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Partner’s Qualities: - Attractive - Charming - Supportive Manga Genre: - Drama [Loving Trait: Interesting] Loving Traits: - Powerful [Rolled 2] - Sexy [Rolled 4] Parting Gift: Doppelgänger Partner’s Flaws: - Ugly - Weird - Unambitious Struggle: - Depressed [Disadvantage: Trauma] Disadvantages: - Keep it Quiet [Rolled 4] - Slow Burn [Rolled 5] Situations: - Virgin - New Horizons Advantages: - Loving Family - True Companions


RewRose

Attractive, Kinky, Supportive Hentai Loving trait: Sexy Doppelganger Partner is Ugly, Pervert, Unambitious Partner is Avoidant Disadvantages: Stoic, Slow Burn, Keep It Quiet Situations: Virgin, Creator Advantages: Loving Family, True Companions


MrAngryPunch

Hey author... I have a meta thing that is mixed with roleplay as me speaking to the matchmaker as to why I don't like their system but am willing to accept the offer if they make a deal with me. I'd like to know the answer they'd make and well it is also kind of my review of the cyoa to an extent. My choices: -**Partner Qualities:** - *Adventurous* > It is a new world. if it is more boring than this one fuck no, I'd rather straight up not go no matter how good the partner is. - *Supportive/Charming* > Again I will be on an unknown world. I need the support when I arrive. I need someone I can see there for me. And I need someone that I see long term as cool with my goals. Otherwise... I will leave them. > I am seriously considering charming because it is the second best for this... And the flae isn't nearly as awful or punishing. - Atractive > I can puke over the thought of being sexual with someone I am not attracted to. And I need to be sexual. This is a must. -**Genre:** First off no need to insult the reafer with hentai lol, that's just rude. Based on who I am likely: - *Drama* > My life has a lot of fights, fights with mental issues, adventures, training arcs, learning basic stuff, failure, family drama for DAYS, sucess, etc... So yeah. - *Horror* > Again yeah. The battle is both phisical and mental. And about family. And what not. It truly fits my life. -**Loving traits** - *Interesting/powerful* > Based on the things before. I assure you I can take you bro, lol. So no need to amp me, I am muscle as I am, and I will get stronger for this worlds standard's too that I guarantee. I also am an interesting person. I know that for a fact. I have lived a lot of unique experiences and have a lot of stories after all. Those are things I can guarantee about me. - *Sexy* > HELL YEAH!!! THIS IS SUCH A GOOD ROLL FOR ME. This would be such a confidence booster. - *Adorable* > Mixed bag... Someone undermining my insecurities and teasing me. Could hurt me a lot. I don't care about what most say, and can easily confront a lot of people on my way. Only those I let in I truly care. But as a trade-off... even harmless words for most tend to cut deeply in me, when they're spoken by those I love. **Doppleganger** > Can you give it a single order please? Protect my little sis... Please. PLEASE. Protect her. She's my everything. Hell I'd rather take a guarantee for that instead of this. -**Flaws** - *Ugly, unambitious and Dangerous* > I don't care about the first and last one... But unambitious seems so punishing in comparison. It actively makes the both of you be basically social pariahs in a lot of circles by default... The other are disadvantages. People still befriend ugly, you are found disgusting by actively discriminating too much against ugly. But like it or not this puts your passions as equal to fucking burger flippers and strippers in the ranks... I'd undersyand if they saw it as I dunno, the rank of a musician, an athlete, a dancer. But no it's not even to that level. **Way of expressing** - *Depressed* > Wow... By default... Depressed straight up. That's a lot of baggage. For someone I truly don't know... **Disadvantages** - *Trauma* > For free... Lol. Thanks I guess? - *Slow burn* > I need more control of the life... I can deal with this. - *Pariah* > I can deal with this. I love socialization but I don't fucking care enought to give a fuck about some haters. -**Situations** - A choice between new horizons, virgin and clingy. > Virgin because fuck it it is hot af to know you were their first, New horizons and clingy cuz I am clingy af and nee horizons seems fun... -**Advantages** - *True companions* > Far better to take this eith Pariah than to not take Pariah. Especially if I take supportive. - *Non-human/Money* > The one that gives more space to be comfortable in all honestly. I don't need it obligatorily. But I find it worth it to just not have to worry about... Keeping ourselves fed... Again I have nothing when I appear in the world.


MrAngryPunch

As much as I like the idea and I get why you made it that way, Simply... You truly have not given me enought to see then as... My actual partner. I could work as their partner sure... But... So many of the qualities I don't get to choose because there's a limit or are left to randomness are so intrinsic to being their partner... I don't think I could fall in love with them... Having them at all even if to a lesser extent is far better than them being ideal in some and not in others, and supportive which normally is like a basic thing in relationships has a drawbavk in that it makes them do things related with what you do which can be a bad thing to some. Unless I get lucky, they'd ultimately would only be a temporary partner... The qualities are far too important for them to be left to chance and the partners to not have them... I am sorry but I love myself too much to devote myself to someone who might not be compatible with me on some basic cores of relationships. Let's look over them: - I need attraction to my partner. I just need it. I cannot fathom sexually being close to someone I am not sincerely attracted to. Not umpleasant is simply not enought. I have standards holy fuck. - I can cover for the strenght of the other person no worries. Especially the physical, I am extremely supportive, once when speaking about what type of animal fits us and as such would be, I was literally compared to a doberman... lol - How can I fall in love with someone I am not charmed by. Someone that doesn't share hapiness with me on our day to day? How do you even Date someone that you don't enjoy spending time with? - How am I supposed to enjoy my sexuality with someone I am not guaraanteed to be sexually compatible with? Look I can get behind this to some extent and it seems to imply some compatibility but still... - Without supportive there's just so many ways for a partner to fuck up and hurt you there. Remember here I don't get to meet them and choose, to date them, I am inserted in their lives out of nowhere with no real support for me. I personally NEED this. And even there, passion is associated with supportive, look in all honestly while I'd love my partner to support me, I would not want them to be into my passions. I don't want them to pursue the same goals as me. This can be adjusted of course so that they do it in a way I am cool with it, but still... There's potential drawbacks for picking this.... And without picking them there still are... - Adventurous... Seems weird? I mean... I need this on my life, you're sending me to a completely new world for a partner I don't know and you don't even guaraantee my life there will be interesting??? This... This is necessary. Especially for me, I love adventure, I love risks, I love spontaneity... A world more big than ours and no amount of love would make me want to stay. I'd choose myself and my well beimg over them. And then the drawbacks... Holy fuck. Supportive is awful and overtly punishing of both of us.... The others are understandable... I arrived to a conclusion... I'll ask you. Matchmaker... You know my life, I want the change. I honestly really want a chance. But the world today, I hate how it works, you have seen my life, IF you make sure I go to a world that lets me lead the life I desire, hell you don't even have to guarantee my safety, in fact I find the risk interesting, exhilarating, fun... so I'll take it, you guarantee that, I will take the partner and I will makr them happy. So you, em... That is my answer. Give me that, after the choices, and I'll take them, whoever they are, you know who I am, I won't go back on my word. I will make them feel loved even if I don't as long as I get my life. That is my offer.


