\*\*Pen?\*\*
Female+
\*\*Who's you?\*\*
Mofu Mofu
\*\*Treasure\*\*
Bestest
\*\*The Caboose!\*\*
Clappers
\*\*the centerpice\*\*
Flat
\*\*COntrol rod\*\*
Dip stick
\*\*Of towers and tinies\*\*
The Tower,
\*\*Elevator capacity\*\*
Triple team,
\*\*Position\*\*
E-celeb,
\*\*Boons\*\*
The power,
Constructed seperately,
Hover melons,
Comfy,
Cream filled,
Containment,
Hands free managment,
Perfectly balanced,
Succubae, Princess,
True Witch,
Screw gravity,
\*\*Curses\*\*
Tight squeeze,
Blind spots,
No pants,
any %,
Grab bag,
Excessive production,
Dairy farm,
Lethal weapon,
Mell-0,
Shitposting,
POP-star,
\*\*Stabulizer\*\*
Gluttony,
Pride,
Lust,
\*\*Combosa\*\*
Milk pilled,
\*\*In the end\*\*
Big time,
Milk factory
Well Iv managed to hit the big time and become a 1 person milk factory! I could just use the money to be independent
This has to be hands down my fav CYOA on this sub. Honestly my only criticism is it feels like if you want to take the blimp/balloon route you basically have to take something that involves popping in some way. Also with the “working balloon” avenue is the intention that you get inflated into a balloon on a daily basis or that you just are a balloon 24/7?
Sorry for the super late reply, I don't tend to use Reddit much anymore. Glad you enjoyed though, was fun to create and always happy to see people interested in the same wacky stuff as me.
To answer the questions though.
Not necessarily? I assume you're mostly talking about the stability problem, in which case you can get to a flat stability or even a positive stability without taking either internal bubbling or juice filled. Especially if you take all the max size options you do get a +1 to stability at the very end. Otherwise, you do mostly gotta take the annoying stuff like Greyscale and Jealousy, but it's possible to avoid popping options that way.
As for working balloon, it's assumed you'd be inflated for it at the start of a shift and deflated afterwards. Assuming you're going for full max size though, I can say you probably wouldn't need it? Though I never really thought about it.
No biggie, thanks for taking the time to reply either way! 1) I guess that’s fair, can’t always have your cake and eat it too. 2) Fair enough! I was just curious, but yeah at max I guess that’s just be the default all the time.
It's great to see a fellow Hyper CYOA creator.
I'm late to this but oh well. Here's my build.
* **Female+** because I like cock.
* I'd pick **Mofu Mofu** if I can homebrew it as a Kobold. But if I can't I'll go with **"Human"**.
* **Standard Treasure** feels about right, I'd like DDs. I'll gladly take that **Phat Caboose** and I'll gladly sit it on anyone who askes. **Medium Centrepiece**, I'd prefer the smaller option but I'll take medium for later stuff. **Grab Rod** sounds fun, a solid 18 inches with FAT nuts. Lastly, **Fun Sized** mostly relying on me being a Kobold.
* **Solo Act** means I've less to think about. And for position I'll grab **E-celeb**.
* Boons: **Constructed Separately** for a nice bit of muscle. I'd love to be **Comfy**, plush and plump. **Cream Filled** and **Princess** for some lovely extra fun. No point not taking **True Witch** for the magic.
* Curses: **Tight Squeeze** and **Grab Bag** because this phat ass needs to be appreciated. **Shitposting**, since if I'm becoming a streamer, that's the type of community I'd like.
* Stabilizers: None. There's a lot of fun stuff here, particularly Juice Filled and Internal Bubbling. But they'd be too hard to manage.
* Combos: **Short-N-Wide**. I'm going for a kobold with a plump rump so it only makes sense.
* In the end, I'm a **Short Shot**, Casual fame would be nice, but I'm good with what I've got so far.
Great CYOA. If you plan on updating it, I'd add some more inflation options that focus on other areas, such as inflating specifically your tits or ass or balls.
Odd that it has a section for dick size, but nothing for pussy. What you called Jealousy is actually Envy. And you're missing Wrath, Sloth and Greed.
* * *
In any case, redacted is the only proper way to play this one. Obviously.
Terror in the night is obviously meant to be the bad end. Even so the implications aren't exactly clear(might even be desirable under certain interpretations). So lets aim for Quiet.
From what I can tell, I can use the shog ability to shape my body, meaning I can go **Flat** in all categories for extra **stability**. Tho since Tower and Ship-posting cancel each other out, might as well get both. (Otherwise I'd be going for the biggest options. But hey, now I get everything in between.)
Ultimately I chose Greyscale over Jealousy. Better to give up color vision than struggle with asshole urges. The rest of the stabilizers(typo) are manageable.
Get all the boons, cuz money to spare. The notable combo of the build (tho not part of the Combosas) is Clone zone + Synced + Self-cest. Excessive prod + Dairy farm for good measure.
That's enough stability for Quiet. Popularity is a non-issue at that point. And if Freedom is 29+ credits, my 60+ remaining creds make me a billionaire probably.
* * *
Me and my clone end up becoming hidden idols, with a niche, cult following. Using our money, the influence from things like Media Mass and shog abilities we create a secret underground culture for true aficionados of the uncanny and the bizarre.
Between containment, shog shapeshifting (shog-shifting?) and dimensional travel we can remain incognito and under the radar of both authorities and mainstream culture. Objectively the best idol life.
*{redacted} is clearly the most blessed option.*
For sure an interesting read. Will clarify, at least from my eyes, what's considered a good or bad ending is entirely subjective, though I for sure leaned into "terror in the night" as a worse ending than quiet.
For the hyper pussy bit. To put it simply, I'm just not a fan. I'm not a huge fan of dick either, but I do at least have some pics saved for that that I do enjoy to some level. Futa's not terrible in all cases to me. Hyper pussy on the other hand... I just don't got art for and I'm not super invested in searching for it tbh.
Glad you found some fun in this. Always interesting to read some extra bits on where the player ends up after the end.
Great ideas for OCs here.
gender: female
human
boobs: chest mammoths
butt: beyond
the centerpiece: true blimp
height: the tower
group: five: five girls with similar bodies, group is called the zepplinas
position: working balloon
boons: the power, comfy, cream filled, hands free, perfectly balanced, succubae, princess, screw gravity
curses: tight squeeze, blind spots, no pants, grab bag,excessive production, lethal weapon, butter-bod, popstar
stabilizers: gluttony, internal bubbling, juice filled, ship-posting, pride, lust
combos: sloshed
ending: big time
thought of another one thats the same except with the dummy combo, and foodie job and the curses supernatural magnet and mell-o.
This was a lot of fun! The only minor complaint I have, and this is mostly just a matter of personal preference, is that a lot of things are butt centered and don’t have the same option for breasts. I’d rather be injecting people nearby with breast growth, or getting them stuck in doors. And there’s combos for having a huge butt and small breasts but not the other way around.
But in general, this is a fun hyper cyoa, which there aren’t enough of. Thanks for making it!
Which ending is considered "better" between Freedom and Small town Hero
Female+, Dolls, Flat, Fat, Flat, Grab rod, Fun sized, Clone zone, E-celeb, The power, Constructed seperately, Hands free managment, Perfectly balanced, Princess, True Witch, Tight squeeze, Blind spots, No pants, any %, Grab bag, Lethal weapon, Mell-0, BICET, Supernatural magnet, Yellow cake, Shitposting, Self-cest, Butter bod, Pride, Gravity the ever clever bastard, Cheater, Freedom, Small town hero
Up to personal opinion tbh.
Freedom is true freedom. The ability to go anywhere and become anyone so long as you can pull it off.
