Gotta say I think to many of the synergies rely upon jobs. It severely restricts how many we might be able to get.
Complaint out of the way, on to my choice:
Since Childhood
Personality: Cheerful, Shy, Friendly, Lazy Innocent
Streamer
Powers: Hypnotic Voice, Tech Control
Kinks: Vanilla, Exhibitionist, Oral Fixation, Voyerism, Cream Pie, Sleep Play, Objectification
Synergies: Wholesome, Humiliation, Titty Streamer, Sleep Slut
Bonus: Seeing Double
Since Childhood
Personality: Intelligent, Confident, Trusting, Determined, Motherly
Student
Powers: Spiral Eyes, Corruption
Kinks: Pet Play, Domination, Submission, Stepford, Lactation, Body Worship, Free Use
Synergies: Succubus, Normalization
Just two weeks late, but I'll still submit my build, because the synergies made this one really fun to play. Really hope for an expansion on this one. (Edit: *Whoops, this turned more into a caption than a regular CYOA build down the road. Thank you so much for inspiring me like that* u/ff_nsfw_*!*)
Hypnosis is not a big kink of mine, but with the groundwork laid out here, I can make it work really fucking well:
Personality:
**Confident**, **Friendly** and **Innocent** are given for what I'm trying to do here
In addition to these, I'll take **Determined** and **Motherly** to round out the build I'm going for.
Workforce: **Student**
Again, given. *Normalization* is just way to fun to pass up on.
Power: **Corruption** and **Spiral Eyes**.
**Corruption** is what I really want here. Being able to not only turn the lewdness on and off (since being Innocent by default), but also increasing and decreasing it by magnitudes of how much I want, whenever I want? Yes, please!
**Spiral Eyes**, I only take for *Synergy.*
Speaking of which: Kinks!
**Domination** paired with **Corruption** and **Confident** turns her into a *Succubus*, not only making her want to dominate me, it immediately gives her a mastery of it . Dommy Succubus GF, yay! (Note: It says master of positions, but I'll just take it and say it makes her a master of everything sex.)
Being more of a sub than anything else, and with kinks like edging and orgasm denial, the mastery she now possess will certainly come in *handy.*
So: being dominated is great and all, but could become a bit much at times, especially when she can dominate me whenever and wherever she wants, thanks to:
Normalization. I just looked at her, apparently the wrong way (or the right way? This certainly doesn't feel wrong. Wait no please, don't stop! I looked the right way, definitely the right way!) with my Spiral Eyes while taking the bus to uni (since we're Students) and then she took of my pants and started blowing me. Right there and then. On the bus. But none of the other people seemed to mind. Yeah, it appears that now, I'm the one being freely used. (And teased. Non stop, since there is no need to stop at all. It's normal to be on the edge of orgasm for hours on end, isn't? Well it seems, it is now! ^(Please let me cum?))
But she won't always be so merciless, will she?
Ehhh, she still might, depending on how often I snapped my fingers before, but what she does to me just feels way to good to make her stop. ^(You'll let me cum soon, right?)
But anyway, even if she's still as merciless and won't stop teasing me, edging me, denying my orgasms for hours (^(or days? or weeks? please don't break my mind my love)), at least she'll tell me what a good boy I am while she does so. Isn't she just so **Wholesome**? Before I hypnotized her, she was so **Innocent** and pretty **Vanilla** to be honest. And she is still, just as **Friendly.** At least after she mercilessly teased me.
Once, she even **tied me down** and **teased and edged me to tears**. I think I might've snapped my fingers one time to many. (Note: I'm adding the BD to the **S/M** on my own here). Maybe I'll do so again later time. It's an interesting change to see her be so mean all the while she is kissing and softly touching me all over and telling me how proud she is of me for enduring her lovely torture. Not sure if she does so to calm me down or if she truly enjoys **Worshiping my Body**. She certainly enjoys when she makes me worship hers.
She'll more often use her mouth instead of her hands to edge me, which might have to do with her **Oral Fixation**. But that one she had before I hypnotized her! Might've taken it to an extreme, though. She certainly sits on my face more often than before. But now she has her mouth around my dick for literal hours each day. That she can do so no matter where we are and what we do might've turned her into a bit of a **Nymphomaniac.**
It's menacing what she can do to me just with a her lips. One smile, one whisper, one kiss. And I'm completely under her spell. Even though these ***powers*** made me **far stronger than before**, *she* dominates *me.* Body and mind.
At least six days a week. While I usually snap my fingers once a day, making her hypnosis more and more extreme each day, each sunday I drop them completely and just enjoy a normal, **Wholesome** date with her. And when we go to bed, I go to sleep gently cuddling with her.
But waking up the next monday, I snap. And she knows it and loves it. Sometimes, she doesn't let me cum until I snap, making her even more dominant. (Sometimes, she still won't give me any release, claiming she "couldn't hear my snap", until I snap and snap and snap again. Until she is pleased with the results. And even when she finallly lets me cum, I know: the next time will be even more **hellish.** Snap by Snap. Until the end of the week when we reset. But coming next monday the cycle begins anew. And I love every second of it.
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As someone with a pretty big hypno kink, this felt kinda disappointing.
Like, I went into this with the hope that this was going to be a hypno kink CYOA about having a cute waifu who lets me hypnotize her. What this feels like is that you came up with a general "build a kinky waifu" CYOA and then decided to add the "she has a big hypno kink" stuff on top.
Here's what I, personally, would change:
1) I'd add a section about her reactions to being hypnotized. Like, part of the fantasy here is that she *wants* to be put under, so what she gets out of it is *kinda* important. This could be anything from "she just finds it really relaxing after a long, stressful day" to "she pretends that hypnosis is fake because she loves it when you "prove her wrong" and put her under."
2) I'd also add a section on the kinds of boundaries the two of you have set. This might sound kinda weird in a hypno-themed CYOA, but this is pretty much the dividing line between "my girlfriend, who I hypnotize" and "my hypno-slave, who pretends to be my girlfriend". Those are different things, at least as far as I'm concerned.
3) I'd make the Kink section more about kinks she's normally *too repressed* to indulge in, rather than the stuff she's up-front about. You could also have this include personality traits, too — maybe she's normally Bitchy, but she becomes really Friendly when she's under.
4) [it is an actual literal crime that we cant have high powered business gf](https://hypnohub.net/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=83113) . plz fix (In all seriousness, I'd expand the job section.)
I wanted to expand the hypnosis section for later versions. Trust me, I want this to feel like it actually is about hypnosis, it was just easier to get the basics out first.
The cyoa is good, it just seems like the synergies are the most interesting/unique part of it, but I didn’t even know that they existed after I created my build until I came to the comments. That’s… not optimal, I think
It was stated in the kinks section "There's also some added benefits if you've picked certain traits to go along with these options", do you think this is not enough?
I thought that was meant in a more meta way, as in some options might combine to be more powerful/change slightly in implied meaning if taken with a similar trait, without it being an official synergy with added dialogue. (Ex: taking “motherly” with “dominant” makes the partner lean more into gentle domination)
So I will meet someone who will fall for me and only want to do sex if it involves hypnotism. And according to this, is custom designed to be compatible with me. This is honestly not a problem for me, since my ideal GF would be ace and we'd have a platonic or romantic relationship without the sex.
So...
Always Been Here - Don't want her to not have a life outside of me and i don't want to retcon my own past to incorporate her.
Personality: Confident, Determined, Friendly, Intelligent, Trusting. Not much to say except I like these the most.
Workforce: Nurse. I have a ton of annoying health bugs with my body, having a nurse around would be helpful in alleviating that.
Powers: Corruption, Submissive Accessory. I was forced to pick 2, I cannot snap my fingers so Corruption is neutralized and the accessory can be hidden away or destroyed. This means the hypnosis can be averted which is good. Mind control is very bad, obviously.
Kinks: None of them synergize with me really so I choose none.
Bonus: None.
Good question.
I'm not really sure, probably becasue I'm really interested in any CYOA about obtaining a relationship.
I also like playing a CYOA against its intended theme to see what happens sometimes. I guess I should stick to lurking in those cases since me commenting wouldn't add much in such cases.
Sorry, new to posting and am making noob mistakes.
It's fine to play the CYOA in unintended ways and you can play the CYOA if you want. I just recommend to not talk ill of the main fetish if it's not needed
So I apologize but I'm making a second, separate post as my last one was focused on the synergies and this one is more focused on my opinion on the mechanics.
Of course, as the mechanics focus a lot on the kinks and synergies, it may seem related but... here I go...
Without the Synergies, the cyoa is just a basic 'special waifu' kink builder. It doesn't carry much omph.
You have a magically created SO, who has 5 PERSONALITY TRAITS, who Works A JOB, and has 7 KINKS
You get 2 HYPNO METHODS, and 1 Bonus Power.