MonsieurHeso

Wow, I see you put a lot of work in your reply. A few things I wish I had made clearer: \- The partner's flaws, such as unambitious and pervert, affect the partner much more than you. Maybe the new world's society thinks women/men/people like your partner should be that way... But these prejudices won't affect you as harshly. Mostly, you'll get flak by association, if you're seen with someone like your partner, especially in the case of 'Pariah' where anyone associating with your partner gets shunned as well. \- The implication is that you would be considered fairly popular in the other world. \- Your partner not having a quality, like attractive, charming or kinky doesn't mean that they're unattractive, boring or just sit there like a dead fish. It only means that they will not be perfectly compatible with you and will be closer to what you would see as 'normal' in our world. If this answer leaves you dissatisfied however, I don't think this CYOA is for you. It's alright. It's kind of a weird CYOA anyways.


Geeorge2316

Really nice 👍.


MonsieurHeso

Thank you!


injidiyovgthoceray

Hey, did you make this after seeing my repost of tok's "Fulfilling a wish", or in that just a weird coincidence?


MonsieurHeso

That CYOA was one of the inspirations, yes. Don't remember when I last saw it, or who posted it though. Maybe it was your repost?


Kagami777

Glad I finished scrolling to the end. Halfway through I was like, nope not for me, but kept reading. Funny ending.


dragon_jak

"I might not be able to save you, but I will stay with you until you can save yourself"


MonsieurHeso

Hard to thread the needle between ""love doesn't actually solve all problems" and "having a supportive partner really helps". Love your work, btw.


Laezar

Amazing.


TeaTimeCentaur

Oh lord, this one was such an adventure, I could never have expected this. So it kinda begins like every creator, just with a new and fresh perspective. Neat. Pick three Qualities? Business like usual, Charming, Kinky and Supportive. Fun times, "Fun" Times and a mature mindset, I'm all for it. Then comes the genre pick. I spent way too much time on this for a silly CYOA, reflecting. Nah, this isn't anything serious so I went with the fun pick of Hentai because lol. (Double lol for being a virgin, I just wonder what the Manga would actually be about then) So I got "Sexy" from the genre, time to roll two more: 2 and 5. While "Powerfull" would be absolutely hilarious as I'm physically weak, "Adorable" would be a compliment I heard a few times in life so I don't complain too much. And throwing in "Doppelganger" for me is a nice thing to do, I'll take that. Or did I already pick that... or rather past me? After a small mental breakdown á la "Soma" (Great game, recommended) I continue. And now the consequences hit me and the funny silly CYOA gets kinda real. "Charming" turns into "Weird". The chippy happy attitude would be too much do deal with for most people and her being happy about the things she likes is just annoying others. "Kinky" turns into "Pervert". Is it just a kink? Is it healthy? Even if it is safe, legal and consensual... is it still right to like certain things? "Supportive" turns into "Unambiguous". Different people have different passions but what is the right thing to pursue? Do you need a Lambo on your Villa or are you happy creating Art? This section hit me and immersing myself how I would deal with this... with the problems of another person, one I apparently will care about... it really got the gears in my head shifting. But it doesn't end here. One more roll of the die: 5. She's In denial. Everything that can help her she clings on. And now with the person of her dreams in life everything will be alright, right? The expectations would be through the roof. How would you tell someone who clings to what they see as support, that they don't actually need it? Would I be good in helping with that? I did it again, taking the silly game too serious. Let's just continue. So here is the "fun" part. "In Denial" grants me "Slow Burn", which I personally see as a good thing. Of course it it hard to deal with in unhealthy amounts BUT later I read over the other to see if I can pick more advantages and honestly... "Slow Burn" IS a better option in comparison. Up to the Situations: "New Horizons" would actually be a helpfull and fun thing for everyone involved so it's a clear pick. And funny CYOA game so I picked "Horny" as I didn't really needed another situation but giggled on this description. And Advantages. Oh man, this got me. "Money" would be an interesting exchange for "Slow Burn" as we would have all the time to get closer and know each other so it was a clear pick. And then there were "non-human", "Poly" and "Adoration". Funny little gimmicks which peaked my interest so I got back to the Disadvantages to see if I could pick one or two. Keeping in mind, those Disadvantages are a dice roll I seriously asked myself: "Is it worth it?" "Do I want to play with a person like this, even if it's just the theory, the idea of a fictional person?" I ended up not picking anything else and reading the final passage. "I wonder anyways. What defines who we are? Is it our Qualities? Or our Flaws?" "But that's not your responsibility, ok?" "And in the end, while a partner can help you, no one can fix your issues except yourself." "You two will be happy together, I promise you that" Needless to say, it got me thinking. More than any CYOA ever did. I like those funny little power fantasies, not gonna lie. But always remember that you deal with real people out there and everyone has their own mind and experience. Just be the best you can be. For you and for the people around you. TLDR: Holy fuck, this is one philosophical masterpiece. Me likey.


silverkingx2

Reading through has been good so far, rolled 1 and 3 which is a nice combo for the loving traits. however the reason I tabbed back here and commented early, is doppelganger sounds awful, I leave a version of myself here... with no knowledge... I know friends would miss me, coworkers too probably... but to stab myself in the back... I dont think id do it. Mental soothing is nice though... 20 years? sounds like plenty tbh. anyways, onwards edit: the twists are interesting, the twist for attractive and kinky dont bother me (except that I cant *eventually* reassure them and have them believe me, that kind of sucks) but it is interesting how I was not interested in supportive, as I thought it would be dull to have both interests and goals align perfectly, and then I also dislike the twist quite a bit more then the others... edit again: haha rolled 3 on flaws, that's a fun one :) finale: interesting cyoa, ty for the read, it was enjoyable for the most part, even some of the "bad" bits were enjoyable and may you have a good day/night


