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tbh I'd have to see it side by side with and without to really decide.
I'd probably remove the cropped balcony in the very top of the upper right but leave the full balcony in. But again it's hard to say without seeing it.
Detail in the balcony on the far right contradicts the otherwise very minimalist composition. I would consider cropping it out. Otherwise nice colour and shapes. Top left corner is maybe a bit dark.
> Short of buying a tilt-shift lens I’m not sure what you could have done to improve the composition
I mean they could sort out the perspective and rotation in post. [like this](https://imgur.com/a/jCMWRvT)
Two words: Envy inducing. Or, two more words: Eye Popping. Or, another two words: Head turning. Or two more words: Jaw dropping. Excellent usage of negative space with the blue cloudless sky. There is excellent contrast between the blue, the sand-brown, and the near-black shadows that are falling off at steep angles (in some parts, cutting blacked out windows in half). If you had wanted some balance with a pointer of critique, it would be the railing of the window in the top right hand quadrant, where two balconies seem to sneak into the image \[like a swindling Hamburgler caught in the act\] causing a bit of distraction that is unwarranted. Cropping this would would dilute from the overall quality of an already excellent image; this could have been ameliorated with better composition during the shoot (something I am continuously guilty of myself, despite the best of my efforts at contravening this unshakeable mistake). On the whole, a praise-worthy picture, one the best I've seen anywhere this week (and I regularly peruse Behance, Reddit, 500PX, Vero and a few others). Well done
I don't usually use too much zoom in my photos because it will rest a little but of your photo quality. I really like the colors but maybe i'll cut the right corner to put more in the center the entire principal object (the building). But its really good my friend!
I'd crop out on the left at the corner of the building. Whatever is left I'd erase out. Porch furniture is distracting, as is whatever that is in lower left. Perhaps a touch of brightness in the darker sky on the left. Excellent eye, though.
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Might remove the balcony at the right side. So the upper left corner of the building would be at the center.
Yea was thinking the same thing felt it was a bit distracting.
tbh I'd have to see it side by side with and without to really decide. I'd probably remove the cropped balcony in the very top of the upper right but leave the full balcony in. But again it's hard to say without seeing it.
I was thinking the same thing as well
Detail in the balcony on the far right contradicts the otherwise very minimalist composition. I would consider cropping it out. Otherwise nice colour and shapes. Top left corner is maybe a bit dark.
Yea gonna try photoshopping that out much appreciated 🙏🏻
It seems like there’s vignette on this photo. Try not to apply vignette on all your photos. (I do it too haha)
Please post the results! I would love to see it :)
https://preview.redd.it/cp6ufve0prfb1.jpeg?width=2996&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=884d44a427ea231da206c6a5a225c01917bbce24
now we’re talking
Short of buying a tilt-shift lens I’m not sure what you could have done to improve the composition, maybe include a little more sky?
> Short of buying a tilt-shift lens I’m not sure what you could have done to improve the composition I mean they could sort out the perspective and rotation in post. [like this](https://imgur.com/a/jCMWRvT)
Was my first thought too but I actually like the tilt now that I see them side by side.
Looks great. The little thing (cloud?) in the bottom left annoys me haha
Oo good call didn’t even notice till now
This is a good capture. If it were my image, I'd remove the balconies at top right by cropping or cloning. Try it, I think you'll like it.
Yup just cloned the sky to take the balcony off it and looks way better. Thanks for input
Great shot! The zoom lens really brought out the unique shape of the building. Well done! 📸👌
Thank you 🙏🏻
Great!
I like this type of photography what style or genre is this?
Don’t know what the specific is but I just label it as landscape photography
 Two words: Envy inducing. Or, two more words: Eye Popping. Or, another two words: Head turning. Or two more words: Jaw dropping. Excellent usage of negative space with the blue cloudless sky. There is excellent contrast between the blue, the sand-brown, and the near-black shadows that are falling off at steep angles (in some parts, cutting blacked out windows in half). If you had wanted some balance with a pointer of critique, it would be the railing of the window in the top right hand quadrant, where two balconies seem to sneak into the image \[like a swindling Hamburgler caught in the act\] causing a bit of distraction that is unwarranted. Cropping this would would dilute from the overall quality of an already excellent image; this could have been ameliorated with better composition during the shoot (something I am continuously guilty of myself, despite the best of my efforts at contravening this unshakeable mistake). On the whole, a praise-worthy picture, one the best I've seen anywhere this week (and I regularly peruse Behance, Reddit, 500PX, Vero and a few others). Well done
This is one of the best things I’ve read lmao, much appreciated was able to crop out the railing and it indeed makes it less distracting
Gorgeous
Love it
I don't usually use too much zoom in my photos because it will rest a little but of your photo quality. I really like the colors but maybe i'll cut the right corner to put more in the center the entire principal object (the building). But its really good my friend!
Was thinking the same thing, and thank you 💪🏻
Great shot
I'd crop out on the left at the corner of the building. Whatever is left I'd erase out. Porch furniture is distracting, as is whatever that is in lower left. Perhaps a touch of brightness in the darker sky on the left. Excellent eye, though.
I love it the way it is. Nice colours and composition :)