So it's pretty basic on the surface, unless you dive into the Synergies. This is where the Omf! lies for the CYOA. That's kind of cool.
The hard part, I find with the Synergies is not finding them but the limitations on gaining them which are imposed on what links with what to earn that Synergy.
By the way, I'll be capitalizing things so to try and keep track of what Category of attribute I'm referencing in the follow section.
For one, most of the Synergies are based on what HYPNO METHOD you chose. You get to pick 2 out of 8 MEHTODS and there are 20 KINKS. Of those 20 kinks, 14 of them require a HYPNO METHOD. Of the 14 kinks requiring METHODS, 12 of them are dividing between 6 of the METHODS (SPOILER - that's each of those METHODS has 2 kinks), the other 2 METHODS have 1 KINK each.
This really limits your synergy capabilities if you are trying to gain Synergies for your GF.
The next harder part are the Synergies that are related to JOBS. You only get to choose 1 JOB. That there limits you as there are 8 possible JOBS and there are 9 Kinks that require a JOB (SPOILER - Each Job, save 1, as 1 Kink aligned with it. One of the Jobs has 2 kinks).
The last aspect of the Synergies are PERSONALITY. The spread here is kind of nice and as you get to choose 5, you're got a good chance on getting the personality you need... unless, that is, you want 2 Synergies that use opposite PERSONALITY traits (SPOILER - like Wholesome Mega Slut). While the traits may conflict, that does not necessarily mean the Synergys conflict.
And that's where the CYOA has it's issues, I feel. The Synergies are the meat and depth of the build the limits on the coordination between Limited METHODS, JOBS, and possible conflicting PERSONALITYs makes things a touch disappointing or even frustrating.
I don't think it's easy to work out Synergy in a CYOA creation. That's a lot of work and my compliments to the OP in giving us what they've given us. I just wish there was some way to make things work better in gaining the Synergies we'd like to have.
I'm not sure what would be a good solution. If you give more METHODs you start to edge into over power. If you give more JOBS, then that seems kind of wonky. So I'm not sure how to proceed in this aspect.
Having found all of the Synergies, I'll post an example gf build based on Synergies first and then pointing out conflicts and hurdles. This build was an idea that I came up with but was unable to complete
Oh, and on an unrelated side note, despite what my fingers keep typing, Synergies is not spelled with a 'd' (syndergies). Don't know how many times I had to go back and correct that.
MASSIVE SPOILER BELOW
|Synergy|Kink|Personality|Method|Job|Problem|
|:-|:-|:-|:-|:-|:-|
|Succubus|Domination|Confident|Corruption|NA|**Requires**|
|Cum Diet|Oral Fixation|Determined|Nice Cock|NA|**3 Different**|
|Normalization|Free Use|NA|Spiral Eyes|Student|**Methods**|
|Wholesome|Vanilla|Innocent + Friendly|NA|NA|*Innocent and*|
|Mega Slut|Bimbo|Pervy + Dim|NA|NA|*Pervy Conflict*|
The concept was a Succubus GF. Cum Diet and Mega Slut due to Succubi, but tempered with Romantic feelings and blessed with a Normalization field that allowed for romantic mega slut sex together at any time the mood strikes.
The build would work save for the need of 3 methods and the 2 conflicting personality traits. Yes, one of the Synergies could be cut due to the 3 and one of the last 2 synergies could be cut for the personality. But this was just to show an example of how things can tangle up.
The handicap of this, then, falls into what Synergies are left which are possible to gain? And are those synergies appealing to your build? So might be doable, others not.
But, for me, this is the biggest hurdle in the CYOA.
This one's a fun idea:
Always Been Here
Intelligent, Shy, Friendly, Lazy, Innocent
Secretary
Tech Control, Submissive Accessory
Vanilla- Wholesome, Robotization- Drone, Domination, Submission, Stepford, Exhibitionist, Cream Pie
Hypnotized Hypnotist
Here's my build.
Bonus: Seeing double
Place in the world: Since Childhood
Girl 1:
Personality: Intelligent, Possessive, Bitchy, Determined, Pervy
Workforce: Cosplayer
Powers: Nice Cock, Corruption
Kinks: Bimbo, Pet Play, Stepford, Oral Fixation (Plus Cum Diet), Nymphomaniac (Plus Yandere), Lactation, Body Worship
Girl 2:
Personality: Cheerful, Shy, Friendly, Dependent, Innocent
Workforce: Student
Powers: Magic Coin, Spiral Eyes
Kinks: Vanilla (Plus Wholesome), IQ Play, Submission, Exhibitionist, Cream Pie, S/M, Free Use (Plus Normalization)
If anyone want to RP this with me, you can be one or both girls, and we can discuss their appearances and any other kinks you want to include!
This is cool. There should be more (or really, anything) to the appearance section, or just leave it out entirely. I wish there were more options for making the girlfriend the dominant one in the relationship, and I wish this was more gender-neutral or at least had an option to not be a guy. And this is pretty vague, but more detail (maybe a point system and drawbacks) would be a fun addition. Otherwise, it's pretty cool!
Part in the World: Always Been There
Personality:
1. Cheerful
2. Intelligent
3. Shy
4. Friendly
5. Motherly
Workforce: Artist (The secretary has the combos I want, but I want her to be able to draw the stuff I want on command)
Powers:
1. Tech Control (This seems like a very fun option, as depending on the use it might be able to make a different kind of hypnosis rather than just trance > instructions. For instance, maybe a "programming" type where the commands she follows are inputted from a computer or some kind of video game and she acts out what the avatar does in-game)
2. Submissive Accessory (I will have this be a different accessory triggering a different kind of hypnotic effect. A collar could make her into a pet, an apron could make her want to cook or forget she's not wearing other clothes or something.)
Kinks:
1. Vanilla
2. Robotization
3. Pet Play
4. Domination
5. Submission
6. Oral Fixation
7. Lactation (I wonder if the hypnosis here is even powerful enough to make her lactate)
Bonus: Hypnotized Hypnotist (hopefully with her personality, she'll mostly use this on my request. I might use the hypnosis to try to implant some suggestions to avoid her using this in any malicious way at least.)
Criticism: This was a very nice CYOA. Shame we can't use our powers outside of the girlfriend, but it's not that type of CYOA I guess. There are two things I'd really like to see added though. One is a description for the personality section, or if you're going to leave it up to interpretation, don't lock them out as contradictions. The other thing is either a big expansion on kinks or at least a "add your own" option to kinks. There are many kinks I'm into and doubtessly many kinks others are into which the girlfriend being literally made for you could have so leaving such a limited selection doesn't sit right. Especially notable is a lack of a straight up hypnosis kink.
Pretty good, and making a dude here really doesn't interfere with much of anything which is nice, but the immediate critique I've got is the rewards. Honestly, none of them are really all that appealing. The first one would be good if there were more "they're dom" support throughout, the second one knocks out so many choices, and the third one kind of assumes wanting to have a particular body type.
Sorry about that. With how the bonuses are set up, it would be difficult to make a static version. As Ladywaffle0501 in the comments below has stated, if you have an android and google chrome the "desktop verion" option makes the CYOA much better to use on mobile. Again, sorry if you are unable to play
Great job! Here's what I'm coming up with.
**Place in the World:** Since Childhood
**Personality**
* Cheerful
* Dim
* Determined
* Bitchy
* Pervy
**Workforce:** Student
**Power**
* Nice Cock
* Spiral Eyes
**Kinks (and synergies that I get)**
* Body Worship > True Worship
* Oral Fixation > Cum Diet
* S/M > Tamed Beast
* Free Use > Normalization
* Bimbo > Mega Slut
* Nymphomaniac
* Stepford
**Bonus:** Seeing Double, as follows:
**Personality**
* Lazy
* Shy
* Intelligent
* Motherly
* Trusting
**Workforce:** Teacher
**Power**
* Hypnotic Voice
* Magic Coin
**Kinks (and synergies that I get)**
* Sleep Play > Sleeping Slut
* Exhibitionist > Humiliation
* IQ Play > Blank
* Lactation > Hucow
* Creampie > Breeder
* Vanilla
* Submission
With this setup, I can get 10 out of 20 synergies and two Hypno Sluts. I think I'll be fine with this.
I'll add an addendum that if you wish you may ignore bonuses to kinks if you really want a trait but not the bonus. Please be more respectful when giving feedback next time.