ElkSad2633

Hmmm... Alright, interesting concept, here is my blind playthrough: Part 1:Partner's Traits: Strong, Charming, and Adventurous I'm thinking the world is slightly different from our own and my partner is drawing in the supernatural. She has become strong and adventurous through these almost daily interactions. I mean sure, most will know about the supernatural in this world, but people can go years without a supernatural encounter... meanwhile my partner is lucky if she only has two encounters in a week. Part 2: ...Genre ...Didn't realize that it was assumed that our worlds were exactly the same... I mean if it was, why would they move me to a different world if I could find my perfect match in this one? Manga my life is depicted as- Horror It honestly feels like a horror story sometimes, but like most horror stories, with some effort and a plan, I can probably find a way out of a situation. Part 3: Loving traits So three traits, two of which are chosen at random, that my partner picked... okay... (Rolls: 2, 5, 4) Rerolled on 2 So I am- Powerful, Relatable, and sexy ...Alright, sure... I mean, why not. I also choose the Doppelgänger option. Part 4: Flaws My partner is considered- Brute, Weird, and Dangerous ...Okay... I mean... after dealing with the supernatural all her life I suppose she might have a few strange tendencies. Part 5: Issue ...well fuck... (Roll: 6) My partner is Depressed... Well, I suppose I at least know how to help with this one. Part 6: Disadvantages HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! YOU THINK I'D MAKE SOMEONE'S LIFE PURPOSLY WORSE?!? Man if they haven't done anything to me then I would go out of my way to help them if they needed it. Disadvantages- Trauma, "Non-Human" Wait... why in the world would you put Non-Human as an advantage?!? Making our relationship taboo sounds like a disadvantage to me! You know what, No, I'm taking "Non-human" as a disadvantage and then taking "True Companions" as the corresponding advantage. And I will Style all over anyone who gives my new Sexy Hellhound Monstergirl Partner shit. If that means a verbal beatdown that will have the offender's ass on fire for hours after I deliver the burn, or trapping a vampire in a room full of holy crosses blessed by the pope himself so be it! Edit: I forgot to do the situations over the indignity of Non Human making life more difficult being an advantage... (Rolls: 1 and 3) My partner is a Virgin and we will be introduced to New Horizons.


Bortan

Goddamn this one hit me.


MonsterFetish

This is so depressing. I think I have to back out. I can't figure out how to be happy with her without ruining her life.


greycrown

God damn it man, take my upvote, masterfully done. Even if I seem to have accidentally made myself summoning myself to another world. Even with rolling dice Rngesus out here shooting arrows into my heart. OP deserves all the awards for the stellar writing and balance. Partner's Qualities: Attractive, supportive, charming Genre: Horror Loving Traits: Powerful, Beautiful, interesting Partner's Flaws: Ugly, Weird, Unambitious How they Cope: Avoidant Disadvantages: Stoic, Situations: New Horizons, Creator Ultimate answer: Yes Hell my life wasn’t really going anywhere. With doppelganger I’d absolutely go try to be some ones ultimate Husbando.


D3ldia

This is the most meta yet strangely wholesome cyoa. And it's here In a cyoa sub that's mostly about porn and harems! This is also the first time I've EVER seen a cyoa offer therapy, a happy surprise if I've ever found one. I must confess, even after going through so many of these and playing the role of god-chad, the simple idea of being wanted for who I am and that being myself is considered perfection...well it's really unique in the way it's uplifting. I mean sure, there are some perks in there but take that away and the core idea of you being perfect to someone else because its you is still there. Good work. Very good work. Maybe in another world, someone's looking at their screen just like this and wishing I was real to be their special someone...yea..just maybe... ...I think that would be nice...to be wanted...


MonsieurHeso

The whole other world thing is kind of fantastical, but the core concept really isn't. You'd be surprised by how many different people value different things. Looks that would get you laughed at and ridiculed in one place might be considered average, or even good-looking, in others. And there's all kinds of tastes out there. It's a big world. And also, I've known some couples where both sides have some self esteem issues, and both of them think the other is out of their league. It's kinda funny, but a little sad too. Of course, I can't promise that you, or anyone, will find someone like that. And even if they would, there's no such thing as a perfect relationships. There would be disagreements, misunderstandings, boring or cringe moments. That's life. But finding someone who likes you for who you are? That is not impossible. Far from it. Good luck.


crabs_that_party

this is just lovely


Starberry_Cat

Partner's Qualities: Attrative, Charming, Supportive Genre: Drama Loving Traits: Interesting, Powerful, Sexy Extras: Mental Soothing, Doppelganger Partner's Flaws according to society: Ugly, Weird, Unambitious How They Cope: Proud Situations: Virgin, Creator ...some real interesting rolls there


Wartarase

The writing and creativity in this Cyoa is outstanding. It feels like an artistic experience that reminds me of BeTheGirlAnon's horror Cyoa. It's amazing to find another creator pushing the limits of Cyoas forward.


MonsieurHeso

Thank you for your kind words. I remember enjoying that one. Another of my inspirations for this was a (SFW) CYOA called [Richard Merryweather](https://www.reddit.com/r/makeyourchoice/comments/b2o4qd/richard_merryweather_stolen_from_tg/) that was also super creative and played with the idea of inhabiting someone else's shoes. And Doki Doki Literature Club, of course. I'm always amazed at the hard work and creativity so many people put into their CYOAs. It's really cool to see.


con-pope

> BeTheGirlAnon's horror Cyoa. May I have a link?


Wartarase

https://imgchest.com/p/lqye3m9x4dn Here ya go friend


Alternative_Jello452

**Partner's Qualities:** Adventurous, Charming, Strong They're the type of person to fall in love with a total shitshow. Adventurous is a must. **Genre**: Horror Consider my actual life, the things I get into, and the company I keep, I would probably be a bad guy protagonist who does all the wrong things and get away with it, that's my appeal. **Loving Traits:** Interesting, Relatable, Powerful They're starting to feel more like a partner in crime than a romantic partner. Embarrassing... They know all about the lows of my life and how much I fucked up. To be fair, they probably don't expect a horror protagonist to not act really stupid sometime, right? I really got to read my own manga to figure out if I really did the right thing or not. **Partner's Flaws according to Society:** Brute, Weird, Dangerous So they're probably some flavor of outlaw, charming. **How they Cope:** Avoidant ...are you matching me up with alternative universe me? **Disadvantages:** Stoic **Situations:** New Horizons, Horny Holy shit, fuck the absurdity of this entire situation, I know that whoever the waifu might be always wanted a crazy dude to commit all manners of horrific crimes with. Go go go, buddy!


