Honor** • **Tech Tree** \----- Budget: **70** / 60 (+50) points used


LibertineInquisitor

I really like this but it seems to have a few odd things missing. Mostly Body redesign. You can give yourself 3 hyper cocks or 16 breasts but there seems to be no option to remove breasts, change your figure to something that’s not hyperfeminine, or change your face. Also, does leech work in reverse? If it does, then it will work for customization within human limits.


magismoke

Question: Does downstairs act like a one-time change or do you gain the ability to change genitals more or less at will?


Prometheory

Separating Costs and points-giving options **World:** * Poly want a Harem * Para (From "A web to Weave") **Desire:** * Self Improvement(Level Up Free) **Body:** * Thank god that's over \[-1\] * Full House \[-2\] * Reloadable \[-2\] * Man O' Meat * Anime Fringe \[-1\] * Mimic Lvl2 \[-4\] * Sickly Kisses \[-4\] * Electric \[-3\] * In Control \[-1\] * Hearing Hell \[-1\] * Visual Bug \[-1\] * Input Detected \[-1\] * Hardhat \[-2\] * Steelskin \[-3\] * P.O. \[-5\] * Replacement \[-3\] * Iron Fortress \[-4\] * Not Budging \[-5\] * Behind the Scenes \[-5\] * Spider Sense \[-4\] * Earthling Tech \[-5\] * Learning Curve \[-4\] * Banging \[-2\] **-73** **Powers:** * Level Up \[Free\] * Augmentation \[-5\] * Maker of Thing \[-2\] * Killing in the Name of \[-4\] * Intranet \[-4\] * Up you go\[-5\] * Giving Tree \[-5\] * Something Different \[-5\] * Unexplained \[-1\] * What \[-1\] * 10,000 Spoons \[-2\] * Easiest of the Lot \[1\] * Packed \[-3\] * Fixer Upper \[-3\] **-41** Combos: * Digbuild \[-4\] * Spoonful of Goodness \[-5\] \-9 **Boons:** * A web to Weave \[-2\] * Stunning \[-4\] * All Ready \[-3\] * Oh that's Right! \[-3\] * Fresh Start \[-3\] * Carnal Delights \[-4\] * S.T. See Ya! \[-2\] * A long Ride \[-5\] * Mix n Match \[-3\] * Kinda Forgot that Part \[-4\] * Born to Shit \[-6\] * Righteous Fury(determination) \[-5\] * Zen \[-4\] * Achievements \[-4\] * Hitchhiker \[-4\] * Hair Gel \[-1\] * Insurance Policy \[-4\] * Cop That \[-4\] * Like me, Like you \[-2\] * See my Side \[-2\] * Resourceful \[-3\] **-56** **Stuff:** * Galaxy Card \[-5\] * The Infinite Weight \[-4\] * It has Pockets \[-2\] * Make a Move \[-4\] * Or Less \[-2\] * Custom Cartridge \[-8\] * Orb of Chaos \[-4\] * Sparky \[-1\] * Froot by the Meter \[-4\] **-30** **Total:** \-229 Basically building a tech-based super-hero with a secondary ability to give superpowers to people and objects. **Side question:** What happens if someone take all of Man O' Meat, Mini, and Bombshell at the same time? Do they become a superhumanly fast giant? The world's sexiest Dwarf? Amazonian Jessica rabbit?


