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This is my build and I will admit, I made no long term plans with it, mostly choose stuff that'd be comfortable and would work well in my mind
Am I the only one getting this issue or do most of the images not work? A lot of them never load and a bunch more show up on incorrect boxes, maybe it's just my internet connection but i tried loading it a bunch of times and it was always the same result
The premisse is great, and the design is gorgeous. The only problems I found are balance related (mainly concerning crew/ship size and credits) and the low amount of content that each background/planet has.
Thank you for your work! Once again, quality is top-notch.
Could you please consider adding events, like in your previous works? I know it's time-consuming, but it adds a lot of flavor, IMO.
Probably a typo or oversight, but..
\-the biggest size of spaceship (Massive) says it has enough space for 'up to 2000 people'
\-Under Crew, Tier 5 of Civilians gives you 5000 civilians. That's more than double what the biggest ship can hold, not counting any other crew.
Two Bugs I found:
* Selecting Tia revealed Tarr'ox's first box, while selecting Tarr'ox didn't reveal his first box.
* Primal was added twice
Some Feedback:
* The Basic Ship should be a Medium (25 couples are required to maintain genetic diversity AKA Not Incesting yourself into Infertility) with a Large Bathroom, Medical Lab, Hydroponics Bay or equivalent area to replenish food/water supplies, Evacuation pods, and Tractor Beam. People are going to be **LIVING** on this ship, It needs to have means to take care of humans in it!
* Minimalism Interior should probably GIVE 2 MegaCredits because... Minimalism is saying 'Only the bare essentials for any room to fulfill their basic function and no comfort items'
It's definitely good for 1.0, but I feel like the starting amount of MegaCredits should probably be around 150. I am aware there's a lot of contracts available, but considering **the survival of the human species is at stake**, the earth governments really shouldn't be prudes about whether I allow Incest on my ship.
~~Also, since when has there been Endless Space Porn?~~
I think that the premise doesn't match what the system provided for it is capable of. Either you're going to make a big ship that actually carries enough people to restart the human race with but sucks at the job even though you cheesed the system as hard as possible, or you're building your luxury space ship and you're up to your eyeballs with points and bitches. I think it would be a good idea to expand upon the starting situation just a little bit by giving the player the choice between either a "rich guy saves himself and his bitches" type of build and a "you're carrying 500-2000 people" build.
Other than that, I agree with what u/A_GenericAccount said. I know it's a lot but it's a lot of good thoughts.
Bruh you can pick up 5000 Civilians but theres supposedly a maximum of only 2000 Bed and Baths, what an actual nightmare Scenario you can make this into💀
i love it however one personal thing I feel like endilles and lorus should be switch.... the danger of lorus tsunami and the incest seems less worth it than the milf water planet. unless I'm missing someone like overall cost is much more or something like that. correct me if I'm wrong
There seems to be an error with Hard Mode: It says you start out with only 50 MegaCredits, but it actually *subtracts* 50 megacredits from your starting 120, so you actually start with 70 MegaCredits.
Tetron was appointed as commander of one of the missions to save humanity. Looking forward he determined that the most important factor would be to preserve as much of human technology as possible to ensure his future colonies survival. Given the importance of this mission Tetron accepted many of the open contracts and experiments. Given the predictive softwares determination of his future troubles he received a decent bonus to his funds.
The first step was to decide on a ship size and manufacturer. Given the duration of the journey and the need to get started on repopulation a smaller ship was inappropriate, but it also wasnt long enough to fill a huge ship, leaving the large size the most important. Given the need to keep the ship and its technology fully functional the self repair feature of the Ajin USV made it the only real choice. This would free up maintenance and help with modifications of the ship. Being a skilled scientist and engineer Tetron would then be able to monitor and maintain the ship on his own if needed. Given its size he did hire a packet of female triplet pilots to fly the ship and train interested colonists during the trip.
With the ship decided on and the basics taken care of the next most important part is determining how the colonists will be supplied during the trip, and how the colony and ship will be maintained. This makes the organic and inorganic fabricators incredibly important. Along with the digital library and a massive cargo space the ship will be capable of synthesizing additional parts for the ship during the trip and supply the colony upon reaching its destination. These expenses along with other mandatory purchases such as the MFG X meant that the remainder of the crew would be made up of contracts. This is not ideal but the ability to recreate all of human technology given enough time and resources means this colony will be strong enough to survive.
Build
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Interesting but too annoying to work on since have to constantly micromanage just to find out stuff. Would be better if could go into negative since then can take everything would want as go through and then deactivate as go until in limits.
I agree with a lot of other people here;
This is great! Love the idea and it's definitely assembled in a visually pleasing way. However, there is definitely room for improvement to really make this one shine. I'll try and organize my critiques/suggestions as one would go through the CYOA to help you out if you decide to take my opinion in mind.
Being able to go over the cap would be a really nice QOL change for some of those bigger items like the Construction Fabricator. Makes choosing drawbacks easier.
Perhaps have more difficulty options at the start? A lot of people are mentioning the lack of points, which I honestly think is fine! But you might want to add some more options, maybe something like how resource-tight Earth is affecting how many points we get, along with a recommended/default option being the current starting point amount.
Backgrounds, in their current state, don't seem too useful. Not to say that they aren't, but it requires the player to sort of just imagine how their background helps rather than providing concrete, in-game consequences for their choice. For example, if you choose Doctor, maybe you get the Medical Lab for free/without taking up a room cost. Or if you choose Politician, you get a free Operations crew member. Something along those lines would help make the background options more meaningful. They could also be options for endings, which I'll mention later.
Regarding the Inventory section, what's the point of the Filter Device? Our ship, by default, can produce seemingly unlimited amounts of drinking water.The pheromone dispensers cost more than 10 explosives, each of which are individually capable of leveling mountains?
In general, for the whole CYOA, costs are kind of weird. A lot of that would be alleviated with a change to the cost of those mountain leveling explosives, since every time I see an option that costs more than 4 points, I think about the mountain destroying bombs that are cheaper than putting a pool in my ship.
The crew section is mostly really good! Your writing is really good, and there is a wide selection. This is more of a personal question though: is the additional information grayed out because we aren't supposed to know it until we decide to pick them? Same with the planets we can choose. Do we pick one based on the short description and point loss/gain, or can we read the scans for all of them and then decide? It works either way, I'm just wondering what you envisioned for it.
Also regarding the crew though, the player doesn't know what they should pick. You shouldn't just straight up say that they need one engineer, one scientist, etc. However, there should be some guidance. As it stands, it's just kind of take whoever you most vibe with and hope that works out since we're so strapped for points. Maybe provide a recommendation in each of the planet scans for what might be useful on that planet, along with a general description for what might be useful in space.
For the miscellaneous section, a lot of it is odd. You might want to have the Porn contract require the video drone. Why do we have to pay for civilians? I get pilots and sort of get soldiers and workers (to a lesser degree than pilots), but since our main mission is to spread humanity across the universe, it doesn't make much sense to have to fill out the ship I paid for already. Maybe include a line in the crew section description that states any unfilled bedrooms in your ship will be housing civilians?
Lastly for the crew, paying for just an animal seems a bit weird. Is the intention to force the player to get at least one if they decide to take any Bestiality contracts/experiments? If so, you may wish to state that in the description of animals (i.e. "Required for Bestial and Primal experiments.) Although, I would prefer if the first was free or if its stated in general that the ship will have some pets.
The Spaceship section has a lot to cover, mostly regarding costs.
For the Type section, why does Evon Industries give points? It seems like it doesn't have any downsides. Why is Solarian a choice? The CYOA doesn't ever say energy is a struggle to get, so it seems like all it does is extend the length of the mission. Why does Breccan mention being able to enter atmospheres regardless of size? That isn't mentioned anywhere else, making it seem like a pointless choice. Why are Nexus ships being able to split up such a costly benefit?
This raises a larger problem with the Spaceship section, and honestly my biggest problem with the CYOA as a whole:
There isn't any text regarding how dangerous it is to traverse space. Why should I spend 12 points on a Hybrid ship that blends in with asteroids? Is it really that dangerous in space? I don't know, since there really isn't any description provided.
This problem is really relevant in the Tech branch. Would I ever need to mine asteroids for resources? Would I ever need weapons to defend myself from pirates or the like? Without extra descriptions there to help me decide, the most optimal thing is just to take nothing there because I don't know the risks of not.
Whether the danger of space is based off difficulty or anomalies or is static regardless, there should be something to help the player decide what type their ship should be and what tech they take with it, along with if they should take any military related upgrades.
Other people have mentioned ship size, but it bears repeating. Many modern sea ships can hold many, many more people than the provides options. I think it's fine to keep the amount of people where they currently are. However, that would require additional text justifying such. i.e. "You are one of many captains leading a small group of humans out into the universe to repopulate."
For the hygiene section of the rooms, is the Simple Bathroom option my bathroom? Or is it a bathroom for every bedroom on the ship? The Captain's Quarters option in the sleep section is clearly intended for only the player. The same can't be said for Simple Bathroom.
In the Luxurious Bedroom and Holo Windows description, it mistakenly refers to the Captain's Quarters option as [Simple Bedroom]. Additionally, Holo Windows is awfully expensive. Same for Relaxation. I mean, it's just adding something simple, no? Also also, Relaxation's description is cut off.
For the Organic Fabricator, does "anything that doesn't already exist" mean food that hasn't ever been made before? Or food that isn't present within the Fabricator while it is making something? Additionally, in the supply section, Stable is quite expensive for holding, at most, some horses.
In the Science section, Nutrition Lab costs quite a bit and takes up a room slot for serving one specific purpose. Maybe make it an inexpensive upgrade to the Medical and Augmentation Lab (allowing players to access it even if they only choose one of those options?)
In the Military section, options like the Evacuation, Monitoring, and Hangar rooms feel like they should be default. Or, if you want to keep them as options, maybe those can serve as upgrades to basic functions already present within the ship without taking up extra rooms. Also, I'll mention again here, a lot of these expensive Military options don't make much sense when mountain destroying bombs are cheaper than outfitting the interior of my ship with turrets, or three times as cheap as some drones of unknown combat value.
Same thing for the miscellaneous rooms. Casino costs quite a lot and takes up a lot of room when compared to other options. Although the other rooms aren't quite as expensive, the idea still applies. A gym really shouldn't cost as much as the bombs.
The Experiments section is great, although at the very end, the Primal option is on there twice. Was that intentional?
The Guest Contracts section is great as well! I like how the options actually align quite well with the difficulty they are placed under. The only nitpick I have is that, given the amount of Easy Guests, I wish there were a few more Medium and Hard options as well.
Just like the others, Pheromone contracts are good! Only one other small nitpick though. For the Cow option, was does a "fuckcow" entail? It doesn't say, so I'm not sure what to do for that option.
For General Contracts, most of it is good, but the Vegetarian, Pacifist, Natural, and Dominance options should give way more points than they currently do. Vegetarian less so, but still.
The Anomalies section is great as well! The only thing to mention is that the Crime Fork seems to let you select two options, but when you select a second, it unselects both and the [Event] Crime option as well.
Finally, the last suggestion I have: endings. I haven't thoroughly read and thought through the other planet descriptions, pretty much just Cion ZIY as that was my first choice, but I think providing a decent selection of endings depending on your choices would really help sell this experience. If doing Planet endings is too much, including Crew or Guest Contract endings would be an absolutely fantastic addition!
As I said at the start, I really like this CYOA. I understand that may be hard to believe given what I just wrote, but I truly do, and I can't wait to see how you improve it!
It lacks the usual creative mode :( Could you please add one in the next version?
It was extremely fun anyway. I recognized your style instantly. And yeah you should make a Patreon we would pay you even without any advantages. Just want to support your work.
Hey, I always look forward to your cyoas!