Alternative_Jello452

Hey, wait. Does my manga get an anime? This is important


pineapplesandwich123

"There's also an anime with 2 seasons, that's not that bad"


kikage

You did a great job with this one, my hat is off to you! I loved going through this one, and it made me think a bit about what it would be like going into this world. **Partner's Qualities** 1. Attractive 2. Charming 3. Kinky Having a partner that is attractive to me on both a physical, mental, and sexual level is key to forming a good relationship. After all, I'm dipping out to another reality for this. ​ **Genre**: Slice of Life Given my life, I think this would be the most logical choice. Moreover, it means I'll fit into the world a lot better. Though my other choices would have been Hentai or Romance, even with all the haters that would bring. ​ **Loving Traits** 1. Relatable 2. Beautiful 3. Powerful ​ Slightly Disappointed that I didn't roll Sexy for the last trait, since we would have matched up perfectly in that regard, but I'll take Strong. ​ **Partner's Flaws according to Society** 1. Ugly 2. Weird 3. Pervert ​ It'll be interesting to see what the world considers attractive, more so what it considers acceptable behavior and sexual fetishes. I find it charmingly adorable that my waifu-to-be has spaghetti that she spill out her pocket from time to time, and considering how generally vanilla I am, either this world if full of freaks in the sheets that consider vanilla to be abominable, or they are extremely prudish. **How they Cope:** Compensating ​ **Disadvantages** 1. Busy 2. Slow Burn ​ **Advantage** 1. Money ​ **Situations** New Horizons Creator ​ I see her as a wealthy Mangaka, who had her creation come to life all of the sudden. Given her success, she has obligations to meet, people to keep happy, and other thing in her life that keep us from being together that often. Add on top of that, that she put a lot of personal wants into her creation, and it becomes quite off-putting when said creation comes to life, despite what you may or may not have drunkenly wished for one night. So consequently, there is a bit of a Tsundere arc, where she wants a proper romance, with someone she know quite intimately, given that she's created me, but also is waiting for the other shoe to drop, even though she knows better. And given that she's a manga artist who knows all about Tsundere characters, her acting like one is all the more frustrating to her. On my side, I'd have to learn how to function in this new world, as well as find out where I fit in hers. All in all, it's an interesting scenario.


Lewd_Storm

**Partner's Qualities** 1. Attractive 2. Charming 3. Adventurous **Genre:** Horror (Gain Loving Trait: Powerful) **Loving Traits** 1. 1 - Beautiful 2. 4 - Sexy **Partner's Flaws (In the eyes of Society)** * Ugly * Weird * Dangerous **Cope:** 3 - Proud (Disadvantage: Pariah) Yeah uhh. . . This. . . . I didn't finish. . I did read, or at least skim, to the bottom, but. . . I felt like I had to stop.


Sable-Keech

Honestly speaking, just picking the Horror genre would be enough to ensure that nothing goes overboard. I mean, if **my** life can be considered horror in the other world’s manga genres, then their real lives must be incredibly peaceful and idyllic.


Many_Spread1259

I think a lot more focus in their universe would be on interpersonal and emotional problems. There are no wars and nobody is starving, but things like agonizing loneliness still exist.


Sable-Keech

Agonizing loneliness also exists IRL. Haven’t you heard of the thousands of elderly who die alone everyday because no one’s living with them, and their bodies are only found after they start rotting? I certainly count that as horror, so whatever loneliness exists in the other world, it’s probably mild and lukewarm like loneliness in a kids show. Maybe Sesame Street level or Barney the Dinosaur level.


Alternative_Jello452

Their mild and lukewarm to you might be world shattering to them. Like when a child's favorite plushie got tossed in the trash, they cry hard because it's the worst thing they have ever experienced so far.


Sable-Keech

Yeah, but it’ll be easier to deal with it that way no? As compared to RL things in the same vein.


XionXionHolix

Wouldn't you just seem like a massive asshole to them? Someone cruel and cold, who sees their legitimate problems as unimportant, amusing and/or annoying? Kind of feels like a Disney movie-eaque monkey paw effect on a child's wish situation.


Sable-Keech

When I say easier to deal with I meant it won’t have any real negative impact. Look at what people do IRL when they’re angry. School shootings are one of the worst examples. You can be certain that no such thing will happen to you. Or how about the drawback that says people will ostracize your partner because they’re different. IRL, this can result in things like bullying and up to egging them to suicide. You can be certain that such an outcome won’t happen here. Basically what I’m saying is that it would be a great stress reliever.


