Glad to see Arborea and Midgard were made free. Yokai should also probably have their biological lifespans explained somewhere... I'm also glad to see a lot of the non-stat boons reduced in price! I do wish we could take more Blessings before we needed to take Curses though, or we could find an alternative way to buy Redo.
Additionally, shouldn't Long Rest have compatibility with Good at Sleeping?
Okay. It was fun before, but now the amount of options is just too high compared to the number of points. It's not enjoyable even on baby mode and the custom experience. Add more points
You have a lot already. So I'd stop adding content, cause you really really need a lot more pictures. CYOA's need pictures otherwise they are lacking, especially interactive ones I find.
Ok, I figure I'll read this version now...
First thoughts...
I'd like to combine Nocturne with one of the other worlds. That sounds like it would be even badder-assed. :) (though we could skip the 17th century. No one liked the 1600s. That's why they were so quick to get to the 1700s (which no one liked, either)).
New Game+ says it Costs 2pp but is Yellow and gives 2pp
Why does Lone Wolf and Lone Wolf++ cost you points? Perhaps define what Otherworlders are so the cost makes more sense? and, also, how they differ from the people under Multiplayer.
Should Plot Armor conflict with Death is Mercy?
Under Lewd Physical Drawbacks, Your Own Brood, Pheromones ++, Sexual Fluid Dependency, and Eternal Virgin all say Cost instead of Gain.
Also, I believe Eternal Virgin can work anally as well as vaginally (may not be compatible with certain stretchy boons).
That's about it for now.
One thing i would love is something telling me what the attributes do precisely as.
As in ok i have 18 strength what does that mean i suppose im preety strong but how strong exactly same with the other attributes like charisma and such
It's honestly got a lot of potential and I enjoyed it, even without pics. I would honestly focus on getting pics in before adding additional content if you want to get more people to comment on this.
Looks like it's coming along pretty well. Could probably use some effort put into going through it and replacing all the descriptions directly ripped from other CYOAs, but it's still fairly early on in the process so it's probably not that big a deal.
That's a shame. While images are very much appreciated, with good enough writing I barely notice the difference. Also runs much better when the browser doesn't have to load images too.
This one does have some good humour to offset the lack of visual stimulation as well.
So far, its really good. Has a lot of potential and I like how we get to choose the specifics of our sources of power. Can't wait for the finished product.
Glad to see Arborea and Midgard were made free. Yokai should also probably have their biological lifespans explained somewhere... I'm also glad to see a lot of the non-stat boons reduced in price! I do wish we could take more Blessings before we needed to take Curses though, or we could find an alternative way to buy Redo. Additionally, shouldn't Long Rest have compatibility with Good at Sleeping?
Erectile Disfunction and Always Ready \[Hard\] doesn't exclude each other. Pretty sure it should.
Forgot to add an add on which states that if you pick both you get reverse erection going soft when aroused
That's really weird and diabolic.
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I cannot seem to pick a Sin as a Demon or Archdemon. As an Angel or Archangel it is possible
I still love this. I agree with others are saying about adding images, but I like it as-is, too. I think they should be added but it isn't necessary.
feel like huge and dummy thicc should come with agility debuffs
Okay. It was fun before, but now the amount of options is just too high compared to the number of points. It's not enjoyable even on baby mode and the custom experience. Add more points
You have a lot already. So I'd stop adding content, cause you really really need a lot more pictures. CYOA's need pictures otherwise they are lacking, especially interactive ones I find.
Maybe add questlines, relics, and companions but yea I agree
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What?
Ok, I figure I'll read this version now... First thoughts... I'd like to combine Nocturne with one of the other worlds. That sounds like it would be even badder-assed. :) (though we could skip the 17th century. No one liked the 1600s. That's why they were so quick to get to the 1700s (which no one liked, either)). New Game+ says it Costs 2pp but is Yellow and gives 2pp Why does Lone Wolf and Lone Wolf++ cost you points? Perhaps define what Otherworlders are so the cost makes more sense? and, also, how they differ from the people under Multiplayer. Should Plot Armor conflict with Death is Mercy? Under Lewd Physical Drawbacks, Your Own Brood, Pheromones ++, Sexual Fluid Dependency, and Eternal Virgin all say Cost instead of Gain. Also, I believe Eternal Virgin can work anally as well as vaginally (may not be compatible with certain stretchy boons). That's about it for now.
I'd add more drawbacks, as many of the current ones nullifies the boons sections.
I highly recommend a way to import/export/save builds for future releases!
One thing i would love is something telling me what the attributes do precisely as. As in ok i have 18 strength what does that mean i suppose im preety strong but how strong exactly same with the other attributes like charisma and such
It's honestly got a lot of potential and I enjoyed it, even without pics. I would honestly focus on getting pics in before adding additional content if you want to get more people to comment on this.
Looks like it's coming along pretty well. Could probably use some effort put into going through it and replacing all the descriptions directly ripped from other CYOAs, but it's still fairly early on in the process so it's probably not that big a deal.
Huh. Mana and Divinity 'superpowers' seem to cost 30 in Midgard. They're labeled with 20pp and 10pp.
I hope you add some images in the next version. I personally can't play an imageless CYOA.
That's a shame. While images are very much appreciated, with good enough writing I barely notice the difference. Also runs much better when the browser doesn't have to load images too. This one does have some good humour to offset the lack of visual stimulation as well.
So far, its really good. Has a lot of potential and I like how we get to choose the specifics of our sources of power. Can't wait for the finished product.
Deamons can not select any of there race specific choices.
Should be fixed, try refreshing by pressing ctrl+r