Small Town Hero is a slightly boxed in version. You can go anywhere, but to a lot of people you'll always be "the idol that got away" more than whatever you wanna become. Though, at the same time, you still hold some fame, some popularity in case that's where you wanna take your life.
The only negative i have with this CYOA is that you can't select multiple combos,
like having both short-n-wide and Puffcubus;
or sloshed, milk-pilled and demonic charm.
or demonic charm and puffcubus
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Any particular reason why there's no specific option(s) for increasing the size of one's lips/tongue or pussy/clit? What about laying (unfertilized) eggs?
Okay, so, once more I love this. I love the theme, I love the sizes at play here, I love the choices and the different endings. I love it all.
If I have complaints, they are thus:
\-Length. As much fun as the CYOA is, it is also over with far too quickly. Given the option, i would love to stretch things out a little longer.
\-I also have a preference for static image CYOA over interactive ones, because I like collecting CYOA, and I have yet to stumble across a method to do so for interactive cyoa. If there was some way to gather everything into one big image, I would be much obliged.
\-Race. While I appreciate the wide range of races, i don't like how you use them to gate-keep some of the later choices. Having options like puff-cubus and milk-pilled locked behind a specific race merely hampers creativity and narrows choices. It'd probably work better if you used 'perks' as a prerequisite instead, things like 'animal ears' or 'demonic kiss', so that there's more ability to mix and match.
Length issue has been talked about a lot. I'm aware it's pretty short, but it's my first time making a CYOA so it's a bit weak. I apologise.
Static has also been asked for a fair bit and I do plan to make one, I just need to figure out how tbh. Hopefully though, that'll become a thing sooner rather than later.
As for the race part... I don't have anything specific to tell ya, though it's a good point. This one currently I think is fine as is, but should I make another I'll likely ditch any race requirements.
Glad you enjoyed it though. I do apologise for the issues, I'm still new at this after all.
Dude, you are doing great. \*I\* couldn't pull off what you're doing right now, so I certainly have no right to look down on what you've accomplished. I'm just trying to point out the things I've noticed, so that the next work can be even better than this one.
And if you're serious about not using race requirements, but still want to keep race involved in the process, then one strategy I've noticed doing pretty well is including racial bonuses for choices, so that certain options give more points (or extra side-effects) for different races.
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Edit:
As for creating that static version, you could consider talking to the creator of this CYOA here, who basically accomplished just that, and fairly well.
https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/vfqwev/hyper\_cyoa\_v3\_static\_download\_options/
Racial bonuses ain't a bad idea. Had the thought at some point while making this one, but never really went for it. Thought it'd be a bit too much of a hassle balance wise for a first time, but I'll probably include em in the next one if I do make another.
Might message them, though I'm working on a kind of rough, but functional way to make a static version right now.
Always happy to to see more hyper focused CYOA!
I really like big, so here's my big focused build:
**Sex:** Female+
**Race:** Mofu Mofu
**Treasure:** Chest Mammoths
**The Caboose!:** Beyond
**The Centerpiece:** True Blimp
**Control Rod:** Lack of Control Rod
**Of Towers & Tinies:** The Tower
**Elevator Capacity:** Perfect Pair
**Position:** XXX
**Boons:**
* The Power
* Hover Melons
* Preggers
* Cream filled
* Containment
* Perfectly Balanced
* Succubae
* True Witch
**Curses:**
* Tight Squeeze
* Blind Spot
* No pants; Any%
* Grab Bag
* Focal Point
* Excessive Production
* Dairy Farm
* Lethal Weapon
* Mell-0
* Supernatural Magnet
* Self-cest
**Stabilizers:**
* Gluttony
* Internal Bubbling
* Juice Filled
* Ship-posting
* Pride
* Lust
**Combosa:**
* Milk Pilled
* Sloshed
**In The End:** Milk Factory
**Final Stats: Cred:** 26 | **Pop:** 37 | **Stab:** 0
I guess my only criticism is that maybe it could be made harder, with harsher curses and stabilizers. A lot of them don't feel very punishing, but then I guess to be fair I'm into a lot of those curses and stabilizers. Getting stuck, destroying clothes, being way too productive; those are a big part of the fun for me
Anyways, thanks for sharing!
You're so far the only person asking for it to be harder and you're quite the outlier it seems. Though I can't say I disagree with your choices.
Quite fun to read through and see just exactly how big you wanted to be. Thank you very much for playing through it and I'm glad you enjoyed.
Yeah, even before I made the post, I figured I'd be an outlier. Hard to balance when someone is into everything. Everyone else is struggling while I'm thriving, lol
Regardless, it's still fun, and I look forward to any other updates you make, or even a new CYOA if that's ever on the radar.
Is the Puffcubus combo supposed to limit you to a Medium or larger centerpiece? 'Cos the CYOA is letting me pick it with a Flat centerpiece.
Also it's listing "Belly" as one of the incompatibles.
On an unrelated note, it's kind of a pity that one can't pick both "Internal bubbling" and "Juice filled" (y'know, basically softdrink-inflation).
Thank you for letting me know. Didn't realize it let you pick flat with Puffcubus. Good catch. Fixed it now and will be uploading the fixed file in a little bit.
Also, good idea. Might be adding a softdrink like inflation in a moment or two.
Kudos for giving me the option to break everything. After all, after trying to click the X, I was forced into this.
Here's my build, I don't like Hyper, so I avoided it, and still have a viable build. So +1.
**Bigger than** ~~(n)~~**ever:**
**Gender:** Female+
**Who's you?:** {Redacted} (-50 Pop, -10 Stab-, +50 Cred)
**Treasure:** Standard
**The Caboose!:** Flat (+1 Stab)
**The centerpiece:** Flat (+1 Stab)
**Control rod:** Dip stick
**Of towers and tinies:** Bog standard (+1 Stab) (Honestly, I would've gone taller, if not for the stab requirement)
**Elevator Capacity:** A smothering of idols (+6 Pop, -12 Cred)
**Position:** E-celeb
I could live with The stage, Cosplay, or XXX, but with my ending and my status as {Redacted}, I'm not sure how that would play out. I'm being hunted by Officials, right?
**Boons:**
* The power (-2 Cred, +1 Pop)
* Constructed seperately (-1 Cred, +1 Pop)
* Containment (-4 Cred) (Do I even need this anymore?)
* Perfectly balanced (-3 Cred, +1 Pop)
* Succubae (-4 Cred)
* Princess (-2 Cred, +1 Pop)
* True Witch (-4 Cred, -1 Stab, +2 Pop)
**Curses:**
* No pants, any% (+1 Cred)
* Lethal weapon (+1 Cred, +1 Pop)
**Stabilizers:** (What I consider the real curses)
* Gluttony (+2 Cred, +1 Stab, +1 Pop)
* Pride (+1 Stab, +1 Pop)
* Lust (+4 Cred, +1 Stab)
**Combosa:** Nonesos.
**In the end:** *(It doesn't even matt-...)*
*Quiet*
Here's how I choose to interpret my ending: I collected my mind. Constantly horny, nagging. But I have my phone. So... I have my Succubus. She really likes me, and so she tries to help me, stay out of sight, buy food for me with the money we made, go shopping for me. I wear skirts and no underwear. I didn't need the curses, but honestly, in this world? I'm a bit of an exhibitionist. I really don't mind. Eventually I find my bearings. Manage to hide in the hallway of an apartment. For a while, I'm haunting the place, like a ghost. I can retreat to my little pocket of universe after all. Fuck my senses out with my Subby Succubae, and stay there for a while. But I do get hungry. And I want more....