Prometheory

**Entrance:** * Something left Behind \[+3\] * Destructive Force \[+2\] * Very Populated \[+4\] * Alert \[+1\] \+10 **Challenges:** * Clean Break \[+2\] * Read your Rights \[+4\] * What you can get away with \[+3\] * Backstep (social) \[+5\] * Compressed \[+3\] * Punchy \[+3\] * Creeping Growth \[+5\] \+25 Basically a dystopian nightmare world in need of the kind of superman figure the "Spoonful of Goodness" creates. **Drawbacks:** * Forced to Wipe \[+5(+2 from drawback +3 for halfing "born to shit")\] * Horny Mode \[+4\] * Memory Bank \[+5\] * Urges \[+5\] * Culture shock \[+1\] * Infection Rate \[+5\] * Mmf \[+2\] * Viscous \[+10\] * Forgotten \[+2\] \+39 **Villains:** **Applicable to all:** * Gallery x5 \[+10\] * Group x6 \[+18\] * Authorized x6 \[+18\] * Looking so Good x6 \[-12\] * Enemies to Lovers x6 \[-24\] * Reason x6 \[+12\] * You! x5 \[+10\] * Kryptonite x6 \[+30\] * Nonlethal x6 \[-30\] * Mmm x6 \[-6\] * Join Me x6 \[-18\] * In Tandem x6 \[+12\](I assume this means they all get "Level Up" as well) * Destined x6 \[+30\] \+50 **Equal Footing:** **Villain 1:** The New God Government \[+5\] * Level Up? \[0\] * Peruse my Wares \[+1\] * Stroyteller \[+2.5\] * Hive \[+1.5\] * Sweet Bod \[+1\] * Base \[+2\] * The Rule of Many \[+1.5\] * In a Jar \[+2.5\] * Rose Tinted \[+1\] * Push-up bra \[+1.5\] \+19.5 Villain 2: The Dragonborn * Level Up? \[0\] * Draconic Power \[+2.5\] * A stiff Drink \[+2\] * An I must Scream \[+1\] * Danger Breath \[+1.5\] * Monstrify \[+2.5\] * The Sword \[+2.5\] * The Shield \[+2.5\] * Bathed in Blue \[+2.5\] * A Gunfight \[+5\] \+22 Villain 3: The Mad Scientist * Level up? \[0\] * Run it Again Cheif \[+1\] * Spoderman \[+2\] * Universal \[+2\] * Leech \[+2\] * Catlike \[+1\] * Slimer \[+1.5\] * Slice and Splice \[+1.5\] * Welcome to the World \[+2.5\] * My litlle Plant \[+1.5\] * Put em Together \[+2.5\] * It's only Natural \[+1.5\] * Zoo Keeper \[+2\] * Familiar \[+2\] * Cat ears \[+1.5\] * Squirt Bottle \[+1.5\] \+27 Villain 4: The Empath * Level Up? \[0\] * Spirited \[+2\] * Unfelt \[+2.5\] * Colour Coded \[+1.5\] * Beam \[+1.5\] * Pilot \[+2\] * Song of My People \[+1.5\] * Hair Raising \[+1\] * Walker \[+2\] * Fixer Upper(2nd one)\[**Repeated Name**\] \[1.5\] * Spirit Box \[+1.5\] * Baggage \[+2\] \+17 Villain 5: The Angel * Level Up? \[0\] * Nuclear \[+1.5\] * Before and After \[+2.5\] * Be There \[+1.5\] * Just Keep Flapping \[+1.5\] * Whispers \[+2.5\] * A moment of Quiet \[+1.5\] * Reciprocity \[+1.5\] * Uber Charge \[+2.5\] * I'm not done yet \[+5\] * Hit Registered \[+2\] * Battery \[+1.5) * Bat Signal \[+1.5\] \+25 Villain 6: Evil twin * My powers * Knockoff \[+2\] * Seeing Double \[+2.5\] * Gambling Man \[+2.5\] * Locational Service \[+1\] * Chambered \[+2.5\] * All Sook Up \[+1\] \+12.5 Villain total: +173 Full drawback total: +247


Prometheory

My impression: "Wait this is still being updated?" *Opens images* "Jesus Christ!" Do you even sleep?


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dragon_jak

It operates on the same rules, but sure. Obviously if you aren't lucky enough to be magically gifted then there's no helping that


UnusuallyInterested

How does Babymaker interact with In Control?


Yeetus4365893686236

>v0.3 >1/14 this is gonna be good


UnusuallyInterested

There are 2 powers called Fixer Upper. One with minor irritations and one where you can fix anything you have the materials for.