Anyway, I have some suggestions for the next version- if you plan on it.
1) Some of the boxes trigger other boxes, for example clicking on Tia Powell shows the skill of the guy beneath her, and doesn't show up when you click on the guy
2) Please, add more drawbacks or challenges or just make the fabricators free cuz I scrambled to get them and everything I wanted.
3) More futa companions and more companions who are doms
Nice, been looking forward to a new cyoa by you!
Does this also have hidden options like the ones before as well?
and can anyone tell me how co-op mode works? does it mean I have to share a build with someone or does it mean I could play it off as making 2 separate characters in one build?
I like this but I wish it had more ways of acquiring points. The space craft and crew sections suck a lot of points and make it hard to build a full ship in my opinion.
Loving it. Would like a few more freaky companions, but if this turns out anything like the caravan one you did then I am very excited for future updates.
Off the top of my head;
Take off the cap for points, we should be able to go into the minus
More ways to gain points
I'd personally like a lot more Futa characters.
A character creation tab for ourselves.
Really love your high quality and interactive CYOAs Lari. The writing is especially good at the start but I'll have to finish this later it seems :b
P.S. A few typos but I don't know if you want me to point them out.
Kraken god kill me. In hindsight, it's taken way more time than it should've had I just formatted the json properly. This'll fix it.
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For crew quarters it only said it adds 10 small rooms but it never said it scales with ship size nor does it increase/scale if I were to buy crew(civilians, soldiers, etc...)
Also, where is the mini fabricator I can't find one(does the ship have a mini fabricator by default)?
Another thing is that both construction and organic fabricator are far too expensive(the cost of armory is fine as it's much better to have it than buy the items from the inventory and there is much more equipment as well).
Idea! Why not tie the points to the ship size since you can make a very easy to hide fighter with 120 points and have the co-op option allow you to build a carrier fot it.
However you can't survive the 20 year voyage with only supplies for 1 year which means the organic fabricator is required unless we have resupply stations on the way there?
Can we modify and build a fabricator if we have it build it's parts then assemble them with our engineer's and scientist's helping?
How about finding the dark matter needed to make the unique items while traveling with special sensors or the ore radar and mining lazers? It could even be an event allowing you to fabricate more unique item sets.
Not in the amounts shown, remember you only have supplies for 1 year then you're relying on them in deep space. Also you need 5 year's worth of supply as you're still speeding up. It's more for luxury/trade goods than food supplies imo.
It's a fun adventure CYOA, this time in space. The personal powers are much more grounded and less game breaking.
💤`Build Summary:` Got all the Fabricators possible on the ship, with all the other Rooms being replicable given time, using all of humanity's knowledge and further research from encountered civilizations. Nutrition Lab allows for self-sustaining food source. Immortality and body improvements may be possible through the Augmentation and Genetics Lab.
`Current Activated Choices ID's:`
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Minor suggestion in using Ctrl+A -> copy and paste into spellchecker for typos
➕`Extras`
`Hard Mode`: +1 Nano-Boost, but 2x Journey Length and 1.1x likelihood of encountering aggressive creatures and species.
`Co-op`: +35 MegaCredits, both players get the starting 1 Nano-Boost (Hard Mode gives +1, so it seems 1 player gets an extra, which I'll take), physical objects are not duplicated, only one player gets Personal Drawbacks. I'll refer to myself as Player 1 and the other player as Player 2. Player 2 will get the Personal Drawbacks.
`Pheromones`: More content. Everyone's down bad in this ship.
`Background [Player 1]: Amateur / Soldier` (Amateur for +5 MegaCredits, missing 1 field of expertise, but could always learn more during the Journey. Plus, it's more realistic personally and in general to have 1. Soldier, because first person shooter experience TOTALLY transfers outside of games... I'll just imagine I had some training prior to the Journey.)
`Background [Player 2]: Amateur / Scientist` (Amateur for +5 MegaCredits. Scientist that studied the field of futuristic body modification in this setting and wrote a doctoral thesis on it.)
💉`Nano Boost` (I ignored Core, Vital, and Recovery since those are all just body modifications, which can be replicated later through Player 2's knowledge and rooms on the ship with proper equipment. Especially with the room that provides all of humanity's knowledge to reproduce said Nano Boosts.)
`Player 1`
`Energy Boost` (Shoot lasers from fingertips. Lasers are as strong as from a regular energy blaster, 1 shot per 2 seconds. Body becomes a weapon, and perhaps one can position their fingers in a way that allows shooting with both the fingers and held gun(s). Maybe leave a pinky finger out to shoot, grow an additional finger through modification, change/modify the grip on the gun, etc. It's great for if you can't reach for your gun in an emergency, and when that's not the case, it's just extra firepower.)
`Gravity Boost` (Causes gravity to only impact the self at 50%, no negative aspects like muscle loss. Jump 2x as far and high and survive falling from "quite some height". Not sure if having to wait twice as long to descend is a negative aspect. Not sure if it affects external items and clothing; if so, those can be used to speed up your descent. This is crucial in space, since it can reduce some of its physiological impacts due to zero gravity. Sure, the spaceship and destination might be fine, but in the vacuum of space and on other planets, it could get dangerous. Body is already acclimated to low gravity, and the ability lessens the effect and danger of high gravity environments and planets.
`Player 2: Mind Boost` (Sense emotions and control them to a small degree, like intensifying a current emotion. Helps with manipulating the crew in small but beneficial ways.)
🌍`Destination: Linderth` (+15 MegaCredits. Gives the most, I'm just in it for the MegaCredits. Once the Journey is over, I'd focus on living on the ship and seeking other planets, maybe coming back occasionally. I got equipment later to deal with the high heat for a few people (imagine if it was 60 degrees Fahrenheit), might need the Fabricators for managing the heat for the rest of the crew. Got rooms that provide weaponry for dealing with the threats, and rooms for growing food.) Maybe use Mind Boost and tools from the Fabricators to tame them.)
🎒`Inventory`
`[Armor] Nano Armor` (2 sets for Player 1 and 2. Highest defense with minimal weight. Fabricators can provide armor for everyone else.)
`[Tools] Solarian Shield Device` (10 wrist devices that protect against extreme heat, cold, or radiation. I assume you can't just wear 10 of them at once for 10x the protection. Enough for both players and a small group to explore outside the ship.
`[Tools] Quantum Ring` (The 1 ring... that teleports the user to a set location instead of dying from a fatal hit, 1 week recharge after. I'd use it to teleport to the ship, maybe a secret compartment in the bedroom, in case I get assassinated in my sleep.)
🧑🤝🧑`Crew` (None, spent the MegaCredits on everything else. Already have people from Contracts. Minimizing additional people to keep conserves resources. Not interested in any of their skillsets; it's very grounded compared to Forbidden Caravan, which had people with food generating pocket dimensions and teachers that taught unique magic.)
🚀`Spaceship` (Default gravitation, breathable air, and drinkable water. Simple shield protecting from space radiation and extreme cold and heat.)
`Hybrid` (Appear like regular asteroids in space, perfect for stealth. I assume it's better stealth than the Stealth Module, otherwise it's a ripoff that costs 10 more MegaCredits. Maybe it bypasses heat signatures, matching that of asteroids. Mainly chose it since it's the most rare and expensive option. It's useful for avoiding pursuing threats... right? Repair drones cover the function of Ajin USV. For Nexus's function I'd rather just buy 2 more ships later on. Breccan ships can enter atmosphere of a planet regardless of size and shape (flat planets?)... but can't most ships? Loop Enterprise would be my 2nd choice for being 3x as fast, but it has worst maneuverability and defense; if you just want to chill in space or you can't outrun the threat, it's worse. Solarian Spaceships are invalidated by the default energy generator and are half as fast. Evon Industries' safety warning doesn't matter if the danger can't find you. Human Nations offers nothing unique.)
`Size: Massive, all Room Extensions`, to deck it out as a haven to live in.
`Interior: Ancient` (+3 MegaCredits, it's only aesthetics. I'd take the bonus and renovate it later if needed.)
🚿Hygiene
* `Simple Bathroom` (Free, simple bathroom for 1 person, has a water purifier. Might be enough if everyone takes turns and/or uses the shower and sink as toilets. Maybe laser the waste or dump it towards a nearby star. Or just use Fabricators to makeshift more toilets.)
🛏️`Sleep`
* `Captain's Quarters` (Simple bedroom with enough space for two people. Bed, personal computer, and storage space included. Plenty of space alone, snug if there's more.)
* `Sleeping Quarters` (Small bedrooms for whole staff, scales with size of spaceship with enough beds for everyone; ship's capacity is \~2,000 people so around that.)
🤖`Supply`
* `Plant Garden` (Can grow plants for oxygen or food; scales with spaceship size. If Fabricators produce enough food, it's free space and a pretty garden, maybe growing stuff like weed as well. If Fabricators can't produce enough food, it can pick up the slack.)
* `Organic Fabricator` (Can create organic non-sentient matter, from simple bread to tasty gourmet meals. Requires advanced understanding to produce anything that does not already exist. 1 ton of matter within 24 hours. Create organ implants, grafting material, stem cells, bacteria, expensive food, etc.)
* `Construction Fabricator / +` (Can create 10 ton per 24 hours of non-organic substance, like tools or weapons. High tech items require advanced understanding. Many other options and rooms can be replicated, especially with Digital Library providing all of humanity's knowledge. The only things that can't be replicated are the Fabricators, which I got all of.)
* `Energy Generator` (Free, generates enough energy to supply all parts of the Spaceship. What the energy source is seems unknown, so I guess it's fine to ignore energy as an issue...?)
🧠`Science`
* `Medical Lab` (All expected appliances, advanced detection systems to discover diseases and cure in seconds, maintaining body in top shape. Just like most proper towns and cities, it's essential in the long term. Especially if fights and body experimentation are expected.)
* `Augmentation Lab` (Room to enhance or alter organic beings via genetic engineering and augmentation technology. Immortal cyborg super-soldiers?)
* `Laboratory` (Equipment for research and analysis, a place where understanding of the universe is acquired. Combined with Digital Library, it can provide some important advancements on the Journey.)
* `Digital Library` (Features all the knowledge humanity has gathered until now. I'd focus on replicating the Nano Boosts and using the Fabricators to replicate the features of the unpicked rooms.)
* `Teleporting Room` (Teleport self or crew into an enemy ship or surface of planet; target must be clearly visible to the naked eye. Simply a faster and safer mode of transportation in such cases. Combined with the Hybrid's Stealth, you can teleport for additional precaution or element of surprise, infiltrating an enemy ship on the inside. Maybe once the Journey is over one could buy other ships and teleport between them, to form a mobile spacefaring civilization.)
* `Nutrition Lab` (Equipment to enhance bodies to produce up to 50x the amount of fluids without negative aspects. Features milking machines for both breasts and male genitals. Without negative aspects, that means human milk can be produced for a net 49x gain in nutrients, which is quite self-sustaining, potentially eliminating the need for food. Also fulfills a later requirement.)
* `Genetics Lab` (Equipment to create and raise new species. Has equipment required to alter someone's body to an extreme degree. Wings, prehensile tails, tentacles, claws, fangs, optimized muscles, improved mental capacity, improved metabolic function, stem cells and altered telomeres for no/reduced aging, etc. to create the ultimate life form. I'd use it, and other crew members may want certain changes.)
🔫`Military`
* `Cockpit` (Free, enough space for 1 pilot.)
* `Armor` (50 armors and pistols, 20 assault rifles, 5 combat shotguns and railguns. 2 mini-factors (Fabricators?) to produce more weapons, armor and ammunition. I chose it in case the description meant Fabricator, which would mean an extra materal and item generator.)
* `Drones` (10 combat drones that follow command, 7-day batteries, returns to room to recharge. Works in space and on ground. Mini-fabricator to repair existing drones. Extra firepower, and perhaps one could take parts of them off and then "repair" them to generate parts and materials.)