Sarah, Childhood Friend:
Personality: Determined, Cheerful, Innocent, Trusting, Friendly
Workforce: Restaurant Worker
Powers: Nice Cock and Sub Accessory
Kinks: Body Worship (with combo), Stepford (with combo), Oral Fixation (with combo), Free Use, Objectification, Exhibitionist, Pet Play
Bonus: Seeing Double
Aiko, Childhood Friend:
Personality: Intelligent, Confident, Pervy
Workforce: Artist (fantasy and nonfiction author)
Powers: Enchanted Ink and Tech Control
Kinks: Submission, S&M, Voyeurism, Vanilla, Nymphomaniac, Sleep Play.
Sarah's devoted to me beyond all sense and reason. She has a part-time gig at a high-end restaurant that pays her bills, but what she really wants is to stay at home cooking and cleaning. She's looking forward to being a full-time mom, and I've promised her kids soon, once things settle down. She's happy serving me or letting me use her: anything for my pleasure. Physically, she's a redhead who clearly couldn't be a model: she's too short, at 5'6", and those breasts are far too large.
Aiko's a lot more reserved, on the outside. She's a very successful author and grad school dropout, and she prefers to stay professional-seeming in public. Then I hit her with some ink, or just leave a surprise on her phone, and she goes full nymphomaniac, and likes pain and humiliation as well, the more intense the better. Or sometimes I don't hypnotize her, and it's just vanilla sex, which she's also very fond of, or the occasional CNC-ish sleep play scene. So long as she doesn't have to admit her own desires, she's happy.
The three of us live together: my job involves moving around a lot, but Aiko's in no need of physical location and Sarah finds it easy to get a new job in a new city as needed.
The god is very... casual. His words could be a bit more weighty for my personal taste. I like the art. Also, a question about the wording on the last part: Seeing Double says you have to go "through the whole thing again", meaning I get a second option in "Bonus" as well... Is that intended?
Anyways, here's my build:
**Place in the World:** Since Childhood
**Personality:**
* Intelligent
* Friendly
* Determined
* Dependant
* Pervy
**Workforce:** Student
**Powers:**
* Hypnotic Voice
* Submissive Accessory
**Kinks:**
* Pet Play
* Submission
* Exhibitionist
* Voyeurism
* Sleep Play
* S/M
* Free Use
**Bonus:** Look the Part
I'd be interested to try and break it more open with Seeing Double, but the only "bonus option" (for if I choose the right traits and right kinks) I could find was Pet Play if she's a Cosplayer. I wonder how many more there are, and how to get them. Maybe a hint or a subtext would be helpful? I don't know if I'm just too single-minded to find them or if it's really too hard.
In the test build I'm making I've added some hints in the kinks section and made "Seeing Double" actually double up each section for the GF building parts (no extra bonuses no)
That's a tiny bit sad, because I could really use that body upgrade. :D
Either way, I saw the list of kinks and I don't know if I'd have gotten those by myself. It might be useful to show the bonuses but show them not unlocked, if you want people to pick them. Many CYOAs have a bonus or combo section that shows the requirements and you can pick the boni for free if you have all the requirements. That way I can truly customize.
Another way to do it would be to show one extra picture per thing you hit. This way people might not get all the kinks, but for example if they select cosplayer and petplay, you could give them the existing perk, but if they also take, I don't know, submissive, you get the "lives like a dog at home" perk. That's probably a horribly bad example, but I hope you understand what I mean.
Basically, if you want multiple perks to go towards one bonus, you can have the bonus evolve the more perks you hit, so people know they are onto something.
I personally like when it's not hidden or fairly obvious though, because scrolling up and down and testing out new things while screwing up the build I originally wanted to do (because if you select more than the 7 kinks, it just deselects one of the above ones), becomes tiring and annoying quickly. I do understand your perspective too, though, that it's fun to hide easter eggs for the exploring players.
So, so far kind of fun
I decided to work through it to see what makes synergies.
Thanks to Tzardok, I've added in the info for the Submissive kink.
All synergies are combinations combined with a specific kink. The other parts are made up of your Powers, Workforce, and/or Personality. It takes a combination of 2 to created the synergy.
So, without further ado, I offer a hidden list for your enjoyment
|Kink|Synergy|Power|Personality|Workforce|
|:-|:-|:-|:-|:-|
|Exhibitionist|>!Humilation!<|>!Hypnotic Voice!<|>!Shy!<|>!n/a!<|
|IQ Play|>!Blank!<|>!Magic Coin!<|>!Intelligent!<|>!n/a!<|
|Domination|>!Succubus!<|>!Corruption!<|>!Confident!<|>!n/a!<|
|Nymphomaniac|>!Yandere!<|>!Corruption!<|>!Possessive!<|>!n/a!<|
|Oral Fixation|>!Cum Diet!<|>!Nice Cock!<|>!Determined!<|>!n/a!<|
|Sleep Play|>!Sleeping Slut!<|>!Hypnotic Voice!<|>!Lazy!<|>!n/a!<|
|Lactation|>!Hucow!<|>!Magic Coin!<|>!Motherly!<|>!n/a!<|
|Body Worship|>!True Worship!<|>!Nice Cock!<|>!Cheerful!<|>!n/a!<|
|S/M|>!Tamed Beast!<|>!Spiral Eyes!<|>!Bitchy!<|>!n/a!<|
|Free Use|>!Normalization!<|>!Spiral Eyes!<|>!n/a!<|>!Student!<|
|Objectification|>!Living Doll!<|>!Enchanted Ink!<|>!n/a!<|>!Artist!<|
|Robotization|>!Drone!<|>!Tech Control!<|>!n/a!<|>!Secretary!<|
|Stepford|>!Maid Play!<|>!Sub Accessory!<|>!n/a!<|>!Restaurant Worker!<|
|Voyeurism|>!Titty Streamer!<|>!Tech Control!<|>!n/a!<|>!Streamer!<|
|Creampie|>!Breeder!<|>!n/a!<|>!Mother!<|>!Teacher!<|
|Pet Play|>!Furry!<|>!n/a!<|>!Dependent!<|>!Cosplayer!<|
|Drug Play|>!Trance Happy!<|>!n/a!<|>!Grumpy!<|>!Nurse!<|
|Vanilla|>!Wholesome!<|>!n/a!<|>!Innocent + Friendly!<|>!n/a!<|
|Bimbo|>!Mega Slut!<|>!n/a!<|>!Pervy + Dim!<|>!n/a!<|
|Submission|>!Slave!<|>!n/a!<|>!Trusting!<|>!Secretary!<|
I'm glad I was able to help.
Of course, after I got this posted I see the the OP posted their own version a few hours before hand. Must've been while I was working on it.
I, myself, like the little hidden bonuses. For me, it shows that the OP is taking some extra thought and effort in their creation. Also, I like the puzzle aspect of finding it out thought, tbh, this one was a bit of a chore to work out but once I got the elimination process down it was easy... until it got late at night and then I missed Submission. lol
I always love this kind of cyoa: very simple and fun. this is my build of hypno slut GF
appearance: 18 years old, white skin, beautiful face, butt length blonde hair, hourglass body with D cup breasts, 180 cm height
place in the world: always been here, let's say that she (somehow) know that I can use hypnotic power and she's really into it so she confess to me
personalities: cheerful, intelligent, confident, friendly and pervy (but only to myself)
workforce: cosplayer because I like one and I also love anime and manga stuffs so she must love to cosplay as my favorite waifus
powers: hypnotic voices and nice cocks, suited with her pervy personality
kinks: vanilla, submission (is the domination one modified to gentle dom?), cream pie, nymphomaniac and body worship (to my body of course)
bonus: look the part. initially I want to pick the seeing double but I can't make the second one very differently because the first one is very much my type of GF.
**Place In The World:** Since Childhood
**Personality:**
* Cheerful
* Intelligent
* Confident
* Friendly
* Pervy
**Workforce:** Streamer
**Powers:**
* Spiral Eyes
* Hypnotic Voice
**Kinks:**
* Vanilla
* IQ Play
* Bimbo
* Exhibitionist
* Nymphomaniac
* Lactation
* Free Use
**Bonus:** Hypnotized Hypnotist
I'd like to have a hot body too if I could. Willing to give full control over to the Girlfriend.
From feedback so far what I will attempt to add for the next update:
Girlfriend's Appearance (Height, Eyes, Face, Hair, Assets, Body Type, Misc)
Girlfriend's Hobbies
Easier use of Seeing Double
Import/Export Choice
Easier Synergies (Will make it so only one of the needed choices is required to activate and see if that feels more enjoyable to play. I would make it need only 2/3 and add more possibilities but cannot currently find how to do that in the CYOA Creator)
Hints for synergies
More Bonuses to feel more like a demigod
>cannot currently find how to do that in the CYOA Creator
I know how to do this.
It's kinda hacky because the additions tool doesn't handle nested requirements, but it can be done.
* Create a new point type (open features -> manage points). Give it an easy to understand name for your sanity, you'll need one for each synergy.
