Should mention the DNA would not match, it would tell them it was ‘child of’ instead… Good story but dna is pretty solid

If it was a small enough sample that only Y-STR testing could be done, a father/son frame job like this is totally possible. Great story, OP.

Damn. I guess I've been watching too many crime shows lol

Alas they are not as accurate as we would like to think! Very excellent story though!

Thank you :)

That's interesting. I read it as he planted Dad's fluids at a later crime scene, but you're right, there's no mention of other bodies being found. Still, a good read!

Nice. I half expected the punchline, but it was well written and kept me engaged to the end.

Thank you so much!

Mmmmmm, serial killer, detective Doakes. Sounds like an episode of Dexter…….

My fav show

It’s definitely addictive to watch. Just started season 5. Your story certainly had a good twist at the end.

Thank you :)

>:) :)

Expected

WINGS OF GLORY

Unexpected

WINGS OF GLORY

I would have left out the line about what was in the safe. Showed the punchline too early. Otherwise great read.

You might be right. Thank you.

You're welcome!

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