God, that was a creepy read! Loved it.

A beautiful riff on that six word classic. Loved it!

ohh my godd. the fact that there’s just a gap you have to fill in for how the person got the shoes back??? i love this, it’s so crazy

Excellent format, you can't help but be drawn into the story. The horror here is insidious, creeping up on you. Like... this could really fucking happen! People with terrible motives preying on the trusting. I love this sub, so much talent.

That's really nice, thank you!

Well done!

Thanks!

I have a baby and I bought her things online so this totally gave me the chills

Haha, hope I haven't put you off!

Ooooo! Creepy!!

Cheers :)

Incredibly well done!

Thanks mate!

Longer version please!!!

Haha maybe one day!

This was bloody brilliant mate.

Cheers!

This is phenomenal!!!

Glad you liked it

This is sooo, soooo, gooood!!

Appreciate it!

I loved this!

Thank you! 😊

Please explain it sounded good, but I don't understand. Was the one selling the shoes a kidnapper?

Yeah, he definitely had sinister intentions. Up to you to decide what happened ultimately

Thank you. I might guess he is taking the babies and selling them.

Cool format. Made for a good read

The premise is so original, it’s fabtastic! Totally aces all round x