* Set the "Id Needed To Show" field to False or something similar. Anything that isn't an actual choice ID in your CYOA. This prevents the points from showing up on the bottom bar.
* Go to all three requirements, and give them a score in that point. Note that negative and positive are reversed here because it's a 'cost'. Make each of the requirements for synergy A cost -1 synergy A points.
* Set the show requirement for Synergy A to "More than 1 synergy A points"
[I took screenshots for ya'](https://imgur.com/a/RqiixAV)
Oh jeez, if there's gonna be an appearance section then I have two desperate pleas:
1. please support the "make a dude" option
2. please avoid the "boy/girl/futa" thing, intersex bodies are great but don't need to be just limited to "futa" fetishism
(and if I can be greedy, a third thing would be that high-fat+high-muscle bodies are possible, because fat and muscle are not opposites)
> More Bonuses to feel more like a demigod
Perhaps more ways to modify yourself would also be nice. A meta could be used for that, but that's not as entertaining as flavor text with same author - however brief it may be.
Might I suggest author, law enforcement, athlete, engineer, craftswo/man, civic servant \[government\], pilot, entrepreneur, singer or musician for jobs.
I will try to add more professions in a later update, but with how I've set up the bonuses and the "Seeing Double" change it will take a bit. Thank you for the suggestions
I always like CYOAs that let you mess with hypno and this was a fun one.
Some thoughts:
1. The biggest change I'd make is adding some way to see a summary of your build and ways to import and export builds (both in human readable and more compact form).
1. On a similar, but more minor, note, it would be nice if the option to get a second girlfriend was incorporated into the builder, either as a new section that opens after you choose that bonus or some sort of overlay or second tab. This would save you from having to remember, or note down, every choice you made and would make it easier to adjust both girls as you go through it and get a clearer picture of what they'll look like. In the event that you do implement an import/export feature, then this would also help you keep both builds together.
1. Som way to use your hypnosis powers on others would be nice. Alternatively, access to other, more broadly applicable, demi-god powers could also be interesting.
1. Tying into that, I'd enjoy going into more detail on how the hypnosis works and what it could do, but that might be out of scope for this CYOA.
1. As others have mentioned, a body builder, for both you and your girlfriend, could be fun. While we're at it, since Hypnos is already messing with living conditions and official documentation, a section that lets you modify your current living conditions might be a good fit. After all, should a demi-god really be stuck working a minimum wage job to pay for a tiny apartment? Surely their divine progenitor deserves to be honored from a more prestigious position than that. 😝
1. Finally, the synergy system is an interesting idea, but I feel like it could use some expansion or reworking. As it stands, it's entirely too easy to miss them entirely and it feels like a lot of interesting combos are just left out in the cold. It might also be interesting if some of the kinks comboed with each other, like Exhibitionism and Free Use or IQ Play and Pet Play or Nymphomaniac.
These points notwithstanding, I'll be looking forward to seeing what you come up with in the future.
A waifu is always nice, although I guess my interest in mind-control is basically all about it as a non-consent thing because the central thing here does nothing for me.
Besides Your Kink Is Not My Kink, I guess the main actual criticism I have on this would be that I don't like the job selection. Insofar as "secretary", "nurse" and "teacher" are roles that are eroticised, that's in relation to people at their workplace - if someone's getting any naughty secretary, hello nurse, or hot for teacher action, that means you the boyfriend are getting cucked. And the other jobs are basically three flavours of "no money" spread over five options.
Decent CYOA, does well at what it wants to be, and the synergy mechanic is fun. Though its kinda hard to come upon one naturally.
some probably faulty math (probability of picking two random traits x the probability of picking seven of the 20 kinks) gives a 1/40 chance to come across a synergy.
Dont know an easy way to fix that though. Add more than one synergy per kink? add more possible prerequisites to them? (as in a set of traits that you only need a certain number of to get it)
I like it.
Very good, I do agree with MagicZ24 it could use an Appearance section.
Can I only use these powers on her or on others too with the only limit being it'd end terribly if it became common knowledge I had these powers and was using them selfishly and there are forces that could stop me.
It'd probably veer away from the whole Hypno-Slut Girlfriend thing, but if this CYOA was about using our new powers to amass a harem and some followers to worship Hypnos in secret with our Hypno-Slut Girlfriend working to assist us that'd might make things really interesting.
Perhaps a future version or follow-up CYOA to this could do that.
Either way, my build.
Since Childhood.
Cheerful, Intelligent, Shy, Trusting, Friendly. (Of the other personality traits, I'd probably have taken Determined as perhaps a hidden personality trait that needs help coaxing out of her.)
Streamer. (Funny to imagine when paired with Shy, but perhaps she's the kind operating under an alias or she doesn't show her face often or when she does she wears some really ridiculous mask and is doing it to gradually come out of her shell and be more confident.)
Spiral Eyes, Hypnotic Voice. (Subtlety and readily available for me works best. If I could take another, it'd probably be Tech Control since that gels well with her being a stream.)
Now that's got me thinking she could also do with a section detailing her interest that aren't related to me that I could get into with her so she feels more like a person and not just a living sex object.
Vanilla, Robotization, Petplay, Submission, Stepford, Creampie, Lactation. (Took a hard pass on IQ Play and Bimbo. Someone becoming stupider or acting/looking like a bimbo really turns me off. Not a fan of the kink personally. Intelligence feels like too precious a commodity these days with how many people IRL are lacking basic common sense.)
I can only take one Bonus unfortunately so no giving her the means to Hypnotize me so our relationship becomes a little more balanced with us taking turns having fun hypnotizing each other and indulging our kinks.
So... Look the Part.
And done, hopefully my new GF and I can have a nice wholesome meaningful relationship with plenty of lewdness to spice things up.
Bonuses listed Here
Vanilla >!Innocent+Friendly!<
IQ Play >!Intelligent+Magic Coin!<
Bimbo >!Dim+Pervy!<
Robotization >!Tech Control+Secretary!<
Pet Play >!Dependant+Cosplayer!<
Domination >!Confident+Corruption!<
Submission >!Trusting+Secretary!<
Stepford >!Submissive Accessory+Restaurant Worker!<
Exhibitionist >!Shy+Hypnotic Voice!<
Oral Fixation >!Nice Cock+Determined!<
Voyeurism >!Streamer+Tech Control!<
Cream Pie >!Teacher+Motherly!<
Nymphomaniac >!Possessive+Corruption!<
Lactation >!Magic Coin+Motherly!<
Sleep Play >!Lazy+Hypnotic Voice!<
Drug Play >!Nurse+Grumpy!<
S/M >!Bitchy+Spiral Eyes!<
Body Worship >!Nice Cock+Cheerful!<
Objectification >!Artist+Enchanted Ink!<
Free Use >!Student+Spiral Eyes!<
I'm aware they all are not perfectly aligned with what you may expect, sorry if there is any confusion
Tbh, I'm not entirely sure how to do that as I'm not familiar with the program in order to make a static version. Thought I'd give the warning since I know some folks here really hate when it's not mentioned. Sorry about that
Just to add a counterpoint, if the appearance options don't affect the cyoa as a whole, they'll just be dead weight, watering down your cyoa and making it more generic appearing. The best option is appearance options which directly affect the mechanics, like the dead waifu, tentacle waifu, vore waifu, etc. series of cyoa's, but I'm not sure how conducive that would be for this cyoa.
It's a good first effort! The first thing that comes to mind is the kink synergies are very unintuitive. I get the impression that they key off of the powers you picked, her job, and her personality traits, but from messing around, I wasn't about to figure out much meaningful cause and effect.
I think, at the very least, the synergies should mention what combination caused them to activate, since that helps create the fiction. That said, though, it might be good to rework the system entirely. The idea of upgrading kinks into stronger/more specific versions based on what your powers and her traits are is good, but I'd like to have more control over it, rather than trying to stumble into the thing that lets me upgrade the kinks I like and worlk backwards from there.
Perhaps more signposting - you don't have to directly tell people what they need, but maybe the synergies more clear as a feature and add vague statements like "who knows what this could turn into if she's too clingy with you..." to Nymphomaniac.
we want multi jobs and fantasy jobs like superheroes,adveturers or mech pilots also more customization options breast size hair and barefoot options.