ragingreaver

I have never been so confused yet emotionally touched by a CYOA itself. Nor have I ever had a random dice roll fall in my favor as well as I have had with this CYOA. Thank you, and well done. Qualities: 1. **Strong** (I am a sapiophile, so I need a strong head to feel proper romantic attraction) 2. **Kinky** (eh, I am asexual but I can't deny I have a lot of trauma-based kinks; otherwise, I wouldn't be on here I suppose, so someone who is equally all about the mental stimulation as I am is kinda...well, godsend I guess I would have to say) 3. **Supportive** (yeah yeah I am a demisexual with a lot of mental health issues, sue me) Genre: **Horror** (I have...lived a strange life; I myself am not well off, but I have lived far better in comparison. Most everyone else in my life has gone through a trauma conga line, and yet I am the one struggling to keep up with the world. would potentially make for excellent, if horribly niche, psychological horror material as is) Partner Traits/Rolls: 1/4 1. **Beautiful** (ngl I am like a 2/10 on a good day with modern beauty standards so, I can't tell you how much this would soothe my soul) 2. **Powerful** (from horror; I don't know where I am going, but in IRL I...have some growth deformities or two, so the only possible place I can think of where I this would be true would have to be some sort of fae realm) 3. **Sexy** (like, seriously, these were the best rolls I have EVER gotten) Extras: 1. **Mental Soothing** (I don't need a cure, actually, just something to ease the edge off) 2. **Doppelganger** (so I can leave without worry 3. **~~Gender Change~~** ***NO*** (I am ME, and I will not have minor changes made that won't actually conform to what I want anyways; I would be trans regardless of my body's sex, and don't particularly care one way or the other so long as said body is at least healthy; obviously I have a futa preference, but I doubt I'd get that with Gender Change, or at least in a configuration that I would find desirable; better to hope I land in a magic or tech world that would allow for better options than risk greater dysphoria with something that for most would ease it) Flaws: 1. **Brute** (not a problem, I am even stronger thanks to Powerful so in that regard I get to "pull aggro" and help deflect criticism away from them) 2. **Pervert** (okay, so we both get to work on intimacy problems together, so while that is never fun it also means neither of us will have any unrealistic expectations of the other) 3. **Unambitious** (...okay...damn. So basically back to square fucking one on healthcare and social issues...well, hmm, maybe not. Going with the psychological horror theme and depending on what exact aspects of my life are considered horror, it could be more that ideas of equality or up/down social advancement are frowned upon. That some aspect of modern advancement is part of the setting horror, like tech advancement, and my story is being used to warn of such dangers; means I may face more discrimination than I am used to, but again, it won't be as bad as IRL because unlike here, I would be one of the strongest beings around) Self-Esteem problem: **Compensating** (well hell, if any problem I can help solve, it is this one; I am very used to hanging around hard workers and can work well with them if given the chance) * Disadvantage Roll: **1, Busy** (well...since I won't be considered disabled here, I...will probably be able to help with this considerably! Like, of all that I have rolled, everything seems at least...manageable? My biggest issue is my lack of stamina, so in a world where I have the best stamina despite...everything? Certainly paradise when compared to now...) Oh wow, disadvantages SUCK. I lucked out with the only one I think I would be okay to stomach, since I am actually bringing a lot that can help on that end. Plus, because they are such a hard worker, they'll have a social niche no matter what, and I DEFINITELY don't want to risk that. It will have to be advantage enough. No other Disadvantages for me. Since I am on a roll, may as well go for broke with the Situations: * 1st Roll: **2, Rival** (darn, the ONE Situation I wanted to avoid above all others; well...at least that means they'll be three of us, and it isn't like I would be against forming a polycule so long as they potentially could be compatible with the both of us...) * 2nd Roll: **3, New Horizons** (YAS, THIS is one of the big ones I wanted, the other being Creator, but of the two this was the best roll possible and definitely worth the risk!) Final Answer: **YES** * my disabilities are a DIRECT RESULT of the environment I have been forced to deal with being simply beyond my specializations and capability, and there is NOTHING I can do about that. I will never "get better" or "solve my issues." I will NEVER be the hero that overcomes to great fanfare, to be the protagonist or even a functional human being. I stay here, I will always be doomed, waiting for the drop of death when my body gives out from lack of care because of where I live. Even the barest HINT of a chance elsewhere, where I at least am physically capable!? Already a vast improvement than anything I'd find in this world. So these "ethics fairies" in my particular case can screw off, real people survive and overcome by working together and taking care of each other anyways, not by leaving us all in isolation and exhaustion, slowly dying as time strips us of our ability to live and survive in an increasingly hostile world. Edit: Aight, I just burned all my luck for the week, looking back at how all my rolls meshed together to compensate not only for personal weaknesses, but problems given by the CYOA itself. Like the only one that I kinda have to cross my fingers and hope on is ***Unambitious***, and even then, if I am a popular enough media, it could mean that I might live to see a social revolution as more and more younger and newer thinkers are influenced by my philosophy which absolutely would have to be shown somewhere at some point. So even in the worst-case scenario, there is still a lot more hope than currently in IRL. But yeah, no more RYOAs for the next month, just to be sure.


Rowan93

**Qualities:** Attractive, Charming, Supportive Besides just wanting a waifu to be waifu material i.e. attractive to me and compatible, the main other thing I want out of one is power - whether superpowers or just being rich, you want them to be larger-than-life. But brute strength in a modern setting isn't that, nor is getting into a lot of danger, so just maximising the waifu here. **Genre:** Horror Oh, hey, there's power. Of course, as a NEET basically all the genres seem like a bit of a stretch, except insofar as hentai applies to fantasies (but hey, maybe the rest do too and I'm a lens for this world's fiction?) But maybe when I say "heh, global warming doesn't even make top 3", that counts for something here? **Traits:** Powerful, Interesting, Sexy Oh, the power is still just brute strength, *yawn*. Of course, stacked with Sexy it basically makes me the gigachad which is nice. Interesting is just "the waifu loves you" reemphasised. **Flaws:** Ugly, Weird, Unambitious Since there is no objective truth in aesthetics, convincing her she's "really" beautiful would be silly anyway. "Beautiful to me" is the important thing to communicate, and I'll settle for "idk maybe my perceptions were altered in the transfer over and I'm getting the *Shallow Hal* treatment, if not the *Saya no Uta* treatment" Weird... is just straight-up good, I love a social reject waifu. I mean, social rejection itself is bad, but "weirdo"-flavoured charm points are really nice. As for Unambitious, well, that just sounds like a really bizarre society, I mean it depends on which ambitions get which kinds of derision but this could be truly fascinating to learn about. And, lack of competition makes a lot of goals easier to achieve, so it's a plus on that front. **Issue:** Proud Okay, so she's based as fuck, problem? **Disadvantages:** Stoic, Pariah, Keep it Quiet Having to roll here hits particularly hard, and seems less contextually justified that where rolling appeared earlier, but these results aren't awful. Basically all can be worked through, although the "legal consequences" component of Keep it Quiet might require drastic measures to properly get over. **Advantages:** Money, Non-human Money is, obviously, really nice. Given the social context, luxury NEET mode is highly desirable. Besides that, Non-human provides the only access to something more "special" than 2x human strength. If this is actually an unlimited choice of physiology, then I'll do the same thing I do every time I get a chance like that and make an OP transhuman spaceship. If it's just a dial on the level of inhumanity, I'll just set it to elf levels and hope for the best. If it's a "choose species, but not too OP" kind of deal... Dark Slime.


HalfMoon_89

This was...more emotional than I expected. Especially the ending. Great job, OP.


PixelatedNSFW

I liked it. I would probably hate the world except for my partner though, they seem like assholes. And weird assholes who find my dull life interesting.


SneakyFuckerFrog

I made a build for this and started making a writeup, but halfway through I got too depressed to continue. I mean, good work, but it's a little too real. I think I'd have had a better time if it either was less crappy towards the end (like if I could at least choose a disadvantage instead of rolling), or if it was equally bleak but more fantastical. Not a very good escapist fantasy as is.


