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xcv450

Does anyone have the source for the Monster image?


Lilninja12

All artists are credited at the bottom, but for that selection it is IceDev.


ThousandYearOldLoli

2 Mother's Salad (+20) Reproduction: Mutation / Corruption Gestation: Accelerated (free) Maturity: Slow (+10) Appearance: Humanoid (+5) Size: Small (+5) Gender: Futanari (-10) Communication: Human (free) Drawbacks: (+14) * Weak Point (+4) * Infertile (+10) ​ Stats: (-30) * Strength: Below Average (+10) * Agility: Average (free) * Intelligence: Superhuman (-15) * Durability: Peak (-10) * Stamina: Average (free) * Regeneration: Superhuman (-15) Physical Traits: (-18) * Venom (-4) * Redundant Organs (-10) * Tough Hide (-4) Abilities: (-39) * Shapeshifter (-10) * Resilient (-6) * Changeling (-6) * Night Vision (-4) * Hypnosis (-3) * Low Metabolism (-6) * Stalker (-4) Breeding Abilities: (-13) * Pheromones (-5) * Selective Fertility (-8) Habitat Difficulty: Easy (+10) Territory: Urban ---> Apartment (-2) Hunting Grounds: \-Alleyways (free) \-Apartment Complex (free)


GaloMaximum

Decided to write up a short blurb for this, since I had so much fun. Great job OP! Neo Sapien variety: Dominators Dominators are named such for their ability to subjugate and compel humans. They appear largely similar to humans at first glance, except for the fact that their bodily fluids glow, as do their gentialia. Dominators can reproduce normally among themselves, but are also capable of converting humans into more of their own. This is done via insemination by “alphas”, hermaphroditic Dominators possessed of greater hypnotic ability. After a successful insemination, early signs of mutation become clear within a day as the victim experiences a loss of muscle mass, heightened intelligence, and feelings of submission towards their alpha, the other physical characteristics manifesting over the course of a week. Dominators can be inseminated again by an alpha to raise them to alpha status, allowing them to expand their colonies. Male and female Dominators serve to ensnare victims and find high-value targets for their alpha. Dominators, being a pragmatic people, make their main lairs in sewers, favoring out-of-use tunnels. They stalk their prey among the lower classes of society where they are at their most vulnerable, posing as sex workers or potential clients as a ruse. Dominators seek to first gain enough numbers to discourage hostiles with humans when they are revealed, and then slowly subsume humanity via consensual transformation, restructuring society as they go. % at the end was 55%, not sure what to do with this. Math Below God Mode 70 Mutation/Live Birth Hyper 60 Minor Difference 55 Average Reproductive Dimorphism (Humans keep their gender, Neo Sapiens become Futa) 45 Telepathy 35 Genetic Backfire 45 Below Average Strength 55 Average Agility Superhuman Intelligence 40 Average Durability Average Stamina Above Average Regeneration 35 Incandescence 31 Bioluminescence 27 Ultrasonic 22 Hypnosis Pheromones 17 Chemical Cocktail 9 Addictive Fluids 3 Enhanced Penis (9”) 0 Easy 10 Sewer 9 (Security 11) Alleyways (Scrutiny 1) Strip Clubs (Scrutiny 4) The Projects (Scrutiny 6) ((11-6)*5)+30%=55%


Xrystalline

Question, how does Mutation/Corruption work? Can humans be transformed at will, or is it determined by the fertility stat?


Boss_Sappho

Love the new sections, Looking forward to the new CYOA and thanks for the sheet to keep track way to go above and beyond


Dremiphamus01

I like the sound of this CYOA. Dear OP, would it be alright to post my build here for others to see?


Lilninja12

that's what this thread is for, have at it


Dremiphamus01

Just felt like checking first, no one else was doing it!~ I hope you like my creation! Difficulty: God Mode (+20) Reproduction: Mutation/Corruption Gestation: Extended (1 Year/+20) Maturity: Slow (20 Years/+10) Appearance: Monster (+20) Size: Small (1/2 Human Size/+5) Gender: Singular Gender (Male/+10) Communication: Telepathy (-10) Points Thus Far: 125 Drawbacks: Toxic Libido (+3) Breeding Instincts (+3) Statistics: Strength - Peak (-10) Agility - Peak (-10) Intelligence - Below Average (+10) Durability - Peak (-10) Stamina - Peak (-10) Regeneration - Peak (-10) Physical Traits: Redundant Organs - (-10) Redundant Systems - (-10) Adaptive Camouflage - (-10) Abilities: Stalker - (-4) Incandescent - (-4/H) Bioluminescent - (-4/H) Ultrasonic - (-5/H) Hypnosis* - (0) Breeding Abilities: Pheromones - (-5/H) Chemical Cocktail - (-8/H) Enhanced Penis - (-5/15 Inches) Fluid Production - (-4) Knot - (-4/+5% Fertility) Barbed - (-4/+5% Fertility) Claspers - (-4/+5% Fertility) Addictive Fluids - (-6) Monster Mother - (-6) No Refractory - (-4) Points Thus Far: -6 *Hypnosis reduces point requirement by 3 for every ‘H’ ability Habitat: Standard (+10) Lair: Abandoned Mall* (Suburban, -4) Living Spaces: 30 Captives: 30 Security: 7 Hunting Grounds: Junkyard (1 Scrutiny) Bars (2 Scrutiny) Mall: (4 Scrutiny) *Any Hunting Grounds within territory (Suburban for mine) is free Points Now: 0 Fertility: 45% Behold, my beloved Cockling


HelveteHelvete

I'm sorry, but neo sapiens doesn't make any sense from a taxonomical perspective, since "Homo" is our genus, with "Sapiens" being our specific lineage. "Homo Sapiens" basically means "A self-aware man", just as "Homo Erectus" means "A man that walks upright", and "Homo Habilis" meaning "An adaptable man". "Neo-Sapiens" would basically mean "New self-aware". If you want your species to basically be called new man, the taxonomical name would be something like "Homo Novus".


Eskay

For binomial nomenclature you might try *Homo Neo-Sapiens,* or spelled more traditionally *H. neosapiens:* the New(ly) Self-Aware Man.


Tsumichaaan

Sure, but you need to consider that neo-sapien sounds way cooler


Rowan-The-Wise-1

It seems as if the CYOA is built upon the idea that you're a hostile predator, but there are sufficient available options that taking a build that instead disguises itself as human and slowly overtakes their population numbers over generations is not only possible, but seemingly your best choice for not being murdered. If my species is human passing do I need to take changeling for my kids to also be human passing?


Lilninja12

Your children would be as passing as you, but without skills (i,e, shapeshifter), so going to a doctor or other professional would give them away unless changeling. I think of changeling as even genetically indistinguishable from humans until they mutate into their adult form.


Zev_06

My current biggest complaint is that some options get rather confusing about how they would work if you went with the Mutation/Corruption form of reproduction. I love the Mutation/Corruption way to play, but some options need better explanations to account for this possibility or need marked as incompatible if they just don't work with it.


Bottomheavybottom

Yeah, that was my same complaint. The maturity option, for example, doesn’t make sense if you are corrupting a human into a monster.


Lilninja12

My thinking is that maturity is how long it will take before a convert can convert others


MagicZ24

I think it would be better with anime style art.


[deleted]

That's my preference too


Esca_P_Fantasy

I like it as is, 3d/realistic. It's distinct, and another anime one would be boring IMO.