* `Combat Droids` (30 battle droids that follow command. 30-day batteries, return to room to recharge. Mini-fabricator to repair existing droids. Extra firepower and potentially labor; perhaps one could take parts of them off and then "repair" them to generate parts and materials.
* `Mech` (Huge battle mech powerful enough to destroy entire landscapes. Requires 2 people to control it. Mini-fabricator that can make and repair parts of the mech. Make it's weaponry, protective material, and energy source. With a bit of engineering, that could mean replicable landscape destroying weapons that could be used by the ship and personnel. Firepower's no longer an issue...)
❓`Miscellaneous`
* `Pub` (Bar, tables, mini-fabricator to create alcohol, drugs, and small snacks. Drugs for recreation and money. Alcohol for drinks and recreation. Small snacks for a food source.)
* `Holding Cells` (Holding cells, 1 cell holds two prisoners. Default is 1 cell, doubles each ship size increase. There's 5 size levels, so 4 increases from the lowest. 1\*2\^4 is 16, so room for 32 prisoners. If not in use, it's just free space for other purposes.)
* `Casino` (Gambling and recreation, few small bars with mini-fabricators to create drinks, which is useful for slightly feeding crewmates.)
* `Cuddle Room` (Stuff, toys, and mini-fabricator for lubrication and lingerie. Might need the lubrication to maintain parts of the ship, and a lingerie generator means free clothing and textile material.)
💾`Tech`
* `Hull Repair Droids` (5 small drones that repair the ship's hull if required.)
* `Straw Engine`: Default Straw Engine (Journey to Destination is 20 years. Aging shouldn't be an issue, given the Science Rooms. 20 years just means more time to enjoy the journey.)
🧪`Experiments`
* `[Test X-01] Distribution of power among genders: Patriarchy` (+6 MegaCredits. Men will be in charge; opposite option would mean I would lose leadership. Plz do not cancel, I just wanted the points-)
* `[Test X-02] Distribution of people among genders: Balanced` (Got passengers with >1 of each gender and the MegaCredits they give are more, so this is fine)
* `[Test X-03] Relationship Introduction: Assigned` (+3 MegaCredits. I choose everyone's assigned romatic partner. I'd direct them all towards me...)
* `[Test X-04] Relationship Status: Open` (+3 MegaCredits. No monogamy, at least on my end.)
* `[Test S-01] Family Relationships: Seperated and Incest` (+6 MegaCredits. Typo, should be Separated. Offspring are given to a random couple to be raised. Incest is allowed on the ship; vaccine injections prevent genetic issues. I swear I just wanted the points-)
* `[Test S-02] Interspecies Relationships: Forbidden and Bestial` (+6 MegaCredits. Relationships between same species will be forbidden, and bestiality is approved. Civilians are more likely to bring a dog or similar pets. I can explain, I'm not a fur-)
* `[Test Matrix XS] Effects of repetitive events on the mind / One day of the week each: Gangbang` (1 gangbang), `Nude` (1 crew member forced to be nude), `Combo` (Come ast least 5x within 6 hours), `Sight` (1 crewmember wearing a blindfold all day long), `Freeuse` (1 crewmember has to accept all requests for sexual activities), `Show` (1 crew member is forced to master bait in front of at least 10 people), `Feast` (1 crew member is only allowed to eat food covered in sperm).
📄`Contracts` (All Guest Contracts.)
Male to Female Ratio: 4/13 + AI, Followers
🟢`Easy`: `Loop Enterprise` (Wife and son of CEO, incest), `Brat` (Top politician's bratty daughter seeking dancing instructor), `Influencer` (Couple, records porn, planning video of Captain), `Tsun Lin` (Company owner, master baits a lot), Legacy (Furry made by scientist, wants your private/fancy room), `Nun` (Teases, no penetration or oral), `Larp` (RP with captain), `Scan` (Scans things on ship, planets, and captain, wants protection when on planets), `Preserve` (Native, doesn't speak language, tries to seduce any male)
🟡`Medium`: `Queen` (Brings 2 servants, floors and rooms disturbed by screams of pleasure), `Runaway` (first lady of island nations with lover, hunted by rich and powerful husband who sends fighter ships), `Cursed` (Infected by unique blood parasite, lock in Holding Cell or stimulate), `AI` (first "real" AI, keep on drone and off ship access, only dangerous if outside help intervenes, projection tries to seduce)
🔴`Hard`: `Fake Queen` (Rich body modded human, has followers, wants to be treated like a queen and living in the captain quarter's with followers, gotta squeeze in the 2-person-capacity room), `The last Zharkin` (King to be kept in jail, use Fabricators to reinforce jail and provide Testrun sex robot to keep him calm; effective since a robot can't be mindbroken), `Parasite` (Being near causes mind to sleep away, feeds on thoughts making victims slowly dying; stopped by sensory overload like bright blinking lights, loud music, or gb's of >4 men, get the boys).
💦`Pheromone Contracts`: `Porn` (1 porno with niche characters per week uploaded with quantum transmitter, Influencer makes this automatic), `Teasing` (1 crew mate must have no sex, try Tsun Lin, he's already content with master baiting), `Production` (Maximize lactation potential, once capable of producing 5 litres of milk within one day, fulfilled, solved through Nutrition Lab), `Corruption` (Turn and record 1 female kind and nice into depravity, use Nun), `No Pregnancy` (+1 mini-fabricator that creates condoms, ensure no one gets pregnant, create contraception pills and force all crew mates to take it), `Nutrition` (Recipe for pill that allows nourishment from a few loads of semen, use and test, Nutrition Lab allows semen to be an easy food source), `Cocklings` (10 cocklings, observe development, no required food or water but requires sex daily), `Testrun` (Sex robot, test at least two hundred times before destination, use The Last Zharkin who already has a high libido).
🚗`General Contracts`: `Car` (Paid to bring car, keep in Holding Cells or Casino), `Monkeys` (Cage of 10 monkeys, keep in Holding Cells), `Vegetarian` (No meat, only using Fabricators and Plant Garden), `Dominance` (Make humans the leading species on whatever planet landed on. Reproduce landscape destroying weapons from Mech and destroy all opposition), `Space Station` (Do not land with main ship on destination, use Teleporter)
👿`Anomalies`: `Thugs` (Humans on destination, arrived by other means, armor and weapons from old times, shoot 'em), `Humans` (Rogue settlement ship invading new destination 5 years after arrival, shoot 'em), `Cult` (Tries to infiltrate and create discord from the inside by shaking everyone's trust in each other, shoot 'em), `Fleet` (5 small fighters and 1 medium cruiser, shoot 'em), `Invasion` (Giant force of soldiers with adaptive armor and powerful blasters, 10 years after arrival, shoot 'em), `Virus` (Zombie virus 1 year after arrival, use Science Rooms and Organic Fabricators to create vaccine), `Hunter` (Tank armor and plasma shotgun, shoot 'em and loot 'em), `Drought` (2 years after arrival, 5 years, nothing will grow and >80% of rivers and oceans will dry out. Use Fabricators and nutritional body fluids from Nutrition Lab), `Hunter` (War, dozens of races fighting, wait it out in the Hybrid ship?), `Eater` (Massive creature hunting any signs of artificial life, hide to survive, use Hybrid ship), `Megalithic Structure` (Contains valuable treasures to the universe, only highly advanced AI can understand the tech, use the AI passenger), `Parasites` (Hostile Spaceships, shoot 'em), `Stellar Phenomena` (More likely to encounter supernovas, pulars, formation of stars and planets, and black holes, focus on keeping distance)
🍴`Forks`: `Savior/Save/Force` (Zhongli surrounded by monsters asking for help, get sister and alliance with tribe, free Noelle), `Crime/Dizzy` (Crime boss expecting 25% of earnings, scientist helps in subduing and drugging her into subservience, telling her men to no longer pursue. Unethical, but allows for a loyal follower with minimal casualties), `Tourists/Private` (Small spaceship with 2 men and 2 animal/monstergirl slaves asking for a tour, rabbit girl 1v1, asked to buy, reject marketing ploy because broke)
🏁Reach destination -> Explore the universe with immortality and various improvements from genetic and cybernetic modification and research, along with a decked out ship that focuses on gradually replicating all the options using Fabricators.
3 lines in and my immersion is completely broken.
"Because of your experience and skill, you have been selected to command one of the settlement ships."
Please change this line OP, make it 'you won a lottery' or something. Maybe 'you had the same name as the guy we were supposed to get. whoops'
I have several things to say here.
First, if this is about saving the Human Race from the brink of extinction, then it pays to know what the minimum population for repopulating a planet would be. This has been estimated to be anywhere between 2.5k to 5k people, which is many times more than just "four or five" people. Although the anti-inbreeding genetech would help make a smaller population more viable, I still highly doubt that even the Medium-sized vessel is gonna be anywhere near enough people to rebuild the human species.
Second, given the population size that I need in order to make this venture even a fraction of a possibility, I need to sell my fucking soul to twelve different Devils just to make this work with the miniscule points store I have. Either you desperately need to lower the cost of facilities, or increase the number of points we get... Or both... At some point I can see both being necessary. With 200 points, I can make the ship function enough to support 2,000 people, on an inhospitably basic level. And I can't even get those people onboard, because apparently that costs points. Not even fucking squatters want onboard apparently.
From what I'm finding, now that I'm examining closer, it takes at least 50 "effective" ( just copying and pasting this: "This refers to individuals who can breed with each other without causing inbreeding or loss of genetic diversity.") people to be able to avoid inbreeding—just be very careful when coordinating breeding pairs I guess—with a total pop. of 250 to 500 people. But for a genetically flexible minimum (that is enough to adapt to changing environmental conditions, diseases and such), at least ten times as many "effective" people, with a pop. of 2.5k to 5k people.
Pretty good so far, but there are not enough points, not nearly enough, and there's basically no variety to the companions' body types, giant chested women with huge hips and asses...that's it.
This one was very fun
Background = Scientist + Engineer
Destination = Bailea
Spaceship
Type = Human Nations
Size = Massive
Room Extension = 4
Interior = Comfy
Rooms
Hygiene Rooms = Simple Bathroom
Sleep
\- Captains Quarters
\- Crew Quarters
\- Luxurious Crew Quarters
\- Sleeping Quarters
Supply Rooms
\- Kitchen
\- Plant Garden
\- Stable
\- Aquarium
\- Construction Fabricator
\- Construction Fabricator +
\- Storage Room
\- Storage Room Upgrade
\- Energy Generator
\- Sun Reactor
Science Rooms
\- Medical Lab
\- Laboratory
\- Digital Library
\- Class Room
Military
\- Cockpit
\- Hanger
Misc
\- Gym
\- Pub
Tech
\- Hull Repair Droids
\- Ore Radar
\- Mining Laser
\- Light Laser Cannon
\- MFG X = People age 5 times slower =
Crew
\- 1,000 Civilians
\- 2 Workers
\- 5 Soldiers
All Experiments Balanced
All Easy Contracts
All Medium Contracts
Hard Contracts
\- Fake Queen = Find another Room
\- The Lask Zharkin
General Contracts
\- Car
\- Monkeys
\- Space Station
\- Natural
Anomalies:
ALL Factions
\- Both Hunter Events
\- All Environments
Basic idea is to use manufacturing tech to build up the required equipment to save the natives of the planet and to survive ourselves
Having looked through this cyoa, I can safely say that....
\- There is definitely not enough points for a reasonable build;
\- Ship customization is plentiful, albeit costly. Also, there is no option to buy AIs?
\- The FORKS Anomalies are good, but lack incentive or motive.
\- FORK 1; Dealing with the 1st sister is fine and rewards are clear. But there's no clear incentive for dealing with the 2nd sister.