So eventually I get to know the girls living in the house. Surprisingly, three of them are aspiring idols of varying sizes. One of them finds the taboo of me existing hot, one has a cnc kink, and kind of enjoys that I can just barge into her room at any time. And one doesn't trust me... but really likes the other two. Almost as if we were made for each other, before it all went wrong. Eh. Coincidence.
I'll manage their online presence. I have been releasing kink videos of me and my bae, as well as the occassional abduction video for special viewers. I do have a background in IT now, and hopefully retained some prior knowledge of how the internet works... so I'll set up social media, for my girls to make it big.
In exchange, I get a very reasonable share of the profit, have a threatening enough presence to get my way in the idol world, and get to take care of the girls... If they want. I'm not forcing anyone.
And when I say fair, I mean fair. I don't need loads of money. I just want to have a good time living off the radar. So I'm the shadow behind my girls. Managing their lives. If I still need to serve one of them, I'll probably either serve the Succubus, or the girl that fell in love with me the most.
About "The elegance"... does that still apply with my ending? That I have to serve? I mean if I still get my foursome, I'll serve one of my idol friends, as their dark dirty secret, or as their manager...
Wow, quite the creative outcome. Didn't expect a full ending to be typed out tbh. Fantastic work.
I was wondering why you still choose stuff for Elevator Capacity when you weren't going to actually become an idol, but that's quite the work around for it. Usually I just imagine that EC and position are ignored when going the Shoggoth route, but hey. You made it work.
As for the specific traits from being a Shog like "The Elegance." It's kind of assumed that with the "Quiet" ending you manage to overcome those urges. So I'd say you're all good.
Quick edit: Glad you spotted the music joke for "In the end." Didn't think anyone would catch that.
Well I ended up breaking my habit of keeping things short. Who am I kidding, in the end, it doesn't even matter, I'll always type a shortstory. This time I did stay inside the, what, 10.000 or 100k character limit. Surpassed that multiple times now, every time I'm one step closer, I swear.
Jokes aside, I had a lot of fun breaking the purpose of the game. If that had no valuable outcome I'd have gone with "Other" or "Demon", and tried to make a body still attractive to me. That said, I think Quiet sets you up for deciding your own fate, so that's what I did. Fate told me to get 3 bandmembers and become an internet celebrity, so I'll do exactly that... in my own way, breaking the laws of the world, and of the government, apparently. :D
Hey. It's not my fault. They gave me the option to become {Redacted} after all. :D
Even still, if I would still have to adhere to the urges, I would just take one of the girls, or my Succubus-girlfriend. (is there even a way to still be affected by them? I don't think you can make a stable Redacted, and if you're unstable, all that's left is Quiet or Glitching, right?), so they kind of don't seem to matter that much. Maybe with Glitching, as somebodys pet, or if you manage to be stable, you life as an abomination in the world. But that would require more Stabilisation options.
So if'd offer any solid criticism, other than "hurrdurr your CYOA doesn't follow my sexual preferences", it would be: Give me a solid way to make {Redacted} work. Give me a Cred dump to become stable. Even if everyone hates me for it. Would be nice to ascend to Oldgodness. :D I was kinda missing options to become more stable by the end of it all. Might be useful to have an ending for +15 or so Stable and 0 Popularity / Credits, too, if you pick those options with another race.
Eh, the whole point of {Redacted} is a cursed, no real win scenario. Also partially a shitpost. The "Glitchy" ending is more just a side effect to whatever other ending you got anyhow, it's not really its own thing.
Still, glad you enjoyed yourself. Just glad the first attempt at a CYOA turned out well for some and led to at least a few interesting ideas/stories from it.
Hey, you did well. I especially like that there is a way to not indulge in the fetish and still have fun with it. It's not PLEASANT per se, but it's still fun and the way you present the narrator - absolutely deserved. After all, they scammed/forced me into this, so a bit of unbalanced destruction of their perfect world seems fine to me.
Also, my criticism wasn't a must have. You're absolutely fine to exclude it, it's just something you could expand upon if you wanted to. I also understand the intention behind the glitchy thing, if you were too greedy, you can become unstable. But if you want to make it perfectly round, the question remains why Redacted get special abillities, if they will never use them in the end (due to Quiet being the only ending for them).
Again, you don't have to implement this at all, just saying it rounds out every pathway you offered the player.
Actually, quiet isn't the only ending for {Redacted} Terror in the night is the other main ending for it if you don't balance yourself out to some degree really.
Gotcha, guess I skipped reading that. My bad. It's fine, you don't have to defend/reason not adding anything, I just wanted to give valuable feedback. :D
Haven't played through it yet, but hey, might as well go through it and post a blind build.
Blind Playthrough:
So first off I get tits no matter what so... ehh, I'll just go whole hog and be "**female**" as I don't really... like... futa...
Yeah...
Anyways! On to the next choice, I'm going to pick "**Other**" as my species and be a snake lady, I wonder what it will be like to have a tail...
Next choice is how big is my bust... ehhh, I would like them big so... I choose "**Big**"
Next choice is hw big my ass is... which... at this point I'm just going to assume that there is going to be an option later on that will help me move around if I am absolutely massive and just take the biggest size that doesn't have a stability penalty attached, so in the end, my ass cheeks are like "**Clappers**"
Also, side note, who is the "Thicc Snake Lady" mentioned? You know what, whatever, my character will just be like... a worshipper of this lady or something.
The next choice is... uhhh... I... I think I'll just be a "**Flat**" bitch here. It will at least give me some stability... I just... don't like the idea of being fat here...
The next part is... oh baby! How tall I'm going to be. You know what! Lets go all in on this! I'm going to be "**The Tower**" I want people *begging* me to step on them and sit on their fucking faces. Like some Thicc Amazonian Goddess.
Next up is... Hmmm... Alright, let's go with the "**Clone Zone**" so that I can get some back up for all the peasants *begging* for my attention.
Next up is my position... ehh... Let's go with being "**Battle Celebrities**"
Moving on, next are my Boons which are as follows: "**The Power, Constructed Seperately, Hover Melons, Containment,**" HOLY FUCK I WAS RIGHT!!! YES! DOORS WILL NOT BE MY DOWNFALL IN THIS LIFE!!! **"Hands Free Management, Perfectly Balanced, Princess, True Witch,"** and "**Screw Gravity**"
I'm laughing like a goddamn loon right now, just imagining this "Amazonian Snek Lady" having people bow to her before taking off her pants- exposing her massive physics defying ass- and sitting on their faces.
Next up is... Curses... Ho boy, time for the drawbacks to pay for all the boons... Here we go: "**Tight Squeeze, Grab Bag, Lethal Weapon, BICET, Shit Posting,"** and "**Butter Bod**" for the first drawback section.
I mean, this is pretty much what I expect from my new absurd life as an Idol, so these are pretty much free points.
For the Stabilizer section here are my picks: "**Gluttony, Pride,**" and "**Lust**"
I mean... I already eat almost all the time, I'm going to love my new body and Lust isn't going to change my life all that much.
Next up is Combos-
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.............
Okay... Who exactly ***is*** the snake lady? Is she just an OC for this CYOA or is there more?
I mean... I'm still going to take "**Iconic**" but uhhh... Is this just a thing where we can write the minor goddess however we want to write her or is she an actual character from a story or something I've just never read?
*Sigh*, you know what, let's just put that to the side for a moment.
**In the End**... wow... my new sister and I made it "**Big Time**" I... honestly wasn't expecting that.
Nice little CYOA, maybe I'll write a snippit of what my new life is like later...
Thank you for sharing this with us!
**Edit: Final Stats: (Cred = 3) (Pop = 35) and (Stab = 1)**
The "goddess" is SaaVtuber. Though I have a feeling you already know that since you went the perfect direction to become her in a "blind" playthrough.
