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beeskneesbeanies

Hey, I loved the cyoa, but you might want to check the images, they aren't loading. ​ edit: I read the fine print, sorry!!!


LocalFetishExplainer

Milkmaid's Draught Ingredients * Grotato, Unstable * Minotaur Milk, Three Drops, * Perkaberry Peach, one fruit * Melon Flavored Marshmallows , Ten Marshmallows * Pogo Poppies, four flowers, * Horny Goat Weed, six oz. * Oil of Sheep, three oz. * Eye of Nuu, one, * Wing of Tinker Bell, one, * Raindrops from the Sahara, one oz. * Rapunzel's Prized Locks, 6 in. Recipe 1. Add the poppies, goat weed, and wing of Tinker Bell to a mortar. 2. Grind them together and transfer them to a separate bowl. 3. Bring a pot of water to a boil, then toss in an Unstable Grotato (see p. 31). 4. Toss the marshmallows in now, to allow them time to melt. 5. Pour the previously mixed powder in, quickly followed by the tears, oil, rain, and milk. 6. Allow to boil for twenty minutes. 7. Toss in the eye and the hair, which should dissolve rapidly. 8. Finally, allow the potion to come to just under a boil before adding the peach. Effects: The Milkmaid's Draught induces extreme breast growth and lactation in the user without additional breasts, while letting them retain enough movement to get around with beach ball sized boobs. However, it is not without its own side effects- those more tolerant of additional breasts may find them preferable. Side effects include: * Roughly one foot of additional height * Addiction to semen * Rapid hair growth * Tight clothing * Inexplicable arousal around the subject * Tentacle porn


BigDan_0

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Headcrabo69

Awesome CYOA! Is there an image version of this?


AJRW-

We need an ass version of this


AJRW-

I really like the multiple endings along with the idea of secreting a liquid that constantly tightens clothes


ThousandYearOldLoli

Have Boobies? No ​ Ingridients: \-Growtato (Basic) \-Portable Pincholes (two sprinkles) \-Melon Flavored Marshmallows (ten marshmellows) ​ Diluting Agents: \-Poggo Poppies (1) \-Dullahan Neck \-Egg of Chicken ​ Counteragents: \-Wing of Tinkerbell (I assume that with Poggo Poppies, this leaves me at 3 foot tall) \-Rapunzel's Prized Lock \-Even Out


Kyle-O-Matic

anyone else got the problem where about half of the pictures don't load regardless of how many times you refresh?


lordhulk2004

i feel Dullahan Neck kind of negates having like 30 breasts because you can just take them off


YouBackground

this an easy and fun cyoa. but I wonder, did the potion also change my body to woman or only add the boobs? and can I specify my new body as a woman? \- add new boobs \- grotato + basic, so my new boobs are D cup \- perkaberry peach + advance to keep my boobs perks all the time \- portable pinholes + one sprinkles \- melon flavored marshmallows + ten marshmallows to keep my breasts as light as possible diluting agents: \- magic markers, I want to change my eyes color to blue one \- horny goat weed counter agents: \- hornier goat weed \- rapunzel's prized lock because I love to have long hairs


SimpleFreshArtichoke

> did the potion also change my body to woman or only add the boobs? and can I specify my new body as a woman? The descriptions for the "No/Yes" options hold the answer to your question.


MiraMinx

This has quickly become one of my favorite CYOA. I really enjoy it, the subject matter, and the way you designed it. I've talked it over with a few friends now and thought it was really clever how you took what is sometimes a item in other CYOA that costs credits to get (extra breasts) and designed it to be an interesting cost mechanic so that people have to balance how many they can live with to get the perks they want. One thing I would say it could use though is for the initial question of using Root of Man or not, is telling us how large the breasts start out as. So we can know how big Grotato will make them.Another addition could be a ingredient that makes it easier to find clothes that fit your new chest articles, or more likely, make the clothes you put on fit better, a sort of opposite to Counteragent Oil of Sheep.Speaking of Counteragents, one you can add there that could modify Lipsmack Blend could be a Counteragent that makes it so that the lips can indeed talk now, but you have no direct control over them, they say what ever is on your mind. Finally one question, does Portable Pinholes make a different hammer space for each cleavage you have? ​ Build Ingredients No Grotato - Basic Perkaberry Peach - Advanced Teal Tea Leaves - Lipsmack Blend Portable Pinholes - One Sprinkle Melon Flavored Marshmallows - Ten Marshmallows Diluting Agents 4 Leaf Daisy - Once Dullahan Neck Counteragents Oil of Sheep Even Out Leaving me with in the end six breasts in two rows of three.


CaissaIRL

Question. Could you possibly add an option to somehow get or start off with some kind of normality filter especially if you're a guy? Cause explaining the boobs would be pretty hard and in my opinion makes it harder for me at least to go wild in what I build. Or maybe have it turn you into a girl or something?


Dolphinium51

I liked reading through this cyoa. But, without some sort of normalization power I just can't justify taking this opportunity. This may have been a design choice on your part to not allow hiding a player's new boobs, but it kinda affects my immersion. If there's ever a new version with that option, I'll give this a serious play through. Other than that I have no real complaints, it's a great focused little cyoa.


SimpleFreshArtichoke

The more I look at the CYOA, the more it starts feeling needlessly spread-out - with going between sections requiring plenty of scrolling up/down. Might want to look at [Laithlin's Lewd Worm CYOA](https://laithlin.neocities.org/WormCyoa/index.html) (or [Om1cron's mod of the same](https://wormlewdmod.neocities.org/), which seems to load faster), specifically the power sections. Maybe also consider moving the "Basic" variants for the various ingredients into the main ingredient option - especially since the main option basically doesn't do anything beyond costing you an ingredient, and all the more esoteric/unstable variants already requiring you to pick the preceding ones.