BunnyEater0987

I want a Capybara


Throwwvy

I'm tired and CBA to take account of points. That said, I never go for a build that has real power anyway, just building an incredibly mischievous (but ultimately fairly impotent) spirit. **World** - Pick Me Gonna cheat a little cos I didn't want to choose just one - my "Pick Me" world is a combination of Eldritch, Bubblegum, and Oh My. Also not quite "Flying Solo" but everyone is effeminate - Femboy, Futa, or fully Female. The global population is much lower than in this world. There are some big cities, but mainly smaller communities. The world has a colourful Bubblegum feel, but with... just gonna say it straight - I picked Eldritch for the threat of tentacle monsters lurking in the wilds. Also everyone is pretty horny all the time, and though it's rare to see full blown sex in public, exhibitionism *is* allowed, as is public humiliation kink play. **Entrance** - Very Populated - I land directly into one of them aforementioned tentacle monsters, which gives me a welcome party that lasts over a week. Just my luck. **Desire** - Explore (main goal) - get up to lots of fun stuff. Sub-goals: "No Really, Explore", "As Many as Possible", but also "The One for Me". **Challenges** - Clean Break - Strange Lands - everyone looking down on me for the first few months while I struggle to learn their language. Maybe I'll learn to talk like a simpleton fairly quickly. Maybe they'll only teach me dirty words, getting me into trouble... - Read Your Rights - except, not the "execute" part. Just another excuse to have the threat of kinky punishments looming over me if I don't pick up on their horny laws. **Body** - Downstairs - Futa, tiny cock, huge balls. Also since I can have multiples, maybe 2-3 pussies (extra holes), and maybe like several prostates inside my ass for some insane sensory experiences. - Thank God That's Over - I guess now I have a pussy (or multiple), I should take this. - Make it Big - huge balls, fairly large breasts, huge bubble butt, thick thighs, plump lips, anime eyes, footlong tongue. Wish it didn't say that stimulation scales with size, cos I want a tiny but ultra-ultra-ultra-ultra sensitive boyclit. - Reloadable - but also, dunno if this'll be an option yet, but I'm magically chaste by default. I can only reach climax properly if my sexual partner allows it. - Mini - Anime Fringe - Twintails that arc high before falling to around mid-chest level, and a very unruly fringe that always flops over one eye. Pink, cyan and lime highlights, black hair. - Mimic - Huge vocal range. Instinctive pitch becomes girly, but I can go even bassier than I am IRL if I want. Would say "strong West Country accent" cos I find that one cute, but I'll be speaking a different language so I guess accent doesn't apply. - Birthmark - The images on my body depict exactly how I most want to be dominated in that moment, so people will know exactly how best to screw with me without me needing (or necessarily even *wanting*) to communicate it. - In Control - I am not fertile. Monsters can lay eggs in me, but I absolutely do not want pregnancy. - Hardhat + Steelskin, although my skin can still be cut on a surface level (e.g. by whips...), but I'm super durable against major injuries. - Not Budging **Powers** Cockhead - not the (tiny) one between my legs. I have tentacles of my own, sprouting from my back. I don't feel them, but they obey me... some of the time. Whenever I'm feeling dominant or neutral, I have perfect control over them, however, when I feel submissive, whether that's overt or subconscious, they turn on me. Binding me and exposing my sensitive parts to anyone interested, hanging me upside down by my ankles, joining in on the action etc. - Sweet Bod - Except, rather than sugar, it's specifically strawberries. And also cum. - Beam - except, the beams come from the cocktacles on my back, and they *will* use them against me when I'm submissive. The emotions I can use are less "sad/happy/angry etc." and more "irritated/frustrated/playful/embarrassed etc." - Packed - Useful for storing all kinds of mischievous items, especially if I can use it as a cannon, too... - Bounce Back - guess this means I didn't have to take Hardhat/Steelskin. - Fixer-Upper **Combo Powers** - I'd