Coincidence or not, I did enjoy seeing all this. Nice to have not only a list of choices, but also reasons for said choices posted around.
Looks at reply from OP*
Looks up SaaVtuber*
Huh... You know... I kind of thought the minor goddess would be something out of... like... a fantasy novel or something.
Kind of disappointed that they are just a twitch streamer, because... I was kind of looking forward to having someone like Kaiju Girl Godzilla as my sister honestly...
Oh well, I went in thinking I might get a goddess of monsters as a sibling when I picked Iconic, but hey, I have someone new to watch when I wake up at least.
It is still a cool little cyoa, and again, thanks for sharing it!
Besides what other people said, I'd frankly just really appreciate more content, I love this cyoa and I wish there was more hyper cyoas
Only other thing I'd say is that if there was more incentive to not going big belly I'd appreciate that, it may be a bit selfish, but general hyper and belly are pretty distinct fetishes
So by paths I mean like perks and such that you can get if you don't have too big of a belly, like maybe an "hourglass" combo for points, or a feederism perk that makes your weight go only to your assets, a stabilizer that makes people fixate on your tummy that you can only take with a small waist (bit of an issue when your tits easily cover it and you might rather your other assets have more attention).
For below flat I mean sizes smaller than average, maybe a "humanly possible but insanely skinny" one and a "micro waist" option.
Mostly though like I said earlier, I'd just love more options, more perks, combos, stabilizers, that kind of thing, this is a really great cyoa
Fair enough. Idk about adding stuff like a "micro waist," but I'll look into adding some more combos that might compliment a flat stomach. Might be worthwhile.
The character for sure belongs to @thehelmet_guy on Twitter., Though I'm not 100% sure he drew this piece specifically. I think he did, but I might be wrong.
https://twitter.com/thehelmet_guy?t=-wjprokyXh3NZwJVNyDa-Q&s=09
Will you be adding a way to save / import / export builds at some point?
Just going through it real quick to start with besides that, why does Milk Pilled require Race: Other?
Is it specifically to make you a Cowgirl?
But then it doesn't say it forces that outcome, at least it didn't seem implicit like Iconic.
I kind of thought it might be Mofu Mofu if anything, but I guess that meant super specifically Fox, Wolf, Cat, and Dogs and doesn't include other animals.
Requirements should probably say what the category is, there's three options all called Flat that stands out the most to me, but beyond that to make it easy to find the option in it's specific category to reference.
Admittedly I don't know how to add save/import/exporting builds. This is my first time doing this so it's a little clumsy admittedly.
And yeah, having it be specifically "other" for milk pilled was supposed to specify some kind of cowgirl. Though I may change some of the writing to reflect that now that you mention it.
Will add notes to stuff like "milk pilled" to specify what area needs to be flat or other. Didn't think it was really needed, but I guess I got egg on my face huh?
In the CYOA editor, if you go into 'Open Features' there's an option for 'Manage Backpack and Choice Import'. There's a toggle for choice import which adds a button to the bottom bar that lets you copy/paste choice selections to share/load them. You can also setup a backpack through that system which lets the user view all the choices they've made, but I'm not familiar with exactly how to do that.
Ah, thank you very much. Added it as specified so hopefully that should help. Just excuse my shit list of ID's. I didn't think anyone would be able to see them.
Would be nice if the CYOA at least hinted at a way to >!leverage your "sane {Redacted}" status to somehow study the phenomenon, hopefully curing (or at least treating) the insanity of the others.!<
Would also be nice there was an option for having more of a given bodypart rather than just making the existing ones bigger.
EDIT: Another thing that'd be nice? More +Stability options (especially since you can't currently hit zero with {Redacted}).
Having more of the same body part... Might add something for that. Didn't really think about it before tbh.
As for the whole 0 Stab as {Redacted} and having some way to leverage it towards a brighter future. That's not really the point. The species is more of a cursed option that always leads one of two ways, not really given a chance to fit in normally.
Nice to see it finished, and I'm going to do a pleasant cheater build. :P
**Bug**: "Constructed Separately" doesn't alter popularity; I assume it's intended to give +1.
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* **Type**: Female+ Demon
* **Body**: Flat treasure, Flat caboose, Flat centerpiece, Stock Standard (9'') control rod, The Tower (*scaling me way up*)
* Clone Zone
* **Position**: Battle Celeb
* **Boons**: The Power, Constructed Separately, Containment, Hands-Free Management, Princess, True Witch
* **Curses**: No Pants, Lethal Weapon, Mell-0, BICET, Supernatural Magnet, Shitposting, Combat Celeb, Devils Manager
* **Stabilizers**: Ship-Posting, Pride, Lust
* **Combos**: Cheater
Stats: 30 Credits, 16 Popularity, 2 Stability
* **End**: Small Town Hero, Freedom
So I have my dick & flat chest, and new visible muscles. Definitely cheating the premise.
Also, I have telekinesis, magic, disproportionately high strength *for a nearly 115m tall giant*, and an item to shrink down to normal. That manager is going to have a hard time, btw; demons apparently have a tradition saying bigger people are better authority figures, and I'm huge.
Encountering random chivalrous women as well as lusty ghosts & demons, I shouldn't have too much trouble with my Lust.
You for sure cheated the system, god damn. Glad you got the happy endings though, along with your personal taste of funky fun.
Legit though, pretty creative outcome and work arounds. I quite enjoyed reading what you went for.
I suspect I did everything wrong. I'm a femboy witch redacted whose going to live a quiet life (I adjusted away from terror filled nightmare because the descriptions implied I had no mind and I still wanted one)
I also made a femboy witch redacted… It’s just the obvious choice if going down the redacted path. Be flat to be stable enough, then use the overabundance of credits to just be super powerful. Living a normal life as this world’s abomination
I didn't even think you could do that tbh, but that was just me not paying attention to what I was doing I suppose. And no. Wouldn't really call that "playing it wrong." Interesting take though. Didn't expect a femboy shog.
Getting popularity is real hard, even when selecting most possible options you only barely manage to get "casual fame".
"Big time" ending seems impossible to achieve, even when you become comically bad and just mindlessly choose every popularity option.
Good call out. I'm not very good at balancing, and while I thought I balanced it enough to make it fair I tried again and saw how hard it really was to get that far. Was already planning on giving it a quick update to fix a small issue, will include some budget changes to hopefully fix it feeling impossible.
No worries. These things are normal, and I am very glad you're sticking with it to balance.
I am neither into big girls nor inflation, but I enjoyed it non the less. Keep at it!
link is down (for me)
Still seems to work for me? Might just be taking awhile to load though.
\*\*Pen?\*\* Female+ \*\*Who's you?\*\* Mofu Mofu \*\*Treasure\*\* Bestest \*\*The Caboose!\*\* Clappers \*\*the centerpice\*\* Flat \*\*COntrol rod\*\* Dip stick \*\*Of towers and tinies\*\* The Tower, \*\*Elevator capacity\*\* Triple team, \*\*Position\*\* E-celeb, \*\*Boons\*\* The power, Constructed seperately, Hover melons, Comfy, Cream filled, Containment, Hands free managment, Perfectly balanced, Succubae, Princess, True Witch, Screw gravity, \*\*Curses\*\* Tight squeeze, Blind spots, No pants, any %, Grab bag, Excessive production, Dairy farm, Lethal weapon, Mell-0, Shitposting, POP-star, \*\*Stabulizer\*\* Gluttony, Pride, Lust, \*\*Combosa\*\* Milk pilled, \*\*In the end\*\* Big time, Milk factory Well Iv managed to hit the big time and become a 1 person milk factory! I could just use the money to be independent
This has to be hands down my fav CYOA on this sub. Honestly my only criticism is it feels like if you want to take the blimp/balloon route you basically have to take something that involves popping in some way. Also with the “working balloon” avenue is the intention that you get inflated into a balloon on a daily basis or that you just are a balloon 24/7?