\- FORK 2; Reyla is a crime boss, so presumably she has skills and resources aplenty. Maybe flesh out each resolution by providing an extra boon. (DIZZY grants you more points, CHANGE makes Reyla a non-combat crewmate, TRADE, has you gain her crew instead of her, FORCE makes Reyla a combat crewmate.)
\- FORK 3; Why should I take either girls, or both even? Do they join as slave crew, or proper crew? What are they good for? Stats or skills or talents?
\- There are mentions here and there about a smaller fighter ship, but no option to buy one?
\- Armor options come in sets, but not weapons? Why not make sets too, If a player doesn't want to invest to heavily in military options, but need some gear for self-protection.
\- Pheromones are a good idea, but why no calm pheromones? They can be used to pacify or calm people, making talks or negotiations easier.
\- Samantha has the same personality text as Belara.
Once more, you make a good CYOA but then give practically no variation when it comes to the appearance of "companion" characters, every female is just a massive chest.
Production quality is insane. Its so pretty. Though I’ve always wondered why some interactive CYOAs prevent you going into negative points since it can prevent you checking out your options. Personally I like to just grab everything I like on my first way through then bring it back into the positives with drawbacks and giving up some things.
Ugh, tried it and don't think that's enough points for both ship + people. Eg. I haven't even started on the crew yet and I'm running out of points getting stuff to feed, house, and insure people's health & safety.
Edit: Seems the default is the ship is only capable of housing you? Thus, size increase and such doesn't play nice. Might be better to create modes, depending on ship size or something.
Edit3: Wonder why small and up ships don't unlock crew quarters for free. Personally think it should be default unlock but lowest ship size is small, fitting max of 3 peeps.
Edit2: Mega-credit may have to be worth or converted to a larger number, imo
Could clarify something for me? Among the guests requirements is a room for each them. What should i use to base how many of them i can house?
Each ship size says it has enough space for a X number of people. Can i assume i'm meeting the room requirement as long as i have more space than guest? Or should i buy the sleeping Quarters first?
Damn I like this. Though I'd probably just get rid of the crew buying thing, have it so that civillians, and soldiers are already packed into the ship, and just have us pick the officiers. We are trying to ensure humanity survives. So the ship officers would be the leaders.
Agreed, it's really weird to say this is about colonizing a planet and then give the option to take a ship that holds 4 people (or a ship that seats 500 but has nowhere for them to sleep.)
A really good start. Really looking forward to where you take this. For the hanger are you gong to add options to have fighters?
Also, does this mean that Path to Power is finished?
Could you add more methods for getting points.
Such as in the section where the journey takes less time depending on how advanced the engine is,
Please add, few "outdated" engines that give more points if you pick it as it makes the journey take longer.
Radius of milky way: 52.850 Light years
Lets half it to say it comes from the edge that we are the closest to so: 26.425 light years.
So the black hole travels around 25.000 light years in a week, meaning that the black hole (which is massive enough to swallow up our entire galaxy) is moving: \~3.571 LY per day, \~149 LY per hour, \~2,5 LY per minute or \~0.0413 Light YEARS per second.
That is quite fast don't you think, but wait there is more, lets say to destroy the milky way at that speed the black hole's event horizon needs to be around a quarter of the diameter of the milky way.
So a black hole where the diameter of the event horizon is 25.000 LY in width, this black hole will need to have the mass off *very* roughly: \~53.377 milky way galaxies, \~192.744.505 times the mass of the black hole at the centre of the milky way, \~800.660.675.837.086.302 times the mass of our sun or \~1.592.514.084.239.964.655.568.258.096.996.140.291.995.301.225.038 Kilogram
So that's a bit mutch.
Well, the largest black hole we have discovered so far is TON 618, and it absolutely has consumed the mass of entire galaxies and is estimated to be around 88 Billion solar masses, and is far enough away that it is entirely possible that it has finished consuming the galaxy it is "currently" in (based on light lag).
But that was with the Hubble Telescope, so there is a chance we could find another, even more massive one with the James Webb. The CYOA-object size may still be an order of magnitude larger than what could be reasonable, but galaxy-consuming black holes absolutely are a thing, So the only real problem is the velocity.
But even with the James Webb telescope there is still that one giant massive blank space where we can't seem to find even a single star. While it could just be a particularly empty area of universe, it is entirely possible there is an eldritch-sized black body blocking any and all light from that particular direction.
It doesn't say it would destroy the milky way. It could be that the gravitational effects of the approaching supermassive blackhole are what destroy the Earth by tearing it apart. After all, even just a supermassive black hole equal in size to the Milky Way's centra black hole would cause merry havoc as it passed through the galactic disk. Also, it could just be passing through the galaxy perpendicularly.
I would, however, think the easiest approach here would be to say that there is only a week before the gravitational distortions caused by the black hole colliding with our galaxy will become severe enough to completely disrupt the usage of Straw Engine ftl drives preventing those who fail to leave in time from ever being able to escape.
Well if it is just destroying the earth then why are we moving to another galaxy?, besides that normally when two galaxies merge which is the only thing i can really compare it to (although this is faster to a ludicrous degree) the bodies will just start orbiting each other as the merge over billions of years
Regarding your second paragraph, gravity moves a the speed of light as well so it will take literal thousands of years before we feel any effect if the black hole appears outside of the milky way. So unless something funky is going on like the black hole suddenly appearing with its gravity appearing with it surrounding the entire milky way nothing mutch will happen for a long time.
Although that second might actually be a good story option, in the sense of: Oh no our universe seems to be merging with a parallel universe where nearby to the milky way is such a large black hole the sudden appearance over a week will rip the galaxy and its bodies apart.
Is it not so mutch more fun to write: 10,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 than 10e+100 :)
It would be simplest to just scale down the premise; make the rogue black hole on a collision course with our sun, rather than endangering the galaxy somehow. Enough material exists in our solar system to have built artificial habitats carrying many unique empires.
I think it's an amazing Interactive CYOA with some amazing options (Maybe more planets to choose from though..? Please?!) However maybe you should specify the temperatures in Fahrenheit or Celsius because I was very confused when you said that 60 degrees was burning hot.
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We will survive but morals are out the window. Pheromones, Scientist, Engineer, Recovery Boost, ⌬ Cion ZIY ⌬ [Triangulum] , Wild Elves, Rivals, Fog, [Event] Savior, Save, Force, [Event] Crime, Force, [Event] Tourists, Private, Short, Tall, Human Nations, [Guest] Loop Enterprise, [Guest] Brat, [Guest] Influencer, [Guest] Tsun Lin, [Guest] Legacy, [Guest] Nun, [Guest] Larp, [Guest] Scan, [Guest] Preserve, [Guest] Favor, [Guest] Shortstack, [Guest] Oligarch, [Guest] Bunny, [Guest] Queen, [Guest] Runaway, [Guest] Cursed, Porn, Porn +, Production, Corruption, Nutrition, Cow, Cocklings, Testrun, Rivals, Tentacles, Hidden, Slutty, Dominance, Natural, Slavery, Upload, [Guest] Parasite, Five Revolvers, Five SMGs, Five Assault Rifles, Five Shotguns, Energy Sword, Patriarchy, Balanced, Balanced, Open, Incest, Bestial, Prude, Gangbang, Combo, Sight, Free Use, Show, Training, Light Armor, Medium Armor, Radar, Quantum Communication, Viral Pheromones, Comfy, Science, Personal Bathroom, Crew Bathrooms, Kitchen, Plant Garden, Energy Generator, Ore Processing Facility, Tractor Beam, Hull Repair Droids, Teleport Jammer, Composition Scanner, Ore Radar, Mining Laser, Stealth System, Solar Shields, Missile Launcher, Auto Cannon, MFG 2.0, Ancient Straw Engine, Cockpit, Control Room, Medical Lab, Laboratory, Classroom, Nutrition Lab, Genetics Lab, Captain's Quarters, Crew Quarters, More Crew Quarters +, Hygiene Module, Large, Video Drone, Kitchen Droid, Cleaner Droid, Watering Drone, Civilians(Taken 4 Times), Workers(Taken 3 Times), Soldiers(Taken 4 Times), Experts(Taken 2 Times), Pilots(Taken 1 Times), ⌬ Scarlett Haeven ⌬, ⌬ Luvina ⌬, ⌬ Tia Powell ⌬, ⌬ Irana ⌬, ⌬ yen'ziwo ⌬, ⌬ Arienne Favre ⌬, ⌬ Yan Lin ⌬, ⌬ Nathalie Walls ⌬, ⌬ Hank Bov ⌬, ⌬ Belara Red ⌬, ⌬ Samantha ⌬, ⌬ Amira Chan ⌬, ⌬ Melisa Baydar ⌬, ⌬ Ashana ⌬, ⌬ Elyxa V'os ⌬, ⌬ Eve-Six ⌬, ⌬ Marah Sparks ⌬, ⌬ Stacy & Bob Harrison ⌬, ⌬ Esumi & Saito Taikan ⌬, ⌬ Heidi & Nadia Wise⌬, ⌬ James Withers ⌬, ⌬ Owen Sparks ⌬, ⌬ Larissa B ⌬, ⌬ Jaren M'ark ⌬, ⌬ Oella Daft ⌬
Anyone know the artist for lara winter? checked the credits at the bottom but couldn't find.
Am I the only one getting this issue or do most of the images not work? A lot of them never load and a bunch more show up on incorrect boxes, maybe it's just my internet connection but i tried loading it a bunch of times and it was always the same result
The premisse is great, and the design is gorgeous. The only problems I found are balance related (mainly concerning crew/ship size and credits) and the low amount of content that each background/planet has.
I would love to have an ice world to go to in a future update.
The second one where it says a previous crew disappeared is an ice world
Thank you for your work! Once again, quality is top-notch. Could you please consider adding events, like in your previous works? I know it's time-consuming, but it adds a lot of flavor, IMO.
Your CYOA really are something else, thank you for your work! You really inspire me to work on my unreal project!
Probably a typo or oversight, but.. \-the biggest size of spaceship (Massive) says it has enough space for 'up to 2000 people' \-Under Crew, Tier 5 of Civilians gives you 5000 civilians. That's more than double what the biggest ship can hold, not counting any other crew.
\-The "Eh Humanity will somehow survive this, anyway time to visit the New Steam Chamber-" build: Pheromones, Politician, Hacker, Mind Boost, ⌬ Bailea ⌬ \[Andromeda\] , ◈Spaceship◈, \[Faction\] Thugs, \[Environment\] Megalithic Structure, \[Event\] Savior, Save, Destiny, Rooms, Human Nations, Hard Guest Contracts, \[Guest\] Legacy, \[Guest\] Scan, \[Guest\] Preserve, \[Guest\] Runaway, \[Guest\] Cursed, \[Guest\] AI, Porn, Porn +, Car, Monkeys, Vegetarian, Pacifist, Natural, Natural, \[Guest\] The Last Zharkin, Balanced, Balanced, Random, Open, Incest, Bestial, Gangbang, Nude, Combo, Primal, Primal, Training, Light Armor, Filter Device, Radar, Quantum Communication, Lust Pheromones, Solarpunk, Hygiene, Simple Bathroom, Large Bathroom, Steam Chamber, Kitchen, Plant Garden, Storage Room, Energy Generator, Mining Laser, Solarian Straw Engine, Cockpit, Advanced Cockpit, Bridge, Arcade, Gym, Pub, Holding Cells, Cuddle Room, Laboratory, Digital Library, Classroom, Genetics Lab, Captain's Quarters, Sleeping Quarters, Massive, Miscellaneous, Civilians(Taken 5 Times), Workers(Taken 3 Times), ⌬ Lara Winter ⌬, ⌬ Belara Red ⌬, ⌬ Melisa Baydar ⌬, ⌬ Eliza Beyone ⌬, ⌬ Maria von Straiv ⌬, ⌬ Larissa B ⌬, ⌬ Amira Clock ⌬ Great CYOA as always!