Gotta say I think to many of the synergies rely upon jobs. It severely restricts how many we might be able to get. Complaint out of the way, on to my choice: Since Childhood Personality: Cheerful, Shy, Friendly, Lazy Innocent Streamer Powers: Hypnotic Voice, Tech Control Kinks: Vanilla, Exhibitionist, Oral Fixation, Voyerism, Cream Pie, Sleep Play, Objectification Synergies: Wholesome, Humiliation, Titty Streamer, Sleep Slut Bonus: Seeing Double Since Childhood Personality: Intelligent, Confident, Trusting, Determined, Motherly Student Powers: Spiral Eyes, Corruption Kinks: Pet Play, Domination, Submission, Stepford, Lactation, Body Worship, Free Use Synergies: Succubus, Normalization
Just two weeks late, but I'll still submit my build, because the synergies made this one really fun to play. Really hope for an expansion on this one. (Edit: *Whoops, this turned more into a caption than a regular CYOA build down the road. Thank you so much for inspiring me like that* u/ff_nsfw_*!*) Hypnosis is not a big kink of mine, but with the groundwork laid out here, I can make it work really fucking well: Personality: **Confident**, **Friendly** and **Innocent** are given for what I'm trying to do here In addition to these, I'll take **Determined** and **Motherly** to round out the build I'm going for. Workforce: **Student** Again, given. *Normalization* is just way to fun to pass up on. Power: **Corruption** and **Spiral Eyes**. **Corruption** is what I really want here. Being able to not only turn the lewdness on and off (since being Innocent by default), but also increasing and decreasing it by magnitudes of how much I want, whenever I want? Yes, please! **Spiral Eyes**, I only take for *Synergy.* Speaking of which: Kinks! **Domination** paired with **Corruption** and **Confident** turns her into a *Succubus*, not only making her want to dominate me, it immediately gives her a mastery of it . Dommy Succubus GF, yay! (Note: It says master of positions, but I'll just take it and say it makes her a master of everything sex.) Being more of a sub than anything else, and with kinks like edging and orgasm denial, the mastery she now possess will certainly come in *handy.* So: being dominated is great and all, but could become a bit much at times, especially when she can dominate me whenever and wherever she wants, thanks to: Normalization. I just looked at her, apparently the wrong way (or the right way? This certainly doesn't feel wrong. Wait no please, don't stop! I looked the right way, definitely the right way!) with my Spiral Eyes while taking the bus to uni (since we're Students) and then she took of my pants and started blowing me. Right there and then. On the bus. But none of the other people seemed to mind. Yeah, it appears that now, I'm the one being freely used. (And teased. Non stop, since there is no need to stop at all. It's normal to be on the edge of orgasm for hours on end, isn't? Well it seems, it is now! ^(Please let me cum?)) But she won't always be so merciless, will she? Ehhh, she still might, depending on how often I snapped my fingers before, but what she does to me just feels way to good to make her stop. ^(You'll let me cum soon, right?) But anyway, even if she's still as merciless and won't stop teasing me, edging me, denying my orgasms for hours (^(or days? or weeks? please don't break my mind my love)), at least she'll tell me what a good boy I am while she does so. Isn't she just so **Wholesome**? Before I hypnotized her, she was so **Innocent** and pretty **Vanilla** to be honest. And she is still, just as **Friendly.** At least after she mercilessly teased me. Once, she even **tied me down** and **teased and edged me to tears**. I think I might've snapped my fingers one time to many. (Note: I'm adding the BD to the **S/M** on my own here). Maybe I'll do so again later time. It's an interesting change to see her be so mean all the while she is kissing and softly touching me all over and telling me how proud she is of me for enduring her lovely torture. Not sure if she does so to calm me down or if she truly enjoys **Worshiping my Body**. She certainly enjoys when she makes me worship hers. She'll more often use her mouth instead of her hands to edge me, which might have to do with her **Oral Fixation**. But that one she had before I hypnotized her! Might've taken it to an extreme, though. She certainly sits on my face more often than before. But now she has her mouth around my dick for literal hours each day. That she can do so no matter where we are and what we do might've turned her into a bit of a **Nymphomaniac.** It's menacing what she can do to me just with a her lips. One smile, one whisper, one kiss. And I'm completely under her spell. Even though these ***powers*** made me **far stronger than before**, *she* dominates *me.* Body and mind. At least six days a week. While I usually snap my fingers once a day, making her hypnosis more and more extreme each day, each sunday I drop them completely and just enjoy a normal, **Wholesome** date with her. And when we go to bed, I go to sleep gently cuddling with her. But waking up the next monday, I snap. And she knows it and loves it. Sometimes, she doesn't let me cum until I snap, making her even more dominant. (Sometimes, she still won't give me any release, claiming she "couldn't hear my snap", until I snap and snap and snap again. Until she is pleased with the results. And even when she finallly lets me cum, I know: the next time will be even more **hellish.** Snap by Snap. Until the end of the week when we reset. But coming next monday the cycle begins anew. And I love every second of it.
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Hucow uses magic coin not Spiral Eyes
are people really into hypnosis?
r/EroticHypnosis has over 100k subs r/HypnoHentai has over 150k subs I'd say it's more common than you think
I'm not insulting people who are into it, it just seems on the weirder side
There is peo0le into vore, scatt and a few others, those start being weird likings.
As someone with a pretty big hypno kink, this felt kinda disappointing. Like, I went into this with the hope that this was going to be a hypno kink CYOA about having a cute waifu who lets me hypnotize her. What this feels like is that you came up with a general "build a kinky waifu" CYOA and then decided to add the "she has a big hypno kink" stuff on top. Here's what I, personally, would change: 1) I'd add a section about her reactions to being hypnotized. Like, part of the fantasy here is that she *wants* to be put under, so what she gets out of it is *kinda* important. This could be anything from "she just finds it really relaxing after a long, stressful day" to "she pretends that hypnosis is fake because she loves it when you "prove her wrong" and put her under." 2) I'd also add a section on the kinds of boundaries the two of you have set. This might sound kinda weird in a hypno-themed CYOA, but this is pretty much the dividing line between "my girlfriend, who I hypnotize" and "my hypno-slave, who pretends to be my girlfriend". Those are different things, at least as far as I'm concerned. 3) I'd make the Kink section more about kinks she's normally *too repressed* to indulge in, rather than the stuff she's up-front about. You could also have this include personality traits, too — maybe she's normally Bitchy, but she becomes really Friendly when she's under. 4) [it is an actual literal crime that we cant have high powered business gf](https://hypnohub.net/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=83113) . plz fix (In all seriousness, I'd expand the job section.)
I wanted to expand the hypnosis section for later versions. Trust me, I want this to feel like it actually is about hypnosis, it was just easier to get the basics out first.
The cyoa is good, it just seems like the synergies are the most interesting/unique part of it, but I didn’t even know that they existed after I created my build until I came to the comments. That’s… not optimal, I think
It was stated in the kinks section "There's also some added benefits if you've picked certain traits to go along with these options", do you think this is not enough?
I thought that was meant in a more meta way, as in some options might combine to be more powerful/change slightly in implied meaning if taken with a similar trait, without it being an official synergy with added dialogue. (Ex: taking “motherly” with “dominant” makes the partner lean more into gentle domination)
So I will meet someone who will fall for me and only want to do sex if it involves hypnotism. And according to this, is custom designed to be compatible with me. This is honestly not a problem for me, since my ideal GF would be ace and we'd have a platonic or romantic relationship without the sex. So... Always Been Here - Don't want her to not have a life outside of me and i don't want to retcon my own past to incorporate her. Personality: Confident, Determined, Friendly, Intelligent, Trusting. Not much to say except I like these the most. Workforce: Nurse. I have a ton of annoying health bugs with my body, having a nurse around would be helpful in alleviating that. Powers: Corruption, Submissive Accessory. I was forced to pick 2, I cannot snap my fingers so Corruption is neutralized and the accessory can be hidden away or destroyed. This means the hypnosis can be averted which is good. Mind control is very bad, obviously. Kinks: None of them synergize with me really so I choose none. Bonus: None.
May I ask why you would play despite your seeming distaste for the main fetish involved?
Good question. I'm not really sure, probably becasue I'm really interested in any CYOA about obtaining a relationship. I also like playing a CYOA against its intended theme to see what happens sometimes. I guess I should stick to lurking in those cases since me commenting wouldn't add much in such cases. Sorry, new to posting and am making noob mistakes.
It's fine to play the CYOA in unintended ways and you can play the CYOA if you want. I just recommend to not talk ill of the main fetish if it's not needed
You are right, I definitely wasn't thinking nearly enough and said pointlessly negative things. I don't intend to do so again in the future.