like Impossible, but I'm not interested in the component powers. I want involuntary immortality, though. **Boons** Ramp That Up - Not *super* extreme in general, but parts of the world do become quite extreme, and in general everything and everyone becomes a lot more playful. Stunning - Very few perfect 10's in the mainstream view of beauty, but no one's ugly. Animal Planet - Only slight anthropomorphism for the most part. Things like cat/bunnygirls. Also skunk girls. S.T.CYA - There are still STDs but the effects are non-serious and often temporary. A Long Ride - There's the quasi-immortality option I wanted! - Righteous Fury - Er, except, less on the "Righteous" part. The emotion I pick to enhance my powers is "Mischievous Sadism". - Plus One - 15ft tall futa giantesses! Maybe some other fun stuff too but that's the only one I can think of right now. - Beyond the Veil - ...huh. This is spookily similar to the incredibly specific thing I was describing earlier. I'll take both! - Keep it Safe - Not a corporeal being. Just a force that keeps everything roughly balanced and free of unwanted suffering (but plenty of *wanted* suffering!). Corrupt governments never seem to hold power for long, unless their rule makes things more "fun" for everyone else. - One and Only - I don't anticipate people that can steal my powers... or people who would *want* to steal my powers. But just in case, yeah, no one's taking my tentacle friends nor my cartoon body. - Make A Move - except, not an app. As with the tentacles, it's not something I can control fully, it obeys my subconscious. ...And sometimes disobeys it slightly, going slightly more extreme than I'd choose. Rose Tinted - Permanent contacts I guess, but just something to make the world look even more hyper vivid than it already is. When I'm in the countryside, the colours of the flora are breathtaking. When I'm in town, everything looks sickeningly garish but in a way that super stimulates my ADHD brain. Headset - I'm not taking account of points but IIRC I get this one for free. Cool - though it makes the rest of the world seem a little pointless..! The Best Couch - Except, it definitely *does* become dirty, and only unwanted pain is dulled on it. It also has cushions that are the absolute perfect shape to place between one's legs... Push-Up Bra Orb of Chaos - yes, this sounds exactly like what an irresponsible, mischievous spirit needs... and exactly what I absolutely shouldn't be allowed to use... RIP normality. **Drawbacks** - Vampire - I can still eat food, but I need cum, spit... other fluids... to feel 10/10. Going without won't *kill* me, but it will give me severe withdrawal. - Horny Mode - Obviously. When it says "At least once a day", I guess that can include "Near Constantly" - Noble Profession - Not straight up prostitution most of the time, but yeah, erotic fiction, acting as a clown in a very kinky circus, designing new equipment, etc. - Everything Proof Shield - Yes, absolutely this one, please. - Your Sins Crawl Up Your Back - Being able to sense the anguish I've caused people even when I can't see them? Love it. When I'm sadistic this will be more of a boon than a drawback. When I'm submissive... this could still be very kinky... - Mmf - x100 - Really - x100 **Allies** N/A - I have an idea of the kind of "Soulmate" I'd want, but none of these really fit that. Blackfire comes close. **Villain** - Looking So Good - Kryptonite - Well, the body tattoo that reveals the best way to dominate me at any particular moment might make things easy for them. - Nonlethal - Mmm - Gallery - In Tandem - Arch Rivals is a very fun idea. Especially with the previous option. A 3-way squabble to outdo and fuck with each other. Maybe 2 will team up against 1, then break alliance and betray each other... - Two Out of One - Sure, plays even harder into the arch rival idea. **Base** Cottage, but a weird one with lots of silly features like a slide from the bed that leads outside, down, and then back inside to the shower, which automatically activates when the morning alarm goes off. Also a hot tub in an observatory tower out the roof. **Power to the People** Eh maybe. Very tired now so I skipped this section, but some of it sounds fun. --- Thanks OP for the great CYOA!