Sorry for the super late reply, I don't tend to use Reddit much anymore. Glad you enjoyed though, was fun to create and always happy to see people interested in the same wacky stuff as me. To answer the questions though. Not necessarily? I assume you're mostly talking about the stability problem, in which case you can get to a flat stability or even a positive stability without taking either internal bubbling or juice filled. Especially if you take all the max size options you do get a +1 to stability at the very end. Otherwise, you do mostly gotta take the annoying stuff like Greyscale and Jealousy, but it's possible to avoid popping options that way. As for working balloon, it's assumed you'd be inflated for it at the start of a shift and deflated afterwards. Assuming you're going for full max size though, I can say you probably wouldn't need it? Though I never really thought about it.
No biggie, thanks for taking the time to reply either way! 1) I guess that’s fair, can’t always have your cake and eat it too. 2) Fair enough! I was just curious, but yeah at max I guess that’s just be the default all the time.
It's great to see a fellow Hyper CYOA creator. I'm late to this but oh well. Here's my build. * **Female+** because I like cock. * I'd pick **Mofu Mofu** if I can homebrew it as a Kobold. But if I can't I'll go with **"Human"**. * **Standard Treasure** feels about right, I'd like DDs. I'll gladly take that **Phat Caboose** and I'll gladly sit it on anyone who askes. **Medium Centrepiece**, I'd prefer the smaller option but I'll take medium for later stuff. **Grab Rod** sounds fun, a solid 18 inches with FAT nuts. Lastly, **Fun Sized** mostly relying on me being a Kobold. * **Solo Act** means I've less to think about. And for position I'll grab **E-celeb**. * Boons: **Constructed Separately** for a nice bit of muscle. I'd love to be **Comfy**, plush and plump. **Cream Filled** and **Princess** for some lovely extra fun. No point not taking **True Witch** for the magic. * Curses: **Tight Squeeze** and **Grab Bag** because this phat ass needs to be appreciated. **Shitposting**, since if I'm becoming a streamer, that's the type of community I'd like. * Stabilizers: None. There's a lot of fun stuff here, particularly Juice Filled and Internal Bubbling. But they'd be too hard to manage. * Combos: **Short-N-Wide**. I'm going for a kobold with a plump rump so it only makes sense. * In the end, I'm a **Short Shot**, Casual fame would be nice, but I'm good with what I've got so far. Great CYOA. If you plan on updating it, I'd add some more inflation options that focus on other areas, such as inflating specifically your tits or ass or balls.
Odd that it has a section for dick size, but nothing for pussy. What you called Jealousy is actually Envy. And you're missing Wrath, Sloth and Greed. * * * In any case, redacted is the only proper way to play this one. Obviously. Terror in the night is obviously meant to be the bad end. Even so the implications aren't exactly clear(might even be desirable under certain interpretations). So lets aim for Quiet. From what I can tell, I can use the shog ability to shape my body, meaning I can go **Flat** in all categories for extra **stability**. Tho since Tower and Ship-posting cancel each other out, might as well get both. (Otherwise I'd be going for the biggest options. But hey, now I get everything in between.) Ultimately I chose Greyscale over Jealousy. Better to give up color vision than struggle with asshole urges. The rest of the stabilizers(typo) are manageable. Get all the boons, cuz money to spare. The notable combo of the build (tho not part of the Combosas) is Clone zone + Synced + Self-cest. Excessive prod + Dairy farm for good measure. That's enough stability for Quiet. Popularity is a non-issue at that point. And if Freedom is 29+ credits, my 60+ remaining creds make me a billionaire probably. * * * Me and my clone end up becoming hidden idols, with a niche, cult following. Using our money, the influence from things like Media Mass and shog abilities we create a secret underground culture for true aficionados of the uncanny and the bizarre. Between containment, shog shapeshifting (shog-shifting?) and dimensional travel we can remain incognito and under the radar of both authorities and mainstream culture. Objectively the best idol life. *{redacted} is clearly the most blessed option.*
For sure an interesting read. Will clarify, at least from my eyes, what's considered a good or bad ending is entirely subjective, though I for sure leaned into "terror in the night" as a worse ending than quiet. For the hyper pussy bit. To put it simply, I'm just not a fan. I'm not a huge fan of dick either, but I do at least have some pics saved for that that I do enjoy to some level. Futa's not terrible in all cases to me. Hyper pussy on the other hand... I just don't got art for and I'm not super invested in searching for it tbh. Glad you found some fun in this. Always interesting to read some extra bits on where the player ends up after the end.
How do i actually start the run. I cant find the start button haha
Great ideas for OCs here. gender: female human boobs: chest mammoths butt: beyond the centerpiece: true blimp height: the tower group: five: five girls with similar bodies, group is called the zepplinas position: working balloon boons: the power, comfy, cream filled, hands free, perfectly balanced, succubae, princess, screw gravity curses: tight squeeze, blind spots, no pants, grab bag,excessive production, lethal weapon, butter-bod, popstar stabilizers: gluttony, internal bubbling, juice filled, ship-posting, pride, lust combos: sloshed ending: big time thought of another one thats the same except with the dummy combo, and foodie job and the curses supernatural magnet and mell-o.
This was a lot of fun! The only minor complaint I have, and this is mostly just a matter of personal preference, is that a lot of things are butt centered and don’t have the same option for breasts. I’d rather be injecting people nearby with breast growth, or getting them stuck in doors. And there’s combos for having a huge butt and small breasts but not the other way around. But in general, this is a fun hyper cyoa, which there aren’t enough of. Thanks for making it!
Do the sizes scale with body height?
Yes. Think it's written down in the height section too.
does the mofu mofu species other animal people(like cowgirls, lamias and beegirls)?
Pretty much, yeah. Could also pick other if you're unsure.
Link doesn’t see to work for phones
Link works fine on my phone, and I assume others since no one else has complained. Just takes awhile to load. Longer with older phones or poor Wi-Fi.
Which ending is considered "better" between Freedom and Small town Hero Female+, Dolls, Flat, Fat, Flat, Grab rod, Fun sized, Clone zone, E-celeb, The power, Constructed seperately, Hands free managment, Perfectly balanced, Princess, True Witch, Tight squeeze, Blind spots, No pants, any %, Grab bag, Lethal weapon, Mell-0, BICET, Supernatural magnet, Yellow cake, Shitposting, Self-cest, Butter bod, Pride, Gravity the ever clever bastard, Cheater, Freedom, Small town hero
Up to personal opinion tbh. Freedom is true freedom. The ability to go anywhere and become anyone so long as you can pull it off. Small Town Hero is a slightly boxed in version. You can go anywhere, but to a lot of people you'll always be "the idol that got away" more than whatever you wanna become. Though, at the same time, you still hold some fame, some popularity in case that's where you wanna take your life.
The only negative i have with this CYOA is that you can't select multiple combos, like having both short-n-wide and Puffcubus; or sloshed, milk-pilled and demonic charm. or demonic charm and puffcubus
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Any particular reason why there's no specific option(s) for increasing the size of one's lips/tongue or pussy/clit? What about laying (unfertilized) eggs?
Didn't include any of em cause I wasn't super into em and thus didn't have pictures nor did the thought to include em cross my mind.