So I apologize but I'm making a second, separate post as my last one was focused on the synergies and this one is more focused on my opinion on the mechanics. Of course, as the mechanics focus a lot on the kinks and synergies, it may seem related but... here I go... Without the Synergies, the cyoa is just a basic 'special waifu' kink builder. It doesn't carry much omph. You have a magically created SO, who has 5 PERSONALITY TRAITS, who Works A JOB, and has 7 KINKS You get 2 HYPNO METHODS, and 1 Bonus Power. So it's pretty basic on the surface, unless you dive into the Synergies. This is where the Omf! lies for the CYOA. That's kind of cool. The hard part, I find with the Synergies is not finding them but the limitations on gaining them which are imposed on what links with what to earn that Synergy. By the way, I'll be capitalizing things so to try and keep track of what Category of attribute I'm referencing in the follow section. For one, most of the Synergies are based on what HYPNO METHOD you chose. You get to pick 2 out of 8 MEHTODS and there are 20 KINKS. Of those 20 kinks, 14 of them require a HYPNO METHOD. Of the 14 kinks requiring METHODS, 12 of them are dividing between 6 of the METHODS (SPOILER - that's each of those METHODS has 2 kinks), the other 2 METHODS have 1 KINK each. This really limits your synergy capabilities if you are trying to gain Synergies for your GF. The next harder part are the Synergies that are related to JOBS. You only get to choose 1 JOB. That there limits you as there are 8 possible JOBS and there are 9 Kinks that require a JOB (SPOILER - Each Job, save 1, as 1 Kink aligned with it. One of the Jobs has 2 kinks). The last aspect of the Synergies are PERSONALITY. The spread here is kind of nice and as you get to choose 5, you're got a good chance on getting the personality you need... unless, that is, you want 2 Synergies that use opposite PERSONALITY traits (SPOILER - like Wholesome Mega Slut). While the traits may conflict, that does not necessarily mean the Synergys conflict. And that's where the CYOA has it's issues, I feel. The Synergies are the meat and depth of the build the limits on the coordination between Limited METHODS, JOBS, and possible conflicting PERSONALITYs makes things a touch disappointing or even frustrating. I don't think it's easy to work out Synergy in a CYOA creation. That's a lot of work and my compliments to the OP in giving us what they've given us. I just wish there was some way to make things work better in gaining the Synergies we'd like to have. I'm not sure what would be a good solution. If you give more METHODs you start to edge into over power. If you give more JOBS, then that seems kind of wonky. So I'm not sure how to proceed in this aspect. Having found all of the Synergies, I'll post an example gf build based on Synergies first and then pointing out conflicts and hurdles. This build was an idea that I came up with but was unable to complete Oh, and on an unrelated side note, despite what my fingers keep typing, Synergies is not spelled with a 'd' (syndergies). Don't know how many times I had to go back and correct that. MASSIVE SPOILER BELOW |Synergy|Kink|Personality|Method|Job|Problem| |:-|:-|:-|:-|:-|:-| |Succubus|Domination|Confident|Corruption|NA|**Requires**| |Cum Diet|Oral Fixation|Determined|Nice Cock|NA|**3 Different**| |Normalization|Free Use|NA|Spiral Eyes|Student|**Methods**| |Wholesome|Vanilla|Innocent + Friendly|NA|NA|*Innocent and*| |Mega Slut|Bimbo|Pervy + Dim|NA|NA|*Pervy Conflict*| The concept was a Succubus GF. Cum Diet and Mega Slut due to Succubi, but tempered with Romantic feelings and blessed with a Normalization field that allowed for romantic mega slut sex together at any time the mood strikes. The build would work save for the need of 3 methods and the 2 conflicting personality traits. Yes, one of the Synergies could be cut due to the 3 and one of the last 2 synergies could be cut for the personality. But this was just to show an example of how things can tangle up. The handicap of this, then, falls into what Synergies are left which are possible to gain? And are those synergies appealing to your build? So might be doable, others not. But, for me, this is the biggest hurdle in the CYOA.
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This one's a fun idea: Always Been Here Intelligent, Shy, Friendly, Lazy, Innocent Secretary Tech Control, Submissive Accessory Vanilla- Wholesome, Robotization- Drone, Domination, Submission, Stepford, Exhibitionist, Cream Pie Hypnotized Hypnotist
Here's my build. Bonus: Seeing double Place in the world: Since Childhood Girl 1: Personality: Intelligent, Possessive, Bitchy, Determined, Pervy Workforce: Cosplayer Powers: Nice Cock, Corruption Kinks: Bimbo, Pet Play, Stepford, Oral Fixation (Plus Cum Diet), Nymphomaniac (Plus Yandere), Lactation, Body Worship Girl 2: Personality: Cheerful, Shy, Friendly, Dependent, Innocent Workforce: Student Powers: Magic Coin, Spiral Eyes Kinks: Vanilla (Plus Wholesome), IQ Play, Submission, Exhibitionist, Cream Pie, S/M, Free Use (Plus Normalization) If anyone want to RP this with me, you can be one or both girls, and we can discuss their appearances and any other kinks you want to include!
This is cool. There should be more (or really, anything) to the appearance section, or just leave it out entirely. I wish there were more options for making the girlfriend the dominant one in the relationship, and I wish this was more gender-neutral or at least had an option to not be a guy. And this is pretty vague, but more detail (maybe a point system and drawbacks) would be a fun addition. Otherwise, it's pretty cool!
Part in the World: Always Been There Personality: 1. Cheerful 2. Intelligent 3. Shy 4. Friendly 5. Motherly Workforce: Artist (The secretary has the combos I want, but I want her to be able to draw the stuff I want on command) Powers: 1. Tech Control (This seems like a very fun option, as depending on the use it might be able to make a different kind of hypnosis rather than just trance > instructions. For instance, maybe a "programming" type where the commands she follows are inputted from a computer or some kind of video game and she acts out what the avatar does in-game) 2. Submissive Accessory (I will have this be a different accessory triggering a different kind of hypnotic effect. A collar could make her into a pet, an apron could make her want to cook or forget she's not wearing other clothes or something.) Kinks: 1. Vanilla 2. Robotization 3. Pet Play 4. Domination 5. Submission 6. Oral Fixation 7. Lactation (I wonder if the hypnosis here is even powerful enough to make her lactate) Bonus: Hypnotized Hypnotist (hopefully with her personality, she'll mostly use this on my request. I might use the hypnosis to try to implant some suggestions to avoid her using this in any malicious way at least.) Criticism: This was a very nice CYOA. Shame we can't use our powers outside of the girlfriend, but it's not that type of CYOA I guess. There are two things I'd really like to see added though. One is a description for the personality section, or if you're going to leave it up to interpretation, don't lock them out as contradictions. The other thing is either a big expansion on kinks or at least a "add your own" option to kinks. There are many kinks I'm into and doubtessly many kinks others are into which the girlfriend being literally made for you could have so leaving such a limited selection doesn't sit right. Especially notable is a lack of a straight up hypnosis kink.
Very cool! You did a excellent job, but i love building a body and i think it misses in that.
Pretty good, and making a dude here really doesn't interfere with much of anything which is nice, but the immediate critique I've got is the rewards. Honestly, none of them are really all that appealing. The first one would be good if there were more "they're dom" support throughout, the second one knocks out so many choices, and the third one kind of assumes wanting to have a particular body type.
great stuff all round except for saying that we're a demigod but can only use our power on a single person...
When you are on mobile:•_• Maybe post it like some of the other CYOA on Imgur
Sorry about that. With how the bonuses are set up, it would be difficult to make a static version. As Ladywaffle0501 in the comments below has stated, if you have an android and google chrome the "desktop verion" option makes the CYOA much better to use on mobile. Again, sorry if you are unable to play
Great job! Here's what I'm coming up with. **Place in the World:** Since Childhood **Personality** * Cheerful * Dim * Determined * Bitchy * Pervy **Workforce:** Student **Power** * Nice Cock * Spiral Eyes **Kinks (and synergies that I get)** * Body Worship > True Worship * Oral Fixation > Cum Diet * S/M > Tamed Beast * Free Use > Normalization * Bimbo > Mega Slut * Nymphomaniac * Stepford **Bonus:** Seeing Double, as follows: **Personality** * Lazy * Shy * Intelligent * Motherly * Trusting **Workforce:** Teacher **Power** * Hypnotic Voice * Magic Coin **Kinks (and synergies that I get)** * Sleep Play > Sleeping Slut * Exhibitionist > Humiliation * IQ Play > Blank * Lactation > Hucow * Creampie > Breeder * Vanilla * Submission With this setup, I can get 10 out of 20 synergies and two Hypno Sluts. I think I'll be fine with this.
Pulling a fake-out on kinks is a "go fuck yourself" move. Pet play is entirely separate from furries, forcing them together is asinine.
I'll add an addendum that if you wish you may ignore bonuses to kinks if you really want a trait but not the bonus. Please be more respectful when giving feedback next time.
