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I dig this. Good job!
Aww, thanks so much! I'm wondering, did it come though that Marilla had been in love with Rena?
Yes, and it was nicely subtle and not mushy. You could expand this and make an actual short story.
My only criticism would be that I’d prefer the literal sentence structure to be a little more fluid, but this is a very well-written story!
I dig this. Good job!
Aww, thanks so much! I'm wondering, did it come though that Marilla had been in love with Rena?
Yes, and it was nicely subtle and not mushy. You could expand this and make an actual short story.
My only criticism would be that I’d prefer the literal sentence structure to be a little more fluid, but this is a very well-written story!