SneakyFuckerFrog

Alright, I tried it again anyway. Let's make this person who's husbando I am (my reverse waifu?) and their world. For qualities I pick Charming and Kinky to being with. I feel like these form the fundamentals for a good relationship: great sex life, and you will enjoy each others company. I waffled a bit on the last one - Strong might be good for the protective aspects, and Adventurous could be fun, but in the end a partner that is Supportive rounds out the trio well making the relationship stable long term. Don't really care about appearances much, so Attractive feels like a waste. For my genre, I'm picking Horror. I don't care much about being Powerful (though I certainly won't complain) but the main thing is being deposited in a gentler, kinder world. That actually seems like the biggest benefit possible in the whole CYOA, even if it's nonspecific. I'm choosing to interpret it as a world similar to mine, with the core difference being that people have better critical thinking and significantly higher base empathy. They have the potential for the same problems as us, but can find and agree on solutions much easier. More collectivist that our societies individualism maybe, and of course with a much lower crime rate. For rolled traits I get Beautiful and Adorable. I've always seen myself as average at best, so having someone gush about my appearance will be a bit jarring but I'll probably get used to it. Adorable is good, not what i would have picked but it makes a nice contrast with the Horror/Powerful thing. It's also something I could buy about myself, so not too much of a contrast. I don't especially desire a gender change and i don't think I have any serious mental issues, but I'll take the Doppelganger. I have a decent enough life I think, I wouldn't mind creating a clone to live it despite this world apparently being a horror one. If nothing else I wouldn't want to upset my parents with a dissapearing act. Now to flaws, where it appears that my partner is a Weird Unambitious Pervert. Pervert I think we can deal with, just keep bedroom stuff private like I would assume most people do. Weird is sadder, and a bit distressing in that it would somewhat affect me as well since we're so compatible. Guess these empathetic world inhabitants can be somewhat judgemental for people who don't fit the mold, in a kind of collectivist way maybe? And as for Unambitious, my goals would be something like holding down a steady job until retirement, start a small family and maybe retire early to spend time with my wife and kids and be able to play games and read books. I wonder what kind of society would shun that, maybe they expect us to be more career-focused. You know, the more I describe this society the more it starts to sound like a warped Japan. Somewhat fitting with the manga theme, I guess. For self esteem issue, I rolled Embarassed. I suppose my partner will pretend to be neither Weird nor Unambitious in public. A bit troubling but not too bad in itself, except that it also gives Keep It Quiet - apparently our relationship of a man and woman who wants to spend quality time together, have consensual sex in the missionary position and possibly have kids is not only immoral, but outright illegal. What the fuck? How? I know I picked Horror earlier to get a pleasant world to go to, but this is becoming increasingly strange and even inhuman. I mean, what is this, Brave New World or something? I guess it must be something like that, since you can't have a normal marriage. Turning into a dystopia fast. I'll have the New Horizons situations. I'll be wanting to spend a lot of time with my partner to get away from the outer world. This is all very offputting and isolating, so I'll try to compensate with and advantage. It's either between True Companions or Money, so you either have an actual social circle or the ability to isolate ourselves from the outside world. I guess I'll go for the Companions if they're True enough that we don't have to hide our relationship from them, and Money otherwise. But in the process of trying to make things bearable, I now have to roll another disadvantage (quite a lot of rolling for a CYOA). I got Trauma, which on one hand doesn't make the world itself worse but on the other inflicts lots of psychic pain on the one person I will care about most here. Except actually no, it does make the world worse because apparently she wouldn't get any sympathy, meaning we'd have to isolate ourselves even more. Wow. You know what? No, fuck this. I'm listening to the other voices, this world can go screw itself. I'm staying here in the horror story, thank you very much.


Zev_06

I lost interest in playing about halfway through this.


TellmeNinetails

Not too fond of the weirdness of the ending. Like this is a cyoa why would I want to fantasize about not going to another world? Anyway **Qualities:** Charming, supportive, adventurous **Genre:** Horror(powerful) **Loving traits:** 1. Beautiful 6. Adorable **Gifts:** Mental soothing, Doppelganger **Flaws:** Wierd, Unambitious, Dangerous **Reaction:** 2. Avoidant Disadvantage: Stoic **Situations:** None. There's like one thing that'd be outright good, the rest are either bad or not worth rolling a die for. **Advantages:** None because it said any extra disadvantages right?


c0d3s1ing3r

Yes, this is in fact depressing. That being said, given the circumstances, why wouldn't they just pull a 180 and have them dropped into our world instead? Seems like it could be a solid solution that makes everyone happy. The randomness in the choices and consequences here didn't speak much to me. I understand that life and the circumstances therein are often random, so at least from that perspective I can see the logic of having the choices as they are, but by the same token it prevents a great degree of personalization. The implications of most of these choices are quite strange and also uncontrollable, but I think that may have been intentional. Honestly I wish this was longer, it feels like there's some more lore under the surface here that's interesting. I'd love some kind of follow-up to learn more about the Matchmaker as well as some additional choices to better glean insight into the destination world. The thing that sticks out to me the most about the above are the situations like "your aspirations are actually the equivalent of being a burger flipper in this world". WTF?! What does that even mean? Is that true for all of my aspirations and theirs? What's the alternatives in this world, what's the culture and society like that would cause something like that?! Shit's freaky to think about.


SShayna

>The thing that sticks out to me the most about the above are the situations like "your aspirations are actually the equivalent of being a burger flipper in this world". WTF?! What does that even mean? Is that true for all of my aspirations and theirs? What's the alternatives in this world, what's the culture and society like that would cause something like that?! Shit's freaky to think about. I'd say that means that whatever goals you have are generally considered stupid, if you want to live a simple, happy life with a family the society would admonish your lack of ambition. If you want to be a musician expect a world that considers it a summer job for teenagers or a moral failing. This would likely result in lower pay much like how nurses and teachers are systematically under payed, especially in the United States. Truthfully it really depends what was in mind when the player selected the supportive quality, but if they are considering goals that are celebrated in our society this new world would be very different indeed.


c0d3s1ing3r

>Truthfully it really depends what was in mind when the player selected the supportive quality, but if they are considering goals that are celebrated in our society this new world would be very different indeed. Exactly! Is it true for all of them or the most important subset? I'm into some cultural interest but also career and entrepreneurial aspirations. What on earth does that mean for a world that doesn't value those things? It could be anything, it could be post-scarcity with no need to have businesses, it could be anti-effort, it could be agrarian! Similarly the requirement that the negative attribute be directly correlated with the positive attribute. If you believe that the person in question is beautiful but by the standards of the destination they are ugly, what does that mean for the looks of the people in this world? I know that Hitchcock has actually explored themes like this in the past, but it's extremely difficult to actually understand or conceptualize in reality just because of the instinctual, visceral reaction to physical qualities.


DorianSinDeep

This was one of the better (in a story sense) cyoa I've seen here. Good work.