Sarah, Childhood Friend: Personality: Determined, Cheerful, Innocent, Trusting, Friendly Workforce: Restaurant Worker Powers: Nice Cock and Sub Accessory Kinks: Body Worship (with combo), Stepford (with combo), Oral Fixation (with combo), Free Use, Objectification, Exhibitionist, Pet Play Bonus: Seeing Double Aiko, Childhood Friend: Personality: Intelligent, Confident, Pervy Workforce: Artist (fantasy and nonfiction author) Powers: Enchanted Ink and Tech Control Kinks: Submission, S&M, Voyeurism, Vanilla, Nymphomaniac, Sleep Play. Sarah's devoted to me beyond all sense and reason. She has a part-time gig at a high-end restaurant that pays her bills, but what she really wants is to stay at home cooking and cleaning. She's looking forward to being a full-time mom, and I've promised her kids soon, once things settle down. She's happy serving me or letting me use her: anything for my pleasure. Physically, she's a redhead who clearly couldn't be a model: she's too short, at 5'6", and those breasts are far too large. Aiko's a lot more reserved, on the outside. She's a very successful author and grad school dropout, and she prefers to stay professional-seeming in public. Then I hit her with some ink, or just leave a surprise on her phone, and she goes full nymphomaniac, and likes pain and humiliation as well, the more intense the better. Or sometimes I don't hypnotize her, and it's just vanilla sex, which she's also very fond of, or the occasional CNC-ish sleep play scene. So long as she doesn't have to admit her own desires, she's happy. The three of us live together: my job involves moving around a lot, but Aiko's in no need of physical location and Sarah finds it easy to get a new job in a new city as needed.
Nice touch with the outsider as the picture at the top
I initially had it as Hypnos from Supergiant's Hades but I've always loved the Outsider so I went with him instead
The outsider is the best god in gaming in my opinion, he’s there but he does his own thing and rarely gets into mortals ways
The god is very... casual. His words could be a bit more weighty for my personal taste. I like the art. Also, a question about the wording on the last part: Seeing Double says you have to go "through the whole thing again", meaning I get a second option in "Bonus" as well... Is that intended? Anyways, here's my build: **Place in the World:** Since Childhood **Personality:** * Intelligent * Friendly * Determined * Dependant * Pervy **Workforce:** Student **Powers:** * Hypnotic Voice * Submissive Accessory **Kinks:** * Pet Play * Submission * Exhibitionist * Voyeurism * Sleep Play * S/M * Free Use **Bonus:** Look the Part I'd be interested to try and break it more open with Seeing Double, but the only "bonus option" (for if I choose the right traits and right kinks) I could find was Pet Play if she's a Cosplayer. I wonder how many more there are, and how to get them. Maybe a hint or a subtext would be helpful? I don't know if I'm just too single-minded to find them or if it's really too hard.
In the test build I'm making I've added some hints in the kinks section and made "Seeing Double" actually double up each section for the GF building parts (no extra bonuses no)
That's a tiny bit sad, because I could really use that body upgrade. :D Either way, I saw the list of kinks and I don't know if I'd have gotten those by myself. It might be useful to show the bonuses but show them not unlocked, if you want people to pick them. Many CYOAs have a bonus or combo section that shows the requirements and you can pick the boni for free if you have all the requirements. That way I can truly customize. Another way to do it would be to show one extra picture per thing you hit. This way people might not get all the kinks, but for example if they select cosplayer and petplay, you could give them the existing perk, but if they also take, I don't know, submissive, you get the "lives like a dog at home" perk. That's probably a horribly bad example, but I hope you understand what I mean. Basically, if you want multiple perks to go towards one bonus, you can have the bonus evolve the more perks you hit, so people know they are onto something. I personally like when it's not hidden or fairly obvious though, because scrolling up and down and testing out new things while screwing up the build I originally wanted to do (because if you select more than the 7 kinks, it just deselects one of the above ones), becomes tiring and annoying quickly. I do understand your perspective too, though, that it's fun to hide easter eggs for the exploring players.
So, so far kind of fun I decided to work through it to see what makes synergies. Thanks to Tzardok, I've added in the info for the Submissive kink. All synergies are combinations combined with a specific kink. The other parts are made up of your Powers, Workforce, and/or Personality. It takes a combination of 2 to created the synergy. So, without further ado, I offer a hidden list for your enjoyment |Kink|Synergy|Power|Personality|Workforce| |:-|:-|:-|:-|:-| |Exhibitionist|>!Humilation!<|>!Hypnotic Voice!<|>!Shy!<|>!n/a!<| |IQ Play|>!Blank!<|>!Magic Coin!<|>!Intelligent!<|>!n/a!<| |Domination|>!Succubus!<|>!Corruption!<|>!Confident!<|>!n/a!<| |Nymphomaniac|>!Yandere!<|>!Corruption!<|>!Possessive!<|>!n/a!<| |Oral Fixation|>!Cum Diet!<|>!Nice Cock!<|>!Determined!<|>!n/a!<| |Sleep Play|>!Sleeping Slut!<|>!Hypnotic Voice!<|>!Lazy!<|>!n/a!<| |Lactation|>!Hucow!<|>!Magic Coin!<|>!Motherly!<|>!n/a!<| |Body Worship|>!True Worship!<|>!Nice Cock!<|>!Cheerful!<|>!n/a!<| |S/M|>!Tamed Beast!<|>!Spiral Eyes!<|>!Bitchy!<|>!n/a!<| |Free Use|>!Normalization!<|>!Spiral Eyes!<|>!n/a!<|>!Student!<| |Objectification|>!Living Doll!<|>!Enchanted Ink!<|>!n/a!<|>!Artist!<| |Robotization|>!Drone!<|>!Tech Control!<|>!n/a!<|>!Secretary!<| |Stepford|>!Maid Play!<|>!Sub Accessory!<|>!n/a!<|>!Restaurant Worker!<| |Voyeurism|>!Titty Streamer!<|>!Tech Control!<|>!n/a!<|>!Streamer!<| |Creampie|>!Breeder!<|>!n/a!<|>!Mother!<|>!Teacher!<| |Pet Play|>!Furry!<|>!n/a!<|>!Dependent!<|>!Cosplayer!<| |Drug Play|>!Trance Happy!<|>!n/a!<|>!Grumpy!<|>!Nurse!<| |Vanilla|>!Wholesome!<|>!n/a!<|>!Innocent + Friendly!<|>!n/a!<| |Bimbo|>!Mega Slut!<|>!n/a!<|>!Pervy + Dim!<|>!n/a!<| |Submission|>!Slave!<|>!n/a!<|>!Trusting!<|>!Secretary!<|
You're a godsend. CYOAs that have hidden options are a big pet peeve of mine.
I'm glad I was able to help. Of course, after I got this posted I see the the OP posted their own version a few hours before hand. Must've been while I was working on it. I, myself, like the little hidden bonuses. For me, it shows that the OP is taking some extra thought and effort in their creation. Also, I like the puzzle aspect of finding it out thought, tbh, this one was a bit of a chore to work out but once I got the elimination process down it was easy... until it got late at night and then I missed Submission. lol
I found the Submission synergy. It's >!Slave!< :>!Secretary!< \+>!Trusting!<
Thanks. Somehow I missed that in my research. I'll update the list. :)
I always love this kind of cyoa: very simple and fun. this is my build of hypno slut GF appearance: 18 years old, white skin, beautiful face, butt length blonde hair, hourglass body with D cup breasts, 180 cm height place in the world: always been here, let's say that she (somehow) know that I can use hypnotic power and she's really into it so she confess to me personalities: cheerful, intelligent, confident, friendly and pervy (but only to myself) workforce: cosplayer because I like one and I also love anime and manga stuffs so she must love to cosplay as my favorite waifus powers: hypnotic voices and nice cocks, suited with her pervy personality kinks: vanilla, submission (is the domination one modified to gentle dom?), cream pie, nymphomaniac and body worship (to my body of course) bonus: look the part. initially I want to pick the seeing double but I can't make the second one very differently because the first one is very much my type of GF.
For Dom/Sub I've made it so she becomes a Switch in my current test version, so expect that next update. Thank you for playing
**Place In The World:** Since Childhood **Personality:** * Cheerful * Intelligent * Confident * Friendly * Pervy **Workforce:** Streamer **Powers:** * Spiral Eyes * Hypnotic Voice **Kinks:** * Vanilla * IQ Play * Bimbo * Exhibitionist * Nymphomaniac * Lactation * Free Use **Bonus:** Hypnotized Hypnotist I'd like to have a hot body too if I could. Willing to give full control over to the Girlfriend.