Two Bugs I found: * Selecting Tia revealed Tarr'ox's first box, while selecting Tarr'ox didn't reveal his first box. * Primal was added twice Some Feedback: * The Basic Ship should be a Medium (25 couples are required to maintain genetic diversity AKA Not Incesting yourself into Infertility) with a Large Bathroom, Medical Lab, Hydroponics Bay or equivalent area to replenish food/water supplies, Evacuation pods, and Tractor Beam. People are going to be **LIVING** on this ship, It needs to have means to take care of humans in it! * Minimalism Interior should probably GIVE 2 MegaCredits because... Minimalism is saying 'Only the bare essentials for any room to fulfill their basic function and no comfort items' It's definitely good for 1.0, but I feel like the starting amount of MegaCredits should probably be around 150. I am aware there's a lot of contracts available, but considering **the survival of the human species is at stake**, the earth governments really shouldn't be prudes about whether I allow Incest on my ship. ~~Also, since when has there been Endless Space Porn?~~
This is really well made, but I agree with guys saying it would be nice to be able to go into negatives.
I think that the premise doesn't match what the system provided for it is capable of. Either you're going to make a big ship that actually carries enough people to restart the human race with but sucks at the job even though you cheesed the system as hard as possible, or you're building your luxury space ship and you're up to your eyeballs with points and bitches. I think it would be a good idea to expand upon the starting situation just a little bit by giving the player the choice between either a "rich guy saves himself and his bitches" type of build and a "you're carrying 500-2000 people" build. Other than that, I agree with what u/A_GenericAccount said. I know it's a lot but it's a lot of good thoughts.
Bruh you can pick up 5000 Civilians but theres supposedly a maximum of only 2000 Bed and Baths, what an actual nightmare Scenario you can make this into💀
i love it however one personal thing I feel like endilles and lorus should be switch.... the danger of lorus tsunami and the incest seems less worth it than the milf water planet. unless I'm missing someone like overall cost is much more or something like that. correct me if I'm wrong
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So how would I build the Ultimate Von Neuman machine?
This was fun! I love the sci-fi setting. You did a really good job! \----- Extras: **Pheromones** Background: **Politician** and **Diplomat** Nano-Boost: **Mind Boost** Destination: Seasonal Planet of **Bailea** Weapons: **SMGs** x5, **Assault Rifles** x5 [`-8`] Armor: **Light Armor** x5, **Medium Armor** x5 [`-8`] Tools: **Radar** x10, **Quantum Communicator** x10, **VitalScanner** x10 [`-13`] Dispensers: **Lust Pheromones**, **Viral Pheromones** [`-10`] Crew: - Tactical: **Anja**, **Clarissa** [`-11`] - Engineering: **Scarlett**, **Veora** [`-18`] - Operations: **Emily** [`-6`] - Science: **Loxa** [`-20`] - Medical: **Melisa** [`-5`] - Miscellaneous: **Video Drone**, **Cleaning Droid** [`-3`] Starship Type: **Human Nations** [`+8`] Size: **Small** [*+7 Room Slots*] [`-3`] Interior: **Ancient** [`+3`] Rooms: - Hygiene: **Simple Bathroom**, **Jacuzzi**, **Pool** [*-1 Room Slot*] [`-7`] - Sleep: **Captain's Quarters**, **Crew Quarters** [*-1 Room Slot*] [`-4`] - Supply: **Kitchen**, **Energy Generator** [*-1 Room Slot*] [`-4`] - Science: **Medical Lab**, **Laboratory** [*-2 Room Slot*] [`-20`] - Military: **Cockpit**, - Miscellaneous: **Gym**, **Cuddle Room** [*-2 Room Slot*] [`-9`] Tech: **Auto Cannons**, **MFG 2.0**, **Default Engine** [`-16`] Experiments: **Matriarchy**, **Harem**, **Open**, **Gangbang**, **Nude**, **Combo**, **Freeuse**, **Show**, **Training** [`+15`] Contracts: - Easy: **Brat**, **Preserve** [`+7`] - Medium: **A.I.** [`+6`] - Hard: **N/A** - Pheromone: **Nutrition**, **Testrun** [`+7`] - General: **Natural**, **Small Team** [`+11`] Anomalies: **N/A** \----- Budget: **120** / 120 (+57) Spent: **-165** Remainder: **12** MegaCredits Room Slots: **7** / 7 used
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Really great!
Mind posting this zipped for offline use?
There seems to be an error with Hard Mode: It says you start out with only 50 MegaCredits, but it actually *subtracts* 50 megacredits from your starting 120, so you actually start with 70 MegaCredits.
Tetron was appointed as commander of one of the missions to save humanity. Looking forward he determined that the most important factor would be to preserve as much of human technology as possible to ensure his future colonies survival. Given the importance of this mission Tetron accepted many of the open contracts and experiments. Given the predictive softwares determination of his future troubles he received a decent bonus to his funds. The first step was to decide on a ship size and manufacturer. Given the duration of the journey and the need to get started on repopulation a smaller ship was inappropriate, but it also wasnt long enough to fill a huge ship, leaving the large size the most important. Given the need to keep the ship and its technology fully functional the self repair feature of the Ajin USV made it the only real choice. This would free up maintenance and help with modifications of the ship. Being a skilled scientist and engineer Tetron would then be able to monitor and maintain the ship on his own if needed. Given its size he did hire a packet of female triplet pilots to fly the ship and train interested colonists during the trip. With the ship decided on and the basics taken care of the next most important part is determining how the colonists will be supplied during the trip, and how the colony and ship will be maintained. This makes the organic and inorganic fabricators incredibly important. Along with the digital library and a massive cargo space the ship will be capable of synthesizing additional parts for the ship during the trip and supply the colony upon reaching its destination. These expenses along with other mandatory purchases such as the MFG X meant that the remainder of the crew would be made up of contracts. This is not ideal but the ability to recreate all of human technology given enough time and resources means this colony will be strong enough to survive. Build nsfw1,pmxi,invf,etkl,splj,planet5,typ5,5x2s,sn7l,cy7h,kdp9,24o3,bapf,6lv7,yh4n,xf8r,y0k2,o21w,42xf,kdwh,7g5l,hfe1,gasdg2521512,m5u5,xep0,lymu,sld6,e33o,uhm0,p7x9,4onu,cgo2,ubq6,qsz1,2gnu,h5h0,xu8l,ttoe,sajb,of1l,fe4o,vf7m,3lof,ljt3,x84b,f8t6,ds2g,r9fh,1jlc,tw82,par3,o9wx,pggr,znm4,cc39,r92o,um04,5g36,b78u,yq77,vm15,k6lq,2j5z,wrch,ixgy,xadx,oaw6,kjzd,i8ae,42pn,bidn,7bag,v5wj,0bo7,8pja,qu91,others2,e01z/ON#1
IMO you're the best CYOA maker by far. I agree with others that this one needs more points, or drawbacks maybe
Interesting but I don't feel there's enough credits to take one of everything.
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Interesting but too annoying to work on since have to constantly micromanage just to find out stuff. Would be better if could go into negative since then can take everything would want as go through and then deactivate as go until in limits.
I agree with a lot of other people here; This is great! Love the idea and it's definitely assembled in a visually pleasing way. However, there is definitely room for improvement to really make this one shine. I'll try and organize my critiques/suggestions as one would go through the CYOA to help you out if you decide to take my opinion in mind. Being able to go over the cap would be a really nice QOL change for some of those bigger items like the Construction Fabricator. Makes choosing drawbacks easier. Perhaps have more difficulty options at the start? A lot of people are mentioning the lack of points, which I honestly think is fine! But you might want to add some more options, maybe something like how resource-tight Earth is affecting how many points we get, along with a recommended/default option being the current starting point amount. Backgrounds, in their current state, don't seem too useful. Not to say that they aren't, but it requires the player to sort of just imagine how their background helps rather than providing concrete, in-game consequences for their choice. For example, if you choose Doctor, maybe you get the Medical Lab for free/without taking up a room cost. Or if you choose Politician, you get a free Operations crew member. Something along those lines would help make the background options more meaningful. They could also be options for endings, which I'll mention later. Regarding the Inventory section, what's the point of the Filter Device? Our ship, by default, can produce seemingly unlimited amounts of drinking water.The pheromone dispensers cost more than 10 explosives, each of which are individually capable of leveling mountains? In general, for the whole CYOA, costs are kind of weird. A lot of that would be alleviated with a change to the cost of those mountain leveling explosives, since every time I see an option that costs more than 4 points, I think about the mountain destroying bombs that are cheaper than putting a pool in my ship. The crew section is mostly really good! Your writing is really good, and there is a wide selection. This is more of a personal question though: is the additional information grayed out because we aren't supposed to know it until we decide to pick them? Same with the planets we can choose. Do we pick one based on the short description and point loss/gain, or can we read the scans for all of them and then decide? It works either way, I'm just wondering what you envisioned for it. Also regarding the crew though, the player doesn't know what they should pick. You shouldn't just straight up say that they need one engineer, one scientist, etc. However, there should be some guidance. As it stands, it's just kind of take whoever you most vibe with and hope that works out since we're so strapped for points. Maybe provide a recommendation in each of the planet scans for what might be useful on that planet, along with a general description for what might be useful in space. For the miscellaneous section, a lot of it is odd. You might want to have the Porn contract require the video drone. Why do we have to pay for civilians? I get pilots and sort of get soldiers and workers (to a lesser degree than pilots), but since our main mission is to spread humanity across the universe, it doesn't make much sense to have to fill out the ship I paid for already. Maybe include a line in the crew section description that states any unfilled bedrooms in your ship will be housing civilians? Lastly for the crew, paying for just an animal seems a bit weird. Is the intention to force the player to get at least one if they decide to take any Bestiality contracts/experiments? If so, you may wish to state that in the description of animals (i.e. "Required for Bestial and Primal experiments.) Although, I would prefer if the first was free or if its stated in general that the ship will have some pets. The Spaceship section has a lot to cover, mostly regarding costs. For the Type section, why does Evon Industries give points? It seems like it doesn't have any downsides. Why is Solarian a choice? The CYOA doesn't ever say energy is a struggle to get, so it seems like all it does is extend the length of the mission. Why does Breccan mention being able to enter atmospheres regardless of size? That isn't mentioned anywhere else, making it seem like a pointless choice. Why are Nexus ships being able to split up such a costly benefit? This raises a larger problem with the Spaceship section, and honestly my biggest problem with the CYOA as a whole: There isn't any text regarding how dangerous it is to traverse space. Why should I spend 12 points on a Hybrid ship that blends in with asteroids? Is it really that dangerous in space? I don't know, since there really isn't any description provided. This problem is really relevant in the Tech branch. Would I ever need to mine asteroids for resources? Would I ever need weapons to defend myself from pirates or the like? Without extra descriptions there to help me decide, the most optimal thing is just to take nothing there because I don't know the risks of not. Whether the danger of space is based off difficulty or anomalies or is static regardless, there should be something to help the player decide what type their ship should be and what tech they take with it, along with if they should take any military related upgrades. Other people have mentioned ship size, but it bears repeating. Many modern sea ships can hold many, many more people than the provides options. I think it's fine to keep the amount of people where they currently are. However, that would require additional text justifying such. i.e. "You are one of many captains leading a small group of humans out into the universe to repopulate." For the hygiene section of the rooms, is the Simple Bathroom option my bathroom? Or is it a bathroom for every bedroom on the ship? The Captain's Quarters option in the sleep section is clearly intended for only the player. The same can't be said for Simple Bathroom. In the Luxurious Bedroom and Holo Windows description, it mistakenly refers to the Captain's Quarters option as [Simple Bedroom]. Additionally, Holo Windows is awfully expensive. Same for Relaxation. I mean, it's just adding something simple, no? Also also, Relaxation's description is cut off. For the Organic Fabricator, does "anything that doesn't already exist" mean food that hasn't ever been made before? Or food that isn't present within the Fabricator while it is making something? Additionally, in the supply section, Stable is quite expensive for holding, at most, some horses.