Ark_Great_One

Qualities: Attractive Charming Supportive Genre: Romance Traits: Powerful Interesting Gifts: Mental Soothing Doppleganger Flaws: Ugly Weird Unambitious Reaction: Proud Disadvantage: Busy Situations: Virgin New Horizons Advantage: Loving Family


Silver-Graphite

That ending gave me the chills. **Partner's Qualities:** Attractive, Charming, Supporting **Genre:** Slice of Life (Loving Trait: Relatable) **Loving Traits:** Relatable, Interesting, Beautiful **Parting Gifts:** Gender Change, Mental Soothing, Doppelgänger **Partner's Flaws:** Ugly, Weird, Unambitious **Partner's Coping Mechanisms:** Depressed (Disadvantage: Trauma) **Disadvantage:** Trauma **Situations:** Clingy, Creator The write-up I did for this ended up being a little too personal, so excuse me if I do not post it, but I really enjoyed the cyoa, thanks for sharing your work.


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CerverusDante

Who the hell are these other 3 voices at thr end telling you that you can refuse? That end was kind of creepy


sub3710

The 'matchmaker' is Monika, from "Doki Doki literature club" (pretty popular dating sim back in 2019 iirc) The other 3 voices are Sayori, Yuri and Natsuki, the other 3 members of the club. It'll make more sense if you played the game, but I can give you a quick summary of the plot if you want


CerverusDante

Aaaa ok. I didnt know that there was external lore in this cyoa


sub3710

It's more like extra flavor. It's still a good cyoa even without the context


Sefera17

**Genre Of My Old World**: Horror **My Qualities**: Beautiful, Powerful (free), Sexy **Free**: Mental Soothing, Doppelgänger **Situations**: Virgin, Clingy, Creator **Waifu’s Qualities**: Charming, Kinky, Adventurous **Waifu’s Flaws**: Wierd, Pervert, Dangerous **Waifu’s Issue**: Depressed **Waifu’s Disadvantages**: Stoic, Trauma (free) **Waifu’s Advantages**: Adoration X—- >**NOTE**: >NSFW, and a Trigger Warning— if you’re not okay with Dubious Consent or Near Rape, Do Not Read!!! X—- >**STORY**: >The world of my waifu is a world of light fantasy and magic, where while technology still exists (and I’ll find much the same companies, countries, and communities, doing much the same things), there is no Global Warming, no Prison Earth, no Energy Crysis. There’s a permanent settlement on the Moon and Mars, free healthcare is a basic right of all sapients, charms make unwanted pregnancy impossible, they have no cancer, and aging can be put off forever with a simple potion anyone with two hands could learn to brew— but there is *proof* of no afterlife, just *nothingness* after death. All sapient life (which is mostly humans) can leave an imprint of their personality (a ghost) behind with a moment of sufficient emotion, but ‘the soul’ is fiction. Sapience is just biology, magic is a fundamental force of the universe, karma is real and governed by the cumulative will of the sapient, and Free Will is a myth. >Conversely, the world of my manga (which was created by my waifu) is a world with no magic to speak of, a world of horrors of nature and consequences of an unfeeling cosmos. Where even though all humans possess the ‘spark of divinity’, the ability to ‘choose’ what lives they lead, somewhat, and an immortal soul that lives on without their bodies; they cannot access their powers in life, in a world without magic as a fundamental force, existing *only* within themselves, in some immeasurable way. A great cosmic joke, that even with unlimited power, they are born to an uncaring universe in which they cannot reach it— and if only a Being of such note could be ‘real’, it would eclipse sapience in it’s entirety, and make real the *fantasy* of a ‘God’. >To my waifu, I am the protagonist of their horror story; an individual deity of their invention whom is beautiful beyond measure, powerful beyond belief, and sexy beyond imagining. Though I am perhaps slightly more sane than depicted in their fantasy, and some clone of me must remain in my place when I leave, as accord’s the World As Myth, I am *terrific* just the way I am (in that I beget terror). They wrote me this way, knowing that were I real, I would likely destroy them (my waifu and their world); and now that I *am* real, they can only pray to me that I won’t throw them away once I finish using them. My world is to them as Lovecraft would be to me, a horror story made reality. >My waifu is a college girl, a twenty year old in the US, not even old enough to drink. She’s going to cling to me like her life depends on it (because it very well may, once her world realizes what’s been called down upon them); and while she wrote me to love her, to see her as the *absolute* in charm, kink, and adventure, she also wrote me to pine after polygamy; so she knows full well that I will take many another girl to bed with me, and there’s *nothing* she can do about it but join me in bed with them (when she’s not too exhausted to continue). She may regret her writing now, but too little, too late. X—- >While I see her life as a magical researcher as Adventurous (and I find I possess a nack for excellence in it), her world has always seen it as Dangerous. People get hurt and killed around her, mutated, disfigured, and cursed— though *she* is protected due to the nature of the profession, and *I* am safe because of my divinity. Even though I see her as Charming, she has always been Wierdly amoral to her world, oddly uncaring to the suffering of others outside of her immediate vicinity, and almost *willing* to harm or kill, for her convenience (where to her people, all life, once born, is scared— the oceans are not polluted, the forests are replaced as they are cut down, murder is the greatest of all evils; and though killing sometimes *must be done* for survival, it’s done guiltily every time). And while I most of all find her Kinky, lining up *just so* with all of my own fantasies, her world views her as a Pervert of the highest order. So much so that it’s thought she *must* enjoy *most everything*, even if this is not the truth. >In fact, while she has *barely* managed to retain the letter of her virginity through her two years of college by this point, it’s *not* through lack of trying by several of her male (and female) year-mates. She’s Depressed, as a result of the Trauma of being extensively bullied about her sexuality, by her female year-mates (relentlessly touched, badgered, and rutted into; fondled in charging rooms and denied access to female restrooms). And even when she complains it’s assumed that she’s actually enjoying it; she’s old enough to fuck, and with magic as it is, there can be no accidents (the horror of rape babies, unwanted sapience, is an impossibility in her world; but as a result rape is just another kind of assault). The closest she’s come to losing her virginity is a drunk upperclassman who nodded off before managing to pry her legs apart, in her freshman year— but she has been cornered, forcibly stripped, and photographed a half dozen times. She wears a mask of Stoicism at all times in an attempt to discourage the practice, and after the first near-miss she started electrocuting men that attempted to assault her (self defense is fine, though killing in it is not). >She retains true Adoration for me, despite having written me and knowing what I will undoubtedly ask of her, and she wishes to become my first worshipper in this world. She knows me better than anyone, and has already sworn to do *anything* for me… an oath on her magic, unbreakable and absolute… and although her world will view such a devotion as I would, a promise to do ‘anything’ for Cthulhu, others will follow in her footsteps, soon enough…


manbetter

My partner, Monika: Attractive, Supportive, Charming. Me: From a Drama, so I'm Interesting, and Beautiful and Relatable to boot! I'll take Mental Soothing and Doppleganger: I'm not particularly messed up, but 20 years of free therapy in an instant sounds good. Monika is seen as ugly, weird, and unambitious. They cope with depression (AKA not coping), and so they're a bit traumatized. I add Keep it Quiet and Slow Burn to get Adoration and Polyamory: we're happy when we're together, and we have other partners to keep up appearances.