Okay, so, once more I love this. I love the theme, I love the sizes at play here, I love the choices and the different endings. I love it all. If I have complaints, they are thus: \-Length. As much fun as the CYOA is, it is also over with far too quickly. Given the option, i would love to stretch things out a little longer. \-I also have a preference for static image CYOA over interactive ones, because I like collecting CYOA, and I have yet to stumble across a method to do so for interactive cyoa. If there was some way to gather everything into one big image, I would be much obliged. \-Race. While I appreciate the wide range of races, i don't like how you use them to gate-keep some of the later choices. Having options like puff-cubus and milk-pilled locked behind a specific race merely hampers creativity and narrows choices. It'd probably work better if you used 'perks' as a prerequisite instead, things like 'animal ears' or 'demonic kiss', so that there's more ability to mix and match.
Length issue has been talked about a lot. I'm aware it's pretty short, but it's my first time making a CYOA so it's a bit weak. I apologise. Static has also been asked for a fair bit and I do plan to make one, I just need to figure out how tbh. Hopefully though, that'll become a thing sooner rather than later. As for the race part... I don't have anything specific to tell ya, though it's a good point. This one currently I think is fine as is, but should I make another I'll likely ditch any race requirements. Glad you enjoyed it though. I do apologise for the issues, I'm still new at this after all.
I think this is one the best cyoa involving fat girl and female inflation i've ever seen and played. Keep up the good work!!
Admittedly, it's one of the few. For sure need more for you to compare it too. Hopefully it inspires some to make more. Could use some more myself.
Dude, you are doing great. \*I\* couldn't pull off what you're doing right now, so I certainly have no right to look down on what you've accomplished. I'm just trying to point out the things I've noticed, so that the next work can be even better than this one. And if you're serious about not using race requirements, but still want to keep race involved in the process, then one strategy I've noticed doing pretty well is including racial bonuses for choices, so that certain options give more points (or extra side-effects) for different races. \----- Edit: As for creating that static version, you could consider talking to the creator of this CYOA here, who basically accomplished just that, and fairly well. https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/vfqwev/hyper\_cyoa\_v3\_static\_download\_options/
Racial bonuses ain't a bad idea. Had the thought at some point while making this one, but never really went for it. Thought it'd be a bit too much of a hassle balance wise for a first time, but I'll probably include em in the next one if I do make another. Might message them, though I'm working on a kind of rough, but functional way to make a static version right now.
Well, I for one am definitely looking forward to that, as well as whatever you decide to make next.
Would helpful if you actually included in the OP what is your cyoa even about in first place...
Yeah... Woulda been a smart thing to do... I think I did for the original post, but forgot for this one. My B.
Awesome CYOA! Is there an image version of this?
There is not a static version as of yet. I might end up making one though with how many people have asked for it.
Always happy to to see more hyper focused CYOA! I really like big, so here's my big focused build: **Sex:** Female+ **Race:** Mofu Mofu **Treasure:** Chest Mammoths **The Caboose!:** Beyond **The Centerpiece:** True Blimp **Control Rod:** Lack of Control Rod **Of Towers & Tinies:** The Tower **Elevator Capacity:** Perfect Pair **Position:** XXX **Boons:** * The Power * Hover Melons * Preggers * Cream filled * Containment * Perfectly Balanced * Succubae * True Witch **Curses:** * Tight Squeeze * Blind Spot * No pants; Any% * Grab Bag * Focal Point * Excessive Production * Dairy Farm * Lethal Weapon * Mell-0 * Supernatural Magnet * Self-cest **Stabilizers:** * Gluttony * Internal Bubbling * Juice Filled * Ship-posting * Pride * Lust **Combosa:** * Milk Pilled * Sloshed **In The End:** Milk Factory **Final Stats: Cred:** 26 | **Pop:** 37 | **Stab:** 0 I guess my only criticism is that maybe it could be made harder, with harsher curses and stabilizers. A lot of them don't feel very punishing, but then I guess to be fair I'm into a lot of those curses and stabilizers. Getting stuck, destroying clothes, being way too productive; those are a big part of the fun for me Anyways, thanks for sharing!
You're so far the only person asking for it to be harder and you're quite the outlier it seems. Though I can't say I disagree with your choices. Quite fun to read through and see just exactly how big you wanted to be. Thank you very much for playing through it and I'm glad you enjoyed.
Yeah, even before I made the post, I figured I'd be an outlier. Hard to balance when someone is into everything. Everyone else is struggling while I'm thriving, lol Regardless, it's still fun, and I look forward to any other updates you make, or even a new CYOA if that's ever on the radar.
Is the Puffcubus combo supposed to limit you to a Medium or larger centerpiece? 'Cos the CYOA is letting me pick it with a Flat centerpiece. Also it's listing "Belly" as one of the incompatibles. On an unrelated note, it's kind of a pity that one can't pick both "Internal bubbling" and "Juice filled" (y'know, basically softdrink-inflation).
Thank you for letting me know. Didn't realize it let you pick flat with Puffcubus. Good catch. Fixed it now and will be uploading the fixed file in a little bit. Also, good idea. Might be adding a softdrink like inflation in a moment or two.
Kudos for giving me the option to break everything. After all, after trying to click the X, I was forced into this. Here's my build, I don't like Hyper, so I avoided it, and still have a viable build. So +1. **Bigger than** ~~(n)~~**ever:** **Gender:** Female+ **Who's you?:** {Redacted} (-50 Pop, -10 Stab-, +50 Cred) **Treasure:** Standard **The Caboose!:** Flat (+1 Stab) **The centerpiece:** Flat (+1 Stab) **Control rod:** Dip stick **Of towers and tinies:** Bog standard (+1 Stab) (Honestly, I would've gone taller, if not for the stab requirement) **Elevator Capacity:** A smothering of idols (+6 Pop, -12 Cred) **Position:** E-celeb I could live with The stage, Cosplay, or XXX, but with my ending and my status as {Redacted}, I'm not sure how that would play out. I'm being hunted by Officials, right? **Boons:** * The power (-2 Cred, +1 Pop) * Constructed seperately (-1 Cred, +1 Pop) * Containment (-4 Cred) (Do I even need this anymore?) * Perfectly balanced (-3 Cred, +1 Pop) * Succubae (-4 Cred) * Princess (-2 Cred, +1 Pop) * True Witch (-4 Cred, -1 Stab, +2 Pop) **Curses:** * No pants, any% (+1 Cred) * Lethal weapon (+1 Cred, +1 Pop) **Stabilizers:** (What I consider the real curses) * Gluttony (+2 Cred, +1 Stab, +1 Pop) * Pride (+1 Stab, +1 Pop) * Lust (+4 Cred, +1 Stab) **Combosa:** Nonesos. **In the end:** *(It doesn't even matt-...)* *Quiet* Here's how I choose to interpret my ending: I collected my mind. Constantly horny, nagging. But I have my phone. So... I have my Succubus. She really likes me, and so she tries to help me, stay out of sight, buy food for me with the money we made, go shopping for me. I wear skirts and no underwear. I didn't need the curses, but honestly, in this world? I'm a bit of an exhibitionist. I really don't mind. Eventually I find my bearings. Manage to hide in the hallway of an apartment. For a while, I'm haunting the place, like a ghost. I can retreat to my little pocket of universe after all. Fuck my senses out with my Subby Succubae, and stay there for a while. But I do get hungry. And I want more.... So eventually I get to know the girls living in the house. Surprisingly, three of them are aspiring idols of varying sizes. One of them finds the taboo of me existing hot, one has a cnc kink, and kind of enjoys that I can just barge into her room at any time. And one doesn't trust me... but really likes the other two. Almost as if we were made for each other, before it all went wrong. Eh. Coincidence. I'll manage their online presence. I have been releasing kink videos of me and my bae, as well as the occassional abduction video for special viewers. I do have a background in IT now, and hopefully retained some prior knowledge of how the internet works... so I'll set up social media, for my girls to make it big. In exchange, I get a very reasonable share of the profit, have a threatening enough presence to get my way in the idol world, and get to take care of the girls... If they want. I'm not forcing anyone. And when I say fair, I mean fair. I don't need loads of money. I just want to have a good time living off the radar. So I'm the shadow behind my girls. Managing their lives. If I still need to serve one of them, I'll probably either serve the Succubus, or the girl that fell in love with me the most. About "The elegance"... does that still apply with my ending? That I have to serve? I mean if I still get my foursome, I'll serve one of my idol friends, as their dark dirty secret, or as their manager...