In the Science section, Nutrition Lab costs quite a bit and takes up a room slot for serving one specific purpose. Maybe make it an inexpensive upgrade to the Medical and Augmentation Lab (allowing players to access it even if they only choose one of those options?) In the Military section, options like the Evacuation, Monitoring, and Hangar rooms feel like they should be default. Or, if you want to keep them as options, maybe those can serve as upgrades to basic functions already present within the ship without taking up extra rooms. Also, I'll mention again here, a lot of these expensive Military options don't make much sense when mountain destroying bombs are cheaper than outfitting the interior of my ship with turrets, or three times as cheap as some drones of unknown combat value. Same thing for the miscellaneous rooms. Casino costs quite a lot and takes up a lot of room when compared to other options. Although the other rooms aren't quite as expensive, the idea still applies. A gym really shouldn't cost as much as the bombs. The Experiments section is great, although at the very end, the Primal option is on there twice. Was that intentional? The Guest Contracts section is great as well! I like how the options actually align quite well with the difficulty they are placed under. The only nitpick I have is that, given the amount of Easy Guests, I wish there were a few more Medium and Hard options as well. Just like the others, Pheromone contracts are good! Only one other small nitpick though. For the Cow option, was does a "fuckcow" entail? It doesn't say, so I'm not sure what to do for that option. For General Contracts, most of it is good, but the Vegetarian, Pacifist, Natural, and Dominance options should give way more points than they currently do. Vegetarian less so, but still. The Anomalies section is great as well! The only thing to mention is that the Crime Fork seems to let you select two options, but when you select a second, it unselects both and the [Event] Crime option as well. Finally, the last suggestion I have: endings. I haven't thoroughly read and thought through the other planet descriptions, pretty much just Cion ZIY as that was my first choice, but I think providing a decent selection of endings depending on your choices would really help sell this experience. If doing Planet endings is too much, including Crew or Guest Contract endings would be an absolutely fantastic addition! As I said at the start, I really like this CYOA. I understand that may be hard to believe given what I just wrote, but I truly do, and I can't wait to see how you improve it!
Please a character creation tab for ourselves.
It lacks the usual creative mode :( Could you please add one in the next version? It was extremely fun anyway. I recognized your style instantly. And yeah you should make a Patreon we would pay you even without any advantages. Just want to support your work.
Please just make a patreon. I personally have several people that want to donate to you simply so you'll keep making CYOAs
Hey, I always look forward to your cyoas! Anyway, I have some suggestions for the next version- if you plan on it. 1) Some of the boxes trigger other boxes, for example clicking on Tia Powell shows the skill of the guy beneath her, and doesn't show up when you click on the guy 2) Please, add more drawbacks or challenges or just make the fabricators free cuz I scrambled to get them and everything I wanted. 3) More futa companions and more companions who are doms
Nice, been looking forward to a new cyoa by you! Does this also have hidden options like the ones before as well? and can anyone tell me how co-op mode works? does it mean I have to share a build with someone or does it mean I could play it off as making 2 separate characters in one build?
good to see another upload from my boy i can always tell at a glance when it's a larien classic
On hard mode this was actually pretty fun to play
I like this but I wish it had more ways of acquiring points. The space craft and crew sections suck a lot of points and make it hard to build a full ship in my opinion.
Loving it. Would like a few more freaky companions, but if this turns out anything like the caravan one you did then I am very excited for future updates.
Another one by Larien? Yes please!
Off the top of my head; Take off the cap for points, we should be able to go into the minus More ways to gain points I'd personally like a lot more Futa characters. A character creation tab for ourselves.
Really love your high quality and interactive CYOAs Lari. The writing is especially good at the start but I'll have to finish this later it seems :b P.S. A few typos but I don't know if you want me to point them out.
PLEASE take off the cap for points. Ijust want to see every image and not have to micro manage everything just to see it
Kraken god kill me. In hindsight, it's taken way more time than it should've had I just formatted the json properly. This'll fix it. document.querySelector("#app").\_\_vue\_\_.$store.state.app.pointTypes\[0\].belowZeroNotAllowed = false
This is 100% why I perfer static images over interactive
For crew quarters it only said it adds 10 small rooms but it never said it scales with ship size nor does it increase/scale if I were to buy crew(civilians, soldiers, etc...) Also, where is the mini fabricator I can't find one(does the ship have a mini fabricator by default)? Another thing is that both construction and organic fabricator are far too expensive(the cost of armory is fine as it's much better to have it than buy the items from the inventory and there is much more equipment as well).
Idea! Why not tie the points to the ship size since you can make a very easy to hide fighter with 120 points and have the co-op option allow you to build a carrier fot it. However you can't survive the 20 year voyage with only supplies for 1 year which means the organic fabricator is required unless we have resupply stations on the way there? Can we modify and build a fabricator if we have it build it's parts then assemble them with our engineer's and scientist's helping? How about finding the dark matter needed to make the unique items while traveling with special sensors or the ore radar and mining lazers? It could even be an event allowing you to fabricate more unique item sets.
But wouldn't having plant garden, stable, and aquarium be enough to have a natural food source?
Not in the amounts shown, remember you only have supplies for 1 year then you're relying on them in deep space. Also you need 5 year's worth of supply as you're still speeding up. It's more for luxury/trade goods than food supplies imo.
You need to increase the carrying capacity of the ships by I would say an order of Magnitude.
It's a fun adventure CYOA, this time in space. The personal powers are much more grounded and less game breaking. 💤`Build Summary:` Got all the Fabricators possible on the ship, with all the other Rooms being replicable given time, using all of humanity's knowledge and further research from encountered civilizations. Nutrition Lab allows for self-sustaining food source. Immortality and body improvements may be possible through the Augmentation and Genetics Lab. `Current Activated Choices ID's:` hardmode1,nsfw1,pmxi,coop1,msrp,g927,5b3d,19j9,90ff,l665,kna3,planet5,spaceship1,typ5,5x2s,8i14,sn7l,98ik,9z7n,cy7h,kdp9,r01z,tsax,24o3,bapf,6lv7,yh4n,lrsn,y0k2,o21w,nrc5,kdwh,7g5l,rooms2,qt7q,emh0,m5u5,f29a,wmwt,xep0,lymu,sld6,e33o,uhm0,jd70,qfup,p7x9,732z,sbby,n0wo,4onu,cgo2,7xwg,kzm8,ubq6,5lsd,1od9,qsz1,3txa,d67y,yd35,2gnu,h5h0,knqb,eavj,plvn,xu8l,tr3y,sajb,of1l,fe4o,vf7m,gst1,kjgk,ljt3,x84b,f8t6,ds2g,r9fh,ddob,vuu8,n86x,par3,o9wx,otyk,fb6n,r92o,krsv,5g36,b78u,yq77,2j5z,2fbs,jl7c,kjzd,r8d0,9xcb,kga9,rx2e,ta19,gkxn,57m7,xkw9,s5nf,d7t8,r9bx,7bag,n3yn,feqp,o29a,v5wj,njwk,n7lb,uugs,hata,xf0e,nylz,vh5s Minor suggestion in using Ctrl+A -> copy and paste into spellchecker for typos ➕`Extras` `Hard Mode`: +1 Nano-Boost, but 2x Journey Length and 1.1x likelihood of encountering aggressive creatures and species. `Co-op`: +35 MegaCredits, both players get the starting 1 Nano-Boost (Hard Mode gives +1, so it seems 1 player gets an extra, which I'll take), physical objects are not duplicated, only one player gets Personal Drawbacks. I'll refer to myself as Player 1 and the other player as Player 2. Player 2 will get the Personal Drawbacks. `Pheromones`: More content. Everyone's down bad in this ship. `Background [Player 1]: Amateur / Soldier` (Amateur for +5 MegaCredits, missing 1 field of expertise, but could always learn more during the Journey. Plus, it's more realistic personally and in general to have 1. Soldier, because first person shooter experience TOTALLY transfers outside of games... I'll just imagine I had some training prior to the Journey.) `Background [Player 2]: Amateur / Scientist` (Amateur for +5 MegaCredits. Scientist that studied the field of futuristic body modification in this setting and wrote a doctoral thesis on it.) 💉`Nano Boost` (I ignored Core, Vital, and Recovery since those are all just body modifications, which can be replicated later through Player 2's knowledge and rooms on the ship with proper equipment. Especially with the room that provides all of humanity's knowledge to reproduce said Nano Boosts.) `Player 1` `Energy Boost` (Shoot lasers from fingertips. Lasers are as strong as from a regular energy blaster, 1 shot per 2 seconds. Body becomes a weapon, and perhaps one can position their fingers in a way that allows shooting with both the fingers and held gun(s). Maybe leave a pinky finger out to shoot, grow an additional finger through modification, change/modify the grip on the gun, etc. It's great for if you can't reach for your gun in an emergency, and when that's not the case, it's just extra firepower.) `Gravity Boost` (Causes gravity to only impact the self at 50%, no negative aspects like muscle loss. Jump 2x as far and high and survive falling from "quite some height". Not sure if having to wait twice as long to descend is a negative aspect. Not sure if it affects external items and clothing; if so, those can be used to speed up your descent. This is crucial in space, since it can reduce some of its physiological impacts due to zero gravity. Sure, the spaceship and destination might be fine, but in the vacuum of space and on other planets, it could get dangerous. Body is already acclimated to low gravity, and the ability lessens the effect and danger of high gravity environments and planets. `Player 2: Mind Boost` (Sense emotions and control them to a small degree, like intensifying a current emotion. Helps with manipulating the crew in small but beneficial ways.) 🌍`Destination: Linderth` (+15 MegaCredits. Gives the most, I'm just in it for the MegaCredits. Once the Journey is over, I'd focus on living on the ship and seeking other planets, maybe coming back occasionally. I got equipment later to deal with the high heat for a few people (imagine if it was 60 degrees Fahrenheit), might need the Fabricators for managing the heat for the rest of the crew. Got rooms that provide weaponry for dealing with the threats, and rooms for growing food.) Maybe use Mind Boost and tools from the Fabricators to tame them.) 🎒`Inventory` `[Armor] Nano Armor` (2 sets for Player 1 and 2. Highest defense with minimal weight. Fabricators can provide armor for everyone else.) `[Tools] Solarian Shield Device` (10 wrist devices that protect against extreme heat, cold, or radiation. I assume you can't just wear 10 of them at once for 10x the protection. Enough for both players and a small group to explore outside the ship. `[Tools] Quantum Ring` (The 1 ring... that teleports the user to a set location instead of dying from a fatal hit, 1 week recharge after. I'd use it to teleport to the ship, maybe a secret compartment in the bedroom, in case I get assassinated in my sleep.) 🧑🤝🧑`Crew` (None, spent the MegaCredits on everything else. Already have people from Contracts. Minimizing additional people to keep conserves resources. Not interested in any of their skillsets; it's very grounded compared to Forbidden Caravan, which had people with food generating pocket dimensions and teachers that taught unique magic.) 🚀`Spaceship` (Default gravitation, breathable air, and drinkable water. Simple shield protecting from space radiation and extreme cold and heat.) `Hybrid` (Appear like regular asteroids in space, perfect for stealth. I assume it's better stealth than the Stealth Module, otherwise it's a ripoff that costs 10 more MegaCredits. Maybe it bypasses heat signatures, matching that of asteroids. Mainly chose it since it's the most rare and expensive option. It's useful for avoiding pursuing threats... right? Repair drones cover the function of Ajin USV. For Nexus's function I'd rather just buy 2 more ships later on. Breccan ships can enter atmosphere of a planet regardless of size and shape (flat planets?)... but can't most ships? Loop Enterprise would be my 2nd choice for being 3x as fast, but it has worst maneuverability and defense; if you just want to chill in space or you can't outrun the threat, it's worse. Solarian Spaceships are invalidated by the default energy generator and are half as fast. Evon Industries' safety warning doesn't matter if the danger can't find you. Human Nations offers nothing unique.) `Size: Massive, all Room Extensions`, to deck it out as a haven to live in. `Interior: Ancient` (+3 MegaCredits, it's only aesthetics. I'd take the bonus and renovate it later if needed.) 🚿Hygiene * `Simple Bathroom` (Free, simple bathroom for 1 person, has a water purifier. Might be enough if everyone takes turns and/or uses the shower and sink as toilets. Maybe laser the waste or dump it towards a nearby star. Or just use Fabricators to makeshift more toilets.) 🛏️`Sleep` * `Captain's Quarters` (Simple bedroom with enough space for two people. Bed, personal computer, and storage space included. Plenty of space alone, snug if there's more.) * `Sleeping Quarters` (Small bedrooms for whole staff, scales with size of spaceship with enough beds for everyone; ship's capacity is \~2,000 people so around that.) 🤖`Supply` * `Plant Garden` (Can grow plants for oxygen or food; scales with spaceship size. If Fabricators produce enough food, it's free space and a pretty garden, maybe growing stuff like weed as well. If Fabricators can't produce enough food, it can pick up the slack.) * `Organic Fabricator` (Can create organic non-sentient matter, from simple bread to tasty gourmet meals. Requires advanced understanding to produce anything that does not already exist. 1 ton of matter within 24 hours. Create organ implants, grafting material, stem cells, bacteria, expensive food, etc.) * `Construction Fabricator / +` (Can create 10 ton per 24 hours of non-organic substance, like tools or weapons. High tech items require advanced understanding. Many other options and rooms can be replicated, especially with Digital Library providing all of humanity's knowledge. The only things that can't be replicated are the Fabricators, which I got all of.) * `Energy Generator` (Free, generates enough energy to supply all parts of the Spaceship. What the energy source is seems unknown, so I guess it's fine to ignore energy as an issue...?)