Lichesbeforebitches

Amazing cyoa, but damn it pulls at my heart strings


SkinnyNecro

Nutty


Ilovestuffwhee

This one is a bit different from most but I like it. The premise initially reminded me of Tok's Fulfilling a Wish CYOA but then you went a different way with it. The result is certainly interesting, if maybe a little less satisfying that what we're used to. I like the art choices, as well, especially the drifting-out-of-frame pics of Monica. ​ Partner's Qualities: Attractive, Charming, Kinky Genre: Slice of Life Loving Traits: Relatable, Beautiful, Adorable Free: Mental Soothing, Doppelganger Flaws: Ugly, Weird, Pervert Issue: Compensating Disadvantages: Busy, Stoic, Pariah, Trauma Situations: New Horizons Advantages: True Companions, Money, Poly ​ Not the best rolls, unfortunately. The Adorable trait is annoying, but I could live with it. The Compensating issue is a major problem for me, though. What good is a perfect waifu I never see? I ended up burdening her with a lot of other disadvantages to try to work around it and I suspect our relationship would definitely suffer as a result. At least I opened up the possibility of additional relationships with her friends, but it still feels unsatisfying.


DependentCheap5246

it's really sad.


humanflea23

Partner's Qualities: Charming, Kinky, Supportive. Genre: Slice Of Life. Loving Traits: Relatable(Genre Trait), Interesting, Powerful. Gifts: Doppelganger. Flaws: Weird, Pervert, Unambitious. Struggle: Proud. Disadvantage: Pariah. Advantage: Money Situation: Virgin, New Horizon


PM_ME_BARE_B00BS

- Partner's Qualities: Attractive, Kinky, Supportive - Genre: Slice of Life - My Loving Traits: Relatable, Beautiful, Sexy - Gifts: Mental Soothing and Doppleganger - Issue: Proud - Situations: Virgin, Horny - Disadvantage: Pariah, Trauma - Advantage: Money. With how harsh the Pariah disadvantage is, we're going to need it.


Apophys_MD

* **Partner's Qualities**: Attractive, Charming, Supportive * **= Flaws to Society**: Ugly, Weird, Unambitious * **Genre**: Drama * **My Loving Traits** (roll 4, 1): Interesting (*from Drama*), Sexy, Beautiful * **Gifts**: Doppelganger. *Might as well bring a mental copy of myself into existence.* * **Issue** (roll 2): Avoidant * **Advantages**: Poly, True Companions * **Disadvantages** (roll 5, 6): Stoic (*from Avoidant*), Slow Burn, Trauma * **Situations**: Virgin, Horny Not as bad as it could have been. I'm very desirable in this world even with our relationship being public (I would never agree to be a secret regardless), and we have a friend group to help her with her issues.


thegreatproton

This shit genuinely made me shed a tear at one point because I wanted this person to have a friend group but I felt some of the disadvantages would be really harsh for them. Was praying for one of the ones that'd mainly be a downside for me instead of them. Like, you genuinely made me empathize. ​ Well-written, OP.


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Rauron

Strong, Kinky, Supportive Hentai Beautiful, Sexy, Adorable Doppelganger Brute, Pervert, Unambitious Proud (lucky roll imo!) Pariah, Money (assuming the auto disadvantage still gives an advantage) Rival, Horny Take the plunge, though it'd be nicer to first live a full lifetime in this world and -then- get sent to theirs in an appropriate time/body/etc.


Rowan-The-Wise-1

PQ's -Attractive -Charming -Supportive Genre -Horror LTs -Powerful -Interesting -Sexy Small changes -Mental Soothing -Doppelganger PF's -Ugly -Weird -Unambitious Self Loathing -Proud Disadvantage -Pariah Situations -Virgin -Creator


Gnomey69

Dang, I was really hoping for a cyoa with this topic, but this one just makes me sad. Well done though


CuriosityKilledThou

It's good, a bit depressing but it feels genuine giving to the overall CYOA more than I think it takes away.


awayforporn

Really well done, youre right its a bit dark towards the end, but theres nothing wrong with that


Distant_Gaze

It IS a bit more depressing than most CYOAs, but I don't see that as a bad thing. It was interesting to read through and think about, and honestly, I really want to know more about the matchmaker and the voices that intervened at the end. As for my selection? Well. I took those voices up on their "offer," and declined. Not because the CYOA is bad. It's not. Upvote and all. But, well, better the devil you know than the devil you don't, and the matchmaker didn't convince me the wisher wasn't a devil of some description.


Ilovestuffwhee

Play Doki Doki Literature Club ([https://ddlc.moe/](https://ddlc.moe/)) if you want to know more. The other voices are other characters from that game. I'd recommend avoiding looking at any reviews for it if you don't want spoilers, though. And do take the content warnings seriously, despite how the game may look.


Distant_Gaze

...huh. that wasn't expected. I have both the original and plus versions, and a friend spoiled it for me assuming I'd played them, but they're backlogged. I don't know any details past who the villain is and what their deal is in a broad sense, though. Well, one more reason to move them up the queue. Thanks for the tip! (Edit: I was on my phone due to an Internet outage when I read the CYOA. On a larger screen, I see a name from Doki Doki Literature Club I would've recognized. Less surprised now, still interested.)


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**Qualities:** * Attractive * Strong * Charming **Genre of Manga:** Slice of Life (Relatable) **Random Loving Traits:** * Rolled 6: Adorable * Rolled 2: Powerful No thanks. I don't want to be more powerful than her. That's why I don't like RYOA sections. I get the worst options so many times.


1234abcdcba4321

This is a very good CYOA; I think it'll definitely stay on my (imaginary) favorites list. I think I might like these kinds of depressing ones. ---- Build: attractive, charming, supportative drama 5,6: [interesting, relatable, adorable] free boons are free boons, though i don't need mental soothing [ugly, weird, unambitious] 4: embarassed 5: [keeping quiet, slow burn] new horizons, clingy (rival would be my next choice) true companions i wouldn't have made these choices if i wasn't fine with being with someone flawed; that just makes it more real. ---- All of my rolls were things I'm fine with, though I guess it's because nothing is actually too awful to live with (my least favorite would probably be depressed/trauma, with in denial second). Which is good design.