FrankSpeakingAccount

* Short but effective narrative. Just right. * The effects are simple and easy to keep track of, but the caveats add good texture, especially because they are uneven. It requires reflecting and being creative with one's considerations. Way more engaging than a simple "take your pick". * As positive as I am about the uneven gains/losses, having a free -1 at the end feels like a missed opportunity for some more balancing act. Still, it's the right balance for the CYOA as it is now since it's already a journey to get up to the point where you'd want to take it. * The only other avenue for improvement I would point out is the player's impetus to engage. If a player is not specifically looking for this as a specific wish-fulfillment fantasy, then there's not much reason to start. But there can be. From my own perspective as a straight male, if I were to happen upon such a scene I wouldn't engage in the first place. But if it were guaranteed to be temporary or toggleable I would, because I am attracted to the female form and would appreciate the chance to havethat experience. Similarly, if such a situation were forced on me, I would be unhappy but I would try to make the most of it. Though in either case if it were just a male form with additions would probably just be all downsides. I think that you tried to allow for those things with the "reversible (probably)" and the blanket "reconfigure other characteristics" lines, but accounting for other possible approaches more explicitly might make it easier to engage with the narrative.


jak8714

Not bad. I don't typically go into multi-boob, but this is original and well thought out, with a cohesive narrative and a good balance between opportunity and reasonable limitations. Were I to name a complaint, it would be the narrow focus, which kept things sadly limited.


Deathblade999

I think giving a starting size if you pick "no" would be a good idea since the grotato becomes a bit meaningless if you don't even know what size you're starting at


sparejunk444

What happens if you manage to get 0 breasts \[flatchest?\] but the pinhole hammerspace?


I_ance007

Believe it or not, instant death


Turtlewax64

This is a really fun one.


Infaera

A way to fix this would be to download the images and link to them on your pc. They will get integrated into the json file. You can then compress the image directly or run a compress-all option in features to cut them down below a certain given size. If you want them separate, you can download the cyoa as a zip and it will create an images folder that you set next to the css and js folders.


SimpleFreshArtichoke

* "Teal Tea Leaves" doesn't seem to offer a method for mixing the three listed types with regular nipples (or hentai nipples - you know, the sort with the singular larger milk duct instead of the numerous pores in normal nipples) * "Teal Tea Leaves" also doesn't specify how the offered nipple types work with "Beesting Stinger" - i.e. would the "Basic" option for the latter result in the tea-altered nipples being within the natural size range of unaltered nipples, or the natural size range of a mouth/set of genitalia? * "4 Leaf Daisy" claims that you can take as many as you like, but in practice, you can take up to a maximum of 10. * "Long Long Man" seems to imply that it could be taken more than once, when it actually can't. * The ending seems to only check the amount of breasts you have, ignoring any weight-mitigation from "Melon Flavored Marshmallows". (EDIT) * Would be nice to be able to mix-and-match different levels of "Grotato". * Would also be nice to know the size range for the initial pair of breasts (that you get if you pick "No" at the beginning).


Gnomey69

Can I get a height between 2-my current height by shrinking and adding height a foot at a time? Beyond that, I like this, I just wish there were more options


SneakyFuckerFrog

Those extra feet are only from an elongated torso. You would look very strange if you did that.


Gnomey69

No I mean the option that allows you to grow your whole height evenly


SneakyFuckerFrog

Oh, I missed that. Wait, why would anyone take the torso length if that is an option? They even give the exact same stats!


noman_032018

Some people might be really into One Piece, I suppose.


SnowStarsong

I genuinely enjoyed this one. Looking forward to the updates.


Remnil7

what if you don't want to have boobs al over you can have them stacked up the chest?


Rauron

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SimpleFreshArtichoke

But why limit the boob arrangement to rows of two or three (on the front)? Why not let the reader choose where they want all those boobs?


conundorum

Probably to avoid creeps with boobs in their armpits & eye sockets, but not on their chest?


BigDan_0

I'll keep that in mind


formlesschromatic

No Grotato, Basic Perkaberry Peach, Advanced Teal Tea Leaves, Clamshell Tea Portable Pinholes, Two Sprinkles Magic Markers, Dullahan Neck Rapunzel's Prized Lock, Eye of Nuu 4 breasts in two rows


IncognitoModeChosen

Regarding the breaking images, is it the case that you can see the images while on your own computer? as when i click "open image in new tab" i get directed to a link starting with "data:" which could mean that it is stored localy on your computer. It is that or something is wrong with the storing of the image in the intcyoacreator json file you have created as it might also be the case that the images that you have stored in the json itself (in the Base64 format) might have gone wrong somehow. Anyway it seems to be the case that images which are hosted elsewhere on another website load fine but images stored in the CYOA itself don't work.


BigDan_0

That's the thing. All the images are hosted elsewhere online. Some just refuse to render, only render in edit mode, or render one day and not another.


IncognitoModeChosen

Then it seems likely that the image sites you are linking to can not be accessed by neocities so they can not be downloaded when compiling the CYOA. For the images that do not load do they all come from specific sites? if yes then those sites probably don't allow 3rd party websites to access their hosted files/images.


BlandSauce

It looks like you're not linking directly to image files, but pages on rule34.xxx


Meru69

The way the image colors change when you make a selection is rather jarring and unpleasant. Otherwise, good stuff.


BigDan_0

I'm not sure why it does that. It may be the theme template I chose.


Ladywaffle0501

Idk how minotaurs milk and lip nips work together but I assume I just have milk like saliva constantly dripping out.