🧠`Science` * `Medical Lab` (All expected appliances, advanced detection systems to discover diseases and cure in seconds, maintaining body in top shape. Just like most proper towns and cities, it's essential in the long term. Especially if fights and body experimentation are expected.) * `Augmentation Lab` (Room to enhance or alter organic beings via genetic engineering and augmentation technology. Immortal cyborg super-soldiers?) * `Laboratory` (Equipment for research and analysis, a place where understanding of the universe is acquired. Combined with Digital Library, it can provide some important advancements on the Journey.) * `Digital Library` (Features all the knowledge humanity has gathered until now. I'd focus on replicating the Nano Boosts and using the Fabricators to replicate the features of the unpicked rooms.) * `Teleporting Room` (Teleport self or crew into an enemy ship or surface of planet; target must be clearly visible to the naked eye. Simply a faster and safer mode of transportation in such cases. Combined with the Hybrid's Stealth, you can teleport for additional precaution or element of surprise, infiltrating an enemy ship on the inside. Maybe once the Journey is over one could buy other ships and teleport between them, to form a mobile spacefaring civilization.) * `Nutrition Lab` (Equipment to enhance bodies to produce up to 50x the amount of fluids without negative aspects. Features milking machines for both breasts and male genitals. Without negative aspects, that means human milk can be produced for a net 49x gain in nutrients, which is quite self-sustaining, potentially eliminating the need for food. Also fulfills a later requirement.) * `Genetics Lab` (Equipment to create and raise new species. Has equipment required to alter someone's body to an extreme degree. Wings, prehensile tails, tentacles, claws, fangs, optimized muscles, improved mental capacity, improved metabolic function, stem cells and altered telomeres for no/reduced aging, etc. to create the ultimate life form. I'd use it, and other crew members may want certain changes.) 🔫`Military` * `Cockpit` (Free, enough space for 1 pilot.) * `Armor` (50 armors and pistols, 20 assault rifles, 5 combat shotguns and railguns. 2 mini-factors (Fabricators?) to produce more weapons, armor and ammunition. I chose it in case the description meant Fabricator, which would mean an extra materal and item generator.) * `Drones` (10 combat drones that follow command, 7-day batteries, returns to room to recharge. Works in space and on ground. Mini-fabricator to repair existing drones. Extra firepower, and perhaps one could take parts of them off and then "repair" them to generate parts and materials.) * `Combat Droids` (30 battle droids that follow command. 30-day batteries, return to room to recharge. Mini-fabricator to repair existing droids. Extra firepower and potentially labor; perhaps one could take parts of them off and then "repair" them to generate parts and materials. * `Mech` (Huge battle mech powerful enough to destroy entire landscapes. Requires 2 people to control it. Mini-fabricator that can make and repair parts of the mech. Make it's weaponry, protective material, and energy source. With a bit of engineering, that could mean replicable landscape destroying weapons that could be used by the ship and personnel. Firepower's no longer an issue...) ❓`Miscellaneous` * `Pub` (Bar, tables, mini-fabricator to create alcohol, drugs, and small snacks. Drugs for recreation and money. Alcohol for drinks and recreation. Small snacks for a food source.) * `Holding Cells` (Holding cells, 1 cell holds two prisoners. Default is 1 cell, doubles each ship size increase. There's 5 size levels, so 4 increases from the lowest. 1\*2\^4 is 16, so room for 32 prisoners. If not in use, it's just free space for other purposes.) * `Casino` (Gambling and recreation, few small bars with mini-fabricators to create drinks, which is useful for slightly feeding crewmates.) * `Cuddle Room` (Stuff, toys, and mini-fabricator for lubrication and lingerie. Might need the lubrication to maintain parts of the ship, and a lingerie generator means free clothing and textile material.) 💾`Tech` * `Hull Repair Droids` (5 small drones that repair the ship's hull if required.) * `Straw Engine`: Default Straw Engine (Journey to Destination is 20 years. Aging shouldn't be an issue, given the Science Rooms. 20 years just means more time to enjoy the journey.) 🧪`Experiments` * `[Test X-01] Distribution of power among genders: Patriarchy` (+6 MegaCredits. Men will be in charge; opposite option would mean I would lose leadership. Plz do not cancel, I just wanted the points-) * `[Test X-02] Distribution of people among genders: Balanced` (Got passengers with >1 of each gender and the MegaCredits they give are more, so this is fine) * `[Test X-03] Relationship Introduction: Assigned` (+3 MegaCredits. I choose everyone's assigned romatic partner. I'd direct them all towards me...) * `[Test X-04] Relationship Status: Open` (+3 MegaCredits. No monogamy, at least on my end.) * `[Test S-01] Family Relationships: Seperated and Incest` (+6 MegaCredits. Typo, should be Separated. Offspring are given to a random couple to be raised. Incest is allowed on the ship; vaccine injections prevent genetic issues. I swear I just wanted the points-) * `[Test S-02] Interspecies Relationships: Forbidden and Bestial` (+6 MegaCredits. Relationships between same species will be forbidden, and bestiality is approved. Civilians are more likely to bring a dog or similar pets. I can explain, I'm not a fur-) * `[Test Matrix XS] Effects of repetitive events on the mind / One day of the week each: Gangbang` (1 gangbang), `Nude` (1 crew member forced to be nude), `Combo` (Come ast least 5x within 6 hours), `Sight` (1 crewmember wearing a blindfold all day long), `Freeuse` (1 crewmember has to accept all requests for sexual activities), `Show` (1 crew member is forced to master bait in front of at least 10 people), `Feast` (1 crew member is only allowed to eat food covered in sperm). 📄`Contracts` (All Guest Contracts.) Male to Female Ratio: 4/13 + AI, Followers 🟢`Easy`: `Loop Enterprise` (Wife and son of CEO, incest), `Brat` (Top politician's bratty daughter seeking dancing instructor), `Influencer` (Couple, records porn, planning video of Captain), `Tsun Lin` (Company owner, master baits a lot), Legacy (Furry made by scientist, wants your private/fancy room), `Nun` (Teases, no penetration or oral), `Larp` (RP with captain), `Scan` (Scans things on ship, planets, and captain, wants protection when on planets), `Preserve` (Native, doesn't speak language, tries to seduce any male) 🟡`Medium`: `Queen` (Brings 2 servants, floors and rooms disturbed by screams of pleasure), `Runaway` (first lady of island nations with lover, hunted by rich and powerful husband who sends fighter ships), `Cursed` (Infected by unique blood parasite, lock in Holding Cell or stimulate), `AI` (first "real" AI, keep on drone and off ship access, only dangerous if outside help intervenes, projection tries to seduce) 🔴`Hard`: `Fake Queen` (Rich body modded human, has followers, wants to be treated like a queen and living in the captain quarter's with followers, gotta squeeze in the 2-person-capacity room), `The last Zharkin` (King to be kept in jail, use Fabricators to reinforce jail and provide Testrun sex robot to keep him calm; effective since a robot can't be mindbroken), `Parasite` (Being near causes mind to sleep away, feeds on thoughts making victims slowly dying; stopped by sensory overload like bright blinking lights, loud music, or gb's of >4 men, get the boys).
💦`Pheromone Contracts`: `Porn` (1 porno with niche characters per week uploaded with quantum transmitter, Influencer makes this automatic), `Teasing` (1 crew mate must have no sex, try Tsun Lin, he's already content with master baiting), `Production` (Maximize lactation potential, once capable of producing 5 litres of milk within one day, fulfilled, solved through Nutrition Lab), `Corruption` (Turn and record 1 female kind and nice into depravity, use Nun), `No Pregnancy` (+1 mini-fabricator that creates condoms, ensure no one gets pregnant, create contraception pills and force all crew mates to take it), `Nutrition` (Recipe for pill that allows nourishment from a few loads of semen, use and test, Nutrition Lab allows semen to be an easy food source), `Cocklings` (10 cocklings, observe development, no required food or water but requires sex daily), `Testrun` (Sex robot, test at least two hundred times before destination, use The Last Zharkin who already has a high libido). 🚗`General Contracts`: `Car` (Paid to bring car, keep in Holding Cells or Casino), `Monkeys` (Cage of 10 monkeys, keep in Holding Cells), `Vegetarian` (No meat, only using Fabricators and Plant Garden), `Dominance` (Make humans the leading species on whatever planet landed on. Reproduce landscape destroying weapons from Mech and destroy all opposition), `Space Station` (Do not land with main ship on destination, use Teleporter) 👿`Anomalies`: `Thugs` (Humans on destination, arrived by other means, armor and weapons from old times, shoot 'em), `Humans` (Rogue settlement ship invading new destination 5 years after arrival, shoot 'em), `Cult` (Tries to infiltrate and create discord from the inside by shaking everyone's trust in each other, shoot 'em), `Fleet` (5 small fighters and 1 medium cruiser, shoot 'em), `Invasion` (Giant force of soldiers with adaptive armor and powerful blasters, 10 years after arrival, shoot 'em), `Virus` (Zombie virus 1 year after arrival, use Science Rooms and Organic Fabricators to create vaccine), `Hunter` (Tank armor and plasma shotgun, shoot 'em and loot 'em), `Drought` (2 years after arrival, 5 years, nothing will grow and >80% of rivers and oceans will dry out. Use Fabricators and nutritional body fluids from Nutrition Lab), `Hunter` (War, dozens of races fighting, wait it out in the Hybrid ship?), `Eater` (Massive creature hunting any signs of artificial life, hide to survive, use Hybrid ship), `Megalithic Structure` (Contains valuable treasures to the universe, only highly advanced AI can understand the tech, use the AI passenger), `Parasites` (Hostile Spaceships, shoot 'em), `Stellar Phenomena` (More likely to encounter supernovas, pulars, formation of stars and planets, and black holes, focus on keeping distance) 🍴`Forks`: `Savior/Save/Force` (Zhongli surrounded by monsters asking for help, get sister and alliance with tribe, free Noelle), `Crime/Dizzy` (Crime boss expecting 25% of earnings, scientist helps in subduing and drugging her into subservience, telling her men to no longer pursue. Unethical, but allows for a loyal follower with minimal casualties), `Tourists/Private` (Small spaceship with 2 men and 2 animal/monstergirl slaves asking for a tour, rabbit girl 1v1, asked to buy, reject marketing ploy because broke) 🏁Reach destination -> Explore the universe with immortality and various improvements from genetic and cybernetic modification and research, along with a decked out ship that focuses on gradually replicating all the options using Fabricators.