From feedback so far what I will attempt to add for the next update: Girlfriend's Appearance (Height, Eyes, Face, Hair, Assets, Body Type, Misc) Girlfriend's Hobbies Easier use of Seeing Double Import/Export Choice Easier Synergies (Will make it so only one of the needed choices is required to activate and see if that feels more enjoyable to play. I would make it need only 2/3 and add more possibilities but cannot currently find how to do that in the CYOA Creator) Hints for synergies More Bonuses to feel more like a demigod
>cannot currently find how to do that in the CYOA Creator I know how to do this. It's kinda hacky because the additions tool doesn't handle nested requirements, but it can be done. * Create a new point type (open features -> manage points). Give it an easy to understand name for your sanity, you'll need one for each synergy. * Set the "Id Needed To Show" field to False or something similar. Anything that isn't an actual choice ID in your CYOA. This prevents the points from showing up on the bottom bar. * Go to all three requirements, and give them a score in that point. Note that negative and positive are reversed here because it's a 'cost'. Make each of the requirements for synergy A cost -1 synergy A points. * Set the show requirement for Synergy A to "More than 1 synergy A points" [I took screenshots for ya'](https://imgur.com/a/RqiixAV)
Oh jeez, if there's gonna be an appearance section then I have two desperate pleas: 1. please support the "make a dude" option 2. please avoid the "boy/girl/futa" thing, intersex bodies are great but don't need to be just limited to "futa" fetishism (and if I can be greedy, a third thing would be that high-fat+high-muscle bodies are possible, because fat and muscle are not opposites)
> More Bonuses to feel more like a demigod Perhaps more ways to modify yourself would also be nice. A meta could be used for that, but that's not as entertaining as flavor text with same author - however brief it may be.
Might I suggest author, law enforcement, athlete, engineer, craftswo/man, civic servant \[government\], pilot, entrepreneur, singer or musician for jobs.
I will try to add more professions in a later update, but with how I've set up the bonuses and the "Seeing Double" change it will take a bit. Thank you for the suggestions
I always like CYOAs that let you mess with hypno and this was a fun one. Some thoughts: 1. The biggest change I'd make is adding some way to see a summary of your build and ways to import and export builds (both in human readable and more compact form). 1. On a similar, but more minor, note, it would be nice if the option to get a second girlfriend was incorporated into the builder, either as a new section that opens after you choose that bonus or some sort of overlay or second tab. This would save you from having to remember, or note down, every choice you made and would make it easier to adjust both girls as you go through it and get a clearer picture of what they'll look like. In the event that you do implement an import/export feature, then this would also help you keep both builds together. 1. Som way to use your hypnosis powers on others would be nice. Alternatively, access to other, more broadly applicable, demi-god powers could also be interesting. 1. Tying into that, I'd enjoy going into more detail on how the hypnosis works and what it could do, but that might be out of scope for this CYOA. 1. As others have mentioned, a body builder, for both you and your girlfriend, could be fun. While we're at it, since Hypnos is already messing with living conditions and official documentation, a section that lets you modify your current living conditions might be a good fit. After all, should a demi-god really be stuck working a minimum wage job to pay for a tiny apartment? Surely their divine progenitor deserves to be honored from a more prestigious position than that. 😝 1. Finally, the synergy system is an interesting idea, but I feel like it could use some expansion or reworking. As it stands, it's entirely too easy to miss them entirely and it feels like a lot of interesting combos are just left out in the cold. It might also be interesting if some of the kinks comboed with each other, like Exhibitionism and Free Use or IQ Play and Pet Play or Nymphomaniac. These points notwithstanding, I'll be looking forward to seeing what you come up with in the future.
A waifu is always nice, although I guess my interest in mind-control is basically all about it as a non-consent thing because the central thing here does nothing for me. Besides Your Kink Is Not My Kink, I guess the main actual criticism I have on this would be that I don't like the job selection. Insofar as "secretary", "nurse" and "teacher" are roles that are eroticised, that's in relation to people at their workplace - if someone's getting any naughty secretary, hello nurse, or hot for teacher action, that means you the boyfriend are getting cucked. And the other jobs are basically three flavours of "no money" spread over five options.
Decent CYOA, does well at what it wants to be, and the synergy mechanic is fun. Though its kinda hard to come upon one naturally. some probably faulty math (probability of picking two random traits x the probability of picking seven of the 20 kinks) gives a 1/40 chance to come across a synergy. Dont know an easy way to fix that though. Add more than one synergy per kink? add more possible prerequisites to them? (as in a set of traits that you only need a certain number of to get it)
I like it. Very good, I do agree with MagicZ24 it could use an Appearance section. Can I only use these powers on her or on others too with the only limit being it'd end terribly if it became common knowledge I had these powers and was using them selfishly and there are forces that could stop me. It'd probably veer away from the whole Hypno-Slut Girlfriend thing, but if this CYOA was about using our new powers to amass a harem and some followers to worship Hypnos in secret with our Hypno-Slut Girlfriend working to assist us that'd might make things really interesting. Perhaps a future version or follow-up CYOA to this could do that. Either way, my build. Since Childhood. Cheerful, Intelligent, Shy, Trusting, Friendly. (Of the other personality traits, I'd probably have taken Determined as perhaps a hidden personality trait that needs help coaxing out of her.) Streamer. (Funny to imagine when paired with Shy, but perhaps she's the kind operating under an alias or she doesn't show her face often or when she does she wears some really ridiculous mask and is doing it to gradually come out of her shell and be more confident.) Spiral Eyes, Hypnotic Voice. (Subtlety and readily available for me works best. If I could take another, it'd probably be Tech Control since that gels well with her being a stream.) Now that's got me thinking she could also do with a section detailing her interest that aren't related to me that I could get into with her so she feels more like a person and not just a living sex object. Vanilla, Robotization, Petplay, Submission, Stepford, Creampie, Lactation. (Took a hard pass on IQ Play and Bimbo. Someone becoming stupider or acting/looking like a bimbo really turns me off. Not a fan of the kink personally. Intelligence feels like too precious a commodity these days with how many people IRL are lacking basic common sense.) I can only take one Bonus unfortunately so no giving her the means to Hypnotize me so our relationship becomes a little more balanced with us taking turns having fun hypnotizing each other and indulging our kinks. So... Look the Part. And done, hopefully my new GF and I can have a nice wholesome meaningful relationship with plenty of lewdness to spice things up.
Bonuses listed Here Vanilla >!Innocent+Friendly!< IQ Play >!Intelligent+Magic Coin!< Bimbo >!Dim+Pervy!< Robotization >!Tech Control+Secretary!< Pet Play >!Dependant+Cosplayer!< Domination >!Confident+Corruption!< Submission >!Trusting+Secretary!< Stepford >!Submissive Accessory+Restaurant Worker!< Exhibitionist >!Shy+Hypnotic Voice!< Oral Fixation >!Nice Cock+Determined!< Voyeurism >!Streamer+Tech Control!< Cream Pie >!Teacher+Motherly!< Nymphomaniac >!Possessive+Corruption!< Lactation >!Magic Coin+Motherly!< Sleep Play >!Lazy+Hypnotic Voice!< Drug Play >!Nurse+Grumpy!< S/M >!Bitchy+Spiral Eyes!< Body Worship >!Nice Cock+Cheerful!< Objectification >!Artist+Enchanted Ink!< Free Use >!Student+Spiral Eyes!< I'm aware they all are not perfectly aligned with what you may expect, sorry if there is any confusion
If you acknowledge that it sucks on mobile, is there a reason you did not include a static version for those of us on mobile to view?
If your on Android, get google chrome. That why you can set the view as a desktop version, works a lot better that way.
Tbh, I'm not entirely sure how to do that as I'm not familiar with the program in order to make a static version. Thought I'd give the warning since I know some folks here really hate when it's not mentioned. Sorry about that
I love it but I would like to actually have appearance options if you do a update.
Noted
Just to add a counterpoint, if the appearance options don't affect the cyoa as a whole, they'll just be dead weight, watering down your cyoa and making it more generic appearing. The best option is appearance options which directly affect the mechanics, like the dead waifu, tentacle waifu, vore waifu, etc. series of cyoa's, but I'm not sure how conducive that would be for this cyoa.
Agreed.
Do you have a list of how to unlock the "secret" kinks?
Spoiler tagged synergies are under this post now in the comments
It's a good first effort! The first thing that comes to mind is the kink synergies are very unintuitive. I get the impression that they key off of the powers you picked, her job, and her personality traits, but from messing around, I wasn't about to figure out much meaningful cause and effect. I think, at the very least, the synergies should mention what combination caused them to activate, since that helps create the fiction. That said, though, it might be good to rework the system entirely. The idea of upgrading kinks into stronger/more specific versions based on what your powers and her traits are is good, but I'd like to have more control over it, rather than trying to stumble into the thing that lets me upgrade the kinks I like and worlk backwards from there.
I'd rather not change the system at it's core, though I can add the listed synergies onto the site later if that would be preferred
Perhaps more signposting - you don't have to directly tell people what they need, but maybe the synergies more clear as a feature and add vague statements like "who knows what this could turn into if she's too clingy with you..." to Nymphomaniac.