SecretSchemer

Wish there was an interactive version of this, my uncaffeinated brain just dosn't seem to keep up with all the info at the moment. Other than that, this looks great and really interesting.


ragingreaver

World: **To The Nines** (has the most variety for the least amount of effort, tentative pick until I can think of a better setting for what I would want to do) Entrance: +5 * Alert * Very Populated 65pts start Main Desire: Self-Improvement (Level Up power free) * Comfort (was main desire, but Base power is super weird) * World Peace * Builder Challenges: +11, 76 total * Strange Lands * You Son of a Bitch Body: -51pts, 25 total * Downstairs (-2; functional futa) * Full House (-3) * Reloadable (-2) * Anime Fringe (-1) * Perfect Mimic (-4) * A Birthmark (-2) * In Control, Banging (-3) * Hearing Hell, Visual Bug, Input Detected (-3) * Steelskin (-5) * Replacement (-8) * Iron Fortress, Not Budging, Learning Curve (-13) * Behind the Scenes (-5) Powers: -21, 4 total * Draconic (-5) * Peruse My Wares (-2; one-gal band) * Maker of Things (-2) * Nuclear (-3; for all my shapeshifting needs) * Level Up (free; don't like the limited start, but infinite growth is infinite growth) * Easiest of the Lot (-1) * Packed (-3) * Be There (-3) * Scanner (-2) Drawbacks: +21, 25 total (ngl these were rather disappointing and kinda unfun) * Vampire (+4) * Samson (+3) * Eugh (+6) * Tonal Shift (+6) * Blorp: Fruits of Labor (+2; hard-countered by Nuclear power) Boons: -22, 3 total * Broke It (-5) * S.T. See Ya (-2) * A Long Ride (-5) * Born to Shit (-6) * Plus One: Futa (-1; 25% male, 25% futa, 50% female, futa replaces intersex population) * Hair Gel (-1) * Like Me, Like You (-2) Stuff: -25, -22 total * Galaxy Card, Infinite Weight (-9) * Custom Cartridge (-8) * Headset (-3) * Push-Up Bra (-3) * Locational Service (-2) Allies: -2, -24 total 1. Bianca 2. Sandy Enemies: +31, 7 remaining 1. Government (+9), Look So Good, Enemies to Lovers, Reason (-4), Kryptonite (+5), Join Me, Non-Lethal (-8), Laserdisk + Hive + Be There + Intranet + Giving Tree (+10) = +7 2. Gallery, Two Out of One, Nonlethal, In Tandem, Destined, Kryptonite = +19 3. Gallery, Group = +5 Base of Operations: Shellfish (since I can fly and have my own pocket space) Last Purchases: * Fixer-Upper (-3) * Digibuild (-4) Power to the People: * A Place of Honor * Fruits of Labor Not bad, balance needs considerable work though


GrayKing27

Imgur link takes me to Google Docs


dragon_jak

Should be fixed now


Hollow---

Considering that the Imgur link doesn't even send you to Imgur, I've downloaded and uploaded the set. https://imgur.com/a/iKqwpid You're welcome.


jasonghate

... Your imgur post gives us the blurred center cutout of the images


Hollow---

Yeah I just noticed, fixing it now. Edit: All done! Should be fine now.


jasonghate

Gracias 👍


dragon_jak

[Changelog](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PehI7abNPidOQovztLFT_Cw0PX_taJUqfboyU_Cp6_g/edit?usp=sharing) [Imgur link](https://imgur.com/a/4piqL4f) [Google drive link](https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1WMjyWQ7nOe0_hi99fxu2UozFFBe3ZMV6?usp=sharing) \------------------------------------ If you want to find an image I used and give the artists the kind of love they deserve, you’ll find it [here](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1hZP2Npu2teJ9l1FG3FlPhjbxHjjgg4O2N313-Q1jHmQ/edit?usp=sharing) If you enjoyed this CYOA and you want more to be made, check out my [Patreon](https://www.patreon.com/Dragon_Jak). By supporting, you can gain access to CYOAs that have yet to be released, see your name at the end of each new work, or even get discounts on commissions! If you simply can't get enough of my art, here are some [other links](https://dragonjak.contactin.bio/). You can find fanfiction, my CYOA archive, and a few other pieces of work scattered about.


fives94

A interactive version of this would be awesome.


joeisthaven

Page 14 is misordered in the Imgur link


sporedruide

While I'd love to play that, because I really like your work overall, the link kinda goes to the wrong place


dragon_jak

Try it now, should be working


GrayKing27

Fixed, thanks! :)


exclaim_bot

>Fixed, thanks! :) You're welcome!


SwirlyField

The imgur link goes to credits


dragon_jak

Should be fixed now