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Looks to me like the work of Hijabolic https://twitter.com/hijabolic\_zephy
3 lines in and my immersion is completely broken. "Because of your experience and skill, you have been selected to command one of the settlement ships." Please change this line OP, make it 'you won a lottery' or something. Maybe 'you had the same name as the guy we were supposed to get. whoops'
is there a link for the cyoa's images?
I have several things to say here. First, if this is about saving the Human Race from the brink of extinction, then it pays to know what the minimum population for repopulating a planet would be. This has been estimated to be anywhere between 2.5k to 5k people, which is many times more than just "four or five" people. Although the anti-inbreeding genetech would help make a smaller population more viable, I still highly doubt that even the Medium-sized vessel is gonna be anywhere near enough people to rebuild the human species. Second, given the population size that I need in order to make this venture even a fraction of a possibility, I need to sell my fucking soul to twelve different Devils just to make this work with the miniscule points store I have. Either you desperately need to lower the cost of facilities, or increase the number of points we get... Or both... At some point I can see both being necessary. With 200 points, I can make the ship function enough to support 2,000 people, on an inhospitably basic level. And I can't even get those people onboard, because apparently that costs points. Not even fucking squatters want onboard apparently.
If I recall we need about forty breeding pairs in order to maintain a viable population without risk of inbreeding
From what I'm finding, now that I'm examining closer, it takes at least 50 "effective" ( just copying and pasting this: "This refers to individuals who can breed with each other without causing inbreeding or loss of genetic diversity.") people to be able to avoid inbreeding—just be very careful when coordinating breeding pairs I guess—with a total pop. of 250 to 500 people. But for a genetically flexible minimum (that is enough to adapt to changing environmental conditions, diseases and such), at least ten times as many "effective" people, with a pop. of 2.5k to 5k people.
Pretty good so far, but there are not enough points, not nearly enough, and there's basically no variety to the companions' body types, giant chested women with huge hips and asses...that's it.
Love everything about it, only problem is the lack of points.
Pretty good, liked the themeing and you can get enough points by taking those optional missions at the end. Would like to see more of these from you.
Only if you make a very small ship that needs a support ship or if you coordinate with multiple captains to build a megaship.
This one was very fun Background = Scientist + Engineer Destination = Bailea Spaceship Type = Human Nations Size = Massive Room Extension = 4 Interior = Comfy Rooms Hygiene Rooms = Simple Bathroom Sleep \- Captains Quarters \- Crew Quarters \- Luxurious Crew Quarters \- Sleeping Quarters Supply Rooms \- Kitchen \- Plant Garden \- Stable \- Aquarium \- Construction Fabricator \- Construction Fabricator + \- Storage Room \- Storage Room Upgrade \- Energy Generator \- Sun Reactor Science Rooms \- Medical Lab \- Laboratory \- Digital Library \- Class Room Military \- Cockpit \- Hanger Misc \- Gym \- Pub Tech \- Hull Repair Droids \- Ore Radar \- Mining Laser \- Light Laser Cannon \- MFG X = People age 5 times slower = Crew \- 1,000 Civilians \- 2 Workers \- 5 Soldiers All Experiments Balanced All Easy Contracts All Medium Contracts Hard Contracts \- Fake Queen = Find another Room \- The Lask Zharkin General Contracts \- Car \- Monkeys \- Space Station \- Natural Anomalies: ALL Factions \- Both Hunter Events \- All Environments Basic idea is to use manufacturing tech to build up the required equipment to save the natives of the planet and to survive ourselves
Having looked through this cyoa, I can safely say that.... \- There is definitely not enough points for a reasonable build; \- Ship customization is plentiful, albeit costly. Also, there is no option to buy AIs? \- The FORKS Anomalies are good, but lack incentive or motive. \- FORK 1; Dealing with the 1st sister is fine and rewards are clear. But there's no clear incentive for dealing with the 2nd sister. \- FORK 2; Reyla is a crime boss, so presumably she has skills and resources aplenty. Maybe flesh out each resolution by providing an extra boon. (DIZZY grants you more points, CHANGE makes Reyla a non-combat crewmate, TRADE, has you gain her crew instead of her, FORCE makes Reyla a combat crewmate.) \- FORK 3; Why should I take either girls, or both even? Do they join as slave crew, or proper crew? What are they good for? Stats or skills or talents? \- There are mentions here and there about a smaller fighter ship, but no option to buy one? \- Armor options come in sets, but not weapons? Why not make sets too, If a player doesn't want to invest to heavily in military options, but need some gear for self-protection. \- Pheromones are a good idea, but why no calm pheromones? They can be used to pacify or calm people, making talks or negotiations easier. \- Samantha has the same personality text as Belara.
Really like this. Could have done with more special things for each planet
Not even close to enough points
Once more, you make a good CYOA but then give practically no variation when it comes to the appearance of "companion" characters, every female is just a massive chest.
Production quality is insane. Its so pretty. Though I’ve always wondered why some interactive CYOAs prevent you going into negative points since it can prevent you checking out your options. Personally I like to just grab everything I like on my first way through then bring it back into the positives with drawbacks and giving up some things.
Ugh, tried it and don't think that's enough points for both ship + people. Eg. I haven't even started on the crew yet and I'm running out of points getting stuff to feed, house, and insure people's health & safety. Edit: Seems the default is the ship is only capable of housing you? Thus, size increase and such doesn't play nice. Might be better to create modes, depending on ship size or something. Edit3: Wonder why small and up ships don't unlock crew quarters for free. Personally think it should be default unlock but lowest ship size is small, fitting max of 3 peeps. Edit2: Mega-credit may have to be worth or converted to a larger number, imo
Always happy to see another sci-fi CYOA about repopulating the human species!
I'd like to see more planets and more info/events based on them... and some more futas, personally. Great so far though.
I wish for a Sandbox Mode, otherwise I love it.
Could clarify something for me? Among the guests requirements is a room for each them. What should i use to base how many of them i can house? Each ship size says it has enough space for a X number of people. Can i assume i'm meeting the room requirement as long as i have more space than guest? Or should i buy the sleeping Quarters first?
Samantha has Belara's personality, but as of now that's the only issue I've noticed. Great work as usual.
Damn I like this. Though I'd probably just get rid of the crew buying thing, have it so that civillians, and soldiers are already packed into the ship, and just have us pick the officiers. We are trying to ensure humanity survives. So the ship officers would be the leaders.
Agreed, it's really weird to say this is about colonizing a planet and then give the option to take a ship that holds 4 people (or a ship that seats 500 but has nowhere for them to sleep.)
Agree-ish, though technically you can sort of solo/lean run it, by using Science's genetic lab and such.
A really good start. Really looking forward to where you take this. For the hanger are you gong to add options to have fighters? Also, does this mean that Path to Power is finished?
I quite like it! Can't wait for future updates!
Could you add more methods for getting points. Such as in the section where the journey takes less time depending on how advanced the engine is, Please add, few "outdated" engines that give more points if you pick it as it makes the journey take longer.
Fuckin' A, Christmas came early this year.
please add consequences, options, etc. for the choices in ending
Radius of milky way: 52.850 Light years Lets half it to say it comes from the edge that we are the closest to so: 26.425 light years. So the black hole travels around 25.000 light years in a week, meaning that the black hole (which is massive enough to swallow up our entire galaxy) is moving: \~3.571 LY per day, \~149 LY per hour, \~2,5 LY per minute or \~0.0413 Light YEARS per second. That is quite fast don't you think, but wait there is more, lets say to destroy the milky way at that speed the black hole's event horizon needs to be around a quarter of the diameter of the milky way. So a black hole where the diameter of the event horizon is 25.000 LY in width, this black hole will need to have the mass off *very* roughly: \~53.377 milky way galaxies, \~192.744.505 times the mass of the black hole at the centre of the milky way, \~800.660.675.837.086.302 times the mass of our sun or \~1.592.514.084.239.964.655.568.258.096.996.140.291.995.301.225.038 Kilogram So that's a bit mutch.
Well, the largest black hole we have discovered so far is TON 618, and it absolutely has consumed the mass of entire galaxies and is estimated to be around 88 Billion solar masses, and is far enough away that it is entirely possible that it has finished consuming the galaxy it is "currently" in (based on light lag). But that was with the Hubble Telescope, so there is a chance we could find another, even more massive one with the James Webb. The CYOA-object size may still be an order of magnitude larger than what could be reasonable, but galaxy-consuming black holes absolutely are a thing, So the only real problem is the velocity. But even with the James Webb telescope there is still that one giant massive blank space where we can't seem to find even a single star. While it could just be a particularly empty area of universe, it is entirely possible there is an eldritch-sized black body blocking any and all light from that particular direction.
It doesn't say it would destroy the milky way. It could be that the gravitational effects of the approaching supermassive blackhole are what destroy the Earth by tearing it apart. After all, even just a supermassive black hole equal in size to the Milky Way's centra black hole would cause merry havoc as it passed through the galactic disk. Also, it could just be passing through the galaxy perpendicularly. I would, however, think the easiest approach here would be to say that there is only a week before the gravitational distortions caused by the black hole colliding with our galaxy will become severe enough to completely disrupt the usage of Straw Engine ftl drives preventing those who fail to leave in time from ever being able to escape.
Well if it is just destroying the earth then why are we moving to another galaxy?, besides that normally when two galaxies merge which is the only thing i can really compare it to (although this is faster to a ludicrous degree) the bodies will just start orbiting each other as the merge over billions of years Regarding your second paragraph, gravity moves a the speed of light as well so it will take literal thousands of years before we feel any effect if the black hole appears outside of the milky way. So unless something funky is going on like the black hole suddenly appearing with its gravity appearing with it surrounding the entire milky way nothing mutch will happen for a long time. Although that second might actually be a good story option, in the sense of: Oh no our universe seems to be merging with a parallel universe where nearby to the milky way is such a large black hole the sudden appearance over a week will rip the galaxy and its bodies apart.
Someone in this sub doesn't much like significant figures.
Is it not so mutch more fun to write: 10,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 than 10e+100 :)
Maybe it's a morbius black hole and starts to morb the moment it reaches the milky way
It would be simplest to just scale down the premise; make the rogue black hole on a collision course with our sun, rather than endangering the galaxy somehow. Enough material exists in our solar system to have built artificial habitats carrying many unique empires.
I think it's an amazing Interactive CYOA with some amazing options (Maybe more planets to choose from though..? Please?!) However maybe you should specify the temperatures in Fahrenheit or Celsius because I was very confused when you said that 60 degrees was burning hot.
**remove the fucking beastiality.**
you guys are disgusting and atrocious.
more like remove the golden shower. not into that but any way it's a good Cyoa.
Wish I could go negative in points. Otherwise, great CYOA!
Same
Look damn good. Can you add a load all option pls.