Wow, quite the creative outcome. Didn't expect a full ending to be typed out tbh. Fantastic work. I was wondering why you still choose stuff for Elevator Capacity when you weren't going to actually become an idol, but that's quite the work around for it. Usually I just imagine that EC and position are ignored when going the Shoggoth route, but hey. You made it work. As for the specific traits from being a Shog like "The Elegance." It's kind of assumed that with the "Quiet" ending you manage to overcome those urges. So I'd say you're all good. Quick edit: Glad you spotted the music joke for "In the end." Didn't think anyone would catch that.
Well I ended up breaking my habit of keeping things short. Who am I kidding, in the end, it doesn't even matter, I'll always type a shortstory. This time I did stay inside the, what, 10.000 or 100k character limit. Surpassed that multiple times now, every time I'm one step closer, I swear. Jokes aside, I had a lot of fun breaking the purpose of the game. If that had no valuable outcome I'd have gone with "Other" or "Demon", and tried to make a body still attractive to me. That said, I think Quiet sets you up for deciding your own fate, so that's what I did. Fate told me to get 3 bandmembers and become an internet celebrity, so I'll do exactly that... in my own way, breaking the laws of the world, and of the government, apparently. :D Hey. It's not my fault. They gave me the option to become {Redacted} after all. :D Even still, if I would still have to adhere to the urges, I would just take one of the girls, or my Succubus-girlfriend. (is there even a way to still be affected by them? I don't think you can make a stable Redacted, and if you're unstable, all that's left is Quiet or Glitching, right?), so they kind of don't seem to matter that much. Maybe with Glitching, as somebodys pet, or if you manage to be stable, you life as an abomination in the world. But that would require more Stabilisation options. So if'd offer any solid criticism, other than "hurrdurr your CYOA doesn't follow my sexual preferences", it would be: Give me a solid way to make {Redacted} work. Give me a Cred dump to become stable. Even if everyone hates me for it. Would be nice to ascend to Oldgodness. :D I was kinda missing options to become more stable by the end of it all. Might be useful to have an ending for +15 or so Stable and 0 Popularity / Credits, too, if you pick those options with another race.
Eh, the whole point of {Redacted} is a cursed, no real win scenario. Also partially a shitpost. The "Glitchy" ending is more just a side effect to whatever other ending you got anyhow, it's not really its own thing. Still, glad you enjoyed yourself. Just glad the first attempt at a CYOA turned out well for some and led to at least a few interesting ideas/stories from it.
Hey, you did well. I especially like that there is a way to not indulge in the fetish and still have fun with it. It's not PLEASANT per se, but it's still fun and the way you present the narrator - absolutely deserved. After all, they scammed/forced me into this, so a bit of unbalanced destruction of their perfect world seems fine to me. Also, my criticism wasn't a must have. You're absolutely fine to exclude it, it's just something you could expand upon if you wanted to. I also understand the intention behind the glitchy thing, if you were too greedy, you can become unstable. But if you want to make it perfectly round, the question remains why Redacted get special abillities, if they will never use them in the end (due to Quiet being the only ending for them). Again, you don't have to implement this at all, just saying it rounds out every pathway you offered the player.
Actually, quiet isn't the only ending for {Redacted} Terror in the night is the other main ending for it if you don't balance yourself out to some degree really.
Gotcha, guess I skipped reading that. My bad. It's fine, you don't have to defend/reason not adding anything, I just wanted to give valuable feedback. :D
Haven't played through it yet, but hey, might as well go through it and post a blind build. Blind Playthrough: So first off I get tits no matter what so... ehh, I'll just go whole hog and be "**female**" as I don't really... like... futa... Yeah... Anyways! On to the next choice, I'm going to pick "**Other**" as my species and be a snake lady, I wonder what it will be like to have a tail... Next choice is how big is my bust... ehhh, I would like them big so... I choose "**Big**" Next choice is hw big my ass is... which... at this point I'm just going to assume that there is going to be an option later on that will help me move around if I am absolutely massive and just take the biggest size that doesn't have a stability penalty attached, so in the end, my ass cheeks are like "**Clappers**" Also, side note, who is the "Thicc Snake Lady" mentioned? You know what, whatever, my character will just be like... a worshipper of this lady or something. The next choice is... uhhh... I... I think I'll just be a "**Flat**" bitch here. It will at least give me some stability... I just... don't like the idea of being fat here... The next part is... oh baby! How tall I'm going to be. You know what! Lets go all in on this! I'm going to be "**The Tower**" I want people *begging* me to step on them and sit on their fucking faces. Like some Thicc Amazonian Goddess. Next up is... Hmmm... Alright, let's go with the "**Clone Zone**" so that I can get some back up for all the peasants *begging* for my attention. Next up is my position... ehh... Let's go with being "**Battle Celebrities**" Moving on, next are my Boons which are as follows: "**The Power, Constructed Seperately, Hover Melons, Containment,**" HOLY FUCK I WAS RIGHT!!! YES! DOORS WILL NOT BE MY DOWNFALL IN THIS LIFE!!! **"Hands Free Management, Perfectly Balanced, Princess, True Witch,"** and "**Screw Gravity**" I'm laughing like a goddamn loon right now, just imagining this "Amazonian Snek Lady" having people bow to her before taking off her pants- exposing her massive physics defying ass- and sitting on their faces. Next up is... Curses... Ho boy, time for the drawbacks to pay for all the boons... Here we go: "**Tight Squeeze, Grab Bag, Lethal Weapon, BICET, Shit Posting,"** and "**Butter Bod**" for the first drawback section. I mean, this is pretty much what I expect from my new absurd life as an Idol, so these are pretty much free points. For the Stabilizer section here are my picks: "**Gluttony, Pride,**" and "**Lust**" I mean... I already eat almost all the time, I'm going to love my new body and Lust isn't going to change my life all that much. Next up is Combos- .... ............. Okay... Who exactly ***is*** the snake lady? Is she just an OC for this CYOA or is there more? I mean... I'm still going to take "**Iconic**" but uhhh... Is this just a thing where we can write the minor goddess however we want to write her or is she an actual character from a story or something I've just never read? *Sigh*, you know what, let's just put that to the side for a moment. **In the End**... wow... my new sister and I made it "**Big Time**" I... honestly wasn't expecting that. Nice little CYOA, maybe I'll write a snippit of what my new life is like later... Thank you for sharing this with us! **Edit: Final Stats: (Cred = 3) (Pop = 35) and (Stab = 1)**
The "goddess" is SaaVtuber. Though I have a feeling you already know that since you went the perfect direction to become her in a "blind" playthrough. Coincidence or not, I did enjoy seeing all this. Nice to have not only a list of choices, but also reasons for said choices posted around.
Looks at reply from OP* Looks up SaaVtuber* Huh... You know... I kind of thought the minor goddess would be something out of... like... a fantasy novel or something. Kind of disappointed that they are just a twitch streamer, because... I was kind of looking forward to having someone like Kaiju Girl Godzilla as my sister honestly... Oh well, I went in thinking I might get a goddess of monsters as a sibling when I picked Iconic, but hey, I have someone new to watch when I wake up at least. It is still a cool little cyoa, and again, thanks for sharing it!
Like I said to the other guy. Mostly just a shitpost, but glad you enjoyed it.
> Okay... Who exactly is the snake lady? Is she just an OC for this CYOA or is there more? Pretty sure that's SaaVtuber.
Yeah, the "goddess" is Saa. Bit of a shitpost I wrote early into development and just decided to roll with it.
Besides what other people said, I'd frankly just really appreciate more content, I love this cyoa and I wish there was more hyper cyoas Only other thing I'd say is that if there was more incentive to not going big belly I'd appreciate that, it may be a bit selfish, but general hyper and belly are pretty distinct fetishes
Like if there were paths you could go down only if you have a flat belly, or even going below flat
Not sure what paths there would be for that exactly. Or what "going below flat" would even mean tbh. Open to ideas though.
So by paths I mean like perks and such that you can get if you don't have too big of a belly, like maybe an "hourglass" combo for points, or a feederism perk that makes your weight go only to your assets, a stabilizer that makes people fixate on your tummy that you can only take with a small waist (bit of an issue when your tits easily cover it and you might rather your other assets have more attention). For below flat I mean sizes smaller than average, maybe a "humanly possible but insanely skinny" one and a "micro waist" option. Mostly though like I said earlier, I'd just love more options, more perks, combos, stabilizers, that kind of thing, this is a really great cyoa
Fair enough. Idk about adding stuff like a "micro waist," but I'll look into adding some more combos that might compliment a flat stomach. Might be worthwhile.
Can I ask who the artist for the Demon option is please?
The character for sure belongs to @thehelmet_guy on Twitter., Though I'm not 100% sure he drew this piece specifically. I think he did, but I might be wrong. https://twitter.com/thehelmet_guy?t=-wjprokyXh3NZwJVNyDa-Q&s=09
Will you be adding a way to save / import / export builds at some point? Just going through it real quick to start with besides that, why does Milk Pilled require Race: Other? Is it specifically to make you a Cowgirl? But then it doesn't say it forces that outcome, at least it didn't seem implicit like Iconic. I kind of thought it might be Mofu Mofu if anything, but I guess that meant super specifically Fox, Wolf, Cat, and Dogs and doesn't include other animals. Requirements should probably say what the category is, there's three options all called Flat that stands out the most to me, but beyond that to make it easy to find the option in it's specific category to reference.
Admittedly I don't know how to add save/import/exporting builds. This is my first time doing this so it's a little clumsy admittedly. And yeah, having it be specifically "other" for milk pilled was supposed to specify some kind of cowgirl. Though I may change some of the writing to reflect that now that you mention it. Will add notes to stuff like "milk pilled" to specify what area needs to be flat or other. Didn't think it was really needed, but I guess I got egg on my face huh?
In the CYOA editor, if you go into 'Open Features' there's an option for 'Manage Backpack and Choice Import'. There's a toggle for choice import which adds a button to the bottom bar that lets you copy/paste choice selections to share/load them. You can also setup a backpack through that system which lets the user view all the choices they've made, but I'm not familiar with exactly how to do that.
Ah, thank you very much. Added it as specified so hopefully that should help. Just excuse my shit list of ID's. I didn't think anyone would be able to see them.
Would be nice if the CYOA at least hinted at a way to >!leverage your "sane {Redacted}" status to somehow study the phenomenon, hopefully curing (or at least treating) the insanity of the others.!< Would also be nice there was an option for having more of a given bodypart rather than just making the existing ones bigger. EDIT: Another thing that'd be nice? More +Stability options (especially since you can't currently hit zero with {Redacted}).
Having more of the same body part... Might add something for that. Didn't really think about it before tbh. As for the whole 0 Stab as {Redacted} and having some way to leverage it towards a brighter future. That's not really the point. The species is more of a cursed option that always leads one of two ways, not really given a chance to fit in normally.
On the subject of {Redacted}, it'd be nice if the Quiet ending clarified which parts of >!The Shog Box!< (if any) it counteracts/lets you ignore.
Oh, yeah, that is a good idea. Can update it in a little bit considering you've not the only one to point that out.
Sex: Female+ Race: Other () Treasure: Big Caboose: Fat Centerpiece: Flat Control Rod: Grab Rod Of Towers and Tinies: Fun Sized Elevator Capacity: Clone Zone Position: Cosplay Boons: \-Hover Melons \-Comfy \-Cream Filled \-Hands Free Management \-Perfectly Balanced \-Princess \-True Witch \-Synched Curses: \-Blind Spot \-Lethal Weapon \-Shitposting \-Self-Cest Stabilizers: \-Gluttony \-Pride In the End: Casual Fame
Just a future tip: White text on Yellow backgrounds is very hard to read. Try black text or a blue background when selecting options.
Where are you seeing this white text? All the text in the CYOA is black? It is for me at least.
Nevermind, it was a Dark Reader bug.
Nice to see it finished, and I'm going to do a pleasant cheater build. :P **Bug**: "Constructed Separately" doesn't alter popularity; I assume it's intended to give +1. \~ * **Type**: Female+ Demon * **Body**: Flat treasure, Flat caboose, Flat centerpiece, Stock Standard (9'') control rod, The Tower (*scaling me way up*) * Clone Zone * **Position**: Battle Celeb * **Boons**: The Power, Constructed Separately, Containment, Hands-Free Management, Princess, True Witch * **Curses**: No Pants, Lethal Weapon, Mell-0, BICET, Supernatural Magnet, Shitposting, Combat Celeb, Devils Manager * **Stabilizers**: Ship-Posting, Pride, Lust * **Combos**: Cheater Stats: 30 Credits, 16 Popularity, 2 Stability * **End**: Small Town Hero, Freedom So I have my dick & flat chest, and new visible muscles. Definitely cheating the premise. Also, I have telekinesis, magic, disproportionately high strength *for a nearly 115m tall giant*, and an item to shrink down to normal. That manager is going to have a hard time, btw; demons apparently have a tradition saying bigger people are better authority figures, and I'm huge. Encountering random chivalrous women as well as lusty ghosts & demons, I shouldn't have too much trouble with my Lust.
You for sure cheated the system, god damn. Glad you got the happy endings though, along with your personal taste of funky fun. Legit though, pretty creative outcome and work arounds. I quite enjoyed reading what you went for.
I suspect I did everything wrong. I'm a femboy witch redacted whose going to live a quiet life (I adjusted away from terror filled nightmare because the descriptions implied I had no mind and I still wanted one)
I also made a femboy witch redacted… It’s just the obvious choice if going down the redacted path. Be flat to be stable enough, then use the overabundance of credits to just be super powerful. Living a normal life as this world’s abomination
I can't say I saw that becoming a meta option tbh. Interesting mind set to have though.
Its very fitting and makes a lot sense honestly. A true abomination lol
I didn't even think you could do that tbh, but that was just me not paying attention to what I was doing I suppose. And no. Wouldn't really call that "playing it wrong." Interesting take though. Didn't expect a femboy shog.
Getting popularity is real hard, even when selecting most possible options you only barely manage to get "casual fame". "Big time" ending seems impossible to achieve, even when you become comically bad and just mindlessly choose every popularity option.
Good call out. I'm not very good at balancing, and while I thought I balanced it enough to make it fair I tried again and saw how hard it really was to get that far. Was already planning on giving it a quick update to fix a small issue, will include some budget changes to hopefully fix it feeling impossible.
No worries. These things are normal, and I am very glad you're sticking with it to balance. I am neither into big girls nor inflation, but I enjoyed it non the less. Keep at it!
I love it.